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vanessa*anne
05-04-2007, 04:51 AM
a few people wanted me to start a new fan fiction so here it is!
Chapter 1: Wait, you are hannah?
Hannah: lifes what you make it so lets make it rock
lifes what you make it so come on, come on everybody now! lets celebrate it join in everyone. you decide, cause lifes what you make itttt. life is what you make it.
hannah walked off the stage.
robby ray: that was great honey! there is someone to see you
hannah: really? who?
jake: hi hannah
hannah: oh hi jake. sorry can't talk right now. can you wait?
jake: yea sure
hannah started singing nobody's perfect and then the concert finished. she hadn't noticed but the bobby pins holding the wig on were falling out. she ran off the stage.
hannah: hi jake
jake: hi. so do you want to go back on zombie high?
hannah: sure that would be great
jake: great. then we can finish our kiss
hannah (dreamy): yea i know
jake: excuse me?
hannah: oh don't worry
for a second she had forgotten she was hannah, not miley.
hannah started talking to her dad and her wig fell off
jake: errm hannah, heres your hair....
miley(because her wig had fallen off): i have something to tell you
jake: what hannah?
miley:..........
thobi123
05-04-2007, 10:53 AM
omg u need to write mnore and it is not boring
vanessa*anne
05-04-2007, 06:11 PM
chapter 2: secret revealed
miley: i am hannah
jake: i know
miley: no i mean
she turned around.
jake: miley?
miley: jake i am sorry i didn't tell you i was just scared....
jake: of what? you seriously thought i would like hannah more than you
a huge smile spready across her face
jake: come here
he gave her a huge hug.
robby ray: come on lets go. cause its the time to go....
miley: dad remeber, it ain't funny!
jake: thats my miley
and they went in the car
miley: you have no idea what this means to me.
jake: i know
he kissed her on the lips gentley.
*the next day at school*
lilly: so how did the concert go?
miley: great! jake found out i am hannah and didn't even care
lilly: oh great..........
miley: whats wrong?
lilly: it is just that i always liked jake from the start and then you got him! how come its so unfair! you get everything
miley: lilly i'm sorry.....
lilly:....................................
cute_princess1114
05-04-2007, 06:30 PM
plz keep going!!
smileyface93
05-04-2007, 06:40 PM
more plzz
miley rocks
05-04-2007, 06:55 PM
more
luv2act
05-04-2007, 07:35 PM
ooh, more!
vanessa*anne
05-04-2007, 08:55 PM
chapter 3: the fight
lilly: you hated him and you knew i liked him and you just went ahead and kissed him!
miley: i thought you were ok with it!
lilly: well if you really were my friend you would have known i wasn't ok and wouldn't do that to me!
miley: lilly i am.....
lilly: just forget it
lilly walked off. everyone was looking
miley: theres nothing to see here
miley felt really guilty, lilly was really angry at her, over a guy. they said they wouldn't let guys get between them again.
jake: miley, whats wrong?
miley: its nothing.... just that lillys angry at me
jake: well i am here.
miley: yea i know.
jake kissed miley
girls: what? booooooooooooooooooooooo
jake: give it a rest!
miley: all the girls adore you......
jake: but i only adore one girl
miley: awww thats sweet
oliver: miley, can i tell you something?
miley: yeah sure
oliver: in private.
miley: ok
oliver:.............
cute_princess1114
05-05-2007, 12:08 AM
more!!
vanessa*anne
05-05-2007, 12:10 AM
no requests but anyway........ it must be bad
chapter 4: confused
oliver: you shouldn't date jake!
miley: what? why? are you angry?
oliver: no, don't worry
olivers POV
i can't tell her how i feel i just can't.
end of POV
miley: lilly i am.....
lilly just kept walking
miley: i am sorry
lilly stopped and turned around.
lilly: you should be *they gave each other a big hug*
lilly: i shouldn't have done that... i am sorry.
miley: its okay. i get how you feel
lilly: you do?
miley: yeah
lilly: i still like jake but i don't wanna risk our friendship
miley: never
jake overheard lilly saying she liked him and kept listening to the conversation.
lilly: stupid guys are never going to break us up
miley: agreed.
miley felt so relived
miley: no stupid guy is ever going to get inbetween us
jake: so you are calling me stupid
miley: no......
jake:..........
vanessa*anne
05-05-2007, 12:11 AM
oh and i am thinking for one of the next chapters for it to be kind of a songfic, but it won't be the end of the story or anything
cute_princess1114
05-05-2007, 12:16 AM
great idea keep going!!
vanessa*anne
05-05-2007, 01:11 AM
1 more comment
smileyface93
05-05-2007, 01:28 AM
awsomeness!!! more!
vanessa*anne
05-05-2007, 02:05 AM
chapter 5: face down (songchap)
One look puts the rhythm in my head.
Still I'll never understand why you hang around.
I see what's going down
jake scratched miley badly and it started bleeding
oliver: now what was that for?
jake: for saying that
miley: don't worry. its ok
miley took out a tissue and put it on it and walked off with jake
oliver kept thinking, why is she still sticking around? why is she still going to date him?
Cover up with makeup in the mirror,
Tell yourself it's never gonna happen again.
You cry alone and then he swears he loves you
lilly: what is your dad going to say?
miley: its ok, he won't find out. hand me the fountation.
lilly: ok
miley covered up the scratch and you couldn't even see it.
lilly: wow! that stuff works! are you sure you are ok? don't let him to anythin bad to you
miley: don't worry, he loves me. he won't. he said sorry. he said he won't do it again and he won't
miley walked into her room and started crying, "But he does love me, he even said so. i know he does, i know he does"
Do you feel like a man when you push her around?
Do you feel better now as she falls to the ground?
Well, I'll tell you my friend, one day this world's going to end
As your lies crumble down, a new life she has found.
Miley was with Jake at the beach. Jake grabbed onto mileys hand, squeezing it really hard.
miley: what did you do that for?
jake: come on, i am only playing with you. i love you
they started kissing.
jake pushed her down to the ground. she landed on a rock on her side and she was in a lot of pain. jake sat next to her on the sand.
oliver was standing at ricos watching, "why does she even put up with it?" he kept asking himself.
Face down in the dirt she says "this doesn't hurt"
jake: are you okay?
miley: yeah, im fine.
I see the way you go and say you're right again,
say your right again
heed my lecture
oliver: jake you need to stop.
jake: stop what?
oliver: stop hurting miley
jake: i am not oken! take a break.
miley was up in her room, cyring. everywhere hurt. she was in a lot of pain. "why is he doing this" she kept asking herself
oliver: miley, you can't put up with him doing that you have to break up with him!
miley:............
luv2act
05-05-2007, 11:08 AM
wow! jake is sooo mean!she better break up with him! Awsome! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! by demand!
miley rocks
05-05-2007, 02:12 PM
wow why is he doing this
but its great keep it up
vanessa*anne
05-05-2007, 06:01 PM
chapter 6: no... he loves me!
miley: no.... he loves me
tears came up into her eyes
oliver: miley.... if he loved you would he do this?
miley: i i ii don't know
she put her head on olivers shoulder and cried into it
oliver: its ok.
miley started to scream
miley: oooowwww
oliver: what? whats wrong?
miley lifted up her shirt a little to show a huge bleeding sore.
oliver: ok we are going to the hopsital.
workers: she will have to stay in for the rest of the day.
miley: oliver you can go....
oliver: i will go and find jake and then come straight back.
miley: no don't....
oliver: we need to find out!
miley knew that he was right, but didn't want jake to hurt oliver. he was already leaving, it was too late to stop him.
workers: come and sit over here. we need to clean out the sore because it has been left for quite a while and then stich it up.
miley hated stiches, but just said ok.
oliver was at the beach and saw jake
oliver: jake! mileys in hospital
jake: what? what for?
oliver: you know what for. i saw you push her down on that rock before! it gave her a huge sore. now why did you do that to miley? you love her don't you? don't you?
jake: ok i will tell you why i did it.....
oliver: why?
jake:.................................
