Hannah and Savannah Montana Go To Summer Camp (Part 3 of my fan fic series)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

This is my 3rd fan fic ever...and it goes in my series...if u would like to read the second fan fic heres the link:

http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=36482

if not then you need to know the following:
Miley and Oliver are going out
Lilly and Jackson are going out
Bailey is Miley's adopted sister
Bailey is Savannah Montana
Miley had a crazy dream that she thought everyone found out hers and Baileys secret
Samantha Jones is a famous person from Delaware (i made her up)

Previesly:

Robby Ray: Oh yea... your going to that summer camp again this year...and Bailey's going with you....

Miley: Great...thanx....

(Gets out of bed, and Jackson and Robby Ray leave, and it fades out to black)

Chapter 1: School Lets Out For Summer

Setting: School

Lilly: I can't believe its going to be summer vacation after today...then we will be highschoolers!!!!!!!! (says a little excited)

Miley: I know!

Lilly: And Hannah and Savannah Montana will be highschoolers!!!!! (says really excited)

Bailey: I know!

Lilly: And we won't see each other till September....(starts out really excited, then goes to really depressed)

Oliver: I know....

Miley: Oh you guys...(the 4 have a group hug)

Amber: Oh how cute...the dumb squad is saying there good byes...

Ashley: Dumb squad...I got it..because they all dumb!

Bailey: What ever happened to us being on the top of cool list...

Amber: The cool list is sooo middle school...

Bailey: We are in middle school...

Ashley: Not after today...ohhhhh tisssss..

Speaker: Hello this is your priciple speaking, may we please have all the graduating 8th graders to the autotorium for there graduation...thank you, that is all.

Miley: Ohhh I'm soo excited!

Bailey: Ditto...

(the 4 make there way to the autotorium, where they got deplomas for graduating middle school)

Lilly: (while the 4 walk outside) We totally have to see each other over the summer...

Miley: We can't...

Oliver: Why...I mean I have to see you...your my girlfriend...

Bailey: We are going away to a summer camp, the whole summer!

Lilly: Oh....

Miley: Why don't you too come along...

Lilly: Really?

Oliver: Yea don't you have to sign up for those things like weeks in advance...

Bailey: Not for this summer camp!

Miley: Yea..well its technically for actors and singers...but I mean we can pull some strings and get you in.

Oliver/ Lilly: OK!

Bailey: Great...we leave tommorow at 10 am...come to our house, because the limo's picking us up there.

Lilly: Good, because I want to say good bye to Jackson.

Miley: I'm so glad we are highschoolers now!

(The 4 throw papers in the air and walk off)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok, please someone comment....

[hannahmontanarulz55]

anyone?

[SmileyMiley11]

Thats cool!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok thanx...ill write more later

[miji.hannahmontana]

This is really good!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 1 Recap:

Miley: I'm so glad we are highschoolers now!

(The 4 throw papers in the air and walk off)

Chapter 2: Arrival at Camp Sing-A-Song

Setting: Miley's and Bailey's House

Jackson: (is on the phone) Lilly in 3, 2, 1! (races over and opens the door for her)

Lilly: Hey! (They kiss, and Oliver comes in right behind her)

Miley: (Still in her pjs comes downstairs) What time is it?

Bailey: Its 9:45.

Miley: Really? Oh no I over slept!

Bailey: Yea you did... (Bailey is in her Savannah Montana outfit)

Miley: And you didn't wake me up?!?!

Bailey: Well Dad said to let you sleep...I mean since yesterday's nightmare...hahaha...that was sooo funny...

Miley: Shut up! Ok, I'm going to get ready, the limo will be here soon.

Lilly: Great...Hey Mr. Stewart!

(Robby is in the kitchen making his famous pancakes)

Lilly: Enough for me?!?

Robby: Of course...(Oliver and Lilly go over and start stuffing there faces)

Bailey: Goodness...anyway, Dad I think I packed enough...Jackson will you be a good big brother and get my suitcase from my room?

Jackson: Alright... (he goes upstairs, and comes down with 2 large suitcases, filled to the max)

Jackson: Yea, I think you packed enough.( he trips on the last stair, and one of the suitcases opens, making all the clothes go everwhere)

Bailey: Jackson!

Jackson: Sorry...(everyone helps put Bailey's things back into the suitcase)

(then you hear the limo beep)

Robby Ray: Come one Miles, your going slower then a turtle on feeding day!

Miley: (Running down the stairs as Hannah) Coming, coming! (her suitcases are at the door and she grabes them)

Lilly: This is sooo coo!

Miley: Yup...

Limo Driver: Welcome Mrs. Montana, Mrs. Montana. Wow I remember when there was only one Mrs. Montana. (Everyone laughs)

Robby Ray: Have a fun time at camp sweetharts!

Miley/Bailey: (From the limo) We will! (Limo drives off)

Setting: On the road, almost at Camp Sing-A-Song

Oliver: Ok..so Miles, is Lilly and I going to be known as Lilly and Oliver, or some other people?

Lilly: Well I'm Lola! (Gets her red wig out and puts it on)

Bailey: Right...

Miley: Hmmm, whose Oliver going to be?

Bailey: Good point....Hmmm (they all think)

Lilly: How about..... Chris somebody...

Miley: Yea how about Chris oh no...just leave it as Oliver...I mean its not like anyone from our schools going to be here.

Oliver: Yea your right...(they all laugh)

(Just then the limo driver rolls down the divider)

Driver: Welcome to Camp Sing-A-Song...

(the entance is covered in leaves, and it looks like an abanded place)

Lilly: Wow...did not expect this...

(Just then the car stops)

Miley: Well no...this is the entrence, now look the driver has to show some idea to make sure hes allowed back here, see this is called the entrence to no where, because it looks like you cant go anywhere, its to make other people think theres nothing here...but of course behind this was of leaves and shubbery, are tons of stars!

Oliver/Lilly/Bailey: WOW!!!

(Just then the leaves part, and a magnificent road and buildings, and pools, and more are shown, and the car starts up again)

Bailey: Sweet!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

This is really good!


thanx

[Tomboy Musician]

Wow! This is one of the best stroies I ever read. (besides the 1st 2 stories)
write some more please!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Wow! This is one of the best stroies I ever read. (besides the 1st 2 stories)
write some more please!

lol thanx...im going to write more after i get a few more comments

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 2 Recap:

Miley: Well no...this is the entrence, now look the driver has to show some idea to make sure hes allowed back here, see this is called the entrence to no where, because it looks like you cant go anywhere, its to make other people think theres nothing here...but of course behind this was of leaves and shubbery, are tons of stars!

Oliver/Lilly/Bailey: WOW!!!

(Just then the leaves part, and a magnificent road and buildings, and pools, and more are shown, and the car starts up again)

Bailey: Sweet!

Chapter 3: Meet My Girls!

Setting: Outside the Cafe

Driver: Here you go! (opens the limo door, and the 4 get out)

Oliver: Wow...

Miley: Sweet isn't it?

Lilly/Bailey/Oliver: YES!

Miley: And no nonfamous person knows about it!

Lilly/Bailey/Oliver: Sweeeeeeeeeeeeet.

Miley: Ok, let me show you guys around. Ok...behind us is the wonderful cafiteria, and don't worry they don't have mysteriy meat monday...(they laugh) Over there, (Miley points to a barn) is where you go for riding lessons, and down there (points to a dirt road) is the cabins...and over there is the recration hall, where they have mini golf inside, a pool, sauna, tennies, basketball, like everything...

Lilly: Skate park?

Miley: Yup!

Lilly: Great!

(Just then a group of girls come toward the limo, all saying Hannah)

Girls: Hannah!

Miley: Hey girls! (They give air kisses) Well I don't know if you met my sister, Savannah Montana?

Girl 1: No we havn't! (Air kiss)

Miley: Well this is Lola, and Oliver! Lola, Oliver, Savanah, this is Ashley Tisdale, Vanessa Hudgens, and Raven.

Oliver: I knew you guys looked familiar...

Ashley: Yup!

Speaker: Welcome all celebrities! Hopefully as your saying hello, your getting your bunking card, telling you where your staying. That is all...byes for now!

(A women then comes over the group)

Women: Welcome back Hannah, and I see you brought guests!

Hannah: Yea, well this is my sister, and new group member Savannah Montana, and this is Lola, and thats Oliver.

Women: Thats good...well heres your cards, and welcome back Ashley, Vanessa, and Raven! (She walks away)

Miley: Great, where are you guys staying?

Lilly: Cabin C...

Miley: Me 2!

Bailey: And I!

Vanessa, Ashley, Raven: Us too!

Miley: Great! (High 5's Ashley)

Oliver: I'm in Cabin F

Miley: Well of course, thats the guy cabin...(she giggles)

Lilly: So what's first?

Miley:

[miley rocks]

awesome its great i love the idea

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok a few more comments

[miley rocks]

now pleasez not 2 be rude or anything but i want 2 know wat happens

[hannahmontanarulz55]

now pleasez not 2 be rude or anything but i want 2 know wat happens


ok ill write more now i guess...only because i have nothing else to do...lol

[miley rocks]

yeah thank u

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 3 Recap:

Lilly: So what's first?

Miley:

Chapter 4: The Wonderfull World of Wishes!

Setting: Outside the Cafe and Cabin Area

Miley: What's first? You tell me....we can do anything we like...I advise we go and put our things in our cabin first...

Lilly: Yea...

Ashley/Vannessa/Raven: Ok, cya later guys! (They walk of talking to themselves)

Miley: I just relized Brenda Song isn't here yet...oh well, you will meet her later. Lets GO!!!!!

(Miley/Bailey/Lilly/and Oliver start going down the dirt road to the cabins)

(At the cabin area)

Miley: Ok Oliver, boy's cabin's are down that way... (points to another road) And girls this is where we are staying... (points to a nice looking cabin with a huge C on it)

Lilly/Bailey: Wow!

Oliver: Ok I guess I'll be seeing ya...(he kisses Miley)

Miley: Bye. Lets go in girls! (The 3 bring there suitcases inside)

Bailey: Wow...

(Inside are 6 beds, a bathroom area in the back, and all funished.)

Lilly: This is what I call livin the life!

Miley: Haha...

