what? no! my 2nd hannah montana fanfiction

[vanessa*anne]

jackson: i hate family meetings.
miley: what did you do?
jackson: nothing, nothing at all.
miley: sure you didn't

robby ray: don't worry you are not in trouble. i have decided that you as hannah should start writing your own songs.
miley: really? omg thank you dad.
robby ray: but.....
miley: not the but
robby ray: i have hired someone to help you write your songs.
miley: who?
robby ray: this music producer from hollywood and he knows your secret
miley: what?
robby ray: don't worry, he won't tell
this guy walked in the door. 5 feet tall, handsome, very very very hot.
miley: oh wow...... :07:
jack: hi im jack and you must be miley. pleasure to meet you
miley: same
jack: i have done records with many other stars and am very pleased to be working with you.
miley: trust me the pleasures all mine
robby ray: remember that you were talking to me about a if we were a movie music video?
miley: if we were a movie music video? no way!
jack: yes.. all famous stars should have a music video and yours is going to be with a special guest!
miley: who?
jack: jake ryan
miley: no way!
jack: no kidding?
miley: not kidding
jack(whispering) : i think you should tell him
miley: i think i will
miley: look at the time! i have to meet jake at the beach! bye
miley runs to the beach and sees jake in his "disguise"
miley: hey jake
jake: hey miley *Kisses her*
miley: can you come over here for a second i have something to tell you....
jake: sure! what are you going to tell me
miley : I'm hannah montana, me miley
jake:.......
what is he going to say? find out in the next chapter

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[vanessa*anne]

jake: yea right
miley (singing) : if we were a movie you'd be the right guy and i'd be the best friend that you'd fall in love with in the end. we'd be laughing, watching the sunset. fade to black. show the names play that happy song....
jake: no way
miley: sorry i didn't tell you earlier but i was afraid
jake: afraid of what?
miley: that you'd like hannah more than me
jake: thats ok.
they kiss and some little kids frisbee knocks jake ryans hat and sunglasses off
jake: miley we gotta go!
miley: ok

jack: miley we have an early start tomorrow
miley: ok why?
jack: the if we were a movie music video of course.
miley: oh ok


the next morning miley got changed into hannah and went to the studio.
jack: ok miley. wear this and jake and all these fans will be standing there when you sing got everybody starstruck. then you start doing the dance moves i showed you on yea you you're charming got everybody starstruck. then jake will be with another girl. when the chorous starts he will come over to you and you will pretty much sing. read the stuff on the sheet and give him a kiss at the end. understand?

hannah: yep. lets rock and roll.
jake: hey mil..... i mean hannah
hannah: hey jake
jake: pretty cool that we are working together huh?
hannah: yea pretty awsome

they shoot the video, jack cut it a bit to change some things

jake: wow. i first on screen kiss. awsome
hannah: yea. *kiss*
jack: wow. you don't have to kiss while the cameras are off.
hannah and jake blush.
jack: just kidding
jack(whispering to jake): im hannahs prouducer. i know her secret. don't worry.

the next day miley was on the beach with jake. her birthday was in a few days and miley was really excited.
jake: miley i have something to tell you......
miley: what?

[vanessa*anne]

Please comment! trust me it is going to get a lot better than this. im not the best at staring fanfictons.....

[fashionista]

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[HannahMontanaX3]

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[vanessa*anne]

jake: i am going away for a month
miley: what? why? you just came back
jake: i was offered a part in this movie and it is going to be huge. my producer wants me to do it....
miley: but... my birthday is in a few days.
jake: don't worry. i will be here for that. don't you worry
miley: but still! i missed you for 4 whole months and you just came back and now you are leaving again.
jake: i am so sorry
miley: what about us?
jake: we will still be together.
miley felt a little bit better after that. they would still be together but she was still together.
miley left.
jack: that cake is perfect. quick she is here hide it.
jack: hi miley
miley: hi
jack: whats wrong?
miley: everything. jake is going agan
jack: what? no he can't
miley: he is still.
jack: don't worry i will always be here
miley: he can't leave. he just came back.
jack: that is the life of a star sometimes, it can suck.
miley: tell me about it..
jack: he loves you
miley: thanks i know
jack: so what do you think of this......

[HannahMontanaX3]

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[laurahe1]

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[SmileyMiley11]

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[cutie_girl]

yeah! i really need ur help wif mine. it's called All's Fair In Love, War and Highschool (sequel to fan fiction by cutie_girl) could u tell me what i did wrong so i could improve?

[Smilezmiley15510]

Wow this one is really good I love it!! IT's way different than your other one but its still really really really really really good!:))

[Hannah_Montanafan]

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[vanessa*anne]

yea sure i will help. just pm me about it.

[SmileyMiley11]

its an awesome fanfic

[vanessa*anne]

anyway
chapter 3

miley: oh wow....
jack: do you like it?
miley: it is the most beauitful dress i have ever seen! thank you! what is it for?
jack: just wear it on your birthday. you will see.
miley: oh ok. lets start on this song.

jack: ok. when writing a song you have to put your heart into it. show what a beautiful girl you are.
miley: you really think i am beautful?
jack: no.... i know so
miley (singing) :
why should i waste my time
on crying a river
I can just catch a star and my dreams

my time is now
nothings stoppping me
m not hiding now
my dreams can be a reality
im not saying no
nothings stoppping me

im not wasting time
worrying about tomorrow
now is now and
whats the point in hiding,
locking everything inside

jack: wait stop. good but maybe speed it up a little
they worked on the song and made it perfect
jack: heres the cd
miley: omg! thank you so much.
she hugged him
jack: miley you're such a beautiful girl, sinside and out. don't let anyone tell you otherwise or change you
miley: thanks *blushing*

oliver: lilly i have something to tell you
lilly: what?
oliver: i like miley
lilly started laughing
oliver: im serious
lilly: what? but she has jake
oliver: i know
lilly: im sorry i have gtg
lilly walked home
lilly: oliver liking miley. wierd.....

miley: hey dad. im back listen to this
she puts on the cd
robby ray: its beautiful honey
jackson: dad could i....
robby ray: no
jackon: but
robby ray: no
jackson: you are a cruel cruel father
miley: im going to bed

dear diary
Jake is leaving again. how can he? he just came back. Jeark. No i love him. i'll just miss him. anway i get to write my own songs now but with the help of jack. hes so sweet and cute. ah..... do i like him? no i can't! he is 20 and i am 14 (almost 15!) we worked on my song today and he said i was beautiful inside and out and got me the most beautiful dress. can't wait to go to work tomorrow but jake is leaving. still can't believe it

she feel asleep and woke up in the morning. Jake was leaving that day. A sudden feeling of sadness swept over her.

Miley: I guess this is it jake...
jake:....
what is he going to say? find out in the next chapter

[Hannah_Montanafan]

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[Zanessa Fan1]

Omgosh more more more!!! Its soooooooooo good!

[vanessa*anne]

Ok. Heres the next part

Jake: Miley I love you and even when I don't see you I love you
miley (almost in tears) : jake don't go
jake kisses her and then his flight was called
jake: that is my flight
miley: no jake... don't leave me again
jake: bye
miley: bye i love you
miley was crying. why did he have to leave her? again! she looked at the time. she was late for recording. she walked to the stuidio

jack: miley whats wrong?
miley: jake. he left me again. he left me all alone. how could he!
jack: come here. i know it can be tough but you hae to get through it remember the song we wrote yesterday. theres no stopping you.
miley: oh why why why did he have to leave!
with jack holding her in his arms, she felt secure.
jack: he is a complete jerk doing this to you! just try to get on with things.
miley: but he was the perfect guy until he kept leaving me. he loved me
jack: miley. look a bit closer. someone loves ytou a lot, i bet
miley: thanks jack

jack: you know i had some problems a few weeks ago with my girlfriend. she was kissing another guy and i hit him.
miley: what did he do?
jack: he was hurt pretty bad. my girlfriend was devastated. it was a mistake i am so stupid.
miley: no your not stupid
jack: miley trust me i am not the kinda guy anyone should get involved with. i make too many mistakes
miley (singing) :
nobodys perfect
jacks gotta work it
again and again till he gets it right
you made a mistake, you can't help it.
jack: theres a smile. thats my smiley miley
miley started to giggle!

miley: anyway i gtg bye!
oliver: miley i....

[HannahMontanaX3]

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[vanessa*anne]

Ok I will put more up after 1 or 2 more comments

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

miley: yea?
oliver: oh don't worry
she was still thinking about what jack had said. what did he mean the kind of guy no one wants to get involved with?
Dear Diary
I'm almost going to be 15! yes! this is all good. except jake left today. i still can't believe this but he still loves me. and today when i went to recording jack said that im not the kind of guy anyone should get involved with. what did he mean by that? anyway i am really confused.

lilly: party party party big celeb party!
miley: lilly calm down. you have been to these before
lilly: i know but it is still SO COOL!
miley: ok but we have to get changed
they got changed and went in the limo.
reporter: look its hannah montana. so hannah i have heard that you now write your own songs?
hannah: yea i do with the help of someone.
reporter: well that is very interesting hannah! we cannot wait for your new album.
hannah: thanks.
they just stood around
jack: hi miley
hannah: oh hi jack
jack: you know what i said before, sorry if that confused you.
hannah: oh no its ok.
jack: really?
hannah: well yea. totally fine.
they just stood around at the party. having fun, dancing and then they went home.

oliver was at lillys house
oliver: i need some help impressing miley
lilly: oliver she doesn't want you
oliver: what?
lilly: but i know who does
oliver: who?
lilly: you are so blind sometimes *Kisses him*
oliver: lilly i......
lilly: yea i get it you like miley
oliver: i am sorry
lilly: so that kiss didn't mean anything?
oliver: it was just a kiss!
lilly: so now it doesn't mean anything? grrr i am going home.

miley (on the phone with jack) : hi jack
jack: hey miley you know what....
miley: what?
jack: i am really not the kinda guy you think i am
miley: what do you mean?
jack: well........

