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vanessa*anne
04-10-2007, 10:50 PM
Miley is now 15, oliver is 16 and lilly is 15

Oliver: miley....
miley: yea?
oliver: i know that you have been crushing on me for a while.. ive been crushing on you
miley: yea?
oliver: will you go out with me
miley: yes! i mean.... i couldn't wait much longer. i was going to ask...
she leaned towards him and kissed him
oliver: wow..
miley: yea?
oliver: i liked that
he kissed her again.

Mileys POV (POV means point of view)

Finally. I couldn't wait much longer. Oliver finally asked me out
yep. and he kissed me. oh wow.... you may think wow.. im in love with dorky oliver but a lot of things have changed since then. he is really hot now.. like every girl at school thinks so. he could have had anyone but he picked me. can't wait till tell lilly. this is the best ever. i haven't stopped smiling. now... he is really smoken oken and he is still the same sweet oliver. mrs miley oken. i like the sound of that

end of mileys POV

Miley: lilly guess what happened
lilly: what!
miley: me and oliver kissed!
lilly: no way! what was it like?
miley: magical.
lilly: i knew this was going to happen
miley: what?
lilly: can't you tell? hes madly in love with you
miley: really?
lilly: yes! would lilly tell miley anything that wasn't true?
miley: hmmm i guess not.
lilly: exactly. so when are you going on a date?
miley: im meeting him at the beach today
lilly: now what are you going to wear
miley: i don't know....
lilly: to the closet
miley picked out a bathing suit and a top and shorts to wear over it.
lilly: perfect

miley walked to the beach
oliver: hey miley
miley: hey
oliver: theres my smiley miley
miley blushed, she turned bright red
they talked and
oliver: miley i love you so much
miley: you do? so do i
*kiss*
they went down to the beach and swam.
oliver: miley? miley? where are you?

flower1
04-10-2007, 10:56 PM
OMG! what happended? (Olivers mine! :P)

vanessa*anne
04-10-2007, 11:03 PM
miley: help!
she was being pulled back by the rip. she was drowning. a wave came by and dunked her. oliver didn't see her head come up. she was stuck in the sand.
oliver: im coming!
he started swimming, as fast as he could
oliver (thinking) : this can't happen it can't!
tears started to come in his eyes.
he reached her after 8 minutes of swimming. he wasn't really a good swimmer, pretty slow.
oliver: im coming.
he dived under the water
he opened is eyes under the water to try and see her. they were stinging, but he didn't care. he pulled her up and put miley on his back
quite slowly he swam back to the shore with miley on his back.
oliver lay her down on the sand
oliver: dont be dead, don't be.
oliver had been taught mouth to mouth so he did it
jackson was at rickos working.
jackson:hmm oliver kissing miley? they are together? wow im slow.
oliver ran over to the lifesaver. he got him to come over
the lifesaver looked at miley
oliver: how is she?
a look of panic was on his face
lifesaver:.....

mileysbestpal164
04-10-2007, 11:03 PM
omg continue what happened to miley!

flower1
04-10-2007, 11:06 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shes...shes.....!

vanessa*anne
04-10-2007, 11:15 PM
lifesaver: i think shes dead... but we'll take her to hospital to make sure.
oliver: what? no!!!!!!!! why couldn't it have been me!!!?
tears came to his eyes.
an ambulance came and oliver went in with her.
he was still really upset
oliver: miley... miley... don't leave me. he cried and leant over and kissed her lifeless body.
his phone rang. it was lilly
oliver (crying) : hello?
lilly: hi oliver. why so glum? miley didn't dump you did she
oliver: no.. miley.... miley... miley is probably dead
lilly: what?
oliver: we just arrived at the hospital. call you back later
he hung up

hopsital worker: you will have to wait outside for now

they took her into the room and oliver sat there very worried and upset
oliver (thinking) : i can't loose her.. she is the only girl i ever truly loved.
he sat there for what seemed like forever
a hospital worker came out of the room.
oliver: how is miley? how is miley? please don't let her be dead!
hospital worker:.....