Lilly: I call this bed! (Runs to the corner, and flops on a bed)

Bailey: Great, well I call the one thats right next to you! (Drags over her stuff, and ploppes on the bed too)

Miley: And I guess I'll take the one next to Bailey...

Bailey: Now only if we had a person to wait on us hand and foot...

Miley: Oh Stacy! (a lady comes out with drinks on a tray)

Stacy: Oh here you are Miss Montana, and its very nice to meet you to, other Miss Montana...

Bailey: Thanks...(takes a drink off the plate)

Miley: Stacy can get anything you guys want...

Bailey: Sweeeeeeeeeet.

(then there comes a knock on the door)

Miley: Can you get that Stacy?

Stacy: Sure...

(Stacy openes the door)

Person: There you are HANNAH!


Sorry its so short....

[miley rocks]

its good i wonder who that person is?

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ill give u a hint...its a person i made up in one of my other fan fics...

[miley rocks]

oh it has 2 be samantha jones

[hannahmontanarulz55]

oh it has 2 be samantha jones


maybe, maybe not.....yet it is sam, lol

[miley rocks]

lol

[Tomboy Musician]

i wonder who it is....
write some more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok ill write more later, but i have to leave in like 5 minutes

[miley rocks]

o man i cant wait anymore this is an awesome ff

[Miley98]

hehehe you just gave it away! Sam is the person!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

sry it took forever, i had to go to church for a rehearsal thing, but here u go!


Chapter 4 Recap:

(then there comes a knock on the door)

Miley: Can you get that Stacy?

Stacy: Sure...

(Stacy openes the door)

Person: There you are HANNAH!

Chapter 5: Oh No, Not You AGAIN!

Setting: Cabin C

Miley/Bailey/Lilly: OH NO!

Sam Jones: Pleased to see me?

Miley: Of course NOT! You tryed to kill me in the past!!!!!!!

Stacy: Is this all you need Hannah, if so I'm going to go....(Hannah noddes, and Stacy slips out the door, and closes it)

Sam: I did'nt try to kill you, I just wanted to scare you, so you stay away from Oliver...

Miley: Well sorry, but me and Oliver are still together....so you can leave this camp now...

Sam: Sorry, but I can't do that, since I'm going to be part of the camp this year, I'm staying in cabin D, right next to yours...

Bailey: Oh no....

Sam: Oh yes... (evil laugh) Byez...(leaves)

Lilly: This is going to be the worst summer ever!

Bailey: I second that...

Miley: I think I just got a little scared....


Chapter 6: The First Slammin Dance of the Summer

Setting: Cafe, 7:00 pm, party night!

Bailey: I can't beleive they have dances here!

Lilly: I know, this is horrible...

Miley: Lilly, how is this horrible?!?

Lilly: Cause Jackson's not here, so I have no one to dance with...

Miley: Um hello, we are in a room with over 50 celebrities, and half of them are guys! Just go ask one to dance!

Lilly: But do you really think anyones going to dance with someone with blue hair!?!?!

Miley: Then take your wig off...

Lilly: Really? I can do that here?

Miley: Sure...just leave, change, and come back in and you will be Lilly again, and not Lola.

Bailey: Could we do that, instead of be Hannah and Savannah Montana?

Miley: No...see we are famous, and it will look wierd if the Montana's wernt here.

Bailey: Right...holy crap is that Olando Bloom?!?

Lilly: Where! I'll be back in a second! (runs out of the room, and comes a second later in a completly new outfit thats pink, and no wig) Where is he?

Bailey: Over there....(points to a guy)

Lilly: OLANDO!!!!!! (runs over to him)

Miley: Won't be seeing her for the rest of the night..

Bailey: Yup! (they laugh)

Miley: Oh look theres Oliver...you don't mind if I go dance with him, do you?

Bailey: No, go have fun! I'm just going to go find someone intresting to talk to!

Miley: Ok, byez! (runs over and kisses Oliver)

Celebs: (stop dancing, and stares at miley aka hannah and oliver kissing)

Miley: He's my boyfriend!

Ashley: You go girl! (Then Ashley starts singing Don't Touch (The Zoom Song) on stage)

Bailey: Right, ok I'm official bored.....

Person: Maybe not for long, do you want to dance?


and this time im giving no hints to who the person is

[hannahmontanarulz55]

any comments?

[miley rocks]

jake?

[miley rocks]

and pleasez write more
NOW

[flower1]

MORE, NOW!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 6 Recap:

Bailey: Right, ok I'm official bored.....

Person: Maybe not for long, do you want to dance?

Chapter 7: Miley, is it ok?

Setting: The first dance, in the cafe.

Bailey: (Turns around) Whose asking---oh Jake...

Jake: So you do know me?!?

Bailey: Of course, you dumped my sister for the Sam Jones girl---opps

Jake: Your sister? Wait are we talking about the same girl...I thought your sister was Hannah?

Bailey: Of course she is, I was talking about my friend, not sister, you know Miley Stewart?

Jake: Oh, well if shes your friend, and shes not famous, then shes not here, so do you really think she get upset if we have one little dance together?

Bailey: I don't know....

Jake: Oh come on....

Bailey: Ok, can you wait a sec?

Jake: Sure...

Bailey: (runs over to Miley and Oliver) Miley, what should i do, Jake wants to dance with me?

Miley: He does, does he?

Bailey: And I mean hes sooo cute, and its just a dance not like a date or anything, so can I pleaaaaaaaaaase dance with him?!?

Miley: Sure, but be aware he cheated on me, so if this dance starts to become more into a relationship, then get away as fast as you can!

Bailey: Thanx sooo much Miley. I love you! (they hug, and Bailey runs back over to Jake)

Bailey: Sure I'll dance!

(Then a man dressed in a tux comes over)

Man: Savannah, your sisters here right?

Bailey: Yea, shes over there...(points to miley and Oliver)

Man: Great! Would you two mind to porform today? I mean your not suppose to sing till the next dance, but Britainy Spears is in rehab again, so she could'nt make it....

Bailey: Um, its fine with me, you may want to ask Miles---I mean Hannah if its ok with her.

Man: ok thanks, I'll go ask her! (he leaves)

Jake: Did you just called your sister Miles?

Bailey: Yea, see I hang out with Miley Stewart alot, and sometimes I confuse her with my own sister..

Jake: Right.....ok lets go dance before you have to go on...

Bailey: Right... (they go in the middle of the dance floor and start dancing)

Man: (yells from the other side of the dance floor) Savannah YOUR UP!!!

Bailey: Oh I got to go... (Jake leans in for a kiss, but Bailey just goes away)

Man: (Now on stage) Presenty Hannah and Savannah MONTANA!!!!!


Hannah:

Aye aye aye oh aye aye aaaaaye
Don’t let no small frustration

Savannah:

Ever bring you down no no no no
Just take a situation

Both:

And turn it all around
With a new attitude everything can change
Make it how you want it to be
Stay mad why do that give yourself a break
Laugh about it and you’ll see
Life’s what you make it
So let’s make it rock
Life’s what you make it
So come on come on everybody now
Aye aye aye oh aye aye aaaaaye

(they finish the song, and all the celebs clap)

Hannah: Thanks everyone!

Savannah: And keep on ROCKIN!

(backstage)

Jake: That was great Savannah! (goes in and kisses Bailey on the lips, and Bailey does'nt try to make him stop)

Miley: SAVANNAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Miley98]

O.M.G!!! That's great!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

O.M.G!!! That's great!!!


thanx...ill write more when i have 2 more comments

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 7: Recap

(backstage)

Jake: That was great Savannah! (goes in and kisses Bailey on the lips, and Bailey does'nt try to make him stop)

Miley: SAVANNAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 8: Cabin C's Secrets

Setting: Cabin C

Ashley: So is he a good kisser?

Bailey: The BEST!

Raven: You are SOOO lucky!

Vanessa: Yea that zombi slayer is really hot...

Lilly: And here I thought you were into Zac Efron...

Vanessa: Well I am, but hey girls can gossip!

Bailey: True that, true that!

Miley: Yea and Lilly--I mean Lilly, what ever happened to you and Olando.....

Ashley: Wait I thought your name was Lola....

Lilly: Lola for short....anyway, Olando was soooo hot! But nothing happend, he just kind of gave me a look saying get away from me, but I just kept talking, he probably didn't even hear half the stuff I said...

Miley: You are probably right.... but that is beside the point....Bailey---I did again---I mean Savannah, I told you, Jake's bad news....

Bailey: I know, but I mean I'm from Tennessy, how many girls can say they kissed a famous person???

Miley: How many can saw there in a cabin full of famouse people?

Bailey: Not many....

Miley: Excatly, would you rather go out with Jake, or go out on a girls day out with a bunch of celebs...

Bailey: Well a bunch of celebs...

Miley: Exactly...

Raven: Wait I'm missing something, Savannah I thought you were famous....

Bailey: I am now...but I wasn't before...

Vanessa: Are you guys keeping a secret?

Miley: Ok we are best friends, right?

Ashley: Most defintally...

Miley: Well see, Savannah and I live other lives, like beside being Hannah and Savannah Montana...we are also Miley and Bailey Stewart....(Miley takes off her wig)

Raven: WOW!

Miley: Now you can't tell anyone....we being keeping it a secret...

Ashley: And what about Lola here?

Lilly: Well I'm Miley and Bailey's best friend. I dress up as Lola to make sure no one reconizes its me Lilly...

Vanessa: Ohhhhh.

Miley: You promise you won't tell anyone?!?

Ashley/Raven/Vanessa: Totally!

Ashley: I have a secret too....once this kid dared me to eat dirt!

(all the girls laugh)

Miley: Great! (puts wig back on) Now about Jake....


(outside someone was looking into the cabin the whole time....)

[Miley98]

ooooo who i it? Wait, don't tell me! Is it Jake? Or Sam? Wait, Sam allready knows!

[Tomboy Musician]

OMG! This is getting good. I bet it was Jake who was looking in. Or is it somebody else? Write some more please!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ooooo who i it? Wait, don't tell me! Is it Jake? Or Sam? Wait, Sam allready knows!


oohhhh good good good u remember the other fan fics!

[Miley is Smiley]

more more more!

[aly1055]

Yeah this is awesome!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 8 Recap:

Miley: Great! (puts wig back on) Now about Jake....


(outside someone was looking into the cabin the whole time....)

Chapter 9: Pool Party Problems

Setting: Outside pool

Man: Welcome all popstars!

