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Miley98
04-22-2007, 06:55 PM
ok, this is my third fan fic. hope u like it!

INFORMATION:

Miley is just starting high school. Ashley T is her friend, bit she is waaay older. She sticks up for her no matter wat. Lilly, is finding schoolwork very hard. she struggles with all of her homework. Oliver has a crush on Ashley T but Miley and Lilly will just not accept that.

Chapter One: Julie

Miley walks into highschool

Miley: Omigod! This is just too cool for words!

Lilly: Yeah, I guess [she mumbles]

Miley: Lilly are you okay?

Lilly: Yeah, I'm fine.

Lilly's POV [point of view]

Uggh! Stop whining, Lilly! You got into high school, now deal with it! I can't belive I'm not telling Miley! She thinks I'm a genious, I got a scholarship! But, no! My brother got the scholarship and gave it to me! I cannot believe that I accepted! I hope schoolwork is easy!

Oliver walks into the hall and stops.

Oliver: Look at those ladies checkin' me out!

Miley: give me a break "Smokin Oken"

Lilly: Yeah, leave us alone you nutbrain!

Miley: Yeah, scoot! Bu,bye! See ya!

Oliver: Okay fine!

Oliver lowers his voice

Oliver: I heard Hannah's performing tonight! Any hot celebs coming?

Miley: [shocked, she folds her arms] And hot, do you mean, pretty, fashionable or do you mean, beautiful.

Oliver [grins] All of the above

Lilly: [whispers to miley] Got a pillow?

Miley: Nah, but I have a better idea [they exchange mischevous glances]

Miley and Lilly both slap him on the face

Oliver: Ow!?! I'm going, I guess that I, the man, is to much for ya!

Oliver walks away acting cool and Lilly rolls her eyes

Miley: Hey girl, wanna try out for cheerleading this year?

Lilly: You? I mean, u wanna be mascot again?

Miley: I am THAT bad? oh.

Lilly: uh, no! You're great!

Miley: Thanx! Hey, tryouts are in 5!

Lilly: five minutes, hours?

Miley: minutes!

Lilly: Well, lets go!

They go to the field

Head Cheerleader: And WHERE do you think you guys are going?

Lilly: uh, we're trying out!

Head: Uh huh. Name?

Miley: I'm Miley Stewart and this is..

Head cuts her off

Head: Miley? Thats a VERY strange name! Very interesting. And you? [looks at Lilly]

Lilly: Oh me? I'm Lilly Truscott!

Head: Okay, no more people? Okay lets start! The tryouts are:

Latesha Williams
Candy Kincos
Jenny Long
Lilly Truscott
Veronica Smith
Miley Stewart
Stacy Conrad
Brenna Daniels

We have five more spots open so that means that three of you are going back home! Okay, first up is Stacy!

Stacy: [claps her hands] We're here [claps again] We're there! [claps hands] We're gonna beat you 'cause we're ev-ery-where!

Stacy puts her arms up, does a pierrote and says

HIT IT!

She walks forward, then back. She does cartwheel, round-off, back handspring and ends it off with a back tuck.

Head: Wow, that was teeeriffic! High five girl! Next up, is Lilly Truscott!

Lilly: Hi! Ok this is my cheer!

Miley: Go Lily GO!

Lilly: Thanx, Miles. Ok here it is:
Move those skinny legs, to the beat, to the beat. Move those skinny legs on the bas-ket-ball court. Go Tigers! Go Tigers! Uh huh, uh huh!

Does an arial (sp?) and a back flip. She ends it off with a split and a big, friendly smile.

Head: Woah, Lilly! You girl, have talent! Okay next up is Miley Stewart!

Miley was sitting there, stunned. She snapped back to attention

Miley: Uh, hi! I don't know any of those moves, but I do know a lot of other things.

Give it your best! Give it your best! Show off your moves! Try your hardest, come on! Go Tigers! UH HUH!

Miley does a perfect handstand-snap down but to everyone's surprise, when she landed, she did a split!

Head: That was great, Miley!

The rest go on.. bla bla bla...

Head: And the girls that made it on the squad are.....

What do you think?

~A Girl

Miley98
04-22-2007, 07:45 PM
Chapter Two: What!

FLASHBACK

Head: That was great, Miley!

The rest go on.. bla bla bla...

Head: And the girls that made it on the squad are.....

Stacy
Latesha
Jenny
Miley
and
Lilly!

Miley: Lilly! WE MADE IT! Are, are you crying?

Lilly: Nah, uh, oh! GUYS GET NSIDE, ITS STARTING TO RAIN!!

Stacy: I have an umbrella lets go!

INSIDE THE BUILDING

Lilly: Miley, get out ur schedule!

Miley: k, hold on!

Lilly: Look, we have all the classes TOGETHER! All right!

Miley: Lilly!

Lilly: What?

Miley: Our classes start in four minutes!

Lilly: Eeek! You better get to class!

Miley: Aren't you coming with me?