vanessa*anne
04-10-2007, 11:15 PM
sorry it is so short

flower1
04-10-2007, 11:17 PM
AAAA!!! OMG! :O :O *heart races* *breathes hard* *faints*

mileysbestpal164
04-10-2007, 11:23 PM
omg wats wrong w/ miley

miley rocks
04-10-2007, 11:49 PM
its the best ff ever i luv it

vanessa*anne
04-11-2007, 12:57 AM
hospital worker: im sorry. we did everything she could
oliver: what? i couldn't even say goodbye
hopstial worker: you can. she has a few minutes left
oliver ran into the room
miley: oliver
oliver: miley....
he started to cry
miley: oliver i love you but im going to die
oliver: i love you to
oliver leaned in and kissed her. they broke apart
oliver(crying): i wish you didn't have to go. bye. i will love you forever
miley(crying) : me too
they shared there final kiss. then her life signal went off
oliver (screaming) : nooo!!!! don't go. don't leave me!!!
hospital worker: shhh be quite. there are guests sleeping.
oliver ran away from the hospital crying.
oliver (thinking) : no. why coudln't i have died? how come life isn't fair? the time we get together and then miley dies. i want to be with her and now i can't. shes gone. why does she have to be gone? no!!
its all my fault. if i could have swum faster then then i could have saved her. its all my fault. she could have still been alive now if i had just gotten to her quicker.
lilly: oliver... what happened
oliver: miley miley mileys...... dead.
lilly:.....

vanessa*anne
04-11-2007, 05:46 PM
doesn't anybody like it? didn't think it was going to go well. i guess i could stop writing if no one wants it..

absolutelyfabx3
04-11-2007, 06:18 PM
ahh! more! now!

vanessa*anne
04-11-2007, 06:24 PM
lilly (tears coming to her eyes) : no no she can't be dead. she just can't its not fair
oliver: i know
they hug each other and walk to the beach
lilly: she was my best friend
oliver: she was my girlfriend
lilly: i miss her so much. i was loser lilly and then she came and was my friend
oliver: i know and just when we get together
lilly: its not fair
oliver: why couldn't it have been me? its my fault shes dead
lilly: if it is i hate you!
oliver: lilly... i swam out to save her and i was too slow. if i could swim faster she would have been here with us now.
lilly: don't worry. its not your fault. things happen. but why to miley?
oliver: life isn't fair. i i loved her
lilly: w what?
oliver: she was the only girl i ever loved and shes shes shes gonee
lilly and oliver starting crying
amber: look a osers crying
amber and ashley: weres the thrid oohhh tisssss
oliver: quit it were not in the mood.
amber: ohhhh sorry to make you uupset oliver (flirty)
amber: no he wants to talk to me
oliver: no i don't miley died ok! now go away
they left
lilly: this can't happen again
oliver: again? what do you mean by that?

absolutelyfabx3
04-11-2007, 06:34 PM
omg! I need more!!!

miley rocks
04-11-2007, 06:54 PM
woooooooow i luv but the only thing i dont like is that miley died
but other then that it great and i think lil likes oliver

xxmileyluverxx1234xx
04-11-2007, 06:59 PM
i like it, the only thing, dont kill miley. but i like it.

numba1puppyluva
04-11-2007, 10:18 PM
OMG! U killed MILEY?!?!? Love it, but Miley is like, the main topic! ur prob gon have HEE-UGE writeers block!

flower1
04-11-2007, 10:25 PM
I KnoWW!!!!^^ WOMG!

vanessa*anne
04-12-2007, 10:56 PM
OMG! U killed MILEY?!?!? Love it, but Miley is like, the main topic! ur prob gon have HEE-UGE writeers block!


oh yeah....

but whats writers block?