(Celebs all yell)

Man: Ok calm down! We, of course, will have live music, great food, and the best DIVING CONTEST OF THE YEAR!!!!

Miley: Ohhh I love the diving contest, though I'm not really good!

Man: Up first....winner of last year, Ashley Tisdale!

Oliver: This is going to be intresting...

Miley: Excuse ME....

Oliver: I mean, nothin!

Miley: That's what I thought you said!

Lilly: Look shes about to dive!

(Ashley Tisdale does a really good dive, every one claps)

Bailey: Wow she is good!

(Ashley gets out of the pool, and Raven and Vannessa go over and congradulate her)

Man: Next up...Jake RYAN!

(Jakes already at the end of the diving bored)

Bailey: Look!

(Jake does a cannon ball instead of dive)

Miley: Look, your boyfriend just got disqualified!

Bailey: First hes NOT my boyfriend, second off how he get disqualified?

Man: Sorry Jake, your disqualified! No cannon balls in diving!

Jake: That's alright....

Man: Hannah Montana, your up next!

Miley: NO! I mean, no, I'm sorry but I NEVER sign up for the contest! NEVER!

Jake: (comes bye an whispers) You can thank me, I signed up for you!

Miley: No, I can't, I'm very sorry!

Jake: (still whipering) Why, are you afraid that your wig will fall off, Miley?

Miley: How, no, I'm not--

Jake: FYI, make sure Cabin C has there blinds down before you start sharing secrets...or someone can be looking in....

Miley: YOU!

Bailey: (Who heard the hole thing) Jake Ryan you scum!!!!

(Miley and Bailey push Jake in the water, and all the celebs look up)

Jake: No one pushes Jake Ryan into the water!

Bailey: It looks like we just did!

Man: Ok, well if Hannah does'nt want to dive, all next diver is Lola!

Jake: (getting out of the pool, and still whispering) I guess thats Lilly? and I should have known you were Miley, and Bailey, since Oliver's in my cabin. When I asked him how he got in, he just said he knew people....now I know what that means.... (Walks off)

(Just then Lilly gets on the diving bored, then she slips, and falls on her bottom)

Jake: (Turns around) That slip was ment for Miley.... (then he turns around and starts walking off again)

Miley: OH NO! I hope Lilly's alright!

Lilly:I'm alright! (She does an even better dive then Ashley)

Man: By crowd appeal, Lilly is the new diving champion!

Miley: Great job Lilly!

Lilly: Thanx! (Gets handed a trophy)

(later at dinner time in the cafe)

Oliver: (running over to Bailey, Miley, and Lilly) You guys you will never believe what just happened!!!!!!!!!!!!

[miley rocks]

awesome omg cant wait till next chap
no really i cant wait

[hannahmontanarulz55]

awesome omg cant wait till next chap
no really i cant wait

lol, ill write more when i get one more comment

[miley rocks]

guys pleasez comment i want 2 know wat happens

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok i have to go to bed, but becuase u really want to know what happends ill write some more tommorow morning, even if no one else posts!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 9 Recap:

(later at dinner time in the cafe)

Oliver: (running over to Bailey, Miley, and Lilly) You guys you will never believe what just happened!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 10: Wow....This is Getting to Much Like Murder She Wrote...

(oh yea, if your wondering who man is, hes the camp director, i just didnt want to give him a real name :lol: )

Setting: Cafe

Man: I'm sorry for cutting your day short. There has been a MAJOR accident.

Brenda Song: Is that why theres police everywhere?

Man: Yes, see one of our celebs had fallen victim to murder...

(Celebs all start to panic)

Man: Please calm down... the young women is Samantha Jones...

Miley: Sam!

Lilly: But who would do that to Sam....oh my gosh Miley you did'nt!

Miley: NO OF COURSE NOT! Why would I do that?

Bailey: Well Miley, I mean since she DID try to kill you back at school....

Miley: Oh come on you guys, why would I do that...

Man: Now, the police want to investigate each person....

Oliver: Miley....why...

Miley: I didn't do it! I mean, come on...I was with you guys when the murder happened...

Lilly: You were wer'nt you...sorry I accused you....

Miley: No, its fine...but who...

Oliver: Well Jake came back to the cabin, cause he's in my cabin you know, and he said he tryed to get back with Sam last night, but she said no, and he was all pissed off...

Bailey: You don't think Jake did it?

Miley: Wow...this is too much like Murder She Wrote....

Lilly: I'm scared...

Miley: (gulp) Me too..

Man: Again I'm very sorry about this...once this mess is cleaned up...we can get back to our relaxing...

Jake: (passes Miley, Lilly, Bailey, and Oliver, and gives them a look)

Miley: Oliver you should tell a police person about Jake...

Oliver: I can't...

Lilly: And why not?

Oliver: Cause I'm to scared to move...

Bailey: Oh just get over there! (the 3 push him to a police officer)

Oliver: Excuse me...I think I know who killed Sam...I think was Jake Ryan....



(And for all the little kids reading this...don't worry Jakes NOT going to jail...no one is :) and you will understand in the next few chapters)

[miley rocks]

wow theat was awesome
ps it had 2 be jake

[hannahmontanarulz55]

wow theat was awesome
ps it had 2 be jake


thanx....ill write more, but i REALLY want someone else to comment first...

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 10 Recap:

Oliver: Excuse me...I think I know who killed Sam...I think was Jake Ryan....

Chapter 11: So...shes NOT dead???

Setting: Cafe:

Police: We got a lead! CLOSE ALL EXITS!!!!

(Police scramble to cover all the exits)

Police: (To Oliver) Where is he?

Oliver: That guy! (Points to Jake)

Poilce rush over to Jake and puts him in handcuffs)

Jake: But I did'nt do it!

Police: Sure...your still coming down to the station for some questioning...

Jake: But I did'nt!!!!

Police: Save it for the judge!

(Police make Jake go into a police car, and some drive away, and others stay)

2nd Police Officer: (Runs into the cafe) QUICK HER BODY IS....IS GONE!

3rd Police Officer: What?!?

2nd Policer Officer: IT'S NOT THERE!

Miley: Wait someone took her body?

Lilly: No of course not...I mean we are all stuffed up in the cafe since it happened...

Oliver: And yea, no one can sneak out with all these police around...

Bailey: So does that mean shes NOT dead???

Miley: I don't know....

Oliver: Wait a second...I just remembered...

(Oliver's flashback of the night before)

(Jake comes in the cabin, and Oliver is reading a book. The other guys are talking to each other)

Jake: Oken, can we talk?

Oliver: Sure.... (points book down)

Jake: Sam seemed really upset today...

Oliver: Look...shes my ex...I don't really like her anymore...

Jake: But I do...so I went over to talk to her...and she said she doesnt forgive me for walking out on her the day way back in Delaware..and that she was going to do something to get me back...I just don't know what it is...

(end of flashback)

Oliver: Wait if Sam killed herself! Like not kill herself, but make it look like she did...

Miley: That means we just put an innacent guy into jail...

Bailey: Come on Miles, be serious, what if Sam did this for more attention...like I can see it now...Popstar dies, then found alive....

Lilly: That does sound like Sam...trying to be more famous then everyone else...

Oliver: We got to get Jake out of jail...

Miley: (walks over to police officer) Jake's innocent...we are most definate..

Police: Isn't he the one that just said Jakes guilty...

Miley: Yea, but we think we know the truth now...

[miley rocks]

omg awesome right more

[m&jrule]

omg write more!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok ill write more after 1 more comment

[miley rocks]

pleasez write moooooooooooore

[m&jrule]

Yeaaa ^^^^

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 11 Recap:

Miley: (walks over to police officer) Jake's innocent...we are most definate..

Police: Isn't he the one that just said Jakes guilty...

Miley: Yea, but we think we know the truth now...

Chapter 12: The Search

Setting: Police Station

Miley: Ok Oliver tell them what happened last night...

Oliver: (Tells story)

Policeman: (Writes everything down)

Miley: And we think Sam is doing a political stunt or something...

Policeman: Thank you thats all we need to know...you can go back to your summer camp...

Bailey: Please, Jake's innocent....

Lilly: Yea he couldn't hurt a fly...ok maybe a zombie, but not an ALIVE person!

Policeman: (Chuckles)

Oliver: Not helping Lilly!

Lilly: Sorry....

Policeman: Ok look, Jake Ryan is under investigation right now.... if you can prove hes innocent then we will have to let him go...but we can't do anything right now...

Miley: What if we find Sam? And shes alive....

Policeman: Then Jake will be out of here before you blink your eye...

Miley: Ok, thanks...(Turns to Bailey, Lilly, and Oliver) We got to go...

Setting: At Camp Sing-A-Song

Lilly: So where do you think she would be?

Bailey: Well lets think...its Sam Jones...

Oliver: When we were going out, she told me she LOVES animals...is there a barn around here?

Miley: Brillent! The barn with the horses....you know how I said you can go horse backriding....lets go!

(The 4 run toward the barn)

Lilly: We have to be quite...

Miley: Yup...

Bailey: (opens the door to the barn, and the smell of horse doo doo fills the air)

Oliver: Oh thats nasty!

Miley/Lilly/Bailey: SHHHHHH!!!!

(just then hay is tossed in the air)

Miley: Sam...is that you?!?!


(sorry the chapters so short)

[m&jrule]

moree

[Tomboy Musician]

Write some more. It's getting really good!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 12 Recap:

(just then hay is tossed in the air)

Miley: Sam...is that you?!?!

Chapter 13: Return of the Annoying Girls

Setting: Barn

Miley: Sam...is that you?

Sam: Yea...it's me...(gets out of the hay)

Miley: Why....why would you fake your own death....I mean they put Jake into jail for this....

Sam: Yea...well I don't care about Jake anymore...

Lilly: Who do you care about?

Sam: Um...nobody really...my life, seems to get more confusing everyday...I really don't care what happeneds now...I thought maybe if I faked my own death, then I could go away, change my name/apperence, and start life over again...

Bailey: What about your parents...

Miley: She has no parents...

Oliver: How do you know?

Miley: Come on Oliver...I've known Sam for like ever...

Lilly: That's true...

Sam: So I guess your going to turn me in to the police now....

Miley: Well you know we have to...

Sam: Thought soo....

Oliver: Look Sam...I think you need some help...I mean, you can't keep running from reality...