Lilly: Uh, I cant come for the 1st class, I have stuff to do.

Miley: Whatever, see ya next class?

Lilly: Yeah, totally! Bye Miles!

Miley: Bye!

MILEY'S POV:

What does Lilly have to do? I want to ask her, but I can't! That would be rude and I would be nosey! But, still... where is she going? I better find Oliver....

CLASSROOM

Teacher: Okay, welcome! Lets take attendance

blablabla

Miley Stewart!

Miley: Here!

Teacher: Oliver Oken!

Oliver: Here!

Teacher: Lilly Truscott!

Silence

Teacher: Again, Lilly Truscot!

Miley: Um, Lilly said she couldn't come for the 1st class... I don't know why!

Teacher: Strange, isn't she the one who won the scholarship? Thats okay, its the first day

Miley: [whispers to Oliver] I hope Lilly's okay.

Oliver: Yeah, me too!

AFTER CLASS Miley sees Lilly

Miley: Lilly! Where were you? I was so worried!

Lilly: [bursts into tears] Oh Miley! I shouldn't be here!

Miley: What are you talking about?

Lilly: I'm a lie! I lied to you! My brother won that scholarship! He gave it to me! I'm gonna flunk high school! I'm a disgrace!

Lilly fled out of the school

Miley: Lilly! Wait!

SPEAKERS:

All cheerleaders report to field

Miley: Oh great!

Miley walks to the field looking glum

Head: What's the matter? You're always so smiley miss miley! Hey, where's your friend?

Miley: I don't know! [wails]

Head:

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-22-2007, 07:52 PM
moreeeeeee

Miley98
04-22-2007, 08:06 PM
thanx! I need more posts though =D =O

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-22-2007, 08:16 PM
awww.why? it is awesome

~Miley~Rox~
04-22-2007, 08:24 PM
ok now post more i think its awsome

Miley98
04-23-2007, 07:31 AM
aww thanx guys! =D

v.a.h.fan
04-23-2007, 11:48 AM
Rockin more!

Miley98
04-23-2007, 03:26 PM
Thanx Sarrie! I'll write more soon!

Miley98
04-23-2007, 04:17 PM
Chapter Three: Rock Out Hannah!

FLASHBACK:

Head: What's the matter? You're always so smiley miss miley! Hey, where's your friend?

Miley: I don't know! [wails]

Head:

Head: Well, lets just start without her. I have some big news!! Wait, is everybody here? Counts: 1, 2, 3?! I know Lilly isn't here but...

Miley: I don't see Jenny anywhere [worried]

Head: Uh, okay. Er, how 'bout you go back to free period, this is very strange!

Latesha: But we haven't...

Head: Scoot!

They all went back to the hallway. Miley looks out the window.

Miley: Lilly, where are you?


Okay that was NO chapter! I just g2g do my homework :[

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-23-2007, 05:02 PM
more x 1,000,000

Miley98
04-23-2007, 05:28 PM
urgh! I have 2 go 2 gymnastics but I promise I'll write more soon, kay?

~Miley~Rox~
04-23-2007, 05:32 PM
ok kool as long as u do write more because this is a really good fanfic

Miley98
04-24-2007, 07:31 AM
thanx! Its not as good as Jenny's and Alison's and hanahmontanarulz5 and Emma27's fanfics!

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-24-2007, 09:12 PM
Puhleezz write more

Miley98
04-25-2007, 06:20 AM
i'm so sry 2 keep u waiting... sry! g2g!

izzybella
04-25-2007, 04:39 PM
More!!!!

izzybella
04-25-2007, 04:40 PM
hey miley98 check my fanfic out!!! IT's called miley stories!!!

izzybella
04-25-2007, 04:41 PM
grrr!!!! I need my story! what is taking soooo long? Plz...I TOTALLY MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kayla.hannah montana
04-25-2007, 04:44 PM
hey i like it thanks im on till 7:00 pm

Miley98
04-25-2007, 05:21 PM
Plz dont triple post. I will check urs out! i have 2 eat dinner thouigh,..

Miley98
04-25-2007, 07:25 PM
Chapter Three 2.0: Rock Out Hannah!

FLASHBACK:

Head: Scoot!

They all went back to the hallway. Miley looks out the window.

Miley: Lilly, where are you?

END

Miley sees a figure with an umbrella

Miley: Lilly!?!

Figure turns around but keeps on running

Miley: Lilly? Is that you? I'm coming out!

Miley runs outside without an umbrella

Miley: Lilly!

Runs toward the figure and pulls back the hood. It's....

Miley: Oliver?

Miley groans

Oliver: Miley! I've been looking ALL over for Lilly! She's nowhere to be found!

Miley: Oh no! Go back inside Ollie, I'll call her on my cell.

Oliver: But Miley....

Miley: I can call her by my self Oliver.

Oliver: Oookay. But when the school bell rings, I'm gonna find you!

Miley: Kay! bu, bye!

