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Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 12:47 AM
The Day You Slipped Away
My FanFiction
Please Dont Read This FanFiction If You Are Sensitive...Or I Strongly Advise You Not Too. But Feel Free To Read It Anyway.
[Warning: Includes Deaths, Violence, and Some Unexpected Inappropriate Things.]

Miley Life Takes An Unexpected Turn When Someone Close To Her Dies In An Accident.

[[Needs 2 or More Comments To Begin The FanFiction]]

Theme Song. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZxAAspHOfF4)
[^^ Please DO NOT Copy This Idea ^^]
Chapters (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1108974&postcount=4)

123_abc
07-08-2007, 12:50 AM
omg sound good already..write write now..

xoxohuggablemiley
07-08-2007, 12:51 AM
OMG, fantabulous!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 12:52 AM
Chapters
Chapter 1. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1108982&postcount=5)
Chapter 2. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1108998&postcount=8)
Chapter 3. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1109691&postcount=13)
Chapter 4. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1109776&postcount=17)
Chapter 5. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1109827&postcount=22)
Chapter 6. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1109852&postcount=26)
Chapter 7. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1110047&postcount=31)
Chapter 8. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1110146&postcount=35)
Chapter 9. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1110474&postcount=40)
Chapter 10. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1110564&postcount=43)
Chapter 11. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1110635&postcount=48)
Chapter 12. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1112587&postcount=56)
Chapter 13. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1113086&postcount=63)
Chapter 14. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1113630&postcount=67)
Chapter 15. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1113962&postcount=71)
Chapter 16. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1114152&postcount=76)
Chapter 17. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1116607&postcount=82)
Chapter 18. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1116721&postcount=86)
Chapter 19. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1116837&postcount=91)
Chapter 20. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1117814&postcount=96)
Chapter 21. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1117917&postcount=102)
Chapter 22. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1119807&postcount=109)
Chapter 23. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1119884&postcount=111)
Chapter 24. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1119943&postcount=113)

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 01:08 AM
Chapter 1: Really?

Oliver knocks at the door of Mileys house. Miley opens the door and asks -
"Hey Oliver, what are you doing here?" "Well, Miley, I have a confession to make, now that we're all ALONE." they both glare at Lilly, who is sitting on the couch, then she notices..."Oh, sorry. Gotta go...bathroom" Lilly rushes upstairs. "Okay, Miley, this is really hard to say...but you know when I said I used to like you?" Miley had a big knot in her throat, thinking it was a lie he ever liked her..."Yeah" "Well, that was a lie" he said shrugging. Miley says "Oliver why --" and gets cut off by Oliver "The truth is...I still do, Im sorry, maybe I should just go --" as he tries to rush out "No, Oliver, wait...okay I kind...of sort of..." as she struggles to say her sentence, Lilly is peeking on the stairs "Come on Miley, you can do this." and Miley "Okay, Ive liked you since the first day we met. Jake was nothing. I like you." Oliver is shocked by her response "Uhh...wow. I wanted to ask you out...and I still dont know if youll say" Miley gently kisses Oliver "Just take that as a yes" Miley says...Oliver, looking pleased, rushes out the door. Lilly slowly walks down the stairs and says "Oohhh" Miley says "Oh hush" and rolls her eyes and walks up the stairs, as Lilly follows behind her and says "Im just trying to help."

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luv2act
07-08-2007, 01:10 AM
woahh, AWESOME! defiantly more! :]

xoxohuggablemiley
07-08-2007, 01:15 AM
OMG, that's amazing! Write more~

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 01:17 AM
Chapter 2: Promise?

The phone rings at 10:30 pm. Miley picks up and answers
"Hey its Oliver, sorry for the late night call" "Its okay Ollie" "Ollie? What is that?" "A Nickname" Miley laughs. "Okay, whatever" he laughs. "So...where do you want our first date to be tomorrow?" "TOMORROW?" she asks fiercely. "Yeah...I guess" "Sorry, Oliver, I have a Hannah concert tomorrow...Im so sorry" Oliver replies "Hey! We can have it at the Hannah concert, I mean, if you want" "Thatll be great! Do you wanna come with us?" "I cant. Moms rules. She always has to drive her because she wants me to learn her driving techniques or whatever" Miley smiles "Okay, well promise you wont stand me up or anything?" "Of course not. Im a pretty trustworthy guy" "Hah okay Oliver...bye" "Bye Miley"
As they hang up, Miley lays down in her bed and goes to sleep.
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123_abc
07-08-2007, 01:23 AM
awww moree please

xoxohuggablemiley
07-08-2007, 01:27 AM
Again, a masterpiece, Courtz.
Right now, I'm using my imaginary talent-detector, and your the pot of gold.'
The talent-o-meter if goin' insane because of your talent!

luv2act
07-08-2007, 01:29 AM
woah, that was just as good as the first, which was rockin! please more. :]

secretive_angel
07-08-2007, 01:44 AM
more pleaz

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 11:50 AM
Chapter 3: You Ruin My Life.