SupaStaRrMiley92
05-05-2007, 09:43 PM
Why did he do it??
Hannah+Jake
05-05-2007, 10:02 PM
more more more
more
more
more
more
vanessa*anne
05-05-2007, 10:12 PM
chapter 7: the reason
jake: my dad does it to me all the time
oliver felt so bad now. they were quiet for a little while
oliver: is that an excuse to do it to miley?
jake: i just needed to take my anger out, know that i am not the only one i know going through it.
olivr: jake..... seriously. is that fair?
jake: i guess it isn't.
oliver: yep. my mum is dropping me off at the hospital. coming?
jake: yeah.
they drove to the hospital
miley: oh hi oli.. and jake
jake: miley i am soo sorry. i was being stupid
miley:....................................
luv2act
05-05-2007, 10:13 PM
come on! more!
luv2act
05-05-2007, 10:14 PM
its awsome, by the way!
vanessa*anne
05-06-2007, 12:36 AM
miley: jake, its okay.
jake: really?
tears were coming to his eyes
miley: yeah. i am going to be out in about an hour. everything is fine.
a huge smile spread across his face.
jake: miley you know i love you
miley: yeah.
oliver kept thinking why she was believing his lies, no idea. he was lying. oliver just knew it but didn't want to say it.
in an hours time miley got out of hospital and was walking along the beach with jake.
jake: you have no idea how guilty i feel.. how can i make it up to you
miley: promising not to do it and i think you know
jake kissed her.
jake: goodnight miley
miley: bye.
miley and lilly were at the mall. they needed great outfits for the next party. lilly picked up a striped dress
lilly: this is soooo cute!
miley picked up a green jacket.
miley: this is really cute to! wait theres jake. should i go talk to him?
lilly: yeah! after we buy these
miley: agreed
they went to the counter and bought them, there wasn't a line
miley walked towards jake and saw.........
luv2act
05-06-2007, 12:39 AM
grr! more!
SupaStaRrMiley92
05-06-2007, 12:57 AM
What did they see??
cute_princess1114
05-06-2007, 01:18 AM
more!!!!!
vanessa*anne
05-06-2007, 02:18 AM
chapter 8: cheater
she saw jake there, with sarah, the famous supermodel
miley: what?
lilly: come on miley...
tears started to form in her eyes. she stood motionless, looking at jake, wondering if he would notice. it was obious they were on a date, miley could just tell. the movies was one of the most popular places for teens their age to go on dates. almost everyone dated there.
lilly: miley.... are you okay?
and just when she thought it couldn not get worse it did. jake kissed her right on the lips. this was just unbearable for miley. jake said that he loved her! but here he is dating someone else. he was complete lies, complete lies!
tears were flooding down mileys cheeks. her eyes were red, her mouth was right open but wasn't saying anything and she bolted, ran right away from there fast. she didn't want to watch it anymore, she didn't want to! her heartt had been ripped out and broken into millons of little pieces. the first guy that she ever loved and he cheated on her! first the pushing and scratching and now this! she kept thinking that he must not love her, he musn't. she ran as fast as she could away from the movie complex and out the doors of the mall. everyone was looking at her, but she didn't care. she felt like no one else could even see her. she kept thinking that no one cared what they did to her. lilly ran after her.
lilly: miley.. slow down.
running was something lilly wasn't good at so she stopped for a minute. after a break she looked for miley but could not see her anywhere. lilly knew the two places she always went when she was upset, the hannah montana closet or the rocks on the beach, on top of the hill.
lilly walked up to the rocks and found miley there.
mileys was staring out at the ocean, crying. she was about 100 meters above the sea and below her was the crushing waves. lilly stood there, thinking of what to say to her. and then miley got up and walked up closer to the edge. she was going to sit down but then because the rocks were wet she started to slip off the edge
lilly(yelling): miley!
lilly grabbed her hand and pulled her back up
lilly: miley? miley? are you okay?
tears were starting to roll down her cheeks.
lilly: i don't want to loose you!
miley:...............................
SupaStaRrMiley92
05-06-2007, 02:32 AM
Woah, suicidal Miley...
Please write more??
vanessa*anne
05-06-2007, 03:40 AM
Woah, suicidal Miley...
Please write more??
haha yea... thats a bit unrealistic. i will change it a bit so read it again so its more miley-like.
luv2act
05-06-2007, 09:53 AM
wo-e! awsome!
cute_princess1114
05-07-2007, 02:03 PM
more!!
xxmileyluverxx1234xx
05-07-2007, 04:30 PM
Wow, Miley's going a little overboard, don't you think? But, more, please. I dmeand MORE!!
vanessa*anne
05-07-2007, 05:24 PM
Wow, Miley's going a little overboard, don't you think? But, more, please. I dmeand MORE!!
yeah probably.... just to make it a bit more exciting. writing the enxt part now
vanessa*anne
05-07-2007, 05:42 PM
miley: why did he do this!
lilly gave miley a big hug. tears rolled down her cheeks and her top became wet, but lilly didn't care, she just wanted her best friend to be alright.
lilly: don't worry.... its going to be okay.
miley felt like nothing was working. she loved jake and she thought that he loved her. she kept thinking, she should have known it from the start.
lilly: come on miley.. lets go home.
lilly and miley walked to mileys house.
miley: thanks lilly.
lilly: anytime.
miley: see you tomorrow at school?
lilly: yep.
miley had a rough night. in her room crying. ripping down all of the posters she had of jake ryan and all the photos and putting them in a box. he was on a date right now while she was going through this. why is life so unfair? she kept thinking. she had a shower, got changed into her pjs and cried herself to sleep.
robby ray: darling.... time to wake up school.
miley: mmmmmm
miley didn't want to wake up, didn't want to go to school. jake was going to be there! how could she face him? what was he going to say?
robby ray: okay, i will go get the water bucket.....
miley: NO!
she bolted right out of bed and got changed and walked to school. the day was going fine, until recess. she turned around and saw jake.
jake:........................
thobi123
05-07-2007, 06:00 PM
more gurl
miley rocks
05-07-2007, 06:27 PM
more
cute_princess1114
05-07-2007, 06:27 PM
more!!!!! u got the water bucket part from me and rico down by the school yard!!
luv2act
05-07-2007, 06:30 PM
more! now!
vanessa*anne
05-08-2007, 03:27 AM
jake: hey darling.
he grabbed her waist and gave her a hug.
miley: jake.. get off me!
jake: whats wrong?
lilly: don't whats wrong her! you know whats wrong!
jake: ummmmmm
lilly: stop acting all confused and dumb! we all know whats up!
miley: explain what you were doing yesterday with the supermodel, at the movies kissing.
jake: miley.. you don't get it. we did that for publicity for our next film!
miley: don't you think that is going a bit too far?
jake: probably... but she kissed me!
miley: oh okay thats fine.
i shouldn't believe him, i shouldn't. this love might be killing me but hes the only one. i can't imagine being with someone else. everyone probably thinks i am dumb, and this is probably the wrong choice but i need to follow my heart, not always my head.
jake: ok great!
lilly(whispering to miley): miley... look whats he has been doing to you
miley kept having second thoughts. she had to make up her mind, she had too. maybe she shouldn't believe him...
miley:..........................
what is she gonna decide? find out in the next part!