sorry i have no idea


and im writing the next bit

vanessa*anne
04-12-2007, 11:03 PM
lilly: well my best friend before miley was here was mel
oliver: yea?
lilly: she died
oliver: what? how?
lilly: she was mudered. they never found out who did it. i went over to her house and found her lying there dead.
oliver: ohhhhh
they both started crying
oliver: i miss her
lilly: i miss her too. hows jackson and robby ray taking it
oliver: they don't know yet........
lilly: we have to tell them
they walked up to ricos. jackson was still working

jackson: hey double o. why you looking so sad.
oliver was just quiet
jackson: what happened? your not normally like this. and where is miley? dad called me and she had a hannah thing and missed it.
oliver: miley.......
jackson: do you know where she is? lilly?
lilly: ummmmm
jackson: are you hiding something from me? and oliver you 2 are togther? saw you kissing before.
lilly: wasn't exactly kissing
jackson: what do you mean?

vanessa*anne
04-12-2007, 11:04 PM
sorry its short

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-13-2007, 12:21 AM
Pleez write more!

vanessa*anne
04-13-2007, 12:34 AM
oliver: ummm.... i was giving her mouth to mouth
jackson: ohhhhh so you were kissing! don't worry double o. im ok with it
oliver: no i was giving it to her because she drowned
jackson: what?
lilly: miley mileys
oliver: mileys dad
tears came to olivers eyes and he ran home
jackson went quiet
rico: now jackson. if you want that raise you have to do something for me..
jackson: i want my sister......
rico: ok....
jackson: look its 5. end of my shift. im going home
rico: whats wrong with him?
jackson walked home head down


oliver was in his room staring at a photo of him and miley which he had took on their date.
oliver (crying) : miley... why did you have to go. i guess there is no point me living now.
oliver...


the next bit will have a bit of mature content so yea

Cheerleader111
04-13-2007, 12:52 AM
^^omg! what are you going to do?! I love everything but the Miley dead thing.

vanessa*anne
04-13-2007, 01:10 AM
^^omg! what are you going to do?! I love everything but the Miley dead thing.

well thats kinda what the whole story is about but i get what you mean. thanks.

1 more comment and i will put the next part up

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-13-2007, 03:03 AM
Okay, 1 more comment. YAY NEXT PART! lol

vanessa*anne
04-13-2007, 03:51 AM
oliver picked up a knife
oliver: here it goes. now i can be with miley
at that very monent lilly walked into the room
oliver stopped
lilly was so shocked
she took the knife out of his hands and threw it away from him, smashing the photo frame of him and miley together.
oliver: miley gave me that photo frame. what did you do that for?
lilly: im sorry! i didn't want you to kill yourself
oliver: what? i wanted to be with miley. you stopped me from being with miley
lilly: would miley want you to do that?
oliver: just... GO!
oliver: darn!!!! now ive lost both of my friends. such an idiot
lilly (thinking) : wow... hes more upset than me. but i don't want him to kill himself. then i will have no one

lilly was at home at dinner

lillys mum: why aren't you eating anything darling?
lilly: im not hungry
lillys dad: you should eat something
lilly: no i don't want to

lillys mum: im worried about her ever since miley died.....

numba1puppyluva
04-13-2007, 11:28 AM
OMG!! And writers block is when u cnt think of any ideas to write about. anywayz, MORE MORE MORE MORE

vanessa*anne
04-13-2007, 05:50 PM
lillys mum: ever since miley died she hasn't eaten anything
lilly walked to the beach, she was going to meet oliver. this new top shewas weraing which she had only bought about 2 weeks ago was really baggy on her.
oliver: there you are lilly
lilly: hey.
oliver: you know sorry about before. i was just really upset that miley is gone.
lilly: i am too
oliver: hey lets go to ricos.
they went over to ricos
jackson wasn't there..
oliver (to worker) : hey weres jackson?
worker: hes taken the day off because miley died.
tears started to fall down his cheecks
worker: are you ok? what do you want?
oliver: a hot dog and a bottle of coke. what do you want lilly
lilly was thinking about miley. she missed her so much
oliver: lilly *nudged her*
lilly: oh just a bottle of water.
worker: ok
oliver: aren't you hungry?
lilly: oh. im not
oliver was really worried about lilly. she was much skinnier than before and much paler.
after that they went for a walk along the beach
lilly: oliver.....
oliver: yea?
lilly:

