Jake the cheater fanfiction

[vanessa*anne]

This is not very good at all but still
Chapter 1
Lilly: Umm Miley did you watch celeb gossip last night?
Miley: No, my dad made me clean up the garage because I used my credit card way too much.
Lilly: Ouch.
Miley : Why are you asking?
Lilly : Umm.. its nothing
Lilly tries to hide she is lying but makes this face
Miley : Lilly I know that face. You are lying
Just then the bell rang
Lilly goes off without saying goodbye. Miley wonders what is up.


After school Miley, Lilly and Oliver were at the beach.
Oliver: Look over there, older babe checking me out.
Amber and ashley hear and say together : In your dreams loser. Ohhh... tiss.
Miley: Look there is Jhonny over there flirting over there with another girl.
Amber: What? She isn't anywhere near as pretty as me.
They went away.

Miley: Remember we are going to the mall tomorrow?
Lilly: Yeah I want to get a slamming outfit for the next celeb party.
Oliver: Why does she get to go to all the celeb parties unfair.
Miley: Look my dad is over there. I have to go.

The next day Miley woke up and got ready to go to the mall. Miley always bought a magazine, celeb insider.
Miley: Hey Lilly can we go to the newsagent? i want to buy a magazine
Miley was looking at all the shelves and picked it up. When she saw it her heart was torn in two.
In the magazine it had...

[HannahMontanaX3]

Mmmmmorrreee

[SmileyMiley11]

Good Fanfic!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

it's awesome! more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

will u plz write more...its good

[vanessa*anne]

Contuned from Chapter 1

Jake in it with an interview about his new girlfriend.
Chapter 2

Miley was just standing there. She felt like her heart had been torn into two. She was reading it in there and in the interview it said,
celeb insider: So jake do you think this is true love
Jake: yes, she is the best thing that has ever happened to me
celeb insider: what about your malibu girlfriend: she doesn't mater anymore
The interview was longer but she didn't have to read anymore to know that jake was cheating on her.
Around it were pictures of him and his new girlfriend kissing and on a date.
Store Keeper: Well are you just going to stand around or buy the magazine.
Lilly took it out of her hands, gave the store keeper the money.
Lilly: Come on Miley, lets go!
Miley just ran off and called dad on her cell.
Miley (while crying): Dad, I , I want to go home
Mileys dad came as fast as he could.
When she got home she locked herself inside hannah montanas closet and sobbed.
Robby Ray: Miles, do you want to talk about it?
Miley: NO!
There was a knock on the door.
Oliver: Hey its oliver, is miley ok?
Robby: She is up in hannahs closet, maybe you should talk to her
He goes upstairs and knocks on hannahs closet and Miley opens it.
Miley gave oliver a big hug, still crying.
Oliver: Miley..... I am so sorry. You deserve so much better.
Miley: Who is better than Jake Ryan?
Oliver: Someone that won't lie to you, someone that won't hurt you.
Miley: Like who?
Oliver:...

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[cupcake]

I Know!i Know!!!
Him!

[laurahe1]

more!

[xxmileyluverxx1234xx]

good, but a few thngs, in the first chappie, it said waht was on the news, next time dont tell,

[vanessa*anne]

Oh ok. I won't
Chapter 3
Oliver: Maybe..
He stubles a little, he felt really nevous telling her about his feelings
Miley: Yes?
Oliver: Someone like me
Miley started to feel so confused. She had nothing to say
Miley just kept crying. Oliver went over to her and have her a hug. She looked up. She kept thinking, do I like him? Do I really? He has always been there for me unlike Jake
Oliver gave her a kiss on the cheek
Oliver: Bye Miley. I will see you tomorrow
Miley went out of Hannahs closet and went on her bed. The phone rang.
She picked up and it was Lilly.
Miley: Hey lilly
Lilly: are you ok? that jake ryan won't be alive once I deal with him
Miley: Well Oliver came over
Lilly: Whats so special about that? he does it like everyday
Miley: But he said something to me
Lilly: What???
Miley: He said that he loved me.
Lilly: OMG! really?
Miley: yes and i think i like him back
lilly: what????
Wait a minute other line
Jake: Hey Miley its jake
Miley: oh.
jake: are we still on for our date when i come back in 2 days?
miley: why would i you lying backstabbing jerk
she hang up
lilly: who was it?
miley: jake. he wants me back.
lilly: reject him! hes such
miley: an ego maniac
lilly: yep
miley: anyway i gtg

The next day Miley woke up. She knew oliver was coming over. The truth was she liked him, he was always there for her.
She put on makeup and then the door bell rang.
Oliver: Hi Miley
Miley: Hey Oliver *dreamily*
Oliver: I'm sorry if I freaked you out by what I said yesterday
Miley: No of course not. Truth is that...
Oliver: What? Are you still confused
Miley:....

What is she going to say? request and find out in the next part.

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

it's awesome!

[vanessa*anne]

Chapter 4Miley: No
She leans over and starts kissing him. Jake was outside and walked inside without knocking. Miley sees Jake.
Miley (whispering): Oliver its Jake.
Jake: Miley I'm...
Miley: Oh yeah I know what you are going to say. I'm sorry, I'm a good person. Bla Bla bla. Jake I don't believe it anymore. You cheated on me and..
Jake leans over trying to kiss her but then Oliver punches him.
Jake: Ow what was that for oken? and why are you kissing my girlfriend?
Oliver: YOU BROKE MILEYS HEART AND YOU THINK YOU ARE GOING TO GET TOGETHER? YOU ARE WRONG. MILEY DESERVES SO MUCH BETTER THAN YOU. DO YOU THINK EVERYONE LOVES YOU BECAUSE YOU ARE A CELEBRITY? YOU ARE SO WRONG YOU LIED TO HER, YOU CHEATED ON HER. GO JAKE! GO RIGHT NOW! SHE DOESN'T WANT YOU HERE. GUESS WHAT? YOU BLEW YOUR CHANCE AND NOW MILEY HATES YOU! YOUR GIRLFRIEND? YEAH RIGHT!
Jake: But miley I still love you, you mean the world to me
Miley: Oh sure you do. What about this? *points to magazine* Go off with your new girlfriend.
Jake: Miley
Miley: GO NOW!
Jake: I still lov...
Miley: Face it. You blew it. Game over. No more chance for you.
Jake leaves sadly. He knew he blew it big time.
Robby: Hey bud. The hannah phone just rang. It is jake ryan.
Miley: WHAT?!
Jake: Hey Hannah
Miley (pretending to me hannah): hey jake. why are you ringing me?
jake: well i was wondering if you would go out with me
hannah: what about your girlfriend? the one you were talking about on zombie high?
jake: her? she broke up with me. so hannah, wanna date me. we would be the cutest celeb couple.
hannah:....

what is she going to say to him? find out in the next chapter.

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

continues to be even more awesome!

[vanessa*anne]

Chapter 5
Hannah: because I have a boyfriend
Jake: I'll believe it when I see it
Hannah: What? think it is so hard for me to get a bf?
Jake: No, I've just never seen him before.
Hannah: GOODBYE JAKE!