SupaStaRrMiley92
05-08-2007, 05:00 PM
She should ditch him!!
Please write more?
vanessa*anne
05-08-2007, 05:38 PM
miley: sorry jake, its over.
jake: what?
miley: look at everything you did to me! i thought it would be pretty obious.
lilly: uh huh
jake: fine. if i can't have you, no one can.
miley: FINE WITH ME!
she knew that was the right choice but she still loved him but had no idea though why.
oliver: so whats happening?
miley: i broke up with jake
oliver: what why?
they told him the whole story
oliver: ok that guy is seriosualy a jerk.
lilly: great news! another star is coming to this school!
miley: really? who?!
lilly:..................
miley: omg really? this is awsome!
miley rocks
05-08-2007, 11:39 PM
who
dont stop now
luv2act
05-09-2007, 12:16 AM
who??????????????????????
vanessa*anne
05-17-2007, 08:07 AM
miley: danny daniel! the star of that new show? hes stuck up!
lilly: you just said it was cool a minute ago.
miley: well whatever. he is going to be just like jake, i know it.
lilly: look there he is
girls: hi danny..
danny: ummm hi?
they all started crowding around him
danny: personal space please!
miley just stood there
miley: they are falling over him like when uncle earl gives the puppies steak at the farm.
oliver: i don't know how you come up with those.
miley: talent maybe?
oliver: sure...
lilly: OMG HE IS SOOO COOL AND IS IN OUR NEXT CLASS!
miley: do you think i care?
miley got her books out of her locker and headed to next class.
girls: sit next to me danny! me!
danny put his books down on the seat next to miley and sat down.
girls: awwwww
danny: hi.
miley: hi.
danny: sorry, don't think i have indroduced myself. i'm danny.
miley: hey
danny: you are like the only girl not falling all over me! it sucks. i just want a normal life sometimes.
miley: yea i get that.. celebs are just like normal people
danny: i know! its not like we are any different at all.
teacher: talking is not for now miss stewart and mr daniel. but could i have your autograph?
danny: see what i am talking about?
miley: yeah.
the siren went off.
miley: what what what was that?
luv2act
05-17-2007, 08:14 AM
more!
vanessa*anne
05-17-2007, 08:24 AM
announcher: a murder has happened and you all must leave the school buildings immediatlly!
miley: what the?
danny: come on miley! lets go!
he grabbed tightly onto her hand. to her, it felt so good. he wasn't like jake, just because he was a star, he was the nicest and most friendly boy she had ever met.
teachers: get into single file
danny: wow.. a muderer.. scary.
miley: yeah i know.. i hope whoever was effected was okay.
danny: yeah me to.
miley and danny sat down next to each other. a crowd of girls came over.
girls: we love you danny.
danny: sorry girls.. i am kinda talking to miley
girls: boooo
danny: they can get so clingy.
miley: yeah, sometimes you just want a normal life, don't you?
danny: yea! being a celeb isn't all that it is came up to be.
annoncer: the murder has been taken off the school premicess and block 2 is out of bounds. for anyone that is wondering, we are very dissapointed to say that.................... was killed
luv2act
05-17-2007, 08:35 AM
*gasp* more!!!
hannah_montana.boston
05-17-2007, 04:25 PM
is it any of miley's bff's and she is soooooooooooo totally falling for this danny guy
miley rocks
05-17-2007, 10:38 PM
^u read my mind
i totally agree
vanessa*anne
05-18-2007, 04:08 AM
Jackson Stewart was killed.
Mileys heard started beating fast, her face went really pale.
danny: miley? are you okay? miley?
mileys POV
jackson? jacksons gone! i know i shouldn't be upset about this... annoying jackson is gone! no.... i want him back. who did this who? i want to kill them myself.
end of mileys POV
streams of tears flodded down her cheeks and she got up and ran to block 2, even though it was out of bounds.
danny walked over to lilly
danny: what is wrong with her?
lilly: jackson stewart is her brother! why wouldn't she be upset?
danny: oh....
he felt a stab of guilt, he didn't know!
miley was in block 2 and in the hallway saw jackson lying there dead, blood spread across the floor. she ran under the polive only streamer and ran up to him and leaned her head against his. her head was getting blood all over it, but that didn't matter to her at all. thor was standing there crying. tears rolled down mileys cheeks. she hugged her brother tightly
miley talked to him, her voice fast and feverish
miley: jackkson now matter what i said, i did always love you! why couldn't it have been me? why! why!
police: excuse me mam you aren't suppossed to be here
miley: is he going to not die? is he going to life? please don't tell me my brother is dead!
police: i am sorry.. but he is
tears rolled down her face. she couldn't take it anymore. she gave a loud scream, a scream of shock, saddness and fear. life without jackson? she couldn't imagine it at all!
police: sorry but you have to go now
miley ran into the janitors cuboard and smashed everything and started crying. the knob of the door started moving
miley (crying): who is it?
luv2act
05-18-2007, 08:53 AM
aw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG, that was so sad! your made up of pure talent! more!
vanessa*anne
05-18-2007, 05:26 PM
1 more comment.
smileyface93
05-18-2007, 05:35 PM
more plzz!! its very good!!
vanessa*anne
05-18-2007, 10:09 PM
danny: its danny. can i come in?
miley: okay
he walked in and saw miley sitting on a bucket, red eyes and runny nose. her hair looked messy and her clothes were wet with tears.
danny: come here miley.
he gave her a big hug. it made her feel better, in his arms she felt so comfortable. she rested her head on his shoulder, crying into it. tears were running down his arm, but he didn't care.
miley: i can't believe he is gone.
danny: miley... i know you are going to miss him but everything is going to be alirght
miley: really?
danny: yea and i know why you will get through this
miley: why?
danny: you are strong, talented, amazing and i can't imagine you never being smiley again.
he leaned his face towards her, very close
miley(thinking): this is it. danny is going to kiss me. i know that he is no jake ryan, no one will ever come anywhere near him but still, he is so swett.
her heart was racing fast, for a moment she forgot what had happened to jackson, there was no cares in the world. she really liked danny, not as much as jake, no one will ever take his place. or at least she thought that. but still.. he was so much sweeter than him, she knew that jake hurt her but she still wanted him. but danny, maybe she could learn to love him as much as she did jake
danny.........
luv2act
05-18-2007, 10:13 PM
awsome! more!
miley rocks
05-18-2007, 10:34 PM
nooooooooooooooooooooooo more
vanessa*anne
05-18-2007, 10:40 PM
danny wiped a tear away
danny: don't worry, i am sure he is in a better place.
miley gave a little smile, she was hoping for a kiss. she thought she would get a kiss.
miley: i am going to go.
miley lef the closet and walked home, she was going to take the day off.