Oliver leaves and Miley runs to the field and filps open her cell. She presses 2, speed dial and calls. She hears the answering machine.

Miley: Hi Lilly, this is Miley. Oliver and I are so worried, please call back! and COME back! Bye! Hope to see you soon?

And still talking, MILEY burst in to tears and hung up. Miley started to run back to the building. A tall black man stood in front of her and she froze.

Man: Hold it right there, girl. Who are you and what are you doing here?

Miley: Who are you? Uh, I go to school here. I'm a freshman.

Man: Freshman, huh? I don't believe you.

Man starts to hold on her sweatshirt.

Miley: Hey! Let go of me!

Man: *laughs* No! I don't wanna! Unless you give me what I deserve!

------: Let her go!

Man: Huh? What are YOU gonna do? Tell my mommy?

------: ----------

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-25-2007, 07:34 PM
cool
mmoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Miley98
04-25-2007, 07:52 PM
guess who the mysterious savior is!

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-25-2007, 09:14 PM
lilly! or oliver!

~Miley~Rox~
04-27-2007, 05:26 PM
who is that guy i want ot know so post more more more!

Miley98
04-27-2007, 06:10 PM
I have 2 eat dinner... my mom is yelling at me! ttyl!

saha-agent-002
04-29-2007, 08:06 AM
really good

Miley98
04-29-2007, 11:03 AM
Chapter Four 3.0: Rock Out Hannah!

FLASHBACK:

Lilly: Let her go!

Man: Huh? What are YOU gonna do? Tell my mommy?

Lilly: No.... but WE are gonna KICK UR BUT!

END

Man: Oh really?

Drops Miley on the ground and starts for Lilly.

Lilly: Yeah, really.

Lilly does a backflip and when she lands she punches him right in the face. Blood starts streaming out of his nose. Meanwhile, Miley ran to the playground and flipped open her cell. She dialed 911.

Miley: Hello? Police? Hi, I'm Miley. This guy grabbed my sweatshirt and he's creepy. Now he's fighting my b-best f-friend.

Police Officer: Oh goodness! Where are you?

Miley: A-at t-the b-back f-field o-of S-Seaview H-High S-School

Police: Okay 'maam we'll be there as soon as we can.

Back to the fight. Lilly does a backwalkover and when she is landing she kicks the guy in the stomach. The man groans then smiles a wicked smile. He pushed Lilly hard on the ground and dragged her to the playground. Miley ran to the door and covered her mouth. He carried Lilly up to the highest slide and pushed her off of it. Not on the slide. Suddenly the police came and Miley ran to them. She pointed at Lilly and started to cry. The police put the guy in hand-cuffs and he cals the ambulance. They put Lilly in the ambulance and Miley comes along, crying.

Setting: hospital

Miley walks in.

Miley: I-is L-Lilly O-Okay?

Docter: yes, she is. We called her parents.

Lilly opens one eye and tries to get up.

Lilly: OOOOWWW! M-Miley? Oh it hurts!

Lilly collpased back in the bed.

Miley: Lilly!

Docter: Miley, would you please wait in the waiting room. I'm sorry about your friend but she is fine. Trust me.

Lilly's Mom bursts in

Mom: Is Lilly OKAY?

Lilly: Yeah Mom I'm fine

The dad points and Miley shakily

Dad: It's all your fault!

Miley: What?! No....

Lilly:

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-29-2007, 11:16 AM
moreeeee x 1, 100,100,100

Miley98
04-29-2007, 04:10 PM
kay, hold on....

~Miley~Rox~
04-29-2007, 04:34 PM
more more mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rreeeeeeeeeeeee morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee more more more more

Miley98
04-29-2007, 04:44 PM
Thanx! I'll write more in a sec!

Miley98
04-29-2007, 05:01 PM
Chapter Five 4.0: Rock Out Hannah.... Who?

FLASHBACK:

Dad: It's all your fault!

Miley: What?! No....

Lilly: It's okay Dad. It wasn't her fault. I was the one who ran away from high school. Miley was trying to find me. And this guy sort of kidnapped her and I tryed to save her.

Her mom ruffles her hair and glares a mean glance at Lilly's dad.

Mom: And you did, honey

Docter: Okay people. You have to leave now.

After like 4-5 hours.

Docter: Miley, Mr and Mrs Truscott, you can come in now.

Lilly is standing on the floor, cast and sling around her wrist and arm, and a bandage over her head.

Lilly: H-hi M-Miley and M-Mom and D-Dad.

Mom: LILLY! C'mon sweet pea, lets go home.

Lilly tries to break away from her mom's hug.

Lilly: B-but I have school!

Mom: No. You and Miley take the day off.

Miley and Lilly: Really?

Dad: Really

Lilly: U-um could I go to Miley's house.

Dad opens his mouth but Lilly's mom cuts him off.

Mom: Of course Lilly. Anything you want.

Miley: You sure?

Lilly: Positive.

They ride in Mr. Truscott's car to Miley's house.

