My Fan fic

[Hannah+Jake]

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Chapter 1

I never knew
How love could be
With him and me
I feel this way for him
I could feel heart with love

This is a moment
We share together
(we share together)
I hope we be forever
(Forever)
Our fairytale will always live
For years & years
Someday we will
Be in Love


Miley Sang To relive the pain she has suffered
Being heart broken from Jake .Since he has been going out with Racheal.
He would bring Racheal to meet Hannah which she always had an additude with Jake .Miley always hoped they would break up when She saw................ Racheal And Jake kissing in front of Hannah.
It crumbled her to pieces.

At school Miley said to Jake " Saw you on the news paper Kising Racheal ," She shoved the paper in his face acting hard to get .She knew the paper would make him upset Because it was .... THE FRONT PAGE .
Miley's plan didn't go so well until she saw Racheal kissing Jake to make him feel better about the news. Once Miley saw that , she ran to the girls' bathroom until Free period was over.She had shown she cried at class since
her eyeliner had been on her cheeks.Jake asked " What happen ? " Miley gave
him an additude and said " hmm ,why do you care? "in her about to explode angry voice.
After class ,Jake told Miley "Whats Your deal ?"Miley responded "I'm sure Hannah Montana is ANGRY too."
"How did you know that?" Jake asked.........."I.........

Find Out what happens to Miley Next Time ...

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[Hannah+Jake]

Chapter 2

"I ......know Hannah, "Miley said in at tone.
"But that's your lying voice"Jake said
But before Miley could run ,Jake grabed her.
"Tell me the truth!" Jake said with slamming Miley to the lockers.
Before Miley could say anything , Jake kissed her:))
Miley waited months for this .

Miley was at home writting a song.
Lily came in with excitment.
"Miley,Jake dumped Racheal and rumor is he did it for you,"Lily said .
"Aw he so adorable ,"Miley said . Miley remember something ."What tommorrow Lily?" Lily responded
"Valentine's Day .Oh no way he's going to get you something BEAUTIFUL!"
"I hope He comes to see Hannah tonight,"Miley said happily.

Jake come to the concert . He was backstage with Hannah.Finally Hannah had to go on stage . She sang:

Everybody makes mistakes
Everybody has those days
ONE, TWO, THREE, FOUR!

Everybody makes mistakes
Everybody has those days
Everybody knows what, what I'm talking bout
Everybody gets that way

Everybody makes mistakes
Everybody has those days
Everybody knows what, what I'm talking bout
Everybody gets that way

Sometimes I'm in a jam
I've gotta make a plan
It might be crazy
I'll do it anyway
No way to know for sure
I'll figure out a cure
I'm patching up the holes
But then it overflows

If I'm not doing to well
Why be so hard on myself?

Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it
Again and again til I get it right
Nobody's perfect, you live and you learn it
And if I mess it up sometimes
Nobody's perfect

Sometimes I work a scheme
But then it flips on me
Doesn't turn out how I planned
Get stuck in quick sand
But no problem can't be solved
Once I get involved
I try to be delicate
Then crash right into it

Though my intentions are good
Sometimes I'm misunderstood

Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it
Again and again til I get it right
Nobody's perfect, you live and you learn it
And if I mess it up sometimes
Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it
I know in time I'll find the way
Nobody's perfect

Sometimes I fix things up
And they fall apart again
I might mix things up, but I always get it right in the end
You know I do

[Spoken]
Next time you feel like it's just one of those days
When you just can't seem to win
If things don't turn out the way you planned, figure something else out
Don't stay down, try again

Everybody makes mistakes, everybody has those days
Everybody knows what, what I'm talking bout
Everybody gets that way
Everybody makes mistakes, everybody has those days
Everybody knows what, what I'm talking bout
Everybody gets that way

Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it
Again and again til I get it right
Nobody's perfect, you live and you learn it
And if I mess it up sometimes
Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it
I know in time I'll find the way
Nobody's perfect
You live and you learn it
Cause everybody makes mistakes

Nobody's....Perfect.....
No no
Nobody's perfect

Once Hannah Come back from stage her wig fell off .Jake looked
at her and said "Miley..........


Find out what happens to miley.....Next

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

good job

[Sweet niblets]

omg thats such a gd story!! whens chapter 3 cumin out?? that would make a reali gd episode!!! plz keep writing!! :D

[Hannah+Jake]

Chapter 3


"Jake I Could explain,"Miley said in fear.
"Why would you do that to me ,Miley,"Jake said looking depressed.
"Jake ..........I.......*got kissed by him*.Miley knew that it was the kiss she'll get from Jake Ryan.She started to cry slowly.Jake left alone depressed.

Once the concert was over Hannah went to Jake's house .His mom opened the door."Can help you ."Hannah began "Can I talk to Jake ."Mrs.Ryan was about to call her son ,but Jake was already there. He said "No".
Mrs.Ryan said "Jake is taking a shower."Hannah responded"Tell I'm sorry I didn't tell him and I love him so much.""I 'll tell him that." Jake was already hearing.

Miley started to add more to her song still crying :


If only my dream will come true
We'll be together forever and nothing
Can change it
(change it)

Just then some box sliped through the window .
It had her name on it.Miley open it and red the card.
It said: Roses are red
Violets are blue
You're the most beautiful
Of the bloom
Love
Jake
Miley smiled .Next thing she opened was a small box.
When she opened it had a necklace with her name on it covered in sliver.
Jake came from the door .Miley turned .They both hugged.

The lights went out.Miley screamed ...................

Find out what happen to Miley in the next chapter....comment

[Hannah+Jake]

read please

[Sweet niblets]

awersum stuff!! u go girl!:D

[flower1]

OMG!!! More!!!

[Hannah+Jake]

Chapter 4


............The lights went on but Miley...........disappears.
Jake could still hear Miley scream,but soon it was fading away.
Miley was taken to a haunted house , a dark. Jake panicing he had to find Miley.Soon his phone, he picked it up.The voice said "Hi , Jake want to listen to your girlfriend.""Yes , I do ."Soon Miley was on the line ,Miley said"Jake you have got to save me please and if dont bring what he wants ,I will still live but he'll ______________me . "Jake heard what she said .The voice said "want to listen to your friend.Lily was on the line and said "Save me!!!!""You too ,But how"No worries or else Jake can't do anything about, Miley thought.

Jake went to Oliver's house and told everthing. Oliver was in to help Jake.
They had to set up man things."I can't have who ever rape Miley,"Jake thought
Everthing was a wierd now....


Will the guys save the girls comment for next chapter...............

[Sweet niblets]

hmmm its getting interesting.........

[Hannah_Montanafan]

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