Oliver: Wait, Hannah has a bf?
Miley: She does now
Miley goes through her wardrobe and finds what she was looking for.
Miley: Here is my old Hannah wig.
Oliver: Umm.. what are you going to do with that?
Miley: You'll see!
She starts cutting the wig and turns it into a boys hairstyle and puts it on olivers head.
Miley: There are perfect fit!
Oliver: Wow. I still look smoken in this wig
Miley starts to laugh
Miley: Think of some name
Oliver: umm... blake walter
Miley: Hmm.. that could work
Miley: You are coming with me to the Hannah concert.
Oliver: Why?
Miley: I have a special surprise

Reporter: Here I am on the red carpet at Hannah montana concerts and here comes Jake Ryan! Hello Jake
Jake: Hello. I am so looking forward to the concert tonight.
Reporter: Look! Here comes Hannah Montana! And who is this with her? Hi Hannah!
Hannah: Hi.
Reporter: Who is this with you tonight?
Hannah: This is my boyfriend, blake walter.
Everyone starts to take pictures of Hannah and her new bf. Then they walk inside to start the concert
Hannah: How is everyone? Are you ready to rock tonight?
Crowd: Yes!
Hannah: and there is a special surprise for you all! a brand new song! here it is. it is called more than best friends. i deticate it to blake walter. i love you blake!

We have always been best friends
I've known everything about you
You knew everything about me

I never thought you were the one
You were always there but I didn't see
Now I know that you're the one
And here comes the chourous of the song

More than best friends
I love you, do you love me?
More than best friends
Yeah yeah more than best friends

Crowd: WHOOOO!!!! we love you hannah
Hannah: I love you all!

Blake: That was fantastic.
Hannah: Glad you thought so.
Blake gave her a kiss on the check

Jake: So..

What is he going to say? Find out in the next part

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

great great!!! more!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

you do have a boyfriend
Chapter 6

Hannah: Is that so hard to believe
Jake: He isn't even as cute as me.
Hannah: Goodbye Jake.
Jake: Come on Hannah'
Blake: JAKE GO NOW!
Jake: Wow, take a chill pill. jeez
He leaves and then oliver and miley go into hannahs dressing room and rip of their wigs.
Miley: Jake is so annoying
Oliver: Tell me about it.
Robby ray: Hey darling. Put your wig back on we need to go into the limo.
She listens to her dad and they drive back to Mileys house.
Miley: Bye Oliver
Oliver: Bye Miley. See you at school tomorrow
He kisses her on her forehead and whispers
Oliver: I love you miley

Tomorrow was school and everyone was looking forward to the dance.
(mob of girls) Jake: Calm down calm down ladies. You know the rules. Belinda you were with me this morning.
Lilly: Grrrr hes dead once I get a piece of him
Miley: Lilly don't.
Lilly: He has some nerve
Jake: Hey Miley
Miley: Jake what do you want.
Jake: I was just wondering, do you want to go to the dance with me.
Lilly: N-O she doesn't. what does that spell? no!
Jake: Why?
Miley: Look. You are still the obnoious freak I thought you were to start with. I wish I never kissed you!
Jake: Come on Miley
Miley:....

What is she going to do? Find out in the next part

[crazy_in_a_good_way]

ooh please write more

[vanessa*anne]

Thanks. One more comment and I will put the next part up.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

you have to write more! this is getting soooo good!

[vanessa*anne]

Miley: I ALREADY SAID KNOW YOU LYING BACKSTABBING JERK!
Oliver: Hey don't you get the idea. Miley ain't interested.
Lilly: Do you want a piece of me?
Jake: Fine, but you'll be jealous when I will be kissing Hannah on zombie high!
Miley: Trying to make me jealous by saying he will be kissing Hannah Montana.
Lilly: Miley...
Miley: Wait, I am hannah montana
Jake: What did you say?
Miley: I said that I am a hannah montana fan
Miley: Bye Jake
Lilly: Phew that was close
On the beach that afternoon

Miley: Lilly, Oliver! Come here
Oliver: What is it?
Lilly: OMG! the script to zombie high let me look at it.
Oliver sees where she has to kiss him for 30 seconds and starts to frown
Oliver: Why does he have to kiss you?
Miley: Don't worry oliver, no matter what I do, I am not kissing him! There is only one person I want to kiss....
Oliver: Who?
Miley: Oliver you are so clueless
Miley kisses Oliver
Lilly: I am still not quite used to that

At her house
Robby Ray: Darling the phone is ringing.
She picks it up.
Jake: Hi Hannah. Can't wait for our kiss on zombie high. Hope you wear strawberry lipgloss, its my favourite.
Hannah: Hi Jake. I'm sorry but I'm not kissing you
Jake: What? Why?
Hannah: I saw the celeb insder magazine, you cheated on your malibu girlfriend. that could have broken her heart.
jake: Who cares about her, it is about us.
hannah:....
Request for more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

please write more!

[vanessa*anne]

I have to go now. I will write some more later. Sorry.

[vanessa*anne]

hannah: no! ok jake? there is only one guy i want to kiss
jake: who is cuter than me
hannah: ol.... i mean blake
jake: where you about to say oliver?
hannah: bye jake

Miley: Lilly he won't give up
Lilly: Hmmm....
Miley: I know that face.
Lilly: I think that I have an idea
(whispers into mileys ear the "idea")
miley: that will never work
lilly: what? telling jake your secret would be...
miley: horrible! i can't tell him my secret.

the phone rings and miley picks up
oliver: hi miley
miley: hi oliver
oliver: ummm.. i was just wondering
miley: what? you can tell me
oliver: i was wondering if you would like to go out with me like you know, on a date
miley: of course oli.
oliver: ok. i will pick you up at 6.00 today
she hangs up the phone
miley: i'm going on a date with oliver. what? It is 4.00 now? I need to get ready
Miley and Lilly go thorugh mileys and hannahs wardrobe and pick out an awsome outfit for miley to wear with jewrelly.
miley: ok i am ready
lilly: omg. that outfit you are wearing is so cute!
miley: I know. I think that is oliver. thanks so much lilly.
together: hugs?
*gives her a hug*

opens the door.
oliver: hey miley you look gorgous. these are for you
miley opens up the present and sees...
what is it? find out in the next chapter.

[flower1]

Please! More!!!!!!!!!!! I"m Dieeeeiiinngg!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: omg oliver this is so sweet.

she took the ring out of the package.

it said miley i love you on it. then she saw under it a heart shaped locket and she opened it and it had a photo of them together on it. on the back it said miley & oliver 4ever

miley: this is the sweetest gift anyone has ever given me.
oliver: can i put them on?
oliver puts the ring on mileys finger and put the necklace on as well.
miley leans in and gives oliver a kiss. for miley it was the most wonderful feeling ever. was oliver the one for her? she was starting to think so.
miley: i guess we better get going. jackson could be up in his room right now spying.
they both start to giggle
oliver: yep. thats jackson

oliver: shut your eyes, i want this to be a suprise
miley obeys him and shuts her eyes. oliver leads her over to his house.
miley: oliver, you are the best
oliver blushes.
miley opens her eyes and sees...
request to find out what she sees

[vanessa*anne]

Sorry it is so short

[flower1]

I dont care if its short! Its fantastical!