Lilly: Bye mom!

Lilly and Miley walk onto the deck. Lilly starts to cry.

Miley: It hurts?

Lilly: No, it's just what I said to you about the scholarship... and it hurts a little.

Miley: Lilly....

Miley hugs her friend and puts a cd inside a cd player and starts to sing.

Miley:

Don't let no small frustration,
Ever bring you down (No, no, no, no),

Lilly joins in

Lilly:

Just take a situation,
And turn it all around

Miley in the middle of the song: That's it!

Lilly: What?!

Miley: Nothing. Keep singing.

Lilly:

With a new attitude everything can change,
Make it how you want it to be,

Miley:

Staying mad, why do that, Give yourself a break,
Laugh about it and you'll see!

Lilly:

Life's what you make it,
So let's make it rock,

Miley:

Life's what you make it,
So come on, come on, (Everybody Now)!

Lilly: C-can we stop.

Miley grins and hits pause.

Miley: Lilly, what's your all-time fave song?

Lilly: Hmm I like Nobody's Perfect!

Miley: Great. Sing it.

Lilly: Oookay!

Lilly sings and ends her song. Miley grabs Lilly's shoulders.

Lilly: Ooow!

Miley: Sorry. Why didn't tell me you sing?

Lilly: I... don't.

Miley: Well, your voice is amazing!

Lilly: Thanx! Not as good as Hannah Montana's though!

Miley: No, I mean it. You're like as good as me!

Lilly: Miley, stop kidding around.

Miley: No its like the song:

Just take a situation,
And turn it all around

You broke ur arm and u have a bandage on your head. Thats a situation!

Lilly: Soo... I mean I actually never told you this but I love to sing!

Miley: Yeah, if you love to sing, if you do sing, it takes your mind off of your broken stuff!

Lilly: Miley, you're a genious!!!

Miley: Thanx. But here's the good part....

Lilly: Uh oh!

Miley: Lilly!?!

Lilly: okay, okay! But how am I gonna sing so much when you're HM and you're like so busy!

Miley: You see, I want you to be Hannah's BF.

Lilly: Oh. I wasn't before? I though Lola was....

Miley: Duh! I mean a different BF!

Lilly: What do you mean?

Miley: ------

Miley98
04-29-2007, 05:23 PM
no one likes it? =(

Miles Of Smiles Rock
04-29-2007, 05:25 PM
GAAH
I Love It
Write Mooorrrreeeee ♥

Miley98
04-29-2007, 05:52 PM
Thanx Courtney! I ♥ yours too!

Miley98
04-30-2007, 04:02 PM
Chapter Six: Decisions

FLASHBACK:

Miley: Duh! I mean a different BF!

Lilly: What do you mean?

Miley: How would you like it if you sang in a concert?

END

Lilly: M-me?

Miley: Yes, you! Again, you have an amazing voice!

Lilly: B-but won't they be shocked to see that I have a cast + bandage? And, I am a righty, I broke my right arm so how am I gonna hold the mic?

Mile: One, who cares? They'll feel sorry for you but after you sing, the crowd will go WILD! Two, easy, just use a stand!

Lilly: You think we will pull this off?

Miley: Definately. But...

Lilly: What?

Miley: You cannot be Lilly Truscott.

Lilly: Duh, I'll be Lola Lofnagel!

Miley: No.... and you cannot change ur hair color every time.

Lilly: Why not? Oh right... they'd know thast I have a wig on...

Miley: *snaps her fingers* that's it! You can have a curly/wavy brown wig! With blond streaks/highlights!

Lilly: Oooh I like it! Oooo how 'bout I be Susannah Canada or Susannah Pennsylvania or Susannah Alabama or Alexis Texas!

Lilly was over-excited!

Miley: I like Susannah Alabama and Alexis Texas! You chose...

Lilly: I like Susannah! My nickname will be Susie Alabama!

Miley: Great! One thing.....

Lilly: What?

Miley: Will my dad agree?

Lilly: OF COURSE!

Miley: We should wait until he comes home.

Lilly:-----

~Miley~Rox~
04-30-2007, 05:35 PM
good mor e more more more mor emore more mroe

luv2act
04-30-2007, 05:56 PM
more!

Miley98
04-30-2007, 08:01 PM
thanx everyone!

Miley98
05-03-2007, 05:33 PM
Chapter Seven: PLEASE!?!

FLASHBACK:

Lilly: OF COURSE!

Miley: We should wait until he comes home.

Lilly:Hey I hear him now!

END

Robby Ray opens door

RR: What r u two planning?

Miley and Lilly: Uh.... Nothing?!

RR: Tell me now Miss Stewart!

Miley sighs and says

Miley: Ugh! Dad, hold on a second...

turns on the cd again to Life's what you make it.

Miley: 1, 2 3!

Lilly amd Miley both sing

RR: Girls, that was AMAZING!

Lilly: Thanks Mr. Stewart. You see....

Miley: I want Lilly to sing with me!

