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sambobuk
04-30-2007, 09:33 PM
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Hey everybody! This is a fanfiction about Hannah's first European tour! Here's chapter one!

Hannah’s European Tour

Chapter 1

Miley, Lily, and Oliver are all sitting in the Stewarts’ living room

Lily: I’m so excited! I can’t believe we’re all going to Europe! This is going to be the best summer vacation ever!

Miley: I know, I can’t wait! We’re going all around Europe and the UK, it’s so awesome! *screams*

Miley and Lily start happy-dancing

Miley: Oliver, why aren’t you happy dancing? *stops dancing* WHY aren’t you happy dancing?

Oliver: Because, I’m a guy, and guys don’t “happy-dance”, I told you before.

Miley and Lily stare at him

Oliver: Okay! *they all start happy-dancing again until the doorbell rings*

Robbie: Hey, I’ll get it.

Robbie walks over to the door. When he is standing behind it, it flies open and hits him in the face. Roxy is in the doorway.

Roxy: Hey, y’all should know by now, no locks can keep me out! So, when are we leaving? I’ve got all my things packed and ready to go!

Miley: Roxy, you’re coming too?!

Roxy: Of course! For two reasons. First off, I’m your bodyguard. Second, I’m fluent in 9 European languages! French, German, Italian, Spanish, Portuguese, Norwegian, Danish, Dutch, and Swedish.

Miley: Seriously? You never told us that!

Roxy: There are some things that nobody knows about…ROXY! HA! *does a karate chop and everyone jumps*

Lily: Awesome! We are gonna have such a rockin’ time! Sleeping in tour buses, staying in luxury hotels, it’s gonna be great!

Miley: And I’ve heard that the boys in France are –

Robbie: That’s enough! *chuckles* Roxy, can you make sure we spend as little time in France as possible?

Roxy: Non, monsieur!

Robbie: Er…what?

Roxy: It means no! Of course we can’t! France is a major stop in our sightseeing tour! No European trip is complete without seeing the Eiffel tower, the French cafés, and Disneyland Paris!

Miley: Eiffel Tower?

Lily: French cafés?

Oliver: Disneyland Paris?

They all start happy-dancing again.

Roxy: Now! It’s almost 10:30, and we have to be at LAX by 11:30. If we’re making good time, we better set off now.

Miley: But Roxy, LAX is less than 20 minutes away.

Roxy: I SAID MOVE! Everybody out!

Everyone runs out of the door as fast as possible. Roxy locks the door.

Miley: Roxy, our luggage is still in there.

Roxy: *sighs* Fine.

She opens the door. We cut to: Miley, Robbie, Lily, Oliver, and Roxy walking outside carrying several suitcases and bags.

Miley: OW! These suitcases are so heavy! And worse, I have two, one for Hannah and one for Miley!

Roxy: Here, maybe I can help?

Roxy picks up both of the suitcases with one hand and carries Miley’s, Hannah’s, and her own luggage into the trunk of the taxi. Everyone stares at her.

Miley: Where would we be without Roxy?!

I'll write more when I get a few comments! Please tell me what you think! :D

cupcake
04-30-2007, 09:38 PM
more! where in the world would they be without Roxy? seriously? tell me?

luv2act
04-30-2007, 10:02 PM
awsome fanfic! can't wait for more!

smileyface93
04-30-2007, 10:57 PM
cool!! more more!!

sambobuk
05-01-2007, 05:36 PM
OK this chapter's kinda long...and the story will get a lot better with the concerts and the tour etc. but just be patient!

Here's chapter two:

Chapter 2

Miley, dressed as Hannah Montana, Lily, Oliver, Robbie, and Roxy are all in LAX, talking to an air hostess.

Hostess: Well, Miss Montana, that all seems to be in order. You can all board your plane from gate 32, just down that direction *gesturing to the left*

Hannah: Thanks for your help! Come on, guys!

They all walk to gate 32. We cut to: All five of them on an airplane in a private first class lounge.

Lily: WOW! I’ve always wanted to go first class! Look at these seats! The leg room! And…they turn into beds?! Oh my gosh, just look at all the stuff you can –

Hannah: Lily?

Lily: Eat as well, I mean there’s steaks, casseroles, and look at the desserts too! Ooh, I gotta try some of that chocolate mud cake, with a side of

Hannah: Lily!