[PS: Mileys Family Treats Her Horribly In This Story :(]

The Next Morning, Miley Is Walking Down The Stairs Happily
"Why are you so happy?" Her dad questions angrily, while smoking. "I have a boyfriend! And dad, quit smoking" "I like smoking...so Im gonna do it. You cant tell me what to do! And you have a boyfriend? I dont like boyfriends." "But dad, its Oliver" "I dont care at all. Youre not having a boyfriend" Her dad explained. "But were going on a date! To the Hannah concert" "I dont care and Im not listening"
Jackson walks down the stairs.
"Jackson! Its nice to see you!" "Not nice to see you...I didnt want you in my life" "Haha good one son" his dad opened up a high five to his son. "Dad!" "Im telling you, youre not going out with that stupid Oliver boy" "Dont you ever call him stupid!" Miley defends. "Make me" her dad replies, while blowing a puff of smoke in her face. Jackson and her dad start laughing in her face while she screams "YOU GUYS ARE THE WORST FAMILY EVER! I HATE YOU!" as she runs up the stairs and cries.
Later
Oliver knocks on the door.
"Hey. I got my learners permit so we can drive to the Hannah concert together" he says. "I have to cancel the Hannah concert with you tonight" Miley says. "Why?" he asks. "Well, my dad...he doesnt approve...of" "I dont approve of you son. You are not dating my daughter." her dad says. "Dad...go away!" but her dad remains there. "I guess we should break up then" "No Oliver...its fine" "No...we should" as he walks past Miley he gently whispers "College" and Miley smiles and waves. Oliver walks out the door to his car and starts the engine.

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JB-trigger
07-08-2007, 12:05 PM
interesting, but each chapter are really short, I want to read more lol :P

xoxohuggablemiley
07-08-2007, 12:06 PM
That is so mean!
But...so interesting!

luv2act
07-08-2007, 12:12 PM
awww, thats so mean! more please! :]

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 12:33 PM
Chapter 4: :'(

Oliver starts the car and drives away...while Miley was sitting on the couch, arms crossed and realizes Oliver left his cross keychain here on the table. "I gotta return this too Oliver...Can you drive me?" "No you can run after his car" her dad replies. "Whatever" she says as she walks out the door and doesnt see Olivers car. She looks out and sees him on the highway "Oliver!" she yells as she races after the car. "I know in my heart hes not safe without this cross" she whispers, as she runs faster. As Miley says that...she sees a gun pulled out of a car and aiming at Olivers tire. "OLIVER!" she screams. Oliver looks behind and sees Miley. Miley sees a stock truck come, so she runs to the side of the road and starts chasing Oliver, but its too late. The guy with the gun in another car shot Olivers tire. He swerved around until he finally stopped with his car vertical to the road. Miley looked and saw the big Walmart truck heading for Olivers car. The driver of the Walmart truck was drunk and couldnt see anything. As Miley screamed, Oliver looked back, and the truck smashed into Olivers car head on. Olivers car did about 5 flips and fell into the ditch on the other side Miley was on. The glass was shattered. Miley ran across the street and starting screaming and whispering to Oliver, Oliver whispered back "Miley, I love you so much, I wish the best for you...its time for me...to leave" "No Oliver no! You cant leave! Please" "Miley, shh." Oliver said, as he gently closed his eyes and stopped breathing. Miley shrieked and cried, then calmed down and whispered "I saw you...I saw you" as she sniffed and heard sirens echo over town.

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luv2act
07-08-2007, 12:37 PM
:oawwww thats so sad.:( but tis so good!:D more please. ;]

Ashley Marie 1992
07-08-2007, 12:47 PM
:( More!!

EmilyJordanOsment
07-08-2007, 12:48 PM
sad so so sad so so sad so so sad

forever_miley
07-08-2007, 12:50 PM
Awww...that's sad! But more, I'd love to read more!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 12:56 PM
Chapter 5: Drama

As Miley walks through the door she starts sobbing. Lilly, Jackson, and Robby are watching the news and hear about Olivers death. "Im sorry about your friend, bud" her dad says. Lilly had her hands buried in her face, sobbing. "NO YOU DONT CARE!!! YOU NEVER CARE!" Miley screamed. "IF MOM WAS HERE YOU WOULDNT BE SO CARELESS!!!""Miley, calm down, its okay" Lilly said, sniffing. "NO! OLIVER MEANT SOMETHING TO ME!!" "Bud..." her dad says. Miley starts shrieking as she pushes her dad against the wall and starts punching his stomach and screaming "YOU DID THIS!! YOU MADE HIM LEAVE!! I HATE YOU!! SAY YOU HATE HIM, SAY IT!! SAY IT!! I HATE YOU!! I HATE IT!!" and she starts screaming and sobbing. Her dad doesnt get affected by the punching, he only feels emotional pain, as he picks her up while shes crying and takes her to her room. Lilly leaves the house, running out and crying, and Jackson is still sitting there...thinking about Oliver and whats wrong in life.

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xoxohuggablemiley
07-08-2007, 12:58 PM
More please, it's getting good!

