Chaotic Love Circle ( this is really good read it!)

[miles30]

CHAOTIC LOVE CIRCLE: by miles30

*SPECIAL THANKS TO: heyitswhatever (for helping me with ideas and songs coming up for the story)


Chapter 1

m= miley stewart
l=lily trescot
o=oliver oken
j=jake ryan
v=vanessa hudgens
a=ahley tidsdale
z=zac effron

M: Hey jake!
L: miley i thought you were over jake
M: i know i said that but he's just soooo funny and cute! :02:
L: well you better make a move cause i think he likes you're cousin!
M: what d'you mean?
L: look! * lily points at jake*
* meanwhile jake talks to vanessa*
J: hey nessa will you......:15: will you go out with me? :15:
V: sorry jake i'm dating zac right now :S
J: that's okay i'll ask miley instead :02:
M: o my gosh he's going to ask me out!!
* jake comes over to miley *
J: hey miley i know you said you were over me but will you go out with me?
M: sure!
L: miley i don't think this is such a good idea....
J: really? but..... i thought....
M: so you don't want to.......:(
J: no of course i do!! it's just that...you said.... never mind!! i'll pick you up at eight
M: ok see ya then!!
* jake walks away*
L: MILEY!!!! WHY ON EARTH DID YOU DO THAT??
M: do what?

WHAT WAS LILY TALKING ABOUT?
I KNOW IT"S KINDA OBVIOUS, BUT WHY WAS SHE UPSET BECAUSE MILEY DID IT? ( COMMENT OR YOU"LL NEVER FIND OUT!! )

[miles30]

Chapter 2

( i'm only giving you chapter 2 because i really want you to know what happens next, also it's a short chapter anyway, but very good!)

M: What Are you talking about lily?
L: i'm talking about you letting jake ryan go out with you!
M: what's wrong with going out with one of the most cutest boys in school?
L: don't you see? he's using you to try to get your cousin nessa jealous!
M: what are yu saying that he doesn't really like me?
L: exactly!! why do you think he told your cousin he was going to ask you instead? anyone could have figured that out!
M: oh so now you're calling me stupid?
L: no!! well yes, a little bit but...
M: you're just jealous because he asked me instead of you!!
* miley runs away*
* then just as lily was heading back to class, someone grabbed her and pushed her into the closet..... *
* lily looked up to see the stranger's face and screamed *
L: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!

WHO WAS THE STRANGER?
OR WAS HE/SHE A STRANGER?
WHY DID LILY SCREAM?

if you don't comment you won't know!

[Katybug1994]

More!

[miles30]

sorry, i really want to write more, but i need about 5 comments to do that! why don't you show this to your friends so they can comment too?!

[SmileyMiley11]

Write more its awesome

[m&jrule]

write more!

[miles30]

okay here it is!

Chapter 3

Lily: oh my god!!!
Ashley tidsdale: sshh! they'le here us!!
Lily: why did you push me in here?
Ash: cause the crowd back there was chasing me!
Lily: is it safe to get out now?
Ash: are you crazy? they'll get us! you're a lot more dorky than my cousin miley said.
Lily: miley said i was dorky? : (
Ash: yeah she said you always embarrased her when she goes to other parties.also she said your clothes were soooo ugly. don't worry i'll buy you clothes for free.
Lily: you will? but then that would be kinda.....weird.
Ash: what's weird? celeberities doing good stuff?
Lily: yeah..... i mean
Ash: we do it all the time!!
Lily: really?
Ash: sure!
* lily thinks " miley never bought me anything, she just let me borrow her stuff!, that's it! this frienship is over!! *

meanwhile miley is in the bathroom furious

Miley: this friendship is over!!! i hate LILY TRESCOT and I am ashamed to ever have been best friends with her!!
* vanessa catches up to her*
Nessa: ( panting) miley? what's wrong? I've been looking for you everywere everything okay?
Miley: what's wrong? WHAT"S WRONG??!!! everything is wrong !!! my frienship and lovelife is wrong!!
Nessa: you mean you liked that guy?? he told me you hated him, and that you wished he was never transfered to this school!
Miley: i was lying because he only liked me for not liking him!
NESSA: what?!! so do you like him or not?
Miley : i do !!!
* just then someone said: " you can never have jake ryan, NEVER "

WHO WAS THAT?
CMMENT TO FIND OUT!!