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[HannahMontanaX3]

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[HannahMontanaX3]

please, for me. cause I am leaving in 1 hour and 2 minutes to the airport. I will be gone for 10 days

[vanessa*anne]

jack: i cheat, i lie and i don't do anything right
miley: what?
jack> my life is a whol eand total complete mess
miley: o jack im sorry....
jack: its not fair! my girlfriend dumped me, she lied to me and i failed maths in school and everything!
miley: jack... things haven't gone my way either. just try again really.
jack: thanks miley. i just had to say that to you... i cannot lie to anyone anymore.

lilly: miley....
miley: lilly? whats wrong
lilly: oliver....
miley: what?
lilly: I like him and i kissed him and then he said it didn't mean anything and he wants someone else!
miley: lilly just forgot bout him. there are heaps of guys out there
lilly: BUT I WANT OLIVER (crying)
miley hugs her best friend
miley: everything will be alright.

the next day she had to go into recording ( like most days cause it is in the holidays)
miley: jack? jack? were are you
jack: miley im in here
miley: what? why are you in there
jack: im stuck
miley gets s bobby pin out of her hair and then picks the lock
jack: whatever you do don't shut the....
it was too late. miley had shut the door
miley: what? we are stuck in here?
jack: i guess so....
miley: what? no i can't!
jack: i have been stuck in here for a while now
miley: how long?
jack: about three hours.
miley: but there is no food in here
jack: yea.... im starving
miley: i am getting outta here. help help help someone!
jack: most people don't get here until 10
miley: what? its 8 now!
jack: i know how we can get out!
miley: how? to me it seems like we are stuck

[vanessa*anne]

i know its not good................ its bad

[HannahMontanaX3]

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[vanessa*anne]

jack: no we are stuck
miley: what?
jack: sorry miley. i have crackers in my bag
miley: wow crackers. we are gonna survive on crackers
jack: you know when i was a kid i was happy if i got crackers.
miley: now really?
jack: yes (laughing)
they were still stuck in the room for 5 hours
miley: i thought someone would have found us by now....
jack: me too
miley: im so tired.
she flops on the couch and leans on jack. he plays with her hair. he kisses her on the check
jack: sweet dreams miley

oliver: lilly im sorry
lilly: i get it, you don't like me
oliver: im sorry.
lilly: no its ok
oliver: look theres the ladys
oliver: hey im oliver and may i say that you are smoken.
girl: get awaay from me you freak
lilly: that didn't work
oliver: hey!

robby ray: wheres miley? im going to go to the studio
he gets in his car and drives there
robby ray: miley, where are you?
by now jack had fallen asleep as well, leaning on miley
robby ray opens the door and sees them.
miley: daddy! finally you got us out
robby ray gave jack a look
miley: oh daddy it wasn't like that at all!
robby ray: good

robby ray: miles i have something to tell you.....
miley: what?

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please before I have to leave for 10 days

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

robby ray: oh don't worry. it was just that you better get some sleep. tomorrow is a big day!
robby ray (thinking) : i cant tell her now, i can't

miley went upstairs into her room flopped on her bed and went to sleep.
the next day she put her wig on, got her dress that jack gave her on and then rushed to the studio. she had a feeling today was going to be a good day.

jack: hey miley . you look beautiful
hannah: thanks but when im wearing my wig safer to call me hannah
jack: oh ok got it. anyway happy birthday!
he got out a cake
jack: it is offically your birthday. you are 15 years old.
miley blew out the candles
miley: thanks jack
jack: even if it is your birthday we need to get to recording come on.
they recorded all morning and when it was 11 o clock he said
jack: morning break time. have a long break. you deserve it.

miley went and had a drink of water. she ending up overhearing him saying to his friend
jack: do you think it is easy having the girl that i love and that understands me the most just being 15? it ain't easy.
friend: but shes your artist
jack: maybe. but she is also my world
miley absolutley couldn't believe her ears. jack wanted her. her. but she thought
miley: he can't know. he can't know that i know.

miley: jack are we going to go back and record?
jack: ok coming
miley (thinnking): if he knew i knew then everything would be all wierd between us, i cannot let that happen
they recorded all day
jack: miley i have a suprise for you.
miley: what?
jack: close your eyes and i will take you, if you trust me
miley closed her eyes
jack led her to...

[MileyHannahFan]

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[Zanessa Fan1]

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[Smilezmiley15510]

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[vanessa*anne]

to a room with all her friends in it, it was decoarted with ballons and happy birthday hannah signs! miley was shocked
everyone: happy birthday hannah!
she went a found lilly
lilly: happy birthday miles!
hannah: thanks. have you seen jake?
lilly: umm no but he will be here
miley: he promised
lilly: don't worry! just wait a little longer
hannah partyed for a while and saw jake
hannah: jake! you can't believe how \
jake: *kisses her* happy birthday
they sat down and caught up and this girl came up
girl: i thought you were only going to be 5 minutes with your ex.
hannah: who is this?
jake: um....
girl: i am his girlfriend
hannah: but i thought.... i thought....
hannah ran off
jack followed her and so did jake. she ran outside in the pouring rain. he blocked jakes way
jake: let me thourgh!
jack: don't you think that you have done enough damage?
jake: let me through
jack: NO! she deserves much better than you. (whispering) now go before i have to hurt you!
jake left and then jack follwed her outside
hannah: i can't believe he did this to me. i thought he loved me? what did i do wrong
jack: you are asking the wrong person! he isn't the guy for you!
hannah: what? what do you mean?
jack...........

[Zanessa Fan1]

omgosh! this is the best fan fiction ive ever read more more more!!

[vanessa*anne]

thanks. after 1 more comment i will put more up.

[Smilezmiley15510]

omg please write more I am in love with this!!:))

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

jack put his coat over her and then kissed her.
miley: what?
jack: i know we can't be together, you are 15 and im 20.
miley: so what? you want me to pretend that never happened?
jack went quiet
jack: i really do love you but the age difference......
miley just ran off... upset
jake: miley im.......
miley kept running she ran all the way to her house and then sobbed on the lounge.

dear diary.
jake has a new girlfriend. what a jerk. can't believe he did that. anway jack kissed me but now i have to pretend it never happened. why? because of the age different. it is not fair! but i have to do it.... i still want recording time well.... i want jack time and thats the way i can get it\

she cried herself to sleep.
she went downstairs and her dad cooked her pancakes.
robby: honey are you ok? im sorry about jake....
miley: o yea i am fine
she was lying.
jackson turned the tv on.
there was.......

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

the news was on. there was something on it that made miley jump

hannahs heartbreak

reporter: good morning today everybody is talking about hannahs breakup with the cute zombie slayer, jake ryan. he was seen breaking up with her at her 15th birthday party. here are some photos for proof. the couple is offically an end. no jakannh, none. good news girls the zombie slayer is probably available!
jackson turned it off before anything else came on.
miley was shocked.
lilly: miley.... are you ok?
miley: yea
lilly: sorry bout jake. hes a zombie slaying jerk!
miley: yea but i need to tell you something else
the two best friends rushed up to mileys room.
lilly: well????
miley: i kissed jack
lilly: omg when!
miley: last night at my party
lilly: how was it?
miley: best kiss e-v-e-r. but i can't be with him
lilly: what? why not? lilly not likey.
miley: hes 20 im 15 get the drift
lilly: oh....
miley: and my dad was angry me dating someone 1 year older than me
lilly: o yea. sorry i have to go.

robby ray: want a lift to the recording studio
miley: i have to go back already?
robby ray: don't worry, everythings gonna be alright bud.
he drove miley to the recording studio
miley: thanks dad. bye!

jack:...........

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

jack: ok miley. i am sorry about before but if we want to keep working together....
miley: i know. it didn't happen.
jack: miley but i do love you....
miley: lets start recording i guess

you kissed me, i want to kiss you
something just can't be right
you are 20 and im not
sometimes. things suck

somethings just aren't meant to happen yea
maybe they feel right but no
why can't i be 20?
why can't i be 20?
why can't i be 20?

you love me, i love you
but no one will ever approve
how come things have to be this way?
i love you... you know that don't you?

somethings just aren't meant to happen yea
maybe they feel right but no
why can't i be 20?
i want to be with you

i want to be with you

jack: ok good.
miley: about before....
jack and miley: i love you!
jack: but no...
miley: it can't happen.
it was time for miley to go home. her dad picked her up and drove her home. someone knocked on the door at about 10

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

jack: can i cooomme in..
miley: wow.. you are drunk aren't you?
jack: no.... ok yes miley im sorry
miley: what?
jack: im sorry about what happened..
miley: i think you better go.
miley pushed him out the door

the next morning hannah started touring and got to meet her new band/ backup dancers. her dad thought new music, new band.
robby ray: ok hannah close your eyes
hannah shut them tight
there was a bunch of boys and a few girls.
robby ray: this is pete the guiatarist.
she wasn't really paying attention from then.
hannah (thinking) : oh wow. so cute.
she was on the love ship... and wasn't getting off.
pete: hi hannah. you are so much cuter in person.
it was kind of like love at first sight..... not like jack though. she still loved jack
miley (thinking) : i have to move on, i can't be with jack. he is 20.
hannah: thanks. (flirty) you are so hot...
pete: what?
hannah: did i say that out loud?
lola: yes
hannah turned bright red
hannah: what? no! i didn't do that
lola: chillax hannah
hannah: omg dad is she coming?
robby ray: yep bud
hannah: omg yay!
robby ray: and so am i
hannah: what?
robby ray: i wouldn't leave you alone with all these guys.
hannah: awwww daddy.
lola: party pooper
pete: come on. would have been fine


pete (whispering) : you are hot too
hannah blushed
lola (whispering) : someone is on the love express
hannah: yep
lola: oohhhhhh miley and pete sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G
pete looked at her wierd and then at miley, staring into her eyes
lola: i should stop.. i will leave you 2 alone
lola(whispering to miley) : go for it girl! he totally likes you, so obicous
hannah (whispering ): you really think so
lola: no... i know so! now stop taling to be and go over to him.
lola: i will leave you two alone

pete: so hannah........
hannah: yea?