Ashley Marie 1992
07-08-2007, 12:59 PM
More!! So sad!! I luv it!!

forever_miley
07-08-2007, 01:08 PM
This is really good! More please!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 01:11 PM
Chapter 6: Ive Been Sorry

Miley Is Watching TV In Her Room When Her Dad Comes In.
"Hey bud...the way Ive acted since mom died, I havent been very good to you or Jackson" Miley nods "Yeah, and? You dont care" "I do, bud, I love you more than anything...Ive quit smoking" "Really?" Miley asks "Yeah. Youre my only daughter and since mom and Oliver died, I know its hard on you." "Yeah it is..." "And now I think its all my fault" her dad says "Dad, what I said back there...about the hate thing...I didnt mean it" "Ive never meant to hurt you honey" her dad said, as they hugged.

Sorry its short

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Ashley Marie 1992
07-08-2007, 01:12 PM
More!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

forever_miley
07-08-2007, 01:13 PM
Aww...still good! And it's getting more cheerful :)

xoxohuggablemiley
07-08-2007, 01:24 PM
More please!

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-08-2007, 01:50 PM
More I liek how its Third Person Unlimited!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 02:18 PM
Chapter 7: Youre Invited

Robbie gets a call from the Okens, then rushes upstairs.
"Honey, we were invited to Olivers funeral...Lilly will be there" Her dad said. "Im not going" she said firmly. "Why Not?" her dad asked. "It reminds me too much of Oliver. I dont want to do anything" "Honey, Oliver would want this for you. You at least wanna remember him as a great friend, they even asked you to do a speech for him" her dad said calmly. "Im not going then" she said. "Please, The Okens are asking you too go. They really want you too" "Fine, I guess Ill go" "Thats my girl...its tomorrow" Miley sniffles and nods her head.

Short Again :P

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Ashley Marie 1992
07-08-2007, 02:19 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv2act
07-08-2007, 02:29 PM
oo woah niice! really sad though. more please! =D

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-08-2007, 02:35 PM
More!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 02:44 PM
Chapter 8: The Funeral

At The Funeral, Miley is walking around, when Olivers mother hugs Miley. "You changed his life. He thought he had no reason here but you showed him the way and the light. I-I-thank you so much for what youve given him" as his mother started crying, Miley started crying and walked off. She saw Lilly and waved "You okay Miley?" "Yeah Im fine" Miey said, wiping tears from her face. "Good cause Im not" Lilly said as they hugged each other and cried. Jackson came in and had little tears in his eyes as he looked around in the church. Everyone got seated and the minister came and every one of Olivers close friends\family came and made speeches about him. Miley was next, and she was completely nervous about what to say. "Miley Stewart" the minister said. As she walked up...she came to the podium and turned on the microphone "Wow, Oliver, I have lots of things to say about him...he was a great guy, and he was always girl-obsessed, but I liked that about him, he was my boyfriend for some time, and I was very happy with him everywhere I went, and every moment I spent with him was perfect and --" her voice starting trembling and cracking " I-I-I have to go" as tears started streaming down her face, she ran out of the building...everyone looked back, while Lilly quickly got out of her seat and followed her.

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Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 03:19 PM
:(

Mileysabsolutnumber1fan
07-08-2007, 03:47 PM
more!

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-08-2007, 03:53 PM
Morez!

secretive_angel
07-08-2007, 03:59 PM
more

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 04:16 PM
Chapter 9: Always

Miley was out of the building, crying, and Lilly was running after her "Miley, its okay" Lilly said, trying to calm her down. "Its not Lilly! Its not!" she started shrieking and crying. "Ill never see him again and I loved him!" Miley screamed. "Now because of him Im torn and still in love with him" she said. Lilly starting crying "Miley! Did you ever stop to think I loved him too? Everyone loved Oliver! Everyone misses Oliver...living without him is living without candy or something. Im sorry, Miley." "Im fine Lilly. And we'll all be. We all miss him." Miley said, wiping her eyes. "No matter what, he'll always be in your heart, he'll always love you and be with us...all 3 of us will always be best friends" Lilly said as they both cried and hugged. "Now, do you wanna walk back in there or do you want to escape the good times?" Lilly asked solemnly. "Ill go back, we'll all go back in...You, Me, and Oliver" they both smiled at each other and held hands while they walked back into the building in silence.

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mileyrocks19
07-08-2007, 04:28 PM
Sad but i love it!

flower1
07-08-2007, 04:33 PM
More

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 04:46 PM
Chapter 10: I Try

Miley took a deep breath. "I have to do this. I wanna do this" she said, explaining to herself after the pain she will be happier. As she walked out of the door, she saw her brother and dad sleeping, she whispered "I love you" and headed out to the doors where she oversaw the beach. She stood on rail of the stairs and took a deep breath, and jumped off the balcony...she closed her eyes and said "See ya soon"

Sorry, That Was Really Short

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luv2act
07-08-2007, 04:52 PM
woah, thats intense. more please! ;]

AnnaBanana
07-08-2007, 04:59 PM
I love it Courtz. Amazing!

secretive_angel
07-08-2007, 05:02 PM
more it is awesome yet sad but awesome

LotsaBigHearts
07-08-2007, 05:07 PM
awesome job!!
Kinda sad..

