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crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 05:31 PM
the chapters will be pretty short at the beginging. Well I hope you like
BEST FRIENDS FOREVER?
Chapter 1
Victoria and Cameryn
Miley ,Lilly, and Oliver are standing outside the doors to a Victoria James concert. Miley is dressed as Hannah and Lilly is dressed as Lola. Oliver is wearing sunglasses and a hat.
Oliver- Miley I can’t believe you got us into this concert.
Lilly- Miley didn’t. (Nudges Oliver’s elbow). Hannah did.
Oliver- Riiiiiiight.
Miley and Lilly role their eyes.
Miley- Oh look there’s Vicki!
Vicki- Hey Hannah! Still blonde as ever I see! Vicki smiles.
Miley- Blonde and proud. Hey call me later.
Vicki nods as she and Hannah are surrounded by paparazzi.
Reporter- Miss James and Miss Montana are friends are they?
Miley- Always have been, always will be.
Reporter- But your styles of music are so different,
Vicki- That has no effect on friendship.
Vicki and Miley smile.
Reporter- Well, then who are these two kids.
Lilly- I’m Lola Luftnagle and this is…
Miley- Brandon Blake. My “posse”.
Lilly and Oliver glance at each other.
Vicki- Well, I’m sorry mister but we have to leave now.
Reporter- Just one more smile for the camera.
Lilly steps in front of him
Lilly- Listen BUSTER! They’re famous. You’re not. Go away.
The reporter reluctantly leaves.
Vicki- Thanks Lola. Well ta ta for now!
Later at Miley’s house.
Lilly- You and Victoria seem to be real good friends.
Miley- I’ve known her forever.
Lilly- You mean since you’ve been Hannah Montana…right?
Miley- Well… interrupted by Miley’s phone.
Miley- Hello?
Caller- Is this Miley?
Miley- Oh hey Cameryn!
Lilly- whispers Who’s Cameryn.
Miley- My Tennessee best friend!
Lilly- Oh…
ashes07
03-14-2007, 05:44 PM
more more more! lol!
ashes07
03-14-2007, 05:44 PM
people are really good at this! i ♥ reading these!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-14-2007, 05:49 PM
write more plz! also check my fan fic (link under banner!)
<333 Hannahmontanarulz55
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 05:50 PM
ok well i'm already working on the next two chapters. I'm trying to be different by not making love such an important role in the story.
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 06:00 PM
Chapter 2
Who's who?
Miley talks and talks and talks and well you get the picture. Finally…
Miley- Cameryn’s in town and is going to stay the night!!!! Call your mom to see if you can stay too!!
Lilly- Lemme see your phone.
Lilly’s mom give the OK.
Cameryn Arrives.
Cameryn- Hey Bella la Smiles!
Miley- Oh! We haven’t had slumber parties in forever!
Lilly- How long have ya’ll been without seeing each other?
Miley- Well um.. we haven’t exactly communicated with each other…
Cameryn- While we were ourselves. If you know what I mean, um yeah.
Lilly- Yeahh, sure, ok, no. I don’t.
Miley- Well that’s ok cause its kind of an “inside” thing.
Cameryn- I’m sure you and Miley have an inside thing too.
Lilly- More than you can think.
Cameryn glances at Miley. Miley nods.
Cameryn- You mean she knows??
Lilly- I know what?
Miley- Um. That I hate raspberries. Yeah. That’s it I hate raspberries.
Lilly- OK then.
Door bell rings and Cameryn opens the door to Oliver.
Cameryn- Have we met before? You look familiar.
Oliver- Same here. Anyways is Miley home?
Cameryn- Yeah she in her room. Are you her boyfriend?
Oliver- No way, jose!
Cameryn- You’re kinda cute.
Oliver- Ok then.
In Miley’s room.
Oliver whispers to miley.
Oliver- You’re friend said I’m cute.
Miley- She also thinks puppy dogs, kitty kats, tiny bottles of soda, and chick flicks are cute.
Oliver- Thanks Miley.
Miley- No problem.
Cameryn- Are you going to introduce me to him?
Miley- Cameryn this is…
Cameryn- He looks a lot like Brandon Blake.
ashes07
03-14-2007, 06:12 PM
awesome keep going !
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 06:13 PM
Chapter 3
Answers and Questions
Lilly stares at Cameryn mouth wide open. She comes to her senses and says
Lilly- Who? Where did you here of him?
Cameryn- At my Concert he was with Hannah Montana
Lilly- YOUR CONCERT?!?
Cameryn- Did I say that?
Oliver- Yeah ya did.
Cameryn- Miley? Help?
Miley- Well being from Tennessee isn’t the only thing we share in common.
Lilly- You mean she’s
Jackson walks into Miley’s room.
Jackson- I thought I heard your voice, Cameryn.
Cameryn- Yeah. So?
Jackson- I was wondering if you would…
Cameryn- No. Sorry but I’m takin.