[Hannah+Jake]

more girly girl now!!!!!!!!and mr piggy says you have a big nose

[SmileyMiley11]

MORe! its go good

[Zanessa Fan1]

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[vanessa*anne]

pete: sorry about the whole jake thing....
hannah: what!? now everybody knows
pete: oh don't worry about it. hes just a jerk
hannah: you really think so?
pete: yep. i mean who would dump you
hannah smiled
hannah: still can't believe he would do that and on my birthday
pete: don't be sad you can do what most girls can't
hannah: what?
pete: tell the world how much of a jerk jake is in a song.
hannah: hmmmm maybe
pete hugged her and then they both walked off to join everyone else

robby ray: time to get ready honey, show is in 2 hours
hannah put her makeup on and picked out a really cute outfit
hannah: ok who is ready to rock!
everyone: 1, 2 3 4 5
pete: lets rock caloforina!

they walked out and hannah walked onto the stage
hannah: hello caloforina!
crowd: hannah! hannah! hannah!
hannah: this first song is new
*sings i want to be with you*
when she sang i got nerve and if we were a movie she was always dancing near and around pete. after all the songs were finished she said
hannah: you guys were awsome tonight. hope you enjoyed the show! bye!

they all walked back to the tour bus.
hannah: we did it guys
lola: now there is only 1 thing left to do
pete: what?
lola and hannah: SHOPPING!
boys: awww
lola, hannah and all the girls went shopping. that night they turned on the tv to celeb gossip
pete and hannah sat down to watch it there was something on it that shocked both of them.

[SmileyMiley11]

Thanks for writing more!

[miley rocks]

its awesomr
probrably people think that they ar going out or something

[Zanessa Fan1]

more plz!

[aly1055]

More this is the best fanfic ive ever read!

[vanessa*anne]

sorry i didn't update for a while, went away.

reporter: hannahs new crush
seems to me like hannah has gotten over super-cute jack ryan and is going out with her new guiatarist! no one really knows who he is but hannah seems to have a thing for him! defentailly cute. she has been dancing around him, winking and smiling at him during concerts. i thinnk hannah is lovestuck.

hannahs mouth fell right open and they both started laughing
pete: geez they sure know how to over-exagaratte things.
hannah: yea totally
pete: but it would be awsome if we were going out
hannah: yea....
pete: so is that a yes?
hannah: yep! totally!
hannah (thinking) : omg he just asked me out! best day e-v-e-r hes so hot
lola: someone seems happy
hannah: pete and i are going out.
lola: OMG! no way!
they started happy dancing
robby ray: time to go to sleep girls. i don't want you staying up yapping all night.
hannah: fine. night dad
lola: so what did he say?
hannah: he said that it would be awsome after we saw us on tv
lola: on tv?
hannah: they thoguht we were a couple
lola: well now you are
hannah: yep! nothing could ruin this day!
they went to sleep

jacks POV
why why why did this happen. i love a 15 year old. wow... thats pretty pathetic. i can't believe this. the one girl that i love and that understands me the most is 15 and going out with someone else, not me. i am such an idiot!
i don't love her, i cant love her...... but i do. i can't pretend like nothing is wrong... i just can't.
end of his POV
jack went to sleep

lola: waaa whaattt.... what was that?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more please!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[Smilezmiley15510]

Sorry but whats a pov?

[miley rocks]

^yeah wat is it
but its great anyways

[Zanessa Fan1]

its kinda like a blog type thing i think

[vanessa*anne]

oh pov stands for point of view. im writing the next part now

[Zanessa Fan1]

okay

[vanessa*anne]

the bus slammed hard. right into a tree
hannah: what?
pete: everyone come here.
lola: is everyone ok?
pete: everybodys here except..
hananh: dad! he was driving
pete: ok lets go
they all ran up to the front of the bus. everything was crushed and they climbed through the rumble to see robby ray, stuck
pete: im ringing an albulance
hannah was almost in tears
hannah: daddy what happened?
robby ray: someone went through a red light and crashed into me. oww
hannah: can you move?
robby ray: no im stuck
almbulance workers: ok were is he
hananh: just here
ambulance worker 1: hananh my daughter is a huge fan
ambulance worker 2: stay focused.
hannah: please just help my dad.

Hannah montana tour cancelled

Sorry hannah fans, the hannah montana just like you tour has been cancelled due to the ingury of her father when her tour bus crashed. We are sorry to whom this may upset. Full refunds are available. Hannah sends her apoligies.

Ambulance worker 3 : hes in the ambulance
hannah: can i come?
ambulance worker 1: yes of course. everyone can.
they all hopped in the back of the ambulacnce and drove to the nearest hospital.
hannah and everyone waited impaitenly
her phone rang
hannah (upset) : hello?
jackson: hey miles it jackson. can i talk to dad? whats wrong?
hannah: hes in hospital
jackson: what? what happened?
hannah: tour bus crashed.
jackson: what? how is he?
hannah: i don't know.
jackson: ring me when you get any more news
hannah: ok
jackson: im coming.
hannah: ok bye.
she hung up
hospital worker: are you here for robby ray?
hannah: yes. how is he?
hopsital worker: your hannah montana
other hospital worker: stay focussed
hannah: how is my dad?
hospital worker:.....

[boo~licious]

ok i made my own site and it is `bout miley go to www.freewebs.com/destinycali (http://www.freewebs.com/destinycali) ok and pm me and tell me if ya like ti i just added something from this website

[vanessa*anne]

umm ok cool.
i started a new fanfic

http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=824737#post824737

please go check it out and after a few comments i will update this one

[Zanessa Fan1]

ill check it out, but plz post more here.

[vanessa*anne]

hospital worker: he will be alright just needs to stay here overnight
a huge smile spread across hannahs face
hannah: can we see him?
hospital worker: yes.. but only 1 person at a time
pete: hannah you go first
hannah ran into the hospital room
hannah: im so glad you are okay dad
he gave her a hug
robby ray: me too honey. does jackson know?
hannah: he rung before, he wanted to talk to you
hannah dialed in jacksons number
jackson: hello
hannah: hi its me
jackson: miley! its dad ok?
hannah: yea he actually wanted to talk to you
hannah gave the phone to jackson and left the room.
pete: is he ok?
hannah: yep totally fine
pete: thats great!
hannah: yep
pete: i am so glad... i can't stand to see you upset
pete kissed her and hannah saw jack
hannah: jack?
jack:.....

[Zanessa Fan1]

more plz

[miley rocks]

omg

[vanessa*anne]

jack: oh sorry. didn't know that you were busy
hannah: jack come back
jack (thinking): why did i even come?
hannah ran after him.
jack: so those rumours were true.. you are dating him
hannah: well yea
jack: but i thought you loved me!
hannah: i do... but we can't be together so what is the point of trying? im just too young
jack: oh and guess i better leave
hannah: im sorry.... im not 20. no matter how much i want to be.

lola: what did he want?
hannah: lola what should i do! i love jack!
lola: what? i thought you liked pete?
hannah: exactly. i like pete. not LOVE pete
lola: ohh... so what are you going to do?
hannah: i don't know
lola: umm so im confused
hannah: ok i like pete, i love jack. i can't be with jack so im using pete to get over jack.
lola: ummm isn't that wrong?
hannah: i know but i have to get over him.... some things have just gotta be done
pete: so hannah what was that all about
hannah (lying) : oh just talking about a new song.
pete: so i guess now we can get back to this
*kiss*
robby ray: hhmmmm
hannah: oh
they blush
robby ray: we better get back home
robby ray (whispering) : don't worry hes a nice guy
miley felt relieved

hannah: pete there is something i have to tell you
pete: is it about jack?
hannah:.....

[vanessa*anne]

hannah: umm well no
pete: good because he is a jerk and totally not the right guy for you.
*leans in to kiss*
hannah stops him
hannah: i really need to tell you something.
lola: mi... i mean hannah someone is on the phone for you
hannah: ok
hanah talks on the phone for a while to oliver and hangs up
pete: who was that?
hannah: oliver
pete: is he your boyfriend?
hannah cracks up laughing
hannah: oliver? my boyfriend? you gotta be joking. more like best friend.
pete: oh ok. so what were you going to tell me before
hannah: wel.....
pete: don't worry you can tell me.
hannah: im more than what you think i am.
pete: what?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more plz

[vanessa*anne]

hannah: you know my hair?
pete: yes and its beautiful
hannah: its a wig
pete: what??? your bold????
hannah: no no no of course not. i wear a blonde wig over my real brown hair
pete: really? why?
hannah: because i don't want to give up normal life
pete: ok so im confused. you aren't a blonde, you wear a wig and don't want to give up normal life?
hannah: my name isn't hannah
pete: your name isn't hannah?
hannah: its really miley
pete: are you lying?
hannah: no *rips off wig*
pete: wow...
hannah: what?
pete: you are still so beautfiul
hannah: but you can't date me while im miley
pete: what? why?
hannah: well not were everyone can see. if people figure out that im dating pete it could lead to im hannah montana.
pete: ohh....
hannah: its ok. you can still come to my house were no one can see
pete: oh ok.
hannah: so you don't care?
pete: why would i? but don't date anyone else please

they turn on the tv and sit down
reporter: welcome to celeb news. now we are here with jack from hollywood records. he works with many artists including hannah montana
pete: that your producer?
hannah: yea.
reporter: hello jack. so what is it like working with hannah montana?
jack: great. she is so beautiful, inside and out. so deep and so kind and caring
reporter: really? that is great
jack: and i have an announcment to make
reporter: what? something to do with hannahs album?
jack: no.. but something to do with hannnah
reporter: what?
hannah(thinking) : oh no... what is he going to say
jack:........