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-08-2007, 05:08 PM
Chapter 11: The Hospital

At the hospital, Mileys family [Robbie and Jackson] was there, electronics beeped, and everyone was frightened and waiting if Miley was ever going to wake up. Suddenly, Miley opened her eyes..."WHATS WRONG WITH ME??? WHY AM I STILL HERE!!! I NEED TO BE WITH OLIVER!!" she started screaming and crying "Hes not here. HES NOT HERE!" she started screaming and beating her hand on the bed, her dad reached out and grabbed her hand. She breathed deeply. "Honey, why did you just try to kill yourself? Theres enough grief as it is" "I WANT TO BE WITH OLIVER!!" she screamed. "Jackson, Im gonna go to the restroom real quick, watch over Miley" he said as he ran out. The second he walked out, she got out of the hospital cot and started running out of the building. Jackson got up and started running after her screaming "Miley!" She got out of the building and ran to the graveyard next door to the hospital and saw Olivers grave. "Its not true..." she whispered. "ITS NOT TRUE" she screamed. She knelt down and shrieked and cried while she shook the grave repeatedly. She stood up...and not being healthy after her suicidal accident, she collapsed to the ground unconscious. Jackson ran to her and saw her in the graveyard, collapsed, and screamed "Miley", as he bent down and picked her up. "I gotcha...I gotcha" he said as he picked her up and ran back into the hospital.

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PursePrincess4eva
07-08-2007, 05:17 PM
AHH! More =]

Ashley Marie 1992
07-08-2007, 05:24 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv2act
07-08-2007, 06:45 PM
more please! =D

secretive_angel
07-08-2007, 07:09 PM
yes more pleaz

Hannah+Jake
07-08-2007, 10:08 PM
more!!!

123_abc
07-08-2007, 10:14 PM
c'mon moreee :D

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-08-2007, 11:09 PM
Morez

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 10:29 AM
Chapter 12: The Talk

Jackson put her down in her bed like nothing had happened. Miley opened her eyes. "What happened?" "Nothing, you just had a dream" Jackson said, to protect her from going crazy about Oliver. "Why did he leave?" she asked Jackson. "What?" he asked like he didnt know what was going on. "Why did Oliver leave?" she started to sniff and cry quietly. "Well, Mile, sometimes people have a reason to leave this Earth" he said. "But he had NO reason, nobody told me that reason!" Miley screamed. "Well nobodys supposed to know the reason, Mile. Sometimes we just have to go." "BUT HE DIDNT HAVE TO!! THE ONE MOMENT I WAS REALLY HAPPY IN MY LIFE HE GOES OFF AND DIES!!! I LOVED HIM JACKSON!!" she screamed and started crying while Jackson tried to calm her down. "Mile! Hes in a happier place. He wouldnt want you like this. Trust me. Even though everyone thought Oliver was my main enemy...besides *looks off evilly* Rico *returns to current situation* he was still a great friend of mine. You have to live your life if you want Oliver to be happy. Youre my sister and I like ya, Miles." they both smile at each other and hug. Robby comes in and says "What did I miss?" "Talking" Jackson said, the smiled. "Oh, thats something I never miss" Robby said sarcastically. They all laughed.
How could I do this too myself? Try and kill myself when Oliver needs me here on Earth. Oliver would want me here and this is where Im gonna stay...and, try, to be happy. Miley thought.

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Ashley Marie 1992
07-09-2007, 10:36 AM
More!!!!!!!!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 11:11 AM
Anyone? :(

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 12:45 PM
:(

Ashley Marie 1992
07-09-2007, 12:49 PM
Don't feel sad. I love your fan fic.

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 12:59 PM
Thanks :D

Ashley Marie 1992
07-09-2007, 01:14 PM
no problem :)

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 01:24 PM
Chapter 13: Replace?!?

Miley was finally out of the hospital and she was well again. Lilly knocked on the door of The Stewarts house and there was a guy behind her. Miley gave a confused look to Lilly and Lilly smiled. Miley opened the door, and the guy came in "Can I use the bathroom?" he asked. "Uhh...sure" she said confused. As he left, Miley said "Who is that?" "His name is Josh...and he likes you!" Lilly said, squealing. "Do you like him?" Lilly asked. "I mean, hes cute...but...I cant forget about Oliver" "I gave you this person to replace Oliver!" Lilly said with a smile. "REPLACE OLIVER???" she asked, yelling at Lilly. "Wait...that came out Miley, Im sorry. What I meant was, actually--" Lilly said, but then got cut off by Miley. "No you arent sorry! You dont care about Oliver at all! You just wanted him to leave!! I cant believe you would try to replace him like that you little selfish backstabbing replacer!!" Miley yelled. Miley went upstairs and yelled at Josh "GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!!" and Josh quickly ran out of the house. Miley gave Lilly an evil stare, as tears started streaming down Lillys face, she turned around and she went out the door. Miley sat down with her arms crossed, watching tv, and didnt even notice her dad, standing by the stairs, shaking his head, noticing it all.

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destiny hope cyrus fan
07-09-2007, 02:14 PM
More!!!!