Sam: Yea...I guess your right...(then she walks out, and hands her self over to police)

Bailey: Sooooo....do you think Jake will give me a second chance, after pushing him into the pool...

Lilly: You really need to find a boyfriend...

Bailey: Yea I think your right...

Oliver: Well...I know a few guys...

Miley: Don't set my sister up...please...thanks... (they kiss)

Bailey: Hey! Maybe I WANT to get set up!

Miley: Not with any of Oliver's friends...

(Just then an annoying ohhhh tisssss comes from outside the barn)

Bailey: You don't think...

Lilly: It can't be...

Miley: There not famous...

Oliver: Amber and Ashley....

(they look out of the barn, and Amber and Ashley arrive out of limo)

Amber: What do you mean, a murder....not at daddy's summer camp...

Ashley: Yea...

Amber: Sam Jones, who the heck is that... this is stupid!

Miley: Oh my gosh...this makes since, see the camp's owner changed over the summer....Amber's dad the owner!!!!!11

Lilly: Explaines why they are rich...

Bailey: Yea..

Miley: Come on Bailey, we got to go figure this out as Hannah and Savannah...you two better go somewhere and change and make sure you don't look like your self!

Lilly/Oliver: Right! (they leave threw the back, and Miley and Bailey leave threw the front)

Miley: AMBER!!!!

Amber: Who the heck, oh my gosh, hey Hannah! I can't believe you remember me from Singing with the Stars!

Miley: Of course I remember you...did you ever meet my sister, Savannah?

Amber: No I don't think so...(Bailey shakes hands with Amber)

Miley: So what are you doing here?

Amber: Well daddy owns this summer camp...so Ashley and I are going to stay here! Cool huh?

Bailey: Totally...what cabin are you staying in...

Ashley: Cabin A of course!

Amber: Yea, you know because our names start with A...

Miley: Great!

Loud Speaker: Excuse me, all celebs, the mess of this earlers drama is all cleared up! Good news, Jake Ryan is NOT guilty and will be returning to us later today...and Sam is NOT dead....Bad news...this incident had the news reporters swarmed around the entrance way, so this camp is no longer secret...but please, still try to have the times of your lives, here at Camp Sing-A-Song...well have a pleasent evening!

Miley: Oh great...ok well excuse us, Savannah and I must be getting off....

(they run toward Cabin C)

Miley: (now inside) What are we going to do???

Lilly: (who is there, dressed as Lola) I don't know...

Bailey: There here, for the summer...

Miley: Wheres Oliver?

(Just then, a really hot guy comes in there cabin)

[niiro_tatsu]

really good, but didn't jake know about miley being hannah or was that part of the dream?

[flower1]

OMG!! Girls only cabin! lol! MORE!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

really good, but didn't jake know about miley being hannah or was that part of the dream?


that was part of the dream :)

[mhc13]

Really good so far! Write MORE!

[miley rocks]

its really good i wonder who that guy is

[hannahmontanarulz55]

OMG!! Girls only cabin! lol! MORE!


lol

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 13 Recap:

Miley: Wheres Oliver?

(Just then, a really hot guy comes in there cabin)

Chapter 14: The Name's Shane

Setting: Cabin C

Miley: Who are you...and why are you in the girls cabin!!!!

Boy: Chilax you guys...it's me Oliver...

Lilly: (Who was fixing her hair in a mirror quickly stops) Oh...what are you wearing?

Bailey: Yea...it looks like what Jake wore to the dance...

Oliver: It is....I kinda borrowed it...

Miley: (Gets up from her bed) Why then, do you have a blond wig on...

Oliver: So Amber and Ashley won't figure out its me Oliver...

Miley: OHHHHH smart!

Oliver: I know...(they kiss)

(Ashley, Vannessa, and Raven come into the cabin)

Ashley: Whose this?

Oliver: The names Shane...

Vannessa: Haven't see you around La...

Oliver: I'm knew... I'm Hannah's boyfriend! (Grabs Miley)

Miley: (Whisperes) Oliver...they know I'm Miley...

Oliver: Did I say Hannah?

Raven: Yea...

Oliver: I met Savannah! (Goes over to Bailey's bed and gives her hug)

Vannessa: Savannah, you did'nt tell us you had a boyfriend...I mean, since you kissed Jake and all at the dance....opps...

Oliver: You kissed someone else at the dance?!?!?

Bailey: Of course NOT...Jake kissed me...

Ashley: Vannessa...I think that was suppose to be a secret...

Oliver: Well then...

Bailey: Sorry?

Oliver: It's ok...(they hug) Well must be off!

Bailey: Ok bye! (Starts to get up and leave)

Raven: Your his girlfriend...your not going to kiss him?!?!

Miley: (Gives a stare at Bailey)

Bailey: I'm coming over a cold...

Ashley: Ok...

(Oliver leaves)

Lilly: (whispers to Miley) Wow that was a close one...

Miley: I know...

(then Mileys cell phone gets a text message)

Dear Miles,
What r we going to do? i cant be you sisters bf, im your bf! uggg, y did i say savannah...man and y did u tell them that u guys were miley and bailey! idk...we r going to have to talk later...meet me by the lake at 8 tonight
love ya always,
oliver aka shane...lol

Lilly: What is it?

Miley: Look! (Gives the phone to Bailey and Lilly...they read it)

Bailey: Well its almost 8 now... you better go!

[Tomboy Musician]

This is getting even better everyday. Write some more please!

[xxrandomkidxx]

i love your story it's really really good i can't wait for the next part!!!

[miley rocks]

its getting so good i hope they dont break up

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 14 Recap:

Miley: Look! (Gives the phone to Bailey and Lilly...they read it)

Bailey: Well its almost 8 now... you better go!

Chapter 15: SHHHHHHHHHH!

Setting: Barn 7:58

Miley: Oliver?!?

Oliver: SHHHH..in here! (points to the barn opening)

Miley: Ok...

(They go inside)

Miley: What's up Oliver?

Oliver: Miles...why didn't you tell me that you told Ashley, Vannessa, and Raven?

Miley: Well we were all telling secrets...and they kind of found out...and

Oliver: Now I have to pretend to be Savannah's boyfriend!

Miley: I know...I'm really sorry..

Oliver: No! You should have told me! We tell each other everything!

Miley: I know...look Oliver I'm sorry! (tryes to hug him, but he walks away from her)

Oliver: Look...if you going to tell anyone else your secret tell me know...

Miley: I'm NOT!

Oliver: Miles...

Miley: Oliver...I'm super sorry!

Oliver: Super Sorry's arn't going to to make them forget...

Miley: Look Oliver...what's the big deal? I mean so you have to be this Shane guy for the rest of the summer, and pretend to be my sister's boyfriend...what's the big deal?

Oliver: Well if its not a big deal...I guess you won't mind me kissing her...

Miley: Of course I'll mind that...

Oliver: Well I'm going to have to kiss her...even if you like that or not...she's my girlfriend now!

Miley: Shhh..your starting to yell...

Oliver: Miles...you don't get it! Bailey likes me! She has from the begining. If I start hanging around her, sooner or later I'll start liking her...then I'll dump you for her...

Miley: You can't be serious...

Oliver: But I am...

Miley: Crap....see your point...

Oliver: Did you just say..

Miley: Yea...I'm sorry...anyway... but your going to have to...

Oliver: Fine what ever....(leaves the barn, really angry)

Miley: Wait OLIVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (screams at the top of her lungs)

Nearby Celeb: SHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

[Tomboy Musician]

WHOA! Now I even into this story even more, than I ever was. Keep on writing!!!

[rock.star93]

write more it is awesome

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 15 Recap:

Oliver: Fine what ever....(leaves the barn, really angry)

Miley: Wait OLIVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (screams at the top of her lungs)

Nearby Celeb: SHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Chapter 16: If We Were A Movie---Oh Wait We Are A Movie

Setting: A day after Miley's and Oliver's fight, cafe.

Lilly: Wow I can't beleive you and Oliver broke up!

Bailey: And I can't beleive he told you I liked him...I mean I used to...but theres another guy now...

Lilly: Who?!?

Miley: That's not important right now Lilly...

Lilly: I guess your right...

Bailey: Why are we here anyway...I mean its July 4th...we should be home celebrating independence....

Miley: It's July 4th...exactly...meaning its time-

Man: Hello everyone! Wow we have had a rough summer so far haven't we?!? Well its July 4th...and its time for the movie!

(Celebs clap, Bailey and Lilly are confused)

Man: We have watching the celebs carefully, and we have got our two main roles...which one girl you have seen around, but never has been the main charactor, and the boy, well we haven't seen him at ALL!

Miley: OHH I wonder who the people are this year...I'm always a non-important person in the movie...

Lilly: What do you mean movie...

Bailey: Like one that goes in theaters?

Miley: YUP! Haven't you guys ever seen Summer Love, Sunset...um

Lilly: Yea...they all take place during the summer...and a place that looks like this...oh my gosh you shoot movies at summer camp!?!

Miley: Yup..

Bailey: And we are going to be in it?

Miley: Yup...

Lilly: And we are going to be famous?

Miley: I don't know about the little charactors...but the main charactors usually get more famous!

Bailey: Cool...

Man: And the man charactor girl is.....HANNAH MONTANA!

Miley: Oh my gosh...oh my gosh!!!!! (Gives hugges to Bailey and Lilly) AHHH!

Man: Congratulations...and the boy charactor is.....Shane...we have no idea his last name though...

Miley: Oh my gosh (in a totally different tone, like a bad tone) (gulps, and sits backdown)

(applauding comes from a corner...Shane aka Oliver is waving to the celebs)

Man: Great...we have assigned others parts...afterward you can come up and I can tell you your parts, and you can get your scripts....Hannah and Shane can you guys come up now and get your stuff?!?

Miley: Sure... (to Bailey and Lilly) Wish me luck!

Bailey/Lilly: Good luck!

(Miley goes toward the camp director, and Oliver comes in the oppesite direction)

Man: Great... ok here are your scrips...get to know them...love them...do what ever you need to, to learn your lines...shooting starts tommorow....and on page 94 theres a kiss between the two of you...so get to know each other, and hopefully practice that scene...ok not move, the others are starting to come up...

Miley: Thanks...(she turns around and walks to Bailey and Lilly)

Lilly: So....