[miles30]

i won't write if you don't comment!!!

[miles30]

come on!!

Chapter 4 ( part 1 )

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no comment no story

[miles30]

come on !!! i'm dying to write chapter 4 but i won't if you don't comment. HURRY UP!!!!!

[miles30]

fine story's over 'cause no one's commenting!!

[miles30]

Chapter 4

* before that terrible voice appeared, vanessa was gone. *

* miley was all alone listening to it *

Miley: who's th-there?? who are you??
* miley gasps *
she couldn't see the stranger but she could see he had a knife......
Miley: what are you going to do???
* that was all she could remember *
Miley: huh? where am I??
Mr Stewart (billy ray cyrus) : you're at home sweetie...don't worry bud, you're gonna be alright.
Miley: dad?? what happened? where's lily?
Billy calls lily to go up to miley's room
Lily: hey mile what hapened?
Miley : that's what i want to know!!
Lily: well....you're cousin found you in the bathroom unconcious... are you okay??
Miley: yeah... but there was a voice and a knife...and..and..and....i can't remember anything else.
Lily: you should rest now.. maybe in the morning you'll remember something. Good night miley.
miley fell asleep but she had terrible nightmires about what had happened.

* miley woke up early the next morning to og to school.

Billy: are you sure you're gonna be alright bud??
Billy: to you want me to drive you to school today?
Miley: no dad I think i'll take the bus today.

* at school miley saw lily talking to ahley *

Miley: * thinking * should i be friends with lily again? it was pretty nice that she came over to my house to see if i was okay.......

Lily saw miley

Lily: * thinking * should i forgive her?? she did look pretty hurt when i came over... and she would have done the same for me if i was hurt......

* they both sighed and then slowly smiled *
( they hugged)

Lily: miley i'm sorry i came down on you like that... i guess i was a little jealous...so i thought of what jake could do to break you up and i didn't think of what you'll feel first.

Miley: and i'm sorry for not listening to you completely.... i should have let that thought a chance before deniying it. after all it showed me that yo care about me... you didn't want me to get hurt.

* they cried *

after school lily came over to miley's house for a celebration of their saved friendship.

Miley: Dad? Jackson? I'm home!!
Billy & jackson: were going out!!
Miley: eeewwww!!
Billy: very funny bud. were buying a new bumper for jackson's car. Bye

* they left *

Lily: Hey miley can i use your bathroom?
Miley: sure! i'll get the snacks!

Miley: wait!! do you want pop corn or cheese puffs?
Lil-

Lily: cheese puffs please!! mil--aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!

* lily looked in horror of what she saw *

WHAT DID LILY FIND??
WHERE WAS MILEY??
FIND OUT!! ( only if you comment )

[Hannah+Jake]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11pleze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

[saha-agent-002]

more this is so gd

[mleysueno]

more please!!!! OMG!!!more!

[miles30]

Chapter 5 : suspicious


jake: hi lily
jake was sitting on the stewart's couch
Lily: jake!! what are you doing here??!!!
jake looked at the floor slowly
lily: aaahhh!!! what happened to miley??
jake: i found her lying there unconcoius and i thought she fainted or something.....
lily: i'll call her dad you put her on the couch
lily went upstairs to get miley's cell when she got back jake was gone...........


lily: miley?? are you okay???
Miley : ( harsh whisper) ya.....what happened???
lily: you fainted......i think
miley: what 'dyu mean???
lily: wellllllll......i saw jake this afternoon when i found you unconcious but he said you just fainted when you saw him
miley: i didn't even know jake was in my house!!!!!!!
just then miley's phone rang
Miley: i have a message!!!!!!!!
Lily: read it!!!!
miley: dear miley........
both girls gasped..........

TO BE CONTINUED UNLESS NO ONE COMMENTS

[Hannah+Jake]

omg!more

[miles30]

any more comments??

[miles30]

hurry up please!!!!

[flower1]

MORE!!!!!!!!!!! MORE for God's sake!!!!! mORREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Hannah+Jake]

more !for freakin me

[miles30]

okay lol!!!

