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hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 07:43 AM
this is my FIRST fanfiction and I was nervous about posting it! i'll post 2 chapters cause they're kinda short.
Chapter 1: Smiles and Good Marks
*after people who use people. frankie muniz never dropped out of the movie and jake never went to romania*
*at school*
Lilly: Miley, you sure look happy.
Miley: I've just been in such a good mood since yesterday!
Lilly: Cause you and Jake got together?
Miley: Yeah and Saturday is our first date!
Lilly: I know what you should do!
Miley: what?
*oliver runs over*
Oliver: Hey guys! Guess what!
Lilly: What?
Oliver: I got an A on my book report!!
Miley: Good job! You must've actually worked hard on it!
Oliver: I sure did!
Miley: Anyway, Lilly what were you gonna say?
Lilly: I think you should tell Jake your secret.
Chapter 2: Whatever timing's right
Miley: Are you kidding me??!!
Lilly: No! Think about it! Jake trusts you and you trust him so if you really DO trust him, you should tell him!
Miley: I guess that makes sense....
Lilly: And Jake already likes Hannah and it would be cool to not have to hide half of you from him.
Miley: But what if we break up?
Lilly: You guys probably won't break up and even if you do Jake will keep your secret cause he's loyal.
Miley: I don't know, Lilly.....
Oliver:(yup, he's still there) come on, Miley!
Miley:...alright.
Lilly: Yay! When will you do it?
Miley: How about when I go back on Zombie High?
Lilly: That's perfect! Before or after the kiss?
Miley: Whatever timing's right, I guess.
*Jake walks over*
Jake: Miley, I hope it's ok but....---------!
I hope you guys like it! It gets better later!
lexiemay
03-10-2007, 09:02 AM
how do i join then???
laurahe1
03-10-2007, 09:02 AM
write more! please!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 09:48 AM
how do i join then???
this is a fanfiction not an RPG. sorry!:) I'll post more soon!
Purple_Panda
03-10-2007, 09:53 AM
its good.
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 01:26 PM
ok, thanx, it gets better!
Chapter 3: Just acting....right?
Jake:.. I have to kiss Hannah Montana on Zombie High.
Miley: Oh, sure, I don't mind! It's completly fine!
Jake: That's great! I thought you'd be upset.
Miley: Of course not! It's just acting....right?
Jake:Yeah, don't worry.
Miley: I won't.
*On the Zombie High set*
Jake: Nice to see you again Hannah!
Hannah: Hi, Jake, can I tell you something?
Director: Actors on set!
Jake: Uh, how about after we shoot this scene?
Hannah: But Jake, I -
Director: Action!
Jake:*acting* Then maybe this will change your mind... *kisses Hannah*
Director: Cut!
Jake: Great scene, Hannah!
Hannah: Can I tell you something?
Jake:Yeah, what's up?
Hannah: There's someting I think you should know. I -
Jake: Wait! I know what you're gonna say.
Hannah: You do?
Jake: Yeah, and now, after the kiss, I know I feel the same way too.
*Hannah has a shocked look on her face*
hope you guys like it! comment!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 02:03 PM
comment!!!!
natwolfflove1
03-10-2007, 02:13 PM
thats so good!! please write more!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 02:38 PM
thank you! here's the next chapter:
Chapter 4: He broke up with me..for me!
Hannah: But that wasn't what I-
Jake: Don't worry, I'll break up with Miley.
Hannah: What?!
Director: Jake!
Jake: That's the director. I've gotta go. I'll call you later though.
*Jake leaves*
Hannah: *even though he can't hear her* But Jake! I'm Miley.
*later, Miley calls Lilly and tells her what happened*
Lilly: Oh my god!
Miley: I know! He broke up with me....for me!
Lilly: Miley! You can't let him get away with this! You've gotta break up with HIM before he breaks up with you!
Miley: What's the difference?
Lilly: You don't lose face!
Miley:*hears a beep* Hold on Lilly, it's the other line. *changes the line* Hello?
Jake: Miley?
Miley: Jake? Can you hold on for a second?
Jake: Sure.
Miley: ok *changes the line* Lilly, it's Jake!
Lilly: Uh...no. You're Miley.
Miley: What? No, on the other line it's Jake!
Lilly: Oh my god! Break up with him!
Miley: Got it! *changes the line* Jake?
Jake: Yeah, listen Miley, I've gotta tell you something. I - * Miley interrupts*
Miley: I think we should break up.
Jake: What?
Miley: It's over.
Comment please!!
natwolfflove1
03-10-2007, 02:43 PM
so so so good! plz write more! and read my fan fic.
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 02:47 PM
so so so good! plz write more! and read my fan fic.
lol,thanx, I did read your fanfic! it's awesome!
HannahMontanaX3
03-10-2007, 02:49 PM
omg more!
HannahMontanaX3
03-10-2007, 02:50 PM
read my fanfic please:
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=35397
natwolfflove1
03-10-2007, 02:57 PM
hey Ami!love the siggy im going to read your fanfic
and yes plz post more!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 03:07 PM
thank you! and i read your fanfiction! it's great! next chapter:
Chapter 5: A Break-Up?
Jake: You wanna break up?! Why?!
Miley: Because you were gonna dump me for Hannah Montana!
Jake: Uh, no I wasn't.. I mean at first I was but then-...wait a minute! How'd you know?
Miley: Uh...My friend told me....*lying*but I don't know how she knew...You weren't gonna break up with me?
Jake: No! I mean at first I was but then I realised that I never really liked Hannah so it was stupid.
Miley: Oh...
Jake: But now that we've broken up, maybe I WILL go out with Hannah!
Miley: Jake, no, I -
Jake: Miley, you wanted to break up with me and that shows that you don't trust me so I'm sorry but now I really do thik we should break up. Goodbye! *hangs up*
Miley: But-ughhh *changes the line* LILLY!!!!!!
Lilly: What? What happened?
Miley: Jake wasn't gonna break up with me!
Lilly: What?!
Miley: He wasn't but now because of YOU we are broken up!
Lilly: Well, you told me he WAS gonna break up with you!
Miley: So what? I didn't ask you for advice!
Lilly: I think it's both our faults.
Miley: Yeah, you're right. What should I do?
Lilly: So now you want advice?
Miley: Yes, please.
Lilly: Ok, you have to make him jealous by pretending to go out with another guy.
Miley: Good idea, but who do you think would possibly go along with this ?
Lilly: I can only think of one person right now.
Miley: Who is it?
Lilly: Oliver.
Hope you like it! Comment please!
HannahMontanaX3
03-10-2007, 03:09 PM
More!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 03:13 PM
thanx but I need a few more comments!
natwolfflove1
03-10-2007, 04:05 PM
o-m-g more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
MileyHannahFan
03-11-2007, 05:42 AM
good!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-11-2007, 06:04 AM
Thank you for commenting!
Chapter 6: Do me a favor
Miley: Oliver....HA! I almost believed you!
Lilly: I'm serious.
Miley: ....Alright, fine.
Lilly: Just...do me a favor?
Miley: What is it?
Lilly: You're not really gonna start to go out with Oliver are you?
Miley: No. Just pretend. Why?
Lilly: Uh...*clears throat* No reason.
Miley: Oh....my....god! You like Oliver????!!!!
Lilly: No?
Miley: Lilly, you can tell me the truth.
Lilly: Alright, fine, I do. But you can't tell him..or go out with him.
Miley: Don't worry, that won't happen. I want to be with Jake, not Oliver.
Lilly: Thanks.
*Next day at school*
*Miley tells Oliver her plan*
Oliver: What?!
Miley: Come on, Oliver! Please?
Oliver: But I can't go out with you when I like Lilly! Uh...I mean....*sighs* I got nothin'.
*Lilly over hears him and goes over to them*
Lilly: You like me?
*Oliver turns around*
Oliver:*embarassed* Uh...yeah?
*Lilly kisses Oliver*
Oliver: What was that?
Lilly: Something to show that I like you too.
Miley: Ok, now that you 2 are a couple, can we get back to my problem?
Oliver: Ok, Miley, I'll help you just as long as *looks at Lilly* you're ok with it.
Lilly: Uh...yeah,yeah..as long as it's pretend.
Miley:It is.
*Just then Jake walks in with his arm around a very familiar girl*
Miley: Is that...?
Lilly: It can't be!
Oliver: But it is!
Hope you like it!! Comment!!
MileyHannahFan
03-11-2007, 06:05 AM
awesome!!!!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-11-2007, 07:58 AM
thanks again! here's the next chapter:
Chapter 7: Trust
Miley, Lilly, and Oliver: BECCA??!!