Lily: Huh? Oh, sorry! I’m just a little excited.

Oliver: A little? I haven’t seen you this happy since Jake Ryan’s first day at school!

Lily: *gazes into space and sighs*

Hannah: Back off, he’s mine, remember? *smiling*

Lily: Anyway, you can take your wig off now, you’re not going to be wearing it all the way to Europe, are you?

Hannah: All the way to Europe? I think not! This thing’s more itchy than –

Lily: DON’T tell us anything about Uncle Earl’s farm!

Hannah: *sighs* OK. But anyway, I can’t take the wig off until we’re off the ground. Just to make sure nobody sees me.

Lily: How long does the flight take, anyway? It must be only a few hours…

We cut to: the cabin. Robbie is asleep. Roxy is alert, as ever, and watching the door. Miley, now out of her wig, is reading her concert schedule again. Lily and Oliver, however, are looking wide-eyed and scared.

Lily: We’ve been on this plane for seven hours! I am sooo bored!

Miley: Why don’t you just go order dinner? I mean, you can get food any time you want here.

Lily and Oliver: What?!

Miley: Yeah, didn’t you guys know that?

Lily and Oliver: No!

Miley: Oops, I must have forgotten to tell you…

Lily: Miley, I swear I’m gonna…

We cut to: Lily and Oliver holding plates piled with steaks, spaghetti, and other dishes.

Miley: *looks ill* That looks disgusting! How can you possibly eat that much in one meal?!

Lily: Easy! Ready, Oliver? 3, 2, 1, GO!

Lily and Oliver attempt to start eating, but Roxy stops them.

Roxy: Hold it! You are not eating any of that until I have extensively checked it for poisons.

Oliver: Poisons?

Roxy: You never know what people want to do to stars, these days. Now hand me the plates!

Lily and Oliver don’t move

Roxy: I SAID GIMME THE PLATES! NOW!

They hand them over quickly

Miley: This is why I never order food on planes if I can help it!

We cut to: Lily and Oliver eating ravenously

Miley: You guys are such pigs!

Oliver: Hey, it beats sitting here doing nothing!

Lily: Yeah, and we’ve already seen all the movies on here. You took us to the premiers of most of them!

Miley: You guys just better hope we don’t get into any turbulence after eating all that!

Lily and Oliver stop eating and slowly push their plates away from them.

Miley: Good!

Oliver: Meanie.

Lily: Tyrant.

Overhead voice: Passengers, we will be landing in London in approximately 20 minutes. At this time, the seatbelt light has been switched on. Thank-you, again, for choosing British Airways.

Miley: *screams* I can’t believe it! Tomorrow night, I’m going to be performing my first London concert! Yeah!

Miley, Lily, and Oliver: We’re going to London! We’re going to London!

We cut to: The five of them in Heathrow airport

Lily: Wow, this airport’s BIG! It took FOREVER to get through customs. Who would have thought that security dog didn’t like the smell of your wig, Hannah! He almost pulled it off!

Hannah: Can we change the subject please? We have to get out of this airport before anyone sees Hannah! They’ll be autographs and photos and –

Voice behind them: HANNAH MONTANA!

Everyone turns around to look at them

Hannah: Sweet Nibblets! RUN!

PursePrincess4eva
05-01-2007, 08:14 PM
Awesomeness

luv2act
05-01-2007, 10:13 PM
so awsome!! more!

flower1
05-01-2007, 10:26 PM
omg!!!! more, b4 i become a raging "tyrant"!!!!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 04:09 PM
Here's chapter 3 ;)

Chapter 3

Miley is in her hotel room with Lily

Lily: I think it’s so cool that we get to share a room!

Miley: Me too! Gosh, that breakfast was great, wasn’t it? I could get used to staying in this hotel!

Lily: Well don’t, because we are going…

Miley and Lily: SHOPPING in London!

We cut to: Miley, Lily, and Oliver running into Harrods
We cut to: Miley and Lily walking out of Harrods. Oliver comes out several seconds later carrying 4 bags in each hand stuffed with clothes.

Back in the hotel room

Miley: Talk about shop til’ ya drop!

Oliver: Tell me about it! My hands are still aching from carrying all those bags!