[Zanessa Fan1]

lol more i like this fan fic

[miley rocks]

awesome more

[vanessa*anne]

jack: and im in love with her
miley mouth fell open. pete just sat their, with a shocked look on his face. lola decided to turn it off.

miley: wow....that was unexpected
pete: i can't believe him...
robby ray: whats wrong darling?
miley: oh nothin....
he went back into his room
miley: he can't know
pete: why?
miley: he will kill me!
pete: im going to kill jack
miley: don't get involved please. i don't like him..
miley (saying really quietly: i love him
pete: what did you say?
miley: oh nothing

mileys POV

i know i should be happy. super cute and sweet guiatarist boyfriend, great friends, great career but im not. pete is really nice but i don't really feel anything. when he kisses me, nothing like when jack kissed me. i can't explain this..... i am totally in love... with a 20 year old and he is in love with me. grr life isn't fair

end mileys POV

hospital worker: hello. great news. robby ray can go home right now
miley: really? thats great!
robby ray: come on everyone. we'll catch a bus back to malibu
they went on the bus and miley sat next to pete
miley: so this is good that my dad got out....
pete: yea......
miley (thinking) : a bit awkard being with him after what jack said on that show. but he can't think so.

pete: you know about that show sorry. wasn't your fault what he said. i mean... who wouldn't love you?
miley (thinking) : but petes so sweet
robby ray: time to get off guys.

they all got off

*at lillys house*

oliver: i need to be able to impress miley!
lilly: hes already dating someone else. she isn't interested
oliver: what? what can i do
lilly: maybe forget about trying to make her your girlfriend and just be friends
oliver: why?
lilly: sometimes your so blind.
oliver: what?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more plz

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: i love you!
*she kisses him*
oliver: umm...
lilly: yea i get it. you like miley.. not me
oliver: yeah
lilly: i can't believe this! she doesn't want you, you will never get her.
lilly ran out crying
oliver: lilly wait!!!!

there was a knock on mileys door
miley got up and awnsered it
jack: miley don't go out with pete
miley: what why?
jack: hes a cheater
miley: what? no! im not listening to you!
jack: miley...
miley: and i can't believe that you went on that show! the whole world now knows that you love me.... well hannah.
jack: sorry......
miley: well i guess your forgiven
jack: now i have to give you this....
miley: what?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more

[vanessa*anne]

1 more comment

[Khockeygrl4]

More More More, Its Awesome!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

jack kisses her but miley pulls away
miley: thats what you had to give me?
pete saw it
pete: get away from her!
jack: i love her
pete: well she doesn't love you
jack: yes she does
pete: no she doesn't.
jack: do you think i would be such a big idiot and go on worldwide tv and say that i love hannah montana if miley didn't love me back?
pete: well you thought wrong. didn't he miley?
miley went quiet

at lillys house

oliver: lilly i am sorry
lilly: why did you even come over here?
oliver: to say that i was being stupid
lilly: what do you mean?
oliver: if miley doesn't love me i might as well go out with you
lilly: might as well? i guess i am that plain milk that you get when they are all out of the choclate milk
oliver: what?
lilly: nevermind. you get my drift. i am just second.

back at mileys house
pete: no you don't love him do you miley
jack: yes she does
miley was still quiet
jack and pete: miley, i guess you have to choose
jack: me
pete: or me
miley: -----

at lillys house
oliver kisses her
lilly:.............

what do they both say? find out in the next part!

[miley rocks]

omg i cant wait its great

[Zanessa Fan1]

more please

[Khockeygrl4]

More More More Pleaz!!!!!!!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

miley felt so pressured. she had a nervous look on her face

miley (thinking) : if i choose pete, what will jack do? and i love him

pete: miley...
jack: are you going to choose?
miley: i am sorry i just can't
pete: miley... you have to
miley: ok.....
jack: who is it?
miley: pete

lillys house
oliver kissed her
lilly: so does that mean your sorry or what?
oliver: yea... lilly i am sorry
lilly: its ok
oliver: so do you want to go to the beach?
lilly: yea! beach sounds great

back at mileys
jack: no miley.... your not serious are you?
miley (whispering in his ear) : sorry i am. you are 20. we are both 15. it will have to be like this, but i love you.
pete: lets go to the beach
miley: ummm remember no seeing me in public when i am miley
pete: oh yea.. sorry
miley: its ok
someone knocked on the door
miley: wait ill get it
miley: why are you here?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more plz

[miley rocks]

its jake

[vanessa*anne]

miley: go away jake
jake: miley i am sorry
miley: what? sorry? is that all you are gonna say about letting everyone know we broke up... well you and hannah. you are such a jerk
jake: i don't care about that girl i love you *grabs her hand really tight*
miley: if you did then you wouldn't hurt me. let go!
pete: you heard her, let go!
jake: whos this?
miley: my boyfriend
jack: back off jake. leave miley alone! you put her through complete misery and pain for days. you are a cheater and it will always stay that way
jack and pete pushed him out and closed the door
jake: let me in!
pete and jack: no

lilly: i really don't think we should be doing this behind mileys back
olive: what?
lilly: you know, the whole dating thing.
*hugs lilly*
oliver: don't worry it should be fine

miley: hey i am going to the beach
jack: ok i will get going know
pete: me too. bye miley! *hug*
miley: bye!
miley was sitting at ricos
*lilly and oliver kiss*
miley was looking for jackson when she spotted lilly and oliver kissing
miley: hey guys. why didn't you tell me?
lilly: why didn't we tell you what?
miley: that you guys were dating
oliver: well....

[miley rocks]

great i love it and i knew it was jake

[Khockeygrl4]

^good call, lol, MORE PLEAZ!!!

[Smilezmiley15510]

Please write more this is the best fan fic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! :))

[Zanessa Fan1]

more please

[kimmykat31]

more more more!

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: we were worried about what you what think
miley: what? why? i don't care
oliver: really?
oliver(thinking) : i was hoping that she would care
lilly: thats great
miley: ok lets promise no more secrets ok
lilly and oliver: deal
miley: well i will leave you two alone.
miley left and lilly and oliver stayed at the beach for a while
lilly: i am so glad she doesn't care. i was woried for a second.
oliver: yeah... its great
lilly: what? whats wrong?
oliver: oh nothing

olivers cell rang
he picked up
oliver: hello?
miley: hey oliver its miley(upset)
oliver: whats wrong?
miley: can you come over?
oliver: yea
hang up

oliver: so sorry i have to go
he walked to mileys house
oliver: miley? where are you?
miley: i am over here
oliver: whats wrong?
miley: pete... pete... found out that i love jack
oliver: what?
miley: and he dumped me. i can't believe this
oliver: oh miley i am so sorry.
miley leaned on oliver crying.
oliver played with her hair
oliver: don't worry. everything will be okay.
miley: every guy ends up dumping me...
oliver: i know someone who wouldn't
miley: who?
oliver was about to say it when
lilly: what is this? you bailed on our date to come to mileys
oliver:.......

[Zanessa Fan1]

Its great! You already knew i though that but
anyways, lolz, more more more plz!
=]

[vanessa*anne]

1 more comment

[Smilezmiley15510]

Please write more!!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: umm....
lilly: i can't believe this!
miley: lilly....
lilly: this ain't your fault. can we just talk in private?
miley: oh yea sure
she left the room
lilly: i can't believe this!
oliver: lilly... i wanted to help her... she was really upset.
lilly: well you don't care that we HAPPENED to be on a date do you?
oliver: well no not really....
lilly: so what are you saying. i guess i am just stupid.
oliver: you are not stupid
lilly (crying) : then why do you like miley and not me!
oliver: i am sorry.....
lilly: well i am going. i guess we are over.
lilly ran out and slammed the front door
miley: what happened?
oliver: we broke up
miley: what? why?
oliver: do you really want to know
miley: yea.. remeber what we promised on the beach today? no more secrets.
oliver: this is kinda hard to say to you...
miley: what? i can handle it..
oliver: well...

is he going to say that he likes miley? find out in the next part!

[Zanessa Fan1]

more!

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: well........
miley: yea?
oliver: don't worry
miley: come on. i know you want to tell me something
oliver: i like you
miley: of course you do! your my friend
oliver: no i mean....
miley: oh.. right
oliver: anyway i have to go
miley: oliver.. and my dad just made cake
oliver: oooo cake. i guess i will stay
miley: and you know..
oliver: yea?
miley: i kinda like you too but......
oliver: but what?
miley: i just can't do that to lilly. not right now. shes heartbroken.
oliver: oh i get it.
miley: sorry
oliver: yummm cake and its choclate!
robby ray: yep my famous double choclate cake that took 3rd place at the tenessee state fair
miley: wow you eat like a pig oliver
oliver: what? its food and im a guy
miley: guess so.

oliver: well i am going
miley: ok bye
miley went to lillys and knocked on her bedroom door
lilly: who is it?
miley: i am so sorry
lilly(crying) : why did he do that.... that jerk.
miley: i am soo sorry
lilly: not your fault. well it kinda is.....
miley: how?
lilly: HE LIKES YOU NOT ME!!! WHY ISN'T IT FAIR
miley: lilly i am sorry. i don't want him to like me, i want him to like you!
lilly: sorry...
miley: anyway lets go
lilly: where?
miley: to get new clothes! remember hannah has that talk show tonight
lilly: oh yea
they went and got new clothes

reporter: so hannah how are things?
hannah: pretty good
reporter: how about your love life?
hannah: a bit messed up actually
reporter: what about pete?
hannah: things are kinda over between us.
reporter: so is there a mr new?
hannah: no not really. just someone i have liked for a while
reporter: who?
hannah: sorry that is getting a bit personal.
reporter: lets take some calls! there are so many people waiting to talk to you
reporter: you are talking to hannah montana
hannah: hi. whats your name?
oliver: oliver
hannah had a suprised look on her face
hannah(thinking): oh no. its oliver
oliver: i just have to tell you something...
hannah: what?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more please

[Smilezmiley15510]

Omg please write more!!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: that i love you to bits. not like all those other fans and boys. i would do anything for you
reporter: that is very sweet but we need to take another cal
hannah: bye
they took some more calls and then she walked off the set
lola: i can't believe oliver did that
hannah: don't worry lilly.
she gave lola a big hug.
hannah: come on lets go
lola: where?
hannah: vanessa hudgens birthday bash of course
lola: omg! yay!
hannah: calm down
lola: ok im cool...
hannah: lets go
lola: duh
they got in the limo and went to the party
robby ray: we are here
lola: this is SO cool!