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write more!!!!!!!!!! I love it!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg! if u DONT write more...ill die with suspence! oliver is sooooo sweet (and hot!) lol

[vanessa*anne]

a room covered in flowers and a 2 seater table in the center with a candle in the middle.
miley: wow oliver, you did all of this? this is so romantic
oliver: no.. mum helped
miley: you are the sweetest.
oliver pulls out mileys chair. she sits down.
oliver: you wait, i will bring out the dinner soon.
oliver comes in with chinese
miley: oliver chinese is my favourite. thank you so much. how can i repay you?
oliver: i think you know how.
miley kisses him.
miley: oliver
oliver: yes?
miley: i love you
oliver: me too
he goes over and turns on the stereo.
oliver: want to dance?
miley gets up and starts dancing with oliver. the song finishes
oliver: miley will you go to the school dance with me?
miley: of course i will
oliver kisses her again
miley: wait, what is that noise
oliver: i think someone is climbing through the window
miley: do you know who?
oliver: i knew i should have closed that window.
oliver: i think i know.... he better be ready for a lot of pain
who is it? find out in the next chapter.

[flower1]

Uh-oh! Someones breaking in!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

is it JAKE????? PLZ WRITE MORE!

[flower1]

Yup, i'm sure its Jake!!!!!!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: wait? its a she?
oliver: becca? what are you doing here
becca: oliver... i still like you
oliver: i'm sorry, i love miley now and...
becca: but jake said that miley is his girlfriend
miley: i am not his girlfriend well i was...
oliver: becca.... please go now. sorry but i'm not interested
becca leaves upset. she really liked oliver. she felt heartbroken
miley: i thought it was going to be jake
oliver: so did i. becca and i broke up ages ago, i thought she was over me.
Miley spend the rest of the night with oliver. At 10.00 she looked at her watch
Miley: sorry, i have curfe at 10.00. im going to be late. bye oliver. i'll see you tomorrow
oliver: bye miley

the phone rang
miley: hey
lilly: hey its lilly. i have something to tell you...
miley: what?
lilly: well i have a boyfriend
miley: who? please tell me
lilly: he is cute, funny sensetive
miley: just hurry up and tell me lilly
lilly: its....

[hannahmontanarulz55]

JAKE RYAN! please write more!

[vanessa*anne]

1 or 2 more comments and i will write more! thanks heaps. it isn't that good, a bit predicatable.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

1 or 2 more comments and i will write more! thanks heaps. it isn't that good, a bit predicatable.


thats ok...ppl acually read your fan fic...ppl don't read mine...so im probably going to finish it up in like the next chapter or somethin

[flower1]

Jake!!!!!! Its Jake!!!! Aaaagghhh! She Cant!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

you guys are right
lilly: its jake
miley: oh...
lilly: are you sure it is ok with you if i date him?
miley: of course.. i guess but what if he does the same thing to you that he did to me?
lilly: nah he won't. so are you positive that it's ok?
miley: yep sure. fine with me.
lilly: thanks heaps miley. bye
miley: bye

at school tomorrow
miley: hey lilly, oh hi jake
jake: have you heard? me and lilly are together now?
miley: yep. you guys make a beautiful couple.
jake: anyway, lilly will you go to the school dance with me?
lilly: yea of couse jake
jake kisses lilly
lilly: omg miley that was the best
miley: what are we going to wear?
lilly: to the mall
lilly and miley got slamming new outfits
lilly: bye lilly! ill see you tomorrow.
then someone knocks on the door. miley opens it.
jake: hey miley. have you seen lilly and me together?
miley: yep you two seem happy.
jake: come on aren't you jealous?
miley: no, not at all
jake: you look great today
miley: OMG ARE YOU FLIRTING WITH ME!
jake: come on, kiss me
miley: ewwww no
jake grabs onto miley.
miley:no. help someone!
jake: too bad. your little oliver isn't here to help you and anway, once you kiss me you will forget about dating that loser.
oliver: get away from her!
jake: like you are going to stop me.
miley screams.
oliver gets really really angry and punches him.
jake: oken you are going to pay! miley loves me not you
miley: no! i love you oliver!
oliver: stop! don't you relise that you are cheating on lilly?
jake: lilly? I don't care about her. i just wanted to make miley jealous
miley:....
what is she going to say? find out in the next chapter

[DrakeBellAndMiley#1fan]

oh that sounds awsome u have to write more

[flower1]

That animal!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

write more...poor lilly, and poor miley...jake that stalker! i knew he was trouble since the beginning! lol, jk...alsome fan fic...cant wait till the next chapter

[DrakeBellAndMiley#1fan]

yea it sounds awsome cant wait for more

[flower1]

Oh yeah, hes a stalker! He could pull something....he should be arrested! :'(

[sophiecool]

STALKER SOMEONE CALL 911!!!!! Dang. Good fanfiction. I actually hate Jake right now.

[DrakeBellAndMiley#1fan]

lol ^

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!! I want to know what will happen!

[flower1]

sophiecool's rght! CALL 911!!! THERES A STALKER! CALL 911! HES ATTCAKING!

[sophiecool]

Lolz. yeah.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

while we are waiting for the next section....will someone plz rate my siggy pic? i just made it like 1 hour ago...i just want to know how good it is...thanx

[Hannah_Montanafan]

I give it 10/10 what about mine?

[hannahmontanarulz55]

I give it 10/10 what about mine?

thanx and i like yours too 10/10!

[flower1]

Yours is way cool!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Yours is way cool!

thanx

[vanessa*anne]

miley: you are such a jerk! cheating on me and then using lilly just to make me jealous. how is that going to make her feel? i hate you! give it up already
jake: come on, you know you want me
oliver: come on miley lets go.
miley: jake is like..
oliver: a stalker? (thanks for the idea guys)
miley: yea and imagine how lilly is gonna feel when she finds out
oliver: are you going to tell her?
miley: i am not sure. i don't want to hurt her feelings but...
oliver: she might get angry and think that you are lying
miley: exactly. she did get angry before
oliver: grrr i hate jake
miley: i want him to leave me alone
oliver: he should just face it that you are over him

robby ray: how are things darling?
miley: horrible oh and i am dropping out of the zombie high episode
robby ray: why?
miley: jake
robby ray: ok darling.

Lilly: Landing in 5,4,3,2
Miley: 1 and opens the door
Lilly: How is things?
Miley: bad
lilly: why?
miley: lilly you know how we promised to tell each other everything
lilly: yes
miley: i have to tell you something
lilly: what?
miley: jake is using you!
lilly: .....