Miley: I have to kiss him...

Bailey: Maybe that's good...if you guys kiss maybe you can get back together with him...

Miley: Yea maybe....anyway..arn't you going to see if you guys got parts?

Lilly: Heck ya!

(lilly zooms to the line...Bailey trails behind, and Mileys left looking at the script all depressed)

[Tomboy Musician]

More more more! This is getting even better!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

one more comment

[just_like_you_92]

wow, great job!
♥♥♥

[hannahmontanarulz55]

thanx...i got to go to school right now...but ill write more after school

[Fire-Chicken]

This is really awesome! great job

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 16 Recap:

Miley: Yea maybe....anyway..arn't you going to see if you guys got parts?

Lilly: Heck ya!

(lilly zooms to the line...Bailey trails behind, and Mileys left looking at the script all depressed)


Chapter 17: First Day of Taping

Setting: Cabin, film day 1

Director: Hello everyone! I'm Dizzy von shnizzy...I am zee director of zis movie...and if your wondering..I'm from ze country of ze elephants...zis is why I talk like zis... now where iz the main charactors?
(I made this guy up...and he is suposse to have a very weird accent saying z's for either the sound of th or of s's...if that makes since...lol)

(Miley raises her hand, and so does Oliver)

Dizzy: Exellent! Hopefully you practiced and learned ze linez.

Miley: I have!

Oliver: Me to...

Dizzy: Exellent...zo we are going to ztart from zee page number 50...everyone of ze zet pleaze...thank you. And action!

Miley: Oh Brandon! You know we can't be together...

Oliver: I know, but Arielle, I love you....

Miley: But my father already set me up with Sr. Williams V...

Oliver: But...but...

(sounds of footsteps are heard)

Miley: Ohh...its father...I have to go! (runs into one of the cabins)

Dizzy: And cut! Zat waz exelent!!!

Miley: (comes out of cabin)

Dizzy: Ok lets go over this a few more timez...but ztart on zee page 45, and do zee whole zcene!

(the do the whole scene, and its now beginning to turn dark)

Dizzy: Great! Now zee time haz come...time for zee bondfire!!!!

Miley: Bondfire?

Dizzy: Zi! To zee pond! Zee others are already down zere!

(Miley, Oliver, Dizzy, extras, and crew members start packing up there stuff and go to the pond)

Lilly: Hey Hannah! (runs over and gives her a hug) You will never guess what I just had to do!

Miley: What?

Lilly: I had to kiss that hot guy over there, like apparently me and him are like the sub main charactors..like the charactors right below the main ones! This director named Bizzy was directing us...there he is now...(points to Dizzy)

Miley: No...thats Dizzy...

Lilly: What...whose Dizzy?

Miley: Oh my gosh...look! (Points to Dizzy who is now standing next to Bizzy) There twins!

Lilly: Cool...but that was like the best kiss of my life...

Miley: Woa there girl....are you forgeting about someone else...

Lilly: I know..Jackson...but I mean, he never kissed me like how like that guy did...

Miley: Look he's comming this way...

Guy: Hi...it's Lola right?

Lilly: No, it's Lilly..

Miley: (punches Lilly's sides)

Lilly: No, its Lola, your right...

Guy: (Laughes) Hi Hannah...

Miley: Hey Nick...

Lilly: Oh my gosh, thats who you are... Nick Jonas!

Nick: I was the last time I looked...

Lilly: (Laughs)

Dizzy: Hannah! Where iz your zister..her part iz comming up zoon!

Miley: I don't know...(looks around)

Dizzy: Ok..well find her, and zoon!

Miley: Right...Lola, we have to go find Savannah...

Lilly: Yea...(leaving Nick) Oh yea...how was the last scene, when you were with Oliver?

Miley: Horrible...I mean it went perfect! But I never once looked Oliver in the eye...and I felt sooo unconfortable....

Lilly: Yea...well the main thing is where IS Bailey?!?

[miley rocks]

that was awesome i
cant beleive miley and oliver broke up:(

[hannahmontanarulz55]

that was awesome i
cant beleive miley and oliver broke up:(


yea...but it will get better! lol...just a hint...ill write more..i just want a few more comments!


also i just made a club called Everything ABC...please check it out...thanx!

link: http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=39375

[miley rocks]

^okay

[Miley98]

Plz write more I'm begging you!

[just_like_you_92]

can't wait for more
♥♥♥

[Tomboy Musician]

More Please! This is one of the best things i ever read

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 17 Recap:

Lilly: Yea...(leaving Nick) Oh yea...how was the last scene, when you were with Oliver?

Miley: Horrible...I mean it went perfect! But I never once looked Oliver in the eye...and I felt sooo unconfortable....

Lilly: Yea...well the main thing is where IS Bailey?!?

Chapter 18: MI NI EHT KCOR EVAC

Setting: Pond area

Miley: Ok let me try her on her cell....(calles Bailey cell)

*ring, ring, ring, ring, Hey, this is Savannah Montana, leave a message after the beep---beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep*

Miley: Hey, Bailey, where are you!?! Everyone's looking for you, call me back when you get this...

Lilly: That's strange...Bailey ALWAYS pickes up her cell...

Miley: I know...you don't think something happened to her...

Lilly: No I don't think so....

Setting: Traveling into the Woods

Miley: Wait someone's comming...I think you should start calling me Hannah now...incase someone else is trying to find Savannah with us...

Lilly: Ok Hannah...

(they keep quite...and a camera man walks by)

Miley: Ok Lola...lets go back to the cabin, maybe shes there...

Lilly: Ok...

(The head back to Cabin C, and they go inside)

Miley: No...where is that girl!?!

Lilly: Hannah...look....(a note was on Miley's bed)

Miley: What the....(goes over to the note) It's probably from Oliver...

Note:

Hannah, Lola... I need HELP! I'm in mortal danger...this guy came up to me and threatened to kill me! Please help me...I'm leaving you this note, before I go into hiding....MI NI EHT KCOR EVAC....please come help me!

love always,
Savannah Montana...

Miley: Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lilly: Whats this part here!?! (points to the part MI NI EHT KCOR EVAC)

Miley: It's how we tell each other something without anyone knowing...wheres a mirror...

Lilly: Bathroom..

Miley: Right! (runs to the mirror and holds the note up and reads, Im in the rock cave) I'm in the rock cave...

Lilly: The rock cave...that's near where we just filmed..they were telling about it...

Miley: I've never heard of it...and I've been coming here for like my whole life...

Lilly: I don't know where it is...I mean Jake Ryan was the one who talked about it...

Miley: Jake! No...I don't want to talk to him...

Lilly: It may be the only way to save your sister...

Miley: Your right....man this bites...this is worse then going threw a field after the cow's morning sit down...

Lilly: Ok..I'm going to pretend I know what that is....we just have to go....

Miley: Right....

Setting:Pond Area

Miley: JAKE....JAKE RYAN?!?!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

More Please! This is one of the best things i ever read


thanx

[hannahmontanarulz55]

anyone like it?

[miley rocks]

^yeah i do

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok one more comment, then ill write more!

[miley rocks]

pleasez right more i wanna know wats gonna happen

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 18 Recap:

Setting:Pond Area

Miley: JAKE....JAKE RYAN?!?!

Chapter 19: The Rock Cave

Setting: Pond Area

Miley: Does ANYONE know where Jake is?!?

Crewmember: Hannah's hes over there...

Miley: Thanx...

(runs over to Jake, Lilly on her heals)

Miley: Jake!

Jake: Oh hey Hannah...

Miley: Look we need to talk...

Jake: What ever...(leaves his work and walks over to the woods with Miley)

Miley: Look Bailey-I mean Savannah is missing! (she gives the note to Jake) Do you know where the rock cave is?

Jake: Oh my gosh....yea I know where they are...I was the one who showed them to Savannah...

Lilly: Can you take us there?

Jake: They are kinda far away...its like a hike...

Miley: What ever...just take us!

Jake: Ok lets go.... (leads them to the oppesite side of the pond, away from the crew)

Oliver: Hey what's up? (he was sitting on the ground looking at the stars)

Jake: Savannah is missing...

Oliver: Oh my gosh!!!!!!!

Miley: I just relized we don't have a flashlight...

Oliver: Oh here...(goes back to the place where he was and picks up a flashlight)

Jake: Great, give it to me...(gets flashlight) ok come on....

(They go threw an opening in a wall, but the openings covered with leaves, so it looks like theres nothing there)

Jake: Ok...its kinda a long walk....

(finially they get up far enough where u can see the whole camp)

Miley: Wow...I never knew about this place...

Jake: Yea...I always came here when I need to think...

Miley: Cool...ok are we almost there...

Jake: Yea its over here...

(5 minutes of walking and they come to a cave)

Miley: Bailey? Savannah? Are you there!?!

Bailey: Yea I'm here...(runs out and gives a huge hug to Miley) I'm sooo scared....(sweat is coming down here face) (and in a whisper) call me Savannah...just in case....

Miley: Right...come on we have to get you out of here....

Oliver: Look Miley, I know this isn't a good time, but can we talk...

Miley: What?

Oliver: Come here..(gets her hand and leads her away from the other 3)

Miley: Yea...

Oliver: I'm sorry, I didn't mean to say stuff I said...I miss you sooo much!

Miley: Oh Oliver...I missed you too!!!!

(they kiss)

Oliver: So are we boyfriend and girlfriend again?

Miley: Of course....(they walk back to the the others hand and hand)

Savannah: I'm still scared---

(just then tigs break off in the near distance)

[niiro_tatsu]

i love this series, its my fav!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please

[miley rocks]

omg that was great and interesting

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 19 Recap:

Savannah: I'm still scared---

(just then tigs break off in the near distance)

Chapter 20: Thats the Movie....

Setting: Rock Cave

Miley: Oh my gosh! RUN!!!!! (The 5 start running up the hill)

Bailey: There after me!

Oliver: Whose after you?

Bailey: I don't know!!!

Lilly: This is sooooooo scary!!!!!!!!!!

Jake: (Trips and gets back up)

Miley: I don't know-AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Lilly: Miley!

(Miley just fell over an unexpected cliff)

Bailey: OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Everyone runs over, and Miley is hanging on to a branch that grew on the side of the cliff)

Miley: HELP ME!!!!

Oliver: Here...give me your hand!

Miley: I'm scared, I can't hold on anymore....

