View Full Version : Miley+Eric=Jake?! *fanfic by Alexa*
Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 09:33 PM
This isn't a sequel to anything, so don't worry about catching up or whatever. Please read and comment. Enjoy! :)
Chapter 1: The New Kid
Miley: (walks up to Lily in a disgusted sort of way) Hey Lily. (Says in a grumpy sort of voice)
Lily: ( doesn’t even look up from her magazine) What’s wrong with you?
Miley: Oh.....nothing. School’s great, my Dad’s great, and Jackson’s great. What gives you the idea that I’m not great too?!
Lily: (looks up suddenly from her magazine) that doesn’t sound very reassuring. Dish. What’s wrong with you?
Miley: You really wanna know?
Lily: (stares at her like must I really answer that question)
Miley: (sighs) Jake called from his movie set, apparantly he met some girl and thought that since she was closer...
Lily: Oh, I’m sorry Miley. But I think Jake was a real jerk to do something like that. I know you really liked him.
Miley: Yeah, but you know what? I’m done with guys, I’m done with the whole crushing thing. From now on, no more crushing for Miley Stewart.
Lily: (snorts) good luck with that
Miley: (rolls eyes then gets up to leave) I better get goin, see yah later Lily.
Lily: yeah, see yah
Miley: (gets up and starts to walk away when she bumps into someone) oh, sorry!
Boy: No, its my fault, I wasn’ t looking.
Miley: Oh well...ok.
Boy: My name’s Eric. I just moved here from Florida. So I guess I’m the new kid around here.
Miley: (smiles) my name’s Miley. I....well...I’ve lived here awhile.
Eric: Well, Miley, I guess I’ll see you around?
Miley: yeah, that would be great.
Eric: (walks away)
Miley: (stands there smiling still)
Lily: (walks up behind Miley) You just couldn’t stay away for five seconds.
Miley: Oh big deal! He’s way too cute...and I was just kidding anyway.
Lily: Oh right, I guess I just missed the hint of sarcasm in your voice back there.
Miley: yeah, I guess you did.
Lily: so spill! Does he go to our school?
Miley: there isn’t really anything to spill, I mean we just bumped into each other. Kind of like it was meant to be. I haven’t felt that way since Jake left.
Lily: (smiles) It’s gonna be ok Miley. That jerk should have never dumped you.
Miley: You know what, you’re right! I am so moving on.
Lily: I am right! You woke up today thinking Jake, and you’ll wake up tomorrow thinking...uh...what’s his name again?
Miley: Eric.
Lily: Right. Eric.
Miley: (hears her cell phone ring then looks at the caller ID) oh great. Why now?
Lily: what? Who is it?
Miley: It’s the my Hannah event planner, Unique. She is so boring to listen to all day, and he needs me to come in like NOW.
Lily: Well It sounds important. I’ll see you later then.
Miley: (already running off) k! Bye!!
(Later at Hannah’s practicing studio with her wig on.)
Unique: There you are Hannah! What took you so long?!
Hannah: well first I wen-
Unique: Never mind that now. Guess what I just booked for Hannah Montana?
Hannah: uh wh-
Unique: A charity event! And wait till you get a load of this, guess who I booked this genius event with!
Hannah: um Be-
Unique: .........!!!!
Hannah: WHAT?!
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What do you think?
Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 10:03 PM
Please somebody comment!!!
hannah_montana.boston
04-18-2007, 10:08 PM
o i like it its fresh and new
Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 10:10 PM
thank you very much. this is only my second one. so I'm kind of uneasy.
~Miley~Rox~
04-18-2007, 10:22 PM
this one is great just like your other one that u finished
Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 10:28 PM
thanks! not lots of people read them, but I like to write anyways! :)
Cheerleader111
04-19-2007, 06:31 PM
Any other comments? oh well...I am starting the next chapter anyway cause you two posted.
flower1
04-19-2007, 06:35 PM
Wow!!!! thats cool! i know who it is though....
that jerk
Cheerleader111
04-19-2007, 06:44 PM
do you now?
flower1
04-19-2007, 06:47 PM
Yup..
Cheerleader111
04-19-2007, 06:48 PM
if you say so....:P
hmfhannahmontanafan
04-20-2007, 05:24 AM
MORE! it's really good!
Cheerleader111
04-20-2007, 07:03 PM
thanks! i will post more at least by tomorrow.
Cheerleader111
04-21-2007, 01:54 AM
Thanks for your posts! :) Here's the next chapter:
Chapter 2: Alexis Texas
Hannah: (at the charity event) I can’t believe I have to work with you (mutters while signing an autograph)
Alexis: What’s wrong Hannah? Can’t handle the competition?
Hannah: (rolls eyes) no I just can’t figure out why I have to WORK with the competition.
Alexis: oh please. This will do wonders for your career. (Signs an autograph)
Hannah: My career?? Don’t you mean your career?
Alexis: what can you possibly be talking about?!
Hannah: oh like you don’t know!!! do these songs ring a bell? The greatest of two worlds?! I’ve got guts?! If we were a reality tv show?! You completely ripped me off! (Signs another autograph)
Alexis: I see no similarities one so ever!
Hannah: give it a break already. I’m only here anyway cause of all the orphans. (Signs an autograph then draws a big heart around her name)
Alexis: whatever, I’m only here because Jake Ryan said I should come.
Hannah: what are you talking about?
Alexis: (looks at Hannah) Are you telling me you didn’t know us two were going out?!
Hannah: (stunned) no....I mean...its not like I would care anyways.
Alexis: oh well. Me and Jake met up in Romania months ago. It was like a kodak moment. We totally fell in love right on the spot.
Hannah: oh...(signs an autograph on someone’s arm) well it’s good to know that he finally found someone he’ll stick with.
Alexis: what do you mean finally?
Hannah: I’ve just heard he was testing the rivers. That’s all.
Alexis: oh. Well, he’s happy with me now.
Hannah: good. As long as you’re happy.
Alexis: well we are.
Hannah: ok then. You’re happy. (Rolls eyes)
Alexis: so you’re not jealous?
Hannah: (continues to autograph papers) no. why would I be mad?
Alexis: I thought you liked him.
Hannah: and what gave you that idea?!
Alexis: Well he’s teen scene hottie of the year! And I got him! Not you!
Hannah: um...well that’s good to know. Since I never really wanted him.
Alexis: (silent for a moment) oh.
(The event ends and they both get up from behind the table)
Alexis: Well....see you on the stage Hannah.
Hannah: Yeah. Sure. (Starts to walk toward her ride but then turns back around) Hey Alexis?
Alexis: Yeah?
Hannah: How long have you guys been going out?
Alexis: Like (thinks for a second) two months.
Hannah: Oh, ok. (Thinking that was the time they were still going out)
Alexis: But Hannah?
Hannah: Yeah?
Alexis: Jake .........
smiley_miley1221
04-21-2007, 02:15 AM
that's so good!!! cant wait to read more!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
04-21-2007, 03:58 AM
OMG! This is turning into an AMAZING fanfic! Great idea, bringing Alexis Texas into the story!!!!
thobi123
04-21-2007, 09:58 AM
more
secretive_angel
04-21-2007, 09:07 PM
more
hmfhannahmontanafan
04-22-2007, 04:38 AM
oh, come on! MORE!
~Miley~Rox~
04-22-2007, 06:25 PM
great write more plz
hmfhannahmontanafan
04-23-2007, 05:28 AM
MORE!!! MORE!!!! plz!!!
Cheerleader111
04-23-2007, 06:55 PM
sorry to keep you guys waiting! i was at my dad's house and he lives in like the stone age. here you go! :
Chapter 3: The Back-up Plan
Miley: (calls Lily) Lily, you will not believe what Alexis Texas just told be!
Lily: Isn’t Alexis Texas that popstar who always rips you off?
Miley: Yeah, but we ended up talking about Jake and...
Lily: And what?!
Miley: Not only are they going out, but he only shot the movie to be with her. They’ve been planning on going out way before Jake even met me!!
Lily: She’s lying.
Miley: huh?
Lily: She’s lying.
Miley: How do you know?
Lily: Give me one good reason why she would tell you all this AND be telling the truth!
Miley: Uh...because she wanted to make me jealous by going out with him and then rubbing it in my face.
Lily: Wait? Why would she do that? I mean Miley likes Jake. Not Hannah.
Miley: Lily, you are SO missing the big picture.
Lily: Which would be...
Miley: That I was Jake’s back up plan! And when he finally got the chance to go with Alexis, he dumped me!
Lily: Calm down Miley. You’re moving on. Remember?
Miley: Right. Moving on. Tomorrow I’ll go back to school and just forget about him.
Lily: Good. I’ll see you tomorrow. I’m going to bed.
Miley: k, bye.
Lily: bye. (Hangs up)
(Next day at school)
Miley: (slams her locker door shut)
Lily: (runs up to her) You will never believe who I just saw!!
Miley: Who?
Lily: .......!!!!
Chapter 4: So We Meet Again
Miley: Are you sure its him?
Lily: Who else would It be?
Miley: I don’t know...but I’m gonna go see.
Lily: I’ll go with you.
Miley: (walks around the corner of the hallway) Oh my gosh! It is him!!
Lily: I told you!
Person: Oh hey Miley! I didn’t know you went to this school!
Miley: Hey Eric! I didn’t think you went here either. In fact, it never even occurred to me.
Eric: (smiles) Well I guess now we really will see each other around! Like...maybe at a movie?
Miley: (smiles back) Are you asking me on a date?
Eric: I guess I am.
Miley: Then of course I’ll go. How about tomorrow? At six?
Eric: Perfect. So I guess I’ll see you then.
Miley: Yeah. See yah. (Walks away smiling)
Lily: (she was at a near enough distance to hear everything) He is so cute! You are so lucky Miley.
Miley: Yeah, but don’t you think it’s kind of weird how he showed up just in time for me and Jake to break up?
Lily: (looks confused) Uh....no.
Miley: Yeah, I’m just being paranoid.
Lily: Yeah, I guess you are. Well I gotta get to class before all the seats in the back of the room are taken. I hate history. (Smiles)
Miley: (laughs) Well, I’ll see you at lunch.
