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hmfhannahmontanafan
03-30-2007, 01:23 PM
Ok, so this is the sequel to my first fanfiction. Here's the link to my first if you want to read it:

http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=35888

If you don't, here are the things you need to know before you read this one:

1. Miley and Jake are together
2. Jake knows Miley's secret
3. Lilly and Oliver are together
4. It is summer break
5. Hannah Montana went on tour for 2 weeks and Jake went with her.


Chapter 1: Movie Star

*Hannah's last day of the tour*

*Hannah goes backstage where Jake is(after the concert)*

Jake: Last day of the tour!

Hannah: Yeah! It was alot of fun. Especially since you came with me, but I'm glad I'm going home.

Jake: You miss your family and friends, huh?

Hannah: Yeah....

Jake: What's the matter?

Hannah: Well....I've been thinking about going into acting.

Jake: You have?

Hannah: Yeah! Hannah Montana can also be a tv or movie star!

Jake: If you want....I can try to get you to be a main character on Zombie High.

Hannah: Can you really do that?

Jake: Of course!

Hannah: That'd be GREAT! Thank you so much!

Jake: No prob.

*Two days later, Jake's talking to the Zombie High crew*

Jake: Can Hannah Montana get a permanent part as Zarronda on the show?

Director: Hmmm....ok. She can be on the show as long as -------------!

Jake: NO! No, not gonna happen! Nope!

Director: Then Hannah's not on the show!

Jake: ....ok, fine!

Director: -----------, tomorrow.

Jake: I hope that day never comes.


Hope all of you guys like it! Post comments please!

hannahmontanarulz55
03-30-2007, 03:42 PM
omg write more! what is the ------------------????

hannah_montana.boston
03-30-2007, 04:21 PM
yeah is it some kissing another guy????oooh is it????

jelly_bean
03-30-2007, 05:21 PM
More!

thobi123
03-30-2007, 05:44 PM
more more

hmfhannahmontanafan
03-31-2007, 04:47 AM
you'll see! lol,

Chapter 2: A Whole New Person

*Lilly and Oliver are at the beach*

Oliver: So, anything new?

Lilly: Not really. I got a karaoke machine though.

Oliver: You sing?

Lilly: Yeah, but just around the house.

Oliver: Can I hear you?

Lilly: Sure, I guess. *sings chorus of I Got Nerve*

Oliver: That was actually really good!

Lilly: Really? I wanted to be a singer when I was little. A part of me still wants to now...I haven't given it much thought though.

Oliver: You should have an alter ego like Miley!

Lilly: Maybe...I could try to get a record deal.

Oliver: Yeah! Hollywood Records isn't far from here. You can go there!

Lilly: Ok, I'll do it! I just need a wig...

Oliver: Uh...You haven't worn a green one yet!

Lilly: No, that's Lola's thing. I'm creating a whole new person.

Oliver: Ok. What's the name?

Lilly: I'm gonna do a casual name. I like Emily.....hmm...Emily Osment!

*lol, yes I know a bit wierd*

Oliver: Cool.

Lilly: I just need to get my wig. Wanna come to Hollywood Records with me?

Oliver: Sure.

*They go to Lilly's house to get a wig then they go to Hollywood Records*

*The wig light brown with dirty blonde highlights*

*They get to Hollywood Records*

Emily (Lilly): Hi, I'm Emily Osment. I would like to get a record deal.

Producer guy: Ok, let's see if you're any good.

Emily: Ok. *sings Nobody's Perfect*

Producer:.....Congratulations, Miss Osment. You've just scored a record deal.


please comment! And you'll find out what the producer of Zombie High and Jake were talking about in te next chapter! Hope you like it!

Purple_Panda
03-31-2007, 10:09 AM
I want to know. Please. Pretty Please. Pretty Please with sugar on top. I like how Emily Osment is Lily when Lily is actually Emily O. ------------------- is sooo suspenseful. I can't think of anything it could be.

hmfhannahmontanafan
03-31-2007, 01:44 PM
ok, if you REALLY want to find out...

Chapter 3: Enemies

*Next day, Jake and Miley are at the beach*

Miley: So....?

Jake: *confused* So....?

Miley: Am I gonna be on the show or not?!

Jake: Yeah....

Miley: YES!

Jake: Unfortunately there's some bad news too.

Miley: What?

Jake: Jack Ryman is also gonna be on the show now. He moved here today.

Miley: Who's he and why does he have a very similar name to yours?

Jake: *sigh* He's my enemy. He's been copying me forever! Jack Ryman isn't his real name, he just changed it to copy me! I go into acting, now he goes into acting! It's no surprise though.

Miley: Kinda sounds like me and Luanne.

Jake: Who's she?

Miley: My evil look alike cousin. Except she can't sing.

Jake: Oh, well luckily, Jack doesn't look like me. Oh, right, you have to come to the Zombie High set tonight.

Miley: Ok.

*Lilly (she took off her wig and put it in a bag) and Oliver are heading to the beach.*

Lilly: I'm SO happy I got a record deal!

Oliver: I'm happy for you but now everyone's a star, but me!

Lilly: ---------!


Comment plz!

hmfhannahmontanafan
03-31-2007, 02:54 PM
comment!!! plz!

thobi123
03-31-2007, 05:32 PM
so good need to know more

hannah_montana.boston
03-31-2007, 06:40 PM
gasp lillys a star and jakes got a stalker ........

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-01-2007, 05:14 AM
lol, he's not a stalker though.

Chapter 4: Telling Big News

Lilly: No you can be famous too!

Oliver: How?

Lilly: Well, you know how some people are famous just cause they're dating celebrities? Like Jackson got famous when everyone thought he was dating Hannah.

Oliver: Yeah....

Lilly: Do you really not see where I'm going with this?

Oliver: Of course I do! .....ok, I don't.

Lilly: You can create an alter ego that's dating Emily Osment!

Oliver: Cool! What do you think of .....Mitchel Musso?

Lilly: Nice, but do you have a wig?

Oliver: Ummmm...yes! I wore a blonde one when I was trick or treating 3 years ago.

Lilly: Great!

*Lilly and Oliver go to the beach and they see Miley and Jake*

Miley and Lilly: *to eachother* Guess what?!

Miley and Lilly: *to eachother* You first!

Miley: Ok, Hannah Montana's gonna be an actress on Zombie High, permanantly!

Lilly: Oh, that's so great! I got a record deal with Hollywood Records as a girl named Emily Osment!

Miley: That's SO cool! Now we're both singers with secret identities!

Jake: So, Oken, you must feel pretty left out.

Oliver: Actually, no. I am going to be Emily's boyfriend, Mitchel Musso.

Jake: So I guess everyone's a star!

*A person arrives at the beach*

Person: Long time, no see!

Jake: ----?!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-01-2007, 09:58 AM
Ok, I bet you can guess who the person is but that's ok. Anyway, please post comments!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-01-2007, 12:22 PM
No one likes it?

ashes07
04-01-2007, 04:05 PM
i luv it!!!! more more more please!

ashes07
04-01-2007, 04:06 PM
lol ive been a fan since day 1 of ur writing lol

miji.hannahmontana
04-01-2007, 04:21 PM
Woww veery good, I guess its Jack...

miley rocks
04-01-2007, 09:17 PM
yeah it has 2 be jack

Miley_Montana_Gal
04-01-2007, 09:22 PM
good.

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-02-2007, 12:58 PM
lol, ur all right! It is Jack.

Chapter 5: Evil or Nice Guy?

Jake: Jack?!

Jack: Hey, Jake.

Jake: What are you doing here?!

Jack: What kind of greeting is that?

Jake: *annoyed* My kind!

Jack: Introduce me to your peeps.

Jake: *still annoyed* *dull voice* Miley, Lilly, Oliver, this is Jack Ryman.

Jack: Hi, Oliver.

Oliver: Hey.

Jack: *to Lilly* *guessing* You're...Miley?

Lilly: Nope, I'm Lilly.

Jack: Hi.

Miley: I'm Miley.

Jack: *flirty way* Hey.

Jake: *notices* Uhh...Miley's my girlfriend!

Jack: I knew Jake was a lucky guy!

Jake: Yeah, so don't get any ideas.

Jack: How dare you accuse me of that!

Jake: You know what? I think it's time for you to go. *pushes Jack away*

Jack: But -

Jake: BYE!

*After Jack's gone*

Miley: That was a bit rude.

Jake: Hey, didn't you see he was trying to flirt with you?!

Miley: No...what I saw was that he was a nice guy.

Jake: That's just cause he was pretending!

Miley: You sound jealous of him.

Jake: Why would I be jealous of him?!

Miley: I have no clue, so stop acting like you ARE jealous of him!

Jake: But -

Miley: Just GROW UP!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-02-2007, 01:01 PM
lol, I just read it, and realised, Miley was a bit mean. Anyway, please comment!

miley rocks
04-02-2007, 02:29 PM
Yeah Ur Right But It Was Good

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-03-2007, 12:50 PM
lol, yeah.

Chapter 6: Jake's Apologies

*that night*

Lilly: Come with me to Hollywood Records! I'm gonna start recording!

Oliver: Ok, my first time being Mitchel Musso!

*They get to Hollywood Records*

Producer: Hello, Emily. *looks at Mitchel* Who's this?

Emily: My boyfriend.

Mitchel: I'm Mitchel, what's crackin'?

Producer: *gives him a wierd look* Nothing.

*Emily records her album*

*Setting: On the Zombie High set*

Jake:Listen, I'm sorry about what happened earlier today...I overreacted cause...well I just really like you, Miley.

Hannah: ...You're forgiven. *hugs Jake* But remember, when I'm Hannah, you have to call me Hannah.

Jake: Ok.

*Jack arrives*

Jack: Hello, nice to meet you Hannah.

Jake: Hi, Jack.

*Jack ignores him*

Jake: Ok, ok. ...*quietly* I'm sorry.

Jack: ...fine.

*Director comes over*

Director: We've made a couple of changes to the script.

Jake: What are they?

Director: ---------!

Jake: NO!

*Hannah has a surprised look on her face*

*Jack smirks*

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-03-2007, 03:01 PM
ok, maybe you can guess what it is, but again, that's ok. plz comment!!!

ashes07
04-03-2007, 11:18 PM
omg! does hannah and jack have to kiss!?!?!?! omgsh!!!!!!!!!! lol more more more!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-04-2007, 05:13 AM
I knew you'd guess it!