[miles30]

Chapter 6 : who can it be???

Miley: dear miley , i know who you reallly are , and you can't hide from me anymore. ive known for so long but i was just waiting for the right time to do this. miley, or should i say Hannah , IM GOING TO KILL YOU. you can't stop even if you knew who i was.

- anonymus

Lily: wh--wh--who sent that message???
Miley: i-i-i--i know who it is !!!
* miley burst into tears *
Lily: who
Miley: its' j-j-Jake!!!!!

* lily gasped *

* then someone spoke*
Mysterious Voice: ( deep voice) very good miley....but you're wrong
they turned around

AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

to be continued..........

comment or else

[Hannah+Jake]

more Clarise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!:/

[miles30]

howd u know my name???

ps

i'll write 2 chapters tommorow

[miles30]

me sleepy

[Hannah+Jake]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[miles30]

not yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[Hannah+Jake]

Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremo re

[miles30]

Chapter 7: the knife


Miley: wh-who-who are you????what d'you want????
Lily: get away from us or-or-
Deep voice: or you'll what????
* then something they weren't sure what.....but something was shining in the sun........*
Miley and lily looked in horror *

Lily: AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
miley stayed calm but inside she was even more scared than lily
Miley: whoever you are put that knive down or we'll call the police!!!!!!!!
Voice: is that so?????then i better hurry up shouldn't i??????
then............................


Find out what happens in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

[miles30]

i know it's pretty short, but i like suprises

: ) : )

[miles30]

puh-lease comment???

[Hannah+Jake]

Morremoreremoremoremoremorwe

[miles30]

hey Hannah+Jake, just curious......why do you always change your icon??
( picture next to your username)

[miles30]

Chapter 8 : The introduction

* the two girls ran for their lives *
miley hid in the closet while lily hid in a big chest drawer that contained r Stewart's old mullet and guitar

Voice: come out , come out, wherever you are!!!!!!
Miley took a risk
Miley: fine!!!! but first you have to tell us who you are!!!
* the voice became normal, it wasn't a deep voice anymore *
Voice: oh im sorry i forgot my manners.........my name is ____________


* WHO COULD IT BE???????? *

comment or else you'll never know I MEAN IT : /

[miles30]

hello?????
doesn't anyone like it???

[Hannah+Jake]

hey Hannah+Jake, just curious......why do you always change your icon??
( picture next to your username)
It just doesnt pop really i too picky

[miles30]

oh.........hey picky!!! ( just teasing )

[miles30]

who is veiwing this right now??

[miles30]

is that you hannah+jake??? or sohpie?? or flower1??

[miles30]

oh hi fashion lion!!!

[miles30]

okay no more spaming!!!! where was i in the story??

[miles30]

why are you still here?? fashonlion i know you're there!!

[fashionlion]

hi

[fashionlion]

whats up

[miles30]

1234567890qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm,./';[]=-

[fashionlion]

YOUR FANFIC IS AWSOME AND IF YOU DONT WRITE MORE I AM GOING TO DIE LOL

[fashionlion]

You There

[fashionlion]

??

[fashionlion]

By

[miles30]

hey fashionlion, what your real name so i can talk to you properly??

[miles30]

don't worry i'll write more later, i have to go to school

[miles30]

hey hannah+jake d'you like my icon?? i think i want to change it though.....

[Hannah+Jake]

i love

[flower1]

more :P

[miles30]

hi flower1 !!!!

[Hannah+Jake]

more
more
more
more
more
more
more

[thobi123]

wrie more now

[luv2act]

more!!!!!!!!!! im gonna die waiting!!

[miles30]

alright!!!!

[Hannah+Jake]

im going to die now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

[miles30]

hannah+jake help me!!! i need idea's !!! fast before everyone dies!!!

