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Amy Lee Fan
07-02-2007, 07:38 PM
To me this makes me smile and cry every time I read it.....
Story:
"I want to hold on to her." Miley cried as her dad held her in his arms on the drive home."We all do bud but she is gone for a long, long while." "But I don't want her to go!" Miley skreached as she flung herself in the corner of the crammed taxi. Oliver, Jackson, Billy, and Rico sat quiet as Miley cried softely and sadly. "She was a special part of me daddy, and she was a big part that will never be there again. Just an empty place in my heart that nobody can every take away."

When the taxi stopped at Miley's house they threw open the door and ran to her room, locking her self in and crying oh so loudly as loud knocks on the door and comforting voices tried to ask Miley to open up. She skreamed "Leave me alone!" After three long hours Miley managed to calm herself down and came to her seft to open the door. She began to cry again on her dad's shoulder and he picked her up in his arms and sat her on her bed. He began to talk with comforting words but all she could here was her own thought.

Miley:
I wish she didn't have to leave. Lily was the best thing that every happened to me....then her dad said something that caught her attention.


Story:
"Milez cancer can kill anybody we are just unlucky that it happened to our Lily. But would she want you to be hurting your self over this. Lily was a strong girl and she would have wanted the same for you. Miley began to smile a little bit to make her dad feel that he had done what he came in there to do. After they talked for one hour her dad gave her some of his famous Loco Hot Cocoa and she fell dreamlessly asleep. All she dreamt about was how Lily was the best friend she ever had and loved her so much as if they were sisters and she smiled the whole dream while tears of joy fell on her now fully drenched pillow. "Milez. Wake up bud." Her dad said as she rubbed her eyes still half asleep. "What?" She said in such a sleepy tone she almost said it to her self. "I got a surprise for ya bud." Her dad told her as he held out a shiny bracelet for Miley . "What a surprise, for me?" Miley said still half asleep. "Well when your awake come down and have some breakfast, I have something I want to show you."He said trying not to give away the secret. "Ok daddy, I'll be down there soon."

Thank you.....
All that read and understood.
If you did not understand this story please just ask and I'll explain.

Amy Lee Fan
07-02-2007, 07:38 PM
thank you so much!!

elle
07-02-2007, 08:12 PM
oh that's sad.. more more!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-02-2007, 08:24 PM
more!plz write more!

Amy Lee Fan
07-03-2007, 03:14 PM
thank you guys so you love it!! yay that is my first fan fic!! surprisingly I am only in 5 grade!

elle
07-03-2007, 03:18 PM
oh my gosh, that's awesome!! you should think about writing

HannahMontanaX3
07-03-2007, 07:02 PM
MORE please

secretive_angel
07-03-2007, 09:26 PM
more

Amy Lee Fan
07-03-2007, 10:15 PM
thx you guys and yes I have wrote a story and my teacher like put that stuff on it and it was 13 pages of literature on a story of "a little boy called stevey"
great book!

Amy Lee Fan
07-03-2007, 10:16 PM
moreok I'll make a little romance!! anpther fan fic check it out!

Amy Lee Fan
07-17-2007, 04:29 AM
I will make my next chapter....

Amy Lee Fan
07-17-2007, 04:44 AM
chapter 2.
"Milez come on!" Miley's dad said.
"Coming dad." miley said very lazily.
Miley came down stairs and looked at the table. It was the records of lily in the hospital.
"Oh my God!" miley said.
Apperently lily had a heart beat still.
"We have to get down there" Miley screamed as she grabbed an apple and headed to the car.
"Milez it is 6:30 AM! What do you think this is, a circus?"
"No dad, we are leaving now!" miley yelled from the car.
Robby jumped in the car, buckled his seatbelt, and they where off!
Miley jumped out of her seat......
To be continued
[sorry it is short!]
=]
Kaitlyn!!

HannahMontanaX3
07-17-2007, 11:27 AM
more

Amy Lee Fan
07-18-2007, 09:15 PM
You really like it!! well I will try to make more but it takes a while...that one I just wrote was tiny so I was try to make another that is bigger!!

LotsaBigHearts
07-18-2007, 09:52 PM
that was awesome!!

Amy Lee Fan
07-20-2007, 04:01 PM
Next chapter!!
Miley jumped out of the car as they reached the hospital. Her dad had not even parked the car and miley fell on her arm! She skreamed and tried to shake it off. The pain reached to her elbow and she new she had broken it. Though the pain rushed through her arm she kept running to the hospital doors. She pushed them open as her dad started running.
"Milez what are you doing, you just broke your arm! You are going out of control and you need to calm down!"Robby said as he picked miley up in a cradle. As tears fell down her face, she was skreaming on the inside.
"No dad if you want to let Lily die that is your problem!"Miley skreamed as she fell out of her dad arms and dropped to the floor.
She ran to lily's room and cried as hard as she ever had because lily was laughing, playing cards, and eating breakfast! "LILY" Miley screamed as she flung her arms around lily!
"Miley what are you doing here?"Lily said as she hugged Miley tight.
"I couldn't leave you here!"Miley said as she pulled her broken arm back so Lily couldn't see it.
"What happened to your arm?" Lily said as she pulled it back again, touching it gently.
"Well, when I got out of the car practically when it was moving I landed on it and, broke it." Miley said as she took her arm out of Lily's reach.
"Miley, I am ok you didn't have to do that just to make sure I was ok!" Lily said as she hugged Miley again just as tight!
"I did it because I didn't want to lose the best thing I ever had..." Miley said as she kept hugging Lily even though it hurt when she hugged her.
"I love you Miley!"
"I love you Lily!"They both said quietly as tears fell down their faces and the pain in Miley arm just went away........

I hope you liked it! Lily lived and it was a great ending!!

XxarlimeXx12
07-20-2007, 04:03 PM
i love this so far more

cute_princess1114
07-20-2007, 04:15 PM
you need more!!!

Amy Lee Fan
07-22-2007, 08:42 PM
thank you guys so much! you don't even know!! =]]]]