Chapter 7: Reserved

Director: Sorry, but we can't change it now. *leaves*

Jake: But -

*Hannah brings Jake into her dressing room*

Hannah: Jake, it's ok!

Jake: It's not ok! you have to kiss Jack!

Hannah: He has to kiss Hannah, not Miley and Miley's going out with you, and Hannah's not going to go out with him so relax!

Jake: *sigh* ok.

*They come out of Hannah's dressing room*

Jack: Everything ok?

Hannah: Yeah..

Jack: So let's shoot this scene!

* * *

Director: Action!

*From this point on, they're all acting until the Director says cut and yes, the dialogue(in the Zombie High script that I made up) is very wierd*

Hannah: *acting* What are you doing here?

Jack: *acting* Telling you that you're not right for the Zombie Slayer but for me.

Hannah: *acting* Why?

Jack: *acting* Because....*kisses Hannah*

Director: Cut!

Jack: *not acting* Hannah, in case you want to go out with me now, I'm sorry but I'm reserved.

Hannah: That's ok, I'll pass, but who's the lucky girl?

Jack: -----!

miley rocks
04-04-2007, 10:14 AM
great write more

thobi123
04-04-2007, 06:51 PM
gurl u need t write sum more now

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-05-2007, 01:57 PM
thanks!

Chapter 8: The Lucky Girl

Hannah: WHAT?!

Jack: What? Why are you so surprised? Do you know her?

Hannah: No...I just think it's such a unique name.

Jack: I actually hardly know her, but she seems really cool.

Hannah: Uh, yeah, sure. *thinking* I don't think I should tell Jake; He'll get really paranoid.

*later that night, Emily and Mitchel are leaving Hollywood Records*

Emily: Let's take our wigs off, no one's around.

Mitchel: Ok.

*They take their wigs off and put them in a bag*

Lilly: I can't believe my CD's gonna be released in ONE week!

Oliver: Yeah, it's pretty great!

Lilly: Oh, let's stop by Miley's house and see how it went on Zombie High.

Oliver: Good idea.

*Lilly and Oliver get to Miley's house*

Lilly: So how'd it go on Zombie High?

Miley:....Not so good.

Oliver: How come?

Miley: Well, first of all, cause I had to kiss Jack.

Lilly: Oh...did Jake get mad.

Miley: Obviously, yes, but then he calmed down, after I explained to him it's ok.

Oliver: So what's the problem?

Miley: *sigh* I'll tell you, but you can't tell Jake. I have a feeling he'll get really paranoid.

Lilly: Ok, we won't tell him.

Oliver: Yeah, so what is it?

Miley: ....Jack has a crush on me. Not Hannah, Miley.


plz post comments!!! and I hope you guys really like it!

PursePrincess4eva
04-05-2007, 03:49 PM
I love it! But Miley's not going 2 og out with Jack... is she? :33:

Miley98
04-05-2007, 06:17 PM
hehhe......... how cute! I think Jack is EVIL though!

vanessa*anne
04-05-2007, 06:55 PM
more its awsome

mileymyidol
04-06-2007, 11:31 AM
yeah mooorre morrre

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-06-2007, 01:23 PM
lol, yes he is EVIL and you'll just have to see if Miley's going to go out with him.....

Chapter 9: Get your own life!

Lilly: Jake was right!

Oliver: What are you gonna do?

Miley: ....I honestly don't know. I'm with Jake and Jack's not going to change that.

Oliver: So you're not gonna do anything?

Miley: Nope. What is there to do?

Lilly: Nothing really....

Miley: Exactly.

*Next day at the beach*

*Jake goes to the beach and see's Jack there*

Jake: Hey, Gene.

Jack: Do't call me that! I changed my name to Jack cause I hate Gene!

Jake: Ok, but why'd you change your name to Jack Ryman? To copy me! Why did you try to flirt with Miley? Cause she's with me!

Jack: Why do you answer your own questions?

Jake: Don't change the subject!

Jack: Fine, what do you want?

Jake: I want you to stop copying me! Get your own life and don't copy mine!

Jack: You don't control me, so I can do anything I want...And if I want Miley,...I'm going to get her....

Jake: No you're not! She's with me!

Jack: Right now...but we'll see about that later...

*Jack leaves the beach and cackles evily*


Sorry if it was a bit short! Comment, please!

Miley is Smiley
04-06-2007, 01:45 PM
oooo more more more!!!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-06-2007, 01:59 PM
Chapter 10: The Plan

*Miley goes to the beach*

Miley: Jake, are you ok?

Jake: ....You don't like Jack, do you?

Miley: No....why?

Jake: He likes you.

Miley: *pretends to be surprised* Oh my god!

Jake: So now you wanna date him?

Miley: *chuckles* Of course not! Jake, I'm your girlfriend and no one else's.

Jake: Ok, thanks.

*Lilly's at the mall and see's a magazine with ---------!*

Lilly: Oh my god!

*Jack is talking to a girl(who will be revealed soon)*

Jack: So are we clear on the plan?

Girl: Yes.

Jack: Ok, but if you don't do a good job, you won't get paid!

Girl: I'll do a good job. Jake doesn't deserve to be with that loser.

Jack: Hey, she's not the loser. Jake's the loser!

Girl: Whatever you say, Gene.

Jack: Hey! Don't call me that! But, wait....how'd you know?

Girl: --------!


plz post more comments!

Miley is Smiley
04-06-2007, 02:13 PM
More More More
itz good!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-06-2007, 03:05 PM
Any more comments?

miley rocks
04-06-2007, 03:18 PM
ooooooooo its great right more

ashes07
04-06-2007, 04:25 PM
omgsh!!! moremore more!

Fire-Chicken
04-06-2007, 06:06 PM
OMG! This is Soo Good! Write More! More!

SmileyMiley11
04-06-2007, 06:09 PM
write some more!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-07-2007, 05:59 AM
thanks everyone!

Chapter 11: Phase One

Girl: I read it in a magazine! It's on the cover!

Jack: What?!

*Jack rushes to the mall and see's Lilly laughing at a magazine*

Jack: Lilly?

Lilly: Hi......Gene! *bursts out laughing*

Jack: Give me that! *snatches the magazine*

Jack: *reads* Jake Ryan, Jack Ryman's co-star has recently informed us that Jack's real name is Gene Weener.

*Lilly laughs some more*

Jack: Oh, he's not gonna get away with this....*goes back to the girl*

Jack: Let's put the plan in action.

*Back at the beach*

Jake: I've gotta go. See ya later. *kises Miley* *leaves*

*Jake walks a bit and see's "the girl"*

Jake: Holly?!

Holly(from ppl who use ppl): Hey, Jake. *kisses him*

*While that was happening....*

*Jack goes to Miley*

Jack: *flirty, again* Hey, Miley.

Miley: Ok, you can stop that. I'm not interested. I'm with Jake and I'm happy.

Jack: Are you sure he's a nice guy?

Miley: Uh, yeah!

Jack: Then turn around.

*Miley turns around and see's Jake and Holly kissing*

Jack: *thinking* Phase one...complete.


Hope you guys like it! Please post your comments!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-07-2007, 12:53 PM
Any comments??

mileymyidol
04-07-2007, 02:01 PM
this is the best fanfic........

mileymyidol
04-07-2007, 02:07 PM
awesome write more

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-07-2007, 02:17 PM
thank you! Here's one more chapter!

Chapter 12: Backfire

*Miley runs home*

Jake: *stops Holly* What are you doing?!

Holly: My job! Toodles! *leaves*

*Jack goes to Jake*

Jack: You are a horrible, horrible person.

Jake: What did I do?

Jack: Well, first, you told the whole world my real name.

*Jake laughs*

Jack: And second of all you kissed some girl and Miley saw!

Jake: What?! Miley saw?!

Jack: Yeah, so that goes to prove that you're an awful person!

*Jake runs to Miley's house*

Miley: *crying* Leave me alone.

Jake: Miley, I swear on my life that I didn't want to kiss Holly! She kissed me and then I stopped her.

Miley: *sarcastic* Oh, sure.

Jake: Miley, why would I do that? I don't want to cheat on you and I don't want us to break up.

Miley: ....And you're telling the truth?

Jake: Of course I am.

Miley: Ok...*hugs Jake*

*Jack was spying on them*

Jack: *quietly* Backfire! Luckily, I have another plan...*evil laugh*

miley rocks
04-07-2007, 10:05 PM
that is great keep it up

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-08-2007, 05:02 AM
lol, ok!

Chapter 13: Another Backfire

*Two days later*

*Jake goes to the beach while Jack's there*

*Jack has a note in his hands*

Jake: What's that?

Jack: Uh....nothing.

Jake: Can I read it?

Jack: .....Are you sure you want to?

Jake: Yeah..

Jack: Here. *gives Jake the note*

Jake: *reads* Dear Miley, when I got your note, I was so happy to find out that you like me too. *stops reading* WHAT?!

*Miley comes to the beach*

Miley: Hey, Jake.

Jake: You like Jack?!

Miley: Uh...no! What would make you think that?!

Jake: This! *gives Miley the note*

Miley: *reads the note* This is crazy! I didn't write you any note!

Jack: *pretending* Oh, really? Then who did?

Miley: How am I supposed to know? But there is one thing I do know. You were trying to break us up!

Jake: Yeah, leave Miley alone!

Jack: No.

* ---------! *


Hope everyone likes it! Please post your comments!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-08-2007, 02:31 PM
Please, comment!!!

ashes07
04-08-2007, 02:43 PM
good job! more please!

HM ROCKS
04-08-2007, 07:46 PM
More More More!!

mileymyidol
04-08-2007, 08:50 PM
yea moreee

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-09-2007, 05:02 AM
ok, but some of you guys may hate me after this chapter....lol.

Chapter 14: Leave her alone!

*Jack kisses Miley*

Jake: *Pulls Jack away* What the heck are you doin?!

Jack: What do you think?

Jake: Go away and leave her alone!

Jack: That's Miley's decision.

Jake: Ok, fine, Miley, do you want Jack to leave you alone?

*Miley's silent*

Jake: Miley?

Miley: ....I.....

Jake: What?

Miley: ...I need to go...*leaves*

Jack: Did you see that? She didn't turn me down!

Jake: She will. *thinking* I hope.

*Miley's heading home and she runs into Lilly*

Lilly: Miley, are you ok?

Miley: I don't know.

Lilly: Oh, that doesn't sound good. What happened?!

Miley: ...Jack kissed me.

Lilly: Oh, no! Are you still with Jake?