Lily: Yeah, save me a seat! (Walks away)
(Miley starts to walk to her next class but then she realized she forgot one of her books inside her locker and headed back there.)
Miley: (Opens locker then a note falls out) That’s weird. I was here like five minutes ago.
(Miley read the note aloud since no one was around)
Miley: Dear Miley, you’re an awesome person and I would never do anything to hurt you on purpose. That’s weird there’s no signature.
(Miley stuffs the note in her backpack then rushes to her classroom. She takes a seat across from Eric.)
Miley: Hey Eric. Thanks.
Eric: (pulls a confused face) For what?
Miley: Um...for the note.
Eric: (stares at her for a second) Oh right! The note, no problem.
Miley: (smiles) And for the record, I think you’re awesome too.
Eric: Huh?
Miley: In the note? You said you thought I was awesome.
Eric: Oh, right. Also no problem.
Miley: (thinking) That is so weird. It’s like he doesn’t even know what he wrote. (Stops thinking)
Miley: Are you sure yo-
Amber: (runs into the room with Ashley) OHMYGOD!!!!
(The whole class turns around to looks at Amber)
Ashley and Amber: .......!!!!!
~Miley~Rox~
04-23-2007, 06:59 PM
really goood but can u plz make the type bigger because it is really hard to see
Cheerleader111
04-23-2007, 07:00 PM
oh sorry. I will next time. and thanks!
secretive_angel
04-23-2007, 10:17 PM
nore pleaz
Cheerleader111
04-23-2007, 11:37 PM
I'll post more later. I'm finishing it up.
luv2act
04-23-2007, 11:45 PM
more! It's like totally soooo awsome!
hmfhannahmontanafan
04-24-2007, 04:25 AM
MORE!!!! IT'S SO GOOD! plz plz plz plz!!!
xoxo Babii xoxo
04-24-2007, 10:16 PM
pleaseeeee more
smileyface93
04-24-2007, 10:19 PM
moree more plzz
Cheerleader111
04-24-2007, 11:02 PM
sorry guys, i'm at my aunt's house. I'll post it when i get home though!
~Miley~Rox~
04-26-2007, 05:30 PM
ok but hurry up
thobi123
04-26-2007, 07:15 PM
more
Cheerleader111
04-27-2007, 07:21 PM
I'm stuck! Plz someone pm me with help!!! :(
hannah_montana.boston
04-29-2007, 07:25 PM
niote was from jake/ miles loves eric/that texas chick got dumped by jake/ miley made jake jelous unknowingly/lilly finds love
-all good ideas/advice by me
Cheerleader111
04-30-2007, 07:17 PM
i like them! do you mind editing them out though so no one reads it. don't want to spoil it! i'll post three chapters tomorrow. sorry guys!
Cheerleader111
04-30-2007, 11:54 PM
ok. I have one chapter that I'll just finished. The other two are still in progress. I'll post them later today.
Chapter 5: You Again
Amber and Ashley: Jake is back!!! Jake is back!!!
Miley: Huh? That’s insane, Jake CANNOT be back. I don’t believe it a bit.
Jake: (walks in and runs his fingers through his hair) Well you better believe it. Cause I’m back, honey.
Miley: I’m not your honey. Were through remember?
Jake: Same difference. (Jake rolled his eyes.)
Miley: No its not the same! (Stands up) Were not going out anymore!
Jake: It’s not like you have anyone better to like.
Miley: Actually, I moved on. I’m dating....(looks around)
Jake: Yeah? Who?
Miley: I’m dating Eric!
Eric: What? Uh, Mil-
Miley: And were like in love.
Jake: Oh yeah? Prove it.
Miley: And how am I supposed to do that?
Eric: Mi-
Jake: You know what you have to do.
Miley: No I don’t or else I wouldn’t be asking. (Crosses arms and walks over closer to Jake)
Eric: But Miley I-
Jake: (rolls his eyes) Kiss him. After school. On the beach. You have to kiss him.
Miley: (laughs nervously) Well you see were not exactly that far in the relationship yet.
Jake: I knew you couldn’t move on that fast. (Starts to walk off)
Miley: FINE. After school at Rico’s. We’ll be there.
Jake: (smiles devilishly) Cool, see you there. (Walks off)
Miley: (sits back down) Can you do this one thing? For me?
Eric: Um...I would...but....
Miley: What?
Eric: ...........!!!!
Miley: Oh great, what else could go wrong?
smileyface93
05-01-2007, 12:01 AM
more plzzzz i think miley will kiss eric i guess
Cheerleader111
05-01-2007, 12:08 AM
thanx. i'm trying to finish this chapter up. I'll post in like ten minutes.
smileyface93
05-01-2007, 12:11 AM
yay! kk lol
Cheerleader111
05-01-2007, 12:22 AM
Chapter 6: So what now?
Miley: What does SHE have that I don’t have? I thought you liked ME!!!
Eric: Well I did like you at the beach, but then I saw her here so I kinda just wanna be friends.
Miley: Well why didn’t you tell me that before I said we were gonna kiss.
Eric: What? I tried to tell you! You just kept interrupting!
Miley: Well it doesn’t matter now, we have to kiss. That’s the plan.
Eric: But what about....you know....the girl I like.
Miley: Oh right. First of all, her name is Lily. And second of all, she doesn’t even know you really exist, so she won’t really care.
Eric: (looks at the floor) Oh...
Miley: Oh, I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings or anything. It’s just....you’re new here....and-and-(looks at the floor) You know, something like this might make Lily jealous.
Eric: Really?
Miley: I AM her best friend right? I should know these things.
Eric: But are you sure she’ll end up liking me?
Miley: POSITIVE.
Eric: Well...in that case....I’ll do it.
Miley: Cool, I’ll see you at the beach then. (The bell rings, short period I know)
Eric: Like I have a choice...
Miley: (rolls her eyes then leaves the room.)
Lily: (walks up smiling then sees Eric walk out the classroom) Oooooo so Eric is in your class?
Miley: Yeah, but guess who else is too.
Lily: Who?
Miley: Jake. As in Jake Ryan. As in ex-boyfriend!!!
Lily: Oh no Miley! Did he try to ruin it for you guys?
Miley: No, actually he just wanted me to prove to him that we were through and that I was over him.
Lily: So what did you do?
Miley: I have to kiss him after school today.
Lily: I bet Eric jumped for that idea. (Smiles)
Miley: (thinks for a second) Yeah, actually....he loved the idea of us kissing. We both can’t wait. Were like, in love.
smileyface93
05-01-2007, 12:24 AM
awsomeness more!
Cheerleader111
05-01-2007, 12:28 AM
lol ok. one more chapter tonite. give me like twenty minutes.
smileyface93
05-01-2007, 12:32 AM
alrightyy yayay i wont bother u no more hehe
Cheerleader111
05-01-2007, 12:36 AM
lol i hope you wont hate me for this....but i gotta go. and the chapters not finished. so i just have to post more tomorrow. but goodnite! and sorry!!!
smileyface93
05-01-2007, 12:43 AM
kk good night!! lol
miji.hannahmontana
05-01-2007, 01:02 AM
:( this is like so sad poor mileyy
I wanna no morrre
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-01-2007, 07:20 PM
OMG!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I'd keep on typing "MORE" but my fingers are getting tired. anyway, MORE!!!
absolutelyfabx3
05-01-2007, 07:38 PM
when you get on, I demand more!
~Miley~Rox~
05-03-2007, 04:57 PM
great more more more
hannah_montana.boston
05-03-2007, 05:35 PM
hahaha
Cheerleader111
05-06-2007, 02:54 PM
I am so sorry this took so long guys!!! there was try outs this week, and i haven't been on. I am beyond sorry. Plus i had no idea what to write. so thanx hmfhannahmontanafan for your help!:)
Chapter 7: A Change In Plans
(At the beach)
Eric: So explain this to me one more time. Were here to make Jake and Lily jealous?
Miley: No! I do not need to make Jake jealous. I just need to prove to him that...you know...me and him are through.
Eric: Oh. But why would Lily be here then?
Miley: Must I explain this full out?!
Eric: Uh...it would help.
Miley: Fine. Lily is my best friend, she will come to support me, Jake is my ex-boyfriend, he’ll come to embarrass me, and-
Eric: What about that other kid?
Miley: What other kid?
Eric: You know Cucumber or whatever.
Miley: His name is OLIVER.
Eric: Oh. But why will he be here?
Miley: Because Oliver is my other best friend.
Eric: You have two best frien-
Miley: You are completely missing the point!!!
Eric: Sorry. Hey, what about those kids?
Miley: (rolls her eyes then turns around) What ki- oh my gawd.
Jake: (walks up to her with about twenty five different people behind him) word must’ve slipped out. Hope you don’t mind.
Miley: (smiles in a pained way) no, not at all. We don’t mind company right honey?
Eric: (looking for lily) Uh yea- I mean no we don’t mind.
Jake: (rolls his eyes) so let’s get on with this already.
Miley: Uh, sure. We’ve got a date to go on and this shouldn’t take all day.
Jake: Whatever. (Takes out a camara)
Miley: Uh, what’s that for?
Jake: I need to capture the look on your face when you don’t kiss him and admit that you still like me instead.
Miley: (really mad) Ok Eric, lets do this.
Eric: (starts to lean forward)
Miley: (starts to lean forward too)
Jake: Oh hey Lily!
Lily: uh, hi Jake. (Rolls her eyes)
Jake: (watches Miley expecting her to back away but she doesn’t)
Lily: *thinking* you can do this Miley!
Jake: (grabs Lily and kisses her before Miley kisses Eric)
Eric: Hey!
Miley: Lily?!
Lily: (doesn’t pull away)
Jake: (he doesn’t pull away either, then like 30 seconds later he does) Lily.......!!!!!
Miley: Huh?!
~Miley~Rox~
05-06-2007, 03:33 PM
does jake like lilly?
~Miley~Rox~
05-06-2007, 03:34 PM
oh and really really really great
Cheerleader111
05-06-2007, 04:03 PM
thanx! I have the next one ready! its a little short, but I'll post it when more people comment.
smileyface93
05-06-2007, 04:56 PM
more plz!! its so0 good!
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-06-2007, 04:58 PM
well....OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!! MORE MOREEEEEE!!!!