PursePrincess4eva
07-09-2007, 03:18 PM
Awesome! Write more! :D

Ashley Marie 1992
07-09-2007, 03:19 PM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't leave me waiting!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 03:37 PM
Chapter 14: Another Talk

"I dont think you shouldve said that to Lilly bud" her dad said as he walked down the stairs. "She didnt mean it that way" he said. "Yes she did. She wants to replace Oliver and I know it." Miley said, and sighed. "Naw she didnt bud, she just said it the wrong way...all she wants for you is too be happy...she wanted you to move on" Robby said, soothing her. "She wanted you to forget about Olivers death, but not Oliver...I think you should say sorry...did you see her crying?" her dad questioned. Then it struck Miley that she had heard her best friends feelings. "Now I feel guilty...maybe I should say sorry" "Just do whats right, bud. I know you will" Her dad kissed her on the forehead and left Miley to think.

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xoxohuggablemiley
07-09-2007, 04:07 PM
Lyke, AWESOME!
Mooore..

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-09-2007, 04:09 PM
Morez!!!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-09-2007, 04:31 PM
more!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 04:52 PM
Chapter 15: Im Sorry

Miley picked up the phone late at night. She dialed Lillys number. "Hello, Is Lilly there?" she asked her mother when she answered the phone. "No, shes not here, shes with some friends right now at the beach. Miley was confused. Why would Lilly be at the beach at 1:30 in the morning? Wait, you arent supposed to be!! The beach closes at 6 pm!? "Okay thank you miss Truscott" she said as she hung up the phone. She saw her dad sleeping on the couch...and wasnt going to bother him. So she put on an overcoat and headed out the door to the beach quietly.

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sophiecool
07-09-2007, 04:58 PM
Awesome! It kinda reminds me of my two fanfics....But it's AWESOME!!!!

sophiecool
07-09-2007, 04:59 PM
Write More Now!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 04:59 PM
Yeah sorry If I copied any of it :(

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-09-2007, 06:53 PM
Morez!!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-09-2007, 07:07 PM
Chapter 16: Where Are You?

As Miley headed out the door, she was frightened if Lilly had gotten into some kind of trouble. She quickly ran down to the beach and tried to find Lilly. She had searched everywhere.
But there was no sign of Lilly around.
Then, suddenly, Miley heard screaming and yelling...of joy. "Lilly?" she yelled into the darkness. Nobody replied, but Miley had to keep looking. She couldnt lose Lilly and Oliver. It would be too painful. The things screamed and yelled again. Miley followed the sound and was brought up too the highway where Oliver had died. She saw a mustang driving around crazily. Then the car suddenly stopped as everyone in the car had their hands up in the air. She ran towards the car and saw everyone. The driver was drunk. The person in the front seat was drunk. And in the backseat, she saw Lilly, who was also drunk. "What are you guys doing?" "Lilly needed to escape some friend pain, so we took her out of her house and got drunk and drove around." the driver said "How could you do this too my best friend!?" Miley asked, grabbing the drivers shirt. "djsahdjkhdjfsh" Lilly mumbled in the backseat. "Lilly, are you okay?" Miley asked "skjhfakjhiuyurhnn" Lilly mumbled...she started grunt and squeal. Miley couldnt believe what was happening! Her best friend was drunk and she was the cause of it. "Lilly Im sorry, now get out of the car" Miley said. "fjashkhfehNOOOEWWOH!!" Lilly yelled. "Lilly!" Miley screamed as she shaked Lilly. "Hey babe, dont touch the car. Let Lilly do what she wants" the driver said. "She doesnt wanna do this!" Miley said. "You can come in the car too babe" the driver said. "Eww...no" Miley said. "dhsdagjhfeGOOOEEDS" Lilly yelled. "What is wrong with you?? Do you remember anything?? Do you remember Oliver??" Miley asked. "fjhakjhnjgfi" Lilly mumbled again. "Lets go, gang...drive all the way to san fran yeaho!!" The driver yelled and speeded off. Miley tried running after the car as fast as she could. Then she stopped and screamed. The car had swerved to fiercely and did 5 flips and landed into a ditch. It was all happening all over again.

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LotsaBigHearts
07-09-2007, 07:10 PM
awesome, i just logged on.. haha more!

K-star7
07-09-2007, 07:16 PM
Please write more!!

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-09-2007, 07:21 PM
Please Morez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sophiecool
07-10-2007, 01:16 AM
AWESOME COURTZ!!! And it's OK if you copied me a bit, I don't care.

xoxohuggablemiley
07-10-2007, 01:22 AM
Chapter 16: Where Are You?