Miley: Yes, but....

Lilly: But, what?

Miley: ------------!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-09-2007, 01:26 PM
sum1 plz comment!

thobi123
04-09-2007, 01:41 PM
i love this write more

Miley is Smiley
04-09-2007, 06:23 PM
MORE!!!I love ur fan fic its sooooo good!

mhc13
04-09-2007, 08:05 PM
Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-10-2007, 01:13 PM
thanks!

Chapter 15: Great Idea

Miley: I think I also like Jack

Lilly: What?! But he kissed you on Zombie High and nothing happened!

Miley: I know, but that was acting and he kissed Hannah, not me.

Lilly: So what are you gonna do?

Miley: Well, there's a chance Jack only likes me cause I'm with Jake, you know, and he always copies Jake...

Lilly: So then just forget about Jack!

Miley: .....Yeah! He's forgotten!

Lilly: This reminds of what happened after that raspberry pie eating contest...Oh, well, at least you still have the award.

Miley: *confused* How does it remind you of that?

Lilly: *now confused too* I have no clue.

Miley: Oh my god! I just thought of a great idea although it's comepletely off topic.

Lilly: What is it?

Miley: Well, Hannah Montana has a concert tonight. Maybe Emily Osment would like to be the opening act...That way people can find out about her and buy her CD when it hits stores!

Lilly: That is a great idea!

Miley: Ok, so Emily's gonna perform 3 songs and then Hannah comes out, and you know the rest.

Lilly: Ok! Should Mitchel come?

Miley: It'd be good for publicity.

Lilly: Yay! Emily's first concert!

Miley: Yeah, anyway I've gotta get home. Bye.

Lilly: Bye! *happily skips off*

*Miley runs into Jack on her way home*

Miley: What do you want?

Jack: Just thought you should know something....

Miley: *annoyed voice* What?

Jack: I know your secret.

thobi123
04-10-2007, 01:49 PM
oh no

miley rocks
04-10-2007, 06:45 PM
ooooooooooo

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-11-2007, 06:46 AM
Chapter 16: Eavesdropper

Miley: What?!

Jack: Yeah, I heard you and Lilly talking about it!

Miley: Oh no!

Jack: That's right and if you don't break up with Jake, I'm gonna tell everyone.

Miley: NO! You can't tell anyone! You need to keep my secret!

Jack: Ok.

Miley: Really?

Jack: As long as you break up with Jake.

Miley: ......ok, but you can't tell anyone my secret!

Jack: Deal.

*Miley returns to the beach*

Jake: Miley? Are you ok?

Miley: No.

Jake: What's wrong?

Miley: Jack knows my secret.

Jake: That you're Hannah Montana?!

Miley: Yeah, he overheard me and Lilly talking.

Jake: Oh no!

Miley: Yeah, and he said he'd tell everyone unless I break up with you....

Jake: Oh....So you're breaking up with me?

Miley: I kind of have to...

Jake: It's ok. I understand. I mean, you can't let your secret get revealed.

Miley: Yeah....Wait! --------!

thobi123
04-11-2007, 10:50 AM
soo good

miley rocks
04-11-2007, 06:59 PM
i hate jack but the ff is great

mileymyidol
04-11-2007, 09:45 PM
omg write moreeeeeeeeee

numba1puppyluva
04-11-2007, 10:39 PM
O MY GAWD O MY GAWD O MY GAWD!!!! when i read that chapter i stopped breathing!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-12-2007, 11:17 AM
Thanks everyone!

Chapter 17: Surprise!

Miley: Wait! I have an idea!

Jake: What?

Miley: Well, we can still be together, we just have to hide it from Jack!

Jake: Ok. Uh oh, here he comes.

*Jack comes to the beach*

Jack: *fake* What's wrong? Did you guys break up?

Miley: Uh, yeah....

Jack: Well then Miley, do you wanna go out with me?

Miley: No.

Jack: Excuse me?

Miley: No!

Jack: Ok, then I guess I need to talk to the people here...*clears throat*

Miley: *Looks at Jake with a "sorry" look* I mean....There's no way I'd say no!

Jack: Ok, so The Purple Lobster tomorrow night?

*lol, purple lobster from that's so raven*

Miley: ....yeah.

*Jack leaves*

Miley: Jake, I'm so sorry!

Jake: It's ok....I mean, you can't let your secret get revealed.

Miley: Yeah....Hey, do you wanna come to my concert tonight?

Jake: Sure.

*that night*

*At the concert*

Hannah: Are you nervous?

Emily: Yeah...very nervous actually.

Hannah: Don't worry, it's gonna be ok.

Emily: But there's so many people!

Mitchel: *peeking at the audience* Wow, she's right! There are A LOT of people!

Hannah: *goes to peek at the audience too* Oh my god!

Mitchel: A lot, huh?

Hannah: No, I mean, ----------!

Jake: ---------!

Cheerleader111
04-12-2007, 01:11 PM
omg! what happened?! moooooooooooooore!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-12-2007, 01:47 PM
lol.kk.

Chapter 18: The concert

Hannah: No, I mean, Jack's here!

Jake: He's everywhere!

Hannah: Ughh. He's probably going to make sure you're not here or something...Oh, Emily you have to go on in one minute.

*Emily whimpers*

Hannah: Don't worry, you're gonna be fine.

*Emily goes out and performs*

Hannah: She's doing really good!

*After performing 3 songs*

*The audience really enjoyed it*

Emily:*on stage* Thank you so much! My album's going to be released in five days!

*Emily goes backstage*

Emily: That was so much fun!

Hannah: I'm glad you like to perform! Now, I've gotta do it.

*Hannah goes out and performs*

*After the conert, backstage*

Security Guy: Miss Montana?

Hannah: Yes?

Security Guy: Mr. Ryman is here to see you.

Hannah: Jake, hide!

*Jake hides*

Hannah: Ok, let him in.

*Jack comes in*

Jack: Hi, Hannah.

Hannah: Hey. What do you want?

Jack: Things with Miley didn't work out.

Hannah: *very confused* Huh?

Jack: Yeah, so do you wanna go out with me?

Hannah: *Extremely confused* What?!


Lolz. You'll understand it after you read the next chapter!

Cheerleader111
04-12-2007, 02:06 PM
I like it! when he was like things with miley didn't work out though, i was like huh? what is he talking about?!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-12-2007, 02:12 PM
exactly! lol, tomorrow I'll post the next chapter and you'll understand it, don't worry. :P

numba1puppyluva
04-12-2007, 02:46 PM
OH!!! I GET IT!!!!!!!!!!! HE knows LILLY is EMILY!!!!! Or, he thinks Miley is Emily!!! HOW COULD I MISS THAT!!!! lol

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-12-2007, 02:47 PM
maybe....maybe not....lol.:P

numba1puppyluva
04-12-2007, 04:05 PM
WRITE MORE NOW!!! lol

numba1puppyluva
04-12-2007, 07:37 PM
I MEAN NOW YOUNG LADY!!! lol, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-13-2007, 02:05 PM
lolz, sorry for the wait, here it is.

Chapter 19: A Lot of Laughter

Jack: So do you wanna go out with me?

Jake: *comes out of hiding* You're going out with Miley though!

Jack: Jake?!

Jake: You're trying to cheat on her!

Jack: Uh, well, she's just gonna have to be ok with it cause otherwise, I'll reveal her secret!

Hannah: What's her secret?

Jack: It's very embarassing, so she really doesn't want me to tell anybody but...she ate so many raspberry pies at a raspberry pie eating contest, she threw up!

*Jake and Hannah burst out laughing at Jack's stupidity*

*Emily and Mitchel start laughing too*

Jack: That's how hard everyone's gonna laugh if I tell them!

*Everyone continues to laugh ecept for Jack*

Jack: It's not THAT funny....

*They all continue to laugh*

Jack: Whatever. *leaves*

Hannah: This is so great! He doesn't know my real secret!

Mitchel: So you don't care if he tells people?

Hannah: Well, if it was just randomly, I would, but I'm so relieved right now, I don't care at all!

Jake: What are you gonna do about your date with him?

Hannah: Well, it's over with him....and I know exactly how to tell him.


If you don't understand how Jack doesn't know Miley's Hannah, reread chapter 15. Miley doesn't refer to Hannah as herself and Jack is pretty stupid so...yeah. I hope it's not too confusing! :P Please comment!

Cheerleader111
04-13-2007, 03:19 PM
LUV it! more more more!!! i almost had like a heart attack and then i was like what a stupid kid.

numba1puppyluva
04-13-2007, 04:15 PM
OH MY GAWD!!!!! LOL!!! Who would'a thought?!?! Thats just stupid!!! Who would care if she threw up at a rasberry contest when she was little?!?! That is a pure DIAMOND chapter! I was laughing like crazy myself! More please!

Miley98
04-13-2007, 05:48 PM
pretty pretty plz rite more!?!

numba1puppyluva
04-13-2007, 10:20 PM
NOW!! NOW!! erm, plz?

Cheerleader111
04-13-2007, 10:57 PM
MORE!!!! you are like killing me here!!!

Khockeygrl4
04-14-2007, 12:22 AM
^^^^ i totally agree, i NEED MORE!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-14-2007, 04:30 AM
lolz, kk. Although, I won't have access to a comeputer until Tuesday after this...so srry but this is the last chapter until Tuesday.

Chapter 20: At the Purple Lobster

*The next day at 7pm*

Jake: Miley, where are we going?

Miley: Purple Lobster.

Jake: Why?

Miley: For a date, dummy!*joking*

*Miley and Jake get to the Purple Lobster and sit down at a table*

Miley: *See's Jack* There's Jack.

Jake: Someone's getting stood up.

*Miley laughs*

*Jack spots Miley*

*Jack goes over to them*

Jack: Miley?!

Miley: *casually* Sup?

Jack: What are you doing here with Jake?!

Miley: It's a date! Duh!

Jack: It's with me though!

Miley: Nope, we're over.

Jack: Well, then I guess everyone here should know something...

Miley: Maybe they should.

Jack: You mean you don't care if I tell them your secret?

Miley: Not anymore.

Jack: Ok...Have fun getting embarassed! *clears throat* Everybo -

Person: That's not her secret.

Miley: Oh, no! Not you!