Miley: Jake and Becca?! That's like Jackson and me, only wierder!
Lilly: *Checks her watch* Guys we better get to class.
*Miley, Lilly and Oliver go to class*
*After school, at the beach*
*Lilly's cell phone rings*
Lilly: *answers* Hello? *pause* Can't I stay a bit more? *pause* Fine. *Hangs up* Sorry guys, I gotta go. *Does a quick peck on the cheek with Oliver* *leaves*
Miley: *See's Jake coming* Oh my god! Oliver, Jake's coming here! Kiss me!
Oliver: What? What about Lilly?
Miley: If she trusts us, she'll understand.
Oliver: Ok....*kisses Miley*
*Jake see's them*
Jake: Oh, my god!
*While that was happening, Lilly was heading home*
Lilly: Darn! I forgot my skateboard! I better go get it. *turns around and goes back to the beach*
*Lilly gets to the beach and see's Miley and Oliver kissing. Speechless*
Hope you guys enjoyed it! Comment please! sorry it was a bit short!
cupcake
03-11-2007, 10:14 AM
Oh,my god!!!
Poor Lilly!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-12-2007, 02:48 PM
Chapter 8: Jealous Much?
*Lilly gets upset and runs home*
*Back to where Jake is*
Jake: Uh...ok, just play it cool. *continues to go to the beach*
*Miley and Oliver stop kissing*
Miley: Do you think he saw?
Oliver: The only way he couldn't have seen is if he's blind.
*Jake gets to the beach*
Jake: Hey guys!
Miley: Hi, Jake. What are you doing here?
Jake: Uh.... getting ready for my date with Becca.*lying*
Miley: At the beach?
Jake: Uh...yeah.
Miley: Right. See you guys tomorrow. Bye.*leaves*
Jake: *After Miley left* Yo, Oken! What the heck are you doing?! (he said "heck" before in good golly miss dolly and he's just really mad)
Oliver: I never knew standing was against the law!
Jake: I don't mean that! Why are you going out with Miley?!
Oliver: Cause I want to! Duh! Bye.*leaves*
*later*
*Lilly calls Oliver*
Oliver: *answers* Hello?
Lilly: How could you?!
Oliver: What?
Lilly: I should have never trusted you!
Oliver: What are you talking about?
Lilly: You kissed Miley!
Oliver: Oh, that. Miley saw Jake -
Lilly: In your mouth??!!
Oliver: No, he was heading towards us and Miley wanted to make him jealous.
Lilly: So you kissed?! You completely crossed the line! We're through! *hangs up*
*Lilly calls Jake*
Jake: *answers* Hello?
Lilly: Jake, are you actually dating Becca? Tell me the truth.
Jake: *sigh* No, I'm just trying to make Miley jealous.
Lilly: How about I help you?
please comment!!!
thobi123
03-12-2007, 04:54 PM
ohh that is the best one i ve ever read
~Miley~Rox~
03-12-2007, 05:25 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
natwolfflove1
03-12-2007, 05:30 PM
more! its so good!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-12-2007, 06:11 PM
plz write more....i cant wait *subscribing!*
xxmileyluverxx1234xx
03-12-2007, 06:52 PM
ohmygod... more more more more MORE
xxmileyluverxx1234xx
03-12-2007, 07:10 PM
more more more more OMG MORE
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-13-2007, 03:28 PM
omg! ok since i got so many comments i'll post 5 chapters! here you go!
Chapter 9: New couple: Lilly and Jake
Jake: What do you mean?
Lilly: Ok, so Miley and Oliver were only pretending to go out to make you jealous but Oliver was REALLY going out with me but then I saw them kissing so we broke up. Anyway, let's pretend to go out to make them jealous.
Jake: Ok...but Miley and Oliver aren't actually going out?
Lilly: Nope. So here's the deal. Tomorrow, we're gonna hang out together and you're gonna have your arm around me. Got it?
Jake: Got it. Bye. *hangs up*
Lilly: Bye. *hangs up*
*Miley calls Oliver*
Oliver: *answers* Hello?
Miley: Hey Oliver.
Oliver: Miley! Lilly thinks that we're ACTUALLY going out!
Miley: What?! Why would she think that?
Oliver: Cause she saw us kissing!
Miley: Oh no! I'm gonna call her and clear things up. Bye. *hangs up*
Oliver: Bye. *hangs up*
*Miley calls Lilly*
Lilly: *answers* Hello?
Miley. Lilly! Oliver and I aren't actually going out!
Lilly: Well that's too bad, cause Jake and I are!
Miley: Excuse me?
Lilly: Jake and I are going out.
Miley: Lilly, how can you betray me?!
Lilly: Oh, yu wanna talk about betrayal?! You and Oliver kissed!
Miley: It was pretend!
Lilly: Why should I believe you?
Miley: Because I'm your best friend!
Lilly: Some best friend you are, kissing my ex-boyfriend while we were still together!
Miley: *gets really mad* You know what? Fine! Maybe Oliver and I WILL go out!
Chapter 10: The Jealousy Game
*Miley calls Oliver*
Miley: Oliver! We have to pretend to go out!
Oliver: We already are!
Miley: Yeah, but this time, Lilly doesn't know it's pretend.
Oliver: So she'll be jealous?
Miley: I think so. She's going out with Jake though.
Oliver: WHAT?! No, she can't be!
Miley: She is!
Oliver: Ok, we'll do it.
*Next day at school*
*Miley and Oliver are together on one side of the hall while Lilly and Jake are on the other side together*
* They're all "spying" on eachother*
*Jake puts his arm around Lilly*
Miley: *see's that* Quick, Oliver! Put your arm around me!
*Oliver puts his arm around Miley*
*Jake laughs*
Lilly: What's so funny?
Jake: I can't believe you like Oliver.
Lilly: Well he may be a bit of a dork at times but he's really sweet.
Jake: Oh.
Lilly: I really like him. That's the way Miley feels about you.
Jake: Who?
Lilly: Miley!
Jake: Oh, right. I like her alot too. *thinking* I think...
Chapter 11: Jake's Problem
*Miley and Oliver are at the beach*
Miley: I still don't believe it! Lilly and Jake?
Oliver: I know! Wait a minute! Maybe they're only pretending to go out! You know, to make us jealous.
Miley: Oliver, I can't believe YOU figured it out!
Oliver: Well I did.
Miley: I'll call Jake. *calls him*
Jake: *answers* Hello?
Miley: Jake! What is going on? Why are you trying to make me jealous?
Jake: What?
Miley: Why are you pretending to like Lilly?
Jake: I'm not! I mean, at first I was, but then I actually started to like her.
Miley: Oh, my god! Does she know?
Jake: I don't think so...
Miley: Ok, all games aside, lets be honest. I'm not really going out with Oliver and I've gotta know. Do you still like me?
Jake: Um....
Chapter 12: Prove it!
Jake: Can I take a raincheck on this?
Miley: No.
Jake: What?
Miley: No, you have to tell me now.
Jake: Ok, I still like you.
Miley: Well, then do you want to get back together?
Jake: But you don't trust me!
Miley: Yes I do!
Jake: Prove it!
Miley: Hmmm...ok, go to the Hannah Montana concert tonight and go talk to her backstage.
Jake: Why?
Miley:..um...She wants to talk to you about Zombie High.
Jake: Ok.
*later. Lilly is at the beach*
*Oliver is heading there*
Lilly: *thinking* What's HE doing here?
Oliver: Lilly, can I talk to you?
Lilly: Sure! But I won't be listening.
Oliver: Oh, come on Lilly! I'm not going out with Miley!
*Lilly's silent*
Oliver: Lilly, I told you it was just pretend! What can I do to prove it?
Lilly: You can stop pretending to go out with her.
Oliver: Well.....
Chapter 13: I think....
Oliver: Yeah, it's not a big deal.
Lilly: Ok, and for what it's worth, I'm sorry about acting jealous. I just really like you.
Oliver: I really like you to. *thinking* I think.
*After the Hannah Montana concert*
*Jake goes backstage*
Jake: Hey Hannah. Did you want to see me?
Hannah: Yeah, I need to tell you something cause you wanted me to prove to you that I trust you.
Jake: No, I wanted Miley to prove it.
Hannah: Same thing.
Jake: What do you mean?
Hannah: *sigh* I mean...*takes off wig* I'm Hannah Montana.
*Jake is speechless*
Wow! that was alot! comment please!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-13-2007, 03:49 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wright MORE...MORE!!!!!!! NEEDS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-14-2007, 09:14 AM
lol! I'll post more after I get a few more comments!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-14-2007, 02:19 PM
plz comment!!!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-14-2007, 04:09 PM
plz write more....i really want to know what happends! plz and thanx
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-14-2007, 04:26 PM
since ur really eager to find out, here:
Chapter 14: Promise
Jake: But...um...how?.....huh?