Lily: Stop complaining, we do it all the time! Anyway, shouldn’t you be getting ready now…Miss Montana? Your concert’s in just a few hours!

Miley: I know, I can’t wait! It’s going to be the best one yet! And you guys get front row seats, too!

Oliver: I’ll go find your dad and Roxy

Oliver takes a step toward the door, but then it flies open. Roxy is on the other side.

Roxy: Alright, everybody OUT! It’s time to get going to that concert, and it’s my job to make sure everything goes smoothly. So WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? INTO THE LIMO, NOW!

Everyone runs out as fast as possible.

We cut to: Hannah, Lily, Oliver, Robbie (dressed as “The Manager”) and Roxy in a limousine.

Roxy: I didn’t like the look of the driver. If he tries to pull anything, he’s gonna get it from…ROXY! HA! *does karate chop and everyone jumps*

Miley: Roxy, the limo driver isn’t going to “pull anything”, and we need to get to the concert without any delays!

Roxy: Hmph!

We cut to: Hannah in her dressing room. Lola walks into the room.

Lola: Disaster!

Hannah: What? What happened?

Lola: You’ll never guess who I just saw…Amber and Ashley!

Hannah: In London? Why?!

Lola: I talked to them, and they said that they’re following Hannah all over Europe! It’s awful! They’ll be at EVERY concert, AND they’ll desperately be trying to meet you! And if they do, they might just recognize Miley!

Hannah: Oh, don’t worry. I’ve got a way of making sure that doesn’t happen! ROXY!

Roxy comes charging in

Roxy: What? Who’s trying to hurt ya?

Hannah: Can you make sure that Amber and Ashley don’t come anywhere near this dressing room? I’ll explain why later!

Roxy leaves and stands at her post outside the door

Lola: So, what’s the song line-up for tonight?

Hannah: I thought I could do some things from my new CD. So I think first…Nobody’s Perfect.

Stage Crew member: Miss Montana, you’re on in one minute! And a woman outside karate chopped me for trying to get in here!

Hannah: Oops, sorry!

Lola: Better get going! Good luck!

Hannah: You better go get your seat! If my hunch is right, Amber and Ashley will have front-row seats too, so try and stall them as much as possible until we leave.

Lola: Got it!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 05:37 PM
anyone?

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 06:00 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:14 PM
OK I've already written chapters 4-8, but I'm going to draw them out a bit because this is where the story gets good! And juicy too! Expect Jake Ryan!

Chapter 4


Hannah is on stage singing “Life’s what you make it” in a huge concert hall. At least 35,000 people are there

Hannah: Life is hard or it’s a party, the choice is up to you!

Lola (to Oliver): This concert is awesome! Just look at all these people!

Oliver: Yeah, and look at those two people over there! Amber and Ashley!

Lola *looking and gasping*: Miley was right! They are in the front row! We have to make sure they don’t find out who Hannah really is!

Hannah: You decide, ‘cause life’s, what you make it. Life is what you make it!

*crowd cheers*

Hannah: Thankyou London! I hope y’all enjoyed tonight’s concert! Give it up for the band too!

*crowd screams*

Hannah: Now, tomorrow I’ll be in Paris, for my second stop on my European tour, or my Euro Touro as I like to call it! Wish me good luck!

*crowd screams*

Hannah: Bye, everybody, you’ve been such a great audience! I wish all my concerts were this much fun!

Hannah goes backstage to find Lola and Oliver in her dressing room

Hannah: We have to leave as fast as possible! Before –

Roxy (from outside): And just WHO do you think YOU are, trying to sneak into Hannah Montana’s dressin’ room?

Amber: But we really need to see her! We came all this way, can’t we just say hi?

Roxy: I SAID MOVE! Out of this concert hall NOW!

Amber and Ashley scream and run down the hall

Hannah: See, told ya not to worry!

Lola: Right on, my sister!

Hannah: Don’t do that again!

That was the whole chapter actually :D but I posted the whole thing because it's quite short...:57: I'll give you the next part after I get a few more comments!

PursePrincess4eva
05-02-2007, 07:16 PM
Pretty

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:18 PM
pretty what? Lol I'm kinda slow sometimes :D

PursePrincess4eva
05-02-2007, 07:19 PM
As in pretty as in great job

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:21 PM
:D Yay! If anyone wants more, I can post it soon! Just as soon as I decide how much to put on, because the Paris concert is the coolest part!

flower1
05-02-2007, 07:23 PM
cool!!! in my story, Jake comes back too.

