View Full Version : My Happy Ending - a hannah montana fanfic.
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-18-2007, 08:36 PM
Okay so i decided to start a new fanfic. It might not be so great, but i kinda thought itd be a good idea. I wont spoil anything for you though. Every chapter's name is a name of a song (not: the song doesnt have anything to do with the chapter, just the name). Okay so let the story being. And i would also love to hear your comments and suggestions.
smileyface93
04-18-2007, 08:39 PM
ok ur gonan start ur story?
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-18-2007, 08:41 PM
yeah. i just have to type out the first chapter.
hannahmontanarulz55
04-18-2007, 08:51 PM
ohhh cant wait!
Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 08:56 PM
yeah, can't wait for it either! luv fanfics. they rock.
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-18-2007, 09:04 PM
Chapter One - There's Us
Miley pulled her jacket on as she walked out the door. Jake was coming back form romania today and she was beyond excited. It was saturday morning and monday she would start her second week of highschool. She met up with lilly and oliver at the beach where jake would soon join them. Miley felt great. New school. New year. New boyfriend. Miley was jumping she was so nervous. "Excited much?" Oliver asked sarcasticly. "Extatic!" Miley said. She stopped jumping when a big black limo pulled up. Miley bit her lip as jake got out. He spotted her and walked over to her. She threw her arms around him and hugged him. Lilly and Oliver smiled at how happy she looked. "Did you have fun?" miley asked when they pulled apart. He smiled at her and she about melted. "Tons of. But it would have been funner with you around." He leaned down and gave her a kiss on the cheek. Such a charmer!, miley thought. "hey lilly, oliver." Jake said. he and oliver did some wierd handshake and miley laughed at how wierd boys could be. Jake turned to miley again. "So what are you doing tonight?" miley thought for a moment. "Im free. Why?" she asked. He smiled that gorgeous smile. "I want to take you out tonight. To celebrate me coming home." she ran her bottom lip between her teeth. "Like a date?" Oliver and lilly laughed. "Me and oliver have a history project to finish. Bye guys." lilly said as she pulled oliver away. Jake and miley were alone now. Miley sat down in the warm sand and kicked her shoes off. Jake did the same. "So how were things here?" jake asked miley. "Boring. Would have been better with you here." he laughed and pushed a curl out of her face. He touched her cheek lightly and she blushed. He smiled at her and leaned down to kiss her. She pulled him closer but soon enough the kiss ended. "So where are you taking me, zombie slayer?" She smiled up at him. "Im taking you to the purple star." miley gasped. "Thats the most expensive place in malibu!" He laughed. "Dancing and eating is the best first date." She smiled. "Im in." she said as she stood up. Jake got up too. "Ill pick you up at six." he kissed her cheek and they parted. Miley ran home and fixed her curls and did her makeup. She pulled out a white off the shoulder dress that had a layered diagonaly cut at the bottom. She pulled on some strapy heels and answered the door when jake knocked. Jake was in a suit and held a sunflower. He handed it to her and kissed her. She giggled as they climbed into the limo. "You look..." jake said looking her over. Miley blushed. "Is it too much?" She asked and started fidgeting with her dress. "Amazing." Jake finished and put his hand over hers. They reached the restouraunt and climbed out. As soon as they walked through the door they heard 'dark blue' playing. "May i have this dance?" Jake asked holding out his hand. "Absolutley." Miley said as they walked out to the floor. At the end of the night jake dropped miley off. Miley walked inside and felt like she was flying. She was still smiling as she shut the door behind her until she saw jackson and her dad fighting. "What about my friends?" Jackson asked. Her dad raised his hands defensivley. "Youll make plenty of new ones." Miley stopped mid-step. This sounded a lot like when they moved from tennessee to- Oh no. "Whats going on?" She asked hesitantly, afraid of the answer. Jackson jumped up. 'i gotta go." Miley was confused. "Where?" she asked him. "Anywhere but this explosion." He said as he walked upstairs.
hannahmontanarulz55
04-18-2007, 09:11 PM
more plz!!!! its really good!
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-18-2007, 09:20 PM
ill have the second chapter up tommorow. (i dont have much more time on today)
hannahmontanarulz55
04-18-2007, 09:24 PM
ok cant wait! im subscribing to this thread!
Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 09:25 PM
It's so gooooood!!! write more! and i love all the details too, lots of people don't have them.
hannahmontanarulz55
04-18-2007, 09:46 PM
It's so gooooood!!! write more! and i love all the details too, lots of people don't have them.
yea...i know for my fan fic i dont have details! lol
Miley98
04-21-2007, 01:57 PM
Uh oh! Are they moving!?!?!
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-28-2007, 05:50 PM
Chapter 2 - Nobodys Home
Mileys POV
Im sitting here in my room packing boxes all because of my stupid dad's girlfriend. Yeah! i Know! Okay, so apparently dad has had a girlfriend for about ten monthes! He said he didnt want to tell me and jackson because he wasnt sure it would work out. Well it did and now his girlfriend is in texas and thats where we are headed. Im getting a sister my age and a brother jacksons age. I dont want to move! When i had to tell lilly and oliver and... jake it was HORRIBLE! I think we went through ten boxes of tissues. So again, here i am packing my last box, and waiting for the moving truck to arrive. Once that gets here, its off to the airport we go...
