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MileyRox1174
04-28-2007, 09:32 PM
Hi everyone! This is my newest FanFiction, titled "True Friends. Well, maybe." I can't tell you much else, so just enjoy my FanFiction! Please comment too.

Chapter 1: Introduction

The amber blue waves slowly rolled onto shore, tickling the toes of a beachgoer; Miley Stewart.

Lilly was lying on her beach towel, trying to relax, but she had other things on her mind. Other things that…let’s just say, Miley didn’t know about.

Miley: Hey, Lil, why is this day so perfect?

Lilly: Huh? Oh…um…I don’t know.

Miley: [doesn’t notice Lilly’s behavior] I mean, it’s the complete opposite of Hannah’s song. I don’t get it. [Looks at Lilly strangely] Um…are you okay, Lilly?

Lilly: [nervous] Uh…yeah. I’m…perfectly fine. Why do you ask such an odd question?

Miley: Oh…I don’t know. I’m just wondering, I mean, you’re expression…it’s-

Lilly: [nervous, talking fast] What’s wrong with my expression? There’s nothing wrong with my expression! Why would you think such a thing?

Miley: *deep sigh* You know, I really don’t have a clue.

Miley lies down on the warm sand, and closes her eyes.

Lilly, on the other hand, doesn’t. She just smiles.

Hope you likee! Please comment to get the next chappie [5 comments]!

cutie_girl
04-28-2007, 09:34 PM
nice! just its a little like a script. try putting quotation marks! and make the print bitter. its hard to read...

MileyRox1174
04-28-2007, 09:36 PM
Thanks. But the reason I don't put quotation marks is because it is just the way I do it. Remember all my old FanFics? And that was just the intro, so it's supposed to be like that. It'll get more like a FanFic soon.

Thanks though!

4 more comments please!

cutie_girl
04-28-2007, 09:37 PM
welcome! i m so excited to read more. this is the first fan fic ive read by u. read mine plz! i need constructive critisizm too! its called legend of the fame

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-28-2007, 09:39 PM
more

MileyRox1174
04-28-2007, 09:40 PM
Okay, three more comments [from different people, I forgot to mention that].

cutie_girl
04-28-2007, 09:43 PM
yea. other wise itll go crazy

Miley98
04-28-2007, 09:50 PM
Plz write more!

lucyinthesky
04-28-2007, 09:52 PM
finish it! it's great!

miji.hannahmontana
04-29-2007, 12:28 AM
coontinueee

saha-agent-002
04-29-2007, 06:33 AM
yeah keep going

MileyRox1174
04-29-2007, 09:52 AM
Okay, sorry for the delay. Second chappie coming up in a few minutes!

MileyRox1174
04-29-2007, 10:03 AM
Chapter 2: Miss Sleepy Little Popstar

Setting: Miley is still lying on the sand and Lilly…well…

Miley falls asleep, and Lilly is left in silence.

Lilly: [thinking] So, the plan has to take place today. I will have no exceptions; well, I might. If someone else gets to it first, I’m hopeless!

Miley turns in her sleep, and starts mumbling things.

Lilly: That’s right, Miss Sleepy Little Popstar. Sleep, and don’t wake up….or else…

Voice: Or else what?

Lilly: ------------!

Miley mumbles louder. The mystery person turns to look her way.

Voice: So... What did you do to her?!

Lilly: I-I-I-I can explain!

Voice: See, I could let you, but…That would be too nice of me. Allow me to introduce you to my, “assistant”.

Assistant: Hello there. What have we here?

Lilly: Uh…nothing, I was just-

Voice: Going to --------!

Lilly: Alright, you caught me. But you still don’t know the rest!

Voice: There’s more…oh great. “Assistant”, get me [whispers in assistants ear] pronto!

Assistant: As you wish.

Lilly: And so the fun begins…

Hope you likee! Please comment, I need 5 once again for the next chappie.

whitesoxfan
04-29-2007, 10:05 AM
More Know I Demand You By The Gods Will Please

PursePrincess4eva
04-29-2007, 10:26 AM
Omg I love it!

luv2act
04-29-2007, 10:33 AM
mysterious! I demand more! I'm not asking! jk=)!

MileyRox1174
04-29-2007, 10:34 AM
Thanks, two more comments!

luv2act
04-29-2007, 10:35 AM
come on, people! comment! we need more!

MileyRox1174
04-30-2007, 04:46 PM
Oh whatever. I'll post it soon.

cutie_girl
04-30-2007, 05:28 PM
continue!

luv2act
04-30-2007, 05:39 PM
more!

MileyRox1174
04-30-2007, 07:13 PM
I have to write it, so in a little bit.

MileyRox1174
04-30-2007, 07:25 PM
Chapter 3: Don’t You See?

Voice: Oh yes, it does…

Lilly: What are you being all “evil” for anyways?

Voice: Oh, no reason…

Lilly: Yeah, right. Take off that hat and those sunglasses, I know you’re-

Lilly’s mouth is gaping.

Lilly: RACHEL?!

Rachel: Yes, it is I, Rachel, the great! *evil laugh*

Lilly: But…why?

Rachel: Don’t you see, Lilly? I am Miley’s mortal enemy, and well, a competitor for Jake. So, that explains why I said that you were “Going to do something to Miley before me!”

Lilly: But…no…it…can’t be true…

Rachel: But it is.

Lilly: So…who’s your assistant?!

Rachel: Oh don’t worry; he won’t do anything to you. Just…relax, and he won’t hurt you or Miley.

Lilly: Uh…but…buh…I…and you…and uh…*faints*

Rachel: PERFECT. Now I have both of them out-almost-cold. Just have to do one final tweak, and bravo!

Rachel -------- Miley and Lilly.

Assistant: I’m back, Rachel. What else do you-HUH? Wha-wha-what did you do to them?!

Rachel: Oh nothing. Just a little something I like to call --------.

Assistant: [mumbling] Uh-oh.


Hope you likee! Please comment!

luv2act
04-30-2007, 07:44 PM
luv it! so mysterious!

m&jrule
04-30-2007, 07:50 PM
omg more!

Miley98
05-02-2007, 05:31 PM
M-MORE! now!

flower1
05-02-2007, 05:39 PM
its confusing!


MORE! THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELS YOU TO WRITE MORE!

MileyRox1174
05-03-2007, 06:48 AM
Thanks, more later!

Miley98
05-03-2007, 06:05 PM
(tick, tick tick) Okay, now is later! (Ha that didn't make so much sense!)

MileyRox1174
05-06-2007, 06:09 PM
OMG I totally forgot about this FanFic...sorry....I might end it soon, it's not one of my best and no one really comments [don't get defensive please].

But I'll try to write the next chappie soon!

luv2act
05-06-2007, 06:11 PM
more! it is too awsome!