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Hannah+Jake
07-07-2007, 12:45 PM
Chapter 1 : Loose


Lily was reading a magazine at lunch.

Miley :Why do you waste your time reading that lying trash?

Lily :Hannah Montana looks fabulous .

Miley :With pinch of truth!!!

Lily :Jake Ryan is back for his movie premire and for a girl named Miley.Wow!

Miley :I don't care Lily he kissed and he leaves doesn't make a difference.

Miley and Lily go to their lockers. Miley opened hers suddenly a dozen roses fell out.

Jake was behind Miley .

Miley : He's right in back of me Lily.

Lily pointed..
Girls Night_GNO
07-07-2007, 12:47 PM
Good more! Good More!
-Rosy
LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 01:12 PM
that was good, more!!
xoxo Babii xoxo
07-07-2007, 01:15 PM
more
smileymiley92
07-07-2007, 01:29 PM
AWESOME!!
Write more!!
elle
07-07-2007, 01:37 PM
Awesome job!!
Can't wait for more..
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-07-2007, 02:14 PM
its good!more!
Beverly22
07-07-2007, 03:38 PM
holy cow, more please!!
hannahmontana_luver0320
07-07-2007, 03:45 PM
it was short, i loved it write more
elle
07-07-2007, 03:49 PM
^ yeah, 8 comments.. maybe she will write more
Hannah+Jake
07-07-2007, 03:56 PM
Chapter 2 : Wow

Miley turned around .Jake was smiling.

Jake : Sorry it was six months but I'm ready

Jake handed her 1 pink rose with diamonds on it.

Miley whispeared to Lily .

Miley : Diamonds ,wow he's despete.

Jake : So want to go out this Saturday ?

Miley :I'll show you how I feel

Miley took her cappichino and dump it on Jake's head.

Miley : My heart is ice cold!!!!!
Secretpopstar1
07-07-2007, 04:00 PM
more!!!!!!!!!
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-07-2007, 04:02 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
elle
07-07-2007, 04:11 PM
omg!! that was odd, lol that would be funny if amber and ashley saw that ... more!
Hannah+Jake
07-08-2007, 09:42 PM
Chapter 3 : Sixteen

Miley : "Lily come on we have to get to the Restarant to plan the designs for

my sweet sixteen ."

Miley and Lily walked out the school and ran to the restarant.

Jake had realised that he had left for 1 year.

Miley : "I want a Princess theme .Have lods of pink and tiaras as the

background and have all the tables and chairs to the left since it's a huge

room.Have the stage in the center."

The Designers wrote it all quikly.

Designer 1 : "Do you want a tiara in the middle of each table?"

Lily & Miley : "Oh like duh yes!!"

Miley :"Everything must be royalty and fancy . My birthday cake must have

a small tiara on it .You got that .Now someone needs to be my prince for my

entrance and invitations must be done and we have to pick a few girl

dancers to do the dance with me .Have the invitations fancy with gold on it.

500 sharp!"

The next day

Miley came to school with a shirt saying princess .She did an anoucement.

Miley : "Who ever wants to audition for the dance for my party come to the

auditorium at 3:00 .Oh yea girls only."

3:00

Almost every girl came .

Only Ashley,Becca,Ginie,Lily,and Sarah made it.

Miley : "Girls who made it report to my house tommorrow 5 :00."
secretive_angel
07-08-2007, 10:10 PM
coolz more
LotsaBigHearts
07-09-2007, 09:14 AM
awesome job!!
More please!!
m&jrule
07-09-2007, 12:18 PM
moree