they stayed around for a while and there was a message over an annocuncer
------ : hannah montana.. i know your secret. now you must do what i say
the lights went off
lola and hannah grabbed onto each other
-------: ----

find out who ---- is in the next aprt

[Hannah+Jake]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

[Smilezmiley15510]

MORE!!!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

rico: hey toots
hannah: what!? no! how did you know? (if you have seen me and rico down by the school yard you will get this next part)
lola: and how did you make your voice sound so mysetrious and scary
hannah: not helping
rico: i knew you were hannah before. i just pretended it was just that stupid bear and now i am gonna blow your secret!
hannah: how long have you known? and don't disss beary!
rico: hmmmm.... i saw you ripping off your wig and know i am going to blow your secret *picks up the loud speaker*
hannah knocks it out of his hands
lola: you woudln't
rico: i would
hannah: you are short but so so evil
lola: hes four feet of pure EVIL!
rico: thanks for the compliment. now do as i say

hannah: no
lola: but he will blow your secret
rico: and i will blow yours too pinky hair(she is wearing a pink wig)
hannah: what do you want?
lola: no matter what you HAVE to do it.
hannah: i know...... it will never die down. no one will ever leave me alone. i could never be just miley again
rico:......
what is his evil plan (lol)? find out in the next part

[vanessa*anne]

Sorry its so short. 2 more comments and i will put up the next part

[vanessa*anne]

No one has replied so I am puttin up the next part

rico: i want you to be my girlfriend
hannah: what? your not being mileys girlfriend again!
rico: exactly. i am going to be HANNAHS!
hannah: what!
rico: all the parties and most of all the popularity
lola: hannah... you have to do it
hannah: ok fine. you can be...... hannahs girlfriend
rico: otherwise i will tell the whole world your secret (evil laugh) now hold my hand
hannah: fine
the lights went back on
rico (whispering) : now tell them about your new boyfriend
*hannah picks up the microphone sitting on the table*
hannah: everyone i have an announcet to make...
everyone turned and faced hannah and so did the paparatzi.
hannah: i want you to meet my new boyfriend.... rrrrri...
everyone: who!
hannah: rico
rico: hello everyone
hannah: ok we are leaving.
*hannah grabs ricos hand and pulls him outside the door. lola follows them out*
rico: my plan worked
hannah: i still cannot believe it.
rico: believe it. you.. i mean hannah is ricos girlfriend!
lola: i still can't believe you are going through with this
they dropped rico off and hannah went home
at that moment two people walked through the door
miley: jack, oliver, what are you doing here?
jack and oliver: why are you dating rico and not us!
miley: well ummmm hard to explain
jack: tell us
oliver: please miley
miley: fine

[Zanessa Fan1]

more!!!

[vanessa*anne]

1 more comment (if i can get it)
otherwise i will put more up anyway

[miley rocks]

more its awesome

[vanessa*anne]

miley: i have too... ricos blackmailing me
oliver: what?
jack: how?
miley: he knows that i am hannah montana
jack: what? no! how did he find out?
miley: no idea at all!
robby ray: jack, oliver time for you to go. miley has a hannah thing tonight
rico walked in and heard
rico: hannah thing? im there
miley: what? no! you are NOT coming
rico: i gues i will just have to tell everyone your secret
miley: fine you can come
robby ray: darlin.. how did he find out?
miley: i don't know
robby ray: don't worry. everythings gonna be alright bud
miley: i don't think so...
hannah gets ready and gets in the limo with rico. they get to the event, a celebrity party
reporter: its hannah and her new boyfriend! hi hananh and hi rico
hannah: hi
rico: hello
reporter: aww your so small and cute!!!
paparatzi: kiss! kiss! kiss!
hannah: ummm no thanks
rico: come on
hannah: no
rico jumps up and kisses her
hannah(mummering under her lips): get off me!
rico: no can do

hannah trys to push him away
hannah(still mumering under his lips) : move!
rico(mummering under her lips): i can't. sorry toots
hannah (mumering under the lips): what?
reporter: wow! what a kiss. these two must be really into each other
rico(mumering):......
what is he gonna say? find out in the next part

[miley rocks]

lol it was like there lips were glued 2gether lol

[Zanessa Fan1]

lolz.. more plz!

[vanessa*anne]

rico(memering): xtra sticky gum. knew it would work
hannah (mumering) : what?!
hannah ran off with rico stuck to her lips.
reporter: wow seems like they never want to let go. what a couple!
hannah pulled really hard and rico came off
hannah: owwww that hurt. you are gonna pay lil monster
rico: i will tell your secret!
hannah: seriously i can't believe how low you are. sure i knew you were mean but this is over the top! sure i forgave you for that little kiss but this... never.
hannah ran off crying
her phone rang.
hannah (thinking) : oh great why now!
hannah picked up her phone
hannah: hello
jack: hi its jack
hannah: oh hi
jack: you were just on tv
hannah: what?
jack: everyone knows about the kiss. why did you do it for
hannah (crying) : i had no choice
jack: what do you mean?
hannah: extra sticky gum
jack: wow... that stuff really does work
hannah: i know. my life is ruined.
jack: no it isn't
hannah: me dating a 8 year old. well hannah. its never gonna die down. i have to go. my dads waiting for me in the car.
hannah hang up

she got in the car and drove home. when she got inside she ripped off her wig.
jack: hello? miley? are you here?
miley: yea come in
jack: seriously that little kid
miley: is an evil genuis
jack: hey i was going to say that
miley: yea i know. there is only one person i want to kiss
jack: who?
miley: guess
miley leaned in and kissed him. she didn't let go... but this time she didn't want too
oliver: what?
miley broke away
oliver:...........

what is he gonna say?

[smileyface93]

omg more!!! lol

[thobi123]

i need more
more i tell u
more

[thobi123]

89

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: oh i get it.
he walked away
miley: oliver. i do love you
oliver: really?
miley: yea but more like a brother. and i want to keep things that way. i never want to wierd out our friendship or anything. im sorry
oliver just walked off.
jack: is he okay?
miley: i think he will be.
jack: sure hope so and anyway what happened with pete?
miley: long story short. he found out i liked you.
jack: ouch. anyway lets just watch some TV
miley: ok
reporter: and hananhs new boyfriend rico is about to join us!
miley: oh no. im sending him a text
*mileys text*
rico please don't do this. you aren't doing anythin good for yourself. you are just hurtin me.
rico read it and then went on the stage
reporter: glad to have you with us rico! so how are thinks with hannah?
rico: actually i have something to tell you about hannah

miley: oh no!

[thobi123]

dont do it rico

[miley rocks]

hes gonna brek up w\her

[vanessa*anne]

reporter: really. i am sure we all want to hear it.

jack: he better not.
miley: he can't!
rico: the truth is that we never really were dating. i was blackmailing her
reporter: what?
rico: i knew her very big secret and was gonna tell the whole world but i am not going to. it is just going to ruin her life and it isn't worth it really
reporter: oh what a sweet little boy
miley: i thought he was going to say it
jack: so did i.
miley: well that problem is gone but what about oliver?
jack: i don't know. i think you did everything you could. he will get over it.
miley: you really think so?
jack: yea. well i was going to go out with some friends tonight. maybe try and sort it out
the phone rang
lilly: 8 seconds till landing
miley opened the door
lilly: i was soo worried he was gonna tell everyone there
miley: yep and now i am off the hook except i have an oliver problem
lilly: what!
miley: he likes me but he saw me kissing jack
lilly: you kissed jack!
miley: yea. it was so magical and perfect until oliver came in
lilly: love stinks
miley: tell me about it.
lilly: anyway i have to go. my mum is making dinner. bye!
miley: bye!
miley sat down and watched some TV and then there was a knock on the door
miley: oh hi jack. have fun?
jack: yea. but i am really tired now.
miley: just go and rest on the lounge
he was tossing around a lot in his sleep. miley kissed his forehead two pieces of paper fell out of his pockets and miley picked them up.
what did they have on them? find out in the next part

[Zanessa Fan1]

omg i wanna know what happpens!!!!!
post more ASAP!!!omgosh!i cant wait .. more!lolz

[Smilezmiley15510]

More please!!!! it's sooooooooooo good!!!!!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

on them were girls phone numbers
mileys POV
what? why did he do this for. girls phone numbers? i thought he liked me. this stinks. probably wants someone his own age instead of me. i should just get over it.
miley put them in her pockets.
she went to sleep and woke up early incase jack was up and he was.
jack: have you seen these pieces of paper that were in my pocket.
miley took them out of her pockets
miley: you mean these? they fell out when you were sleeping. i can't believe you.
jack: miley you don't understand...
miley: you were right ages ago. you are a cheater and i should never listen to you. bye!
jack: but miley...
miley: go!
he left and miley threw herself on her bed and cried.
lilly: hey mr stewart. is miley here?
robby ray: yep. up in her room.
miley saw lilly
miley: jack jack doesn't care about me!
lilly: sure he does.
miley: no he doesn't! everyone is going and cheating on me. it isn't fair.
lilly: don't worry miley. how do you know?
miley: these. *shows her the bits of paper*
lilly: hey lets call them!
miley: good idea.
lilly: ok. first one is anna.
*lilly dialed the number in and handed miley the phone*
anna: hello?
miley (sweet voice) : hi
anna: who are you?
miley: jacks girlfriend
anna: oh ok. hi how are you?
lilly snatched the phone
lilly: don't hi how are you her. we know what you have been doing?
anna: what are you talking about?
lilly: you know very well what i am talking about.
anna: umm no i don't.
miley took the phone again
miley: don't steal jack away from me
anna: ..............
whats she gonna say? find out in the next part

[thobi123]

more more more

[vanessa*anne]

1 more comment.

[Zanessa Fan1]

more more more plz!

[Smilezmiley15510]

More more more!!!!:))

[kimmykat31]

moooooore

[hannahmontanafan4ever]

Post more soon!

