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Hannah+Jake
06-30-2007, 09:50 PM
Don't steal my idea.
Malibu Grudge
By Hannah+Jake

Oliver,Lily,Jake ,Miley ,Becca and Lucas were in a drift party.
The music was pounding ,people were dancing and everyone went wild.
The six were playing truth or dare.The bottle pointed at Miley and Jake.
They were dared to go into the haunted house .The legend was that a girl was cheating on her husband with her collage teacher.Her husband was so mad that he killed her and
their child and himself .They say who ever goes into the house will be cursed and murdered by the girl.She follows you until she kills you with her son.Her son acts like a cat so when you hear a meow or see a cat he's there.The legend is called the Grudge.
Jake and Miley go into the house along with the other four .Jake & Miley start kissing.
Lily & Oliver so as well as Becca and Lucas start kissing.Something was in back of Jake........ something meowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

flower1
06-30-2007, 09:59 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I realized this is after the movie The Grudge! any way, MORE1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K-star7
06-30-2007, 10:10 PM
please write more!!

smileymiley92
07-01-2007, 05:04 PM
omg, that's crazy good.. more!!

elle
07-01-2007, 05:05 PM
oh my gosh! that's getting really good.. more!

flower1
07-01-2007, 05:11 PM
moreee

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-01-2007, 05:22 PM
moreeeeeeee!

secretive_angel
07-01-2007, 08:42 PM
more

flower1
07-01-2007, 10:33 PM
moreeeeeeeeee!

Hannah+Jake
07-02-2007, 12:23 PM
Chapter 2
Miley looked behind him it was the girl and her son .Miley screamed.She woke up with her head laying on Jake 's lap .He was asleep."Jake wake up"Miley said.Jake woke up .Miley saw a cat .Miley's eyes widend .She grabed Jake's hand and ran out of the her house."We have to get out of here"Miley said .
They ran to Lily's house ."She's gonna get us "Miley said ."Miley , What are you talking about"Jake said.

smileymiley92
07-02-2007, 02:35 PM
holy cow.. :O more

elle
07-02-2007, 07:33 PM
that's really good!! SCARED TO DEATH.. jk, but it's scary! more

mileycyrusisluv
07-02-2007, 08:22 PM
more, there is ALOT of scary stories and it isn't even halloween!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-02-2007, 08:25 PM
more, there is ALOT of scary stories and it isn't even halloween!
yeah i know really!moreeeeeeeeee!

secretive_angel
07-03-2007, 07:50 PM
more