Miley: It's been me all along, Jake.
Jake: Oh, really?(that was sarcastic) Cause...WHAT?!
Miley: You have to promise not to tell anyone!
Jake:Uh...I'm just gonna.....go. *leaves*
Miley: Jake!
*at school*
*Lilly and Oliver are talking*
Oliver: Lilly, I think I need to tell you something
*Lilly's cell phone rings*
Lilly: Hold on *answers* Hello?
Miley: Lilly, I hope you're not mad at me cause I nee to tell you something.
Lilly: Nope, not anymore, cause Oliver and I are back together!
Miley: That's great! Anyway, I told Jake I was Hannah Montana!
Lilly: Oh, my god! What did he say?
Miley: Um, nothing really, he just sputtered.
Lilly: That's not good. Did he at least promise not to tell?
Miley: No, when I asked him not to tell, he just left.
Lilly: You have to make him promise soon! Before he can tell anybody!
I hope more ppl comment now!
ashes07
03-14-2007, 05:36 PM
ur soooo good! please i wont more more more more more more!!!!!! im so addicted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-15-2007, 02:38 PM
thank you!!
Chapter 15: Can you keep my secret?
Miley: I know, I'll talk to hilm, but right now I've gotta go. Bye. *hangs up*
Lilly: Bye. *hangs up*
Oliver: Now can I tell you?
*bell for class rings*
Lilly: I'm sure it can wait. Tell me after school.
*after school*
*Miley's at the beach*
*Miley calls jake*
Jake: *answers* Hello?
Miley: Jake, come to the beach right now.
Jake: ....ok.
*Jake arrives at the beach*
Miley: Jake, about last night...
Jake: Miley, I'll make my decision about keeping your secret, after you answer my question.
Miley: Ok, shoot.
Jake: Why did you wait until now to tell me?
Miley: I was about to tell you on Zombie High, but you misunderstood what I was trying to say!
Jake: Oh...
Miley: So can you keep my secret?
plz post comments!!!! I hope people like it! sorry it was short though!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-15-2007, 03:42 PM
write more plz!
thobi123
03-15-2007, 04:40 PM
write more u need to no wat happens next
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-15-2007, 04:51 PM
Chapter 16: Nice save by Miley
Jake: You're putting me on the spot again!
Miley: Cause this is serious stuff!
Jake: Ok, ok. I won't tell anyone. So you were Hannah on Zombie High when I told you I liked you?
Miley: Yup.
Jake: And when we were hosting the teen scene awards?
Miley: Yeah.
Jake: I can't believe I didn't figure it out!
Miley: I can. I mean..... I can believe how hard it was for you to not know the truth.
Jake: Nice save.
Miley: Thanks.
*While that was happening.....*
*Lilly and Oliver were heading to the beach*
Lilly: So what was it you wanted to tell me?
Oliver: Oh, right. I can't believe I'm saying this, but I think I like Miley. I'm sorry.
Lilly: WHAT?!
*at the beach*
Miley: So anyway, do you wanna get back together?
Jake: Um....
*All of a sudden, Jake and Miley see Lilly and Oliver heading towards them with Lilly yelling*
Miley: Quick, let's hide!
*Miley and Jake hide behind the counter at Rico's*
*Lilly and Oliver get to the beach*
Lilly: I can't believe it!
Oliver: I'm sorry, Lilly!
Lilly: Well, "sorry" ain't gonna cut it!
Oliver: Hey, it's not my fault I started to like Miley!
*Miley hears Oliver and faints*
*Jake has a confused look on his face*
hannahmontanarulz55
03-15-2007, 05:31 PM
plz write more!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-16-2007, 02:26 PM
Chapter 17: As more than a friend?
Oliver: If we didn't break up in the first place, it wouldn't have happened!
Lilly: Here's another break-up between you and me! *leaves*
Oliver: Lilly! *runs after her*
Jake: Miley! Wake up!
Miley: *Wakes up* You are gonna laugh so hard when you hear this! I had a dream that Oliver got a crush on me!
Jake: You know, that wasn't a dream....
Miley: Uh...Well, you really don't seem to care that he likes me.
Jake: Cause I like Lilly.
*Oliver is chasing Lilly*
*They reach Lilly's house*
Oliver: Lilly, I still like you!
Lilly: As more than a friend?
*Oliver is silent*
Lilly: Ughh.
*Lilly slams the door in his face*
Chapter 18: Where does Jackson fit?
*Oliver heads back to the beach and see's Jake and Miley*
Oliver: What are you guys doing here?
Jake: Well, Miley heard you like her and fainted.
Oliver: Oh no, you're gonna beat me up aren't you?
Jake: Nope, cause I like Lilly.
Oliver: You do?!
Miley: Uh...bye guys. *leaves*
Jake: So I think it goes like this: I like Lilly, Lilly likes you, you like Miley and Miley likes me.
Oliver: ...Where does Jackson fit into all of this?
*Miley gets to Lilly's house and rings the doorbell*
Lilly: *answers* What?
Miley: Lilly, I'm so sorry.
Lilly: About what?
Miley: You know, that Oliver likes me.
Lilly: Good, then I won't have to explain why I'm mad at you.
Miley: Hey, you can't be mad at me, cause Jake likes you!
Lilly: He does? Well his timing's awful...
Miley: We've gotta get things back to normal!
Lilly: Wait, I never said I didn't want to date Jake!
ashes07
03-16-2007, 02:51 PM
more more more morer more
ashes07
03-16-2007, 02:52 PM
please?!?!! lol
ashes07
03-16-2007, 03:33 PM
omg omg omg!!! i have to kno what lilly will say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-16-2007, 03:43 PM
Chapter 19: The worst best friend
Miley: You want to date Jake?!
Lilly: Sure! Why not?
Miley: Cause you don't really like him!
Lilly: How am I supposed to know that if I don't give him a chance?
Miley: That doesn't matter anyway cause he's with me!
Lilly: You guys got back togther?
Miley: *stops and thinks* .....no....
Lilly: So then I CAN go out with him!
Miley: You are the worst best friend if you're gonna go out with my ex-boyfriend!
Lilly: Hey! You started it!
Miley: How did I start it?!
Lilly: You kissed my ex-boyfriend while we were still together!
Miley: IT WAS PRETEND!!!!
Lilly: Why don't you record it and then play it for me? That way you won't have to say it as much!
*Lilly's cellphone rings*
Lilly: *answers* Hello?
Jake: Lilly do you wanna go out with me?
Chapter 20: Lilly's decision
Lilly:...sure Jake! I'd love to go out with you!
Jake: Great! I'll pick you up at 6:00pm?
Lilly: Works for me! Bye! *hangs up*
Jake: Bye! *hangs up*
Miley: I can't believe you!
Lilly: Well you're gonna have to find a way to believe it cause Jake and I are going out tonight!
Miley: You're just doing it to make me jealous cause I like Jake.
Lilly: No, I'm not.
Miley: Ughh. *leaves*
*Oliver and Jake are still at the beach*
Oliver: So you and Lilly are going out tonight?
Jake: Yup.
Oliver: Should I ask Miley out?
Jake: If you think she's gonna say yes....
Oliver: Are you ok with it?
Jake: Of course!
Oliver: ok, I'll phone her. *phones Miley*
Miley: *answers* hello?
Oliver: Do you wanna go out with me?
Chapter 21: The Deal
Miley: um....*has 2 flashbacks*
Flashback 1
Lilly: Sure, Jake, I'd love to go out with you!
*End of flashback*
Flashback 2
Miley: You're just doing it to make me jealous cause I like Jake.
Lilly: No, I'm not.
*End of flashback*
Miley: Ok...
Oliver: You don't seem ok with it.
Miley: No, I want to.
Oliver: Movies at 7:00pm?
Miley: Sure. Bye. *hangs up*
Oliver: Bye. *hangs up*
Jake: So do we both have dates tonight or is it just me?
Oliver: It's both of us.
Jake: Really? She said yes to you?
Oliver: Yeah, is there a problem?
Jake: Nope, just a little surprised.
Oliver: Why?
Jake: Cause she said yes to you!
Oliver: Well, I don't understand why Lilly said yes to you either!
Jake: Ok, fine! Let's see who can kiss their date first! Deal?
