shopaholicoxxo
04-02-2007, 10:14 PM
SECRET LOVE
So, I've decided to try something new called Picture Fan Fics. I took pictures from the show that I think matched the fan fic and put it in the story. So, tell me what you think of it!
Lilly's mouth went dry. Her hands were shaking, and she couldn't sit still. She stumbled over her words.
"H-hey Oliver, wh-what's up?" she laughed nervously as Oliver walked torwards her.
Her eyes met his gaze, and she could not look away.
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/5277/pic1gf7.png
"Hey Lil!" he smiled, walking torwards her. Lilly stood up to meet his eye level.
"Nothing much, you?" he asked.
"Nothing, nothing..." Lilly sighed ....
"I kind of have something I need to tell you..." she said softly, her voice shaking.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/4585/pic2copyxt6.jpg
"What's up?" he asked, a look of confusion accross his face.
"I - I .... this is really hard ... " she spoke softly to the ground.
"It's okay, we're best buds!" Oliver smiled, "You can tell me anything. You know I'll always be here for you."
Lilly sighed. Maybe not for this, she thought.
"I'm kind of ... in love with you. There, I said it!"
Lilly started to cry and ran away.
Oliver was left speechless, not knowing what to say.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8031/pic3copynb5.jpg
So, tell me what you think!
I WANT CRITICISM!
If you like it, I will keep going!
So, I've decided to try something new called Picture Fan Fics. I took pictures from the show that I think matched the fan fic and put it in the story. So, tell me what you think of it!
Lilly's mouth went dry. Her hands were shaking, and she couldn't sit still. She stumbled over her words.
"H-hey Oliver, wh-what's up?" she laughed nervously as Oliver walked torwards her.
Her eyes met his gaze, and she could not look away.
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/5277/pic1gf7.png
"Hey Lil!" he smiled, walking torwards her. Lilly stood up to meet his eye level.
"Nothing much, you?" he asked.
"Nothing, nothing..." Lilly sighed ....
"I kind of have something I need to tell you..." she said softly, her voice shaking.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/4585/pic2copyxt6.jpg
"What's up?" he asked, a look of confusion accross his face.
"I - I .... this is really hard ... " she spoke softly to the ground.
"It's okay, we're best buds!" Oliver smiled, "You can tell me anything. You know I'll always be here for you."
Lilly sighed. Maybe not for this, she thought.
"I'm kind of ... in love with you. There, I said it!"
Lilly started to cry and ran away.
Oliver was left speechless, not knowing what to say.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8031/pic3copynb5.jpg
So, tell me what you think!
I WANT CRITICISM!
If you like it, I will keep going!