Jake: Miley, come on this is NOT funny...come on...hurry give him your hand...

Miley: I'm slipping....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

(Miley's hand slips off the brance, and she falles)

Oliver: MILEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bailey: OH MY GOSH! (is in tears)

Lilly: Miley....oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (is crying with Lilly)

Oliver: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jake: It's to late man...come on we got to tell someone! Maybe theres a river down there or something...come on...

(mean while with Miley)

Miley: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh

(hits a fire trampoline thing)

Miley: Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh...

Man: Calm down Miss Montana...someone help her with zome air...

Miley: Wait...wait...how did you know I was going to fall...I mean how did you know I was going to fall here, right now....

Man: Hi, I'm Izzy...and zou my friend, just did your own ztunt...and zee whole thing...was a zetup...as you may zay!

Miley: What???

Izzy: You may have worked with my brotherz, Bizzy and Dizzy...anyway...we have zet you up, along we zour friends, zee zat hole Savannah lost waz on camera!

Miley: WHAT!

Izzy: Zi, Zi...all at zetup! It will be going in zee the movie...

Miley: But why, you nearly killed Savannah of fright...

Izzy: And we are zorry about zat...

Miley: Do the other know?

Izzy: Zi! Me brother iz up zhere and iz explaining it zo zem.

Miley: This is horrible! Why would you do this? We thought we were going to die!

Izzy: Were very zorry about zat! But zou zigned a contract!

Miley: Yea, not one to die though...

Izzy: Bring out Miss Montana's zigned contract!

(a contract comes out, and Izzy flips to page 3)

Izzy: Zee..right zear!

Contract:

Whoever becomes the main charactors, they will be put to the unltiment acting job, by getting put into a dangerous situation, and not know whats happening, and will get flimed threwout the proccess.

Miley: Oh...I guess I didn't see that..

Izzy: Right...now it'z almost midnight...zo go back to zour cabin for zee night!

[Miley Cryus fan1]

omg post more soon

[niiro_tatsu]

OMG but they were all saying like MILEY and BAILY and stuff on film!

[Miley98]

I know!! I wonder whats gonna happen! Bring out the popcorn!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

OMG but they were all saying like MILEY and BAILY and stuff on film!


exactly....ill write more soon!

[Miley98]

oh man! When I saw u posted I thought that it was gonna be another chap! :(

[hannahmontanarulz55]

oh man! When I saw u posted I thought that it was gonna be another chap! :(


lol...ok ill start writing it like now because im bored..lol :lol:

[Miley98]

yay! I cant wait!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 20 Recap:

Miley: Oh...I guess I didn't see that..

Izzy: Right...now it'z almost midnight...zo go back to zour cabin for zee night!

Chapter 21: Wait...Didn't we Say Our Names....

Setting: Cabin C

Ashley: Wow....I can't beleive those directors...

Vannessa: Yea...I mean, Bailey are you sure your ok?!?

Bailey: I should be fine....but I mean I was really scared....

Miley: Excactly...we need to get those people fired...

Raven: But you do have to admit...that WILL be a good movie when it comes out...

Miley: I guess...hey wheres Lilly?

(Door opends, Lilly and Oliver are there)

Miley: You guys! Its like midnight!?!

Oliver: BAD NEWS!

Lilly: Really bad news!

Miley: What?

Lilly: Miley you said Bailey like 20 times while they were RECORDING!

Miley: NO!

Lilly: And I said your name like a million times too!

Bailey: What are we going to do?!?

Oliver: Whose up for a midnight game hid and seeking?!? Well basicall just seeking...unless you want to hid---

Miley: You mean steal the tape....

Oliver: Yea...I mean its really the only thing we can do...

Lilly: Yea...

Bailey: Let's do it..

Miley: Are you serious...

Ashley: This is exciting...I mean that tape, if it gets out your whole life is reuniend! (sp?)

Raven: Ashley's right...

Miley: Ok...lets do it!!!


(sry its a short chapter)

[Miley98]

Great! Awesome! LUV IT!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 21 Recap:

Ashley: This is exciting...I mean that tape, if it gets out your whole life is reuniend! (sp?)

Raven: Ashley's right...

Miley: Ok...lets do it!!!

Chapter 22: The Search is On!

Setting: Woods

Miley: I can't beleive we are doing this!!!

Oliver: Yea...

Bailey: Guys be quite!

Lilly: Yea we are going to get caught!

Miley: Come on we got to find that....whoa!

(Miley tips over a branch and her whoa gets heard all across the woods)

Lilly: Miles are you ok?!?

Police: Whose there? (flashed light over where the 4 were, the quickly hid behind a rock, and they are safe)

Bailey: What if they are filming right now?!?

Oliver: People are sleeping, they arn't going to film people sleeping...

Miley: Oliver is right...come on....

(Miley moves, and they go to a shack wear all the cameras and stuff are put during the night)

Lilly: What now...its locked?!?

Miley: I don't know....

Oliver: Go hide!

Miley: Why, what are you going to do?!?

Olive: GO HIDE!

(The 3 went and hid)

(Oliver picks up a rock and slams it on the lock, the lock breaks open)

Miley: (Starts to come out of hiding) Great job Oli---

(Police sourround Oliver)

Police: Put the rock down son, and no one will get hurt...

Oliver: (Puts down the rock and goes piecefully with the police)

(After about 10 min. everyone was gone)

Bailey: He sacrrified him self for you Miles...

Miley: I know...come on...

(They get up and run over to the shack and open the doors)

Lilly: Wow...thats a lot of a cameras....

Bailey: Come on...lets look!!!!

(After a search of an hour, they got the film from the camera that was used, and they closed the door back up and started to go back to Cabin C)

Miley: Wait...

(runs over to the pond and threws the film into the water)

Miley: Now the evidence is gone.... (She watches the film sink)

Lilly: Come on Miley!

Miley: Right...thanx guys!

(They hug)

Bailey: What about Oliver?

Miley: I don't know...

[Miley98]

Thats really great!

[HannahMontanaX3]

ahhh more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 22 Recap:

(They hug)

Bailey: What about Oliver?

Miley: I don't know...

Chapter 23: I've Got Nerve!

Setting: Front Gates

Lilly: Ok, its clear!

Bailey: RUN!

Miley: SHHHH....

(They run from the camp to the nearest road, 1/2 mile away)

Lilly: Oh gosh...

Bailey: I'm hungry...

Miley: It's like 4 o'clock in the morning...come on...to the police station!!!!

(They start walking to the police station)

(Almost there)

Bailey: Wait...Miles we can't go into the police station as Hannah and Savannah...it will look suspitious...

Miley: Your right...quick, get rid of your wig, and take off that really expensive jacket!

(They take them off and throw them into the woods)

Miley: Great, come on!

(They go into the police station)

Miley: Um excuse me?!?

Police officer: What are you kids doing out at (looks at clock) 4:30 am?

Bailey: Our friend....he was put into here....and he didn't deserve it!

Lilly: Yea...

Male Police officer: (shuffles threw papers) There was one minor brought into today...but I'm not allowed to say who...

Miley: Oh come on!!!!

Femail Police officer: (rushes into the station) Sir, Camp Sing-A-Song just notified us that 2 of there campers are missing...and we just found there cloths outside!!!

Miley: (Looks at Bailey, and mouths, Those are ours....)

Male Police Officer: Oh my gosh!!!! (Gets up and runs outside with the female police officer)

Miley: This is our chance!!!!

(grabs the keys the officer left on his desk, and runs for the cells)

Lilly: Boy, that girl got ALOT of nerve!!!!

Bailey: Just like our song...ok come on!!!!!

[miley rocks]

awesome write more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 23 Recap:

Miley: This is our chance!!!!

(grabs the keys the officer left on his desk, and runs for the cells)

Lilly: Boy, that girl got ALOT of nerve!!!!

Bailey: Just like our song...ok come on!!!!!

Chapter 24: The Jail Break

Setting: Jail

Lilly: (stops in her tracks) Hey!!! I just realized...the police offercer said 2 campers were not at camp...am I not a camper or something????

Miley: They mean celebs...guests are like no ones there...sorry...

Bailey: I found him!!!!

Miley: Thank God!!!!

(Runs over to Oliver's cell)

Miley: Oliver!

Oliver: Miles, I'm sooo sorry...

Miley: Yea...why did you do that...I mean if you knew you were going to get caught...

Oliver: I rather get caught, then people finding out your Hannah...since if people found out, then we would have no Oliver-Miley time...

Lilly: Or Miley-Lilly time!!!

Bailey: Oh, so I'm just chopped meat...

Miley: Of course not Bailey...besides, if people found out...you and I would be together all the time!

Bailey: Right...(they laugh)

Oliver: Not to rush you guys or anything...but do you think you could get me out of here?!?

Miley: Oh right! (Unlocks jail cell door)

Oliver: Thanks....(Miley and Oliver kiss)

Lilly: Ok lets get out of here...

Bailey: Um, you guys....

Miley: Come on Bailey!

Bailey: But you guys...

Lilly: Tell us later...come on!!!

Bailey: BUT GUYS!!!!!!!

(to find out more i need at least 2 comments! thanx!)

[PursePrincess4eva]

more!

[miley rocks]

more pleasezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[Miley98]

Plz pretty plz write more!

[Tomboy Musician]

I missed alot when I was at camp... Now I really what to know what happens next!! Write some more please!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok...im soooooooooooooooo sry i havent wrote anything today...i cant wright anymore till saturday night (i have a date with my boyfriend during the day) and i had something tonight....so thats why i havnt wrote anything more...i promiss once i get the change, ill add a new chapter!

[miley rocks]

k fine
jk but right more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 24 Recap:

Lilly: Ok lets get out of here...

Bailey: Um, you guys....

Miley: Come on Bailey!

Bailey: But you guys...

Lilly: Tell us later...come on!!!

Bailey: BUT GUYS!!!!!!!

Chapter 25: The Missing Teens

Setting: Police Station

Lilly/Miley/Oliver: WHAT!!!!

Bailey: Um....look outside...

(The 3 look out the window, and it had so many cops, people, and more out side)

Miley: What happened?!?

Bailey: Um hello Miley....we are "missing"...

Oliver: No your not...your right here...

Lilly: No them...Hannah and Savannah Montana...

Oliver: OHHH...