As Miley headed out the door, she was frightened if Lilly had gotten into some kind of trouble. She quickly ran down to the beach and tried to find Lilly. She had searched everywhere.
But there was no sign of Lilly around.
Then, suddenly, Miley heard screaming and yelling...of joy. "Lilly?" she yelled into the darkness. Nobody replied, but Miley had to keep looking. She couldnt lose Lilly and Oliver. It would be too painful. The things screamed and yelled again. Miley followed the sound and was brought up too the highway where Oliver had died. She saw a mustang driving around crazily. Then the car suddenly stopped as everyone in the car had their hands up in the air. She ran towards the car and saw everyone. The driver was drunk. The person in the front seat was drunk. And in the backseat, she saw Lilly, who was also drunk. "What are you guys doing?" "Lilly needed to escape some friend pain, so we took her out of her house and got drunk and drove around." the driver said "How could you do this too my best friend!?" Miley asked, grabbing the drivers shirt. "djsahdjkhdjfsh" Lilly mumbled in the backseat. "Lilly, are you okay?" Miley asked "skjhfakjhiuyurhnn" Lilly mumbled...she started grunt and squeal. Miley couldnt believe what was happening! Her best friend was drunk and she was the cause of it. "Lilly Im sorry, now get out of the car" Miley said. "fjashkhfehNOOOEWWOH!!" Lilly yelled. "Lilly!" Miley screamed as she shaked Lilly. "Hey babe, dont touch the car. Let Lilly do what she wants" the driver said. "She doesnt wanna do this!" Miley said. "You can come in the car too babe" the driver said. "Eww...no" Miley said. "dhsdagjhfeGOOOEEDS" Lilly yelled. "What is wrong with you?? Do you remember anything?? Do you remember Oliver??" Miley asked. "fjhakjhnjgfi" Lilly mumbled again. "Lets go, gang...drive all the way to san fran yeaho!!" The driver yelled and speeded off. Miley tried running after the car as fast as she could. Then she stopped and screamed. The car had swerved to fiercely and did 5 flips and landed into a ditch. It was all happening all over again.

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Ugh! How could you put a smiley face when Lilly's about to die?
But GOOOD! Keep on goin'!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 10:34 AM
Chapter 17: Dun-Dun-Dun

Miley once again ran across the street to rescue someone. This time she sprinted. Miley bent down and saw the driver dead. She screamed with terror that Lilly could be the next one. She searched through all the people and checked each of their heartbeats, and all of them showed negative beat.
She called the cops and they said to clear the area and they were going to be there in 5 min. She finally checked Lillys beat. There was negative breathing. Miley screamed at cried at the first sight of that
Lilly is dead, Miley thought in her head. Its all over for me now.
Then, Miley heard coughing and looked back. "Lilly?" she asked. Miley put her hand on Lillys chest and could hear her coughing. Miley had excitement in her mind knowing Lilly was alive. Lilly finally fluttered her eyes open and gasped for breath, while Miley tried to calm her down. "Mialeeeeey?" Lilly asked. She was still a little bit drunk. Miley picked her up and carried her to Mileys house.
xx.LATER.xx
Miley finally arrived through the door of her house and slammed it.
"DAD!" she yelled out to nothing. Her dad came rushing down the stairs "When I meant apologize I didnt mean take her from her house and show me" "No dad, I had to get out of the house..." "WHAT?!" "I tried calling Lillys house really late at night and her mom said she was at the beach and I couldnt find her on the beach and I found her on the highway drunk and she was in a car and it crashed on the same highway Oliver died and I called the cops and I picked up Lilly for you to drive her to the hospital before she leaves us for good!" she said. Her dad grabbed his coat. "Dont wake up Jackson" he said as he put his shoes on. Miley, still holding Lilly, shook her just to check. "Mikely! Where we going???" Lilly said. She was still drunk, but Miley knew she could save Lilly in enough time. She had completely forgotten about Oliver at this point, but there wasnt enough time to think. Her and her dad opened the door and slammed it shut.

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LotsaBigHearts
07-10-2007, 11:12 AM
awesome, i just logged on.. haha more!

sorry, i was on the other page at that time, so sad!! more

omg i just read the last chapter!! holy cow!!

K-star7
07-10-2007, 11:26 AM
Please write more!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 11:31 AM
Even though theres 2 comments Ill write it anyways :P

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 11:46 AM
Chapter 18: The Hospital

Miley was softly crying waiting for Lilly to open her eyes since they got in the car. She was sitting right beside Lilly. She was afraid they hadnt got there in time. Electronics beeped...bands around Lillys wrist. Miley was flashing back to when she was in the hospital. She had made a mistake. Her dad was right. This was grief, added to Oliver dying. He had just...slipped away. Lilly opened her eyes "Miley?" she said. Miley starting sobbing on the bed. "Miley whats wrong?" Lilly asked. She couldnt know what was wrong with Miley. The doctors had told Robby Ray that she had partial memory loss. Miley was even lucky she remembered who she was. Lucky Lilly was alive. "What happened" Lilly asked. "Where is Oliver?" she asked. "What do you remember?" Miley asked. "I have to go find him and tell him about his car. Lilly got up and tried to walk, but she was more powerless than Miley was, so she fell to the ground. As she struggled to get up, Miley picked her up and put her back in the bed. "Lilly, Olivers dead. He died in a car crash" Miley said...with a big knot in her throat. "NO ITS NOT TRUE! YOURE A LIAR!!" Lilly said. "Lilly, you just have to trust me on this...you have partial memory loss. You dont remember half of your life." Miley said soothingly. "Okay. But I remember you" Lilly said. "And I thank God for that" Miley said, starting to cry. "What happened to me to land up here Miley?" Lilly asked. Miley told her the story while Lilly had a look of terror on her face. Lilly started to cry. "Lilly, please dont cry" Miley said. Lilly started to cry louder, and Miley just couldnt help it. She also started to cry. "Im sorry for making you replace Oliver." she said. "You remember?" Miley asked, confused. "Yeah...memory comes back you know." Lilly said. "Anyways, Im sorry" she said. "No, Im sorry, I completely overreacted about it" Miley said. Lilly patted the cot and scooted over for Miley to lay there. "Thanks for saving my life" Lilly said. "Welcome" Miley replied back, smiling. "Youre my best friend" Lilly said. "Youre my best friend too" Miley said, as she closed her eyes and fell asleep.