[flower1]

MAKE IT BE JAKE, AND HE STABS MILEY IN THE HEART OR SOMETHIN, NOW WRITE LIKE THERE'S NO TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[miles30]

BUT JAKES NOT THE PERSON!!!! AND NEXT TIME SEND ME A MESSAGE "CAUSE EVERYONE WILL KNOW!!!!PLEASE EDIT THAT COMMENT AND I WILL TRY TO USE YOUR IDEA!!!!:17:

[miles30]

Chapter 9: the name

Voice: my name is....
Miley gasped....she knew that voice.....
Miley: no!!! it can't be........no this isn't true!!!!
Voice: yes it is.....im..
Miley & Lilly : ROXY!!!!!
Bang!!!!!the chest lilly was hiding in burst open
Lilly: AAAHH!!!!!! miley help!!!
Miley: uuhhh....i.....i...

WILL MILEY RISK HER OWN LIFE TO SAVE LILLY?
OR WILL SHE GIVE LILLY UP TO SAVE HER NECK??
COMMENT OR ELSE!!!

[miles30]

hey flower1 ,


you kinda coppied sophiecool b-cause u know at your story??( this is the life) you called me a spammer. ( and a weasel) ( hahahahah)

you said:

im very proud of my story Clarise you weasel!!

[miles30]

who's ready for chapter 10??
well then comment if you want it!!

[Hannah+Jake]

pop goes the weasel hhahhahahahahaayhhahahahahhahahahahhaah

[luv2act]

i need chapter 20 but please make it long!

[miles30]

okay

[miles30]

Chapter 10: No One By My Side


Lilly: AAAHHH!!!!!! Oh my god!! ( weak voice growing fainter)sh-she-
dddgg!!!
* lilly fell to the floor with a loud thud, unconcious and dripping wet with blood*
Miley: Lilly!!!!
( thinking) oh no!!! what did i do???
Roxy: aahhhaaa!!!!!! gotcha!!!
Miley: AAHHH!!!!
* the closet door burst open *
Miley: Roxy why???What Did i ever do to you??
Roxy: Not you honey.....your dad, but since you mean more to him than him..
* Roxy raised the knife and........*
CCCCCHHHHKKK!!!!
* miley dodged just in time *
* the knife hit the wooden floor and got stuck *
Miley quickly stood up and dialed oliver's number
Miley: Hello?? Oliver come quick!!!Roxy's trying kill USSSS!!!!
* roxy was running for her *
* miley saw some pepper spray on the kitchen counter, it was jackson's *
* she grabbed it*
Miley: if you move any closer i-i-i'll
Roxy: you'll what?? shoot me with a spitball??
* miley sprayed the pepper spray right into her eyes*
Miley: Oliver!!!!!!
Oliver: miley!! what's going on???
* knew roxy couldn't see her at the moment, so she stepped up to oliver and explained*
* when she was done Roxy was gone*
Miley: oohh no!!!what if she comes back??
Oliver: don't worry i won't send her back
Miley: what'dyou mean you won't send--
Oliver: what i meant was im sure she won't come back
* there was a moment of silence, then *
Miley: O My Gosh!!!!! Lilly!!!!!
Oliver: what?? lilly got involved?? but-no-this isn't what i planned!!
Miley: what you planned???:S
Oliver: no-wait-i mean i didn't expect for lilly to be in this fight
Miley: (THINKING ) is oliver okay??what does he mean by what he planned or won't send her back??


* WHAT DOES OLIVER MEAN??? *
* COMMENT OR ELSE!!!*

[miles30]

long enough for you??

[luv2act]

Gah!!!!!! more!

[miles30]

any more comments??
questionS???
come on!!!
no comment , no chapter or sequel

[miles30]

specail thanks to sohpie, karen, and flower1's real name

[sophiecool]

Her real name is Leena. And what do you mean special tahnks???

[Hannah+Jake]

yeah what do you mean

[miles30]

well....i kinda got the idea of making up this story because of you guys.
plus i got some parts of it from your stories( i didn't copy some parts of this are just kind of similar)
and because you read it anyway.

[DestinyMileyFreak0708]

Morreee!!!
Now!!
Lilly Cant Die!!
For Once Make Miley Die!!
Or Oliver!!
But Every1 Is Making Lilly Die.
Wut Did She Do?!
Lmao.

[PopStarHannah]

More more more more more more more !!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! !!
_

[hannah_montana.boston]

more more this is a nice story :-) ps my name is dj

[miles30]

thanks guys!!!! and lilly doesn't always die , actually, miley does (or jake)
but ya never know!!!

