Jake or Oliver?!!---FanFiction

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 1

setting: Jake is back from Romania and is back at school.
Miley: Lilly! Oh my god im so excited today's Jake's first day back!
Lilly:I totally forgot maybe now you can finally get together!
Yeah i know! i gotta go fix my hair i need to look perfect!
Ok ill talk to you later.
Oliver:Lilly! Guess What?
What?
I think i might like *pauses and whispers*...Miley.
But.. but ... but...
well while you babble on about nothing im going to go tell her.
umm...oliver,im sorry to be the one to remind you but, today is jake's first day back.
oh right.. oh man if only i had figured this out a few days ago.im going to go and i dont know im just going to go.
oliver...
*walks away*
*sigh* oh hey miley!i've gotta tell you somthing
what is it lilly?
Well.. Oliver just told me that he likes you.

plz comment!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

sounds really good!!!! post more!

[natwolfflove1]

Ok thanks heres the next chapter

Chapter 2

Miley: Oh my god really?
Lilly:Yeah
well you know i liked Oliver for a long time before jake came here , but now..i dont know
what are you going to do?
i dont know! All i do know is that Jake and I are like the perfect couple.
well mabye you should try things with jake before you make your decision.
you right *spots Jake* JAKE!
Jake: Oh hey Miley!
i missed you!
i missed you too! So, do you remember what happened before i left?
yeah
well do you wanna be my girlfriend?
ok cool
all right well i gotta go to my homeroom
all right i'll talk to you soon then bye
bye
so how did it go miles?
really good, i think i should tell him my secret
are you crazy?
hey lilly hey miley whats up?
i umm umm i gotta go bye *leaves
Whats up with her, oh no you didnt
sorry

[natwolfflove1]

plz comment!then ill post more!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

lol! it's funny too! write more!

[natwolfflove1]

lol thanks ok here

Chapter 3

Oliver:Lilly why did you tell her?!
Lilly:Because you like her more than jake does! i found out he's just using her but i cant tell her.
well heck ill tell her!*starts to walk to miley*
*whispers* oh please dont let miley be hurt please
talking to some girl*
Jake?Who is this?
oh this is beth, my girlfriend
g-girlfriend?but i thought i was.. i see *runs away crying**runs into oliver*
*hugs her while she crys*
he was u-using me, im such an idiot
no you deserve alot better than him
*smiles* *kisses Oliver*

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

that was really good! how come it's so short?

[thobi123]

that was really goood te last part excellent

[cupcake]

what?!?!?!?!?!
but it was sooooooooooooooo gooooooooooood!

[laurahe1]

more! please!

[natwolfflove1]

ill write more today i guess

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 4
miley:i just feel so stupid,lilly
lilly:dont, he is the stupid one.And i saw you and Oliver...
*grins*yeah what about it?
haha nothing nothing
shut up Lilly here comes Oliver, quick how do i look?
Miley, you look fine but i think i'll go get a snack from Rico's .. good luck
Lilly!ugh..
Oliver:Hey Miles
hey
so i was wondering if you wanted to go get somthing to eat like some pizza or somthing
sure sounds great
cool lets go
okay
*they drive to a pizza place*
*see's jake and his girlfriend*
*also see's* Oh great look who's here, mr.big shot movie star mean whatever
thats the absolute longest name i think i've EVER heard in my life
shut up
haha *laughs*
haha *laughs*
uh oh mr.umm... mr.longname is coming over here
great....
hey miley, can i talk to you for a minute... alone
i'd rather not
please i'm willing to take you back
take me back?
yeah i forgive you
thats it - - - - - - - - - - - -


ill fill in the blanks on my next chapter post, comment please!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

plz write more! this fan fic is soooooooooooooooooooo going into my subscribtions!

[natwolfflove1]

ok i'll write more! thanks!

[natwolfflove1]

Continued chap 3

thats it *punches him*

Chapter 4

dude chill
you need to back off and youd be LUCKY to have miley but you made a huge mistake using her
thanks oliver, yeah jake i like oliver now so back off
whatever you missed your chance of ever being with me
thank god *slaps him* *her and oliver walk out of the resterant*
so do you wanna hang out later?
cant i got a hannah party to go to .. ugh jakes going to be there.
oh ok ill talk to you later then bye
bye *goes home and changes into hannah**goes to the party*
hey hannah
ugh hi jake
whats up with everyone tonight?are you mad at me fore some reason
*looses her temper and forgits she's hannah* You used me and your asking me is i mad at you! of corse i am!
wait .. what?
*realises her mistake*................what?
did you just say what i think you said?
i um said that umm ... i got nothing.
wait miley?