Cheerleader111
05-06-2007, 05:11 PM
Chapter 8: You have to Earn Trust
Jake: Lily, will you go out with me?
Miley: Huh?!
Lily: (looks dreamily into his eyes) Of course.
Miley: Huh?!
Jake: I’ve been meaning to ask you for months now, I just didn’t know how to say it.
Miley: I repeat, Huh?!
Jake: Oh right, Miley. Guess you proved me wrong.
Miley: I didn’t even get to kiss him before you kissed my best friend!
Jake: Oh, then I guess I saved you. You’re welcome.
Miley: What are talking about?
Jake: Oh, Eric didn’t tell you?
Miley: Tell me what? What didn’t Eric ever tell me?
Jake: (his eyebrows raise) You seriously don’t know?
Miley: Would I be asking if I did? (Rolls her eyes)
Jake: Well first of all Eric is my best friend? Like ever since the Pre-k years.
Miley: You and Eric? Friends?!
Jake: Don’t interrupt. And second of all he ........!!!!
Miley: That’s not even possible Jake. I mean I started to date him AFTER we broke up.
Jake: It’s called thinking ahead Miley.
Miley: But....that...it just doesn’t.....then why did you break up with me?
Jake: Do I really have to answer that?
Miley: Uh, yeah.
Jake: Lily. I liked Lily.
Miley: *thinking* something about this story just doesn’t add up...
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-06-2007, 05:16 PM
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MORRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE plzplzpzplzpzplz
Lanae_M
05-06-2007, 08:07 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheerleader111
05-07-2007, 12:28 AM
thanks! more comments before I post more. lol
flower1
05-07-2007, 12:56 AM
I am so sorry this took so long guys!!! there was try outs this week, and i haven't been on. I am beyond sorry. Plus i had no idea what to write. so thanx hmfhannahmontanafan for your help!:)
Chapter 7: A Change In Plans
(At the beach)
Eric: So explain this to me one more time. Were here to make Jake and Lily jealous?
Miley: No! I do not need to make Jake jealous. I just need to prove to him that...you know...me and him are through.
Eric: Oh. But why would Lily be here then?
Miley: Must I explain this full out?!
Eric: Uh...it would help.
Miley: Fine. Lily is my best friend, she will come to support me, Jake is my ex-boyfriend, he’ll come to embarrass me, and-
Eric: What about that other kid?
Miley: What other kid?
Eric: You know Cucumber or whatever.
Miley: His name is OLIVER.
Eric: Oh. But why will he be here?
Miley: Because Oliver is my other best friend.
Eric: You have two best frien-
Miley: You are completely missing the point!!!
Eric: Sorry. Hey, what about those kids?
Miley: (rolls her eyes then turns around) What ki- oh my gawd.
Jake: (walks up to her with about twenty five different people behind him) word must’ve slipped out. Hope you don’t mind.
Miley: (smiles in a pained way) no, not at all. We don’t mind company right honey?
Eric: (looking for lily) Uh yea- I mean no we don’t mind.
Jake: (rolls his eyes) so let’s get on with this already.
Miley: Uh, sure. We’ve got a date to go on and this shouldn’t take all day.
Jake: Whatever. (Takes out a camara)
Miley: Uh, what’s that for?
Jake: I need to capture the look on your face when you don’t kiss him and admit that you still like me instead.
Miley: (really mad) Ok Eric, lets do this.
Eric: (starts to lean forward)
Miley: (starts to lean forward too)
Jake: Oh hey Lily!
Lily: uh, hi Jake. (Rolls her eyes)
Jake: (watches Miley expecting her to back away but she doesn’t)
Lily: *thinking* you can do this Miley!
Jake: (grabs Lily and kisses her before Miley kisses Eric)
Eric: Hey!
Miley: Lily?!
Lily: (doesn’t pull away)
Jake: (he doesn’t pull away either, then like 30 seconds later he does) Lily.......!!!!!
Miley: Huh?!
CHILLY-CON-CORNY!!!! I had to wack myself on the chest to stop choking!!!!! Lilly and JAKE!!!?????!!!!!
~Miley~Rox~
05-07-2007, 10:27 PM
so did eric really like lilly? and did he set miley up so jake could talk to lilly? well its stil great more more mroe
hannah_montana.boston
05-07-2007, 10:33 PM
i like da twist but............................
flower1
05-07-2007, 10:37 PM
moreeeeeeee :bluesad:
Cheerleader111
05-07-2007, 11:50 PM
but what hannah_montana. boston? and you think it's corny flower1? but thanx everyone else. :(
I'll post another chap. then see what you think.
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-08-2007, 07:21 PM
post it!!!! plz MORE!
hannah_montana.boston
05-09-2007, 04:02 PM
............ omg theres soooooooooooooo mush action and betrayel and crazyness its soooooo addictive that is why you need to write more
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-09-2007, 09:07 PM
............ omg theres soooooooooooooo mush action and betrayel and crazyness its soooooo addictive that is why you need to write more
I totally, 100% agree!!
Cheerleader111
05-10-2007, 12:51 AM
Chapter 9:A Helping Hand
(Miley, at her house, calling someone)
Miley: come on, pick up!
Machine: Hello, this is Alexis Texas. If you don’t know what to do at the tone, hang up.
Miley: Hey Alexis buddy old pal. What’s up? How’s li-
Alexis: Hello? Hannah? What do you want?
Miley: Well you see it-
Alexis: Jake isn’t it? It’s Jake!
Miley: NO!! Of course it is-well ok fine. It is.
Alexis: Mhm. Lets see. What’s the problem?
Miley: Uh, lets just say a plan to make him mad backfired.
Alexis: O- wait why were you trying to make him mad?
Miley: It’s a long story.
Alexis: Give me the short version.
Miley: (rolls eyes on her end of the phone) Well, lets just say I used to like Jake. Then he dumped me. And now he thinks he can just take me back like-like nothing ever happened!!
Alexis: And...
Miley: So I sorta kinda told him I was dating this guy I really barely know. Then Jake said to prove it. And before I could kiss the kid I was "dating" he had kissed my best friend!
Alexis: So....the guy you were dating kissed your best friend?
Miley: Huh? No! Jake kissed my best freind!
Alexis: Oh!!! Well I have the perfect plan.
Miley: ANYTHING!!!
Alexis: Ok first we.......!!!!
Miley: That. Is. Perfect.
Alexis: We’ll put it in action tomorrow. And one more thing.
Miley: Uh....yeah?
Alexis: Lose the wig Miley. I know you have the ‘best of both worlds’.
Miley: Huh?! I mean, I don’t know what you’re talking about!
Alexis: Oh, I think you do.
Miley: How did you find out?
Alexis: Oh please, very obvious to someone like me.
Miley: And....
Alexis: And because I have ‘the greatest of two worlds’ too.
Miley: What Is that supposed to mean?
Alexis: I’m ........!!!!
Miley: No way.
flower1
05-10-2007, 01:03 AM
No! Chill-con-corny, is what i say when i'm suprised.
Cheerleader111
05-10-2007, 01:06 AM
ooooooooooohhhhh. lol oops. sorry! bu thanx, thats what i wanted to do!! :P
flower1
05-10-2007, 01:15 AM
your welcome! :P
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-10-2007, 09:54 PM
OMG!!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! I'm DYING to find out who she is!!!!
Cheerleader111
05-10-2007, 10:58 PM
thanx! a few more comments and I'll post more!
Miley98
05-11-2007, 05:35 PM
you gotta write write some more (you gotta write, write, write, write more) SING TO GETHCA HEAD IN THE GAME
Cheerleader111
05-11-2007, 06:58 PM
^^lol a little more comments....then I'll post. :P
Hannah+Jake
05-11-2007, 07:00 PM
more
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-11-2007, 08:05 PM
MORE MORE plz!!
~Miley~Rox~
05-13-2007, 07:05 PM
more i want to who alexis texas is!
hannah_montana.boston
05-13-2007, 10:02 PM
more its good
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-22-2007, 06:19 PM
PLEASE!!! I need more!!!
hannah_montana.boston
05-24-2007, 06:43 PM
mor
Cheerleader111
05-24-2007, 08:13 PM
ok ok. i'll post more tonite if i have time but definitely will post it by the weekend!! I've got gymnastics you know!!!! :P
Cheerleader111
05-24-2007, 08:37 PM
Chapter 10: Phase One: Complete
Alexis: My real name’s Sara.
Miley: No way. You mean, Sara that goes to MY school?!
Alexis: Is there another Sara you know?
Miley: Actually, yeah.....
Alexis: Not the point. (Sighs) Lets just put this plan into action. K?
Miley: Sure, so phase one I just....!!!
Alexis: Precisely. Meet you at point A seven o clock sharp!
Miley: Ok, I’ll see you there. Bye!!
(At the meeting point, inside a dumpster on the beach)
Miley: (moves aside a piece of lettuce on her knee.) This is gross. Why did we have to meet in a dumpter?
Alexis: Will you just shut up? I need to hear.
Miley: Fine, but I don’t think he’s coming.
Alexis: (looks at her alarmed) Why not?! You did say you wanted to apologize right!!!
Miley: (stares at her) Uh, yeah. It’s just he probably has better things to do than meet me. (Lifts up the lid to the dumpster and starts to get out.)
Jake: (walks up to Miley) Miley? What were you doing in a dumpster?
Miley: Uh....I was looking for my.....my.....um my shoe! (Looks down at her right shoe and points at it) And I found it!!!
Jake: Um, ok....you called me here though.
Miley: Yeah, I did. Jake...(looks back at the dumpster where Alexis is then looks at the floor.) I think that you and....and....Hannah Montana should go out. Not you and Lily.
Jake: (looks at her) No offense Miley, but you aren’t exactly the best person to tell me who to go out with.
Miley: Excuse me! What do you mean by that?!
Jake: I mean with you fake dating Eric and everything.....and besides, I love Lily.
Miley: I am not ‘fake’ dating Eric and you don’t even know what love is!
Jake: Oh yeah?
Miley: Yeah!
Jake: You think so?
Miley: I know so.
Jake: Then I guess I’ll just prove it to you.
Miley: NO offense, but that didn’t exactly go too well the last time...