robby ray(singing): no kids! no kids! i can do whatever i want, i can lay on the lounge, watching MA rated movies, i can the milk from the carton!
miley was a little freaked out. robby ray kept singing but she ignored him. he saw her and then turned around and saw miley, sitting on the coach
robby ray: bud, why are you here? it isn't even lunch time!
he noticed her face, stained with tears and her eyes big red and puffy
robby ray: darling... what happened? was it jake? was it a guy?
miley just sat there quietly.
robby ray: darling
miley: daddy.. jackssoon, jaacckson
robby ray: what about jackson?
mileys heart was beating fast. he didn't know what had happened.
miley: daddy! jacksons dead! he was murdered
robby ray:............
luv2act
05-18-2007, 10:43 PM
more!
vanessa*anne
05-18-2007, 10:57 PM
after another comemnt i will.
smileyface93
05-18-2007, 11:21 PM
more!!!
luv2act
05-18-2007, 11:24 PM
there! that was another comment! more! lolz
vanessa*anne
05-18-2007, 11:36 PM
robby ray: ohh
he started at his shoes, he couldn't look miley in the eye.
miley: daddy i miss him so much!
miley gave him a hug but he was still looking down at the ground. she didn't blame him, that was how she felt when she first found out. miley quietley got up and walked slowly up the staris, head down in low spirits.
she saw the door to jacksons room, it had a sign on it saying 'BEWARE! JACKSON! MILEY, DON'T COME IN!' miley used to always ignore that sign and go in anyway and jackson got really angry at her. she thought it was really funny then but now, it just reminded her of her dead brother.
she slowly moved her hand towards the doorknob of his room, and slowly turned it. she nervously walked in.
on his desk was a photo of jackson, her dad and her. it was at the time they went to hawaii. miley was only 8. her skin was so red from all the sun, so badly burned and whenever jackson touched it she screamed and he always did, just to annoy her. her eyes started to tear up. that was a graet holiday, even with the sunburn. thats what too much time in the sun does to you
then she saw a book in his shelf saying jacksons diary.
miley(thinking): jackson? kept a diary? hahahahah thats pretty funny.
but that didn't cheer her up. she turned the pages slowly until she reached the page he had last written in. her eyes started to tear up, it said:..................
luv2act
05-18-2007, 11:42 PM
*gasp* what did he write?? more!
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 12:05 AM
another comment or two...
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 04:13 AM
i will just post more.
it said....
i know i am going to die, i will.
jake will go through with what he said,
if i don't get him and miley together, thats the end of me.
but i can't do that to miley!
and i can't believe he would do this to her!
mileys heart started beating fast. she was so nervous, her breathing was coarse and hard but she continued reading
he has done so much to her,
she can't be with him.
i want my sister to be happy
not be stuck with a jerk like him.
she deserves wayy better
i will die.
miley, if you end up reading this(and if i still were alive i would KILL YOU)
i miss you so much
but i only want the best ever for you
miley shut the diary, she couldn't bear to read anymore of it! jake? why would he do this!
miley walked out and shut the door. one more memery of jackson would destroy her and the sight of him, lying on the ground with blood everywhere dead kept replaying in her head.
she searched her book shelve for her own diary. it was covered in dust because she hadn't used it in ages. she blew the dust off and grabbed a pen and started writing.
jackson is gone!
i can't believe jake would do this!
he is such a huge jerk!
i can't believe that i ever loved him
i hate him, i hate him!
jake, you are the rudest, most stuck up guy i had ever meet. but you used to be so sweet, so caring. what happened? you are not the guy i thought i knew.
i used to love you, with all my heart.
now? i don't think i can bear to even look at you!
grrrr
miley was so upset and she.............
luv2act
05-19-2007, 09:33 AM
*gasp*~! what did Miley do?? more! i LUV it!
miley rocks
05-19-2007, 01:40 PM
i cant beive that jake would do that and jackson too
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 05:31 PM
she started smashing everything in her room
miley(screaming): jake that little liar!
then she calmed down a little. she was angerier at jake then she had been at anyone before. hurting her was not that bad, but killing her brother... that is terrible. thats the final straw. her heart was beating faster than a cheetah could run. every feelings for jake had just disapeared, just like that.
robby ray: miley there is someone here to see you..
miley: who? i am not really in the mood..
robby ray: its danny
miley: oh
she bolted quickly down the stairs, not worrying about how she looked, he wouldn't care.
danny: miley....
miley: yeah?
Hannah+Jake
05-19-2007, 05:31 PM
more
luv2act
05-19-2007, 05:33 PM
awsome! more!
Hannah+Jake
05-19-2007, 07:07 PM
more
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 07:14 PM
danny: come here.. its going to be alright.
he gave her a huge hug.
danny: i know what you have been through and everything.... but do you want to go out tomorrow... you know... to forget about what happened. have a little fun.
miley couldn't believe it. he was asking her out! her heart was pounding fast in her chest. she couldn't believe this!
miley: oh yeah sounds like fun!
it was so hard to hide her excitment,but she didn't want to seem too keen, like those girls that fall all over him all the time. then he wouldn't like it.
danny: i am sorry, i have to go. see you tomorrow?
miley: yeah!
she went back upstairs. danny asking her out was a little ray of sunshine in her dark, cloudy sky. there was a huge grin on her face as she walked up the stairs, but when she saw jacksons door to his room, her smile turned upside down, remembering what happened to jackson. how could she be happy when he was dead? it didn't make sense to her at all! she thought she was being selfish and felt a huge stab of guilt.
miley had a shower, got her pjs on and jumped into bed. she lay awake, thinking but she eventually fell to sleep.
she had a dream about jackson.
jackson: mileys, you read my diary! now i am going to kill you!!!! nah. i can't im dead but i would. i just want you to be happy. i know that guy you like asked you out, danny daniel. huge star! go out with him or else i will be angry! don't worry about me.. i am fine. i am with our mum right now. please, just be happy.
miley woke up. she knew jackson wanted her to do this so she got changed and then met danny at the beach.
girls: oooo we love you danny.. aaaahhhhhh. look at those musceles! we all watched you on TV last night! you were the best! will you go on a date with me?
miley: right...
danny walked up to miley,
girls: what about us?
danny: give me a little privacy please! come on miley, we are going somewhere else
miley: okay.
danny took her to....
Hannah+Jake
05-19-2007, 07:24 PM
more
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 07:41 PM
this fancy resteraunt, her and danny the only ones in it.
miley: wow.. i feel really underdressed
danny: don't worry, you are perfect.
mileys face turned a little red.
danny: don't be embarrassed.
miley: ooo yeah....
danny: order?
miley: oh yeah of course!
chef: it shall be ready in 15 minutes.
danny: okay.. miley? do you want to go outside?
miley: okay
danny grabbed her hand and lead her outside, to a balcony.
danny: look, a shooting star.
the star was falling. miley looked up into dannys eyes. they were beautiful brown. she seemed too shy to say anything.
chef: food is ready!
they started eating and miley knocked over a glass and spilled water all over danny.
miley: so sorry
danny started laughing.
danny: don't worry, it was pretty funny
miley: yeah
they both started laughing together.
they talked. mainly danny did the talking, miley was just too shy.
danny: this was fun.. except i am going to go home wet
miley: oh
danny: just playing with ya! see you miley.
miley: bye.
miley(thinking): still no kiss. i will just have to wait....
robby ray: how was it darling?
he was still upset but he held it in, he wanted to not seem weak and give miley coarage.
miley: oh it was good
the next chap is gonna be a songfic. just telling you guys. comments please. i haven't been getting many
Hannah+Jake
05-19-2007, 07:52 PM
more and i wrote more of my stori
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 08:14 PM
1 more comment
Hannah+Jake
05-19-2007, 08:16 PM
more
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 08:33 PM
Why can't i? Liz Phair
Get a load of me,
Get a load of you,
Walking down the street
And I hardly know you
Miley was walking past Danny at school. miley was staring at him
Lilly: Miley.. you hardly know him? He came to this school like 4 days ago
It's just like we were meant to be
miley knew that he hardly knew him but still... everything seemed so perfect about him.
miley: i guess we were kinda meant to be
Holding hands with you,
When we're out at night,
miley kept thinking. when he held her hands last night, she felt carefree. like nothing in the world could go wrong!