[flower1]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow, i nearly fell out of my seat when Oliver hit him!

[vanessa*anne]

this is great. more!

[Destiny_Hope_NZ]

nattwolflove1 u copied my idea on my fan fic of miley and oliver going out! and jake wanting miley back!

[natwolfflove1]

nattwolflove1 u copied my idea on my fan fic of miley and oliver going out! and jake wanting miley back!
first of all jake dosnt want her back its a trick youll find that out later in the story. and alot of people made fan fics bout oliver and miley going out


ill write more guys

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 5

Jake:wait miley?
i um.. um... *mouth is moving but nothings coming out*
Oh my god ive gotta tell someone!
no! jake you cant tell anyone! its a secret!
well... if i cant tell anyone,then you've got to do somthing for me.
o... *gulp* okay what is it?
well my girlfriend broke up with me cuz of what i did to you and i need to get that big group of girls wanting me again so i need you to make them jelous
what?!thats crazy i cant do that!
ok.. then i just might have to tell *clears his throught and yells* attention can i have your attention please!!!
okay okay .. i'll do it but can i explain to oliver?
theres no time
*sighs* okay fine
thats good now lets go you need to change back into miley
ok *changes* goes down to the beach with jake . OH NO! Theres Oliver! not here please
quick theres alot of girls over there .. kiss me
what?
KISS ME!
fine *kisses him*
holds her hand*
*oliver see's*miley! how could you!
i can explain
oliver she is done with you were back together
leaves*
no!*crys*
later in 1 hour meet me here to kiss again later
fine


(things are about to get good! plz comment!)

[natwolfflove1]

plz comment

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

REALLY good! lol! I'm so relieved! I thought you ended it at chapter 3 cause you wrote "the end"!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

please write more!

[natwolfflove1]

ok ill post more

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 6
miley:*Later that night*goes down to the beach*
jake:good good, your here ok now i need you to kiss me then laugh really loud then kiss me again
ok i understand
ok go
oliver:*shows up at the beach*
i said go
ok *leans in to kiss him*
*leans forward*
*slaps him**laughs really loud*
about to say somthing*
"Hold that thought!"*knees him where it hurts*
*punches him*
*falls over* When .. wait what?
you gave me just enough time to work this plan out with oliver and explain, we planned this pay back
*stands up* ok fine then mabye i have somthing to say to the beach
no! *whispers to oliver* he's smarter than i thought i didnt think he'd even remember that
remember what?
did i forgit to tell you?he knows im hannah.
well... the only way to get back at him is to take theat amo away from him
but we cant make him forgit about it!
but we can tell them ourselves
fine i guess if theyre going to find out i want it to be from me ok ill go change into hannah
i'll stall jake
ok i'll hurry

plz comment!

[flower1]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more! more! more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg...please post more!

[natwolfflove1]

ok ill post more

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 7
Miley comes back to the beach as hannah montana*
hey are you ready to do this
i guess so
ok good luck *helps her onto a table at the beach*
excuse me! i need to say somthing to ya'll
Random people at the beach: Hannah montana! oh mg god its hannah montana oh my god i love you hannah!
Thank you ,thank you. But i have a secret , one that none of you know i spend nights on stage but during the day i go to school, with you as *pulls off her wig* ...miley
*Gasp* *laughs* Miley? you put on this outfit to trick us?
no really.. i am hannah montana,i'll prove it at my next concert tonight.*leaves and goes to her concert*
*sings best of both worlds then starts to talk*
As some of you may have heard, i have a secret and go to school as miley stewrt *pulls off her wig*
Audiance: Gasps* OH my God!!!!! Hannah ! i mean miley i love you!!!you rock!!!
After the concert*
Ok why did you do that i thought i was your friend and i was the only one who knew other than oliver! I thought i was special ! but i guess i was wrong..*leaves*
no lilly wait! *gets pulled back by crowds*

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg...u HAVE to write more!

[natwolfflove1]

2 more comments then i will! i wanna keep the suspence :lol:

[mileysfan01]

omg!!! write more!! I luv it please please please write more...I wanna know what happens!

[natwolfflove1]

ill write more after 1 more comment

[mileysfan01]

ill write more after 1 more comment

okay! [[hurry up some1 comment so we can get next chp]]

[MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan]

more more more!!!!