Jake: Well no offense, but that was you and Eric. Not me and Lily.
Miley: Jake, please, just THINK about it.
Jake: (looks at her curiously) How come this means so much to you?
Miley: What!? It means like....nothing to me.
Jake: (shrugs) fine. I’ll think about it.
Miley: (smiles) good.
Jake: (smiles and walks away)
Alexis: (walks over to Miley) Phase one, complete.(smiles deviously)
K, I tried my best. :P
Cheerleader111
05-24-2007, 10:30 PM
any comments?! i know its not THAT bad!!! lol :P
~Miley~Rox~
05-25-2007, 11:53 AM
graaet but dont make the font sooooooooooo small
hannah_montana.boston
05-25-2007, 04:33 PM
^ yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
hannah_montana.boston
05-25-2007, 04:34 PM
^ yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-25-2007, 09:15 PM
It's not bad AT ALL!!!! I REALLY need more!!!!! PLEASE post more!!!
hannah_montana.boston
05-28-2007, 01:06 AM
more
Cheerleader111
05-28-2007, 03:55 PM
uh...ok. I'll make the font bigger next time.
thanx! I'll post it by the end of the day.
I need to start writing it, i was out of town. sorry!
HideUnderMyPillow1425
05-28-2007, 04:26 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!! it is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo good!!!!!
hannah_montana.boston
05-28-2007, 05:09 PM
ok moreeeeeeeeeee
hmfhannahmontanafan
05-28-2007, 10:43 PM
more!!!! please, I'm dying for more!
YouKnowYouLoveMe
05-28-2007, 11:22 PM
Great job!
Cheerleader111
05-28-2007, 11:25 PM
sorry guys, i have to go realz soon!
But I'll post more the next time I'm on!!
I'm so sorry!!
hannah_montana.boston
05-29-2007, 07:05 PM
more
Khockeygrl4
05-29-2007, 10:04 PM
more *gets on knees* pleaz!!!! lol
Cheerleader111
05-30-2007, 12:38 AM
Here's the next chapter, sorry it took so long guys!! I've been realz busy with two fanfics!! Hope you like it!!:
Chapter 11: Who’s Miley Stewart?
(Backstage at a Hannah concert)
Hannah: (walks offstage)
Lola: Miley that was great!!
Hannah: (glares at her then yells real loudly) I DON’T KNOW WHO THIS MILEY GIRL IS BUT IT’S A REALLY NICE NAME!!!
Lola: Oops. Sorry Mi-I mean Hannah. Sorry!
Hannah: (smiles) It’s cool. Just be careful!
Lola: Got it.
Hannah: Is there something that you wanted?
Lola: Oh yeah! I just wanted to tell you that someone is out there watching you.
Hannah: (stares at her) EVERYONE out there is watching me!! That’s why they’re here! (Starts to walk away)
Lola: (rolls her eyes) But JAKE is out there watching you.
Hannah: (smiles) Reeeealllly?
Lola: Uh yeah. Really.
Hannah: (smiles deviously)
Lola: Uh...Hannah? Is there something you need to tell me?
Hannah: Nothin besides the fact that me and Alexis...aka Sara-
Lola: Sara?! The one that goes to our school?!!
Hannah: Is there any other Sara you know?
Lola: Actually yeah...quite a few really....
Hannah: ANYWAY...we came up with an evil plan to embarrass Jake for embarassing me.
Lola: But-But he’s so cute!! And I’m his girlfriend now!!
Hannah: Sorry LOLA, but you knew you shouldn’t have said yes to begin with.
Lola: Fine, I’m over him.
Hannah: Good. Now...the plan is to ----------!!
Lola: (smiles) Miley that’s genius!!
Hannah: I know I know!
Lola: (looks over Hannah’s shoulder) Quick Hannah! Here he comes now!!
Hannah: (smiles then turns around) Hey Jake!
Jake: Hey Hannah! (Hugs her) It’s nice to see you again!
Hannah: Same to you...so what’s up?
Jake: I know this might sound stupid but....
Hannah: But what?
Jake: Well I was wondering...
Hannah: Wondering what?
Jake: If you would like to go out with me??
Hannah: (gasps) Jake! I’d love to! Wait-but what about that Miley girl in the magazines?
Jake: Who?
Hannah: You know....Miley Stewart....or somethin like that.
Jake: Oh her. That’s a stupid rumor. I don’t even know who Miley Stewart is.
Hannah: Really?
Jake: Yeah...really.
Hannah: Ok then. Then I’d love to go out with you Jake!
Jake: Cool! Well...I guess I’ll see you later Hannah.
Hannah: Can’t wait! (Watches him leave)
Lola: Phase two complete?
Hannah: Phase two complete.
Cheerleader111
05-30-2007, 12:56 AM
Please comment!! :)
Lanae_M
05-30-2007, 11:29 AM
MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the story!
YouKnowYouLoveMe
05-30-2007, 02:24 PM
:o soo good!
Hannah+Jake
05-30-2007, 03:05 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hannah_montana.boston
05-30-2007, 04:19 PM
wow is each chapter ( now) a phase?? more
Khockeygrl4
05-30-2007, 05:39 PM
wats phase three!?!?!?!? more pleaz!!!!!!!!!
Cheerleader111
05-30-2007, 09:53 PM
Thanx guys!!! :)
And it's all a phase cause.....
uh just because?? I don't know...
Cause its a big thing now??
Yupp. :P
Khockeygrl4
05-30-2007, 10:57 PM
so r u gunna post more?!?!?!?
Cheerleader111
05-31-2007, 02:06 AM
Tomorrow...if I'm even on.
So sorry!! I'll post two chapters though!!! :)
hannah_montana.boston
05-31-2007, 04:19 PM
yayzyzs (yay-zz-y-zz-s)
Cheerleader111
05-31-2007, 08:35 PM
Ok I'm on today.
So only one chapter. lol
Sorry! :P
Cheerleader111
05-31-2007, 08:59 PM
Here's the next chapter!! Enjoy :P:
Chapter 12: Lily’s Little Secret
(Back at school in the hallway)
Miley: (walks up to Lily) Hey Lily, so...you got your lines down?
Lily: Yeah...I think so.
Miley: Good. (Turns around) There’s Jake...its showtime! (Pushes Lily forward)
Lily: (scoots back a bit)
Miley: (pushes her forward again) Goooooo get em tiger!!
Lily: Miley...I’m not so sure about this.
Miley: Lily...I thought we agreed that you were to DUMP him!!
Lily: Yeah Miley, but-but...
Miley: But what?
Lily: We were so happy together!!!
Miley: (raises an eyebrow) You’ve only been together for about a day.
Lily: And we were so happy in that time!
Jake: (comes walking over) Hey LilyPoo. (Smiling)
Lily: Hey Jakiekins. (Smiling goofily)
Miley: (clears her throat)
Jake: Oh hey Miley. Didn’t see you there.
Miley: Hey Jake. We were just talking about you.
Jake: Trying to get Lily to dump me most likely.
Miley: PSSHHHHH!! NO!!
Lily: But I thought you said that you wanted me to-
Oliver: (Comes walkin over) Hey guys!
Miley: Go away Oliver!
Oliver: GEEZ Miley!
Lily: Can’t you see were kinda busy here?
Oliver: Even if I wanted to I couldn’t. You guys are in front of my locker.
Miley: (moves out the way)
Jake: ANYWAY.....LilyPoo...don’t listen to Miley. She’s just jealous.
Miley: Don’t listen to him! He’s the one dating Hannah!!
Jake: Hannah who?
Miley: (Stares at him shocked) Hannah Montana!!
Jake: Who’s dating Hannah Montana?
Miley: You!!
Jake: No I’m not! I said I’d think about it.
Lily: (mad now) Jake I was there!!
Jake: Wait- you believe her over me?
Lily: I saw you ask her out!
Jake: What are you talking about Lily? I didn’t see you last night.
Lily: Well Lola saw you!!
Jake: Lola?
Lily: No I saw you!!
Miley: Lily......!!
Jake: What is going on here??
Lily: I’m Lola!!! And I saw you last night ask out Hannah Montana!! So now I’m dumping YOU Jake. (Runs away mad/sad too)
Jake: (turns to Miley) She’s Lola??
Miley: (turns away from him) That’s what she said.
Jake: Well If she’s Lola then that must mean that you must-------!!!!
Cheerleader111
05-31-2007, 09:03 PM
Please comment!! :)
Cheerleader111
05-31-2007, 10:12 PM
No comments no chapters people!! :P
smileyface93
05-31-2007, 10:16 PM
plz more!! its so0 good!! ill be ur best online buddies lol
smilez
05-31-2007, 10:19 PM
Very good. It makes the readers want to come back and read the second chapter.
Cheerleader111
05-31-2007, 10:24 PM
lolz
I like new Online Buddies!! :P
And thanks!!
Khockeygrl4
05-31-2007, 10:50 PM
ahhhhhhhhh!!! does he think shes hannah?!?!?! i neeeeeeed more!!!
Cheerleader111
06-01-2007, 12:50 AM
Thanks!!
Just two more comments, and you'll get the next chapter!! :)
Cheerleader111
06-01-2007, 01:16 AM
I won't be on tomorrow...so I'll just post it now. lol
So don't complain if I'm not on tomorrow!! lol
Posting New Chapter when it's finished.
Sorry...I posted one from my other fanfic!
So you will get this chapter which was supposed to be posted and a new chapter.
Cheerleader111
06-01-2007, 01:16 AM
Please comment!
Good nite! :)
Cheerleader111
06-01-2007, 06:58 PM
^^
haha.
I'm serious about wat i said.
no comment= no more fanfics!!! :o
K-star7
06-01-2007, 07:13 PM
:) Please Write More!
hannah_montana.boston
06-01-2007, 07:57 PM
more
moree
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-01-2007, 09:45 PM
MORE!!!!!!! I really want more!!!!!!!
Cheerleader111
06-01-2007, 10:40 PM
Thanx!! I'll post more as soon as I get home. It's saved on that computer.
hannah_montana.boston
06-01-2007, 11:14 PM
oooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Khockeygrl4
06-02-2007, 12:03 AM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/Kelshockygrl4/other/more.jpg
Cheerleader111
06-02-2007, 12:11 PM
^^
That's so cool!!