Why can't I breathe whenever I think about you
miley stopped thinking and gasped and took in some air. it was just so hard to breathe when she thought abut him.
Why can't I speak whenever I talk about you
Lilly: so how was he? do you really like him?
miley was completley lost for words.
lilly: hello? miley? yep. i know you like him... so obious
Its inevitable... it's a fact that we're gonna get down to it
So tell me...
Why can't I breathe whenever i think about you
lilly: he is so going to kiss you. i know it
miley starting thinking what it would be like to kiss him and just couldn't breath again. did she love him?
I'd love for you to make me wonder
Where it's goin'
I'd love for you to pull me under
Somethin's growin'
For this that we can control
Baby I am dyin'
Miley was just dying. She wanted a kiss... from him so bad..
lilly: ah huh. something is soo gonna happen between you 2
miley: you really think so?
lilly: no. i know so!
miley just couldn't control her feelings. she loved him... but did he feel the same?
tricia1228
05-19-2007, 08:37 PM
more
smileyface93
05-19-2007, 08:44 PM
more plz
luv2act
05-19-2007, 09:02 PM
more1
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 11:02 PM
miley had a hannah concert that night. not in the best mood, but she would go. she picked up her wig and put it on and changed her clothes. in about half an hour she had changed from miley to hannah.
robby ray: ready to go darling?
hannah: yep!
she got in the limo. she remembered when jackson used to sit next to her and complain about how boring it was listening to the same songs every night. her eyes got a little watery. they were almost there, so she held back the tears. she got out of the car and put on a fake smile and posing for the cameras. she was hoping they wouldn't notice her eyes, they looked watery. she had to hold back the tears, she couldn't go on stage crying. that would not do any good for her career.
hannah went of the red carpet and backstage. she put the final touches on her makeup and then walked out onto the stage
hannah: hey everyone! i am going to preform a new song tonight
crowd: HANNAH! HANNAH!
i miss you,
i miss your smile,
and i still shed a tear every once in a while
and even though we are different now
you are still here somehow
my heart won't let you go
and i need you to know
i miss you
now, that you are gone
everything seems so different
even though i live different now
i can't move on somehow
i want you to be here
but i know i do believe
that i will..
keep moving on
you will never leave me
you are always beside me
i miss you
sha sha la
i miss you
the crowd gave a huge cheer! she sang her normal songs, like always and then walked off stage
robby ray: honey, that was beatutiful. there is someone here to see you
hannah: who?
robby ray:........
luv2act
05-19-2007, 11:10 PM
who is it?? I need to know! more, girl!!
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 11:12 PM
1 more comment.
and i tried to write the rest of i miss you.
i am not a songwriter.
luv2act
05-19-2007, 11:15 PM
my comment counted as a million!
vanessa*anne
05-19-2007, 11:21 PM
ok.
robby ray: someone called danny
hannah: really?
danny: hi hannah
hannah: hey, you are on that new TV show aren't you?
danny: yeah. i just wanted to meet you. you are such a great singer, especially that new song you sang tongiht
hannah: really thanks. how have you been?
danny: great actually! except all those fans following me around. but i met this amazing girl.
hannah: hmm really. tell me more
danny: her name is miley. i met her at school. she is amazing, not like other girls. shes beatufiful, herself and everything i want in a girl.
hannah: so you want to kiss her?
danny blushed
danny: i don't think that she wants to kiss me...
hannah: how can you be sure?
danny: i think i will wait a while. i don't want to rush into things
hannah(thinking): he really loves me!
hannah: well i have to go. nice meeting you.
danny: same.
hannah walked out and felt on top of the whole world. he loved her! no kiss soon, but still! and he thought that her other side was amazing. nothing could beat this feeling. except for that.................
what happened? find out in the next part
luv2act
05-19-2007, 11:38 PM
what happend??? More!
tricia1228
05-20-2007, 10:17 AM
more
miley rocks
05-20-2007, 11:27 AM
o man
absolutelyfabx3
05-20-2007, 11:34 AM
moooreee!
vanessa*anne
05-21-2007, 03:40 AM
jake was standing there, with an evil look on his face and something behind his back. hannahs heat was racing so fast. it could be anything! knowing what he was capable of, it could be horrible. her feet were glued to the ground, she could not move. she coudln't dare to move. hannah just couldn't look at him
jake: i know that you saw me.
he was walking towards her. she wished she could freeze time, but she wasn't magic. her heart was going a million miles an hour. the hair on her arm stood up.
jake: come on, say something!
he was getting closer, and closer. it was like she was frozen there. what was there to say? get away from me you freak. but then.... he could have anything behind his back.
jake was so close to her now, close enough to touch her. miley slowly took a step back and he took a step forward.
jake: now if you do as i say. then i won't do anything
hannah: no! no! no!
jake: kiss me
hannah was to nervous to say anything. she just shook her head in disagreet. no way would she kiss him
jake: i am sorry it had to come to this...
hannah: what?
jake:............
miley rocks
05-21-2007, 07:33 PM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! wat gonna happen 2 her why u stop
luv2act
05-21-2007, 07:36 PM
scary! more!
vanessa*anne
05-22-2007, 03:31 AM
jake pulled out a knife from behind its back, as sharp as what you could get. hannah started imaging what it would be like for that to go through her. as painful as the teeth of a shark, as cold as a stone. her life just flashed by her. she remembered all the good things, bad things in just a few seconds. faster than time itselfs.
jake, however, just couldn't bring himself to do it. he loved her more than the fresh morning breeze, more than the sun, more than anything. how could he have been so soo slack to her? he didn't understand what was going through his head. it was like a whirlwind had hit him inside. what he had done.... he didn't know why. he just thought he was plain evil. more evil than a witch, more mean than a monster. jake had become a monster and he knew it.
hannah just stood there, suprised he hadn't done anything. the knife was so close to her side, she was just standing there. jake moved it away.
jake: what have i done
he moved it away straight away
jake: i am sorry... you don't dezerve anything like this
hannah just stood there
hannah: what?
jake:.............