[natwolfflove1]

ok ill write more

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 8
*calls Lilly and oliver on 3 way talk* but is very quiet and lilly dosnt know she is there
hey lilly
hi oliver i cant beleive miley! she betrayed us!
actually i kinda knew you see...
WHAT? everyone knew except me, well i dont blame you oliver. hey mabye we should get her back.
huh?
like kiss in front of her it wont mean anything ,but i want her to know what it feels like to be left out of somthing
I CANT BELEIVE YOU'D DO THAT!
what.. miley?
yeah i heard your kissing plan! and FYI i told cuz jake was blackmailing me into things i didnt want to do so thats why i didnt have time to tell you oliver only knew cuz he was there and i cant beleive you would ever do somthing like that to me! or even think about it! *hangs up*
no miles-
shes gone
ya think
sorry bout that but she wanted to listen to you to apologise
she was going to apopogise for me even thought she didnt even do anything?
yup
i made a huge mistake ive gotta go find he ill call you back.
okay bye *runs to mileys house* Lillys on her way over
i dont want to talk to her
miley she was just upset im sure even if i had a chance to agree to the plan she'd never do that '
excuse me?even if you hade the chance to AGREE!your a trader too! i cant beleive you!*walks away to the beach
no miley!thats not what i meant!
whatever *sits on the beach*
*kids run up to her and get autogrpahs and sit by her*
dosnt even realise how many people are surronding her
Sarah: miley.. whats wrong?
oh hey sarah ... my loife is slowly crumbling apart...

[hannahmontanarulz55]

write more plz!

[mileysfan01]

omg!!!so good write more!!!more more more!!!

[flower1]

More.

[natwolfflove1]

ill write more later sorry im EXTREMLY busy and sick right now

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ill write more later sorry im EXTREMLY busy and sick right now

hope u fell better!

[vanessa*anne]

Its great and hope you feel better soon!

[natwolfflove1]

thanks guys ill write more now

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 8
Sarah:What do you mean your life is crumbling apart?Your hannah montana , how could your life be any better?
For 1, i never wanted people to know i was even hannah montana, and now everyone treats me differnt.And Lilly hates me and Oliver betrayed me. Im thinking my life could be better.
lilly cant hate you!
well she does, becuz i told my secret without telling her i was gunna its a stupid reason. but she hates me.
no i dont
really
well sure i was mad at you, but i could never hate you miles
but..your plan and oliver said he was going to except!
i was just testing him cuz he had been acting weird latley! i thought you hated me
of corse not
HUGS?
HUGS?
*they hug* now should we get oliver back?since obviously he likes both of us?
i dont know im going to go think ill talk to you later bye *leaves
hey lilly
hey oliver
so miley broke up with me
really?she told me you were just in a fight
oh ? no no she clearly said "Oliver were over i cant belive you love lilly"
and she said its ok for us to go out
really? okay
ok *kisses her * bye *walks to miley's house* miley, im really sorry i did that to you i was testing her and im not going to be friends with her anymore
really?for me?
yeah so do you want to go out with me again?
ok
ok i gotta go bye *kisses her*
the next day- goes to lillys and watches scary movies *kisses her*
walks in* Lilly! you were kissing oliver he's my boyfriend
no he's my boyfriend
*they both look at oliver* i umm..umm...
slaps him* cheater!*
slaps him too* lier!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

OMG! write more....i cant believe olivers a lieing cheater! hes like the hottest guy on the show! i need to know what happends!

[mileysfan01]

OMG OMG OMG !!! Write more more more!

[natwolfflove1]

ill write more tomarow after school

[natwolfflove1]

Chapter 10
Come on Miley, lets go to the beach. And oliver as for you, were over and get out of my house.
yeah were over too oliver
but..
just dont say anything oliver just leave
fine!leaves*
what a jerk
i know how could he!?
well atleast we still have eachother *they go to the beach*
*people keep pulling miley away*
yeah!... or not bye miley
no lilly wait!*turns around to the poperotsi* no you get away from me ugh i hate my life *runs home*

MILEY WAKES UP FROM HER TERRIBLE DREAM TO FIND THAT JAKE NEVER FOUND OUT HER SECRET AND HER AND OLIVER ARE GOING OUT AND LILLYS NOT MAD AT HER.

*wakes up crying* That was the worst dream ever

[MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan]

more more!!!! It's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

wow...it was just a dream...write more plz!

[mileysfan01]

Omg! I can't believe it was a dream! Omg! Please post more! more! more! more! more!

[natwolfflove1]

ill write more

[MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan]

more!!!!

p.s. how r u feeling?

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!

[MileyWorld__Girl_05]

WE WANT MORE! we want more! We Want More! we want more! WE WANT MORE!