Ok, finishing it up. :)
Cheerleader111
06-02-2007, 12:19 PM
OMG!!!
Sorry, I just realized I posted the chapter for my other fanfic!!
Lily, Hannah, and Jake don't act in this one!!
Oh noes!! :O
I'll edit it so you get a new chapter guys. I'm so sorry!
hannah_montana.boston
06-02-2007, 12:58 PM
haha
miley-girl
06-02-2007, 01:08 PM
PLEASE WRITE MORE. THEY ARE SO GOOD!:D
HannahMontanaX3
06-02-2007, 02:43 PM
more
hannah_montana.boston
06-03-2007, 12:41 AM
morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrr
Cheerleader111
06-03-2007, 12:53 PM
I have the next chapter. This is the one that I was supposed to post :P :
Chapter 13: Imagine That
Jake: Well if she’s Lola then that means that you must have been there too!!
Miley: (lets out a sigh of relief)
Jake: Miley?
Miley: Huh? Oh yeah. I was there.
Jake: Look, I know you’re still mad at me because of the whole Romania thing.
Miley: Yeah.....
Jake: But I do care about Lily!
Miley: Oh yeah?! Then why did you ask out Hannah last night?! Remember? I was there!
Jake: Why do you care?!
Miley: Lily is my best friend Jake. Why wouldn’t I care?!
Jake: Miley...
Miley: Jake...
Jake: (sighs) Why do you have to be so hard to work with?
Miley: Oh great, so now I’m hard to work with!
Jake: Miley...I didn’t mean it that way.
Miley: Well you said it that way.
Jake: Look-
Miley: No Jake, you look. Lily is my best friend. You apparently dumped me for her-
Jake: Bu-
Miley: Don’t interrupt. Now you asked out Hannah Montana, while you were still dating Lily. We were there. We saw you. Stop trying to hide it. Now, based on all those facts, give me one reason why I should help YOU.
Jake: Um....
Miley: Exactly.
(Miley starts to walk off)
Jake: Miley!
Miley: (turns back around) What?!
Jake: (runs up to her) I have a reason for everything I’ve done in the past week. I do!
Miley: Oh yeah?! What would that be Jake?
Jake: Someone....someone....
Miley: When that bell rings I’m leaving. You don’t have all day.
Jake: (takes in a huge breath) Ok....well, someone made me. They said they would tell my deepest secret to the world if I didn’t cooperate.
Miley: What secret? Who?
Jake: I cant tell you either one! That would make it pointless.
Miley: Then why did you mention it?
Jake: Because...I need you to trust me Miley. I need you to.
Miley: Then tell me Jake! Tell me the truth!!
Jake: (Lets out a breath) Ok. The person who is making me do all this stuff is-
(Bell Rings)
Miley: (rolls her eyes) Imagine that. (Walks away mad)
__________________________________________________ ____
You know what to do. ;)
Sorry it's shorter than the other chapters
it has to end that way.
K-star7
06-03-2007, 02:04 PM
please write more!!
HannahMontanaX3
06-03-2007, 02:32 PM
Omg Moreeeeeeeee
Cheerleader111
06-03-2007, 02:33 PM
^^
Thankies. :)
Two more comments.
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-03-2007, 02:36 PM
MORE!!!!!!! what's his secret?! It's killing me!
HannahMontanaX3
06-03-2007, 02:37 PM
oh please check out my fanfic:
What Happened To Us - Hannah Montana
Cheerleader111
06-03-2007, 02:40 PM
Thanks!
One more comment!!
Ok, going there right now.
Writing as we type. :)
Hannah+Jake
06-03-2007, 03:11 PM
more more more more more more more more more
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-03-2007, 03:49 PM
yay!!! post it!!!! (I'm dying for more!)
hannah_montana.boston
06-03-2007, 03:56 PM
more
Khockeygrl4
06-03-2007, 10:52 PM
ahhhhhhh!!! i need to kno now!!! more pleaz!!!
hannah_montana.boston
06-04-2007, 04:26 PM
moorrreeee
Cheerleader111
06-04-2007, 06:59 PM
Here it is!! Sorry for the wait:
Chapter 14: Gee Yah Think??
(At the beach)
Miley: (walks onto the beach towards Oliver) Hey.
Oliver: Hey. What’s wrong with you?
Miley: Jake. That’s what’s wrong with me.
Oliver: What did Jake say to you?
Miley: It’s what he’s not saying that’s killing me.
Oliver: Wait-what do you mean?
Miley: Jake says that someone forced him to break up with me, hook up with Lily, ask Hannah out, then lie to Lily about it.
Oliver: (laughs)
Miley: What’s so funny?
Oliver: And you believe him?
Miley: (stares at the ocean) Yeah. Yeah...I guess I do.
Oliver: (snorts) Well that’s the dumbest story I’VE ever heard.
Miley: Is it really that hard to believe though?
Oliver: Uh...yeah!
Miley: Everyone has secrets Oliver, is it so hard to believe that Jake has one and someone is blackmailing him?
Oliver: No one has a secret that big Miley. (Rolls his eyes)
Miley: Oliver?! Hello?
Oliver: Uh...hi.
Miley: (rolls her eyes) I have a huge secret too you know. Maybe Jake is two people too!
Oliver: I don’t think he is.
Miley: Why not?
Oliver: Cause when he acts, he’s Jake. And when he’s at school..he’s Jake. So when does he use his other disguise?
Miley: I don’t know!! I was trying to think of possibilities.
Oliver: Well...you can ‘x’ that one out.
Miley: Thanks Oliver.
Oliver: No problem.
Lily: (walks up to them silently.)
Miley: Hey Lily.
Lily: Hey.
Oliver: Are you ok?
Lily: (smiles) Oh yeah!! I’m wonderful!!
Oliver: (looks at the floor) Sorry.
Lily: It’s ok.
Miley: Lily, Jake is a jerk. We all knew that when he dumped me.
Lily: Yeah...but...I thought that maybe he would actually like me more than you.
Miley: (confused) I thought you didn’t like him.
Lily: That’s what makes it worse. I don’t. It just would’ve felt nice to...I don’t know...actually have something you wanted. I mean, you get to be Hannah Montana AND you get to have a hottie of the year over there like you too!! (sighs)
Miley: Lily-
Lily: I gotta go. (Gets up and leaves)
Oliver: I think she’s depressed.
Miley: (rolls her eyes) Gee yah think??
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-04-2007, 07:17 PM
Moooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HannahMontanaX3
06-04-2007, 07:50 PM
more!
Cheerleader111
06-04-2007, 11:31 PM
^^
four more comments!!
muhahahaha!!! :P
hannah_montana.boston
06-05-2007, 04:42 PM
1.mor
2.yoyo typ more
3.m-mo-more i said m-mo-more wat
4.we're going to England
we're going to france
we're going to europe cause she learned how to memorize all the stuff (lil rap)
now word
5.plez type more
a fan named dj
Cheerleader111
06-05-2007, 06:54 PM
lolz I'm not at home rite now.
I'll post it when I am...:P
hannah_montana.boston
06-06-2007, 04:22 PM
ok more more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeemore more more moreeeeeeeeeeeee
pancake_panda21
06-06-2007, 08:32 PM
if u dont cooperate ima tell ur biggest secret too! LOL imjk
Cheerleader111
06-07-2007, 02:21 AM
haha lolz
give me ten minutes my peeps.
loljkjk
but seriously, i need ten minutes! :P
Cheerleader111
06-07-2007, 02:47 AM
I have it!! Sorry it took so long: I wasn't at home.
Practice. -sigh-
Here you go:
Chapter 15:It’s That Time.
(At Miley’s house)
Miley: (walks in and slams the door behind her)
Robbie Ray: Hey Miles. I was just making some pancakes.
Miley: (scrunches up her nose) Why would you be making pancakes in the middle of the day?
Robbie Ray: Jackson ate everything else.
Miley: (sighs)
Robbie Ray: Look, I’m sorry I’ve been too busy to stop your brother from being a p-
Miley: No Dad. It’s not that.
Robbie Ray: Then what is it Bud?
Miley: (hesitates)
Robbie Ray: Come on. You know you can tell me anything.
Miley: (smiles) Yeah I guess I can.
(Miley starts to explain the whole story starting with the kiss before Jake left, to Jake leaving, to meeting Eric, to having Jake come back, to having Jake challenge her, to having Jake kiss Lily when she was supposed to be kissing Eric, to Eric liking Lily, to Miley asking for Alexis’s help, to them making up their so called perfect plan, to Jake asking out Hannah, to Hannah excepting, to Jake lying to Lily. She takes a deep breath at the end)
Robbie Ray: (stares at her with his mouth open) Well bud...looks like you’re in a stickier situation then Uncle Earl trying to get out of his armchair. And you know how sticky THAT gets.
Miley: I don’t get it. How am I in a sticky situation.
Robbie Ray: Well the way I see it is you can either tell Jake the truth —
Miley: Wait! You think I should tell Jake that I’m Hannah Montan?
Robbie Ray: (nods) Well its obvious to me that you’re more in love with him then your Aunt Dolly at the shoe store. That woman can take hours!
Miley: (stands up) Have you not been listening to one word that I’ve said?! I hate Jake!
Robbie Ray: Why?
Miley: He left me for Romania!! He left me here by myself Dad! (Tears swell up in her eyes)
Robbie Ray: Well... if you hate him so much...why are you trying to make him jealous with this kid Eric? Why do you still care Miles?
Miley: (stares at him confused.) What do you mean?
Robbie Ray: You admitted that you used that other kid. You used him to make Jake mad.
Miley: (sighs) Yeah....I guess I do still like him.
Robbie Ray: Which takes us back to Hannah Montana. I think It’s time for Jake to know the truth honey.
Miley: (nods smiling) Yeah...I guess it is Dad. (Gets up and starts heading to the door)
Robbie Ray: Oh Miles?!
Miley: (half way out the door) Yeah dad?!
Robbie Ray: A kid named Eric called earlier.