You're welcome to guess who it is, if you want! Anyway,please comment!

numba1puppyluva
04-14-2007, 12:49 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE!! Just so ya kno, ur not gon get many comments since ppl write comments to get u to write more, so we kno ur not gon write at all till Tues so ur prob not gon get comments. Anyway, I think its Luan!

mileymyidol
04-14-2007, 06:57 PM
yeah omg write more

Khockeygrl4
04-14-2007, 08:01 PM
AHHHHHHHHHHHh, WATS GUNNA HAPPEN!!! MORE

miley rocks
04-14-2007, 09:00 PM
here ar all that i think rachel sarah becca or even troy [lol]

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-17-2007, 12:04 PM
Thanks everyone for commenting and also for being patient!:D

Chapter 21: Interference

Jake: Is that...?

Miley: That's right.

Jack: Wow, who is that?

Person: That doesn't matter right now. Her secret is -

Miley: ....that I ate so many raspberry pies, when I was little, I barfed.

Person: No, I was talking about -

Miley: How I threw up on the mayor.

Person: No I meant -

Miley: That's enough outta you! *pushes the person away*

Person: Stop!

Miley: What are you doing here?!

Person: Getting pushed by you!

Miley: Why aren't you in --------?

Person: -------------?

Jack: ------------? That explains it.

Person: Why, you are Jack Ryman!

Jack: That's right.

Person: You're not evil, are you?

Jack: Uh...Of course not!

Person: And I thought we could get along.

Miley: You need to get out of here! *pushes the person out the door*

Jake: What was her name again?

Miley: Luanne.


Thanks again for waiting! Please comment!

Fire-Chicken
04-17-2007, 12:07 PM
Great! Write more

numba1puppyluva
04-17-2007, 08:10 PM
MORE MORE MORE! What did u say?

Khockeygrl4
04-17-2007, 08:28 PM
More more more

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-18-2007, 06:54 AM
numba1puppyluva, what did who say?

Chapter 22: News

*Miley gets home*

Robby: What's wrong, Miles?

Miley: What's wrong?! Luanne tried to reveal my secret again!

Robby: Oh, so you're not in a good mood...

Miley: Ya think?!....Sorry, I'm just a bit mad.

Robby: Miley, I have some news....

Miley: What is it?

Robby: I met someone....

Miley: And?

Robby: And we're engaged...

Miley: I won't freak out until you tell me everything cause I'm sensing there's something more to it.

Robby: There is...

Miley: What?

Robby: *sigh* -----------!

Miley: That's ironic, -----------! Unless.....

Robby: Yes....-----------!

Miley: Oh my god! No! How come you're telling me this now?!

Robby: It was hard to find the right moment.

Miley: This is by far the right moment!

*Miley runs up to her room and falls asleep, crying*


Lolz, sorry to leave you hanging like that. :P please comment!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-18-2007, 02:58 PM
someone please post a comment!

:57:

thobi123
04-18-2007, 06:41 PM
who is he engaged to

miley rocks
04-18-2007, 06:58 PM
omg more

Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 07:37 PM
MORE!!! you can't leave us like this!

smileyface93
04-18-2007, 08:43 PM
omg omgggg plzz moreee

Khockeygrl4
04-18-2007, 08:52 PM
Ahhhhhhhhhh More

numba1puppyluva
04-18-2007, 09:25 PM
more. NOW!!!!

smileyface93
04-18-2007, 10:48 PM
Moreeeeeeeeee Plzzzz

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-19-2007, 04:50 AM
Chapter 23: Do we have a deal?

*Next day at the beach*

Miley: Lilly, you will NOT believe what my dad just told me last night.

Lilly: Sounds like bad news.

Miley: It is! He's engaged to Jack's mother!

Lilly: Oh, that's terrible! Does Jack know?!

*Jack comes to the beach*

Jack: Hey, sis.

Miley: *to Lilly* Looks like he knows. *to Jack* When did you find out?

Jack: Last night.

Miley: Please tell me you're not ok with it!

Jack: Of course not! It'd be so much harder to go out with you if my mom and your dad were married!

Miley: Jack, we are NEVER going to be together! Get over it!

Jack: I choose to ignore that. You know, I can convince my mom to not marry your dad.

Miley: ...If.....

Jack: How'd you know there was an "if"?

Miley: Well, you never do anything for anyone unless there's something in it for you.

Jack: I choose to ignore that too. I'll convince my mom to not marry your dad if you beak up with Jake and go out with me.

Miley: Are you sure they won't get married?

Jack: One hundred percent. My mom cares about my opinion a lot. So do we have a deal?

Miley: .... --------!



Please comment! :57:

Cheerleader111
04-19-2007, 06:29 PM
whoa. that is so good! i need more!!!! :)

numba1puppyluva
04-19-2007, 08:09 PM
NO!! Miley, DON'T DO IT!!!

miley rocks
04-19-2007, 09:50 PM
its getting interesting dont stop

Khockeygrl4
04-19-2007, 09:52 PM
yeah!!! write more pleaz!!!!!

punkrocksam
04-19-2007, 09:56 PM
Please more, this is awesome

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-20-2007, 05:20 AM
Chapter 24: Let it slip

Miley: ....ok, but what are you going to say to your mom?

Jack: That she can't be married to 2 people.

Miley: She's married?!

Jack: Dang, I wasn't supposed to tell you that!

Miley: The deal's off. *leaves*

*Miley goes home*

Miley: Dad, did you know that Jack's mom is already married?

Robby: What?!

Miley: She's married! Jack let it slip!

Robby: Impossible..*calls Jack's mom*

Jack's mom: *answers* Hello?

Robby: Hey, it's Robby. Why didn't you tell me you were married?! *pause* Oh, ok, sorry about this. *hangs up* Miles, --------!

Miley: Why?!

Robby: Because, ----------!

Miley: *thinking* My life is officially a mess!


You know what to do..(comment) :P Sorry it's a bit short, though.

HM ROCKS
04-20-2007, 09:35 AM
More!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-20-2007, 09:46 AM
Ok, since that chapter was short, I'll post one more....

Chapter 25: Deal Back On

*Miley goes to the beach and Jack's still there*

Miley: You're mom's getting divorced!

Jack: Oh...right...I guess I'll have to think of something else... Is the deal back on?

Miley: ....yes.

Jack: Ok, but this time, Jake can't know why you're breaking up with him.

Miley: Why not?

Jack: *thinking* So then you WON'T get back together! *not thinking* I have my reasons.

*Jake comes to the beach*

Jake: Miley, what's wrong?

*Miley's silent*

Jake: *looks at Jack* What did you do to her?!

Jack: Nothing!

Miley: Jake, we have to break up.

Jake: Why?!

Miley: I....can't tell you.

Jake: It's so you can go out with Jack, isn't it?

Miley: Yes, but you don't understand why!

Jake: No, I understand fine. You like him more than me.

Miley: Jake, no, I -

Jake: Save it, Miley. *leaves*

Jack: Can this get any better?!


Please post your comments! :57:

Miley98
04-20-2007, 02:57 PM
nice! I mean, nice writing! Booo jack!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-20-2007, 03:09 PM
lol, thanks. :D any more comments?

Miley98
04-20-2007, 03:11 PM
yes yes yes! AWESOME! =D

miley rocks
04-20-2007, 07:11 PM
yeah well u know wat im gonna say [lol]

Cheerleader111
04-20-2007, 07:42 PM
I luv it!!! can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

punkrocksam
04-20-2007, 11:04 PM
I LOVE it u sooo have to write more lol

hannahmontana1011
04-21-2007, 12:04 AM
morrrrrreeeee you HAVE to write more It's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

smileyface93
04-21-2007, 01:31 AM
omgggg its so0o good!!!!!! moreeee!!! hehe.

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-21-2007, 03:50 AM
thanks everyone!:D

Chapter 26: Not So Smart

*Next day in the morning*

Robby: Miles, I have some news...It's good news to you.

Miley: *knowing what it is* What?

Robby: I'm not engaged to Jack's mother anymore.

Miley: *thinking* YAY! *not thinking* Oh...Are you ok?

Robby: Eh, I did realise, she wasn't worth it, cause it made you upset.

Miley: Oh, well, thanks.

*later, Miley see's Jack*

Miley: You know, you're not so smart.

Jack: Why?

Miley: Cause your plan didn't work. Our parents are now broken up and now I'm breaking up with you.

Jack: You can't do that!

Miley: Yes I can! There's nothing you can do about it!

Jack: Yes there is!

Miley: Ok, what?

*Jack's silent*

Miley: Exactly. *leaves*

*Miley goes to Jake's house*

Jake: *sigh* What?

Miley: Jake, I was only with Jack so he would break up my dad and his mom.

Jake: And I'm supposed to believe you?

Miley: Yes!

Jake: Why?

Miley: Because, I believed you about what happened between you and Holly.

Jake: So you're telling the truth?

Miley: To quote you, "Of course I am".

Jake: Ok, I believe you.

*they hug*

Jake: Oh, I almost forgot. ---------!

Miley: Really? When?

Jake: It's a good thing I didn't forget cause it's tonight.

Miley: Cool.


Comment, please! :57:

miley rocks
04-21-2007, 11:23 AM
wat did he almost forget
right more ur killing me

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-21-2007, 02:26 PM
lol, I'll post more as soon as I get more comments! :D

Khockeygrl4
04-21-2007, 03:53 PM
more more pleaz!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-22-2007, 04:37 AM
no more comments?

hannahmontana1011
04-22-2007, 09:37 AM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Need More. Its Sooooooooo Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-22-2007, 02:02 PM
kk, lolz, here.

Chapter 27: Departure

Jake: So, I'll pick you up at 7pm? The plane leaves at 8:30pm.

Miley: Yeah, I've just gotta ask my dad.

*later, Miley's at home*

Miley: Dad, you know hom I'm on Zombie High now?

Robby: Yeah...

Miley: Well, tonight, I'm supposed to go to Florida with the cast and crew, for a week, to film an episode.

Robby: Oh...

Miley: Can I go?

Robby: .....Only if Roxy goes with you.

Miley: Perfect! She can keep Jack away from me.

Robby: Right...You should say goodbye to everyone before you leave.

Miley: Ok, I'll invite Lilly and Oliver here.

*Miley calls Lilly and Oliver and they come over*

Lilly: What's going on?

Miley: Well, I'm going to Florida for a week.

Oliver: Why?

Miley: Well, we're filming an episode of Zombie High there.

Oliver: I wanna go too!

Lilly: Yeah, so do I!

Miley: Do you guys have money for a plane ticket?

*Lilly and Oliver are silent*

Miley: It's ok, it's only a week.