[vanessa*anne]

anna: i am anna lanter( thats jacks last name just telling you)
miley: oh. so you are jacks sister?
anna: yep
miley: so sorry
anna: its ok bye
*hangs up*
miley: i just made a complete fool of myself
lilly: boy did you ever.
miley: not helping. and you are the one that said to call the number!
lilll: anyway.... what are you going to do?
miley: i have no idea! and theres oliver......
lilly: what did you tell him?
lilly looked really worried
miley: that we should be just friends
lilly: then?
miley: he just walked away.. no idea if he is ok with it. he better be
lilly: i know. thats not like him.
miley: yea i know. hes like.....
lilly: always trying to get the ladies
miley: exactly!
the two best friends laughed

lilly: you know you should talk to jack.
miley: yea i know. i feel really bad. and we are not calling the other number!
lilly: nope. not going anywhere near it.

there was a knock on the door and a knock on the back door
miley: ussually no one knocks on the back door
lilly: yea wierd.... and at the same time.
miley: i will get the front and you get the back
lilly: ok
miley opened the door
miley: hi jack! about before i am sorry. it was just your sister
jack: how did you know?
miley: rang up the number. so embarrassing
jack laughed
jack: ok sorry but that is pretty funny.
miley: i know. and pathetic.....
jack: its okay.
miley: i kinda said i was your girlfriend
jack: really now? so i guess you are
miley: yeah i guess so
a huge smile spread across her face

lilly: miley its..... oliver
oliver: lilly don't be angry.
lilly: oh its okay. i am not
but in her voice it was obious, she cared
oliver: miley...

what is he going to say? find out in the next part

[Zanessa Fan1]

more please

[miley rocks]

more i need it its 1 of the best ff ever

[cupcake]

c'mon! more! ur killin me here!!! *BREATHES DEEPLY AND BREATHES OUT HARD*

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: miley i thought about it....
miley: and you think we should stay friends?
oliver: yea
miley: is that okay?
oliver: of course
it was obvious that he cared.
jack: okay. this is wokring out
miley: yea it is
lilly: yep.
oliver: i am gonna go now....

the next day!!!
oliver: my name is oliver oscar oken and you lot are completley smoken!
girls: get away from us you freak! yea!!!! *clap hands*
lilly: wow
miley: a lot like amber and ashley
lilly: scary....
oliver: look a cute girl checking me out
lilly: sure oliver
miley: come on...
lilly: wow
miley: she actually is!
oliver: yea cause i am sooo smoken!
miley: why are you sitting here? go up to her!
oliver; what what what? can't do that!
lilly: yes you can. and you will!
miley and lilly pushed oliver
girl: hi
oliver: hi
girl(puts out hand): i am jaz
oliver: and i am oliver
jaz: want to go out!
oliver: now how could i say no!
jaz(laughing) : haha you are SOO funny!
oliver: thursday at 6?
jaz: P-E-R-F-E-C-T!
oliver: awsome
he goes over to miley and lilly
oliver: ca ching!
miley: what happened?
oliver: lets say i have a date!
miley: thats awsome!
lilly(sacastic): yea totally.

oliver: well i have to go.
oliver left.
miley: now we can go to.....
lilly: the mall!!!
miley: you read my mind!
they went to the mall
lilly: wait isn't that.......

[Zanessa Fan1]

more Please!

[Smilezmiley15510]

More!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

*changing it a little bit*
lilly: wait look its a jewrelly sale!
miley: then why are we standing here? lets go!
lilly: these are soo cute!
miley: totally
then these two people dressed in black came in
person 1: this is a robbery!
person 2: put the jewrelly in the bag!
lilly and miley sneaked out
lilly: that was soo freaky!
miley: i know! wait they are coming out.
they both ripped off their black things that were on their heads.
jaz: look at all that we got!
miley: it can't be.
lilly: this is bad
miley: very bad.
other person (whos name is tom): you did great. *kiss*
miley: and that is even worse!
lilly: we have to tell oliver!
miley: keep your voice down lilly
jaz turned around
miley: too late she heard
jaz: you are not telling oliver
miley: why?
lilly: yea why?
jaz:.......
whats she gonna do?

[Zanessa Fan1]

omgosh what a story twist! more plz!

[miley rocks]

^ yeah totally a great twist
by the way does lily like oliver

[vanessa*anne]

yep she does

jaz gets out a gun
jaz: now.. don't tell or get shot
both of them stood tehre completley still
jaz put it back and then left
miley: poor oliver
lilly: we can't tell him
miley: i know... i know
lilly: what are we gonna do?
miley: i have no idea
lilly: oooo these shoes are soo cute!
miley: lilly! this isn't the time to be thinking about shoes. but they are sooo cute! lets go home
lilly: ok......
miley: but lets get teh shoes first!
lilly: yep!
they bought the shoes and then went home
*at mileys home*
miley: i can't believe this!
oliver walked in at that very momment
oliver: can't believe what?
lilly: these shoes!
miley: i know aren't they the cutest!
oliver: umm i don't really care about shoes.
miley: well we do! we are girls, they are shoes.
oliver: i can't believe jaz asked me out! this is perfect. shes gonna love me.
miley: yeah its fantastic!

a few days went past. miley and lilly acted like nothing was wrong.

miley: ok your date is tonight! ok that hair is perfect
lilly: breath check. ewww *hands him a mint*
oliver: thanks lilly.

oliver met jaz on the beach.
they went to dinner and a movie
jaz: this date has been perfect!
oliver: i know.
jaz: so i have something to give you.
oliver: what?
jaz gives him....................

[Zanessa Fan1]

omgosh more! shes E-V-I-L!! lolz more!

[vanessa*anne]

jaz handed him a brand new mobile phone
oliver: wow! these things cost like a thousand dollars!
jaz: well nothing is too good for you *gives him a hug*
oliver: we should really do this again
jaz: yea totally

the next day
oliver: that date was perfect! and look what she gave me.
miley: oh wow...
lilly: those things are like a thousand bucks! how did she get one?
oliver: no idea.
miley: well that is really cool
they went to the mall
oliver: why did you guys take me here?
miley: we needed to come!
oliver: you went yesterday!
lilly: we know. never enough shopping
miley: wait can we go into the phone shop? i need more phone credit
lilly: you got some a week ago
miley: well... its gone now!
the three walked in and got the phone credit there was a man at the door checking bags
the man checking bags checked mileys and lillys
man: could i please check your backpack?
oliver: yea sure!
the man went through his bag and pulled the phone out
oliver: whats wrong?
man:......
whats he gonna say? find out in the next part!

[Zanessa Fan1]

oh no oliver! lolz :lol: more plz!i g2g to skool soon

[thobi123]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh

[miley rocks]

hes proprably find out that the phone is stolen and wat happen w\lily liking my oliver
jk [lol] keep writing its great

[thobi123]

come on writ more

[vanessa*anne]

man: this very phone was stolen from this store 2 weeks ago
oliver: no no that isn't right.... i was given it
man: sure that is what they all say. come with me. you are under arrest for the possession of stolen prooperty
miley and lilly: what? no!
oliver was sent to mall jail and lilly and miley followed
oliver: this can't be right... she gave it to me
miley: i have no idea whats happening
lilly: me me me either
something sounded uncertain in her voice
oliver: is everything okay dokey?
lilly: oh yea of course it is.
man: we called your parents, give us the phone and we need you to pay a fine of 200 dollars
oliver: 200 dollars? oh thank you
they all left and went home
the next day at the beach
miley: olivers late
lilly: yea i know... were could he be.
miley: i still can't believe jaz woudl do that to him!
lilly: i know.... shes the worst girlfriend ever.
miley: agreed. better be quiet hes coming.
oliver: hey guys. lets go to ricos! im starving!
miley: you are always starving!
oliver: what? i need my food!
they went and had some food
oliver: look theres jaz. when shes done talking to him i am going to go talk to her.
oliver overhead jaz saying
jaz:........

[Zanessa Fan1]

omgosh more!

[Smilezmiley15510]

more! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!:))

[miley rocks]

more its was a short ch wat happen

[vanessa*anne]

jaz: i was so lucky i got rid of that phone that i stole 2 weeks ago from that store, they almost had caught me!
tom: yeah i know you are a genuis. how did you get rid of it anyone?
jaz: gave it to some pathetic guy that thought i was his gf.
tom: well you are very smart
jaz: thanks *kiss*
oliver just sat there
miley: hello? oliver? come back to earth!
oliver: jaz.. jaazz... stole that phone and gave it to me so she wouldn't get busted
lilly: oliver...
miley: im sorry
oliver: and then she kissed some other guy.
miley: are you ok?
oliver: sorry i just need to be alone.
miley: i feel so bad for not telling him
lilly: don't worry.. he found out
jaz: hey friends of oliver. where is he?
lilly: at home all upset beacuse of you.
jaz: what? thats crazy talk
miley: save that cheap talk. he overheard you talking to that guy and saw you kissing him.
jaz: in that case you better not tell the police or you and yourr prescious little oliver are toast!
jaz left.
miley: lets go see oliver.
lilly: agreed.
they both went to his house
miley got a text.
miley: sorry lilly. jacks wants to see me. says it is important. you go.
lilly: okay.
lilly went to the house and went in
lilly: oliver?oliver? its lilly
oliver: lilly! *hugs her* i am so angry at jaz right now! can't believe she would steal! i am going to call the police!
lilly: no! you can't do that!
oliver: why?
lilly:...............................

miley at the beach
miley: so jack why did you want to see me?
jack: i love you so much!
he leant in to kiss her, very pasiontley.
tears rolled down his cheecks
miley: whats wrong?
jack:.................
what are they both gonna say?

[Smilezmiley15510]

It's so good!! Please write more!!!! It's awesome!!!!!!!!!!:))

[miley rocks]

no why did u stop write more

[Zanessa Fan1]

morrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeee!lolz

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: she will kill us!
oliver: what do you mean?
lilly: trust me ok. she put a gun to me and miley.
oliver: ok, no telling the police.
lilly: thank you!

jack: i am going away for 2 months
miley: what?
jack: miley i am sorry
miley: but why?
jack: there is this great job for me over there.
miley: what? so you are leaving?
jack: yes
miley: when?
jack:tomorrow
miley:.........