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You know what to do!!;)
(comment)
Hannah+Jake
06-07-2007, 11:02 AM
more
thobi123
06-07-2007, 03:31 PM
more
K-star7
06-07-2007, 03:56 PM
please write more!!
hannah_montana.boston
06-07-2007, 04:57 PM
hahahaha more more
Cheerleader111
06-07-2007, 07:33 PM
Thanks shyous!!!
I'll post more when I get home. :P
hannah_montana.boston
06-07-2007, 07:49 PM
yay
Cheerleader111
06-07-2007, 11:44 PM
^^
Thanks!!
I'm so sorry, I'm not at home yet
I'm at a birthday party for my aunt. :P
hannah_montana.boston
06-08-2007, 04:12 PM
^^^^ ooh a party time 4 insperation
Cheerleader111
06-08-2007, 09:15 PM
^^
haha yeah.
but i'm STILL NOT at home. sorry.
hannah_montana.boston
06-08-2007, 10:56 PM
^^^ok
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 02:14 PM
KK, I'm at home now.
I have to eat breakfast.
Give me like forty minutes and I'll promise it'll be up.
Thanks so much!! :P
pancake_panda21
06-09-2007, 02:22 PM
u take 40 minutes to eat breakfast!? dude with a story this good u shouldn't even eat breakfast!
LOL, jk, but uhm, i only take 5 minutes...i quickly shove down a waffle and drink my orange juice, ROFL
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 03:41 PM
HAHA. sorry.
breakfast is like a family event.
Where we like talk and stuff. :P
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 04:36 PM
sorry!
We watched HSM together today.
Just me and my mom.
yeah...
well here's the next chapter!! :
Chapter 16: I’m Hannah Montana
Miley: (calls Eric back)
Eric: Hello?
Miley: Hey Eric. You called?
Eric: Oh, yeah. I was wondering if you could help me out.
Miley: (sighs) Ok. But Eric, first I wanna apologize.
Eric: For what?
Miley: I completely used you, even though I knew you liked Lily.
Eric: Oh, yeah. That kind of sucked.
Miley: Yeah. So what do you need help with?
Eric: Lily.
Miley: (shrugs) What about her?
Eric: I want to ask her out. Will you find out if she likes me?
Miley: Done.
Eric: Really?
Miley: I owe you one.
Eric: Thanks Miley.
Miley: (smiles) Kk. See yah at school tomorrow.
Eric: Kk. See yah. (Hangs up)
(Next day at schooll)
Miley: (walks up to Lily) So...my dad convinced me to tell Jake the truth.
Lily: Really? You’re gonna tell him that you’re Hannah?
Miley: Yeah....(sees Jake at his locker)...I think I’ll just tell him now actually.
Lily: Good Luck. (Opens her locker)
Miley: Lily, you’re ok with this right?
Lily: (shrugs) I’m fine Miley. Really, I’m over him. But you- you and Jake are perfect.
Miley: (smiles) Thanks Lily.
Lily: (smiles then punches her lightly) Go get em Tiger.
Miley: (laughs then walks away towards Jake) Jake, I need to tell you something. It’s kind of personal actually.
Jake: Miley, before you go, I have to tell you something.
Miley: You can go first.
Jake: Miley, Eric isn’t who you think he is. He’s —
Miley: Yeah I know. He likes Lily.
Jake: No Miley, you don’t know. That’s not it he’s —
Miley: Jake, I’m Hannah Montana.
Jake: What?!
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 04:36 PM
Please comment. :P
HannahMontanaX3
06-09-2007, 04:39 PM
More!
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 04:45 PM
Thanks!!
Anyone else???
I know you can type peoples!!! :P
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 05:04 PM
Please comment!! :)
hannah_montana.boston
06-09-2007, 05:05 PM
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
K-star7
06-09-2007, 05:10 PM
please write moree!!
Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 05:12 PM
Thankies!!
I have to go to my dad's this weekend.
I'll try to post two whole chapters when I come back.
Cause that's kinda long to wait I guess.
hannah_montana.boston
06-09-2007, 05:15 PM
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Cheerleader111
06-09-2007, 05:18 PM
lolz
i understand.
i completely understand. :P
Khockeygrl4
06-09-2007, 05:46 PM
ahhhhhhhhhh!!! will he believe her?!?!?!?!? or think hes crazy!!!! more pleaz!!!
Hannah+Jake
06-09-2007, 05:50 PM
more
hannah_montana.boston
06-09-2007, 10:18 PM
have fun at ur dads but write lata
pancake_panda21
06-10-2007, 12:24 PM
More!!! HURRYY UP!
hannah_montana.boston
06-10-2007, 08:57 PM
come back weekends almost over!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-10-2007, 11:10 PM
moreeeeeeee!!!!!!! :)
pancake_panda21
06-10-2007, 11:53 PM
i'm mad at u for not posting... WAHHH!!!
marshmallows6565
06-11-2007, 01:50 AM
jake is eric?
heyitswhatever
06-11-2007, 11:36 AM
OH.
MY.
GAWD.
who is Eric ??
this story is getting SO good!
:D
hannah_montana.boston
06-11-2007, 04:41 PM
more its MONDAY and fyi mondays not a weekend day its a week day moreeeeeeeeeee
heyitswhatever
06-11-2007, 09:59 PM
yeah! keep going! you've got me hooked!
hannah_montana.boston
06-11-2007, 10:09 PM
almost tuesday and youre not back yet ??????????????24 more houre and ill b callin FBI
Cheerleader111
06-11-2007, 11:46 PM
Is it really necessary to lock all my doors and windows?!:o
Next chapter! :
Chapter 17:No!! You dumped ME!!
Miley: I’M Hannah Montana.
Jake: (shakes his head) Miley, is this your idea of getting back at me?
Miley: Huh?
Jake: You know, for the whole Lily incident?
Miley: Why the heck would I get back at you by telling you something that’s true?
Jake: I don’t know!! Maybe you’ll think that if I see Hannah tomorrow, I might embarrass myself!
Miley: Jake, that’s stupid. I’m telling you the truth!
Jake: How do I know that? You hate me Miley. (Stares away at the floor)
Miley: No I don’t.
Jake: You’ve hated me ever since I got back.
Miley: What did you expect?! You DUMPED ME!!!
Jake: No I didn’t! You dumped ME!!
Miley: What?!
Jake: Yeah! Back in Romania, I got a phone call from a close friend of yours saying you were gonna dump me!
Miley: Well I never said that! I’ve been waiting forever to see you again, why would I dump you?
Jake: I don’t know Miley. But to tell the truth....it kind of....hurt. A lot actually.
Miley: I’m-I’m so sorry Jake. But I really liked you. And I would’ve never, EVER, dumped you.
Jake: (smiles) I would never dump you either Miley.
Miley: (smiles) Do you believe me?
Jake: (confused) Huh?
Miley: Do you believe that I’m Hannah Montana?
Jake: (runs his hands through his hair) I would love to Miley, but....proof would be nice. (Picks up his bag that’s lying on the floor.) Look, I’ll see you later?
Miley: Yeah...that would be nice.
Lily: (eavesdropping near by) Hey Miley!
Miley: Did you call Jake while he was in Romania?
Lily: No!! I heard him say that! I don’t know if you can believe him on that one.
Miley: (shrugs) Well...if I want him to believe me....then I might want to start believing him.
Lily: He needs proof though.
Miley: (smiles) Well...if it’s proof he wants, then it’s proof he’ll get.
I have to finish the next chapter. Give me like ten minutes.:P
Khockeygrl4
06-12-2007, 12:00 AM
more more more pleaz!!!
heyitswhatever
06-12-2007, 12:04 AM
Wow,
totally good right now.
:))
She sounds a little "devilish", like she has a plan
:D
Cheerleader111
06-12-2007, 12:32 AM
lolz thanks!!
I have to lengthen the next chapter, it's WAY too short!!
Give me a little more time. :P
heyitswhatever
06-12-2007, 12:35 AM
Ok, and I still want to know what about Eric! :D
Cheerleader111
06-12-2007, 12:45 AM
He's like a new kid who likes Lily.
Well...there may be a little more to it than that.
Maybe.
Who knows??? :P
heyitswhatever
06-12-2007, 12:57 AM
Well, remember ?
Jake was trying to tell Miley something about him...
as if he were the one blackmailing him...
:/
hannah_montana.boston
06-12-2007, 05:46 PM
no need to exclude your self from socity i just wanted more and i still want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
pancake_panda21
06-12-2007, 06:53 PM
If u want to hear me repeat what i have said in the last few pages, i would rwrite more!!!!!!!
HannahMontanaX3
06-12-2007, 07:15 PM
More
pancake_panda21
06-12-2007, 07:26 PM
i still wanteth to knoweth what the hecketh with happeneth
hannah_montana.boston
06-12-2007, 07:30 PM
^^^^me toooooooooo
are you going to post anymore??
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 04:10 PM
sorry i hurt my ankles,(yes BOTH!! what a dweeb), and was kinda busy trying to heal them....;)
Here's the next chapter! I'm typing the other one right now, you guys definitely deserve two right about now:
Chapter 18: It’s LOLA!!
(At a celebrity party)
Lola: Pst! Hannah?
Hannah: (turns around from her celebrity friends and walks towards Lola) Yeah?
Lola: Have you seen him yet?
Hannah: Negative. I really have to find him before the party’s over! It’s already been two hours.
Lola: Are you sure he’s even coming?!
Hannah: Oh please Lola! This is the biggest party of the year, OF COURSE he’s coming!! (waves hand in front of her face to show how ridiculous that was)
Lola: Ok, whatever you say.
Tracy: (walks up to them) HANNAH DAHLING!! (does the fake kiss thing on each side)
Hannah: Tracy dahling. So excited to see you again!
Tracy: I KNOW!! I’ve missed you like so much! But I hear you’re very "busy" these days. (Winks)
Hannah: Huh?
Tracy: (smiles)
Lola: (clears her throat.)
Tracy: Oh, hey Lila.
Lola: It’s Lola!
Tracy: (rolls her eyes) Who cares?
Hannah: (clears her throat)
Lola: Nice to see you Tracy.
Tracy: Same.
Hannah: (smiles) That’s better. So Tracy have you seen Jake?
Tracy: No, I don’t think he’s coming.