PS: sorry bout all the similes, english writing test tomorrow. narratives. so nervous. i am going to die! and i need to practise.... so heres more!
hannah just looked away. he couldn't look him in the eye.
bang!
she heard the knife drop to the floor and turned around.
bang!
she saw jake slowly fall to the floor.
it hit her like a bullet coming out of a gun. she knew what he had done. she saw scarlet blood dripping off his side. she was shocked and angry, like a mouse who had its cheese stolen.
crack!
lighting appeared in the sky and rain started falling, heavily.
she picked jake up on her back and tried walking to the limo
flop!
she fell to the floor. she couldn't do this. jake was taller and heavier than her, she was just too weak
hannah: help!
she called out desperatly and wearlily
hannah: help!
her voice was paniky and desperate
she layed down on top of jake, wondering if help would ever come. would they find them in time?
luv2act
05-22-2007, 09:06 AM
oh, wow! that was an interesting chapter! why wold Jake do that?? so awesome, more!
Hannah+Jake
05-22-2007, 07:26 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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miley rocks
05-24-2007, 09:02 PM
more
by the way just 2 mak sure jake stabed himself right
vanessa*anne
05-26-2007, 05:09 AM
more
by the way just 2 mak sure jake stabed himself right
yeah... should make it a bit more obious next time. he stabbed in his side, not his heart though;
hannah kept thinking, why did he stab himself? it doesn't make sense. a million questions were swirling around in her head.
robby ray: darlin! where are you?
hannah: here!
she screamed out
hannah: HERE!!!!!
robby ray spun around and dashed around
robby ray: what happened?
hannah: worry about that later.
robby ray: the hospital is close, i will just carry him.
they carried him all the way to the hospital
girls: JAKE RYAN!!!!! omg what happened?
hannah: emergancry
everyone: HANNAH MONTANA!!!!
hannah: quiet people, its a hospital
she sat down and waited paintently, she was asked for an autograph here and there, but otherwise, she did nothing but wait.
doctor: jake is fine, just had to get stiched up, it wasn't enough to do enternal damage
a huge flood of relief swept over her
hananh: can i see him?
doctor: yes
jake: miley! i am so sorry.. can you forgive me? i still love you
miley ripped off her wig
jake: well?
miley:.........
Hannah+Jake
05-26-2007, 11:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv2act
05-26-2007, 11:50 AM
more!!!
Ichigo_Miley_Fan
05-26-2007, 02:42 PM
OMG, you have to continue! I read the whole story from the beginning it's amazing. This is one of the best stories I've ever read. It's so interesting and it's just...amazing. Your a really, really talented writer and you HAVE to write more! Please!
vanessa*anne
05-26-2007, 07:28 PM
miley: jake.. i am sorry. after all that is happened... you killing my brother..
jake: you know about that?
miley: yeah and it would just be.. wierd.
she didn't want to mention that she liked someone else, that would crush him.
miley still couldn't stop the tears rolling down her cheeks.
jake: its okay.. i guess. i deserve this.... i deserve to be dead after what i did
miley: no you don't. loosing jackson and then you... it would be horrible.
jake: thanks miles
he gave her a hug and then she left the hospital.
miley went home and then flopped on the coach and turned on the tv then she got a phone call from lilly
miley: lilly? why are you calling me?
Hannah+Jake
05-26-2007, 07:32 PM
more
luv2act
05-26-2007, 08:14 PM
more!!!
vanessa*anne
05-26-2007, 11:32 PM
lilly: I HAVE A BOYFRIEND!!!!!!!
miley: ok this is serious news! whos the lucky guy?
lilly: tommy
miley: from maths class?
lilly: yeah! he asked me to be his girlfriend and i said yes
miley: this is great! fantastic! danny still hasn't asked me to be his girlfriend...
lilly: don't worry... i think he is being shy
miley: really?
lilly: yeah, don't worry bout it.
what happend with jake?
miley: cut himself, i took him to hospital, asked me to be his girlfriend again and i said no.
lilly: way to go miley!
miley: anyway i have to go. see you at school tomorrow.
lilly: yep. bye!
miley went to sleep, feeling bad for rejecting jake but it was the right thing to do, she knew it!
at school the next day, lilly talked all about her new boyfriend, did science (gah!) and then jake told her something that was about to blow her ears off.
miley: WHAT!!!!!
what did jake say? find out in the next part
luv2act
05-27-2007, 01:51 AM
gahhh! what?? morez!
miley rocks
05-27-2007, 01:25 PM
wat happen?
Hannah+Jake
05-27-2007, 01:42 PM
more your killing me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
vanessa*anne
05-27-2007, 06:19 PM
jake: wonder what everyone will think of your secret? well you are about to find out
miley: WHAT?!
jake just laughed and walked away
jake, tell everyone? this cannot be happening. she kept regreating telling him in the first place and it wasn't like she was a witch and could cast a forgetfulness spell. when would he tell everyone? miley got it, the one time that everyone was together, everyone was there, lunch!
danny: miley.. whats wrong? you look like a monster just came out
miley snapped out of it
miley: oh no i am fine
danny: walk you to lunch?
lunch, the time miley was regretting
miley and danny sat down at a table with lilly and oliver and lillys new boyfriend. she saw jake get out of his seat and walk to the front of the hall.
jake: excuse me, i have something to tell you all.
danny saw the expression on mileys face, and it wasn't good. danny got out of his seat.
jake: it is about miss stewart.
girls: ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh we like secrets. tell us! tell us!
jake:........
luv2act
05-27-2007, 06:21 PM
*gasping for air* I ...... need...more!
Ichigo_Miley_Fan
05-27-2007, 07:33 PM
It's so good! Please keep going!
Hannah+Jake
05-28-2007, 03:19 PM
more1!!!!!!!i need to kno
vanessa*anne
05-29-2007, 06:06 AM
the lights suddenly went off and when they came back on, jake wasn't there. everyone was gasping, they had no idea what was going on!
miley was so relieved.
jake came back
everyone: whats the secret, jake? whats the secret!
jake: not telling
those where the 2 words that made her day. everyone wasn't going to find out she was hannah!
danny came back and sat at the table
miley(whispering): i knew it was you, thank you so much!
danny: its okay... hes never spilling your secret
everyone: TELL US!!!
everyones voices were getting angry.
jake: fine
everyone: yay!!
miley: noo!!!!!!
jake:.........
vanessa*anne
05-29-2007, 05:32 PM
1 more comment.....
luv2act
05-29-2007, 06:08 PM
More!
miley rocks
05-29-2007, 06:22 PM
more
Hannah+Jake
05-29-2007, 08:31 PM
yeeeee more
vanessa*anne
05-30-2007, 06:31 AM
jake: miley is totally in love with danny
crowd: oohhhh
miley felt relieved for a second and then turned bright red. better than her secret getting relvied but everyone was staring straight at her. danny shifted in his seat, cheeks red. jake got down and sat in his seat with a grin on his face. miley was a bit shocked at what had happened.
danny: miley... can you come with me for a second.
danny grabbed her hand.
miley: yeah?
danny:.......
vanessa*anne
05-30-2007, 06:32 AM
sorry its sooo short
Hannah+Jake
05-30-2007, 01:17 PM
more
jbluver
05-30-2007, 01:58 PM
Please post more!
SupaStaRrMiley92
05-31-2007, 07:26 PM
That's it? Darnit...