RR: WHAT!?!

Miley: You know.... sing concerts with me and stuff like that!

Just then RR yelps!

RR: Sweet Niblets! Darlin' what happened to you?

Lilly: Um, I fought this guy to save Miley.

Miley: She was AWESOME!

RR: Okay, back to the story. What did you just say?

Miley: Lilly will have a brown wig with blonde streaks and her name will be Susannah Alabama, nickname Susie.

RR:-----

~Miley~Rox~
05-03-2007, 08:38 PM
great write more asap

Miley98
05-03-2007, 09:33 PM
i sorta cant. me sry. I'll write 2morrow though, pinky swear/promise!

Miley98
05-04-2007, 02:48 PM
Chapter Three: And......

FLASHBACK:

RR: Okay, back to the story. What did you just say?

Miley: Lilly will have a brown wig with blonde streaks and her name will be Susannah Alabama, nickname Susie.

RR: hmmm.......

END

Miley: Normally when you say 'hmmmm' it means no. Oh please daddy!

RR: I'm not sure, Miles. I mean who will take Susie everywhere? The limo cant....

Miley: Okay.... I'll just get Jackson to drive her...


Jackson comes down the stairs screaming

Jackson: No No NO!!!!!

Miley:....Just Kidding! i mean daddy, Lola always came. No more Lola means one more Susie!

Lilly: Huh?

RR: Miles, you are so smart. Okay, I'll let you!

Lilly and Mileystart jumping around

Lilly: Yay ya yay! ow ow ow!

Miley: R u okay?

Lilly: Yeah, I'm fine.

Jackson: I think u 2 can have your little happy dance upstairs. Bu-bye!

Miley: Ugh, boys. Lets go upstairs Lilly.

Lilly: Why?

Miley: Hannah Closet. Duh!

Lilly: Right! See ya, doof!

Lilly hgits Jackson with her free hand

Jackson: Did you see the way she treated me? Dad, that-that is no way to treat her Best Friend's brother.

RR: Jackson! Stop it!

Jackson: Well.... Okay.... but... just to let you know, I have a date on Saturday and I....

RR: NO MONEY!

Jackson: Well, I was kinda thinking of maybe some air freshner for my baby!

RR: Well, you certainly need air freshner..... WHAT!?!?!

JAckson: My car!

RR: NO!

Hits Jacksonn with both of his hands and leaves.

JAcskon: See that, Fridge? I-I am appalled at his behavior!

luv2act
05-06-2007, 09:50 AM
oh,, awsome!

~Miley~Rox~
05-06-2007, 02:31 PM
great but the only part i dont get is when miley says no more lola no more susie What does that mean

luv2act
05-06-2007, 05:40 PM
it means that there will be room for susie cause Lola won't be in the limo, right? i dunno. lol

Miley98
05-06-2007, 08:10 PM
yup! thats what I was gonna say! I will write more 2morrow... gotta sleep!

Miley98
05-06-2007, 08:28 PM
Chapter Eight: More surprises?

FLASHBACK:

RR: NO!

Hits Jacksonn with both of his hands and leaves.

JAcskon: See that, Fridge? I-I am appalled at his behavior!

END

Meanwhile in Hannah's closet

Lilly: Omigosh! I always have loved this closet soo much!

Miley: You are going to share it with me, Miss Susie!

Lilly: I am? I am! Miley, you're the best!

Lilly Hugs Miley

Miley: Okay, here are my drawer of wigs

Miley opens a drawer of all different colored wigs

Lilly: How come you have so many wigs? I mean, you only wear one.

Miley: Costume Parties. Duh!

Lilly: Right! I uh, knew that!

Miley throws out tons of wigs until she finds a pile of brown wigs. None of them had blonde streaks, but one looked perfect. Lilly tried it on and clapped her hands.

Lilly: I love it! Now for the outfit.....

Miley and Lilly found some of Hannah's "bigger" clothes and Lilly put them on.

Miley: O. MI. God. Lilly, you are Ah-mazing! You look totally fantabulous!

Lilly posed, her cast behind her back and looked in the miror. This is what she looked like:

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o151/Miley98/Dolls/doll2.gif
Lilly: Wow. Just wow.

Miley: You look ahmazing right?

Lilly: Forget Amazing! This is just sheer fab-you-lous! Miley, get an outfit on!

Miley: Why?

Lilly: Just do it!

Miley put on an amazing outfit
Lilly and Miley cleaned up the place and pretended that they were on stage

They sang Make Some Noise and Life's What You Make It when RR came in

RR:

luv2act
05-06-2007, 08:48 PM
wowie! awesome as usual! more!

Miley98
05-07-2007, 06:09 AM
thanx! Ur 1 of my best viewers! LOL

luv2act
05-07-2007, 07:23 AM
=) lol

Miley98
05-07-2007, 03:46 PM
Could you get more ppl to come on here?

~Miley~Rox~
05-07-2007, 09:24 PM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee mooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee

luv2act
05-07-2007, 09:55 PM
sure! Ill put it it my siggie!