[flower1]

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT she said! *gasp* *faints dead away*

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: haha thats funny miley
oliver: no seriously, he is using you to make miley jealous
lilly: yea right. you just want me to break up with him. some friend you are. jake likes me and l like him. he would never cheat on me.
miley: why do you think that he asked you to the dance right in front of me
lilly: i don't know, he felt like it
oliver: and before he was trying to kiss miley
lilly: jake kissed you?
Miley: no... oliver stopped him
lilly: well i don't believe you. bye
she stomps out of the house angry
miley: i had a feeling she would do this
oliver: so did i
miley: i can't believe this. she is going to be really upset when she finds out
oliver: you tried to tell her.
miley: i know, that jake
oliver: he is gonna pay.
miley: i have a hannah party tonight and jake is gonna be there
oliver: don't worry bout it miles he is gonna stay away from you and that is final
miley: how is that gonna happen?
oliver: i am coming
miley: are you sure
oliver: it will be fun. spending anytime with you is fun
miley: aww that is so sweet.
jake: hey miley
miley: bye jake
jake: come on.... you like me
miley: umm no i don't
jake: thundermint
lilly: miley i'm
jake doesn't notice she is there and tries to kiss miley
miley: get away from me. you stalker. i hate you.. seriously, if you were older i would tell the police
lilly:......

[HannahMontanaX3]

MORE OMG MORE! wow your making me hate jake. like tottaly hate jake. I am having second thoughts about jailey. I am doubting Jake and Miley 4ever now.

[vanessa*anne]

haha. im making him evil, i don't like him that much anway. he isn't this evil really.

lilly: so miley was right. can't believe it. im such an idiot. i listened to you!
miley: lilly.... jake look what you have done. sure you may be cute and mr celebrity but you can't treat people like this
oliver: jake go.
lilly: miley i am so sorry
miley: it isn't your fault. i know you are heartbroken.
lilly: i thought that he liked me....
miley: he can't be loyal to anyone, that is the way it is.
lilly: i was such a jerk getting angry at you
miley: love can make us do wierd things. lets just forget about him
oliver: now for some good news
lilly: what?
miley: me and oliver are offically together
lily: omg that is so awsome!
miley: look at what he gave me. *shows her the ring*
lilly: omg that is so cool!
miley: anway, we better all get ready.
lilly and oliver: what for?
miley: the huge birthday bash for ashley tisdale tonight!
lilly: im going to ashley tisdales birthday, im going to ashley tisdales birthday party!
miley: lilly, calm down.
lilly: wait, oliver?
miley: haven't you heard or hannah and blake.
lilly: no... whos blake?
miley: oliver!

after they get ready they all go in the limo and get out on the red carpet.
reporter: look its hannah montana, her new boyfriend and lola. hello hannah.
hannah: hi. its so cool to be here
reporter: so how are things going with you and blake?
blake: great. we are offically together!
reporter: wow! this is great news.
paparazzi: hey hannah and blake, can we get some shots over here
repoter: so lola, got any buzz on hannah and her new bf.
lola: they said they are totally in love.
reporter: wow!
hannah: hey lola. we are going to go inside now. coming?
lola: of course!

they all went inside. after a bit of dancing someone pulls hannah into a corner.
someone pulls hannahs ring off.
hannah: wait, who took my ring.
person who took ring: miley and oliver? i know them
hannah: who are you?

[HannahMontanaX3]

AHHH MORE PLEASE! Yeah I am and offical Moliver fan anyway.

[vanessa*anne]

hannah: who are you
lola: *whispers* miley its amber
hannah: oh no. give me back my ring
amber: why should i hey ashley come over here and look at hannahs ring
ashley: oliver and miley together forever. wait
amber and ashley: miley is hannah montana! lola is lilly! blake is oliver! ohhh......tsssss
amber: lets go tell everybody
hannah: no!! you can't
ashley: why not? oh and miley, what we said about you being a loser before. didn't mean. you are the coolest
amber: and you are at the top of the cool list.
blake: how did you get into a celeb party anyway.
amber and ashley: bod, bank of dad duhhh
hannah: oh no... the secret that made my life complete is now out.
lola: i'll never just be lilly again
hannah: and i will never just be miley.
blake: don't worry. this doesn't make me still not love you. *takes the ring out of amber and ashleys hands and puts it on hannah*
hannah: ol.. i mean blake, what are we going to do.
lola: everyone is going to know.
amber: wait, we might not tell if.....
hannah: if what?
ashley: we need to have a little meeting
hannah: hope they hurry up
amber and ashley: we won't tell if............

[HannahMontanaX3]

MORE! OMG MORE! so good.

[vanessa*anne]

1 or 2 more comments and i will. i still need to think of what i am going to write for it. i don't have many good ideas.

[HannahMontanaX3]

okay. well I will work on m siggy. I am cutting an image for it and it is SUPER HARD!

[HannahMontanaX3]

Ill PM you my idea

[Hannah_Montanafan]

MORE!!!!!!!!! I want to know what they want. I bet they want to sing with her or get a singing contract or something like that. MORE!!!!!!!!!

[miley rocks]

omg please keep wrighting i luv it

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg...plz write more!

[HannahMontanaX3]

MORE!!!!!!!!! I want to know what they want. I bet they want to sing with her or get a singing contract or something like that. MORE!!!!!!!!!

Yeah I like the idea of them singing with her. I mean cause singing with the stars got messed up for amber and Hannah cause of the trap. Although miley could have used common sense about entering WITH amber through the red arch

[vanessa*anne]

amber and ashley: we want to hang out with hannah for a while and then you get us acting jobs and we'll become superstars!
hannah: what!
amber: ashley have you got your phone out ready to text everyone the news.
hannah: ok ok fine.
amber and ashley: yay! ohhh tisssss!
hannah: but here are my rules
you can't hang out with me as much as lola and blake and you have to stop that hand thing.
amber and ashley: hey best friend.
hannah: Umm..... not that close
ashley: whoops sorry
after the party amber and ashley go home and lilly and miley and oliver go back to mileys house
miley: omg they are so annoying
lilly: I know but we can't have them telling everyone your secret.
miley: i know.... they might make it harder for me to spend as much time with you guys
oliver: don't worry once you get them acting jobs it will be fine.
miley: not that easy really
oliver turns on the tv
oliver: hey look miley its us.
miley: ahhh we are the couple of the moment
oliver: great cause you know i am crazy about you
*they kiss*
amber and ashley: hey miley
miley: what are they doing here
amber and ashley:...........

[HannahMontanaX3]

more! this is exelent

[hannahmontanarulz55]

write more, plz! also i just added another chapter to my fan fic, for ppl that read it!

[vanessa*anne]

amber and ashley: why wouldn'twe be here? we are your friends now. did you find us acting jobs yet?
miley: no.... i am going to ring up zombie high about it though
amber and ashley: zombie high! pick up the phone and ring now! ohh tssss...
Hannah: hey its hannah montana
zombie high produceer: oh hi hannah. sorry that you had to drop out
hannah: you know that i have these two awsome actress' here and they really want to go on zombie high
zombie high: really? what are their names?
hannah: amber and ashley
zombie high prouducer: get them to come to the set tomorrow at 10.00am

miley: amber, ashley you have to go to the zombie high set at 10.00am tomorrow, i think i landed you jobs.
lilly: hey miley, do you think they will get more famous than you
miley: nah. come on. its amber and ashley. i just want them to go away

miley: everythang is going good.. nothing is going to ruin now
robby ray: darling, i have some news to tell you
miley: what?
robby ray: you know mrs ryan
miley: yes.... she is annoying jakes mum
robby ray: you know how his parents got divorced about a bit ago
miley: yeah.. what about it
robby ray: i am dating jake ryans mum
mileys mouth dropped right open
miley: dad how could you!