Please write moree???
vanessa*anne
06-02-2007, 03:10 AM
danny: miley... thats what you were so worried about? i wouldn't have cared
miley: no... i thought he was going to say something else
danny: really?
miley: yeah, it is a secret that has kept my entire life perfect! i told him when i thought i trusted him but now.. he might tell it at any moment
danny: miley come here.
he gave her a huge hug
danny: don't worry about it. nothing is going to happen. it is going to stay your secret
miley was confued. he didn't ask what the secret was. she was quite suprised, but happy.
danny: come to music with me?
miley: yeah!
so they walked together down the hall into music. everyone did ooohss and ahhhs
girls: miley. what is it like to kiss him?
miley just kept walking with a smile on her face. she couldn't believe that he was soo real.. even thought he was a star.
teacher: okay i am sure you know that your singing exams are today. i will choose you a song and you have to sing it.
danny: oh no
miley: don't worry. you will do great.
teacher: danny, sing in the yellow submarine
danny: what?
teacher: do it! here the words!
danny: argg
he sang it and did a pretty good job but got a huge ammount of applause.
all the rest of the songs were old, and everyone was booing.
teacher: okay, miley. i have decided to be nice. sing make some noise
miley: WHAT?
teacher: have a problem with that?
miley:.......
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-02-2007, 03:39 AM
Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg ! I Will Post Another Comment If It Means You Post More!!
vanessa*anne
06-02-2007, 05:08 AM
1 more comment........
miley rocks
06-02-2007, 02:32 PM
omg shes so dead
shes gonna hav 2 sing bad so that nobody reconizes her as hannah
vanessa*anne
06-02-2007, 07:00 PM
miley kept thinking.. oh no, how am i going to pull this one off? i need a good grade for this
miley: ummm i am a little nervous.. can i sing without everyone else here?
teacher: we just can't change the conditions just for you!
miley: ok here it goes
sometimes you feel like, your all alone. to feel like nobody's knows. the great that you are, the good thats inside you is trying so hard to break through..
everyone" OMG!
miley(thinking): ok, what can i do
teacher: why did you stop?
*puts on country accent and starts singing again*
everyone: like she is hannah montana!
teacher: okay, thats everyone. miley, could i please see you.
miley: okay
once everyone had left, he started talking to her.
teacher: now, what was up with the bad singing? you are great, exactly like hannah montana
miley: shhhh its a secret!
teacher: okay, but i am giving you a good mark. now you can go.
miley: thanks
miley left and went straight into the cafeteria and sat next to danny and lilly
danny: he was so unfair! you were so lucky miley!
miley: not really....
oliver went and sat down, staring into mileys eyes
danny: so oliver, howz it goin?
oliver: oh im okay
lilly: anyway great news!
miley: what?
lilly:..........
miley rocks
06-02-2007, 07:45 PM
wat
i wanna know
vanessa*anne
06-02-2007, 11:23 PM
lilly: i got a love note!
miley: let me see!
lilly,
you are the light in my life, the flame to my torch and the sky to my world. i love you.
miley: whos it from?
lilly: thats the problem, i don't know!
miley: whoever it is, sounds sweet.
lilly: i know!
danny: we will find out won't we miley?
miley: yeah!
school captain: accountment, anoccment. please listen! the school dance is on soon and the theme is paris
lilly: awsome! better than stupid 70s last year
miley: you got that right. *High 5*
school captain: so all start looking for dates!
miley: omg lilly! your 'secret admierer' might ask you to the dance!
lillly: i hope so
miley: i just hope someone asks me..
lilly(whispering): they will
and looked in dannys direction.
danny: miley, can we talk?
miley: yeah
they walked off and danny took her hand.
danny:.....
i know it is obivous!
miley rocks
06-02-2007, 11:34 PM
yeah but its so good
more plz
Cutiegril123
06-03-2007, 01:43 AM
omg more..this is sooooo good
luv2act
06-03-2007, 02:26 AM
awsome! morez!
vanessa*anne
06-03-2007, 04:53 PM
danny: could you go to the dance with me?
miley: yea!
they hugged for a while.
danny: doing anything tonight?
miley: no..
danny: want to go out somewhere?
miley: ok
she couldn't stop this huge smile spreading across her face. that afternoon she got home and started singing if we were a movie
my life is a movie
danny is the right guy
and i am the girl that he fell in love with in the end
jackson: ohhhh mileys thinking about her boyfriend!
but, jackson speaking was only her imagination. she remembered when he used to say that to her all the time. her eyes got a little teary.
miley got ready, brused her hair and put on her good pair of jeans and a nice top.
danny knocked on the door and miley ran down the stairs to answer it
miley: hey danny
danny: hey miley. wow.. you loook so pretty..
miley turned red
danny: lets go.
they walked along the beach and sat down on the sand, and miley rested her head on his shoulder.
danny: miley.. you know i have never loved anyone us much as i have loved you before
miley: me too.
danny: i love you
miley: i love you
the sun was going down and the sky was pink. miley felt it was so romantic
danny:.......
luv2act
06-04-2007, 03:10 AM
aw, morez!
miley rocks
06-04-2007, 12:40 PM
ah u alway stp wen it gets realy gd
but it makes it more interesting
i luv it
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-04-2007, 09:54 PM
OMG! Please write more??
HideUnderMyPillow1425
06-04-2007, 09:56 PM
Is Danny going to die?? lol
K-star7
06-05-2007, 12:29 AM
please write more!
Cutiegril123
06-05-2007, 05:37 AM
more plz plz plz
ilovedestinyhopecyrus123456789
06-05-2007, 08:44 PM
I Demand More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vanessa*anne
06-08-2007, 06:28 PM
danny leant in and kissed her. miley put her arms around his neck and dannys hands were around her waist
miley felt like fireworks had just gone off inside her. it was the best feeling she had ever had.
danny: miley..
miley: danny...
danny: lets go?
miley: yes!
they walked off with dannys hand around her shoulder.
danny: oh miley?
miley: yeah?
danny: i am going to hannah montanas concert and was wondering if you would go with me.. i don't want to go alone
mileys heart started beating fast.
miley:......
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-08-2007, 07:57 PM
OMG!!!!!
I demand more! lol
Cutiegril123
06-09-2007, 02:29 AM
omg omg omg more more more omg i wonder what she i goin to do...shes gonna have to telll him or say no omg more
K-star7
06-09-2007, 05:00 PM
write more!
miley rocks
06-09-2007, 05:30 PM
more
vanessa*anne
06-09-2007, 05:56 PM
miley: great! cya there! thanks
she faked him a smile and he smiled back making her melt inside
danny: good. now i won't be lonley.
miley: ya...
danny walked away and then miley got out her cell phone and rang lilly
miley: lilly! BIG problem!
lilly: what?
miley: danny asked me to a hannah montana concert
lilly: you sai dno didn't you?
miley: no!
lilly: this is bad. maybe just tell him your secret?
miley: i don't know! see you later lilly.
danny called her up
dany: oh and i forgot to tell you, the concert is tonight. you said you wer free....
miley: ya i am. see you later.
miley got changed into her nicest miley clothes and then stuffed hannahs clothes in a big handbag.
miley waited for danny at the door
the bell went
danny: these are for you
and he handed him a bunch of roses.
miley: thanks.
danny: go in the limo?
miley: okay
danny: wow. sounds like you go in limos all the time
miley: no.... i just don't get what is so great about them anyway
danny wishpered into her ear: don't worry, i don't get it either
she smiled
they talked the whole way and got out into the concert areana
danny: wow. hannahs late.
miley: no she isn't. can you come outside with me for a minute?
danny: yea
miley: i have something to tell you...
danny: what?
miley:..........