Oliver: Deal.
ashes07
03-16-2007, 03:50 PM
haha funny!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-16-2007, 04:04 PM
omg.....u really have to continue this!!!!! i want to see who wins! and fyi...OLIVER IS SOOOOO MINE! lol...jk...hes soooo hot!
ashes07
03-16-2007, 04:07 PM
omg.....u really have to continue this!!!!! i want to see who wins! and fyi...OLIVER IS SOOOOO MINE! lol...jk...hes soooo hot!
lol
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-17-2007, 09:46 AM
Chapter 22: Date Night
*at 6:00pm*
*Jake arrives at Lilly's house*
Lilly: So where are we going?
Jake: I know this great place in Las Vegas.
Lilly: Las Vegas?
Jake: Yeah, we're gonna fly there in my private jet.
Lilly: Cool!
*At 7:00pm*
*Miley arrives at the movies and Oliver's already there*
Oliver: Hey, Miley.
Miley: Hey, Oliver.
Oliver: Do you want popcorn or anything?
Miley: Popcorn, please.
*They get popcorn and then go inside to see the movie*
*Oliver starts leaning in to kiss Miley....*
*Miley quickly shoves some popcorn in her mouth*
*Setting: Restaurant in Las Vegas*
Jake: I'm glad you agreed to go out with me.
Lilly: I know! I mean, we're in Las Vegas!!!
*Jake starts leaning in to kiss Lilly...*
Chapter 23: Creating Distractions
*Lilly quickly takes out her lip gloss and starts putting it on*
*Setting: Movie theatre*
*End of movie*
Oliver: That was a good movie.
Miley: Yeah, it was.
*Oliver starts leaning in again to kiss Miley...*
Miley: *Drops her bracelet on purpose* Whoops! *kneels down and picks it up* Well it's getting late, I should go. Bye. *leaves*
Oliver: Bye...*leaves and goes to the beach*
*Setting: Malibu, Jake and Lilly are getting off the jet*
Lilly: What a great restaurant!
Jake: Told you it was good.
*Jake starts leaning in to kiss Lilly....*
Lilly: *kneels down and pretends to tie her shoe(it wasn't untied)* Oh, my god, it's almost my curfew!*lying* Bye! *leaves*
*Jake goes to the beach*
Jake: What are you doing here?
Oliver: Not being miserable about my date if that's what you think.
Jake: Right, so did you kiss Miley?
Oliver: ....no. Did you kiss Lilly?
Jake: Yeah! *lying, obviously*
hannahmontanarulz55
03-17-2007, 09:54 AM
omg....i would totally kiss oliver! what was miley thinking lol...anyway...please WRITE MORE!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-17-2007, 10:13 AM
omg....i would totally kiss oliver! what was miley thinking lol...anyway...please WRITE MORE!
lol, it's just that in this case, miley likes oliver as a friend.....remember in torn between 2 hannahs when oliver was like "both of you kiss me" and miley was like "ewww".
hannahmontanarulz55
03-17-2007, 10:19 AM
lol, it's just that in this case, miley likes oliver as a friend.....remember in torn between 2 hannahs when oliver was like "both of you kiss me" and miley was like "ewww".
oh yea i remember that....lol
ashes07
03-17-2007, 05:30 PM
omg its getting soooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!!!! i ♥ ur fanfiction lol!
HannahMontanaX3
03-17-2007, 07:32 PM
MORE its amazing
ashes07
03-17-2007, 11:03 PM
what she said^^^^^^^^^^^ please more!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-18-2007, 07:01 AM
thanks so much! here's 4 chapters!
Chapter 24: Truth Revealed
Oliver: You kissed?!
Jake: Yeah, I'm gonna go, bye. *leaves*
Oliver: There is no way. *phones Lilly*
Lilly: *answers* Hello?
Oliver: Did Jake kiss you?
Lilly: No....why do you care?
Oliver: I knew it! He was just trying to win!
Lilly: Win what?
Oliver: Uh....nothing. Bye. *hangs up*
Lilly:...Something's not right.
*The next day at school*
*Lilly goes to Miley*
Lilly: Hey.
Miley: Hey, let's put our arguments aside for a second cause I need to talk to you. How'd your date go?
Lilly: Eh....ok. The wierd thing was Jake kept trying to kiss me.
Miley: How wierd! Oliver kept trying to kiss me!
Lilly: You know, Oliver phoned me and said that Jake was trying to win something!
Miley: You don't think they were trying to see who can kiss their date first do you?
Lilly: They were using us!
Chapter 25: Feelings Realised
*After school*
Oliver: You didn't kiss Lilly!
Jake: Yes I did!
Oliver: No you didn't! I asked her!
Jake: Darn! That's exactly why you shouldn't lie! Why do you care anyway?
Oliver: *realises he still likes Lilly* Uh.... I don't care!
Jake: You don't like Miley! You like Lilly! Whew!
Oliver: ..ok, fine! But why are you so relieved?
Jake: *Realises he still likes Miley* Because...
Oliver: You like Miley!
Jake: Yeah, ok.
Oliver: This is so complicated!
Jake: Well, while you figure it out, I'm gonna go get back together with Miley.
Oliver: I'm gonna go get back together with Lilly.
*Jake and Oliver leave with high hopes....*
Chapter 26: Fights
*Jake gets to Miley's house*
Miley: *answers* What?
Jake: Miley, I like you. Just you, not Lilly.
Miley: ....So?
Jake: So I was hoping you would forgive me....
Miley: *laughs* Yeah, right! First you break up with me for Hannah, then you don't want to get back together with me for Lilly! And then you realise that you don't like them! You used Lilly anyway!
Jake: What?
Miley: You were trying to win! Does that ring a bell?
Jake: How did you know?!
Miley: Oliver spilled the beans!
Jake: But that was just a stupid little bet!
Miley: You know what's stupid? Me even listening to you right now!
Jake: But-
Miley: BYE! *closes the door*
*Oliver gets to Lilly's house*
Lilly: *answers* What do you want?
Oliver: You.
Lilly: Excuse me?
Oliver: I'm so sorry about everything...I don't think I actually liked Miley.
Lilly: So we broke up so you could go out with a girl you never really liked?
Oliver: Well when you put it THAT way, it sounds bad but-
*Lilly slams the door in his face....once again*
Chapter 27: Mystery Item
*Next day*
*Miley and Lilly are at the beach*
Miley: So what happened yesterday?
Lilly: Well, I yelled at Oliver. I think he wanted to get back together.
Miley: Same thing happened with me and Jake!
Lilly: Yeah, but at least you don't want to get back together with Jake.
Miley: You want to get back together with Oliver?
Lilly: ...yeah. I mean I know I shouldn't, at least not right now, but I don't know.. I miss him.
Miley: If you get back together with him this fast he'll think that he can break up with you whenever he wants and when he wants to get back together you won't say no!
Lilly: Ok...But what if he tries one more time?
Miley: Then just do what you think is right.
*Sarah comes to the beach*
Lilly: Hey, Sarah!
Miley: What's up?
Sarah: Nothing much. I'm just trying to solve a mystery.
*Just then Miley see's something in Sarah's hand, she REALLY didn't want to see......*
If you want, guess what the thing in Sarah's hand is! Anyway, comment!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-18-2007, 09:08 AM
write more plz!
HannahMontanaX3
03-18-2007, 09:35 AM
OMG more please
ashes07
03-19-2007, 12:11 AM
more i have to kno!!!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-19-2007, 02:22 PM
lol, here:
Chapter 28: She's Bald!
Miley: Sarah, what's that in your hand?
Sarah: Oh, when I snuck backstage at the Hannah Montana concert, I found her wig in her dressing room. Apparently...she's bald!
Miley: *thinking* Whew!
Sarah: Or....Hannah Montana has another identity!
*Miley looks at Lilly with a "do something" look on her face*
Lilly: Uh...that's mine!
Sarah: *in disbelief* You're Hannah Montana?
Lilly: Just for Halloween...
Sarah: No, you were a witch.
Lilly: I meant the year before.
Sarah: But Hannah wasn't a celebrity then.
Lilly: Are you ACTUALLY a detective?!
Sarah: This wig is gonna stay with me until I figure out who Hannah is! *leaves*
Miley: Oh, no! My life's gonna get ruined!
Chapter 29: Pay Attention!
Lilly: No, Miley, we'll get the wig back! I promise!
*Oliver is at his house*
Oliver: *thinking* I am actually sorry! What should I do? I really do want to get back together with her! I'll try one more time....
*Oliver goes to the beach and see's Lilly and Miley and runs into Becca*
Becca: Oliver?
Oliver: What? Oh, hey, Becca.
Becca: I was hoping I'd find you. I really miss you.
Oliver:*Not paying attention* Yeah, sure.