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:31 PM
here's some of chapter 5, see what you think!

Chapter 5

Miley, Lily, Oliver, Robbie, and Roxy are all on a plane. Their first class lounge looks exactly the same.

Robbie: You did great last night, bud!

Miley: Thanks, dad! I just can’t wait to get to Paris!

Roxy: Me neither! Ah, Ville de Paris! It’s been years! You know, I took my bodyguard training course in Paris. That’s how I became fluent in French!

Lily: What? You never –

Miley: There’s just some things no-one knows about…Roxy! HA! *Miley does a karate chop but no-one jumps*

Robbie: Looks like we’re about ready to land. The flight doesn’t take long from London…

We cut to: Everyone at the Eiffel Tower
We cut to: Everyone at a French café
We cut to: Oliver and Roxy on a whirling ride at Disneyland Paris. Miley, Lily, and Robbie are watching

Miley (to Lily): Can you believe those two?

Lily: No! How immature is that…I mean, come on, we’re like, almost grown up now, I mean, gosh, that’s just -

Miley: Oh, just go!

Lily: Thank you!!! *runs away*

Miley (to Robbie): Dad, can you believe those three? Dad?

She turns around to see Robbie running with Lily to the ride

Miley: Great!

Please give feedback!

PursePrincess4eva
05-02-2007, 07:33 PM
awesomeness

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 07:34 PM
awsome! more plz

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:35 PM
YAY! The story gets way better than this, you just have to wait!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:36 PM
OK here's the rest of chapter 5

Chapter 5 continued

We cut to: Miley and Lily in another hotel room.

Lily: This has been such an awesome day! I love Paris!

Miley: I know, and it’s almost concert time!

Lily: And the only thing we have to worry about there is…

Miley and Lily: Amber and Ashley!

PursePrincess4eva
05-02-2007, 07:38 PM
awesomeness again

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:40 PM
I'll post chapter 6 after a few more comments! :D, Well, some of chapter 6, it's quite long :lol:

PursePrincess4eva
05-02-2007, 07:44 PM
Im your favorite reador/commenter!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 07:45 PM
You are, aren't you! LOL :lol:

flower1
05-02-2007, 08:04 PM
meeooorreee!!!!!

OFFTOPIC: one of my story chapters is reeeeaalllyy long nd it gets better

miji.hannahmontana
05-02-2007, 08:10 PM
ooosm

luv2act
05-02-2007, 08:12 PM
totally fab! more!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 08:12 PM
hey can you give me the link to your fanfic flower1? And here's some of chapter 6!

Chapter 6

Hannah is in her dressing room in Paris with Lola and Oliver.

Oliver: Second concert, how awesome is that? There’s even more people here than last night!

Lola: We’ll go take our seats, see ya later!

Hannah: I’m going to get my make-up finished off, they forgot to put eye shadow on!

All three of them leave the dressing room
We cut to: Hannah coming back into the dressing room

Voice: Hello, Hannah

Hannah looks up to see…Jake Ryan!

Hannah: Jake Ryan! What are you doing here!

Jake: Relax, you sound like you don’t want to see me!

Hannah: I thought you were in Romania shooting that movie!

Jake: We just finished, I’m stopping in Paris for your concert before I go back to the States.

Hannah: Well that’s…great! So, how’s life?

Jake: Pretty good! Hey, you remember that girl I told you about before?

Hannah: Yeah, what’s her name? Moosey? Minnie? Something I’ve never heard before!

Jake: It’s Miley! I finally asked her out! Then I had to go do this movie, so I haven’t seen her for 4 months!

Hannah: So, do you still like her?

Jake: Yeah, of course!

Hannah: Jake, there’s something I need to tell you. *takes a deep breath* I’m –

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 08:36 PM
omgg plzz u gottaaa post the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 08:40 PM
OK then ;) Here's the rest of chapter 6 and some of chapter 7

Chapter 6 continued

Hannah: Jake, there’s something I need to tell you. *takes a deep breath* I’m –

Stage Crew Member: Miss Montana, you’re on in one minute!

Hannah: Sorry! Come back here after the show! Please!