Lilly: But you're gonna be away when my album's gonna hit stores!

Miley: I'm sorry, Lilly.

Lilly: ....It's ok, I guess.

*at 7pm*

*Doorbell rings*

*Miley answers(as Hannah)*

Jake: Hey. You ready?

Hannah: Yup. Where are we meeting everyone?

Jake: The airport.

Hannah: *laughs* Why didn't I think of that?

*They get to the airport*

*Everyone's there, including Jack*

Jack: Hey, Hannah.

Roxy: Five steps back.

*Jack gets confused but he takes five steps back*

Roxy: Now, Miss Montana is not available at the moment.

Jack: But, she's right there!

Roxy: I said she's not available!

Jack: Hmm...strange.

Jake: What?

Jack: Well my cousin told me about this wierd woman and she sounds just like her. *points to Roxy*

Roxy: Don't you point your finger at me!

Jack: ...Anyway, he described her to me too....And she looks just like her.

Jake: Who's your cousin?

Jack: ------!

Jake: Oh my god!

Hannah: *thinking* Oh my god!


I'd like a couple more comments this time, please. Hope you guys like it! :57:

Khockeygrl4
04-22-2007, 05:32 PM
y did everyone say omg?? pleaz more!!!

Miley98
04-22-2007, 05:51 PM
plz write more! =O=D

miley rocks
04-22-2007, 07:11 PM
wrie more i need it

numba1puppyluva
04-22-2007, 08:16 PM
Omg!!!!!! Who?!?!?!?!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-23-2007, 04:32 AM
The surprise person is.....

Chapter 28: Surprise Guests

Jake: Troy McCanne(sp?)?!(the guy from schooly bully)

Jack: *sarcastic* No, Troy Bolton from "High School Musical". Yes,Troy McCanne(sp?)! What's the big deal?

*I forgot to mention, in my last fanfic, Miley dated Troy*

Jake: Miley dated him!

Jack: Oh, so he was talking about Miley Stewart!

Jake: Do you know more than one Miley?

Jack: Uh.....no.

Hannah: What are you guys talking about?

Jack: Not important. He said that you *points to Roxy* were -

Roxy: I said don't point your finger at me!

Jack: That you were trying to protect Miley from him...And now you're protecting Hannah from me...

Jake: Uh....you know, many strange things with no answers have happened in the world...like uh...The Bermuda Triangle!

Roxy: He's right, cause I have no idea what you're talking about!

Jack: *still suspicious* Yeah...I guess.

Roxy: Now, let's get on that plane and go to Florida!

Director: Who on earth are you?!

Roxy: Miss Montana's bodyguard, now let's move! *They leave and then get to Florida*

*They get inside the hotel*

*Hannah see's two VERY familiar people at the reception*

Hannah: -------!

Jack: How come they look so familiar?

Jake: --------!



Comment, please!! :57:

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-23-2007, 01:13 PM
Please, someone comment!

miley rocks
04-23-2007, 10:22 PM
well............................
u know wat im gonna say so {lol}
im jk its getting better n better

Cheerleader111
04-23-2007, 11:50 PM
yay! you wrote more!!! now write MORE!!! (plz :) )

luv2act
04-24-2007, 12:20 AM
please more! it's awsome!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-24-2007, 04:17 AM
thank you!

Chapter 29: Wierd Script

Hannah: Lil - I mean, Emily! Mitchel!

Jack: How come they look so familiar?

Jake: You saw them at Hannah's concert.

Hannah: What are you guys doing here?!

Emily: Well, I begged my parents to let me go, and so did Mitchel. They paid for my flight, but I'll have to pay it back with the money I make from my CD.

Hannah: Well, at last you're here. How long are you guys staying?

Mitchel: Only until Saturday morning.

Hannah: Today's Thursday! Only 2 days?!

Emily: Yeah, I kinda need to go back cause Saturday, my CD's gonna be released.

Mitchel: Yeah, and I need to go back to be seen with her at her CD signing.

Hannah: Oh, you're gonna have a CD signing? I'm so happy for you!

Emily: Thanks. I'm excited, but nervous!

Hannah: You're gonna be great. Just like you were at the concert.

*Next day, everyone's at the set*

Director: So we're gonna start filming in 3 days. Here are your scripts. *hands out scripts*

Emily: Can I read it?!

Hannah: Let's just read it together.

*After reading a couple of pages...*

Emily: Huh?!

Hannah: What?!

Jake: *goes over to them* What's wrong?

*Hannah points to the script*

Jake: - ---?! That's crazy!


please comment, everyone!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-24-2007, 03:30 PM
Please, post your comments!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
04-24-2007, 03:36 PM
Great Fanfic! :D

Cheerleader111
04-24-2007, 07:20 PM
Luv it! more plz!

Khockeygrl4
04-24-2007, 07:40 PM
more more more i luv it!!!!!!!

miley rocks
04-24-2007, 09:32 PM
more

punkrocksam
04-25-2007, 12:09 AM
OMG I need to know more LOL

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-25-2007, 10:09 AM
Chapter 30: Publicity

Jake: I die?! That's crazy!

Emily! I guess it's not crazy for the writers...

Jake: They can't kill me! This show would be nothing without me!

Emily: *cracks up* Oh, ok.

*Jake gives her a look*

Hannah: Jake, try talking to the writers. Maybe they can change it.

Jake: Ok. *goes to one of the writers* So,...HOW COME I DIE?!

Writer: Well, honestly, you're not in the centre of the spotlight anymore.

Jake: If not me, then who?!

Writer: Jack.

Jake: But you can't kill ME off!

Writer: You're right.

Jake: I am?

Writer: No.

Jake: Uh....I can get some more publicity for the show!

Writer: ...Ok, I will change the script if you get more publicity for the show.

Jake: So, I'll remain on the show?

Writer: If you get publicity for it.... *leaves*

*Hannah goes to Jake*

Hannah: So, what'd he say?

Jake: He said I'll remain on the show as long as I get more publicity for it.

Hannah: Great! But what are you gonna do?

Jake: Uh....*sigh* I don't know.

*Hannah starts looking around for an idea*

*Hannah spots Emily*

Hannah: Hmm....I think I have an idea.


Comment plz!!! :57:

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-26-2007, 06:45 PM
Any comments?

thobi123
04-26-2007, 06:56 PM
yes tht was amazing post more

miley rocks
04-26-2007, 09:15 PM
yeah i got 1
write more

Khockeygrl4
04-26-2007, 09:22 PM
pleaz more i luv it!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-26-2007, 09:52 PM
kk, here's a long one! :D

Chapter 31: Emily's CD Signing

Jake: What's your idea?

Hannah: Emily can tell her fans and stuff that her favorite show is Zombie High! Then maybe more people would watch it!

Jake: Worth a shot. Emily?

Emily: Yeah?

Jake: Do you mind advertising for Zombie High by saying that it's your favourite show?

Emily: Well it is one of my favorite shows so...ok.

Jake: Great, thanks!

*the next morning*

Hannah: Thanks for visiting, guys.

Mitchel: I'm glad we did, it was fun!

Emily:Yeah, anyway, see ya in five days!

Hannah: Bye!

Jake: Don't forget, Zombie High's your fqvorite show!

Emily: Right.

*Emily and Mitchel leave*

*Later that day at the CD signing*

Emily: *signs autograph* There you go!

Fan: Thank you so much!

*After signing some more autographs...*

Popstar! Magazine Interviewer: Miss Osment, do you mind if we interview you?

Emily: Not at all!

PM Interviewer: Ok, so let's start off with what your favorite color is.

Emily: Probably, red.

PM Interviewer: Ok, how did you become a star so quickly?

Emily: Well, I realised that I should chase my dream, so I trieed to get a record deal.

PM Interviewer: I see, what is your favorite tv show?

Emily: Taylo - I mean, Zombie High! Jake Ryan's a very good actor! (before, she meant to say Taylor Kingsford)

PM Interviewer: Ok, and now on the personal side of life. Do you have a boyfriend or are you single?

Emily: Actually, I'm not single.

*Mitchel goes over to her*

Emily: This is my boyfriend, Mitchel Musso.

PM Interviewer: Great! You two are going to make next month's cover!

*Pictures are taken by Popstar! photograhpers, of Emily and Mitchel...*

*The interview goes on....*

*That night, in Florida, Hannah goes into her hotel room and turns on the radio*

Radio announcer: New popstar, Emily Osment's CD is a huge success today on it's release date.

Hannah: Aww, yay! She must be so happy!

Radio annnouncer: ----------!

Hannah: WHAT????!!!!


comment please!!

miley rocks
04-26-2007, 09:58 PM
o she heared that emily and mitchel were a couple

luv2act
04-26-2007, 10:08 PM
so awesome! more!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-27-2007, 11:06 AM
o she heared that emily and mitchel were a couple

lol, nice guess but she already knew that.(When Jake told Oliver that he must be left since he's not a star and then he told them that he's Mitchel Musso, Emily Osment's bf, Miley was there, so she heard) When my friend was reading it though, she thought the same thing you thought. lolz.:P

Cheerleader111
04-27-2007, 07:07 PM
It's awesome!!! more!!! (plz)

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-27-2007, 08:52 PM
Chapter 32: Hannah's Anger

Radio announcer: Many people are saying that Emily is the new and improved Hannah Montana.

Hannah: WHAT???!!!

Radio announcer: That's right, so be sure to pick up a copy of Emily's CD today. She is the new and improved Hannah Montana. The new and improved-

Hannah: Oh, shut up! *turns off radio*

*Jake knocks on Hannah's door*

Jake: Mi - Hannah?

Hannah: Jake?

*Jake comes in*

Jake: Are you ok? I thought I heard you yelling.

Hannah: *mad* That's cause I just heard that people are saying that Lilly's the new and better me!

Jake: Well....maybe....

Hannah: *quiet voice rising to a yell* What? You think she's better than me?!

Jake: Uh, no, I -

Hannah: First of all, they wouldn't even have known about her if it wasn't for my concert, so don't tell me that -

Jake: Woah, Miley, I -

Hannah: Hannah!

Jake: Hannah, I never said that she's better than you. This usually happens to celebrities. When they're new everything's about them for a while...*quietly* like Jack...*normal voice* but then the heat dies down. Don't worry, I'm sure this happened to you.

Hannah: ....Yeah... it did, actually.

Jake: Exactly, so don't worry about it.

*Jake hugs her*

Jake: Anyway, I'm gonna go to bed, it's getting late.

Hannah: See ya tomorrow.