[HannahMontanaX3]

AHH more

[numba1puppyluva]

Oh MY GAWD! That is THE best fanfiction EVER!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

holy crap! write more now! i cant believe he would do that to his daughter! i need to know what happeneds!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: have you got any idea what jake has been doing to me, i can't be his stepsister, can't even think of that. he has been trying to kiss me when i said no! he has pretty much been stalking me and you didn't tell me you were dating his mum.
miley ran upstairs. and locks herself in hannahs closet again.
she dials a three way call
miley: hey oliver and lilly.
lilly: hey miley
oliver: hey miley
miley: do you know what my dad just did
oliver: what?
miley: he told me he is dating mrs ryan
lilly: oh no. not who i think it is.
miley: it is. i don't know what to do.
oliver: i think there is only one thing you can do
miley: what?
lilly: oh no she can't.
oliver: ask your brother for help.
miley: i guess i have too.. he has to think of some way to break them up with his evil twisted mind.
hangs up
miley: jackson, i need to ask you to do something for me
jackson: NO!!!!!! i am not driving you somewhere
miley: that wasn't even what i was going to ask you about
jackson: well, you can never be too careful.
miley: i need your evil, twisted mind to break dad and mrs ryan up
jackson: that is something i can do...

[hannahmontanarulz55]

i need to see what jackson has instore!

[Hannah_Montanafan]

I want to know what they will do. WRITE MORE!!!!!!

[flower1]

holy crap! No he DIDNT! This is soooooo going on my Subscribes! I need some ppl to join my RPG. They hate it.

[HannahMontanaX3]

More

[Mileysabsolutnumber1fan]

AWESOME Fan fic! I just read all 9 pages!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

AWESOME Fan fic! I just read all 9 pages!


lol...yea i cant wait till the next chapter comes out!

[vanessa*anne]

jackson: i need backstage passes and front row tickets for hannah montana
miley: why?
jackson: my girlfriend is a huge fan ok.
miley: um ok....
jackson: ok i am going to ring mrs ryan
miley: why? are you gonna say hi i'm jackson and you're breaking up with my dad
jackson: no. *puts on this robby ray voice* hello mrs ryan i am sorry but i can't date you anymore. it is making miley really upset and don't metion me breaking up with you, ok? your son is my daughters ex and it isn't working out. bye!
miley: omg jackson thank you!
jackson: now i need my backstage passes
miley: fine fine fine
robby ray: guys mrs ryan isn't talking to me or replying my calls. did you do anything?
miley: no
jackson: no.... *makes that look*
robby ray: i am sorry for dating mrs ryan without asking you but everythings gonna be alright bud
miley: it is now thanks to jackson
robby ray: what?
miley: don't worry..
jackson: now give me my passes
miley: fine fine fine
lilly: omg miley guess what
miley: what?
lilly:....

[Hannah_Montanafan]

I wonder what Lilly is going to say!!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: you know oliver?
miley: yea of course hes my boyfriend
lilly: his parents were just in a car crash. his mum died.
miley: omg no!
lilly: hes really upset.
miley: should i go over?
lilly: I think it would be good.
miley: what about his dad?
lilly: his dad is in hospital, no news yet.
miley: bye lilly. im going over to olivers.

miley goes and knocks on olivers door
miley: oliver its miley
he opens the door and he gives her a big hug
miley: oliver i am so sorry.
oliver: why did this have to happen. why. *starts crying*
oliver: great now i look like a big softie.
miley: no you have a right to be upset
oliver: my mum was always the best, she was always here and now she is gone.
miley: don't worry i am here for you.
*they start kissing and the phone rings.
oliver: hello, oliver oken
hopspital: we have some news on your dad
oliver: what?!
hospital: he is going to have to stay here for a few weeks he will get better
oliver: oh ok
hangs up
miley: what did they say?
oliver: my dad has to stay in for a few weeks.
miley: oh oliver i am sorry
oliver:......
what is he going to say? find out in the next part

[miley rocks]

oh pleazeeeeeeeee post so more im addicted to this RPG

[Hannah_Montanafan]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[numba1puppyluva]

Do u ENJOY torturing us? lol, I NEED TO KNO WHAT HAPPENS!

[numba1puppyluva]

yeah u better be typin

[miji.hannahmontana]

OMG i so need to read more!!

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: miley will you always be here for me
miley: of course
oliver: i want my mum
miley: i am so sorry
oliver: miley i love you
miley: me too.
oliver hugs miley
they both walk over to mileys house
robby ray: hi miley, hi oliver. whats wrong oliver?
miley (whispering): his parents just died. can he stay here tonight
miley (to oliver) : my dad said you can stay here tonight. it would be better to not be home by yourself.
oliver: thank you so much miley
miley: its ok. i love you.
oliver: miley, can i tell you something?
miley: yes
oliver: well.....

[miley rocks]

NEED 2 READ MORE
PLEAZE POST MORE

[SmileyMiley11]

this is really good

[Hannah_Montanafan]

I want to know what he is going to say!!!!

[flower1]

More! Before I Die Of Confusion!

[miley rocks]

I want to know what he is going to say!!!!

Me 2

[vanessa*anne]

oliver: i was really jealous when you liked other guys
miley: why?
oliver: i always liked you
miley: really? you are the sweetest i can't believe i ever actually liked someone more than you.
oliver: now that my mum is gone and my dad is in hospital, you are the only one i have
miley: don't worry, i am always here for you.
miley: what is that noise?
oliver: oh no i see hands
miley: oh no
oliver: it better not be
miley: i told him to leave me alone
oliver: if he tries anything. my night is already bad.
jake: miley open the window
she goes over and opens it
miley: go away jake
jake: but miley....

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg....i had to go last night, so i just read all the other posts, but i need to know what jakes going to say!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

HannahMontanaX3 your set is super cute!

[HannahMontanaX3]

thanks. cutting the image took FOREVER.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

thanks. cutting the image took FOREVER.


yea but it turned out really good

[vanessa*anne]

jake: but miley can i help that i love you?
miley: please. if you loved me you wouldn't have been doing these things to me! someone that truley loved me would have backed off. yes sure i did like you once but that time is over. now go.
oliver: go!
jake: please miley, please
oliver: GO LIKE I SAID BEFORE!
he left
miley: oliver, what can I do to get rid of him?
oliver: i don't know
miley: and there is a little chance that he might end up my stepbrother.
oliver: stepbrother?
miley: well... jackson and i did come up with a plan and wheather it worked or not, im not sure. hopefully. it would be so wierd having jake life here
oliver: agreed.
miley: jackson put on my dads voice and talked to mrs ryan on the phone. it was so funny, but i think it worked
oliver: good, don't want that jerk getting anywhere near you,
miley: especially not living in the same house!
oliver: yep. that guy is gonna pay
miley: how?
oliver: i don't know
miley starts laughing
miley: we'll get him pack somehow

oliver: hmmmm.... i think i can smell food
miley: whats with you?
oliver: im a guy its food do the math.
miley: i guess
oliver: yum! i think its steak and salad
miley: i don't even want to know how you know that. lets go downstairs
they both went downstairs and saw.......

what did they see? find out in the next chapter

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ohhh i think i know! robby ray is probably cooking something up for mrs ryan! write more!