Jake: Sure thing! I’ll go take my seat in the audience. Good Luck!

Chapter 7

Hannah is on stage singing True Friend. There are 40,000 people in the audience here.

Hannah: You pull me aside when somethin’ aint right! Talking to me now and into the night! Till it’s alright again. You’re a true friend! You’re a true friend!

*crowd cheers*

Hannah: Merci, Paris! And for all you people who speak English out there, my next stop on the Euro Touro is Madrid! So I hope I’ll see you all there! Wish me luck!

*crowd cheers*

We cut to: Hannah in her dressing room with Jake

Hannah: Jake, this may come as a shock to you, and you’re one of the only people I’ve told, so this is a little difficult. *breathes*

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 08:41 PM
more plz!! hehe,.

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 08:43 PM
OK promise I will after 2 more comments!

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 08:48 PM
K!! lol uhh.. *coughs coughs* MORE PLZZ... hehe lol let me stop..

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 08:55 PM
lol you're funny! I might as well...seeing as there doesn't seem to be many people on at the moment...OK

Chapter 7 continued

Hannah: Jake, this may come as a shock to you, and you’re one of the only people I’ve told, so this is a little difficult. *breathes* I’m Hannah Montana.

Miley takes off her wig

Jake: Miley?! But, I don’t understand!

Miley: When I got my record deal, I realised that life was never going to be the same. I wanted to keep it the way it was, just being a normal girl living a normal life. So I became Hannah Montana. I put the wig on and the make-up, and go out on stage. That way, I get the best of both worlds.

Jake: But, how come you didn’t tell me before? When I asked you out or when we were filming Zombie High? You knew I’d understand! I’m a movie star too!

Miley: I just didn’t know! I’m so afraid that people will find out, and I won’t get to be Hannah anymore. The only other people that know are my dad, my brother, Lily, and Oliver. And Roxy.

Lola and Oliver walk into the dressing room and gasp when they see Miley and Jake

Lola: Miley! What are you –

Miley: It’s okay guys, Jake knows now.

Jake: And I’m totally ok with it! I promise I won’t tell anyone!

Oliver: This is turning out to be some tour! But quick, put your wig back on! Amber and Ashley are heading this way, and Roxy is making sure that the audience get out safely!

Hannah puts her wig back on

Hannah: Oliver, you’d better hide, too! Lily’s the only one with a disguise!

Oliver runs into Hannah’s bathroom, and Amber and Ashley walk into the dressing room

Amber and Ashley: Oh my gosh! Hannah Montana! And Jake Ryan! Ooh! SSS!

Jake: Amber and Ashley?

Hannah: You know these two? And how did you get past security?

Amber: You mean that mean woman who was here yesterday?

Ashley: We tricked her into thinking that there was a problem in the audience.

Hannah: Well you’d better leave before I call her back!

Amber: But can’t we just get autographs?

Ashley: We came all this way; we’re going to all of your “Euro Touro” concerts!

Hannah: Fine, but then you have to go!

Hannah signs two photographs.

Hannah: OK, see you guys later!

Ashley: You know, you remind me of someone I –

Lola: BYE!

Lola pushes them out of the door and locks it.

OK that's the end of chapter 7 and I'm half-way through chapter 8 now, so I won't post again probably until tomorrow :D

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 09:04 PM
awwwwwwwwww mannnn!! alrightttt ill waiitt 2mroooww:(

flower1
05-02-2007, 09:11 PM
hey can you give me the link to your fanfic flower1? And here's some of chapter 6!

Chapter 6

Hannah is in her dressing room in Paris with Lola and Oliver.

Oliver: Second concert, how awesome is that? There’s even more people here than last night!

Lola: We’ll go take our seats, see ya later!

Hannah: I’m going to get my make-up finished off, they forgot to put eye shadow on!

All three of them leave the dressing room
We cut to: Hannah coming back into the dressing room

Voice: Hello, Hannah

Hannah looks up to see…Jake Ryan!

Hannah: Jake Ryan! What are you doing here!

Jake: Relax, you sound like you don’t want to see me!

Hannah: I thought you were in Romania shooting that movie!

Jake: We just finished, I’m stopping in Paris for your concert before I go back to the States.

Hannah: Well that’s…great! So, how’s life?

Jake: Pretty good! Hey, you remember that girl I told you about before?