Miley98
05-08-2007, 05:49 AM
Oh, you r too nice! Thanx a million!

luv2act
05-08-2007, 08:27 AM
np!

Miley98
05-08-2007, 03:41 PM
anybody? Nobody? Hmm now everybody is perfect because NOBODY is cumin on here!

sophiecool
05-08-2007, 06:37 PM
Awesome Job Anjali!!!!!

Miley98
05-08-2007, 07:56 PM
Chapter Nine: Jenny

FLASBACK:

Miley put on an amazing outfit
Lilly and Miley cleaned up the place and pretended that they were on stage

They sang Make Some Noise and Life's What You Make It when RR came in

RR: Darlins that was wonderful! You looked like you were singing a real concert!

END

Lilly: Welll, we sorta were!


Miley: I have an idea. Dad, go out of the room. We'll call you in a few minutes.

NEXT HOUR

Robby Ray comes in the door to see Jackson.

Jackson: Welcome to the 1st concert of Hannah Montana....

RR: Huh?

Jackson: ..and Susannah Alabama!

Lilly and Miley walk out from the spinning clothesline. Spotlight goes on. Music starts.

Lilly and Miley hang their heads

Lilly:

Everybody makes mistakes
Everybody has those days

Miley jerks her head up

Miley: ONE TWO THREE FOUR

Lilly goes behind Miley.

Miley:

Everybody makes mistakes
Everybody has those days
Everybody knows what, what I'm talking bout
Everybody gets that way

Miley kneels down and freezes

Everybody makes mistakes
Everybody has those days
Everybody knows what, what I'm talking bout
Everybody gets that way
Yeah!

Lilly puts her one hand up and pretended to fall. The music suddenly stops.

Miley: Susannah!

Lilly gets up and grins

Lilly: I'm fine. See this cast? No biggy! I sing and I'm all better!

RR claps like a maniac.

NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL

Miley: Cheerleading practice! We get to miss algebra!

Lilly: We do?

Lilly does her happy dance. Algebra teacher walks by. Lilly freezes and starts to fake cry.

Algebra Teacher: What's wrong? Your cast hurts?

Lilly: No... I have to miss MATH!

Algebra: Oh dont worry! We are only doing reviews today!

Algebra teacher walks away. Miley and Lilly burst out laughing.

Miley: That was TOO Funny!

Lilly: Yeah.... we better get to chee... OH NO!

Miley: What?

Lilly: My cast!

Miley: Pshh you know how to do back tucks, front tucks, arials (sp?), splits, one-handed cartwheel..... anything!

Lilly: You're right!

They run off to the field.

Head: Okay, lets see if everybody's here... 1,2,3,4.....

Miley: Ughh Jenny's missing AGAIN!

Head: Er....

looks around and suddenly cries out

Head: Lilly! C-cast? How?

Lilly: Long story. But I can still do back tucks, front tucks, arials (sp?), splits, one-handed cartwheels and jumps!

Head: Oh yeah! That's awesome!

Jenny starts to run in to the field, with a smile but she looked unhappy. Nobody noticed but Lilly.

Head: Hey Jenny! We were just going to start our routine.

They figures out what to do but then the bell rang. Everybody left but Jenny who was sitting on the bleachers and Lilly who was practicing her arials.

Lilly: Hey Jenny! Why the long face?

sophiecool
05-09-2007, 03:45 PM
awesome!

~Miley~Rox~
05-09-2007, 07:01 PM
mmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriii iiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

luv2act
05-09-2007, 07:23 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Miley98
05-09-2007, 08:44 PM
thanx a million guys! I'll write more soon....

luv2act
05-09-2007, 09:17 PM
yay!

Miley98
05-10-2007, 05:25 AM
I will! i just woke up..... btw I totally love your siggy! Its SO GOOD!

luv2act
05-10-2007, 07:34 AM
oh, thanks! if u were talking to me

Miley98
05-10-2007, 08:03 PM
yup,, I was!

HannahMontanaX3
05-10-2007, 09:57 PM
more

luv2act
05-10-2007, 10:23 PM
yup,, I was!
aw, thanks again!

Miley98
05-11-2007, 05:40 AM
anybody besaides ~Miley~rox~ or luv2act?

luv2act
05-11-2007, 07:56 AM
come one people! comment! I need more!

Rachelfan400
05-11-2007, 08:55 AM
Hey I`m sorda new here and I just read this fic.
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!
It took me a while to get used too though.Why did she stop writing?

Miley98
05-11-2007, 01:33 PM
I didn't stop writing... its a fan fiction, you have to urge the person to keep on writing. I'll post more in a sec. kk?

Miley98
05-11-2007, 01:50 PM
Chapter Ten: Whatx3!?!

FLASHBACK:

Head: Hey Jenny! We were just going to start our routine.

They figures out what to do but then the bell rang. Everybody left but Jenny who was sitting on the bleachers and Lilly who was practicing her arials.