[vanessa*anne]

robbie ray cooking.
miley: hey dad, whens dinner going to be ready
robby ray: about dinner...
oliver: what? im starving
robby ray: us and the ryan family are having dinner together
miley: what!?!
oliver: i thought yuo two had broken up
robby ray: well, someone was on the phone pretending to me *gives jackson the look* but we know it was all a misunderstanding
miley: i am not having dinner with jake ryan! grrrr.
jackson: miley, where are my backstage hannah montana passes.
miley: well it didn't work so you're not getting them ha.
jackson: hey that wasn't part of the deal
miley runs upstairs and sits on her bed
miley: how could he
oliver goes up after her
oliver: he probably loves her miles
miley: well how can he do this to his daughter
robby ray: miley and oliver come down her now!
miley: what daddy?
robby ray: you are having dinner no matter what
miley: but daddy, jake will be there
robby ray: well i'm sorry bud but you will have to get used to him because one day he might be your stepbrother
miley: jake and me? living in the same house?! never!
then there was a knock at the door.
miley: man it they are here
mrs ryan: hello robby ray *kisses him*
oliver: ok that is a bit disturbing.
mrs ryan: meet my son jake.
jake: it is a pleasure to meet you mr stewart
miley: great he is acting all goodie goodie
jake: miley......

[MileyHannahFan]

Omg I Love It!!!!!!!!!

[Mileysabsolutnumber1fan]

More!

[HannahMontanaX3]

MORE! ahsome.
My fanfics:
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=36529
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=35397
check them out!

[SmileyMiley11]

write more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

write more...plz!!!!!!!!

[numba1puppyluva]

OMG! How could he do that to hid daughter! Her own father is a backstabber! I think u should involve Lilly a bit more, like she gets jealous bcuz she's not there that often, anyways, it's AWESOME!!!

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!!!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

your Fanfic Got me lookin so crazy right now
Your Fanfics's got me lookin so crazy right now
(your fanfic)
Got me lookin so crazy right now your Fanfic's
Got me lookin so crazy right now
(your fanfic)

[vanessa*anne]

more lilly? i guess i should involve her more i will soon.

jake: a little wierd having our parents date isn't it
miley: well... i don't like it.
jake: either do i it means we can't be together
oliver: she doesn't want you anyway man. she wasn't oliver oscar oken
miley: i don't like it because i have to be near you and act like i like you when i can't stand you!
jake: come on miley
miley: jake
oliver: give up already. she hates you and i hate you.
mrs ryan: hate who?
miley: nevermind
miley (whispers to jake): you can't let her know i hate you.
jake: fine
mrs ryan: now who is this lovley girl
miley: hi. i'm miley. robby rays daughter
mrs ryan: and who are you? i thought you only had one son robby
oliver: oh no i am not his son i am mileys boyfriend
mrs ryan: well i am pleased to meet both of you. you are such a cute couple
oliver blushes
miley: thanks. oliver is the best
*gives him a kiss on the cheek*
mrs ryan: awww
robby ray: lets eat dinner before it gets cold
mrs ryan: ok
they all sit down to dinner and then after they finished mrs ryan got up and said
mrs ryan: excuse me i have an annocment
miley (whispering to oliver): oh no. i think i know what is coming.
miley crosses her fingers
oliver: please don't let it be what i think it is.
miley: well mrs ryan is pretty nice
oliver: but that jerk jake
miley: i know. i don't want him as a stepbrother, ever!
miley: i know. be quiet she might here you
robby ray: miley don't be rude. listen to mrs ryan
mrs ryanL.....
mrs ryan:.........

[hannahmontanarulz55]

write more! need to know what she says!

[HannahMontanaX3]

More!

[Fire-Chicken]

OMG This is Soo Awesome!!! I just read everything, and it was AWESOME!!! You NEED to write more!

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write more!!!! Where is Jackson?

[numba1puppyluva]

MORE I NEED MORE! I died after reading that!But my soul luckily called 911!!!

[vanessa*anne]

Jackson: ha ha dad is giving you the look
robby ray: *gives jackson the look* now listen to mrs ryan
jackson: fine fine
mrs ryan: you may have heard that me and your father are going out
miley: yess yess whatever
nrs ryan: there is something i must tell you all
miley, oliver and jackson all cross there fingers
miley: please don't let it be what i think it is
oliver: i don't want that jake jerk anywhere near miley
jackson: i don't like having 1 celebrity sister but a brother 2
miley gives him the look
jackson: ok sorry
mrs ryan: i am sorry but this isn't working out, i can't date you
miley, jackson and oliver: what?!
mrs ryan: if your kids don't want as together then this can't work
miley: yes!
jackson: is this about the phone call?
mrs ryan: yes.
miley: well i don't have any problems with you its someone else in your family!
mrs ryan: who?
jake looks over at her, he knows she is going to say him
miley: jake!
mrs ryan: what is wrong with jake
oliver: I WILL TELL YOU WHAT IS WRONG WITH JAKE
oliver: jake and miley were a couple and then jake cheated on her and then she tried to get miley back and was always trying to make her kiss him. then jake kept spying on us pretty much and yeah, that is why miley hates jake.
mrs ryan: ............
what is she going to say? find out in the next part

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!!!!!

[numba1puppyluva]

Oh Lordy! That Was Awesometastical!!!!!!! Must Write More! Write More Or Ill Die Without My Soul Callin 911!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[xxmileyluverxx1234xx]

More!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more!!!!!

[vanessa*anne]

mrs ryan: jake lets go. she doesn't want you around. sorry robby ray but this ain't working
robby ray: oh...
miley: dad i am so sorry
robby ray: don't worry bud. i should have seen if it was ok with you before you did it
jackon: boy you should
oliver: and sorry for yelling, i just hate that jake so much
miley: don't worry so do i. lets go
oliver: hopefully his mum will make him stay away
miley: hopefully
oliver: everythings gonna work out miles
*kisses him. while they are kissing the phone rings*
the phone rings
miley: hello. its miley and oliver
lilly: hey miley where you just kissing oliver
miley: no... ok yes
lilly: ohhhhh
oliver: lilly i can hear you
miley: oliver has the other phone
lilly: oh. anyway there is something i have to tell you
miley: what?!?!
lilly: well...
oliver: we don't have all day
lilly: ok i got ...........
what did she get? find out in the next part
sorry i didn't update yesterday, i had an assigment

[hannahmontanarulz55]

did she get a boyfriend?!?! lol...jk...more plz!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[Hannah_Montanafan]

More!!!!

[sophiecool]

OMG IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE BREATHING NORMALLY YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE NOW!!!! lolz.