Hannah: Yeah, what’s her name? Moosey? Minnie? Something I’ve never heard before!

Jake: It’s Miley! I finally asked her out! Then I had to go do this movie, so I haven’t seen her for 4 months!

Hannah: So, do you still like her?

Jake: Yeah, of course!

Hannah: Jake, there’s something I need to tell you. *takes a deep breath* I’m –
Okay! i'll add it in a sec..http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=41511&page=2 there!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 09:11 PM
YAY! SOmeone likes it enough to say awww man! Well, I might just be able to speed up a bit! ;) Just wait for about 10 more minutes I'm almost finished now.

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 09:21 PM
Here's Chapter 8 ;)

Chapter 8

Jake: Whew, that was a close one!

Hannah: Oliver, you can come out now!

Oliver comes out smiling

Oliver: You have such a cool bathroom! I should become a singer someday!

Jake: Miley, I’m gonna have to leave! My plane’s leaving soon, and I have to get to the airport! But here’s my cellphone number, you can text me when you wanna talk! And I’d like to hear how the concerts are going!

Miley: OK, I promise I will! Bye Jake!

They hug and Jake kisses Miley. Then he leaves.

Lola: Wow! I can’t believe you finally told him!

Miley: I thought it was about time. He can really understand why I did it, he gets the pressures of being a movie star all the time, he knows what it’s like! And plus, he’s my boyfriend!

Oliver: So, how are we getting to Madrid?

Miley: Oh, you’ll see! (Lola and Miley exchange mischievous grins)

We cut to: Miley, Oliver, Lily, and Robbie in Hannah’s tour bus. Roxy is driving. She wouldn’t let them hire a driver because she “don’t trust ‘em”

Oliver: Hannah Montana’s tour bus! Complete with everything!

Robbie: This is how we’ll be getting to all the concerts across the European mainland. It’s easier to drive to Span than to fly there, and plus, it’s much more fun!

Lily: You’re totally right, this is the best bus I’ve ever been on! It even has…a massage chair!

Miley: So how long does it take to get to Madrid?

Robbie: Not as long as it usually does, with Roxy driving! She’s just anxious to get to places as fast as possible. We’ll be going sightseeing for a day in the city centre, and then…it’s concert time!

Oliver: So what is there to see in Madrid?

Roxy: Oh, there’s plenty! You know, I took my second bodyguard course there, that’s how I became fluent in Spanish. And no trip is complete without seeing Parque del Buen Retiro, Faro de Moncloa, and a real Spanish bullfighting match!

Miley: Oh my….

We cut to: Everyone at Parque del Buen Retiro
We cut to: Everyone at the top of Faro de Moncloa
We cut to: Roxy fighting a bull. Everyone else is watching

Lily: Do you think she’ll be alright?

Miley: Of course! This is Roxy we’re talking about. HA! *Miley does another karate chop, but no-one jumps*

Roxy emerges victorious and with a new trophy. Later…

Miley: Roxy, you did so well out there! How did you learn to do all that?

Roxy: It was easy! Just like stopping a riot, just without the riot gear! No big deal!

Lily: Of course…

flower1
05-02-2007, 09:33 PM
whoa!!! Bull fighting!!! :lol: and i added the link!

sambobuk
05-02-2007, 09:51 PM
cool, i love your story! And also, here's chapter 9 ;)

Chapter 9

Hannah is in her dressing room in Madrid with Oliver

Hannah: So Oliver, how do you like Europe?

Oliver: It’s pretty cool! And Disneyland Paris was just…awesome!

Hannah: Disneyland? Not the amazing beauty of the places we’ve visited?

Oliver: The what?

Hannah: Never mind, stupid question

Lola walks in

Hannah: So, are they here?

Lola: I looked everywhere, I can’t find them!

Hannah: Good, maybe Roxy scared them away!

*BEEP*

Hannah: Oh, I got a text from Jake!

Text: Hey Hannah, good luck out there tonight! Xox! Jake

Lily: Aw, that’s so sweet!

Oliver: Why?

Lily: Oh Oliver, you foolish boy!

Stage Crew Member: Miss Montana, you’re on in two minutes!

Hannah: I’d better get going

Miley just couldn’t stop thinking about that text…

On stage: Hola Madrid! Bueno?! Let’s get rockin’ tonight!