K-star7
06-09-2007, 06:07 PM
Write More!
Cutiegril123
06-10-2007, 02:39 AM
more more more more more more more more more more more = ]!
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-10-2007, 03:28 AM
ahh!! more!
Secretpopstar1
06-10-2007, 09:07 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I demand More!
miley rocks
06-10-2007, 06:38 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
PLZ
wow! I love the story.. more more more!!
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-17-2007, 10:56 PM
OMG THIS IS KILLING ME! Does she tell him her secret?
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 12:01 AM
IDK its Killing my too. She NEEDS to write MORE!
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 12:07 AM
danny: yea.
miley was clutching onto her hannah wig in her bag
mileY: promise you won't be angry?
danny: why would i be angry at you?
miley: well.
she grabbed the blonde wig out of her bag and turned away so she wasn't facing him
danny: you wanted to tell me that you were such a big hannah fan that you got a blonde wig? don't be embarrassed.
miley: no thats not it
miley put the wig over her head and turned around
miley: I am hannah montana. me, miley!
danny:/....
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 12:10 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhh omg mores plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz ill love u forever...lol jk but really write more
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-18-2007, 12:47 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to write more!!!!!!!!!
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 12:52 AM
danny: what? why didn't you tell me?
hannah: i am sorry.. i was just scared
danny: scared of what?
hannah: that you wouldn't like me anymore
danny: thats crazy talk
hannah: really?
danny: i still love you, nothing will ever change that.
hannah: oh thank you
hannah hugged him hard
danny: i have a secret to tell you as well...
hannah: what?
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 12:53 AM
o my goodness. Why r u taunting me..lol i probably spelt that wrong. but more more more
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 12:55 AM
I will soon.
New fanfiction.
Could you comemnt that too?
its a it like my version of ackey jakey heart (don't worry.. it is going to be wayy different than it) other things as well.
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=46148
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-18-2007, 12:58 AM
o my goodness. Why r u taunting me..lol i probably spelt that wrong. but more more more
lol you didn't spell it wrong. AND ITS TAUNTING ME TOO! SERIOUSLY!
I will soon.
New fanfiction.
Could you comemnt that too?
its a it like my version of ackey jakey heart (don't worry.. it is going to be wayy different than it) other things as well.
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=46148
I'll definitely do that! I read all ur fanfics.
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 01:01 AM
Lol ok good thing i didn't spell it wrong haha i rock ok lol and i will read it now= ]
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 01:06 AM
Danny: My Mum is in prison and my dad is about to leave to go to war.
Hannahs face suddenly turned into a frown.
Danny: My Mum went to prision because... well before I became famous we didn't have enough money and ropped 1000 dollars worth of groceries and they caught her. Then they found out we had stolen matresses and blankets too and they sent her to jail. they kinda spend what was left on an agent and flying me around for auditions. You have no idea how guilty i feel about it. They just wanted me to be happy. I can't believe this. I feel so selfish! WHen i got the job we had enough money, me and dad but mum is still stuch in prision, she isn't coming out for a while.
hannah: i am so sorry. what about your dad?
danny: ages ago he put his name down to go to war because they promised us some living nessesedies, this was just after mum went to jail. he thought that their would be no war soon and even if there was, they wouldn't choose him. he was wrong and i have to go live with my aunty soon. he couldn't withdraw now.
miley: you are leaving?
danny: no, she lives in malibu. half the reason we moved here now, just so i couild get used to it before dad leaves and not have everything change all at once.
miley didn't know what to say.
miley:.......
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-18-2007, 01:08 AM
OMG!!! This is punishment! lol
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 01:08 AM
Omg more..lol ok bak to ur other fanfic..lol im tring to keep up with them all...its hard
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 01:21 AM
miley quickly ripped off the wig.
mileY: danny... i had no idea. i am so sorry!
danny: its okay.. don't cry.
miley: i have no idea why i am crying.
danny: its okay. come here
ddanny kissed her on her lips and then stopped.
miley: i really should have told you my secret before..
danny: doesn't matter. i still love you, nothing will ever change that.
miley: same. you know, i used to be crying because of jake but you know, if i didn't break up with him, i would have never met you. you are the best.
danny gave a huge grin and his cheeks turned red
danny: duck!
miley: wwhat??!
sorry its short!
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 01:22 AM
Duck? Why does she need to duck? Omg woman!
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 01:31 AM
Duck? Why does she need to duck? Omg woman!
you will see.
1 more comment
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 01:33 AM
ok ugh were is superstarmiley when i need her
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-18-2007, 01:41 AM
ok ugh were is superstarmiley when i need her
ahh! I NEED MORE! And sorry, I was working on my blend requests.
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 01:42 AM
reporter snapped his camerea before miley had the chance to duck.
reporter: yes! second photo. great scoop. i am going to get paid a lot for this. danny dating hannah, hannah really has brown hair
danny: go!
reporter: fine. i already have photos, they are worth a thousand words
miley: no
danny: this is bad
miley: and my dad has to pick me up now! bye danny!
robby ray: come on miles lets go home
miley told robby ray the whole story
robby ray: don't worry bud. everythang will be alright.
miley: i don't think so.
miley woke up in the morning and grabbed the paper and yanked out the entertainment story.
" Danny dating hannah montana"
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 01:44 AM
omg omg omg omg omg omg u have to be kidding me the hopefully the whole world doesn't kno she is hannah ahhh
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 01:49 AM
1 more coment :)
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-18-2007, 02:07 AM
OMG!! Must have MORE! lol
vanessa*anne
06-18-2007, 02:17 AM
Miley: Oh no
Superstar danny is dating teen pop sensation, hannah montana. they were seen together. don't belive us? look at this picture. they seemed to be having a romantic night togther. they sure make a super cute couple. we cannot wait for more dantana, the couple of the moment. it is what everyone in the celeb world is talking about.
another photo was taken, suggesting that hannah had brown hair but we know it was just a photoshop, the reporter just trying to get more money
miley had half of her guilt just go away. the world would not know that she is hannah! but people would still think danny is cheating on her at school.
danny picked up miley and they walked to school together
everyone was looking at them, wonderng if miley knew what had happened with hannah montana
jess: MILEY! don't you know about hannah montana?
tom: yeah. are you still going out with that backstabber?
miley faced danny and saw a worried look on his face
steph: miley! don't worry about him!
miley had to say something
miley:.......
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 02:18 AM
wow interesting but my dad just went to bed and its night time and like im really scared for some reason so i think i will go to bed..btw love it..im adding to my favs
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-18-2007, 02:31 AM
OMG! That's awesome!
Cutiegril123
06-18-2007, 02:32 AM
nvm i have till 11:30 and oomg i just finished reading what? no! U have to write more on that one.
SupaStaRrMiley92
06-19-2007, 08:27 PM
Please post more! [[here's another comment for you hehehe]]
gilmore1
07-29-2007, 12:46 AM
this is sooo good i love it!! pm me if you post more! k?
gilmore1
07-29-2007, 09:00 PM
post, post post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :P :>)
luv2act
07-29-2007, 09:37 PM
please don't bump old threads...:]
smileyface93
07-29-2007, 10:39 PM
omg its good!! =]
LotsaBigHearts
07-30-2007, 09:35 AM
ooh that's really good.
gilmore1
07-30-2007, 01:10 PM
she needs to add some more
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