[Smilezmiley15510]

omg this is amazing!! Please write more !!:))

[vanessa*anne]

lilly: i got this secret love note
miley: omg what did it say?
lilly: it was just left on the steps to my house with a big bunch of flowers
miley: lilly what did it say?
lilly: it said
meet me at the beach at midnight tonight
i love you and i want to see you
don't bring anyone, i want to be alone with you
you are my life. you are my sun
without you i wouldn't have no life

miley: omg are you going to meet him?
lilly: i am not sure...
miley: not sure?! come on lilly.
lilly: ok i will
miley: go. i want the 411 on it later
lilly: of course. why wouldn't i tell you? after all you are my best friend
miley: ok bye
lilly: bye
miley: hi oliver
oliver: i have something to tell you................
miley: what is it? you can tell me anything
oliver: you know that girl...........
miley: what girl? what about it?
oliver: well...........

[hannahmontanarulz55]

does he like lilly? plz write more!

[miley rocks]

yeah pleasez right more

[vanessa*anne]

miley: what? are you breaking up with me?! i can't believe this
oliver: no miley! never I love you so much
miley: then what about that girl?
oliver: its just that my cousin is coming to town and is a huge hannah montana fan. could you get her tickets
miley: sure! that is easy! sorry that i thought you were breaking up with me.

meanwhile lilly was getting ready to go to the beach to meet her 'secret admirer'.
lilly: ok ready. im ready for this. come on lilly don't be nervous
lilly walked over to the beach and waited. to her it seemed like hours but it was really only a few minutes then a face came out of the darkness.
lilly: omg. he is here
person: hello lilly
lilly: hi
person: lilly i love you but we could never be together
the person leans over and kisses her. it was the best kiss of her life. she never wanted it to end.

lilly: who are you?
person: i wish i could tell you but us being together would ruin your friendships. i am sorry
lilly: no! don't go
it was too late. he had left. lilly had never seen his face, it could have been anyone. absolutley anyone. lilly felt heartbroken.
miley (on msn) : how did it go?
lilly: he didn't even tell me who he was.
miley: what? no!
lilly: but he kissed me
miley: omg. how was that like
lilly: the best kiss of my life but he said we could never be together
miley: what? this sucks
lilly: i know. he had the lips of an angel. he was so sweet.
miley: anway i gtg bye

lilly went and layed on her bed. she was left wondering who it was that kissed her.

she found another note and bunch of roses this time. the note read
i am sorry that i didn't show who i was
that kiss was the most beatiful one in my life
i will tell you who i am, soon
when i know i am and you are ready
i love you.
lots of love from your secret admierer.

lilly went to sleep, dreaming about that kiss.

the next morning she went to mileys.
lilly: lilly landing in 1.2
miley: 3
lilly: hey miles
miley: hey i have something to tell you
lilly: will lilly likey?
miley: yes lilly will likey!
lilly: what?

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[Hannah_Montanafan]

More!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more!

[Smilezmiley15510]

more!!!!!!!! omg there needs to be more this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!!:))

[mileyroxx]

LOL! I LOVE READING THIS! But, I got to keep up!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: you and me, well.... me and lola are doing a photoshoot for gina gali!
lilly: omg! her clothes are so cute...
miley: and expensive. and i didn't even tell you the best part
lilly: what?!
miley: we get to keep the clothes that we wear!
lilly: omg! no way! but why lola?!
miley: you know that magazine that she has..
lilly: yea
miley: they are going a best friends issue
lilly: omg
miley: i was able to choose who i did it with
lilly: omg thanks so much.
miley: anyway did you find out who gave you the note and kissed you?
lilly: no i haven't
robby ray: miley come here for a second
miley: i will be back soon
lilly sat in the room and waited. she glanced around and saw something and went over to look at it.
miley comes back
miley: hey lilly. i was just talking to oliver on the phone and he...... what are you looking at?
lilly: oh no. what did he say?
miley: oh nothin much. just that he loved me
lilly: hey! why did you get me all exicted.
lillys mum beeped from her car outside the door.
miley: aww you have to go?
lilly: yea. oh no.... mums listening to the oldies again. grrrrrr
miley: ok bye.
miley walked up the stairs to her room and lilly looked again at what she saw. it was..............

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!!!!!

[!ilovemileycyrus!]

this is a good fanfic

[hannahmontanarulz55]

what did she see?????

[miley rocks]

omg pleasez keep on wrighting

[vanessa*anne]

a note. not just a normal note, it was on the same paper and had the same handwriting as the love notes that she had recieved.
lilly: omg no way........... jackson is mr secret admierer
lillys mum: LILLY HURRY UP AND GET IN THE CAR.
lilly looked at the note again and put it down and rushed out to the car before her mum got any angierer.

lilllys diary
dear diary
you will never guess who wrote those love letters! it was jackson. mileys brother! i cannot believe this! i mean he is disgusting jackson but the kiss he gave me ws the best in my whole live. we can never be together, it completley and absolutley sucks. anway keep you posted


becca and oliver were on the beach. even though oliver said i am not interested in you, becca wanted him.
becca: come on oli. i lov you
oliver: im sorry becca but i love miley
becca: no you don't! YOU LOVE ME!
oliver: becca im sorry its just that miley is my everything
becca: your everything? i still cannot believe you are choosing that loser over me!
oliver: miley is not a loser.
becca: yea right. have you seen the cool list. right at the bottom.
oliver: that is just written by 2 stupid girls who don't worry whose feelings they hurt.
becca: come on oliver. i know you want me
she leans in to kiss him
oliver: becca no.



it was too late by then. miley had seen them about to kiss and ran off.
oliver (screming): it isn't what you think
miley: that what?! your cheating on me?!
oliver: she was kissing me. i wasn't kissing her.
miley just ran off crying
oliver: thanks a lot becca! you ruined my life! i hate you!
becca: oliver..........
oliver: just leave me alone. i never want to see you again.
oliver was really angry at what she had done. his love life was ruined. he really loved miley but becca had ruined it all. he had a very good reason to hate her.

miley on the other hand felt heartbroken and upset. what does she do? find out in the next part.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

awwww poor miley....write more!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please

[vanessa*anne]

miley ran all the way home and locke herself in her room.
robby ray: bud.... do you want to talk about it?
miley: no..
robby ray: are you ok?
miley: yes (laughs)
miley (thinking) : why did lilly have to do this to me?
she gets out her guitar

i always thought you were the one
but then you came and tore my heart apart
with someone else but not me


leave me alone
leave me alone
my heart is in such despiar
i can't just forget about you
you were the best thing that happened to me
you were always there, but now never there
im heartbroken and you don't care

i am falling star
and i fall alone
you don't care what you do to me


just leave me alone
you can't do anything now
my heart has been torn in 2
and nothing will change that now
leave me alone



robby ray: its a beautiful song honey.
miley just stayed in her room, on her bed crying.
miley was thinking, why did he do this
he said he loved me
i thought he was over becca.

lilly: hey mr stewart, is miley ok?
robby ray: she is up in her room. maybe you should go up there
lilly went up and knocked on the door
lilly: miley? its lillly.....
miley opened the door and miley gave her a big hug
lilly: miley im so sorry
lilly (thinking) : i can't do this to her after what she is going through.
miley: why did he lie? why did he cheat?
lilly: its not your fault hes just a jerk
lilly (thinking) : i know me and jackson are seeing each other behind her back and its wrong. i can't date my best friends brother thats like against the bff rules.
there was a knock on the door
miley (still crying) : who is it?