Jake: Bye. *leaves*

Hannah: I am NOT gonna let Lilly be a bigger star than me! I'm gonna have to mess up her career....



Please comment, everyone!

miley rocks
04-27-2007, 10:25 PM
o wow that is mean
but its making the story more interesting

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-28-2007, 10:49 AM
o wow that is mean
but its making the story more interesting

hehe, yeah, that's kinda the point :P

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-28-2007, 03:27 PM
Plz, more people comment!

numba1puppyluva
04-28-2007, 03:30 PM
MORE ans NOW

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-28-2007, 03:45 PM
kk, sorry if you think it's a bit short.

Chapter 33: Jealousy

*Five days later*

*Miley started to think that she couldn't ruin her best friend's career so she canceled her plan*

*Back in Malibu, Miley and Jake are talking*

Jake: So are you ok? You know, about Lilly's fame?

Miley: ...Yeah, I think I overreacted(sp?).

Jake: So you're not gonna try to sabotage her career or something, right?

Miley: Well, at first that was the plan....but now, I don't think so.

*Lilly spots them and goes over to them*

Lilly: Hey guys! How was the rest of the week in Florida?

Miley: It was....uh....not that good at first, but then...um, it got better.

Jake: Ok, I'll let you two catch up. *leaves*

Miley: So...anything new?

Lilly:*bragging* Well, other than my CD selling TONS of copies, nothing.

Miley: *Getting a bit mad, but doesn't show it* Cool.

Lilly: It sold more copies so far than your latest album EVER sold!

Miley:*Getting very mad, but doesn't show it* I'm glad you're happy.

Lilly: I even heard people saying that I'm better than you!

Miley:*Super mad* Let's not get carried away.

Lilly: I'm not getting carried away.

Miley: *sarcastic* Right, and I flew to Mars and found gold!

Lilly: Huh?

Miley: I've gotta go. Bye. *leaves*

Lilly: *thinking* She is SO jealous.

Miley: *thinking* Looks like I am going to have to sabotage her career...


Everyone comment please!

numba1puppyluva
04-28-2007, 03:56 PM
Oooh! the kitchen is getting hot, but I'm not leaving it! lol

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-28-2007, 07:46 PM
lol, you're funny. Anyway, I need some more comments before I post the next chapter so please comment everyone!

izzybella
04-28-2007, 08:34 PM
oh wow this is sooo interesting!!!!! You have to write more or everyoone will die!!!!


ps:Check out miley stories by me on the rpg's!

miley rocks
04-28-2007, 09:50 PM
more pleasezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

saha-agent-002
04-29-2007, 08:47 AM
More i tell u more in australia its mi bed time and im not gonna get a gd night sleep until u write more

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-29-2007, 06:45 PM
ok, thanks everyone!

Chapter 34: More Bragging

*The next day*

*Miley's at the beach*

*Lilly's running to the beach*

Lilly: *yelling* Number one! Number one! Number one!

Miley: Number one, what?

Lilly: My album debuted at number one on the billboard charts!

Miley: *unenthusiastic* Oh, great.

Lilly: It's beating everyone! Including Hannah Montana!

Miley: Ok! I get it! I get it! I get it!

Lilly: Oh, come on, Miley, don't get mad.

Miley: Well then, stop bragging!

Lilly: I'm not bragging...I'm just telling you the latest news.

Miley: Well I can find out about the latest news myself.

Lilly: Geez, someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed this morning.

Miley: Well, if you're bragging, what do you expect me to do?!

Lilly: Go to bed and wake up properly!

Miley: I wouldn't be talking if I were you.

Lilly: Miley, what is your problem?

Miley: Your bragging! I'm sick of it! You don't do this to your friends!

Lilly: You're right, I don't.

Miley: Well, then why are you doing it to me?!

Lilly: Well, because it looks like we're not friends. *leaves*

Miley: *thinking* She is sooo gonna pay....tonight, I'll --------!


Hope you guys like it!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-29-2007, 06:51 PM
oh wow this is sooo interesting!!!!! You have to write more or everyoone will die!!!!


ps:Check out miley stories by me on the rpg's!

kk, I'll check it out now!

miley rocks
04-29-2007, 09:57 PM
more

saha-agent-002
04-30-2007, 02:54 AM
more

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-30-2007, 07:12 PM
Chapter 35: Popstar News

*That night*

*Hannah goes to popstar! magazine's office*

Hannah: Hi, I'm Hannah Montana.

Editor: Oh, Miss Montana, it's such a pleasure to meet you! What brings you here?

Hannah: Well I have some information to share with you about Emily Osment.

Editor: If it's big news, we'll put it in the issue that comes out tomorrow! She's on the cover.

Hannah: Yes, well, I think this is big news.

Editor: Ok. *grabns a paper and a pen*

Hannah: The truth is...Emily lip synchs. At my concert, my friend, um...Ashley was singing for her backstage.

Editor: Wow! We have to put that it our next issue aka the one that comes out tomorrow! Cover story: "Great singer, or just a pretty face?" Oh, it's gonna sell loads of copies! Thank you so much for the info, Miss Montana.

Hannah: *evil grin* No problem. *leaves*

*Next day*

*Miley's at the beach*

*Lilly is coming to the beach with a magazine in her hands, looking very mad*

Lilly: *mad* What's this?!

Miley: *smiles* Yay, you're on the cover!

Lilly: Read what it says!

Miley: *reads* An insider has told us that Emily Osment lip synchs. As it turns out, she's nothing more than a pretty face.

Lilly: Also, what it says below!

Miley: *reads* Em's bf, Mitchel Musso, sleeps with a stuffed kitty.

*Miley starts to laugh*

Miley: How'd they find THAT out?!

Lilly: You told them!

Miley: Hey! Maybe I told them your news, but I didn't tell them - uh.. I mean, I didn't tell them anything.

Lilly: Miley, I'm so gonna get you back for this....

Miley: Oh, yeah?

Lilly: Yeah. *leaves*

Miley: *quietly to herself* How on earth did Popstar find out about Oliver's stuffed cat?!

Khockeygrl4
04-30-2007, 07:47 PM
more pleaz!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
04-30-2007, 09:11 PM
kk, I'll post more as soon as I get some more comments. ;)

smileyface93
04-30-2007, 09:32 PM
more more MOREE MOREEEE!! lol

miley rocks
04-30-2007, 09:54 PM
more wow that was interesthing the thing w\oliver

Cheerleader111
04-30-2007, 11:34 PM
awesome!!! sad....but awesome!!! lol

saha-agent-002
05-01-2007, 04:51 AM
as before lol MORE

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-01-2007, 07:09 PM
ok, thanks everyone!

Chapter 36: The Truth

*Jake comes to the beach*

Jake: So your jealousy got to ya, huh?

Miley: You saw the magazine?

Jake: Yeah...Does Oliver really sleep with a stuffed cat?

Miley: Well...yeah, but I didn't tell them that!

Jake: Then who did?

Miley: No clue.

*Emily comes to the beach*

Everyone at the beach: AAAHHHH! It's Emily Osment!!!

Emily: Hey, everyone. There have been rumors about me lip synching and none of them are true.

Fan: Can you sing for us?

Fan #2: Hold on, let me call the press.

*The press arrives in ten minutes*

Emily: Sorry, but this is gonna be acapella.

*Emily sings the chorus of one of her songs*

Press: Perfect! On the news tomorrow!

*Emily smiles at Miley*

Press: Does your boyfriend really sleep with a stuffed kitty?

Emily: *lying* Of course not! That's another awful rumor!

*All of a sudden, Jack goes to Emily*

Jack: Emily, --------!

Emily: *thinking* I always knew he was strange....

miley rocks
05-01-2007, 07:45 PM
oh was it jack

Miley98
05-01-2007, 07:49 PM
i sooo need morre!

Khockeygrl4
05-01-2007, 09:31 PM
^me too!!!
more pleaz!!!!!!!!

numba1puppyluva
05-01-2007, 09:39 PM
OMG!!!! What did he say????

saha-agent-002
05-02-2007, 06:16 AM
more

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-02-2007, 05:40 PM
Chapter 37: Lovesick

Jack: Emily, I love you.

Emily: *thinking* I always knew he was strange.... *not thinking* Yeah, I've gotta go. *leaves*

*everyone else at the beach leaves, except for Miley, Jake and Jack*

Jack: As you can see, Miley, I'm over you.

Miley: Boy, you are lovesick!

Jack: What?

Miley: Yeah, first me, then Hannah Montana and now Emily!

Jack: Ok, but I am NOT lovesick!

Miley: *sarcastic* Sure...but since when do you like Emily?

Jack: Since yesterday.

Jake: Let it go, she's with...um....what's his name?

Miley: Mitchel.

Jake: Right.

Jack: Yeah, I know, I've been trying to break them up!

Miley: So you're the one who told Popstar! about the stuffed cat?!

Jack: *smirks* Yup.

Jake: *laughs* *sarcastic* Next thing you know, he'll be crushing on Lilly.

*Miley laughs*

Jack: Hmm....yeah, Lilly's cuter than Emily.

*Miley and Jake burst out laughing*

Miley: *thinking* They're the same person, stupid!

Jake: Miley's right, you're lovesick!

Jack: Am not.

Miley and Jake: Are too.

Miley: Lilly's with Oliver, anyway.

Jack: Then I guess I'll have to break them up.

*Lilly comes to the beach*

Jack: And I know how...* --------*



Comment, everyone(plz).

Miley98
05-02-2007, 06:28 PM
MORE i tell u MORE!

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 06:30 PM
plzz moree

Lanae_M
05-02-2007, 07:10 PM
I just read it Its awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khockeygrl4
05-02-2007, 07:33 PM
ahhhhh!!! i need more!!!

numba1puppyluva
05-02-2007, 07:57 PM
Thats funny! He thinks Lilly looks betta than Emily!! lol

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-02-2007, 08:37 PM
thanks! kk, chapter 38...

Chapter 38: Truce

*Jack kisses Lilly*

Lilly: *slaps him* Ewww!

Miley and Jake: Lovesick!

Lilly: I can tell!

Jack: I AM NOT LOVESICK!

Miley, Lilly and Jake: Are too!

Jack: Oh, whatever, I don't like you anymore, Lilly. I'm moving on to that girl...um...what's her name? Well at least I know it starts with an "-"... *leaves*

Lilly: Ok, Miley can I talk to you for a second?

Miley: I don't think so.