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

oh, please do more! You are so creative!!! and those saying you should kill Miley are idiots because that means they don't like Miley and this is a Miley FAN SITE!!!! MILEY, LILLY, AND OLIVER SHOULD NEVER DIE!!!

[miles30]

i know!! :)
and everyone ussually does that ayway right??
miley always dies, or lilly, oliver gets hurt......
its always the same. that's why im not giving out any clue to who dies or gets hurt.

[hannah_montana.boston]

hurry more

[miles30]

okay!! I'll post it right after this.......
(im writing it right now)

[miles30]

Chapter 11: Transfusion, Solution, Confusion

*Miley and Oliver rushed up to help Lily*
Miley: Lily!!!!!!! Oh my gosh Oliver!!! We need to call a hospital!!!:'(:'(:'(
Oliver: I'll get the phone
Miley: Hurry up!!!!:'(:'(:'(:'(
* The ambulance came later that day*
Miley: Is Lilly okay??? *worried*
Doctor: yes she's going to be fine.
Doctor: but she needs blood transfusion.............she lost to much blood when the knife had hurt her.
Doctor: luckily, it missed her heart and her lungs
Miley: does that mean someone needs to donate blood to her??
Doctor: no......
Miley: then how........:02::02::02:
Doctor: I'm afraid we've only found one match for Lily's blood type......
Miley: then she's going to be okay then!!! :D:D:D
Doctor: yes.....but that person who donates the blood will.....:15::15:
Miley: d-dd-die???:15::15:
Doctor: I'm afraid so........
Miley: Why???
Doctor: Lily needs too much blood.....and there's only one person......if all of you were the same blood type then everyone would be okay.....but-
Miley: there's only one person.....
*silence*
Miley: who is it???
Doctor: ------------
Miley: -------!!!!!!!!! :15::15::15:

WHO IS THE PERSON??????
COMMENT!!! _PLEASE
*sorry if it's short*

[pancake_panda21]

Morreee!!!
Now!!
Lilly Cant Die!!
For Once Make Miley Die!!
Or Oliver!!
But Every1 Is Making Lilly Die.
Wut Did She Do?!
Lmao.
Plz don't cuss.
even if it is an abbreviation.

[pancake_panda21]

OMIGOSH! Who is it? I'm gonna die of boredom while waiting.
Idk why, but i think it;s ---- i won't say.

[hannah_montana.boston]

please be jake

[heyitswhatever]

oh my gosh.
i have theories.
but i can't tell them now...
:/

[miles30]

maybe.......I'm not saying its right...but im not saying it's wrong either......
try not to guess........bacause its supposed to be a surprisesurprise...but you may be right...*wink* :)

[miles30]

2 more comments and you will find out who he is.......
even if the person who comments is the same...as long as its 2 comments..come on guys!!! :) :) :) :)

[heyitswhatever]

(:

[hannah_montana.boston]

moreeeeeeeeeeeee

[tricia1228]

More!

[hannah_montana.boston]

moreeeeee

[heyitswhatever]

yeah, more!! it's getting REALLY good!!

[miles30]

i have writer's block......Sombody help me or this thread is closed.

[heyitswhatever]

ok, i sorta have an idea.
it might not be good,
but if it will save the thread(:

but i don't wanna say it here.

[hannah_montana.boston]

i might have an idea wait a few 8-10 hrs sleep school u kno

[miles30]

okay!! meanwhile:

[hannah_montana.boston]

wha what

[miles30]

Chapter 11: WHO??!!!

Doctor: Miley.....I'm afraid Mr. Stewart is the only one who can replace Lily's.
*Miley stared at the Doctor in shock*
Miley: mm--m-M-my dad? :'(:'(
Doctor: there's no other way to-
Miley : NNNOO!!!!
*she ran away......thinking about her dad and Lily*
*miley hid inside a janitor's closet*
Miley: *THINKING* losing my mom was enough....now I have to choose between my father and my most loyal best friend??
Miley: AAAHH!!!!! *miley screamed in frustration*