Lola: (mutters) Told yah so.
Hannah: (ignores Lola) But he has to be!!
Tracy: Well he didn’t reserve.
Hannah: How do you know?
Tracy: Oh please, this is Hollywood! Everyone who’s anyone knows.
Lola: I didn’t.
Tracy: Well I did say everyone who’s anyone. And naturally, that doesn’t include you Lizzie.
Lola: LOLA!
Hannah: Guys!
Lola and Tracy: (they shut up)
Hannah: Thank you. (Turns to Tracy) Tracy, I really have to see Jake. Don’t you have any idea where to find him?
Tracy: Um...there’s a couple of places we always met at.
Hannah: Met?
Tracy: (blushes) Ran into each other. Don’t be ridiculous.
Lola: Wow, he really is a player isn’t he?
Hannah: (rolls her eye) Met Lola. I mean, he was single at some point. So where do I find him?
Tracy: The beach is my best bet.
Hannah: The beach?
Tracy: Yes, he always loved taking walks on the beach.
Hannah: (shoots her a look)
Tracy: We were close friends.
Lola: Riiiiiiiight.
Tracy: (stares at her) Nobody asked you L-
Hannah: Guys!!
Lola and Tracy: (they shut up again)
Hannah: Thanks Trace. (Does the fake kiss on each side thing.) Lets go Lola.
Lola: (glares at Tracy on her way out)
Tracy: (smiles and waves)
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I had no idea about what to name this chapter, so ignore the title name. lol
Please comment!!:P
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 04:32 PM
PLEASE comment. I work really hard on these. Thanks! :)
HannahMontanaX3
06-14-2007, 04:59 PM
more
i really like it! Awesome job
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 05:27 PM
thanks!!
wrting more as we...type.
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 05:31 PM
g2g post more later!! ;)
hannah_montana.boston
06-14-2007, 05:43 PM
lolas right jake = playa moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-14-2007, 05:57 PM
MORE!!!!! love it!!!! <3
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 06:04 PM
Chapter 19: You Don’t Even Care.
(In Hannah’s limo)
Hannah: I hope he’s still there.
Lola: (stares at the floor)
Hannah: (stares out the window)
Lola: What if he’s not? (Says really quietly)
Hannah: What Lily?
Lola: (looks up) I said what if he’s not?
Hannah: (confused) He.....he has to be.
Lola: How come? Why do you even want him back?!
Hannah: Lola, are you ok?
Lola: I’m fine. It’s just....forget it. (Stares out the window)
Hannah: I’m your best friend. I know when something is wrong. Just....tell me.
Lola: You have Jake. I wanted Jake. Jake wanted you. You had Eric. Eric wanted you. You can be Hannah and —
Hannah: You get to be Lola.
Lola: (rolls her eyes) Oh please, like that can compare to you.
Hannah: Lily, please, tell me what’s really going on. I don’t understand.
Lola: (tearing up) That’s just it! You don’t even see it, but you’re the one hurting me Miley. Not Jake. You’re the reason I haven’t been me in the past two days.
Hannah: Lily...
Lola: Like I said, forget it. (Wipes her eyes)
Hannah: Lily, how I’m I hurting you? I can’t fix what I did if you can’t tell me.
Lola: It’s not what you did. It’s what you’re doing.
Hannah: I’m confused now.
Lola: (shaking her head) Jake.
Hannah: What does he have to do with anything?
Lola: He said he loved me. He said I was the best girlfriend ever....(looks up from the floor) then he asked out Hannah Montana. And instead of comforting me.....
Hannah: (looks shocked, sorry, and confused)
Lola: ......you’re going to meet up with him. To get back with him. To prove to him you’re who you say you are. It’s like he was using me. And it worked. And you don’t even care.
Hannah: Lily, I —
Lola: (shakes her head) No, it’s stupid. I know. Forget everything I just said. I’m really happy for you. I mean, you guys were always perfect for each other.
Hannah: No Lily, if you don’t feel right about this, then I can’t do it. You’re my best friend, and Jake could never get between that.
Lola: (smiles) I appreciate that. Really....but I WILL be fine.
Hannah: (in her head) I really want to do the right thing. If Lily isn’t comfortable, then I should say that I’ll lie to Jake, maybe even dump him as Hannah. But I could be happy. I could love Jake and he could love me. We were meant for each other and I know it! (Turns back to Lily) Are you sure you’re alright with this Lily? I mean...you have to be completely comfortable with him to do this.
Lola: (shakes her head and looks down at the floor) Yeah Miles. Yeah. I’m fine.
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You know what to do.;)
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-14-2007, 06:08 PM
awww, MORE!!!!!!!! :P
HannahMontanaX3
06-14-2007, 06:41 PM
more
pancake_panda21
06-14-2007, 07:14 PM
i want Lily to get Eric, and Miley to get Jake! I WANT THEM TO!
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 10:27 PM
:( I know I know. so sad.
Chapter 20: I Just Have To Deal With It I Guess
(The limo stops. Hannah and Lola get out of the car barely saying a word to each other.)
Hannah: (turns to Lily) I think you should wait here.
Lola: (nods) Yeah, I’ll be at Rico’s.
Hannah: They’re still open?
Lola: Hopefully. (walks towards the snack shop)
Hannah: (walks towards the beach)
.....A COUPLE MINUTES LATER.......
Hannah: (walks down the beach and sees a figure sitting there.) Jake? (Walks over and sits down next to him)
Jake: (smiles) Hey Hannah.
Hannah: (smiles) You still don’t believe me?
Jake: Miley?
Hannah: Yeah, that’s me.
Jake: (shakes his head and looks out towards the ocean) Wow. I don’t believe it.
Hannah: This isn’t enough?!
Jake: (laughs) No...I mean it’s a shock to see you. As Hannah and everything. (Turns back towards her) So...it was really you on Zombie High?
Hannah: (smiles) Yeah, it was me.
Jake: No wonder Hannah was so set on changing the script.
Hannah: (blushes) Right. Sorry about that. I changed my mind at the end though.
Jake: Yeah I know. That’s why I kissed you. I knew you liked me.
Hannah: (rolls her eyes) Oh please. Like you didn’t like me.
Jake: (shrugs) I guess I did a bit.
Hannah: (laughs)
Jake: (gets up and helps her up)
Hannah: Thanks.
Jake: I’m really happy you told me your secret.
Hannah: (smiles) I’m happy I told you too. Now...I don’t have to hide anything from you.
Jake: (smiles then leans in and kisses her.)
Hannah: (pulls away after awhile) Wow. I forgot how good that felt.
Jake: (smiles) How? Too busy kissing Eric?
Hannah: (rolls her eyes)
(They walk down to Rico’s together to find that Lily’s not there anymore)
Hannah: Oh, I have to go find Lola.
Jake: You mean Lily?
Hannah: When she’s with me, she’s Lola.
Jake: (laughs) Right. Who lives in Canada.
Hannah: Where the moose are. (Rolls her eyes smiling this time then walks away)
....NOT TOO LONG LATER.....
Lola: (talking on the phone) Oliver!! I told her how I felt!! She completely shut me down!
Hannah: (hides behind a tree when she hears Lily’s voice.)
Lola: I know she wants to be happy, and I want her to be happy too, but it’s like she didn’t hear a word that I said!!
(There was a slight pause because Oliver was talking)
Lola: Forget it. She doesn’t care. She never did. She likes Jake more than her best friend, and I just have to deal with that I guess. (She listens a little longer) Yeah, see yah Oliver. (Hangs up)
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You know what to do.
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-14-2007, 10:34 PM
MOREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! plz? :P
HannahMontanaX3
06-14-2007, 10:52 PM
OMG more. she even asked if Lilly was okay with it. OMG so rude.
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 10:57 PM
Thanks!!
One more comment!! :)
Khockeygrl4
06-14-2007, 11:09 PM
more more more more pleaz!!!
Cheerleader111
06-14-2007, 11:15 PM
Here's the next chapter!! :)
Thanks for the comments:
Chapter 21: HELLO?!
Lola: (turns around to find Hannah there.) Oh....um....hey.
Hannah: (turns around to leave)
Lola: Miley!
Hannah: (turns back around) Why didn’t you just TELL me?!
Lola: I DID tell you! You just didn’t care!!
Hannah: You said you didn’t mind!
Lola: You’re my best friend Miley!! How could I not care that you’re ditching me!
Hannah: I am not ditching you! And if you weren’t so busy calling Oliver to talk about me behind my back then you would know that!
Lola: Look, I’m sorry for talking about you Miley, but I can’t believe you didn’t see this coming!
Hannah: See what coming?
Lola: (walks towards Rico’s)
Hannah: (follows her) See what coming Lily?
Lola: (takes a seat) Our friendship....completely falling apart because of Jake.
Hannah: How could I see that coming? Our friendship is NOT going to fall apart.
Lola: It hasn’t already?
Hannah: I promise you, it hasn’t.
Lola: (smiles) I feel like we’ve fought and made up several times this week.
Hannah: (laughs) Cause we have.
Lola: (nods) But you will always be my best friend Miley. I’m just not sure if I’ll be yours.
Hannah: Lily, how could you not know the answer to that?
Lola: (leans in and gives her a long hug)
Hannah: (hugs her back)
Lola: Thanks Miley. (Lets go)
Hannah: (gets up) Come on, it’s getting kind of chilly.
(They walk back to the limo where Jake is now waiting)
Jake: Lily.
Lola: Lola.
Jake: I know your secret, you can give it up already.
Lola: I don’t care if you know. But in public, it’s Lola. (climbs into the car)
Jake: (raises his hands in surrender) Fine I give up.
Hannah: (kisses his cheek) Don’t give up. Give her some...time.
Jake: (smiles) For you, anytime.
Hannah: (smiles then gets into the limo)
Jake: (follows after her)
Lola: (pulls of her wig and throws it aside)
Hannah: (pulls off her wig too) Home please.
(The car starts to move and the air is filled with total tension)
Lily: (her phone rings) Hello?
(Some faint talking on the other end of the phone)
Lily: Hello?
Miley: (stares at Lily)
Lily: Who is this? Is anyone there?
Jake: (sends Miley a questioning look)
Miley: (thinking in her head) Eric??