Miley: What are we going to do?!?

Bailey: Well why don't we just go back to camp, and go into our cabin and go to sleep....

Lilly: But...the police are probably surrounded Cabin C...

Oliver: Why don't you come back to my cabin?

Miley: Um...no....how about we go and show them that Hannah and Savannah are safe...

Bailey: How...we left our wigs out there...

Miley: Right...

Lilly: Don't you have extras at home?

Miley: Yea, but its what 5 am in the morning, and we are sooo far from home....

Lilly: Oh I ment the cabin...

Miley: No.....

Bailey: Well when I lived in Tennisee (sp?) they sold in stores wigs that were blond, like for halloween and stuff...maybe we can go by some cheap wigs or somethin...

Oliver: That might work...

Miley: Yea, but we don't have any money...

Lilly: I do....back at camp!

Miley: Brillient! But we can't go back there...police are looking for us everywhere...

Oliver: Well may I surggest we leave here...becuase police could come in any moment, and see us...

Miley: Right...so are we going back to camp?

Lilly: I guess we are!

[Miley98]

Write more!

[miley rocks]

dont stop

[hannahmontanafan4ever]

This is so awesome! Write more!

[Miley98]

please! I beg of you!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 25 Recap:

Oliver: Well may I surggest we leave here...becuase police could come in any moment, and see us...

Miley: Right...so are we going back to camp?

Lilly: I guess we are!

Chapter 26: The Cell Call

A little gross in the middle....

Setting: Road leading to Camp Sing-A-Song

Miley: Wait...police!

Lilly: Oh my gosh! This is taken forever!

Bailey: I know...I mean just because we are missing, doesnt mean you have to bring the national army into Nevada!

Oliver: Well I mean you two are teen super star sensations...

Miley: True....

Lilly: Ok GO!

(the 4 run to a nearest hill from where they were standing)

Bailey: But still...

Miley: I mean, what do you think that they think happened to us?

Oliver: Well they probably think you two are dead...

Lilly: Yea...

Bailey: Oh...like someone kid napped us or something..well it would be teen napped wouldn't it...

Miley: NOT HELPING--GO!

(They went behind another hill)

Oliver: Or they could have thought you were---well I don't want to say it---

Miley: EWWWWWW....noooooo...not that...

Bailey: We REALLY got to get that money...

(Just then Miley's phone goes off, to the tune of Best of Both Worlds)

Miley: SNAP!!!!!!!

Lilly: QUITE!

Oliver: SHHH...

Police: Hello? Anyone of there?!?

Bailey: I think they are coming over here...

Miley: It's DAD!

Lilly: What?

Miley: On the phone...yea dad...we are safe...the TV?!? No....oh no!

Oliver: Quick, MOVE!!!!

(They ran down the hill, while the police were chasing them)

Bailey: Hurry...I see a cave or something!!!!

(They go into the cave, and make bushes cover the front before the police saw them)

Miley: (In a whisper) Dad...trust us we are safe...we just need two wigs...so we can become Hannah and Savannah again, and saw that we are safe.....ok...love ya...meet you there...bye!

Oliver: Whats the scoop?

Miley: Well Dad's car broke down, and so him and Jackson are driving down in Jackson's car to the camp, with two wigs...they should be here before dawn comes...I mean, he said this is ALL OVER THE NEWS! Yet no one knows yet...at least no to many people, since most are sleeping now...

Lilly: Ok...so all we have to do is go back to camp?

Miley: Yea...Well lets just hope...

[Miley98]

more. more MORE! =D

[hannahmontanarulz55]

anymore comments?

[jasondolleylover1]

how wuz that gross? but.................. it's reallly goood!!!!!!!

[miley rocks]

^ yeah i dont get it
but its still awesome

[hannahmontanarulz55]

^^^if u dont get it thats GOOD! lol

[miley rocks]

k but its still good and i think i gote it

[hannahmontanarulz55]

^^^ ok...ill write more tommorow..i g2g to bed

[secretive_angel]

can't wait 4 more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 26 Recap:

Miley: Well Dad's car broke down, and so him and Jackson are driving down in Jackson's car to the camp, with two wigs...they should be here before dawn comes...I mean, he said this is ALL OVER THE NEWS! Yet no one knows yet...at least no to many people, since most are sleeping now...

Lilly: Ok...so all we have to do is go back to camp?

Miley: Yea...Well lets just hope...

Chapter 27: Back to Camp Sing-A-Song

Setting: On the Road to Camp Sing-A-Song

Miley: Ok the coast is clear...LETS GO!!! (Everyone runs out of the cave they were in, and runs down the street)

Lilly: Ok...we made it...(says while out of breath)

Bailey: How...do...you...know?!? (panting)

Lilly: Look! (points to the entrence leading to Camp Sing-A-Song)

Oliver: Oh thank goodness...

Miley: Ok...lets wait in the bushes till Jackson and Dad comes....(they go behind bushes)

(They wait there for about an hour, then a car pulls up)

Miley: It's Jackson's car!!! (Gets out of hiding)

Lilly: Wait Miley...

Oliver: Miles wait up!

Bailey: Yea...oh my gosh...thats NOT Jackson's car....

(Car is a mini van that is grey...it stops, and 2 men get out of the truck)

Miley: Oh my gosh...RUN!

(Miley trips, Lilly tries to do some skate bording tricks on them, but fails, Bailey run, but gets caught by a third man, Oliver runs away, and the guys dont catch him...Miley was also caught)

Setting: Van

Man 1: WHERE DID THAT KID GO!?!

Miley: I don't know...please don't hurt us!

Bailey: Yea what did we do to you?!?

Lilly: Yea...come on...why are we here?!?

Man 2: We know who you two are...Miss Hannah and Savannah Montana...

[HannahMontanaX3]

EEEEEKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE! I... need... more... can't... breath.. please.. as... a treat... for... taking... a state test... today. more more more

[miley rocks]

omg u ar killing me who ar does men

[luv2act]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[secretive_angel]

More Pleaz

[hannahmontanafan4ever]

OMG! Post more soon!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 27 Recap:

Setting: Van

Man 1: WHERE DID THAT KID GO!?!

Miley: I don't know...please don't hurt us!

Bailey: Yea what did we do to you?!?

Lilly: Yea...come on...why are we here?!?

Man 2: We know who you two are...Miss Hannah and Savannah Montana...

Chapter 28: He Said, She Said

Setting: Van

Miley: Please, where are you taken us?!?

Man 3: Quite, you will know soon enough...

Bailey: But we arn't Hannah and Savannah Montana...we don't know what you are talking about....

Man 2: Oh come on Bailey Stewart...

Bailey: How do you know my name?!?

Man 1: We know all your names...your Lilly Trescott, aka Lola, your Bailey/Savannah, and Your Miley Stewart, aka Hannah Montana..

Man 3: (Driving the car) Yea and your friend is Oliver Oken...now where did he go!?!

Miley: How do you know...I mean...no one knows...
(phone starts going off, to the sound of Nobody's Perfect)

Man 2: Whose that?!?

Miley: (Looks at phone) My dad...

Man 1: Give me that!?! (Takes phone from Miley and threws it out the window)

Lilly: What did you do that for?!?

Bailey: (Whispers to Miley/Lilly) Look Oliver...

(Outside, Oliver gets out into the street and picks up Miley's phone, which is some how NOT damaged.)

Miley: Good...he's calling someone...lets hope its Dad and Jackson...

Lilly: So what are we doing here?!?

Man 2: We are using you three as traps...or money bargining(sp?)...

Bailey: But no one knows we are Hannah and Savannah Montana...

Lilly: And yea...you can't prove it either...

Man 1: We can if you put these wigs on... (pulls out 2 blond wigs, and 1 red wig)

Man 3: See we have been spying on Hannah and Savannah Montana forever!! Now we thought this was the PERFECT time for our grand sceme to come to order, cause on the tv, it says you were already kidnapped, now we are just making those sayings, true!

Man 2: Exactly!!!

Miley: So this whole time, you were spying on us!?!

Man 1: Yup!

Lilly: Oh snap...

Bailey: ...

Man 2: Here we go...we are here...

Lilly: And wheres here, exactly???

[Miley98]

please please PLEASE write more! =[

[secretive_angel]

MOre

[miley rocks]

omg how could they do that 2 them i hate them but its making the story great keep it up

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 28 Recap:

Man 2: Here we go...we are here...

Lilly: And wheres here, exactly???

Chapter 29: Stay Alive!

Setting: Old Abandand Barn

Man 1: You guys talk WAY to much...

Man 3: Yea, shut your pie holes, or we are going to have to gag ya...

Miley: Shutting up!!!

Lilly: (gulps)

Man 2: (Stops the car, and comes around back, and opens the side door to the van.) Come on, we havn't got all day, move it, move it!

(Miley/Bailey/and Lilly get out of the car and stand in a little group, but then were pushed along by Man 1 to get into the building)

Bailey: This place smells like rats...

Lilly: Rats?!?

Man 3: What did we say?!? BE QUITE!

Man 2: Now get in there!!!

(The 3 are pushed into a small room with one bed, and a video camera)

Man 1: Ok...now we made these signs with words on it. You 3 are going to read them to this camera, so we can send the camera to the news saying we have you, and to send us money..is that clear?!?

(they shake there heads yes)

Man 2: Good....Bill, if you will...

Man 1: (Who is Bill, turns on the camera, and Lilly, Miley, and Bailey sit on the bed)

Bailey: Help us....we are kidnapped...

Lilly: By 3 men...

Miley: And they want money...they want $15,000...

Bailey: And if they don't have it by tomorrow night...they will--(gulps)--kill us...

Lilly: Please hurry...

(Man 1 turns off camera)

Man 3: Good...now we are taking this camera, and sending this message to the news...good night...

(The men leave taking the tape with them. They lock the door behind them)

Miley: Ok...what now???

(Just then leaves move right outside the mini window that was in there room)

Lilly: WHOSE THERE!!!!

[miley rocks]

more its oliver it has to be

[HannahMontanaX3]

ahhh ahhh ahhh more! more! very Miss Congeniality 2. I have to give ya props for that. w00t w00t

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ahhh ahhh ahhh more! more! very Miss Congeniality 2. I have to give ya props for that. w00t w00t


yup! thats EXACTLY what i was thinking when i wrote the chapter! lol :lol:

[miley rocks]

^ o nice 1 i knew it sounded familiar

[secretive_angel]

More

[luv2act]

I need more! it totally awsome!