*the closet door swung open 30 minutes later*

Doctor: Miley good news!!!!
Miley: what could possibly be good news at a time like this??
Doctor: I think this news is!!
*miley wiped her tears and stood up*
Miley: okay.........
Doctor: well maybe its not EXCACTLY good news. At least not for Lily...:02::02:
Miley: OOH NO!!
Doctor: oh no!! No , Ms. Stewart she'll be fine...but...
Miley: but what??
Doctor: ---------------......
Miley: -------------!!!!!! :o:o

WHAT WAS HER BIG NEWS???
FIND OUT AFTER YOU COMMENT!!!
*6 COMMENTS OR NOTHIN" WILL BE HEARD OR WRITTEN*

[hannah_montana.boston]

omgomgomgogmg

[hannah_montana.boston]

lilly robbie ray ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[miles30]

3 more comments!! and there's a surpirse comin' up thanks to heyitswhatever!!

[heyitswhatever]

:D
oh man, i wonder what will happen?
lol; haha, i'm watching hannah montana as we speak on disney channel
[or is it,"as we type"?]
btw, you guys should really comment.
you guys will never expect it!

[miles30]

i think they're all dozing off.
where d'you live by the way??
what state?

[heyitswhatever]

I live in San Diego, California

[tricia1228]

More!

[miles30]

maybe they have a different time

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!!

[x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x]

Write more plz!

[miles30]

thank you!! but I have to goto sleep now!!
if I can get 3comments while i'm gone, i'll write 2 chapters!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[pancake_panda21]

more more more more more more more more more more more .

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

More! Please, more!!! Whatever happens, I hope Lilly and Mr. Stewart are okay!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

moreee

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

more, please, please, please.... I'm going to die otherwise!!!

[luv2act]

U ARE KILLLING MEEEEEEEEEEEEE! come on, more!

[pancake_panda21]

Moreeeeee!!!

[miles30]

okay......where was I again??
hold on...

[elle]

ooh add more! more more!

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

more!!!!! i'm dying for more....

[Kuruka]

oh plz~
more more more!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee

[mileycyrusisluv]

awesome

[munchkingirl822969]

MORE of the story please!!!

[miles30]

okay okay!!!!!
but im only writing this so the mods don't close it up.
here:
(writing it)

[miles30]

Chapter 13: More News

this chapter was inspired by: heyitswhatever

Doctor: Miley........um.......i forgot there's also some news about you......
Miley: wh-wh-what is it??:02:
Dotor: okay.....Lily's momjust got her blood tested and we found out that she has the same blood type.
Miley: oh......you mean??.......:S:S
Doctor: i'm afraid so.....and we found out that Robby ray
had got into an accident years ago after his wife and him split up and his daughter was born....
Miley: so is there something wrong with......me??:02:
Doctor: no...but....Miley...you're not his daughter:54::54:
Miley: what?? Oh!!! I get it!!
Doctor: y-yo-you do??:|:|
Miley: yeah! Very funny doc now what's wrong with me??
Doctor: nothing. You're not robby's daughter.
Miley: then wh-who is??
Doctor: ----------
Miley: no!!!!:o:o:o

COMMENT PLEASE!!!
*SORRY ITS TOO SHORT!!*

[smileyface93]

omggg more! plzzz

[miles30]

tell ya' what if i get 7 comments??
i'll give ya' 5 chappie's right now.
but it has to be other people not just you
and that one ^^^ doesn't count.

[miles30]

so pm any friends and if i get them by saturday, then i'll type 5 chappies. if i get them tommorow, 6 chappie's

[Cutiegril123]

Ahhhhhhhhhh more. Im gonna die. Of lack of story. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! every1 post comments or else.....No story = [

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

moremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!!1 dont' close it down... It's sooooooo gooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! !
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!11
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

[miley-hannah]

I can't take this give us more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[munchkingirl822969]

More!!I'm guessing Lilly is his daughter??

[munchkingirl822969]

I think this story is pretty cool.Does it have a good ending?

[munchkingirl822969]

As in a happy one?Sorry.I'm just trying to make a lot of comments so that way we can all see some more of the story.LOL.Plus, I'm probably going to ruin the story if I keep asking questions.LOL.

[munchkingirl822969]

OKAY.HERE"S THE SEVENTH COMMENT!!