Lilly: Hey Jenny! Why the long face?

END

Jenny: Oh Hi Lilly! She takes off her jacket and Lilly gasps.

This is what she looks like:
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o151/Miley98/Dolls/lalala.gif

Jenny: What? Do I have a bug on my face? AHH BUG!

Lilly: No! Sorry its just you've never taken off your jacket.

Lilly touches Jenny's hair and Jenny lowers it.

Jenny: Uh.. Lilly what are you doing?

Lilly snaps back to attention.

Lilly: Nothing. Again, why the long face?

Jenny: Um... nothing, I guess.

Lilly: Tell Me.

Jenny: Fine. You see, yesterday, my dad came home with a wide smile. He said 'Look what I have, Jenny!' and I said 'What?' and my dad grinned. 'HANNAH MONTANA TICKETS!' and I jumped up and down. Hannah Montana is my FAVORITE singer. So then my mom comes in and says, 'Voctor, you're home early. Why?' and my dad hugged her. 'I got Hannah Montana tickets for our little girl!' and my mom's calm face turned into a cold stare. She left the room and I ran upstairs. Later, I heard my mom and dad arguing about Hannah Montana. I heard my mom shout "I HATE HANNAH MONTANA!" and then a sound of breaking glass. "Jenny loves you for that. She always did! She doesn't love me! I don't like you anymore, Victor! Get out!" my mom shrieked. "FINE! Maybe I will!!" Voctor screeched back at her. He ran down the stairs with a very angry face and said "Miranda! I'm leaving... for good!" "Great! I WONT miss you!" my mom screamed. I was heart-broken. I still am. My mom and dad hate eachother because of me. NO....

Jenny looked thoughtful and got angry.

Jenny: It's because of Hannah Montana! I hate her now! She's an idiot and I HATE HER!

Lilly looked shocked as Jenny stormed inside the building, tears streaming down her face. Miley comes outside

Miley: Coming Lilly?

Lilly: U-uh o-okay. Meet me outside kay M-Miley?

Miley: Sure? You okay?

Lilly: I'm fine. I just need to um, catch my breath!

Miley: ooookay

Miley turns and walks in the building

Lilly: What am I gonna do?

HannahMontanaX3
05-11-2007, 04:08 PM
eeeeeeeekkkkkkk MORE MORE MORE.

Miley98
05-11-2007, 04:09 PM
thanx Ami. I will write more when I get more comments. Okay, here is one more:

C'mon A Girl! We want more!

haha that doesn't count cause its from me.

HannahMontanaX3
05-11-2007, 04:10 PM
Okay thank yas. *smiles*

Miley98
05-11-2007, 04:13 PM
i need more comments PEOPLE!

luv2act
05-11-2007, 04:54 PM
plzz more! I love this fanfic! come on people, comment!

Miley98
05-11-2007, 05:31 PM
^^^yeah, wat she said!

~Miley~Rox~
05-13-2007, 05:57 PM
morie morie morie morie

Miley98
05-14-2007, 05:17 PM
one more comment....

luv2act
05-14-2007, 05:21 PM
plzz! i need it!

Miley98
05-15-2007, 05:32 AM
one more from sumone else (sorry new GFX maker, luv2act!

luv2act
05-15-2007, 08:06 AM
grrr! im a bear! Im going to eat you! i need more! lolz

Miley98
05-15-2007, 06:37 PM
haha if you ate me, you might not be a GFX maker anymore! Really, no one likes this? I'm THAT pathetic?

Miley98
05-18-2007, 07:54 PM
Chapter Eleven: Miley: New Best Friend?

FLASHBACK:

Miley: ooookay

Miley turns and walks in the building

Lilly: What am I gonna do?

END

Lilly is at her house in the room when her phone rings.

Lilly: Hello?

Miley: Lilly! Or should I say... Lola!?!

Lilly: Miley?

Miley: Duh... it's me.... Anyways, I wanted to invite some cheerleader friends over... I was thinking Stacy... who else?

Lilly blurts out an answer then slaps her mouth.

Lilly: Jenny!

Miley: Yeah, your right. I'll invite her.

Lilly: NO!! I mean, go ahead!

Miley: Kay, Lilly, see ya! Oh and take care of your arm!

Lilly: Hey Miley?

Miley: Yeah?

Lilly: One more thing. Could you help me with my homewrok sometime?

Miley: Of course. See ya!

Miley hangs up.

Lilly: Why'd I have to go open my big mouth?

Lilly gets and idea and calls Miley back.

Lilly: LILLY LANDING IN TWENTY!

Lilly skateboards in, surprised to see Miley and Jenny chatting away and laughing.

Miley: Oh hi Lilly! Jenny and I were just talking...

Lilly: Er.. okay.

Jenny: Hi Lilly! Watcha doin here?

To Miley:

Jenny: I thought it was just US!

Miley: Noo... I invited Lilly and Stacy because I have an idea!