[smileyface93]

more more!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: (teary) but no.. you can't
miley felt betryaed, like before when jake left. her heart felt like it had been ripped into a thousand little pieces. life without jack? he was the first person she ever truely loved since jake.
jack: trust me miley i don't want to go!
miley: then why are you?
her heart was pounding so fast. this can't happen again, it just can't
jack: miley i am so sorry
he gave her a hug, kissing her head. in his arms, miley felt like nothing could go wrong, everything would turn out okay. then he kissed her right on the lips. she couldn't imagine living without him for 2 whole mounths, just couldn't.
miley: jack.. i will miss you so much.
jack: exactly the same for me
this made her feel a bit better, but not that much. he was still leaving tomorrow. and she wouldn't see him for a very long time and she can't ask her dad to visit him, he would never understand. he would just get angry.
miley: what time does your plane go?
jack: four
miley: great! thats heaps of time!
jack: 4am
mileys heart sank. that early? she won't see him again
miley: so this is the last time i will see you...
jack: yeah. bye miley!
gentle tears were going down both of their faces. they didn't want to live apart. they kissed each other very pasionetley and neither wanted to let go.
they said there final goodbyes and miley went home, up to the hannah closet and sobbed.

-at olivers house-
oliver: wait... why didn't you tell me?

lilly: i wanted to but.......
oliver: but what? you think i wouldn't believe you?
lilly:no..
oliver:.................

[vanessa*anne]

i have tried putting colours and extra info. tell me if you like it this way or the old way more

[Zanessa Fan1]

first of all, i like the new way better.

and plz post more!

[Smilezmiley15510]

I like the new way better!! It makes it really easy to read & prettier (if thats a word) Please write more!!:))

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

OMG! What will happen next?

[thobi123]

new way its really prettier

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

I love all your fanfics! Please post more!!
(i know I already said this but seriously..this is your best one!!)

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: i get it. you don't trust me?
lilly: no not that you don't get it...
oliver: i get that you guys aren't my friends.
lilly: i don't think of you as a friend i.....
oliver: you hate me?
lilly: no i.....
oliver: save it i have had enough with the excuses. i am leaving
Lillys heart was racing. She knew her olly was angry at her and knew that he wanted her to go. she kept thinking over and over why didn't i tell him earlier, why. this all would not have happened
oliver: wait, this is MY house so YOU GO!
lilly left. head down, she felt really bad.

Miley put her wig on, did her makeup and got changed. She had a hannah concert on that night.

hannah: hey everyone. are you ready to rock tonight?
crowd: HANNAH! HANNAH!
hannah: i have a new song and i hope the person that i wrote it for hears it!
you were there,
always behind him
looking out, always watching
and now that you're gone it feels
like i am empty
there is just something missing
a large hole in my heart
and i want you to know...
that i love you
and i want you to come back sooon
i need you
and nothing will ever change that
so please listen to me
come back
i need you now

the crowd gave a huge applase
crowd: we love you hannah!
hannah: i love you to! know lets start pumpin up this party!
*sings pumping up the party*
then lifes what you make it
nobody's perfect
best of both worlds
hannah: you guys have been such a fabulous audience! wish i could sing all night! goodnight!
she walked off the stage but that song was right, there was something missing, something huge. she felt like she couldn't stand it anymore, just couldn't.

lilly and miley where at the beach
miley: i don't know what to do. something huge is just missing, i can't stand this anymore!
lilly: miley.... its just 2 months
miley: two months? not to see jack? thats like a gazillion years!
she layed down on her towl, staring into space daydreaming about jack. thats smile, his kisses, his laugh, his voice
lilly: miley? earth to miley?
miley snapped out of it
miley: i just want him to be here with me right now

THE SUPRISE!!!!!!

[mleysueno]

more!!!more!!!please!!!!please!!!i'm begging!!!please!!!
more i tell you, more!!!!please more!!!more!!more!!!

[vanessa*anne]

1 or 2 more comments

[mleysueno]

aww men!!!huhuhuhuhuhuuhu.....

[thobi123]

more gurl

[Zanessa Fan1]

i need more! lolz please..

[miley rocks]

more and oliver is so stuburn right now

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

Why do your fanfics have to be soo good??
This is just torture!!!

[luv2act]

it's awsome!

[vanessa*anne]

jack: he can
miley turned around and saw jack, standing right behind her with a rose in his hand. miley went up and hugged him tightly.
miley: but why are you still here?
jack: i saw the hannah concert on tv and just couldn't stand it anymore
lilly: awwww that is so sweet
jack: i couldn't go, just couldn't
a huge smile spread across mileys face
miley: you had no idea what i was going through, not at all.
jack: glad i am back.
lilly: believe me, she is too.
miley looked at her
lilly: well i will just give you two some "alone time"
lillt left and then jack took mileys hand. they walked along on the beach, the sun shining, the water glistening. everything seemed so perfect to her.
miley: you know? this is really perfect
she felt like nothing could ruin this moment, nothing at all
jack: i agree
miley leaned in and kissed him. he kissed her back
miley: that was soo perfect.. nothing can ruin this moment
she turned around and saw --------------
miley: except that

[Zanessa Fan1]

i think its jake ... idk ... more!

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

OMG! What could it be??

[thobi123]

ohhhh

[vanessa*anne]

Robby ray was standing there, giving jack the look
robby ray: miley, we are going home NOW!
miley felt so nervous. never see jack again? no. she would not have it
miley: dad.... you don't understand. i love jack and he loves me!
robby ray: he is 5 years older than you which equals... hmmm not gonna happen!
miley: dad you are being sooo unfair. you and mum were 6 years apart!
robby ray started to tear up a little, miley knew it was the wrong thing to say.
robby ray: we are going home now!
jack: please mr stewart consider it
robby ray: i will think about it
miley knew think about it meant no. she felt that life wasn't fair! just when everything was the best, this happens!

miley went with her dad home
miley: but daddy......
robby ray just stood there
miley: i am going to the beach
miley left for the beach and then met up with lilly
miley: lilly the worst thing just happend!
miley told lilly what had happened
lilly: nothing is working out right! and oliver doesn't like me but i love him and now he is just angry!
miley: leave it to me... i am going to get you 2 together

lilly: really? remember last time!
lilly knew that it probably won't work out but she was so desperate she would do anything.
miley: trust me i will

miley walked to olivers house
oliver: oh hi miley. lilly doesn't think i am her friend.
miley: yea i know. can i tell you something?
oliver: yea
miley: i know someone that likes you
oliver:.....................

what is he gonna say?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more please

[thobi123]

i need more

[Smilezmiley15510]

Omg it's so good!!! Please write more!!!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: really.... you like me? 7 friday night? i will pick you up
miley kept thinking tell me that just didn't happen. no. i don't want to go out with oliver. ewwwwwww. thats a bit wrong. but lilly does.....
miley: oliver...... i don't...
oliver: i don't want to go to the movies either. dinner? yep awsome cha ching!
he ran off really happy. miley absolutley couldn't believe her ears, she just couldn't. what was lilly gonna say? she isn't gona be happy. miley walked home. she had a lot to deal with.

robby ray: miley... about before. i am going to give you and jack a chance
a huge smile appeared on mileys face.
miley: really? why?
robby ray: i guess you were right about the whole your mum and me thing......
miley: dad.. you have no idea what this means to me. thank you sooo much!
robby ray: but if he does anything, its over.

miley just felt so happy, so on top of the world. like she was floating on clouds but then flet like she just fell right down back to earth when she remebered her problem with oliver. what is she going to say to lilly?


jackson: lilly landing in 3
robby ray: 2
miley: 1
and she opened the door. lilly skateboarind right in
lilly: so how did it go?
miley: lilly i have something to tell you....
lilly: what?
miley: he got the wrong idea. he thought i meant that i liked him
lilly:............

edit: new fanficton. please visit it. pretty boring now, it is going to get wayyy better.
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=888727#post888727

[Zanessa Fan1]

i look at it. more here too plz!

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: i can't believe you would do this to me! you know i like oliver!
miley: i don't want to date him
lilly: really? why does he have to like you? no one ever likes lilly the dork
miley: come on you are not a dork
lilly: yes i am and you know it!

lilly ran off, upset

miley kept thinking what am i going to do. she was going to ring jack and tell him the good news. at least there was one good thing going on.

miley rang jack
miley: jack! great news! dad is going to let us see each other
jack: really? that is great!
miley: yeah it is
jack: what is wrong?
miley told jack about the whole lilly/oliver problem
jack: tell oliver. he will understand
miley: yeah, i guess i will. thanks jack! see you tomorrow.

miley walked to olivers house
miley: oliver, i need to talk to you!
oliver: yeah?
miley: i don't want to go on a date with you on saturday
oliver:........

[Zanessa Fan1]

more!!!poor oliver..

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: what? why?
miley: i wasn't saying that i loved you....
oliver: you wern't?
miley: i was saying that lilly loved you! i am so sorry oliver
oliver: what?
miley: i couldn't go.... it would make you happy... but lilly and jack really upset. lilly really likes you. she really does! she is totally in love with you so i am sorry oliver.
oliver: oh ok. i guess it it ok.
miley: really?
oliver: yeah.
miley: awsome! are you going to go on a date with her?
oliver: movies? saturday? you tell her.
miley: really? why?
oliver: i really care about lilly but have thought it would be wierd dating her but i guess i will give it a go.
miley: thank you so much oliver. i can't wait to tell her!


miley saw lilly on the beach

miley: lilly! good news!
lilly: i don't want to talk to you
miley: please....

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

Write more please?