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
The airplaine ride was AWFUL! Sitting next to jackson for eight hours is just scary to think about. Now we are pulling into the driveway of our new house. We stepped inside and were greeted by three people. The whole house was totaly white. "Welcome to the IHouse!" Jackson whispered in my ear.
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-28-2007, 06:42 PM
sorry this last one was so short. a few comments and ill post chapter three - unraveling
HannahMontanaX3
04-28-2007, 08:05 PM
Oh My Gawd! You NEED to write more. NEED its not an option Rain
absolutelyfabx3
04-28-2007, 08:42 PM
ah! more! now! ah!
smileyface93
04-28-2007, 08:49 PM
more moree
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
04-28-2007, 08:49 PM
ill type more later. i have a ten yr old who wants to go on. i might be on later though.
luv2act
04-28-2007, 09:08 PM
yay! can't wait for more!
hannahmontanarulz55
04-28-2007, 09:49 PM
more plz!
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
07-11-2007, 11:08 PM
i know im not supposed to bump threads but i was told i have to add more chapters. sorry i didnt update sooner. i kinda lost inspiration for the story. i hope you like this.
Chapter 3 - Unraveling
Miley looked over her 'new family'. There was the older lady who was wearing trendy clothes like her daughter. Her daughter was wearing a light pink juicy coucher sweatsuit with her perfect blonde hair in braids. She was also wearing a fake smile but miley was the only one who noticed that. Her eyes panned over to the jackson-aged boy. He had spikey blonde hair like his mom and sister. He was wearing a plaid shirt and dress pants. Miley looked at her own family. Jackson wearing some black jeans and a and shirt. Robby in some jeans in a hoodie sweater, and herself in some caprie sweats and layered tank tops. WHy were these poeple so perfect? Miley heard robby and the lady talking and before she knew it the lady was hugging her. "Im nancy!" The woman said cheerfully. "You can call me mom if youd like." Miley cringed. No way was that going to happen. "Thanks... nancy." Nancy forced a laugh. She pointed to the blonde girl. "This is my daughter kristi." Kristi extended her hand. "Hi miley! Ive heard so much about you! Im kristi. Well be sharing a room!" Her hand was still out but miley just crossed her arms. "OKay. A shy one robby?" nancy asked. Robby nodded and nudged miley. Nancy pointed at the boy. "This is aaron." Jackson and aaron shook hands. "Hi jackson. Im aaron. Well be sharing a room also. I hope you like books. The room is full of them. I tutor middle school children!" Jackson rolled his eyes. "Now that you all know each other, kids, why dont you go see your rooms?" miley followed kristi up the stairs and jackson followed aaron up the other set of stairs. When they were behind the closed door of mileys new room, kirstis smile dissapeared. "Okay miley, this room is still mine, meaning it still follows my rules. EVerything stays clean. No clothes on the floor and no stains." miley looked around the white room. "How long ago did you guys move?" miley asked. Kristi sat on her bed and focused on her manicured nails. "Five monthes ago. And yeah, i rule my school." Miley rolled her eyes and flopped onto what she was assuming was her bed. Krist looked miley over. "Dont you just hate your dad for doing this to you guys?" miley thought about it for a second. "No. Im angry but i could never hate my dad..." Now it was kirstis turn to roll her eyes. Suddenly they heard nancy yell up the stairs. "Girls!" mileyt and kristi walked down the stairs and miley noticed that kristis smile had returned. "We are going to the mall. Kristi needs some new clothes and im sure you want some too miley." Nancy said with a smile. Kristi hugged her mom. "Thanks mom! Arent you excited miley?" Miley forced a smile. "Extatic!"
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-11-2007, 11:17 PM
its good,i think u should write more,but what about jake lilly and oliver?u didnt mention anything about how they feel about her moving.at least not that i remember
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
07-12-2007, 07:24 PM
thanks. theyll come in more, dont worry. and two more comments.
Cheerleader111
07-13-2007, 12:22 AM
more Rai!!! more!!! :P
LotsaBigHearts
07-13-2007, 09:00 AM
that was really good!!
Awesome job!!
HannahMontanaX3
07-13-2007, 10:30 AM
more
Cheerleader111
07-13-2007, 12:08 PM
That's THREE comments!! see Rai!! three!!! so...maybe we should get two chapters!! :P
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
07-13-2007, 12:29 PM
not two lol. ill try to post some tonight. its a lot to type. lol. thanks for yur comments and ill post as soon as possible.
Cheerleader111
07-13-2007, 03:20 PM
yayzers!!! ok, i'll read more tonight!! -sigh- i guess i can wait a little longer! :P
LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 09:40 AM
c'mon, write more!!
I wish miley got on a plane and went back to malibu...
question, is hannah montana still a person??
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