Becca: Do you miss me?
Oliver: Yeah, sure.*still not paying attention*
Becca: I was hoping you'd say that...*kisses Oliver*
*While that was happening...*
Miley: We need to come up with a plan.
Lilly: I know! I think- *see's Becca and Oliver kissing* Not again!
Chapter 30: Back with Becca?
*Lilly goes to Oliver*
Lilly: So, I guess you're back together with Becca.
Becca: Yeah. Got a problem?
Lilly: *gives Becca a dirty look* Look's like it doesn't bother you ONE bit that we've broken up! *leaves*
Oliver: Lilly, wait!
Becca: What are you doing?!
Oliver: Trying to get back together with Lilly.....
Becca: But you're with me!
Oliver: No I'm not!
Becca: But you said you missed me!
Oliver: I guess I wasn't paying attention. *tries to leave*
Becca: Are you seriously chosing her over me?!
Oliver: Uh, yeah! Bye, Becca! *leaves*
Becca: Yeah, well...we're through!
*Oliver keeps running after Lilly...*
Hope you guys like it! comment please!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-19-2007, 03:50 PM
more plz
miji.hannahmontana
03-19-2007, 05:42 PM
Pleaaaaaaase Moooore
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-20-2007, 02:13 PM
Chapter 31: You still like me!
*Oliver catches up with Lilly*
Oliver: Lilly!
Lilly: What?!
Oliver: I'm not with Becca!
Lilly: It sure looked like it!
Oliver: I wasn't paying attention! Why do you care so much anyway? You were the one that didn't want to get back together!
Lilly: Yeah, because I was mad at you, not because I didn't like you!
Oliver: You still like me?
*Lilly's silent*
Oliver: You still like me!
Lilly: Yeah, so what? You still like me!
*Oliver kisses Lilly*
Oliver: I am REALLY sorry and I want to gte back together with you. Can you forgive me?
*Lilly has a flashback*
Flashback
Lilly: Right...but what if he tries one more time?
Miley: Then just do what you think is right.
*End of flashback*
Lilly: Um...
Chapter 32: A Good Plan
Lilly: Let's put it this way...
*Lilly kisses Oliver*
Lilly: This is it! We're not breaking up again!....Oh, my god!
Oliver: What?
Lilly: I forgot! We've got to come up with a plan! Sarah found Hannah Montana's wig and she's gonna try to find out Miley's secret!
Oliver: Ok, let's head back to the beach.
*Lilly and Oliver go to the beach*
*Miley is still there slumped in a chair*
Miley: So are you guys back together?
Lilly: Yup!
Miley: Ok, now back to my problem.
Lilly: Right.
Oliver: I've got a plan!
Miley and Lilly: What?
Oliver: Tomorrow, after school Sarah reads to the blind, so while she's off doing that, we'll sneak into Sarah's bedroom and get the wig!
Miley: Great plan!
*Sarah comes over*
Sarah: I found out who Hannah Montana is....
Please comment!!!
HannahMontanaX3
03-20-2007, 05:49 PM
MORE! this is so awsome
hannahmontanarulz55
03-20-2007, 07:04 PM
more
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-21-2007, 07:02 AM
Chapter 33: Hannah is....
Miley: You did?
Lilly: Who is it?
Oliver: *confused* Huh?
Sarah: It's her!*points at Miley*
Miley: Me? No, that's ridiculous! I'm not Hannah Montana!
Sarah: Behind you!
*Miley, Lilly and Oliver turn around*
Miley, Lilly and Oliver: ASHLEY?!
Miley: She can't even sing though! I mean...sure, it's Ashley.
Lilly: How do you know?
Sarah: A good detective doesn't say until the truth is revealed...
Oliver: Ok...
Sarah: And tonight at the Hannah Montana CD signing, the truth WILL be revealed! *leaves*
Miley: This is getting so bad!
Lilly: No, it's ok, I know what you can do!
Miley: What?!
Lilly: ----------!
Chapter 34: CD signing date
*Jake is at home*
*His phone rings*
Jake: *answers* Hello?
Rachel: Hey, Jakie!
Jake: Rachel?
Rachel: Yeah, listen, I'm sorry about you're break-up.
Jake: Don't be..
Rachel: I'm not.
Jake: Huh?
Rachel: Listen, I am a HUGE Hannah Montana fan, and there's a CD signing tonight! Do you wanna go with me?
Jake: Uhh..*thinking* Oh, right! Miley's Hannah! If I go, it'll make her jealous...*not thinking* Sure. See ya there. Bye.
Rachel: Jake, wait!
Jake: What?
Rachel: I'm glad we're back together. I thought you lost your mind when you were dating Miley.
Jake: Hey! Don't say anything mean about Miley!
Rachel: Ok, ok! Whatever you say, Jake.
Jake: Bye. *hangs up*
Rachel: Bye. *hangs up* I am going to be SO popular when I am one using him! *evil laugh*
*What Rachel didn't know though was that someone was spying on her....*
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-21-2007, 01:16 PM
plz comment!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-21-2007, 03:44 PM
more plz!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-21-2007, 04:01 PM
Chapter 35: Is that her plan?
*Miley, Lilly and Oliver are at Miley's house helping Miley get ready for the CD signing*
Miley: Ok, I just need my wig. And the hair clips to make sure it stays on my head.
Lilly: Right. *hands her the wig and hair clips*
Oliver: I still don't understand how you know that she's going to try to pull your wig off.
Lilly: It's pretty obvious, Oliver.
Miley: *Finishes attatching the wig* There! Now nothing will happen when Sarah tries to pull my wig off! *thinking* Hopefully...
Lilly: Unless that's NOT her plan....
Miley: Let's just hope it is...
*At the CD signing later that night*
Hannah fan: Hannah, we love you!
Hannah: I love you guys too!
*Hannah see's Jake and Rachel*
Hannah: Oh, great! He's probably just trying to make me jealous.
*Roxy hears her*
Roxy: I don't know about him, but she's just using him to be popular.
Lola: How do you know?
Roxy: I had my eyes on her! She looked really suspicious!
Hannah: Oh, I just hope Jake's not back together with her!
*Hannah's still signing*
Hannah fan 2: Thank you, Hannah!
*Next in line is Sarah*
Hannah: Hi, what's your name?
Sarah: Sarah.
Hannah: Ok. *autographs a picture* Here you go!
Sarah: You should've signed Ashley Dewitt, not Hannah Montana.
Hannah: Why?
Sarah: Because, you're Ashley! *Pulls Hannah's wig....*
plz comment!!!
miji.hannahmontana
03-21-2007, 04:13 PM
omg omg omg omg continue plzzzzzz
Miley_Montana_Gal
03-21-2007, 05:26 PM
Yeah, the moment I check my email 2 c you've posted more, you leave me hanging lol
hannahmontanarulz55
03-21-2007, 06:32 PM
more, more, more PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!1
thobi123
03-21-2007, 06:54 PM
write more needz to know
niiro_tatsu
03-21-2007, 10:10 PM
More!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-22-2007, 02:05 PM
lol, here, 3 more chapters:
Chapter 36: I've gotta do something...
*Luckily, the wig stayed on*
*Sarah tugs it one more time*
Sarah: Hey! It's not coming off!
Hannah: You actually thought this was a wig?!
Sarah: Everyone, help me pull it off!
Security guy: Ok, that's enough, miss. *takes Sarah away*
Sarah: But it's a wig! *disappears into the crowd*
*Rachel and Jake are next in line*
Rachel: Hi Hannah! Can you autograph this for me?
Hannah: Sure. *autographs a picture*
Jake: Nice to see you again.....Hannah.
Hannah: *pretending she forgot* Hi....Jack?
Jake: It's Jake.
Hannah: Oh, right.
Rachel: Thank you so much! *walks off* Jake! Come! I won't get on tv without you!
*Jake quickly glances at Hannah, then leaves*
Hannah: She really is using him!
Lola: What are you gonna do?
Hannah: I don't know, but I've gotta do something....
Chapter 37: Second chances
*Next day at school*
*Miley is watching Rachel*
*A bunch of people are around Rachel*
Person: So how'd you two get back together?
Rachel: Well, Jake called me and told me that life is unbearable without me and he begged me to get back together with him. Relationships deserve second chances, so I said yes. *lying, obviously*
*"Relationships deserve second chances" lingered in Miley's head*
*Jake walked into the school*
*Everyone ran over to Jake*
Rachel: Jake! They're not paying attention to me now!
Jake: Then come over here!
*Lilly and Oliver go over to Miley*
Miley: I can't believe he doesn't realise she's using him! What do you think I should do?
Lilly: I don't know....You could try telling him...