[Cutiegril123]

it doesn't count if u post more then one like only one comment counts...well at least for some ppl but im pretty sure it doesn't count like i already posted so this won't count as a comment

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! who?????????????/1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

:-) meanie (-: :-) what a cruel cruel joke you played in me :-( but i am very forgiving if you write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :-) dj (-:

[elle]

ooh, more more... not his daughter?

[miley-hannah]

more more more more

[miley-hannah]

plz more

[miles30]

it doesn't count if u post more then one like only one comment counts...well at least for some ppl but im pretty sure it doesn't count like i already posted so this won't count as a comment

it does count if it was posted in different days.
im going to count how many comments right now.

[miles30]

no calling me meanie or else no more story. FOREVER
mwah-ha-ha-ha-ha!!!!!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

nooooooooooooooooooo sorry :-( *gets down on knees and kisses shoes and shines shoes :-( moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[pancake_panda21]

omg...
ur kinda creeping me
out with all the drama, it's freaking me out!
BUT MORE!

[x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

[miles30]

haha just kidding.
or was I ?
sorry i didn't count 7 comments.
no chapter for a week!!!!!
MWAH!!!-HA-HA-HA-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)):)):))

[hannah_montana.boston]

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i need more

[miles30]

bye bye bye







BYE!

[elle]

that's odd.. so more next week??

[miles30]

yo what happened? Ha Ha Ha i haven't written anything for almost a month.
If you want more of the story comment 3 times and you'll get it. That's a octople promise. (octople means eight times)

[LotsaBigHearts]

more!!
lol yeah you haven't

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

here's comment two: more!!!

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

here's comment three: more!!!!!!

[miles30]

okay okay!!! let me just read the last chapter so i can refresh my memory. hold on.....

[miles30]

I'm Sorry, so sorry........


Doctor: im afraid his real daughter is lily.
Miley: yeah right stop it i wanna know what's wrong with me!!!!
Doctor: look at this
Miley: okay.........
*doctor shows miley a record*

it said:

August 7 1992
Lilly Ray Stewart
Blood Type: B negative
Mother: Stella Stewart
Blood Type: A positive
Father: Robby Ray Stewart
Blood Type: A negative

Doctor: you see miley?
Miley: ummmmmmmmm.....no
Doctor: an a positive and an a negative equals a B negative!!!
Miley: These records aren't true!!!!!!
Doctor: i'm very sorry miley............
Miley: so does this mean lilly and I are like sisters?? *getting happy again*
Doctor: i just told you miley..........You are not his daughter......or at least not naturally.
Miley: wht'dyou mean?
Doctor: well....................

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT????
COMMENT!!!!
*alright since i made you guys wait so long, i only need one comment*
*sorry if it stinks a little, but the exciting chapter won't come at least until two chapters after this one*

[hannah_montana.boston]

*cough adopted cough* sorry i havnt been on ive been on fanfiction.net

[gilmore1]

oooo you should post some more it is soooo good!!! i heart it!

[miles30]

that funny, my friend told me about that website (FF dot net) and that's excactly why i havent been writing. I kinda already brainstormed an idea, but im just trying to make it better. im posting new chappie today. I'll pm you all to read it.

[flower1]

that funny, my friend told me about that website (FF dot net) and that's excactly why i havent been writing. I kinda already brainstormed an idea, but im just trying to make it better. im posting new chappie today. I'll pm you all to read it.
I go on fanfiction.net!!!

[miles30]

i lovvveeeeee that website

[miles30]

sorry i didn't post it yesterday my mom told me 2 get off da comp
but ill make absolutely sure i post it today. that's a promise

[gilmore1]

post somethin now!!

[miles30]

kay hold on...........im writing right now

[miles30]

Chapter 15: Accidents Happen


Doctor: we just found out that when your dad got married, he was in car accident with his wife. They were almost killed.

Miley: what happened??

Doctor: well the car actually was on a rail way. A train was about to hit when...........

Miley: :15::15::15::15::15::15:

Doctor: the car tipped over and your mom fell onto the road below

A/N: you know those roads with other roads under them?? not under ground though. Kind of like a higher road (kind of like a bridge but not really) with a lower road under it?? im sure you sw one of those before. that's what i was talking about

Doctor: somebody found lilly's mom and thought she fainted or somthing.