[thobi123]

Write More This Is The Best

[thobi123]

This Is So Good

[HannahMontanaX3]

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[hannahmontanarulz55]

wright more please!

[vanessa*anne]

becca: its becca. i need to say something
miley: go away.
becca: i was about to kiss oliver, he said not to
miley: what?!
becca: i wanted him, he wanted you. it didn't seem fair
miley: oh omg. i need to tell oliver that im sorry.
lilly: becca you can go!
becca: miley im sorry, it is my fault.
lilly: GO NOW!
becca: ok....


miley (on the phone) : oliver........
oliver: i am so sorry miley but she was kissing me, not me kissing her. i dont' want her, i really really don't.
miley: im so sorry for blaming you the truth is that becca came over here and said that she was kissing you
oliver: what she did? why?
becca hated seeing oliver sad so she came and told miley. she loved him that much that she couldn't stand seeing him sad.
miley: anyway i have to go.
oliver: bye. i love you
miley: me too bye
miley hung up the phone

lilly: so how did it go
miley: we are back together.
lilly: yes! anway i have to go
miley: ok bye

jackson: lilly....
lilly: jackson.....
jackson goes over and kisses her
lilly felt like she was in heaven.
lilly: no we can't do this to miley
jackson: what? but i love you
lilly: i do too but i have been thinking about it and.......
jackson: just one more
jackson kissed lilly. it went for a long time. neither one of them wanted to let go.


miley: jackson where is my wig? you took it again. jackson?
she went downstairs and saw them kissing
miley: what?
lilly: miley......
miley just had nothing to say, absolultey nothing. no idea what to think.
lilly:

what is she going to say? find out in the enxt part.

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg write more!

[vanessa*anne]

miley: lilly, jackson... you like each other?
jackson: yea
lilly: miley i know that i shouldn't but i do.
miley: its fine
lilly: what? i thought it was against the bff rules
miley: what? why would i care?
lilly: really?
jackson: this is a bit akward.
miley: yea but is fine
lilly: you sure?
miley: positive
lilly: thanks so much.

oliver comes in
lilly: i think i will give you guys a bit of time alone. come on jackson
oliver: why is she acting all lovey dofey around jackson.
miley: long story short. they are in love
oliver: really?
miley: yep
oliver: you don't care?
miley: no i have you
oliver: kisses her
amber and ashley: ohh... this is juicy
*takes picture*
amber: lilly kissing jackson.
amber and ashley: what and adorable couple ohhhhh tissssss
jackson: no!!!! you can't do that
lilly: why>
jackson: well......
lilly: you're embarrassed for being with me, a middle schoolar? can't believe this!
ashley: awwwww poor lilly ha ha ha ha hahha
jackson:
what is he going to say? find out in the next chapter

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http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=37914
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[hannahmontanarulz55]

more plz...i just have one q...is amber and ashley spying on them or something?

[vanessa*anne]

yea they are.

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

yea they are.

ok thanx!

[Emma27]

Omg!!! Love It! Write More!!!!!

[Smilezmiley15510]

omg plz write more!!! It's so good!!!!!:))

[vanessa*anne]

jackson: well a high schooler dating a middle schoolar isn't cool! almost as uncool as a guy wearing perfume.
lilly: so jackson being mr cool is more important than being lillys boyfriend?
jackson: no... well maybe yea
lilly: i can't believe you! im leaving
jackson: lilly wait....
it was too late she was already out the door
miley: jackson how could you!
jackson: what? its amber and ashleys fault
amber and ashley: whoops wait we don't care
miley: you are gonna pay!
amber: time to go!

jackson: should i go to lillys and apoligize
oliver: oh yea you should
jackson: hey OO you'er suppossed to be on my side.

he left to go to lillys
jackson knocked on the door
jackson: hello mrs truscott can i come in and see lilly?
mrs truscott: sure. lilly you have company
lilly: i am not in the mood to see anyone right now...... jackson what are you doing here?
jackson:

[miley rocks]

great kept on wrighting

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ohhh more!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[Hannah_Montanafan]

Write More!

[Sari]

I put in my bookmark on page 13 (my bookmark is my favorites xD)
IT IS WONDERFUL!!

[vanessa*anne]

jackson: lilly i am sorry i don't care if everyone at school thinks i am a dork, am weird. i want to be with you
lilly: really? didn't sound like it before
jackson: i wasn't thinking ok? im goofy jackson. you know me.
lilly: yea i guess you are right. and i love you that way
*kiss*
lillys mum: lilly you need to do your homework
jackson: oh ummm i guess i better be going. bye.

lilly went to school the next day and on the front page of the school newspaper was:

lilly swipes a hs boyfriend

thats right. lilly, the dork has got a high school boyfriend and none other than jackson stewart. look at our proof

*picture of them kissing*

sure looks like they are together. why is she dating mileys brother though? isn't that against the best friend rules? one thing for sure, they are so cute together

by amber and ashley

*at jacksons school*

friend one: haha you kissed a middler
friend two: whoooo he likes younger babes.
friend three: haha you are so wierd
jackson:.........

what is he going to say? find out in the next part

[smileymley#1fan]

plz plz wright more i luv it

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg! dont have them break up!

[Emma27]

More!!!

[vanessa*anne]

jackson: do i really care what you think?
boy: whoo jacksons being mr tough guy
jackson: you asked for it now! *punches him*
boy: ow..
his face was bright red, he was furious
principal: jackson stewart. come to the principals office NOW!!!!!
boy: i will deal with you later

robby ray: jackson..
jackson: he started it.
robby ray: still no excuse. now you are gounded for a week. no girls, no leaving this house
jackson: no school, no school
robby ray: except school
jackson: awww you stink.

jackson didn't want to go to school, he was scared of what they guy was going to do to him

lilly: hey miley
miley: hey
lilly: you know with jackson....
miley: yea?
lilly: does he really care?
miley: of course he does
jackson:....

sorry its so short. i have to get ready for school

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more plz!

[flower1]

Mmore!!! Yeah, You Better Get The Typing Or I'll Die!

[Smilezmiley15510]

Please write more. This is like the best fan fic ever!!:))

[Emma27]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[thobi123]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[miley rocks]

pleasez moooore

[smileymley#1fan]

stop toturing us right more

[Emma27]

plz more!!! plz plz plz!!

[SmileyMiley11]

More! This is soo cool!

[smileymley#1fan]

u must really enjoy toturign us jeeeeeeeezzz jk lol

[flower1]

u musy like torturing us!!!! MMMMOORREEEE!!! Or i'll die, and this time, my mom wont find me, and call 911!!!!

[numba1puppyluva]

What happened to Jake? The Love triangle between Oliver, Miley, and Jake was gettin REAL juicy!

[KiTTYKAT! YOU'RE BLACK!]

this story is so random.
and you leave too many cliff hangers.

but its awesome anyway. =]

write more.

[Cheerleader111]

more please! :)

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

o-m-g! You didn't even finish it!
This is just torture..lol

[mileyfanforever101]

MOREEEEEEEE

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more plz

[elle]

ooh what happened?? why do people keep ending it?