Miley: Do you think he'd believe me?
Oliver: Probably not, but you should try.
Miley: Ok! I'll tell him after school, although he's probably going to think I'm just trying to break them up.
Oliver: But if he believes you....
Lilly: You guys might get back together!
Chapter 38: Just Friends
Miley: Yeah...I think.....I think I do want to get back together with him!
Lilly: Yay!
*after school*
*Miley spots Jake at the beach*
Miley: Hey, Jake.
Jake: It's Jack.
*Miley has a confused look on her face*
Jake: Just kidding. You called me Jack yesterday....
Miley: Right. Sorry about that.
Jake: What's up?
Miley: I really hope you believe me....Rachel's just using you to be popular.
Jake: Really? How'd you know?
Miley: It's complicated so let's just say I'm sure it's true.
Jake: Oh, thanks. I guess I'll break up with her.
Miley: You believe me?
Jake: Yeah, I mean, we're friends, right?
Miley: Friends?
Jake: Yeah, I figured we should be friends even though we're broken up. Are you ok with it?
Miley: ....yeah. *lying*
*Then, without saying goodbye to Jake, Miley ran home and lied on her bed crying...*
I hope you guys like it! Comment, please!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-22-2007, 04:17 PM
more plz!
ashes07
03-23-2007, 12:01 AM
omg more please!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-23-2007, 02:37 PM
2 more chapters:
Chapter 39: No more nice Jake
*Setting: the beach*
*Jake is still there, after Miley left*
*Rachel see's Jake*
Rachel: Hey Jakie!
Jake: It's Jake.
Rachel: But Jakie is more cute!
Jake: You know what? I honestly don't care!
Rachel: Are you ok?
Jake: No. You've been using me!
Rachel: What are you talking about? *pretending she doesn't know*
Jake: You've been using me to be popular!
Rachel: What are you saying?
Jake: I'm saying, we're through.
Rachel: Who told you this nonsense?
Jake: No one you should know about.
Rachel: It was Miley, wasn't it?
Jake: No. *lying*
Rachel: You're probably just trying to get back together with her!
Jake: No I'm not!
Rachel: Hmph! *leaves* I am SO gonna get back at Miley...*evil laugh*
Chapter 40: No Smiley Miley
*Miley's at home, crying*
*Doorbell rings*
*Miley answers*
Lilly: Hey. How'd it go?
*Miley just keeps crying*
Lilly: I'm gonna go with not good.
Miley: *sniff* Jake just wants to be friends.
Lilly: Oh, no! Miley, I'm so sorry! Did he at least break up with Rachel?
Miley: I think so. He said he would.
Lilly: Miley....this can't be it for you and Jake! You guys belong together!
Miley: I thought so too, but I guess life doesn't always turn out right.
Lilly: Try telling Jake how you feel.
Miley: I can't! He's over me! It's too late.
Lilly: It's never too late.
Miley: Right now it is.
Lilly: *looks at her watch* Ughh. I'm gonna be late for dinner. I'm sorry, Miley. I've gotta go. *leaves*
*All of a sudden everything goes black and Miley passes out...*
Comment please! And I hope you guys like it!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-23-2007, 03:41 PM
oh my goodness...you need to write more!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-23-2007, 03:56 PM
Chapter 41: Disappearance
*Miley wakes up*
Miley: Where am I?
Rachel: I'd expect someone who loves the mall as much as you, to recognize it.
Miley: Rachel?! What are you doing?
Rachel: Getting revenge.
Miley: Why? What did I ever do to you?
Rachel: You got Jake to break up with me! You still want him!
Miley: Not anymore! *lying*
*Lilly's going back to Miley's house after dinner*
*Lilly rings the doorbell*
*Robby answers*
Robby: Hey, Lilly. What are you doing?
Lilly: Hi Mr. Stewart. Is Miley here?
Robby: No...
Lilly: Oh...ok thanks.
*Robby closes the door*
Lilly: Maybe she's with Jake....*calls Jake*
Jake: *answers* Hello?
Lilly: Jake? Is Miley with you?
Jake: No.
Lilly: That's strange. She disappeared!
Jake: Wait, does she have her cell phone with her?
Lilly: All the time.
Jake: Ok, hold on, I'll try calling her on my other phone. *long pause* Hm..no answer.
Lilly: ...wierd.
Jake: Wait, I'll check what calling zone she's in. *long pause* That's wierd, it looks like she's at the mall...
Lilly: But it's closed!
Jake: Exactly why I said it's wierd. I'm gonna go look for her. There was so much I wanted to say to her!
Lilly: Oooh, like what?
Jake: Well, for starters, I wanted to get back together with her.
Lilly: That's great! Go find Miley! Good luck! Bye! *hangs up*
Jake: Bye. *hangs up*
*Jake goes to the mall, hoping he'll find Miley.....*
Hpoe you like! comment!!!:57:
hannahmontanarulz55
03-23-2007, 04:05 PM
more plz!
sar522
03-23-2007, 06:05 PM
that wuz good!!!
thobi123
03-23-2007, 06:44 PM
if this was a show everybady wud watch it it so good
write more
sar522
03-23-2007, 10:12 PM
wow thats great
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-24-2007, 06:50 AM
ok, thank you so much!!!
Chapter 42: Lying Hearts
Miley: Whatever, I'm gonna go.
Rachel: You can't! You're tied up! I'm gonna go!
Miley:, And you're just gonna leave me here?!
Rachel: Yeah! Toodles! *leaves*
Miley: Ughh...
*Jake gets inside the mall*
Jake: Where is Miley.....?
*All of a sudden, Jake see's Rachel*
Jake: *thinking* I better hide. *hides behind a fountain* I bet she's behind Miley's disappearence. I'll wait until she leaves....
*Rachel leaves*
Jake: I'll just go the way Rachel came...
*Jake see's Miley*
Jake: Miley!
Miley: Jake?
Jake: What happened? *As he unties her*
Miley: Rachel tied me up. I think she thinks you broke up with her to get back together with me.
Jake: Yeah, probably. *thinking* I should tell her...*not thinking* Miley, I-
Miley: Thanks for helping me Jake. I'm really glad we're friends and nothing more. *lying*
Jake: ..me too. *lying*
Chapter 43: The worst part
*Next day*
*Lilly and Oliver are at Lilly's house*
Oliver: Where were you yesterday? I came by and you weren't here.
Lilly: Miley got kidnapped and I told Jake and he went to look for her.
Oliver: Wow, is she ok now?
Lilly: I think...I'll call her. *calls Miley*
Miley: *answers* Hello?
Lilly: Hey Miley. What happened to you yesterday?
Miley: Rachel kidnapped me and tied me up at the mall and then just left me there!
Lilly: I always knew she was evil!
Miley: That's not the worst part.
Lilly: What's the worst part?
Miley: Jake made it prett clear he doesn't want to get back together with me.
Lilly: Yes he does!
Miley: What? No he doesn't!
Lilly: He told me!
Miley: I'm not buying it unless I hear it from Jake, myself.
Lilly: Ok...*gets an idea*
Miley: See ya. Bye. *hangs up*
Lilly: Bye! *hangs up*
Oliver: So...?
Lilly: Jake and Miley both want to get back together but they're afraid to admit it to eachother, so we've gotta help them!
Chapter 44: No and No
Oliver: Ok! So what are we gonna do?
Lilly: Ok, um...tomorrow, you try to convince Jake to tell Miley, and I'll try to convince Miley.
Oliver: I hope it works.....
*Next day at school*
Lilly: Miley, tell Jake how you feel!
Miley: Why? He doesn't fell the same way anymore!
Lilly: Like I told you yesterday: Yes he does!!!
Miley: And like I told you yesterday: I'm not buying it!!
Lilly: Oh, come on! Tell him!
*Oliver's talking to Jake*
Oliver: Jake, try telling Miley one more time!
Jake: I already did try! She said she's glad we're friends!
Oliver: She was lying!
Jake: How do you know?
Oliver: Because, Lilly told me she likes you and Miley told her!
Jake: Sounds like a rumor.
Oliver: Just tell her!
Miley and Jake: *to Lilly and Oliver* NO!
Chapter 45: Moving on
Lilly: So what are you gonna do? Just wait around?
Miley: Uh...no. I'm gonna move on!
Lilly: You can't!
Miley: Yes I can! I need to get over Jake!
*Oliver and Jake are still talking*
Oliver: Fine. I guess I can't convince you. Although you are making a big mistake.
Jake: No I'm not! There are plenty of girls for me and plenty of guys for Miley.
Oliver: Wrong! Again!
Jake: About what?
