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cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 01:46 AM
No matter which ever way you think this is... a poem or a parody to Anastasia's Once Upon a December, you would think that it's great. Anyway, please criticize! I need your help to make this perfect! If you are to use these lyrics, please credit me as Raphaella So or if it's in MMW, cutie_girl!

Singing birds
Joyful trees
Say goodbye to December
Peace and love come to see
Spring is here to remember.

Dreams are coming true to me
Plants come back to life to see
The bright blue sky comes to stay
Please, never fade away.

Sustained love
Friendship stays
Sunrise is here forever
Animals wake and say
Spring is here to remember.

Dreams are coming true to me
Plants come back to life to see
The bright blue sky comes to stay
Please, never fade away.

Joyful laughs
Hope is near
Light will stay and that's for sure
Painted smiles
Hopeful tears
Spring is here to remember.

Someone sings
Peacefully
Spring is here to remember.

Copyright Raphaella So

cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 01:50 AM
plz comment <3 spent a long time writing that set of lyrics/poem

Hannah_Montanafan
04-06-2007, 01:53 AM
It's good.

cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 02:01 AM
any criticizing things u wanna mention? plz?

cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 02:11 AM
commentez s'il vous plait!!!

cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 11:49 AM
plz comment

cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 12:15 PM
commentez!!!

Baby Vanessa
04-06-2007, 12:28 PM
Ralphie i love the lyrics/poem

cutie_girl
04-06-2007, 12:30 PM
kk i m deleting this thread cus the title needs to go! lolz i'll get a mod to help me.

Baby Vanessa
04-06-2007, 12:35 PM
lol