Hannah starts to sing Nobody’s Perfect

Hannah:
Nobody’s Perfect
I gotta work it
Again and again till I get it right
Nobody’s Perfect
Good Luck out there to-night
Xox Ja-a-a-a-ake
Nobody’s Perfect

Oh my gosh!

After the song, backstage

Hannah: Lily, I can’t believe I messed that up! I messed up a song about not being perfect, how lame is that?!

Lily: Just clear your head, besides, no-one out there can understand you anyway, they’re all Spanish!

Hannah: You’re right, just clear my head! I better get back out there.

Back on stage, all the rest of the songs went smoothly.

Hannah:
Thought the chances to meet
Somebody like you
Were a million to one
Can’t believe it
Whoa-whoa
You’re one in a million

You’re one in a million

Gracias! Everybody out there! Thanks for being such a great audience, and so sorry about before! Just to let you know, the next stop on my Euro Touro is Lisbon! Thanks, and goodnight!

HM ROCKS
05-02-2007, 10:58 PM
More more more more i Love it more!!

sambobuk
05-03-2007, 05:42 PM
Here's a snippet of Chapter 10! :D And thanks for all your comments everyone!

Chapter 10

The next day, in the tour bus

Miley: I can’t believe we’re going to Portugal! This is going to be cool!

Lily: And don’t worry about that mess-up last night! I’m sure no-one will make anything of it!

Oliver: OH MY GOSH! You guys have satellite TV on this bus and you didn’t tell me?

Miley: Dad, we have satellite TV on this bus and you didn’t tell me?

Robbie: Sorry darlin’, must have…slipped my mind!

Miley: Turn it on, Turn it on!

Oliver: Ooh, it picks up some US channels! Let’s see what’s on…oh I love CelebLife!

Presenter: And finally, Hannah Montana’s slight slip of the tongue in her Madrid concert last night has led many to believe that she’s has a secret heartthrob! She mis-sang the lyrics of Nobody’s Perfect, *they play a clip of Hannah singing* and the words she sang mentioned a “Jake”. Could this possibly be teen actor Jake Ryan, who, according to a reliable source, was in Hannah’s dressing room in Paris only the previous night? We’ll let you know as soon as –

Miley: Turn it off! Turn it off!

Lily: I bet you anything that Amber and Ashley tipped them off about Jake! That’s probably why they weren’t at your concert last night, it takes forever to be able to get through to CelebLife, everyone knows that!

Miley: *fumes*

Robbie: Let’s change the subject, shall we? Just think of all the things can do in Lisbon!

Roxy: Aah, Lisbon! You know, I took my very first extreme mountain rescue course there? That’s how I became fluent in Portuguese! And you can’t go to Lisbon without seeing the Vasco da Gama Tower, Benfica’s Stadium, and Colombo shopping mall, which is the largest shopping mall in the Iberian Peninsula

We cut to: Everybody at Colombo Shopping Mall

Robbie: Miley, Lily, we’ve been here all day! We haven’t even been to see the Vascu de Gemo Tower!

Roxy: That’s Vasca de Gama! HA! *Roxy does a karate chop and everyone jumps*

Miley: But…this is a mall! It’s totally more fun!

Robbie: Roxy, will you do the honours?

Roxy: I’d be glad to! ALRIGHT! EVERYBODY OUT! Tauro! Tauro!

HM ROCKS
05-03-2007, 06:11 PM
More more more more more!!!!

sambobuk
05-03-2007, 08:49 PM
Rest of chapter 10 :P

Roxy: I’d be glad to! ALRIGHT! EVERYBODY OUT! Tauro! Tauro!

Everyone runs out of the mall

Roxy (to Robbie): See, I told you bull fighting was easy!

We cut to: Everyone at the Vasca de Gama tower

Miley: Wow, the view sure is beautiful from up here! You can see the whole city!

Lily: Look Miley, there’s the Colombo mall!

Miley: *sighs*

Oliver: Now let’s go to…

We cut to: Robbie and Oliver at Benfica’s stadium. Miley and Lily wait outside, while Roxy guards the car in the parking lot

We cut to: Miley and Lily in their hotel room

*Beep*

Miley: Oh, I got a text from Jake again!