[lana_23]

that's cool

[♥KokoNutt♥]

just a little hint,I am still reading it and its great but instead of crap,like she would never say that in Hanah Montana,say Sweet Niblets instead.

[luv2act]

yeah, that might be a good idea. This world make a good episode. there was a girl named Alyson who wrote a fanfic on fanfiction.net and it was actually turned into a real episode. its called achy jakey heart. You could try sending yours to disney.

[♥KokoNutt♥]

write more pleeeeeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee!!!! lol
um....but you know how you added Nick Jonas as a character,this is just my stupid idea
but dont go with it beucz your already good at this Fan Fic
but mayb he can find out Hannah is Miley,and add some stuff in between,besides
he has a big crush on Miley-and she doesnt.so. some drama like that would b cool
sorry bout that pointer or what ever they call it,but
I am getting confused with my Fan Fiction too

[Miley98]

More!! =! =o

[luv2act]

def. need more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

yeah, that might be a good idea. This world make a good episode. there was a girl named Alyson who wrote a fanfic on fanfiction.net and it was actually turned into a real episode. its called achy jakey heart. You could try sending yours to disney.


really??? thats alsome!!!! but i cant send it into disney, theres no such charactor as Savannah...

just a little hint,I am still reading it and its great but instead of crap,like she would never say that in Hanah Montana,say Sweet Niblets instead.

thanx, and i will!

write more pleeeeeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee!!!! lol
um....but you know how you added Nick Jonas as a character,this is just my stupid idea
but dont go with it beucz your already good at this Fan Fic
but mayb he can find out Hannah is Miley,and add some stuff in between,besides
he has a big crush on Miley-and she doesnt.so. some drama like that would b cool
sorry bout that pointer or what ever they call it,but
I am getting confused with my Fan Fiction too

i didnt know that! lol....maybe ill put this in near the end of the fan fic....and DONT WORRY, theres going to be a part 4! i love writing about Savannah! lol

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 29 Recap:

Miley: Ok...what now???

(Just then leaves move right outside the mini window that was in there room)

Lilly: WHOSE THERE!!!!

Chapter 30: Oliver

Setting: Room in Building

Bailey: I'm REALLY scared!

Person: Be quite your guys!

Lilly/Bailey/Miley: OLIVER?!?

Oliver: Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Miley: Did you call our dad?

Oliver: Yea, hes calling the police as we speak, I thought I follow that car to see where he was bringing you guys, then I heard voices in here, so I came to see if its you guys...

Miley: Oh Oliver!!!

Oliver: It's ok...did they hurt you?!?

Lilly: No...but they are on there way to drop off a video to the news, about how they are going to KILL us!?!

Oliver: Wow--

*You got the best of both worlds...*

Oliver: Oh no----hello?

Miley: Oh hand me my cell!!!

(Oliver hands Miley her cell, threw the bars that were on the window)

Miley: Hello?

Robby Ray: Sweet nibilets! Miley is that you?

Miley: Yea, and heres Lilly and Bailey...

Robby Ray: Boy that boy DOES have brains, how did he find ya?

Miley: Followed a car...

Robby Ray: Woooo Doggies! (sp?) Ok, so your safe?

Miley: Yea, we are trapped in this building though!

Robby Ray: Ok, the police are getting your cordinents(sp?) on your cell phone--- they got it, ok we are comming to get ya hunny! Don't worry...

Miley: Those guys are back----we got to go!!!! (Hangs up phone) Oliver go!!!

(A door is heard slamming)

Man 2: Bill, I can't beleive you forgot that tape!!!

Bill: Sorry, I'm going to check on the girls...

(Miley, Lilly, and Bailey all jump on bed, pretending to sleep)

Bill: (opens the door) There sleeping! ohhh need to be quite.... (tiptoes back outside, and locks door again, and they leave)

Miley: (Jumps out of bed) Oliver...why is this summer soooooo complicated?!?

(no reply)

Lilly: Oliver?

(no reply)

Bailey: OLIVER?!?!?!

[luv2act]

awesome!!!!!!!! can't wait for more! Oh and what you said about sending it to disney is true, which stinks!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[miley rocks]

omg wat happen 2 him

[m&jrule]

omg more!

[luv2act]

more!

[secretive_angel]

More

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 30 Recap:

Miley: (Jumps out of bed) Oliver...why is this summer soooooo complicated?!?

(no reply)

Lilly: Oliver?

(no reply)

Bailey: OLIVER?!?!?!

Chapter 31: The Excape

Settin: Police Car

Robby Ray: Ok come on!!! Can't you go ANY faster?!?

Police 1: Sir, we are tying to get there as FAST as we can!

Jackson: (Whoses in the backseat) Come on, my girlfriends trapped in there!!!

Robby Ray: And your sisters...

Jackson: Like I said...MY GIRLFRIENDS TRAPPED IN THERE!

Police 1: Ok theres the building!

(2 police cars come up after the first car, everyone gets out)

Police 2: (on megaphone) If anyone is in there, come out with your hands UP! We have the police surrounded!

(No reply, but in the distance, you hear screams of helps)

Police 1: The victoms! Come on!!!

(About 20 police personal charge into the building)

Setting: Back in the room where Miley/Bailey/and Lilly are.

Miley: Ok the police are here....HELP!!!! HELP!!!!

Lilly: But where's Oliver? HELP US!!!!! SOMEONE PLEASE!!!!

Bailey: What if those guys have him?!? PLEASE SOMEONE!!!!

Police 2: I found them!!! The doors locked!!!

Miley: Help us please!!!

Police 2: Ok miss Montana's, please stand back!

(The police get the door opened with an ax)

Lilly: Oh thank goodness!

Police: Theres 3 of ya?!

Miley: Yea, theres actually 4, we have to find our friend!

Bailey: Come on! (bolts out the door, Miley and Lilly on there heals)

Miley: Oliver?!?

Lilly: (now outside) OLIVER!!!

Bailey: OLIVERRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!

Miley: WHERE ARE YOU!!!

Oliver: I'm right here...

Miley: Oliver! (Runs over and gives him a big hug and a long kiss)

Oliver: What was that for?

Miley: We called you but you didn't answer, we thought something bad happed to you!

Oliver: Oh no, I just heard the sirens of the police cars and went to flag them down!

Miley: Oh....(hits him on the shoulder) you should have said that!!!!

Oliver: Sorry...

Robby Ray: Miles!!! Bailey!!! (Runs over and hugs them both, till the can't breath)

Jackson: Lilly! (Runs over and kisses her) I'm sooooo glad you are alright!

Lilly: Yea! I love you!

Jackson: I love you too! (kiss)

Robby Ray: Ok so are you sure you buds are alright?

Bailey/Lilly/Miley: Yea...

Police 3: Excuse me, Mr. Montana, the 3 indentified men were just caught, your daughters, and there friends will have to come down to the police station to indentify them.

Robby Ray: Ok, are you girls willing to go down to the station?

Oliver: Man, I was just there!

Police 3: Oh yes, that reminds us, Mr. Oken, we are dropping the charges against you, since you help rescue your friends...

Oliver: Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Miley: Daddy, I just want to go home, I don't want anything more to do with those...those...those..guys!

Robby Ray: Ok...I'm sorry--

Police 3: Carry, my names Carry, and its alright, you can go home now, but we will need to see you 4 tommorow...got it?

Miley/Lilly/Oliver/Bailey: Yup!!

(Then Miley, Lilly, Oliver, Bailey, Jackson, and Robby Ray pile into another police car, and taken to a local hotel)

Settin: Car

Miley: I'm sooo glad they caught the bad guys!

Lilly: Me too!

(Just then the driver turns around, and Bill is staring back at them)

Lilly/Miley/Bailey/Oliver: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[luv2act]

ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scary!!!!!!!!!! need more! I love it!

[Miley98]

Hey this souns familiar... but great!

[PursePrincess4eva]

scary

[secretive_angel]

cool more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 31 Recap:

Settin: Car

Miley: I'm sooo glad they caught the bad guys!

Lilly: Me too!

(Just then the driver turns around, and Bill is staring back at them)

Lilly/Miley/Bailey/Oliver: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Chapter 32: Punked!

Settin: Car

Miley: Daddy its him!!!!!!!!!!!

Bill: Who?!?

Bailey: YOU!!!

Lilly: Its the guy!

Robby Ray: Hold up!

Bill: (Parks car off the side of the street)

Miley: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Bill: Chilax......(sp?)

Oliver: NO YOUR THAT G----

(Cameras start appering everywhere)

Bill: Hannah and Savannah Montana...you just got punked!!

Miley: What?!?

Bill: Yes!

Jackson: You should have seen your faces!!!!

Lilly: (slaps Jackson) So this is really not real?!?

Oliver: Oh thank goodness!

Bill: Yes, wave hi to the camera!!!

(Everyone waves)

Miley: So wait, the whole thing---

Bill: The WHOLE thing was a joke....(laughs)

Lilly: Ok...(gulp) The was REALLY mean!!!!

Miley: (whisperes to Robby Ray) But dad, we said our names, our REAL names...

Robby Ray: Don't worry, they are cutting them out...

Miley: Ok..

Bailey: I'm soooooo glad this summers over....

Oliver: Me too....

Lilly: Well I thought it was fun....but we never finished that movie.....

(camera zooms out to reveal a theater screen)

Celebs in the Crowd: YEAAAA, WOOOOO!!!

Director: Thank you, thank you, thank you...we thought this year, we would go reality! And thank to the Montana's, there friend Lola, and Oliver, we made our wish come true!!! Hopefully you all had a great summer, and this will be in theaters around Christmas....hopefully we see you all back NEXT year at Camp Sing-A-Song!!!!



Then End!!!!

(ill post the link to part 4 after i write the first chapter, hopefully u liked it, please post comments!!! thanx!)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

heres part 4!

http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=880709#post880709

[Miley98]

you scared me..... but its AWESOME!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

^^lol...im sry...but thanx!

[mileylover20422]

thats awesome!

[miley_cyrus_lvr]

that was so awesome it scared me but it was really good

[hannahmontanarulz55]

^^^opps sry, but thanx

[xoMILEYGRLxo]

awsome!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

^^thanks, hope you all read the 4th part!