Oliver: The only girl for you is Miley!
Jake: You actually believe that?
Oliver: Yeah! Now go tell her!
Jake: Ok...*starts walking over to Miley..*
*All of a sudden, Troy, (from Schooly Bully) goes over to Miley*
Miley: *dreamy way* Hi, Troy.
Troy: Hey, Miley. I was just wondering, do you want to go out with me?
*Jake has a very disappointed look on his face*
Plz comment!!!
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-24-2007, 03:30 PM
plz comment!!!
Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-24-2007, 08:03 PM
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ashes07
03-24-2007, 09:54 PM
please more! ur good!
flower1
03-24-2007, 10:17 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 Write More!
HannahMontanaX3
03-25-2007, 12:15 AM
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SmileyMiley11
03-25-2007, 12:19 AM
Yes write more!!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-25-2007, 09:35 AM
more plz
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-25-2007, 01:06 PM
here you go!
Chapter 46: Two guys for Miley
Miley: *thinking* I NEED to move on *not thinking* Uh, sure Troy!
Troy: Great. Do you wanna go to a concert tonight? I have 2 tickets.
Miley: Sounds great!
Troy: I'll pick you up at 6:30?
Miley: Ok! See ya!
Troy: Bye. *leaves*
*As Troy leaves, Miley see's Jake behind him*
Miley: Jake, I -
Jake: Forget it, Miley. *walks away*
Oliver: Looks like there ARE plenty of guys for Miley....
*Lilly and Miley are talking*
Lilly: So you're moving on.
Miley: Yeah, and I'm not gonna let anything, which means Jake, spoil it.
Lilly: Didn't you see how disappointed he looked though?
Miley: Yeah, but-
Lilly: That means he still likes you.
Miley: No, Lilly. I'm going out with Troy tonight and I am moving on.
Lilly: Ok, ok.
Miley: I'll forget about Jake soon...*thinking* hopefully...
Chapter 47: A great date
*Miley's at home getting ready for her date*
Miley: *looks into the mirror* Good.
*Doorbell rings*
Miley: *answers* Hi, Troy!
Troy: Hey, Miley. Ready?
Miley: Yeah, let's go.
*Miley and Troy go to the concert*
Troy: Do you want a pretzel or something?
Miley: Sure, thanks.
*They get pretzels and then they go inside the ampitheatre*
Troy: If we go to a concert again, we should go to a Hannah Montana one. She's really good.
Miley: Uh.....that's ok, I don't really like her that much.
Troy: Ok, if you really don't like her....
*concert starts*
*after the concert*
Miley: That was SO much fun! Thanks for asking me out!
Troy: I'm glad I did. Do you want me to walk you home?
Miley: Sure.
*Troy and Miley get to Miley's house*
Miley: Well, I had a great time.
Troy: Me too. Do you want to go bowling tomorrow night?
Miley: Sure!
Troy: Great.....*kisses Miley* See ya tomorrow. *leaves*
*Miley goes inside her house*
*She ended up liking Troy alot....*
Chapter 48: Three Words
*Next day at school*
Lilly: Hey, Miley. How'd it go last night?
Miley: It actually went really well!
Oliver: So are you and Troy going out again?
Miley: Yep! Tonight, bowling!
Lilly: And you forgot about Jake?
Miley: Oh, my god! I did! I didn't think about him AT ALL last night!
Lilly: Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
Miley: It's definately a good thing! I've been trying to forget about him for quite a while....
Oliver: If you're sure it's a good thing....
Miley: It is. What do we have next?
Lilly: Geography, I think.
*Jake goes over to Miley*
Miley: Hey, Jake. Listen I'm sorry that-
Jake: Miley?
Miley: Yeah?
Jake: I love you.
I hope you guys like it! comment!!
ashes07
03-25-2007, 03:50 PM
omgsh!!!!!!!!!!! ur soooooooooooooo good! more please!!!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-25-2007, 06:57 PM
write more plz!
HannahMontanaX3
03-25-2007, 07:29 PM
more
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-26-2007, 01:47 PM
thanx!
Chapter 49: Too Late
Miley: You, what?! WHAT?!
Jake: I just had to tell you!
Miley: You're kinda late....
Jake: I know, but I needed to tell you.
Miley: How come you didn't tell me before?
Jake: I was afraid you wouldn't feel the same way!
Miley: Well, I did!
Jake: But, you said you were glad we were friends!
Miley: You started it, though! You said it first!
*End of school bell rings*
Miley: You know, I can't deal with this right now. I've got a date with Troy. Sorry, Jake but it's too late.
*Jake's left alone with Oliver and Lilly*
Oliver: Told you she liked you.
*Lilly gives him a look*
Oliver: *clears throat* Sorry.
Lilly: I'm sorry too. It looks like it's over.
Jake: No, It's not over. Not yet anyway.....
Chapter 50: Maybe it IS over.....
*Setting: Bowling Alley(the date)*
Troy: Miley, areyou ok?
Miley: Yeah. *she keeps thinking about Jake*
Troy: Are you sure?
Miley: Yeah, yeah, I'm fine. Sorry.
*Jake's at the beach*
Jake:*thinking* Maybe, I should go to Miley's house, wait for her to come back and try to win her back. Yeah, I'll do that! *leaves*
*Jake goes to Miley house*
*At the bowling alley*
Miley: *checks her watch* Oh, I better go. It's getting late.
Troy: Ok, do you want me to wlak you home again?
Miley: ....sure.
*They approach Miley's house*
*Jake sees them*
Jake: *thinking* Aww, man! I better hide! *hides behind a bush*
*Troy and Miley get to Miley's house*
Troy: Miley, I really like you.
Miley: *Her mind's still on Jake* I really like you too.
Troy: So, do you want to be my girlfriend?
Miley: Sure, Jake, I'd love to be your girlfriend!
Troy: JAKE?!
Jake: *thinking* Yes!
Comment plz!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-26-2007, 03:57 PM
more plz
miley rocks
03-26-2007, 10:27 PM
it asome keep on writing
Miley_Montana_Gal
03-27-2007, 12:23 PM
Luv it.
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-27-2007, 12:52 PM
Chapter 51: Slip of words?
Miley: I mean, Troy.
Troy: Jake?!
Miley: No! I said it subconciously! I'm sorry!
Troy: You sure?
Miley: Yeah, I'm over Jake. *partly lying*
Jake: *thinking* Maybe this wasn't such a good idea....
Troy: Ok, so I'll see you tomorrow at school?
Miley: Yeah, bye Troy.
Troy: Bye. *leaves*
*Miley watches him walk away while Jake's stands up*
*Miley turns around and see's Jake*
Miley: What are you doing?!
Jake: Nothing....
Miley: Why are you spying on me?
Jake: I wasn't! But I heard you say you wanna be my girlfriend.
Miley: I meant to say Troy. It was a subconcious slip of words.
Jake: You're not over me...Not completely anyway.....
Chapter 52: Too Well
Miley: Ok, maybe not completely, but I'm getting there, so good night. *goes inside her house*
Jake: So, she doesn't want to get back together.....
*next day at school*
Lilly: What happened yesterday?
Miley: Troy asked me to be his girlfriend and I said yes!
Lilly: No! No! No! This is all wrong! You're supposed to be with Jake!
Miley: Maybe, maybe not. Whatever's meant to be, will happen.
Lilly: I guess so...
*Troy goes over to Miley*
Troy: Miley, do you want to catch a movie tonight?
Miley: Sure..I don't think I have plans.
Troy: Say, 7:30pm?
Miley: Yeah.
*Troy leaves*
Lilly: Another date with him?!
Miley: Yeah! It's going well!
Lilly: Right...too well....
*That night, 5:30pm*
*Jake is at the beach*
*Jake hears voices coming, so he hides behind Rico's*
*Troy and Jeanie(from Schooly Bully) come to the beah*
Jeanie: Tomorrow? But I thought you're going out with Miley.
Troy: Uh...not anymore. She broke up with me. *lying*
Jeanie: Oh, ok, then I'd love to go out with you!
Jake: *thinking* He's cheating on Miley!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-27-2007, 03:52 PM
omg write more plz!
thobi123
03-27-2007, 05:56 PM
omg this is the best one i ever wrote
miley rocks
03-27-2007, 08:10 PM
right more its awesome
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-28-2007, 09:39 AM
thanks, guys!
Chapter 53: Cheater
*Next day at school*
*Jake goes to Miley*
Jake: How'd your date go last night?
Miley: Really well....why?
Jake: So you didn't break up with Troy?
Miley: No....why would I?
Jake: *thinking* Cause he's cheating on you! *not thinking* Just curious....