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-13-2007, 07:11 PM
Pleez write more!

numba1puppyluva
04-13-2007, 10:27 PM
OMG!! Lillys going anorexic!! More! More now!

vanessa*anne
04-14-2007, 02:08 AM
lilly: i l......
lilly fainted and fell to the ground
oliver: lilly lilly? wake up please!!!!
he called an ambulancea and they went to the hosptial
oliver was told to wait outside
he was playing with his fingers. he was feeling anxious and unpaitent
hospital worker: you can go see her now
lilly: oliver!
oliver: i am so glad you are okay!
lilly: sorry this is all my fault
oliver: what?
lilly: i haven't been eating anything
oliver: what? why?
lilly: i don't know. just my way of dealing with....
lilly decided not to say it
oliver: i know what you were going to say
lilly: you do?
oliver: yea
lilly: i get out tonight
oliver: how do you feel?
lilly: a bit wierd. they are force feeding me through these tube things. lilly not likey
oliver: promise that you will start eating again.
lilly: ok i promise

they both went out of the hospital together
oliver: what were you going to say before?
lilly:.........

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-14-2007, 02:15 AM
Ahh! I know! Please write more! I luv it!

mileycyrusisluv
04-14-2007, 10:36 AM
great story line

HannahMontanaX3
04-14-2007, 10:51 AM
more

miley rocks
04-14-2007, 10:52 AM
wow i love it

numba1puppyluva
04-14-2007, 12:24 PM
more!!! more!!! more!!! I LOVE it!

vanessa*anne
04-14-2007, 06:17 PM
lilly: i was just going to say that i love you
lilly kissed him but oliver pulled away
oliver: no.. i can't do this to miley. i just can't
he runs away
oliver (thinking) : miley i am so sorry. i will never do that again
he went into his room and then stared at this picture of miley and him together and started crying.
oliver: why couldn't it have been me?

lilly: i cannot believe i did that. i am such an idiot. miley why did you have to go. it isn't fair.
lilly and oliver both went to sleep

the next day they both got dressed fully in black and then got mr stewart to drive them in the car. it was the day of mileys funeral.
lilly and oliver felt awkard because of what had happened last night
they sat in silence for ages, what seemed like hours
lilly: ........

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-14-2007, 06:20 PM
What happens next? :))

numba1puppyluva
04-14-2007, 08:38 PM
yeah, what happend next? lol

vanessa*anne
04-15-2007, 05:39 PM
lilly: oliver i hate us not talking. i am so sorry about yesterday. i mean i guess you are right, that is being unfair to miley
oliver: yeah.
robby ray: here we are kids and next week will be the hannah montana funeral if you want to come to that.
lilly: thanks
they both walked inside to the seats that were saved for them, beacause they were close to miley.
oliver got up
oliver: miley miley...
he was stumbling. very nervous shakey and looked like he was about to cry
oliver: was the only person i ever truley loved. she was sweet caring and so much fun to be around *starts to cry* her heart was gold and and and....
i miss her so much.
he runs of the altar crying
lilly: miley was my best friend. she was my friend when no one else wanted to be. we did so much together, talked to each other about everything, absoutley everything. she is one of the nicest people i ever met. now without her everything is diffferent, and i hate it. miley i miss you sooo much..
she starts crying and sits down next to oliver again. lillys head is resting on his shoulder. oliver doesn't mind.
the mass is then over. they go to the burial ground
lilly and oliver push to the front.
oliver: no!!!! (screaming)
they both stood there watching. they were both in tears
jackson: dad... mileys gone. no little sister to annoy me anymore... none. even though i said i hated her i never hated her. she was the greatest sister ever and now.... now
robby ray and jackson were also in tears.
robby ray: i know. she was the best and now we will never see her again. her smile, her personality and her happiness
they all got in the car to go back home