Lily: HELLO?! (hangs up)
Miley: Who was that?
Lily: (shrugs) Wrong number I guess.
Miley: Right. Wrong number.
Lily: Are you ok? You don’t look too good.
Miley: Yeah, yeah, I’m fine.
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Comment please.:P
munchkingirl822969
06-15-2007, 02:57 AM
More please!!
pancake_panda21
06-15-2007, 03:40 PM
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hannah_montana.boston
06-15-2007, 05:03 PM
muhaha moreeeeeeee
hmfhannahmontanafan
06-15-2007, 06:17 PM
Mooooreeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
pancake_panda21
06-15-2007, 10:02 PM
if u dont give me more, i'm gonna
stab u in the neck with a pancake!
Cheerleader111
06-15-2007, 11:50 PM
omg!! a pancake?!
give me awhile.
sheesh peoples. :P
Cheerleader111
06-16-2007, 01:22 AM
Here's the next chapter!
Sorry it took so long, watching the DC games.
GREEN TEAM ROCKS!!!:P
Chapter 22: You Have My Word
(The limo dropped everyone else off and took Miley home.)
(Phone is ringing)
Miley: (answers the phone) Hello?
Alexis: Hannah! Where the heck have you been? You haven’t updated me on the plan yet.
Miley: (bites her lip then sits down) Right...see about that....
Alexis: Ohmygosh! You didn’t forget about the plan did you?!
Miley: Uh....maybe a little bit.
Alexis: How?! He hurt you so badly! I knew you were a whimp. You’re not gonna do it are you?
Miley: Alexis, we’ve made up. I don’t need the plan anymore.
Alexis: But it would’ve embarassed him so badly!
Miley: I know! That’s why were not doing it! I’m HAPPY with him now.
Alexis: (pouts) But Hannah.
Miley: NO! Hannah nothing! I like Jake now. I’m happy with him. Deal. (Starts to hang up the phone.)
Alexis: Wait! Hannah!
Miley: Yeah? Wanna apologize for being so evil?
Alexis: (laughs) No. I just wanted to warn you...the plan’s not off. And thanks to you, you’re now involved. And NOT in a good way.
Miley: Is that a threat?
Alexis: Could be. Just a word of caution...I would watch my back if I were you. I really would.
Miley: And what about Jake?! Why won’t you leave him out of this Alexis? What did he ever do to you?!
Alexis: (mutters) He chose you.
Miley: What?
Alexis: Doesn’t matter what he did to me. He’s going to be so embarrassed Hannah. And so will you.
Miley: Bring it Alexis.
Alexis: See yah. (Hangs up)
Miley: (hangs up the phone) What have I gotten myself into now?
Robbie: (walks in) I know that face. What did you do this time Miles?
Miley: (gets off the couch and walks over to him) That’s just it daddy. I don’t know. And Alexis can lose her head sometimes.
Robbie: Alexis?
Miley: Yupp.
Robbie: Alexis Texas?
Miley: The one and only.
Robbie: Miley, what exactly did she say to you?
Miley: She said to watch my back, cause Hannah and Jake are both gonna be embarrassed to death and she was gonna make it happen.
Robbie: Miles, steer clear of this girl. She’s not the best person to hang around.
Miley: Dad, complete sentences please.
Robbie: Have you ever heard of Bucky Kentucky?
Miley: (laughs) No. Who the heck was he?
Robbie: Exactly my point. He quit...thanks to something that Alexis did.
Miley: Is she dangerous?
Robbie: NO, but she can ruin your career. So don’t do anything stupid around her. Don’t do anything that you wouldn’t want on the cover of a magazine.
Miley: (rolls her eyes) Like I ever do?
Robbie: (shoots her a look)
Miley: Ok dad, I’ll be good. Happy?
Robbie: Very. Remember, nothing stupid.
Miley: (raises one hand) You have my word.
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Comment please.:P
write more more more!! what's gonna happen?
hannah_montana.boston
06-16-2007, 12:13 PM
moree
smileymiley92
06-16-2007, 12:54 PM
more more more! getting really good
Cheerleader111
06-16-2007, 01:15 PM
Thanks!!
One more comment,
it's halfway finished right now.
Cheerleader111
06-16-2007, 01:37 PM
^^
lol I'll take it.:P
Chapter 23: Flowers
(Setting: Hours later, still at her house, bored)
Miley: (picks up the phone and calls Lily)
Lily: Hello? YOU BETTER ANSWER ME!!
Miley: Lily, relax, its me.
Lily: Oh, hey Miley.
Miley: Why don’t you ever just check caller ID?
Lily: Then it ruins the surprise!
Miley: (laughs then rolls her eyes) So, I was thinking. Wanna go hang out? Just Hannah and Lola?
Lily: Where?
Miley: (shrugs) I don’t know.
Lily: Is Hannah allowed to do this?
Miley: Look, both me and Hannah are bored! I wanna go to the beach! Or —(recieves a new text message from the Hannah phone) go to a hip new party!!
Lily: What party?
Miley: Uh....some number just sent me an invite to their party.
Lily: Who?!
Miley: I don’t know! But if it’s from the Hannah phone, they have to know me right?
Lily: Uh...not necessarily....
Miley: (stands up) Well I don’t care! I can’t live my life in fear of Alexis Texas! Meet me at the beach in five minutes. In disguise!
Lily: (sighs not so sure this is a good idea) Kk. See yah there. (About to hang up) Oh yeah! Miley?
Miley: Mhhhm?
Lily: Thanks for the flowers. I know I forgave you already and everything, but thanks for making sure that I was still ok with this.
Miley: Uh...what flowers?
Lily: The ones that say: Meet me at the beach at ten. I have a surprise.
Miley: Uh...I didn’t send you any flowers.
Lily: Then who did?
Miley: I don’t know! But whoever it was....must really like you more than I thought.
Lily: Huh?
Miley: Nevermind.
Lily: Ok, I’ll see yah there then.
Miley: Kk.
Lily: (hangs up)
Miley: (hangs up then runs upstair to get dressed)
smileymiley92
06-16-2007, 01:49 PM
oh... more more more!!!
hannah_montana.boston
06-16-2007, 01:50 PM
wow was it oh idk eric moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheerleader111
06-16-2007, 02:11 PM
lol thanks guys!!
two more comments!
I g2g I'll post more next time.
loved it! i also love ur other one too
pancake_panda21
06-16-2007, 02:36 PM
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Miley is Smiley
06-17-2007, 11:17 PM
more
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pancake_panda21
06-18-2007, 12:32 AM
Mority more more!
munchkingirl822969
06-18-2007, 03:29 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
hannah_montana.boston
06-18-2007, 10:25 AM
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hmfhannahmontanafan
06-18-2007, 05:51 PM
morrrreeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! .....MORE! :P
miley-hannah
06-18-2007, 06:14 PM
Come On Plz Write More This Is Like Sooooooooooooooo Goooooooooood Plz Write More!!!!
Cheerleader111
06-22-2007, 03:31 AM
Sorry! Writer's Block!!! But I came up with an evil plan!!! muhahahaha......:)
Here's your chapter:
Chapter 24: Beat That Hannah
(Setting: The Beach Party....at the beach! Duh!! :P)
Lola: (walks in with Hannah) Whoa this party is awesome! (Looks around)
Hannah: Tell me about it. (Looks around too)
Lola: (watches as a cute boy passes by) Hey...Hannah...I’m just gonna go get some....punch. Yeah, some punch!
Hannah: (laughs) Yeah, you do that Lola.
Lola: (walks away)
Jake: (whispers in Hannah’s ear) Hey you.
Hannah: (turns around) Hey yourself. (Smiles) What’s up?
Jake: Ah, nothing much. Were having a guest star on Zombie High though.
Hannah: (interested) Really? Who?
Jake: (shrugs) Alexis Texas.
Hannah: Jake!! NO!!
Jake: (alarmed) What?
Hannah: You can not work with Alexis T —
Alexis: (walks up to them) Talkin about me?
Hannah: No!
Alexis: Oh. I thought I heard my name.
Hannah: Well you heard wrong.
Alexis: Ooooo. Attitude problem Hannah? Wouldn’t want the Press catching you.
Hannah: I didn’t do anything wrong.
Alexis: Mhmmmm. Not yet anyway.
Jake: Am I missing something?
Alexis and Hannah: No!
Jake: Oh, ok.
Hannah: Lets go Jake.
Jake: Kk. See yah Alexis.
Alexis: (waves) See yah! (Walks away)
Hannah: (grabs Jake’s arm and pulls him to a table.) Are you crazy?!
Jake: What?!
Hannah: You can’t work with Alexis! She’s out to get you!
Jake: (laughs) What are you talking about?
Hannah: She has like the most embarrassing thing up her sl —
Oliver: Hey guys!
Hannah: (sighs) I wish people would stop doing that!
Oliver: Sheesh! Doing what? All I said was hi!
Hannah: Nevermind. What’s up?
Jake: Hey Oken.
Oliver: Hey Jake. I was just going to ask if you guys have seen Lily.
Hannah: Oh, yeah, she’s over there next to that cute boy.
Oliver: And your definition of cute is....
Hannah: Oh! Well he has to have like really good looking hair, nothing too greasy or something like that —
Oliver: You know, I think I’ll just go and look for her.
Jake: Sounds like a plan.
Oliver: (leaves)
Jake: (turns back to Hannah) Don’t worry Hannah. Everything will be fine.
Hannah: No it won’t! I hate when people use false info on magazines about me!
Jake: Nobody likes to be lied about.
Hannah: Yeah, I know. But Alexis will make it worse.
Jake: Just enjoy the party.
Hannah: I’ll try.
(Meanwhile.......)
Alexis: Did you get that whole convo?
Person: Yeah.
Alexis: Do you think you can dit it into something else?
Person: (shrugs) I think. It takes some pretty complicated stuff though.
Alexis: I don’t care. Get right on it. And what about the girl?
Person: Ok, and she’s been taken care of.
Alexis: Good. Beat THAT Hannah. (Smirks)
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Comments are welcome as always.:)
ooh.. wow! I want more more!
miley-hannah
06-22-2007, 02:33 PM
oooooooooooooooo more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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