A Hannah Montana Vacation Fan Fic

[mileysfan01]

Okay this is my first fan fic:


Chapter 1:

Miley: *walks into school and sees Lily* "Hey Lilly hows it going?
Lilly: "Hey Miley I cant wait untill we go to Catalina for our Scince Trip"
Miley: "Me neither but I have to take off being Hannah Montana for a week!
Lilly: "Well just call it a Hannah Montana Vacation...But its gonna be fun Jake and Oliver are going.
Miley: "Yeah It would be fun since Jakes going...But how would it be fun if Oliver goes?"
Lilly: "We all konw Miley...just because you like Jake doesnt mean you dont like Oliver...Its really notice able"
Miley: "Hows it notice albe?"
Lilly: "You always talk about him... and you dont notice it but when your not staring at Jake your staring at Oliver"

Miley: "You've got to be kidding me I do not....**sees oliver come in** "Oh my god look theres Oliver what do I do?"
Lilly: "Yeah I thought you didn't like him?"
Miley: "I dont well I dont think I do..Do I..*confused look on face*
**Bell rings for class**



What do you guys think?After a few comments if you want ill post more.

[mileysfan01]

any1?

[She_Can_Sing_Too]

just okay, post more if you want. and can you type with proper punctuation? it would make it a little easier to read. thanks

[mileysfan01]

ok..thanks

[mileysfan01]

anymore comments?

[Cheerleader111]

well i luv it. could you make longer posts though....ur gunna kill me in anticipation!! :P

[mileysfan01]

ok..ill post next chapter and make it longer in a bit

[mileysfan01]

Chapter 2:

*Miley and Lilly walk into class and have a seat*
Lilly:"Look Miley theres Oliver"
Miley:"Yes Lilly I can see him I'm not blind..."
Teacher:"Okay class now its time to pick your bunk mates and pick whos group you gonna be in for labs"
Miley:"Lilly...Oliver..Jake...are we gonna be in the same group for labs?"
Jake:"Yupp..I guess"
Oliver:"Yeah!"
Lilly:"Yeah!Its gonna be so much fun being in the same group with Oliver...*looks at Miley*...Isn't it Miley
Oliver:*Looks at Miley*
Miley:"Yeah Its gonna
be great!*smiles*
Teacher:"Okay since everyone has chose their bunk mates and lab group lets begin on taking notes on what to bring and not to bring..*coughs*..Okay lets begin....*Starts to wright what to bring and what not to bring*
**Lilly,Miley,Jake and Oliver begin taking notes**
Lilly:**leans over to Oliver**" Are you exited about going on the trip and being in the same group with Miley?"
Oliver:"Yeah I like Miley. Why wouldn't I be excited Im actually excited about it"
Lilly:"So you do like Miley...I knew it"
Oliver:"Okay so I do like Miley...Big deal...You Can't tell her though..We've been friends for soo long I dont want this to mess it up.."
Lilly:"Fine....I wont tell her...But what if she likes you back?
Oliver:"Lilly don't be soo clueless Miley doesnt like me..I just know it...She likes Jake **looks at Jake talking to Miley**
Jake:**Looks and Oliver waves hi**
Miley: **turns around looks at Oliver...Smiles....Turns back and talks to Jake**
Oliver: "See Lilly just looket them they look so happy together"**does a sad face and shruggs**Lilly:"You never know Oliver she might surprise ya"
Oliver:**Gives Lilly a suspicious look**
Lilly:**Smiles**
**Bell rings..everyone walks out of class**

Comments..Suggestions??

[mileysfan01]

???????????

[vanessa*anne]

is this seriously your first? its really really good.
keep going.

[_smiley_miley_14]

suggestion:write more

[hannah_montana.boston]

more its nice