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Hannah+Jake
07-10-2007, 11:47 AM
more more more moremore moremore

K-star7
07-10-2007, 11:54 AM
PLease write more!!

HannahMontanaX3
07-10-2007, 11:55 AM
omg more its amazing

xoxohuggablemiley
07-10-2007, 12:16 PM
MORE!
It's really good!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 12:28 PM
Chapter 19: Out Of The Hospital

Robby pulled up to the driveway of the Stewart home, Jackson was watching TV and he made a complete mess. "JACKSON ROD STEWART!" his dad yelled as soon as he walked through the door. "Whos Jackson?" Lilly asked looking nowhere with a questioning look on her face. They ignored her question as Jackson ran up the stairs in joking fright. Robby was just about to chase after him when the phone rang. "Who is it?" Miley said. "This cant be right" Her dad said. "Who is it dad?" Miley asked.
"The Caller ID Says Oliver Oken."

That Was...Short :P

Just comment away! :D

HannahMontanaX3
07-10-2007, 12:31 PM
More thats amazing

xoxohuggablemiley
07-10-2007, 12:31 PM
I'd like some chili fries with an extra siding of MORE!

Ashley Marie 1992
07-10-2007, 02:09 PM
More!!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-10-2007, 02:59 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 05:01 PM
Chapter 20: Hello?!

"I guess its for you Miles" her dad said as he handed her the phone. Lilly whined and laid down for no reason. The doctor said she would act different for a few days. Miley slowly picked up the phone and asked "Hello?!" she frighteningly asked. "Hey Its Bobby Oken, Olivers dad." Miley took a sigh of relief. "Why are you calling on Oliver cell?" Miley said. "Because...I cant forget him. Hey Oliver said you know Hannah Montana, right?" "Uhh...yeah...were like the same person...but you know thats not true!" she fake laughs. "Yeah, well Oliver had a crazy obsession with Hannah Montana, so do you think she could come perform at her burial?" "Burial?" Miley asked, gulping. She couldnt stand burials of people. They made her scared and depressed. "Yeah, since I want to honor him...and I miss him" his dad started to cry. "Mr. Oken, its okay." Miley said. "Just please ask her. Please" Mr. Oken said, sniffing. "I dont think youd wanna fly all the way to Tennessee do you?" "TENNESSEE?" Miley asked. "My dad said I couldnt, but Ill call Hannah and ask, okay?" "Okay" his dad said. "See ya later" he said as she hung up. "Daddy...they invited Hannah to go and perform at the burial in Tennessee" "You know what burials do to you, Mile" "Yeah, but I wanna go..." "Im glad youve turned to the side of honor, bud. For your best friend, lets go. Lets bring Lilly too, Ill schedule a flight tonight for us" "Mmkay dad...thanks" she said. "No problem" her dad said as he went upstairs to find Jackson. Miley started to pack, while Lilly was asleep, and Miley packed extra for her, and put some edited lyrics in her bag too.

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x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-10-2007, 05:05 PM
moreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!but why in tennessee????

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-10-2007, 05:05 PM
More!

K-star7
07-10-2007, 05:12 PM
Please write more!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 05:12 PM
LOL Because Olivers Relatives Are There Or Something :P

chichia
07-10-2007, 05:21 PM
write more, pleaseeee!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-10-2007, 05:22 PM
Chapter 21: On The Plane

Miley was on the plane as Hannah, with Lilly as Lola, Robby as manager, and they left Jackson to pick up his mess back at the house. Lilly was sleeping, she seemed to sleep and be silent since her accident. Miley was wide awake flying in first class, writing an edited version of one of her songs for the burial. Just writing the song made tears come to her eyes. She would never forget Oliver and that day. Recovering that was like a scab: Slow and painful and the most sensitive touch can make it bleed again. A little girl behind her in first class said "Why are you crying, Hannah Montana?" she asked. "Because...I miss him" she said. Miley put hung her neck down and put her hands over her eyes and cried.

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chichia
07-10-2007, 05:23 PM
more pleeeaassseee!! lol.

Ashley Marie 1992
07-10-2007, 05:24 PM
More!!

K-star7
07-10-2007, 05:26 PM
Please write more...

HannahMontanaX3
07-10-2007, 05:28 PM
more

xoxohuggablemiley
07-10-2007, 08:53 PM
More

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-10-2007, 09:36 PM
Morez!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-11-2007, 12:17 AM
Chapter 22: Going to the house.