Text: Miley, I’m so sorry! I got back to the States this morning and I heard the whole story! I’m so sorry I got you into this mess! We’re now on the cover of CelebLife magazine, GossipGal, and the front page of the new “Jannah supporters” website!

Miley: This is much worse than I thought! I’ve got to make this right at the concert tonight. I’ll tell him what I’m gonna do…

At the concert!

Hannah: Hola Lisbon! And Hey everyone back in the States! Before I start, I’d just like to make one thing clear, as some rumours have been going round, and I am NOT going out with Jake Ryan. We aren’t a couple, and I’m really sorry for messing up in Spain! It was a total accident! And now, on with the concert!

PursePrincess4eva
05-04-2007, 03:00 PM
like mcdonalds...

Im loving it!

sambobuk
05-04-2007, 07:54 PM
Here's some of Chapter 11

Chapter 11

“I just can’t wait to see you again. I just can’t wait to see you again!”

Hannah: Thankyou Lisbon! And just to let y’all know, next stop is Rome, but the concert’s not for another 3 days, just to let me have a rest! But I hope to see some of you there! Bye!

Back in the dressing room

Lola: Wow, this one’s even cooler than the Spanish one! Why is it that all your dressing rooms are better than the last one?!

Hannah: Dunno, but I’d love to see what CelebLife make of this now! I’ve cleared it all up! Hannah isn’t going out with Jake, and it’s true!

Robbie walks into the room

Robbie: Hey Mile, just got a call from the Colombo Shopping Mall, they say they’d like you to make an appearance there tomorrow afternoon to open their new “Sounds” store.

Hannah (to Lily): Awesome! And now we can look around the mall! We are doin’ some serious shopping, girl!

Robbie: Anyway, we’re all sleeping in the tour bus tonight, because Roxy “think’s it’s safest”, so we better be heading back!

Oliver: And I’m glad to see that Amber and Ashley have stopped following you!

Hannah: I gave ‘em what they wanted, they met me, and now they have nothing left to do! And besides, they’re still terrified of Roxy! I bet they’ll be back in Malibu now, as far away from us as possible…

Back in the parking lot… Miley is Miley again, and Lily is Lily. They all managed to sneak out of the hall before all the fans were allowed out of the building

Miley: Who are those two people standing by the limo?

Lily: It’s Amber and Ashley! What are they doing here?!

Oliver: And where’s Roxy?!

Roxy: Tauro! Tauro!

Roxy went charging for the two, they ran away screaming.

Miley: Well, that answers that question! Where would we be without Roxy?

Robbie: Probably the top story on CelebLife news! The further away we are from those two Gossip Gals, the better!

Later, in the tour bus…

Miley: Now, let’s see what CelebLife has to say about me now. The news is just starting everyone!

Presenter: Good evening. Tonight’s top story, Hannah Montana and Jake Ryan…confirmed as untrue in her Lisbon concert last night *clip is played of Hannah*, but we are starting to believe that we misheard! We thought Miley mentioned a “Jake”, but could she have mentioned a “Drake”, as in, Drake Bell, teen actor and singer? Who, according to a reliable witness, was in Hannah’s dressing room in Spain only the previous night?

Miley: Oh, now that’s going WAY too far! They can’t make stuff up about me like that! I’ve never even MET Drake Bell!

PursePrincess4eva
05-04-2007, 08:00 PM
awesome ness again!

-your number one fan,maria-

luv2act
05-04-2007, 08:56 PM
its awsometastical again! more!

sambobuk
05-05-2007, 08:10 PM
Thanks...and I need 3 more comments before I continue!

PursePrincess4eva
05-05-2007, 08:22 PM
Mine Counts As 15!

sambobuk
05-05-2007, 09:49 PM
lol! But seriously, I need more interest...anyone :D *hopeful*

:( *not hopeful*

luv2act
05-05-2007, 10:36 PM
mine counts as a billion!

thobi123
05-05-2007, 11:09 PM
more this is the best

Secretpopstar1
05-06-2007, 07:56 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!

*Miley_Rox*
05-19-2007, 05:59 PM
this rox so much plz keep goin!!!!!

kj0600
06-16-2007, 11:02 PM
:) Love The Story Can't Wait Till Next Chapter!

Milez
06-17-2007, 08:13 AM
I just love this fanfic,it seems so real. You're very good at this so please : MORE!