oliver: thanks for dropping me off
then he walked inside head down.
he went straight into his room
oliver: miley... why did you have to go? why? why! why! its not fair. it should have been me.
he went to sleep.
oliver (dreaming) : m..miley?

vanessa*anne
04-15-2007, 05:40 PM
oh and the end will be soon (I have had a writers block, but i will start on another fanfiction soon after this one is finished)

miley rocks
04-15-2007, 06:03 PM
omg yeah u better write another ff [lol]

vanessa*anne
04-15-2007, 07:17 PM
miley: oliver.... don't always be dreading over me. please live your life. i love you... always will but i am gone and i can't stand to see you upset anymore.
oliver: but i love you.... i miss you so much
miley: and i miss you but maybe its time you moved on. i will always be looking over you.
oliver: miley... don't leave me. i can't stand life without you. please please please come back. i can't stand to kiss anyone, but you
miley: i can't. i am dead. kiss someone. i won't mind. find love. do it for me. i want you too
oliver: but i feel like i am betraying you
miley: you aren't! i want you to move on.
oliver: i guess i will. i want my smiley miley to be smiley
miley: oliver i miss you so much
*they kiss for a long time*
miley: i am so sorry. i have to go
oliver: no!

oliver wakes up
oliver(thinking): shes right. i should go apoligize to lilly.
oliver: lilly...
oliver and lilly: i am so sorry!
lilly: what?
oliver: what?
lilly: i am sorry that i kissed you...
oliver: don't be
lilly: what the? why?
oliver:.......

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-15-2007, 11:49 PM
ohh! Write more pwease??

Miley98
04-16-2007, 01:48 PM
please write more! See my friend thinks so too!

numba1puppyluva
04-16-2007, 01:53 PM
Ooh! Are they gon be together?

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-16-2007, 08:31 PM
Ooh! Are they gon be together?

Who knows? Please write more!

vanessa*anne
04-16-2007, 09:23 PM
oliver *kisses her*
lilly: wow.. that ws unexpected. what about miley?
oliver: i loave her, i always will but she wants me to move on.
lilly: what?
oliver i don't think that it is worth me dreading my whole life. i will always miss her, i will never forget her.
lilly: either will i.
oliver: but she wouldn't want me to not enjoy my life
lilly: yea i agree.
oliver: i still miss her soo much, i wish she was still here
lilly: you have me.
oliver: yea i know.


oliver (thinking) : miley.... i love you soooo much. i hope i am making you happy. your death ripped my heart in 2 and i will never ever forget you but maybe it is time for me to move on. i am going to enjoy life and hopefully i can be with you again, someday. you have been the love of my life and nothing will ever change that. my heart will go on. i will never forget our times together. hope you can see me right now miley, i know that this is what you want me to do.

*oliver and lilly kiss*

THE END!

SupaStaRrMiley92
04-16-2007, 09:25 PM
Yay The End! I Loved It!

miley rocks
04-20-2007, 07:21 PM
i loved it wats the link 4 da sequel

vanessa*anne
04-20-2007, 09:36 PM
i loved it wats the link 4 da sequel

haven't started it yet and its not exactly gonna be a sequel, just another story. really, i don't have anythin else to write about involving this. i need to think of some ideas and then i will put it up

miley rocks
04-21-2007, 04:29 PM
k i cant wait

hannah_montana.boston
05-17-2007, 05:28 PM
NOTE TO SELF : pg 3 got 2 remember

ps. i like it so far