[Zanessa Fan1]

more plz

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: why would i want to talk to a backstabbing jerk!
miley: i am not going on the date with oliver!
lilly: what?
miley: i told him about you and then he said he wants to go to the movies with you saturday night!
lilly: really? thanks so much. i am soo sorry miley.
they gave each other a hug

miley: i am going to go see jack
lilly: you are allowed to?
miley: yeah. my dad let me!
lilly: thats awsome.
miley: yeah. see you later lilly.

miley walked to jacks house
miley: hello? anyone here?
she opened the door. everything was black. all the lights were off and all the blinds were shut. the hallway looked so much longer than before. miley felt a tingle down her spine. she heard mummering and jumped and turned
miley(nervous) : hh.ee.. lll....ooo
she felt the light switch and turned it on and saw.....

[thobi123]

More

[vanessa*anne]

1 or 2 more comments

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

OMG please write more??

[vanessa*anne]

she saw everything broken. the windows, the vase, the table. everything was in a total mess. miley started to panic. she ventured in futher and saw writing on the wall in blood, " i will find your precious miley, or should i say hannah and she will love me, not you!"

when miley saw that she started panicking, someone was out to get her. then she saw jack, a huge gash on his arm bleeding and tied to a chair.

miley: jack!

she ran over to jack and tried to undo the knot but it wouldn't move. she found a knife with blood on it. she was so scared but picked it up and cut the rope. and then dropped it to the floor and hugged jack

miley: wwwhat happened?

jack: someone broke in and did this....

miley: did you see them?

jack: yeah.

miley: who was it?

jack:.......

[Hannah+Jake]

More More More More More More More More More More More More moremore

[thobi123]

more

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

What? This is torture!!

[Zanessa Fan1]

omg more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

jack: it was that guy on that zombie show....

miley: oh no. jake.

her heart started pounding fast. she knew that he could be anywhere.

jack: yeah....

miley: but why would he do THIS!

jack: i don't know.

miley kept stressing. she was so scared. after what jake did to jack, he could do a lot worse to her. he knew that he had zombie slaying musceles which she thought were soo hot but they could be used against her.

jack: i will just have to go to the hospital and get this stiched.

miley: ok. i promised to go to the beach with lilly.

lilly: did jake reaally do that?

miley: yeah i know! i am soo scared of him now.


lilly: i would be!

miley: i know. he is out to get me!

jake:.................................

[Zanessa Fan1]

more! jake is so evil..

[Smilezmiley15510]

More More More More More More More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:))

[thobi123]

more

[luv2act]

omg! more!

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

I want to hurt Jake...
lol more please!

[vanessa*anne]

jake: hi miley
miley: lilly, RUN!

they both started running as fast as they could. miley was really scared about what jake would do, after what he did to jack. lilly started to get really tired and miley grabbed her hand and pulled her along. jake was gaining on them, and fast! miley had to think quickly, otherwise it could be it for her. miley had and idea... they were just running past ricos and then miley called out

miley: everyone, ITS JAKE RYAN!

a flood of screaming girls came over surrounding jake and he couldn't escape. there was about 40 of them. 40 lovestruck fans.

jake: miley.... come back

miley and lilly made a run for it. they found a cave. a dark, spooky mysetrious cave. they were at the end of the beach, they had no where else to go.

miley: lilly... we have to go in here


lilly: but i hate caves

miley: come on

they both creeped into the cave. it was pitch black, like it is in the middle of the night in there. they both clutched onto each other tightly. you couldn't see anything and lilly was really scared. they heard wings. lilly jummped. it was just bats. they both sat down on the cold, hard, wet ground holding onto each others hands, not saying a word. just too scared too. they waited, and waited. it seemed like hours to them, even though it was only about 10 minutes. after a while they hurt a thumping noise, like footsteps walking into the cave. miley and lilly shivered.

what was making the noise? find out in the next part

[Zanessa Fan1]

more!!!

[Hannah+Jake]

M-o-r-e what doeas that spell MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[thobi123]

more

[vanessa*anne]

they saw a shadow, coming there way. lilly screamed

miley(quietley): sssshh

oliver: lilly? is that you? why are you in here?

miley: oliver! we thought you were jake!

oliver: what? are you trying to hide from jake

they told jake the whole entire story and olivers mouth opened wide!

lilly: anyway... why are you in here?

oliver picked up his freesbee

oliver: for this! i threw it in here by mistake

miley: you can be pretty stupid sometimes!

they all laughed

jake: ah hah! there you are

miley: oh no

oliver: leave her alone!

jake: and you think you are going to stop me?

jake grabbed onto miley and trys to kiss her

oliver: that is it

jake: what are you gonna do oken?

oliver.......

[thobi123]

more

[Zanessa Fan1]

omgosh more!!

[Zanessa Fan1]

i NEED more!

[Zanessa Fan1]

please post more

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: this

he punches him hard across the beach

jake: oh you are going to pay oken!!!

oliver: miley!!!! run!!!

miley ran, and jake had seemed to have disappered. lilly ran after her.

lilly: phew that was close

miley: good oliver was there

lilly: yeah! good timing hey?

miley: yeah!

lilly: wait he didn't follow us.

jake: that should teach him

miley: what did you do to him!

jake: don't worry, now lets worry about us

miley: get away from me!

he pushed him into the water and ran to the cave

miley: oliver? oliver? where are you? oli?

she saw something that she never wished she saw.

[Zanessa Fan1]

noooo oliver! he's my favorite :'( him and jack :( i need more!!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: oliver!


she ran over and saw him, on the floor of the cave unconcious.

miley: no! no no no no no no no no no no no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

she slipped his top off and then layed her head on his chest, looking for his pulse and couldn't find one. she remembered that she had learnt CPR in school.

miley: please work

she crossed her fingers tight, leaned down and gave him it and it didn't work. she dialed jacks number on her phone and told him to come here now.

jack: just do cpr again, it mgiht work.

she did cpr again and then lilly walked in the cave

lilly: what?

miley: its not what you think! no its not!

lilly:.......

[luv2act]

more-e!

[Hannah+Jake]

m-o-r-e-! what does it spell more!

[Zanessa Fan1]

AHH MORE! as soon as she started doing CPR i knew lilly would come in and think
they were doing somthing .. else.. lolz

[hannah_montana.boston]

omg mouth 2 mouth :-) me likey likey

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: you knew i liked him! how could you do this to me?
miley: lilly its mouth-to mouth
lilly: aha so you were kissing!
miley: no.. i knew you wern't smart but i would think that you would know what that meant.
lilly: you know? i am not putting up with this
miley: lilly...

she put her hand in mileys face

lilly: talk to the hand cause me.. im not listening to you now or ever again!!!

miley felt guilty and stayed with oliver and jack came running in with hosptial workers.

jack: is he okay? did it work?

miley was really nervous, about olvier

miley: no! it didn't! i can't stand this and lillys angry at me

jack: put him in the ambulacnce. come on miley... we are going to the hosptial!

miley sat paintley in the hosptial, her head on jacks shoulder, waiting. her eyes were glistened with tears. the eyes were the heart to mileys soul, jack knew that. she was so sad, and he wanted to do something but what could he do?

jack: miley.. come here

he kissed her lightly on the lips.

they were still kissing when

hosptial worker: we have news about oliver. he is.....

[luv2act]

gah! scary! more!

[Zanessa Fan1]

GAHHH!! more!

[vanessa*anne]

hospital worker: he is okay!

miley felt like a huge storm had just blown past her. he was okay? this is the best news she had heard all day!

oliver: miley!

she gave him a huge hug. oliver knew that she didn't love him, but here in her arms, was a good second.

miley: i cant believe jake did this to you!

jack: seriosualy... you can go to the police about this!

miley: i might.. i am just so worried about the next move he would make..

oliver: hey wheres lilly?

miley: shes angry at me..

oliver: why in the world would she?

miley: i was giving you CPR

oliver: yes? why was she angry?

miley: she thought we were kissing!

oliver: ohh

miley: i am going to go find her!

oliver: okay

she found lilly, sitting on the beach

miley: lilly! you have the wrong idea!

lilly:..........

[Zanessa Fan1]

MORE! I love it!!! =]

[K-star7]

That's awesome!! It's a great story!! Keep writting!!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: lilly... i don't like oliver! i love jack remember?

lilly: how can i be sure???

miley: lilly you are my best friend i would not risk you over a guy, not now not ever. and especially not oliver.

lilly: ok. miley i am sorry

she gave miley a big hug

miley: bff?

lilly: bff!

miley: i still can't believe that we ever fought!

lilly: yeah me too, seems all pretty stupid now.

miley: yeah!



miley: wait! i am suppossed to meet jack at his house at 5!

lilly: its only 4! and it takes 10 minutes to get there

miley: i want to suprise him by getting there early!

miley walked off, head high in high spirits. everything was going well. (won't be for long though)

once she got there, she just opened the door. he never cared.

miley: jack? jack?

jack: in here!

jack was just getting changed. he had his pants on so he let her in. miley saw all his musceles.

miley(thinking): wow hes hot...

miley: way hotter than the zombie slayer...

jack: what?

miley: did i say that outloud?

jack: yep.

miley: ohhh....

her face was bright red.

jack: don't worry

the phone started ringing

miley: i will go get it.

miley: hello?

person on the other end(not telling who):............

[Hannah+Jake]

im dying

[K-star7]

Your doing an awesome job at this!!

[Zanessa Fan1]

more!
this is the ONLY fan fic i read, thats how good it is..
more plz! =]

[vanessa*anne]

Sorry I haven't updated in a while


Hospital: Hello. Is jack there? We need to talk about his heart operation, there are some risks and he could die from it.

miley dropped the phone. she stood there, lost for words

jack: miley?

Miley ran over to jack and hugged him so tight, tears running down her cheeks.

miley: why didn't you tell me? i am so worried. you could die!

she was not letting him go.

jack: well...

miley: yea?

the tears wern't stopping and she was drenching his bare shoulder.

jack:.......

[vanessa*anne]

Sorry its so short.

[destiny hope cyrus fan]

Morez

[Cutiegril123]

Omg why stop there u have to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

OMG! Why must you torture us? lol

[elle]

^ omg that was so good and you stopped it??