The plane finally landed, and Miley hadnt stopped crying yet. She finally looked up and wiped her eyes. Lilly woke up and she said "Hi Miley!" "Hi" Miley said..."Here put your wig on Lilly" "What wig?" Lilly asked laughing. Miley smacked herself in the head. "Just be Lilly" Miley said. "Okay!" Lilly said, smiling. Not only was Lilly sleepy, but she was also happier. Miley was going to be saying a Mamaw Stewarts house in TN. Mamaw waved at first sight of Miley and rushed to hug her. "Im sorry about your friend" Mamaw said as she was hugging. "Im fine" Miley said. Lilly was looking around while Robby stayed close to Lilly.
xx. LATER .xx
Miley was at Mamaws and she it was almost time for bed, then early in the morning would be Olivers burial. She was nervous. What if she messed up? What if she showed evidence she was Miley\Hannah?
What if she told the world she was 2 girls.
She reconsidered the idea.

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xoxohuggablemiley
07-11-2007, 12:24 AM
OOoooh... nice...

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-11-2007, 12:35 AM
Chapter 23: Im here.

Miley walked around at the burial. She couldnt believe after she performed Oliver would be sunk into the ground. She whimpered at the thought of it. Mr. Oken started jogging to Hannah. "Hannah Montana, listen, thanks for performing here. It really means so much to Oliver" his voice was trembling. Hannah hugged him "Its okay...Miley introduced me to Oliver once, and hes a great person. Do you mind if I sing a personal song about him?" "Oh sure go ahead" Mr. Oken said nodding, as he walked off. About 20 people were on each side of Olivers coffin. Hannah was looking down, about to cry. Lilly was also about to cry. Robby had some tears in his eyes. "And now, special guest Hannah Montana is singing a song in memory of Oliver" Everyone clapped for her. She had lost it though. She was breaking into tears. She sat on a stool and grabbed her guitar. "This song is dedicated to Oliver, who passed away a few days ago" Mileys voice trembled, as she closed her eyes and started to sing.

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xoxohuggablemiley
07-11-2007, 12:40 AM
More, please! It's VERY interesting!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-11-2007, 12:50 AM
Chapter 24: I Miss You.

You used to call me your best friend
Said I was always with you forever
You'd hold me close in your arms, like a best friend would never go wrong
I loved the way you felt so strong
I never wanted you to leave
I wanted you to stay here with me

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear
Every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you, sha la la la la
I miss you

You used to call me your partner
And now youre gone, its oh so alone [ooh]
Oh how I wish you could see
Everything that's happening for me
I'm thinking back on the past
It's true that time is flying by too fast

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear
Every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you, sha la la la la
I miss you

I know you're in a better place, yeah
But I wish that I could see your face, oh
I know you're where you need to be
Even though it's not here with me

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear
Every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you, sha la la la la
I miss you

Sha la la la la...Sha la la.

[[Song ends as they clap for her... she starts to cry... then she stops and silences as everyone takes there place, waiting for Olivers burial.]]

xoxohuggablemiley
07-11-2007, 12:59 AM
Wow, so good. More.

just_like_you_92
07-11-2007, 01:08 AM
omg i love love love it
♥♥♥

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-11-2007, 01:13 AM
Chapter 25: The end.

Miley stood beside Lilly and Robby as she bent down and cried while Oliver was being forced into the ground. She cried, and knew she could never move on from what he gave her. She knew she would never meet someone like him again. She knew that since he died there had been grief, depression, madness. Miley had never really been through this before, and as Olivers coffin fell into the deep darkness, Miley whispered "Bye", as if he could hear her, but she knew he couldnt. Miley yelled "Stop!" and the coffin stopped suiddenly. Miley got out a note that read:

Oliver, I love you more than anything. Youve been my best friend forever and I cant thank you enough for what youve done, and how much youve given me. Ill never forget you and never love anyone else as much as you.
Love, Miley

She slipped the note in the coffin and nodded them to carry on. The coffin fell into the darkness of the dirt, and Miley started to cry, and then stopped, because she knew Oliver wouldnt want her too be crying. All he wanted was for her too be happy

The End.

PS: There Will Be A Sequel To This FF, and If The 2nd Does Well, Maybe Even A Third =D

xoxohuggablemiley
07-11-2007, 01:23 AM
Nice. I'll be totally waiting for the sequel! PM me the thread when you make it!

Ammy
07-11-2007, 10:13 AM
WOW i wasa really bored, and i saw your FF and decided to read it
its soooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!!!
Please PM me all your sequels you have

Mileyrocksforever101
07-11-2007, 12:23 PM
OMG, that is the most awesome FF I've ever read...I'll go read the sequel now.:P

I like you're theme song idea. That's pretty cool.;)

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-11-2007, 02:25 PM
Awesome!!! Wonderful story!!!

whitesoxfan
07-12-2007, 03:05 PM
you have a talent you coulbe the next agatha christie



and didn't soemone murder oliver

atisdale01
08-23-2007, 08:05 AM
cool and quite sad lol