Miley: what happened to her??

Doctor: well that person brought her to the hospital. by then she's been single raising lilly.

Doctor: your dad i mean lilly's dad----------------:02::02::02:

Miley: :o:o:o:o


WHAT D'YOU GUYS THINK???????
I MADE HIM EXPLAIN WHAT HAPPENED FIRST
* COMMENT PLEASE*
Only 3 comments for next chapter
hope you liked it!!! i might write the other one today also!!!
im sooooo excited for hsm 2 over here, its tonight!!!!

[gilmore1]

i like it

[LotsaBigHearts]

ooh morez!!

[miles30]

i more comment. come on anyone????
i can wait.

[flower1]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....moremormeormeo rmeoem!

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

i don't know...is it too late to ask for more?

[sophiecool]

Yesh it is, pleez don't bump old threads ;)

[miles30]

of course not
but it is probably too late too read more because no one is reading you know

[miles30]

*first of all : IM BACK!!!* who missed me?? hehehe

Chapter 16: Hospital Doctor Say What??!!:o:o:o

Miley: huh????
Doctor: i'm sorr miley.......:|:|

*Miley ran, she didn't know where she was going, but she didn't care. Robby Ray was not her dad!!!!!!!!!*

:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'
Robby: miley!! miley!!!
miley did not dare look back

she burst out the hospital doors and just as she turned,

BAM!!!

an ambulance had hit miley as it was driving its way to the emergency room.
blood was everywhere

*miley could here her father's---lilly's father's voice*

Robby: *in miley's thoughts* miley *very faint* miley *quieter* miley.. miley.......

Familiar voice: honey?? sweet pea?? are you okay???? *clearer* MILEY!!!
*miley opened her eyes*

Miley: huh?? what happened?? who are you???
Familiar Voice: haha very funny miley......
Miley: What the--?? but you can't be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who did Miley see?? Will she be okay?? Since I haven't wrote in a loong time only 3 comments!!!!!!

[Aimeedapinkpanther]

1) More
2) More
And
3) More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
I Demand More Now!!! Or i will Die!!!

[miles30]

hey guys, idk if you guys will ever check this thread again, since i havnt posted anything for like a year, but if u care @ all, i will post 5 chapters or more ASAP. the original readers of this were:
flower1
Hannah+Jake
Aimeedapinkpanther
Sophiecool (idk, i think she's just here to make fun of me, but yea :((
LotsaBigHearts
&
gilmore1

hope they notice if they ever check back again, and to new readers, welcome! :))

[miles30]

:21:Chapter 17: The Real One:21:


Miley: mom?! r u really my mother? am i dead?
Susan Stewart: yes, i am your mother and no honey you're not dead, but you are unconcious.
Miley: but how? how---
Susan: well, i can visit your dreams, why not your subconcious mind? i guess while im here i should tell you about what hapened.

*susan stewart clears her throat*

Susan: it was quite a long time ago....when your father, well stepfather (robby ray) and i met in that diner, i was already expecting you, and Stella Truscott was already expecting lilly. we started out good frinds, Robby and i, but then he divorced Stella Truscott and proposed to me after you and Lilly were born. 13 yrs later, we turned out to be in the same neighborhood (Susan Stewart and Stella Truscott). Jackson, is your stepfather (Robby Ray) and mine. We had him before Stella & i was pregnant.

* susan stewart sighs *

Miley stared in disbelief. This could not be happening she thought. There was a chance what her mom just said was wrong, since this was all happening in her subconcious, and she wasn't actually awake. But everything else that had happened before forced the story to be true. Robby Ray was her stepfather.

Miley: is this a dream? is it not real?
Susan Stewart: of course it is a dream, but why on earth shouldn't it be real? Baby girl, you dont have to be the same blood to be family. Your family is the people you care about and cares back. Wake up honey. Wake up. wake up... wake up... wake up....

OKAY SO NOT MUCH EXCITEMENT, BUT HOPE YOU LIKED IT. THAT WAS ONE OF THE FIVE CHAPTERS I PROMISED, NO COMMENTS NECESSARY FOR THE NEXT 4. :))