View Full Version : Unlove You [Fan fic; mature]
shopaholicoxxo
03-25-2007, 03:35 PM
This
Baby_Vanessa_Hudgens
03-25-2007, 03:40 PM
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shopaholicoxxo
03-25-2007, 03:44 PM
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ha, thanks. I MIGHT write one soon about the impact this had on Oliver and Miley.
But Lily is obviously not going to be in the next one :S
Baby_Vanessa_Hudgens
03-25-2007, 03:45 PM
ok, but i need MORE!!
Sk8er_Chick_Texas
03-25-2007, 03:49 PM
thats was great. i think i cried.
mileycyrusisluv
03-25-2007, 03:51 PM
thats was great. i think i cried.
me too, it is really good
xxmileyluverxx1234xx
03-25-2007, 04:03 PM
omg, i loved it, but it was really sad, even sader than LUVS_Smokin_Oken's how to save a life fanfic. it was sad.
Zanessa Fan1
03-25-2007, 04:06 PM
i cried its sooo good! im subscribing to this!
mileycyrusisluv
03-25-2007, 04:20 PM
i read it again, this time even closely, it was beatutiful. i don't really like the ong but it goes really well with your story
shopaholicoxxo
03-25-2007, 04:31 PM
i read it again, this time even closely, it was beatutiful. i don't really like the ong but it goes really well with your story
Thanks so much! it's not my favorite song either, but the lyrics go really well.
that's why i picked it. I actually write the fan fic before I picked a song, not the other way around.
MileyHannahFan
03-25-2007, 05:57 PM
i luv tat.
pentavalen
03-25-2007, 06:05 PM
Hey....
Anyone From Kl , Malaysia??
Come'on Lar Guys... Wanna Make Party Here
shopaholicoxxo
03-25-2007, 08:09 PM
Okay, so I've decided that I WILL make a sequel to this. It will be another song fan fic, and it will be Oliver's point of view. Now, help me decide which song! I have it narrowed down to three:
"A Way Back Into Love" - from the movie Music & Lyrics
"Let U Go" - Ashley Parker Angel
"I Need You" - Relient K
Listen to them all, and tell me which one you think I should use!
P.S. - I might use "I Need You" for Miley's point of view - not sure though.
Zanessa Fan1
03-25-2007, 08:18 PM
i think you should use another ashley song but thats just me
shopaholicoxxo
03-25-2007, 08:44 PM
i think you should use another ashley song but thats just me
I don't know what other song would really go though.
Zanessa Fan1
03-25-2007, 08:57 PM
well what r u planning on doing for the story?
niiro_tatsu
03-25-2007, 11:40 PM
its really good. maybe you should have lilly not die, if you wanna kill here, then kill her off later on. but i would have her just loose a lot of blood and have her in the hospitle and miley and oliver will see what they have done and try to dix it
beckylovestodance
03-26-2007, 12:33 AM
awww i'm 12 i don't know if i should have read that because i can get bothered by this kind of stuff badly, but this was really good. the ending is so sad though! aww now the next time I watch the show I'm gonna be like "lilly don't die don't die!" i know it's stupid but that's just the way i am. good jo though
shopaholicoxxo
03-26-2007, 07:45 AM
its really good. maybe you should have lilly not die, if you wanna kill here, then kill her off later on. but i would have her just loose a lot of blood and have her in the hospitle and miley and oliver will see what they have done and try to dix it
That is a really good idea. I should have done that.
It was originally going to be a one shot though, soo....
Too late now. haha.
shopaholicoxxo
03-26-2007, 07:56 AM
Oo, I just had a burst of inspiration! Lol
Maybe I can make it so lily doesn't die. I'll make so she thought she was dying, but really she just went unconcious. idk. I'll write 2 sequels, one where she's dead and one where she's not, and then I'll decide which one I like better. There. Now for songs ... Lol.
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-26-2007, 12:53 PM
OMG! It's REALLY good even though it's also REALLY sad, but it's well written and just...awesome!
mileycyrusisluv
03-26-2007, 07:31 PM
Okay, so I've decided that I WILL make a sequel to this. It will be another song fan fic, and it will be Oliver's point of view. Now, help me decide which song! I have it narrowed down to three:
"A Way Back Into Love" - from the movie Music & Lyrics
"Let U Go" - Ashley Parker Angel
"I Need You" - Relient K
Listen to them all, and tell me which one you think I should use!
P.S. - I might use "I Need You" for Miley's point of view - not sure though.
for miley's you should do don't talk by vanessa ann hudgens, that'd be cool
LUVS_Smokin_Oken
03-26-2007, 07:32 PM
Oh.My.God. I almost cried! Wow. That was absolutely positivley momst magnificently the best suicide fic I have ever read. It was soo sad, and really well-written. Great, great, great job. [It's Casey, right?]
LUVS_Smokin_Oken
03-26-2007, 07:32 PM
Mmmm, and i like Let U Go for the sequel. I can't wait! Be sure to tell me as soon as it's posted!
shopaholicoxxo
03-26-2007, 09:24 PM
Oh.My.God. I almost cried! Wow. That was absolutely positivley momst magnificently the best suicide fic I have ever read. It was soo sad, and really well-written. Great, great, great job. [It's Casey, right?]
Thanks sooooo soo soo muchhhh!!!!!
And yeah, it's Casey =)
flower1
03-26-2007, 09:31 PM
OMGGG! I almost cried! OMG...thats soo sad. OMG! :( :'( :'( :'(:'(
mileycyrusisluv
03-27-2007, 06:19 PM
like iht the don't talk the begginign and middle of the song is before and during the whole thing, then around the end of the middle ould be were lilly found out
shopaholicoxxo
03-27-2007, 07:06 PM
like iht the don't talk the begginign and middle of the song is before and during the whole thing, then around the end of the middle ould be were lilly found out
yeah the only thing is it's like "oh boy i wanna get to know you" and stuff. so idk.
for oliver's POV, i think i am going to use "we'll be together" be ashley tisdale.
look at this, it goes perfectly:
"I'm not alone
Even when we're apart I can feel you
In the air
I'm not afraid
I know what your thinking, I can hear you
Everywhere
Some people say it will never happen
And we're just wasting time
But good things come when they're least expected
So I don't really mind
We'll be together
Come whatever
I'm not just staring at the stars
Just remember
That no else can tell us who we are
We'll be together
So don't ever stop
Listening to your heart
Cause I can't turn mine off
I can't pretend
This is a rehersal for the real thing
Because it's not."
I think that's perfect.
flower1
03-27-2007, 07:18 PM
Whats the sequel gonna be about? I could think of a song.
SupaStaRrMiley92
03-27-2007, 07:24 PM
It's good.
shopaholicoxxo
03-28-2007, 08:21 PM
The sequel is done !!!!! =)
I hope you guys enjoy it!!!!!
CLICK HERE =) (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=784981#post784981)
cutie_girl
03-28-2007, 08:28 PM
i read this and the sequel. soooo good
shopaholicoxxo
03-28-2007, 08:46 PM
^ Thank you!
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