View Full Version : True Friends. Well, Maybe. ~ HM FanFic
MileyRox1174
04-28-2007, 09:32 PM
Hi everyone! This is my newest FanFiction, titled "True Friends. Well, maybe." I can't tell you much else, so just enjoy my FanFiction! Please comment too.
Chapter 1: Introduction
The amber blue waves slowly rolled onto shore, tickling the toes of a beachgoer; Miley Stewart.
Lilly was lying on her beach towel, trying to relax, but she had other things on her mind. Other things that…let’s just say, Miley didn’t know about.
Miley: Hey, Lil, why is this day so perfect?
Lilly: Huh? Oh…um…I don’t know.
Miley: [doesn’t notice Lilly’s behavior] I mean, it’s the complete opposite of Hannah’s song. I don’t get it. [Looks at Lilly strangely] Um…are you okay, Lilly?
Lilly: [nervous] Uh…yeah. I’m…perfectly fine. Why do you ask such an odd question?
Miley: Oh…I don’t know. I’m just wondering, I mean, you’re expression…it’s-
Lilly: [nervous, talking fast] What’s wrong with my expression? There’s nothing wrong with my expression! Why would you think such a thing?
Miley: *deep sigh* You know, I really don’t have a clue.
Miley lies down on the warm sand, and closes her eyes.
Lilly, on the other hand, doesn’t. She just smiles.
Hope you likee! Please comment to get the next chappie [5 comments]!
cutie_girl
04-28-2007, 09:34 PM
nice! just its a little like a script. try putting quotation marks! and make the print bitter. its hard to read...
MileyRox1174
04-28-2007, 09:36 PM
Thanks. But the reason I don't put quotation marks is because it is just the way I do it. Remember all my old FanFics? And that was just the intro, so it's supposed to be like that. It'll get more like a FanFic soon.
Thanks though!
4 more comments please!
cutie_girl
04-28-2007, 09:37 PM
welcome! i m so excited to read more. this is the first fan fic ive read by u. read mine plz! i need constructive critisizm too! its called legend of the fame
xoxo Babii xoxo
04-28-2007, 09:39 PM
more
MileyRox1174
04-28-2007, 09:40 PM
Okay, three more comments [from different people, I forgot to mention that].
cutie_girl
04-28-2007, 09:43 PM
yea. other wise itll go crazy
Miley98
04-28-2007, 09:50 PM
Plz write more!
lucyinthesky
04-28-2007, 09:52 PM
finish it! it's great!
miji.hannahmontana
04-29-2007, 12:28 AM
coontinueee
saha-agent-002
04-29-2007, 06:33 AM
yeah keep going
MileyRox1174
04-29-2007, 09:52 AM
Okay, sorry for the delay. Second chappie coming up in a few minutes!
MileyRox1174
04-29-2007, 10:03 AM
Chapter 2: Miss Sleepy Little Popstar
Setting: Miley is still lying on the sand and Lilly…well…
Miley falls asleep, and Lilly is left in silence.
Lilly: [thinking] So, the plan has to take place today. I will have no exceptions; well, I might. If someone else gets to it first, I’m hopeless!
Miley turns in her sleep, and starts mumbling things.
Lilly: That’s right, Miss Sleepy Little Popstar. Sleep, and don’t wake up….or else…
Voice: Or else what?
Lilly: ------------!
Miley mumbles louder. The mystery person turns to look her way.
Voice: So... What did you do to her?!
Lilly: I-I-I-I can explain!
Voice: See, I could let you, but…That would be too nice of me. Allow me to introduce you to my, “assistant”.
Assistant: Hello there. What have we here?
Lilly: Uh…nothing, I was just-
Voice: Going to --------!
Lilly: Alright, you caught me. But you still don’t know the rest!
Voice: There’s more…oh great. “Assistant”, get me [whispers in assistants ear] pronto!
Assistant: As you wish.
Lilly: And so the fun begins…
Hope you likee! Please comment, I need 5 once again for the next chappie.
whitesoxfan
04-29-2007, 10:05 AM
More Know I Demand You By The Gods Will Please
PursePrincess4eva
04-29-2007, 10:26 AM
Omg I love it!
luv2act
04-29-2007, 10:33 AM
mysterious! I demand more! I'm not asking! jk=)!
MileyRox1174
04-29-2007, 10:34 AM
Thanks, two more comments!
luv2act
04-29-2007, 10:35 AM
come on, people! comment! we need more!
MileyRox1174
04-30-2007, 04:46 PM
Oh whatever. I'll post it soon.
cutie_girl
04-30-2007, 05:28 PM
continue!
luv2act
04-30-2007, 05:39 PM
more!
MileyRox1174
04-30-2007, 07:13 PM
I have to write it, so in a little bit.
MileyRox1174
04-30-2007, 07:25 PM
Chapter 3: Don’t You See?
Voice: Oh yes, it does…
Lilly: What are you being all “evil” for anyways?
Voice: Oh, no reason…
Lilly: Yeah, right. Take off that hat and those sunglasses, I know you’re-
Lilly’s mouth is gaping.
Lilly: RACHEL?!
Rachel: Yes, it is I, Rachel, the great! *evil laugh*
Lilly: But…why?
Rachel: Don’t you see, Lilly? I am Miley’s mortal enemy, and well, a competitor for Jake. So, that explains why I said that you were “Going to do something to Miley before me!”
Lilly: But…no…it…can’t be true…
Rachel: But it is.
Lilly: So…who’s your assistant?!
Rachel: Oh don’t worry; he won’t do anything to you. Just…relax, and he won’t hurt you or Miley.
Lilly: Uh…but…buh…I…and you…and uh…*faints*
Rachel: PERFECT. Now I have both of them out-almost-cold. Just have to do one final tweak, and bravo!
Rachel -------- Miley and Lilly.
Assistant: I’m back, Rachel. What else do you-HUH? Wha-wha-what did you do to them?!
Rachel: Oh nothing. Just a little something I like to call --------.
Assistant: [mumbling] Uh-oh.
Hope you likee! Please comment!
luv2act
04-30-2007, 07:44 PM
luv it! so mysterious!
m&jrule
04-30-2007, 07:50 PM
omg more!
Miley98
05-02-2007, 05:31 PM
M-MORE! now!
flower1
05-02-2007, 05:39 PM
its confusing!
MORE! THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELS YOU TO WRITE MORE!
MileyRox1174
05-03-2007, 06:48 AM
Thanks, more later!
Miley98
05-03-2007, 06:05 PM
(tick, tick tick) Okay, now is later! (Ha that didn't make so much sense!)
MileyRox1174
05-06-2007, 06:09 PM
OMG I totally forgot about this FanFic...sorry....I might end it soon, it's not one of my best and no one really comments [don't get defensive please].
But I'll try to write the next chappie soon!
luv2act
05-06-2007, 06:11 PM
more! it is too awsome!
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