Stacy opens the door.

Stacy: I'm here! Lets get this partay startayd!

Lilly moves all the furniture.

Miley: Okay, we're gonna have a dance-a-thon. Lilly?

Lilly: Yeah?

Miley: You're gonna have to sit out on this one... you might hurt your arm.

Lilly: But... Fine.

Lilly stormed up to Miley's room, fuming.

Lilly: How dare they!

Lilly creeped back into the living room and saw just Miley and Jenny.

Jenny: Stacy I think you ate too much!

Miley: Eew I hear her throwing up!

Stacy was in the bathroom, puking.

Jenny: Oh well! Like my arial?

Jenny does a perfect arial.

Miley: That was the best arial in the world! Better than anyone elses!

Jenny: Thanx!

Miley: Ya know what... I think we will be great friends.

Lilly sighs a heavy sigh of relief but that stops when...

Jenny: Forget great friends, we're the bestest friends in the whole world!

Miley grins

Miley: You're right, BF!

They high-five.

LILLY's POV:

Tears rolled down my cheeks as I saw Miley and Jenny dancing and laughing. I was angry. I was sad. I didn't know what to do. Jenny and Miley = Best Friends? Not for long!

luv2act
05-18-2007, 08:11 PM
aww!!!!!!!!!! *sniffle*! more!

Miley98
05-18-2007, 09:24 PM
kk! I need more comments though... nobody likes this fan fic but you and me! =[

MileyRox1174
05-18-2007, 09:36 PM
Haha, I read the first two chappies then skipped to the last one, I couldn't wait to read it! Love it, more!

Miley98
05-19-2007, 10:31 AM
no you shouldn't have done that L Girl... real important parts that you NEED to read!

luv2act
05-19-2007, 10:39 AM
^true! more!

MileyRox1174
05-19-2007, 10:40 AM
Well, I'll read the other chapters when I have more time ;)

Miley98
05-19-2007, 04:04 PM
okay!!!! Argghh... I just came back from my grounding... I missed lunch so I am STARVING!

~Miley~Rox~
05-21-2007, 07:04 PM
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeataaaaaaaaatttttttt ttttttttt mmmmmmmooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!111111

Miley98
05-22-2007, 05:06 PM
Chapter Twelve: The Plan

FLASHBACK:

Miley: You're right, BF!

They high-five.

LILLY's POV:

Tears rolled down my cheeks as I saw Miley and Jenny dancing and laughing. I was angry. I was sad. I didn't know what to do. Jenny and Miley = Best Friends? Not for long!

END

Lilly crept out of the backdoor, crying. RR almost saw her, but she ran away so quickly that he almost fell over. He walked inside the room to find Miley and Jenny laughing and dancing.

Robby Ray: Hey Miles... can we talk?

Miley: Yeah hold on a sec. Jenny, you seen Lilly? LILLY!

They all wait.

Miley: Lilly? Oh well. She must have left. How rude!

Jenny: Yeah! I would at least tell you!

Robby: Miley, I really need to talk to you.

Miley: Ooone Mooore Miiinute Daaady!

She whines.

RR: That's it! If you don't care about Lilly, then I'm leaving!

RR leaves, boiling.

Miley: My daddy, is certainly freaky!

Jenny: Tell me about it!

THE NEXT DAY.

Lilly's POV:

Ugh, where is Oliver! Seriously, I have spent four minutes on this porch, waiting. Finally, he's opening the door!

Oliver: Hey... oh it's you. Hi Lilly.

Lilly: What do you mean HI LILLY!?! I'm your best friend, you doof!

Oliver looked most surprised. He backs away.

Oliver: Oookay. I though Miley was your Best Friend!

Lilly: Don't ever saw that balkstabber's name again! PLEASE!

Oliver: What happened?

I explained everything! Oliver can be such a doofus sometimes!

Lilly: I have a plan. First, you tell her to bring Jenny to a HM concert, okay? She'll say no, she cant or something. Miley would eb like 'why?' and Jenny would be like, "I dont like Hannah Montana that much," and Miley would tell her she's HM! It's perfect!

luv2act
05-22-2007, 06:09 PM
ah! more! i love it!

elementskater4life
05-22-2007, 06:17 PM
wow i just got done reading the whole thing i mean wow youre way better than me!!!i tired to make one but no one commented it please check it out its the link saying even whend your not here...you are great that was addict i couldn't stop readding it

Miley98
05-23-2007, 07:07 AM
awww thanx! Sure, I'll read it. I cant now because I have 2g2 school soon but I will when I get back. I promise!

~Miley~Rox~
05-25-2007, 10:49 AM
great plz write alot more more

Miley98
05-25-2007, 02:04 PM
thanx! I will... soon.

PursePrincess4eva
11-11-2007, 04:30 PM
Mores!

Destiny9910
11-11-2007, 05:13 PM
its been a whiklr

iJenni
12-22-2007, 09:50 PM
this is so good.more plz!!!!!