Jackson- By who?
Cameryn- Um. Puts her arm around oliver. This here fella. Whispers What’s your name again?
Oliver- coughs oliver coughs
Lilly, Miley, and Jackson stare at Cameryn. Oliver blushes.
Jackson- You and Dorkwad? Now there are no more suprises in this world.
Shakes his head as he leaves the room.
Cameryn- Thanks, sliver.
Oliver- Its Oliver.
Cameryn- whatever.
Miley- I can’t believe you told him that. HE’s so stupid he believed you.
Lilly- Well Jackson’s definitely wrong about one thing. There is another surprise in this world. Oliver brace yourself.
Oliver- Yes sir, I mean ma’am. Salutes Lilly.
Miley + Cameryn- Victoria James just put her arm around you.
Oliver- What?!? Where is she?
Cameryn- Right here lover boy.
Oliver- Are you serious? Am I being PUNKED?
Miley- erm, no.
Cameryn- Wait a minute, how did YOU know who Hannah was talking too?
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 06:13 PM
sorry that one was so short.
mileyrocks19
03-14-2007, 06:31 PM
OMG...that is an awesome Fanfiction...post more!
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 06:37 PM
Chapter 4
Jokes and Pizza
another short chapter
Oliver- I have my moments too ya know!
Cameryn- Yeah ok. Like I believe that!
Miley- Well, Cam. Meet Brandon and Lola!
Cameryn- Your Brandon and Lola?? Ya’ll make such a cute couple.
Lilly- We’re not a couple.
Cameryn- Oh. Too bad.
Miley- Anyone for pizza?
Oliver- Can’t sorry to disappoint cha babe!
Cameryn- sarcastically oh I’m soo sad.
Oliver- YA should be.
Miley- not.
Oliver- I’ll remember that Missy!
Miley- Its Miley!
Oliver- very funny!
Miley- I know!
Oliver leaves.
Lilly- picks up a slice of pepperoni. I can’t believe you thought we were a couple. Takes a bite.
Cameryn- Well sorry.
Miley- Ya’ll would make a cute couple Lilly.
Lilly- Miley I’m eating. Save the grotesque details for later.
Cameryn- Fine then. If he’s not taken I’ll go for him.
Lilly thinks to herself. How am I supposed to compete with that? Miley’s Tennessee “bestie” beats me at everything.
Lilly- Well I’m ready to hit the hay!
Cameryn- I’m so tired I could wear last month’s shoes and not even care.
Miley- gasps .Cam!
Cameryn- I know!
In their sleeping bags.
Lilly- Cameryn since you and miley are so close I’m going to take a chance and say that you already know she’s Hannah Montana, right?
Cameryn- You’re HANNAH MONTANA?
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 06:39 PM
PM me for inside information
~Miley~Rox~
03-14-2007, 07:35 PM
omg so ttly good
crazy_in_a_good_way
03-14-2007, 09:56 PM
few more comments please
mileysfan01
03-14-2007, 11:35 PM
omg omg omg omg omg omg !!!!what happens next i wanna know! post what happens! plz plz plz
laurahe1
03-15-2007, 05:34 PM
more!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-15-2007, 05:37 PM
write more plz!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-15-2007, 05:39 PM
omg...i cant believe she didnt know she was hannah montana!
mileysfan01
03-15-2007, 10:03 PM
post more plz!
crazy_in_a_good_way
05-30-2007, 11:44 PM
Chapter 5
The Truth
Lilly- Oh Lord! Miley I thought she knew!
Miley- Chillax Lil, she knows. She’s kidding.
Lilly- sticks her tongue out at Cameryn.
Cameryn- Yeah just “joshin”
Lilly- not funny.
Miley- You’ve always wanted to tell someone Lilly! Why stop now?
Lilly- Well, I’ve grown on being the only one besides well, like ,Oliver.
Lilly eyes Cameryn.
Lilly- I just didn’t want to be at fault for spilling the beans.
Cameryn- Don’t worry Lilly the “beans” have not been spilt.
Miley- Yeah, she was there when I first became Hannah Montana. She gave me her consent and became teen country/pop sensation Victoria “Vicky” James.
Lilly- Oh, well then ok.
Robbie Ray- Good Night girls.
Lilly- I still can’t believe you never told me Miles.
Miley- Well, there wouldn’t have been any reason for you two to meet that I decided to wait.
Robbie Ray- GOOD NIGHT GIRLS!
C.M,L- GOOD NIGHT ROBBIE RAY!
Robbie Ray- That’s mister Robbie ray to ya’ll.
Cameryn- Whatever, Robbie ray.
Robbie Ray- I heard that
crazy_in_a_good_way
05-30-2007, 11:45 PM
very short chapter not much point just explains a few things
luv2act
05-30-2007, 11:54 PM
more! luve it!
hannah_montana.boston
05-31-2007, 04:57 PM
moree
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