Lilly: Please, Miley, I just wanna say -

Miley: ..How much better you are than me?

Lilly: No...I want to say, I'm sorry.

Miley: What?

Lilly: The only reason I bragged was because I NEVER thought I would be as good as you...then when I debuted at #1, I was so happy becasue I didn't think it'd be possible.

Miley: Oh...

Lilly: So, I'm sorry.

Miley: Lilly, I'm the one who's supposed to be saying sorry.

Lilly: What for?

Miley: For the rumor. I got so jealous I didn't think of the fact that the rumor could ruin you.

Lilly: Oh, right.. I guess we both did some bad things.

Miley: Truce?

Lilly: Truce.

*Miley and Lilly hug*

Jake: Ok, good, now we only have one problem.

Miley: What?

Jake: I think I know who Jack's next crush is.

Miley: Who?

Jake: --------!

Miley: Oh my god, you're right! We've GOT to do something!

Lilly: Yeah, Jack and ------- is a very dangerous couple....


MAYBE, you guys know who it is... maybe not...but either way, it's ok. Please comment!!

numba1puppyluva
05-02-2007, 08:49 PM
Luanne!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!

smileyface93
05-02-2007, 09:01 PM
ah!!!!!!!!!!!! more~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Khockeygrl4
05-02-2007, 10:13 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

Lanae_M
05-03-2007, 05:16 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Miley98
05-03-2007, 07:04 PM
Luane??!?!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-03-2007, 08:34 PM
yeah, it was Luanne! I knew you guys would get it!

Chapter 39: Jack's Phone Call

Jake: Luanne!

Miley: Oh my god, you're right! We've GOT to do something!

Lilly: Yeah, Jack and Luanne is a very dangerous couple....

Miley: But, wait! Luanne said that she doesn't think they can get along since she doesn't know Jack's evil!

Jake: Oh, please, Jack can't hide something like that. Pretty soon, you're bound to notice he's evil!

Miley: Yeah, you're right....and what's worse..... she can tell him my secret!

*Jack's at his house*

Jack: *on the phone* Operator? Yes, hello, I'd like the phone number of Luanne Stewart.....*pause*....Ok, thanks. *starts dialing Luanne's number*

Luanne: Hello, this is Hannah Montana's enemy.

Jack: Luanne?

Luanne: Who's this? You're one of those handsome California fellers, huh?

Jack: You've got that right. This is Jack Ryman.

Luanne: Oh, right! That tv star. Now listen, if you're not evil, I don't want anything to do with you.

Jack: Uh....but I am evil!

Luanne: How evil?

Jack: Uh... I tried to break up Miley and Jake?

Luanne: Well anything that makes that little princess suffer is evil, so I guess you are evil. What do you want?

Jack: I was just wondering if you'd uh.....

Luanne: I haven't got all day, big shot, what do you want?

Jack: Uh...Do you want to go out with me?

Luanne: ------!



Please comment! :D

Khockeygrl4
05-03-2007, 08:41 PM
more pleaz!!! its sooo good!!!

numba1puppyluva
05-03-2007, 09:25 PM
She's gonn say yes, totally! Take what u can get! LOL

saha-agent-002
05-04-2007, 04:02 AM
moree

Miley98
05-04-2007, 07:58 AM
no luane nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Write MOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore





N. o. w.

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-04-2007, 12:09 PM
kk, thanks everyone!

Chapter 40: A Ticket To Malibu

Luanne: I haven't met many evil guys....so ok.

Jack: Great!

Luanne: So when are you coming to Tenessee?

Jack: Oh, right, you live in Tenessee.... Can you come to Malibu.

Luanne: No way, I'm not rich, like you....Wait maybe the plane will let Hannah Montana on for free.

Jack: What?

Luanne: *evil laugh* Ok, go to the airport and pick up Hannah Montana.You'll understnad why later. *evil laugh*

Jack: *confused* What, why?

Luanne: I said you'll understand later. Bye. *hangs up*

Jack: *hangs up* What in the world?! Oh, well, I should be heading to the airport.

*Back in Tenessee*

*Luanne finds a Hannah Montana wig and puts it on*

*Goes to the airport*

Luanne: Hello, I'm Hannah Montana, and I'd like to buy a ticket to Malibu.

Receptionist: It's such an honor to meet you Miss Montana! I'll see if we have some seats available....*checks for seats* Oh, yes we still have 3 seats left. Would you like a window seat?

Luanne: Sure...but I'm a little short on cash right now.... Oh, and I was hoping to see my family again....I haven't seen them in 2 years....

Receptionist: *feeling sorry for Luanne/Hannah* Uh...you know what? This flight will be on us. *gives Luanne a ticket* Enjoy.

Luanne: Thank you so much...*leaves*....idiot.


Please comment! :57:

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-04-2007, 07:34 PM
Please, ppl, comment!

Hannah+Jake
05-04-2007, 07:38 PM
more

numba1puppyluva
05-04-2007, 08:07 PM
Ooooh!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

miley rocks
05-05-2007, 02:31 PM
noooooooooooooooo i cant believe its her

boo~licious
05-05-2007, 02:36 PM
ne one can come up wit that but U ARE SO GOOD..MORE....!!

absolutelyfabx3
05-05-2007, 03:30 PM
wow! I just read the wholee story! I want more!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-05-2007, 09:37 PM
next chappie,

Chapter 41: Wrong Secret

*Later at the Malibu airport*

*People from Luanne's flight arrive*

Jack: *spots Luanne/Hannah* Hannah!

Luanne: Howdy, Jack.

Jack: Uh...what's with your accent?

Luanne: Well, I'm not really Hannah Montana.

Jack: You're not? Who are you then?

Luanne: I'm Luanne.

Jack: .....*starts to laugh* Nice one!

Luanne: It's always been me! I'm Hannah Montana.

Jack: Oh, yeah? Then what's your cousin's name?

Luanne: Stupid little Miley.

Jack: Oh my god, you ARE Luanne!

Luanne: Yes, and feel free to tell the whole world!

*Jack's cell phone rings*

Jack: *answers* Hello?

Jake: Jack, where are you?

Jack: The airport! You will NOT believe it! You know Miley's cousin Luanne? She's Hannah Montana!

Jake: WHAT?!

Jack: At first I didn't believe it either, but it's true!

Jake: Bye. *hangs up* Miley, Luanne is saying she's Hannah Montana.

Miley: Oh my god! That's even worse than revealing my secret to the world! If she sings, everyone's gonna think Hannah Montana lip synchs! My career is gonna be ruined!

Jake: You know what? No, we can stop her! We just need to go to the airport now, that's where they are.

Miley and Lilly: Let's go!

*Miley, Lilly and Jake go to the airport...*

absolutelyfabx3
05-05-2007, 11:37 PM
more! more! more! more! i demand! more! more!

Khockeygrl4
05-06-2007, 01:13 AM
pleaz more!!!

Cheerleader111
05-06-2007, 12:09 PM
more! more! more!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-06-2007, 01:55 PM
Chapter 42: Fooled

*Miley, Lilly and Jake get to the airport and spot Jack and "Hannah"*

Miley: AHA!

Luanne: Howdy, cuz.

Miley: Jack, why don't you take a hike? This doesn't concern you.

Jack: What?

Miley: Go away, we need some privacy!

Jack: Oh, whatever. *goes to a duty free shop*

Miley: What do you think you're doing?!

*silence*

Miley: *to Luanne* Hello?!

Luanne: Oh, you were talking to me?

Miley: Well, duh! You are NOT Hannah Montana, give me that wig!

Luanne: No!

*Miley starts pulling the wig*

*Luanne puts her hands on her head to hold the wig down*

Miley: Guys, help me!

*Jake and Lilly start helping Miley pull off the wig*

*They manage to get the wig off*

Hannah Montana fan: *sees* Oh my god! Hannah Montana wears a wig!

Fan #2: Oh my god, that girl(Luanne) is the real Hannah Montana!

Miley: NO! This is an imposter!

Fan #3: Yeah, sure, whatever. *goes to Luanne* Can I have your autograph, Hannah?

Luanne: Uh, no! You're too ugly!

Cheerleader111
05-06-2007, 01:59 PM
that's sad. for the fan i mean. and hannah. the real hannah. ANYWAYZ more!!! :)

numba1puppyluva
05-06-2007, 03:03 PM
O Meh Gawd! MORE!!!!!!

miley rocks
05-06-2007, 03:09 PM
ooooooooooooooooooo that is badddddddddddddddd

Khockeygrl4
05-06-2007, 03:50 PM
more more more pleaz!!!!!

Lanae_M
05-06-2007, 06:32 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khockeygrl4
05-06-2007, 10:45 PM
c'mon i neeeeeeed more, jk, lol

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-07-2007, 08:01 PM
thanx!!

Chapter 43: Overheard

Fan #3: What?

Luanne: You heard me.

Fan #3: .....You'e not the real Hannah Montana

Luanne: Of course I am.

Miley: *thinking* It's better than my career going down the drain... *not thinking* No she's not, I'm Hannah Montana.

Fan #2: You two look exactly alike! How are we supposed to know who the real one is.

Miley: I can sing, she can't.

Fan #3: Let's hear ya.

Luanne: I don't feel like singing.

Fan #2: *to Luanne* Ok, so you're not Hannah. *to Miley* Now you.

Miley: *thinking* If I pretend to sing horrible, than they won't know my secret! *not thinking* Ok! *sings Make Some Noise*

Fan #2: OW!! Stop!! You're not Hannah Montan either!

Miley: *pretending* Awww, man! I never get to fool anyone!

*the crowd leaves*

Miley: Alright, Luanne. That's enough. You almost made me tell them I was Hannah! Just go home, give me that *snatches the Hannah Montana wig* and leave me alone.

Luanne: Hey, I flew all the way to Malibu for a date with Chuck and now you're sending me home?!

Miley: Who on earth is Chuck?

Luanne: That actor on Zombie High. The new guy.

Miley: That's Jack, anyway, you cannot date him.

Luanne: And why not?

Miley: Well, he's not really evil.

Luanne: Yes he is! He tried to break you and Lake up!

Miley: His name's Jake! He tried to break us up cause.... he was hypnotized!

Luanne: *believes her* I can never find an evil guy! It's not fair! I'm going home! *leaves*

Lilly: She sure is gullible.

Miley: Ya think?

Jack: *goes over to them* Oh my god! I overheard the whole thing!

Miley: What?! You did?! Even the part after everyone left?

Jack: Yes, I know you're Hannah Montana.



Please comment, everyone!

Khockeygrl4
05-07-2007, 08:06 PM
ahhhhh, it gets better every time!!!! more pleaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-07-2007, 09:59 PM
^^^ thanks! any more comments?

Cheerleader111
05-07-2007, 11:44 PM
more!!! its awesome!!!

Miley98
05-08-2007, 06:53 AM
J-jack knows? MORE!!!!

vanessa*anne
05-08-2007, 05:33 PM
it is really good! just read the wholle thing!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-08-2007, 07:11 PM
Chapter 44: I Like Having The Best Of Both Worlds

Miley: Uh.... but I can't sing!

Jack: Hmmm....good point...

Miley: *thinking* Whew!

Jack: Unless.... you pretended you can't sing so your secret wouldn't get revealed...

Miley: What?!

Jack: Yeah, this is all making sense to me now! Before, you thought I knew you were Hannah Montana so that's why you were gonna go out with me, until I told you when you were Hannah your secret which was not really your secret and then when you found out I didn't know your real secret, you didn't care anymore! AHA! I've figured it out!

Miley: No! No! No! You can't tell anyone!

Jack: Why not?

Miley: Cause then people won't treat me the same!

Jack: That's the point! They'll treat you like a more important person!

Miley: I don't care! I like having the best of both worlds!

Jack: Ooooohhhh! I get it now!

Miley: Whatever, just promise you won't tell anyone!

Jack: Fine, I promise.

Miley: Ok.

Jack: But -

Miley: No! You can't tell anyone!

Jack: But -

Miley: I don't care! Your lips are sealed!

Jack: Actually -

Miley: Zip it!

Jack: I understand! What I wanted to say was that....that....

Miley: That what?

Jack: I'm someone else too.

Miley: Who?

Jack: -------!


Sorry to leave ya hanging like that!

Cheerleader111
05-08-2007, 07:23 PM
omg! who?!!!! who is he?!!!!! lol its awesome! more!!!

Khockeygrl4
05-08-2007, 07:35 PM
more more more!!! who is he?!?!?!?!?!?!? ahhhhh, i cant stand it!!!!!!!!

numba1puppyluva
05-08-2007, 10:14 PM
Omg!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!

miley rocks
05-08-2007, 11:42 PM
more i wanna find out who is he

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-09-2007, 07:10 PM
kk, here you go!

Chapter 45: The Deal

Jack: *sigh* I'm Troy.

Miley: Troy McCanne(sp?)?!

Jack: No, Troy Botlton from High School Musical! Yes, Troy McCanne.

Jake: You say that a lot.

Miley: Oh my god, this is making so much sense to me now! That's why you hate Jake, cause after I broke up with you, I got back together with him and that's how you knew who Roxy was.....

Jack: OK, now you know, but you can't tell anyone either.

Miley: Only if you don't tell anyone my secret.

Jack: Deal.

Miley: Ok, let's go guys.

*They all leave the airport, but Jack goes a separate way*

Jack: *thinking* I can't believe they believed me. It's a good thing they did though, this way I'll be able to tell Miley's secret to the world, without them knowing it was me.... *evil laugh*

*Miley, Lilly and Jake got to the beach and they see Oliver there*

Oliver: *angry* Who told Popstar! about......you know.

Lilly: Jack, but it's ok, I told everyone that it was just a rumor and it's not true.

Oliver: Ok, good.

Miley: I still can't believe Jack knows my secret!

Oliver: What?

Miley: Yeah, Jack found out that I'm Hannah.

Jake: Yeah, but it's ok, cause he won't tell anyone cause he doesn't want you to tell everyone who he is.

Miley: Yeah, ok, I'll calm down. I may be overreacting.

*Little did Miley know that this was all a trick so Jack could tell everyone she's Hannah Montana...*


Comment, please! :57:

Khockeygrl4
05-09-2007, 07:59 PM
more more more!!!! i need 2 kno what happens!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-09-2007, 10:04 PM
^^^ kk, I'll post more as soon as I get a few more comments! :D

Cheerleader111
05-10-2007, 12:47 AM
more more more!!!! :)

Miley98
05-10-2007, 07:32 AM
tick tock tick tock. FEW MORE SECONDS IS OVER hehe LOL

Khockeygrl4
05-10-2007, 09:55 PM
pleaz post more!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-10-2007, 11:21 PM
kk, sorry guys, I've been busy with homework, I'll post it tomorrow! I promise!

Cheerleader111
05-10-2007, 11:24 PM
okey dokes!!! can't wait!!!

Miley98
05-11-2007, 06:54 AM
dont overwork your self!!! LOL

saha-agent-002
05-11-2007, 09:44 AM
moore

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-11-2007, 08:02 PM
kk, sorry about the wait, guys!

Chapter 46: Proof?

Oliver: Where's Jack right now?

Miley: I don't know.

Oliver: I hope he didn't lie, I mean, I still think he's evil....

Miley: People can change, Oliver.

Jake: But I don't think people like Jack do...

Miley: He won't tell anybody cause he doesn't want me to tell anybody who he is!

Jake: Yeah, but think about it Miley, if he was really Troy McCanne, he would've figured out you were Hannah Montana at the airport, cause he saw Roxy with you when you were Miley and he saw Roxy with you when you were Hannah.

Miley: Oh my god, you're right! We've got to find him and stop him!

*Jack is going to Popstar! magazine's office*

Editor: Mr. Ryman, what are you doing here?

Jack: I've got some news about Hannah Montana.

Editor: I'm afraid that we will not put any information you give us without proof, in our magazine since what you last told us was a BIG FAT LIE!

Jack: Yes but this isn't a lie! It's true!

Editor: What is it?

Jack: Hannah Montana is also this girl named Miley Stewart. When Miley Stewart is Hannah Montana, she puts on a blonde wig.

Editor: *bursts out laughing* Yeah, I'm sure that's true! *sarcastic*

Jack: It is!

Editor: Oh yeah? Do you have proof?

Jack: Technically, no but I do have a picture of Miley and a picture of Hannah in the same pose. *gives them to the editor* Don't they look like the same person?

Editor: That's what I thought!

Jack: *smirks* Yes! Hannah is Miley!

Editor: No, what I meant is that I thought you were a liar and now I know I'm right!

Jack: I'm not lying!

Editor: These girls aren't the same person! I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask you to leave.

Jack: But it's true!

Editor: Security!

Jack: No! You have to believe me!

Security guy: That's enough Mr. Ryman. *takes Jack outside*

Jack: Looks like I'll have to think of another plan to reveal Miley's secret.


Everyone, comment! :)

Khockeygrl4
05-11-2007, 09:22 PM
wats he gonna do?!?!?!?!?! more pleaz!!!

Cheerleader111
05-12-2007, 12:39 AM
more more more!!! lol it's awesome as usual.

miley rocks
05-12-2007, 12:31 PM
o no he didnt
wat a jerk

numba1puppyluva
05-12-2007, 03:08 PM
Oh Meh Gawd!!!!!! More!!!!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-12-2007, 07:38 PM
thanks! :D

Chapter 47: Revenge

Lilly: How are we gonna find Jack?

Miley: Let's see. If I wanted to tell the world something about a celebrity, where would I go?

Miley and Lilly: Popstar!

*Miley, Lilly, Jake and Oliver go to Popstar! magazine's office*

*When they get there they see Jack*

Jack: Oh... um... Miley, I was just trying to make sure that Popstar's not printing anything about you being Hannah Montana.

Miley: You can drop the act, you jerk, I know you're trying to tell the world my secret.

Jack: No I'm not.

Miley: Yes you are!

Jack: No I'm - *starts to laugh*

Miley: What was that?

Jack: Dang, do I always have to start laughing when I lie?!

Lilly: Same thing happens with me.

Miley: What are you possibly gonna gain if you tell the world you I am?

Jack: Revenge.

Miley: For what?

Jack: For you not going out with me.

Miley: Oh my god, you have GOT to get over that! You know what? Go ahead and tell people. You don't have any proof. They won't believe you.

Jack: Are you sure they won't believe you're Hannah Montana?

Miley: Yes, I'm sure.

Jack: Well, now I've got proof.

Miley: How?

Jack: *shows her a recorder he was hiding behind his back* With this. *plays the tape and the whole conversation is heard, with this in it*

Jack: Are you sure they won't believe you're Hannah Montana?

Miley: Yes, I'm sure.




Everyone comment!

Lanae_M
05-12-2007, 09:09 PM
More More!!!!!

miley rocks
05-12-2007, 09:43 PM
he should just shut up

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-12-2007, 10:09 PM
^^^ :lol: I think so too :lol:

Khockeygrl4
05-13-2007, 12:29 PM
more pretty pleaz?!?!?!?!? lol

Cheerleader111
05-13-2007, 01:51 PM
oh my god!!! more!! more!!!

hmfhannahmontanafan
05-13-2007, 04:39 PM
kk, here's more! :D

Chapter 48: Looking for the Recorder

Miley: Give me that!

Jack: No! It's the only proof I have!

Miley: I don't care! Yuo can't tell everyone who I am!

Jack: Oh yes I can! *runs off*

Miley: Awww, man, what are we gonna do now?!

Jake: Uh..... I've got it!

Miley: What?

Jake: Well chances are that Jack's gonna bring the tape with him to Zombie High tomorrow cause he wants to make sure no one takes it. I have a scene with him and you're not in that part, so while we're shooting that scene, sneak into his dressing room and get it!

Miley: I hope it works....

Lilly: It's got to...

Oliver: Or else...

Miley: Jack will tell the world who I am...

*next day at the Zombie High set*

*Jake and Hannah arrive*

Jack: Hey Jake. Hey... Miley.

Hannah: *pretending for the people around them* Who's this girl with such an interesting name?

Jack: Uh, y -

*Jake covers his mouth*

Director: Ok, Jack, Jake, get ready for the scene.

Jake: *whispers to Hannah* Good luck. *goes to film the scene*

Director: Action!

*Jake and Jack start acting*

*Hannah sneaks into Jack's dressing room when Jack's back was turned*

Hannah: Ok, now, where did Jack put that recorder?



You know what to do :P

Khockeygrl4
05-13-2007, 08:53 PM
check over in the corner, lol. more pleaz!!!!!!!!!

luv2act
05-13-2007, 09:00 PM
more!

miley rocks
05-13-2007, 11:10 PM
more

saha-agent-002
05-14-2007, 06:37 AM
more i tell u more