Miley: ...ok.
Jake: Anyway, see ya. *leaves*
*Jake see's Jeanie*
Jake: Hey, Jeanie, how's Miley doing since she broke up with Troy?
Jeanie: I don't know.
Jake: Go ask her.
Jeanie: Ok....*goes to Miley* Hey, Miley.
Miley: Hi, Jeanie.
Jeanie: So how are you doing? You know, since you broke up with Troy.
Miley: I didn't break up with Troy.
Jeanie: So he broke up with you?
Miley: No, we're still together.
Jeanie: But he asked me out! He told me that you broke up with him!
Miley: What??!!
Chapter 54: Planning dates
Jeanie: He's cheating on us!
Miley: You know what? He WON'T get away with this! Go out with him....to the movies. I'll hide up front and we'll just make up the rest of the plan as we go along...but let's just get him back!
Jeanie: Great idea! Let's just hope it'll work!
*Oliver and Lilly are talking*
Lilly: You know what I've realised? Since we've gotten together, we haven't been out on a date!
Oliver: You're right! Let's go the movies tonight!
Lilly: Ok!
*at the movies that night*
*Troy and Jeanie go in and sit down*
Troy: This movie is awesome! There is a BIG twist at the end!
Jeanie: How do you know?
Troy: *it was the same movie he saw with Miley* Uh.....my friend told me!
*Miley goes in after and sits in the front, making sure Troy doesn't see her*
*Lilly and Oliver go in*
Lilly: *to Jeanie* Excuse me,are these 2 seats taken?
*Jeanie turns around*
Jeanie: *recognizes Lilly* Uh, Troy can you get me some popcorn?
Troy: Sure. *leaves*
Lilly: You're here with Troy?!
Jeanie: Yeah, Miley and I realised he's cheating on us, so we're setting him up. Miley's down there. *points to Miley* Go to her, she'll explain it.
Lilly: Oh, ok.
*Lilly and Oliver go to Miley*
Miley: Hey guys! What are you doing here?
Oliver: We're on a date.
Lilly: Yeah, we saw Jeanie and she told us what's going on.
Miley: Oh.
Lilly: I knew it was going too well!
Oliver: And, I was right! Jake is the only guy for you!
Miley: I think you're right...
Chapter 55: Nothing can go wrong
*Troy comes back*
Troy: Here's your popcorn.
*Miley's watching them*
Jeanie: Thanks.
*Troy leans in to kiss Jeanie*
*Jeanie dumps her soda on Troy*
*Troy jumps up*
*Miley takes a picture of it*
Troy: *sees Miley* Miley?!
Miley: *dreamy, but sarcastic way* Hi, Troy.
Troy: What are you doing?!
Miley: Getting you back! Duh!
Troy: For what?!
Jeanie: For cheating on us!
People watching the movie: Shhhh!
Troy: *speechless* Bye. *leaves*
Miley: That was awesome!
Jeanie: We totally got him back!
*They all finish watching the movie*
*Next day at school*
Lilly: Go talk to Jake! You want to get back together, and so does he! Nothing can go wrong!
Miley: I think you're right! *Goes to Jake* Hey, Jake.
Jake: Hey, Miley.
Miley: Listen, I know you want to get back together, so -
Jake: Wait! I know where this is going.
Miley: You do?
Jake: Yeah, and I've decided to accept the fact that you don't want to get back together. I'm gonna move on, just like you did. *lying(he doesn't accept the fact that...you know what)*
Chapter 56: Last day of school
Miley: Uh.....So we understand eachother!
Jake: Yeah, no need to worry.
*Miley's cell phone rings*
Miley: *answers* Hello?
Robby: Hey, bud!
Miley: Hi, dad.
Robby: How's the last day of school?
Miley: Eh....
Robby: Well maybe this'll cheer you up! Hannah Montana's going on tour!
Miley: That does cheer me up! *Maybe it'll get my mind off Jake....*
Robby: Roxy's going with you. You're leaving Sunday for 2 weeks.
Miley: Two weeks? Sounds good. Bye. *hangs up*
Robby: Bye. *hangs up*
Miley: Hannah Montana's going on tour for 2 weeks.
Jake: Good for you! When are you leaving?
Miley: Two days.
Jake: Well then I'm glad we're moving on. *lying*
Miley: Yeah....*lying too*
Chapter 57: Secret Revealed?
*Saturday*
*Miley, Lilly and Oliver are hanging out at the beach*
Lilly: I can't believe you're leaving!
Oliver: For two weeks!
Miley: Yeah, I'm really gonna miss you guys. But I'm also glad I'm going cause it'll get my mind off Jake.
Lilly: I thought your mind wasn't on Jake.
Miley: A small part of it always was.
*Sarah goes over to them*
Sarah: Hey guys, why are you so sad?
Oliver: Miley's leaving for two weeks.
*Miley and Lilly give him a "shut up" look*
Sarah: How wierd! Hannah Montana's going on tour for two weeks!
Lilly: Uh....Isn't it three weeks?
Sarah: Nope, it's two weeks. That must mean...... ----------!
Hope you like it! Comment!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-28-2007, 03:46 PM
more plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HannahMontanaX3
03-28-2007, 05:47 PM
more more more more its amazing
hannah_montana.boston
03-28-2007, 05:54 PM
ugh i hope she doesnt find out she is soooo nosey btw i loveeeeeee this its so aswom
thobi123
03-28-2007, 06:17 PM
write more gurl this is the best fan fic i hav evr read
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-29-2007, 02:50 PM
thanks so much! Although, you should know that this fanfiction is coming to an end, but I will write a sequel. I actually already started writing it, and it has more twists! anyway, here:
Chapter 58: Through pretending
Sarah: Nope it's two weeks....that must mean.... You're going to each Hannah Montana concert on the tour! Boy, you must be a big fan!
Miley: *relieved* Yeah! Huge! Huge fan! I love Hannah Montana!
Sarah: You're lucky. My parents wouldn't let me do that. Anyway, tell me how it goes. Bye! *leaves*
Lilly: That was a close one!
Oliver: Sorry....
Miley: THINK, before you say it!
Oliver: Right!
*Sunday, before Miley's leaving*
*At Miley's house*
Miley: Bye everyone!
Lilly and Oliver: Bye! *they hug Miley*
Robby: Bye, bud.
Miley: Bye, dad. *hugs him*
Robby: Do you want to say goodbye to Jackson too, before you leave?
Miley: Yeah, ok. He's at Rico's...*goes to Rico's*
Miley: Bye, Jackson.
Jackson: Bye, Miles. See ya in two weeks.
Miley: Yeah...*turns around and see's Jake standing behind her*
Miley: Bye, Jake.
Jake: Uh...yeah, I came to say goodbye.
*They hug*
Miley: Bye...*leaves*
Jackson: You like my sister!
Jake: Yeah...
Jackson: And...?
Jake: And I'm through pretending I don't!
Chapter 59: Chasing Miley
Jackson: You can visit her at one of her concerts and tell her.
Jake: Unless she hasn't left yet...
Jackson: I think she has.
Jake: I'm gonna check..*goes to Miley's house* Hey, did Miley leave?
Oliver: You just missed her.
Lilly: Awww. How sweet! You're trying to find her and tell her how you feel!
Jake: Miley's not here? *leaves*
Lilly: He's also a bit rude.
*Jake gets to Rico's*
Jackson: You missed her, didn't you?
Jake: Yeah, where's her first concert?
Jackson: New York.
Jake: That's all the way across the country!
Jackson: Either you go, or you don't.
Jake: Fine. I'll call my private jet.
*calls the pilot*
Jake: Hi, I'm at the beach in Malibu. Come pick me up as fast as you can. I'm kinda in a hurry. *pause* You'll be here in five minutes? Ok.
*Five minutes later, the jet arrives*
Jake: Thanks, uh....
Jackson: Jackson.
Jake: Right, Jackson.
Jackson: No, prob.
*Jake flies to New York...*
I'll post the rest tomorrow!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-29-2007, 04:20 PM
awwww soo cute...cant wait to see if miley still likes him! love the fan fic, cant wait till the sequal, u r truly gifted at write! great job, plz write more!
hannah_montana.boston
03-29-2007, 04:28 PM
aww dang i totally was hoping for more
thobi123
03-29-2007, 04:49 PM
tht is so good i wonder if he catches her and tells her how he feels
mileymyidol
03-29-2007, 06:20 PM
cum on it is the best ever and when i am reading it i think of miley as me and jake as the boy i heart..lol
miley rocks
03-29-2007, 08:49 PM
this is the best fan fic ever i cant wait to read the sequel
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-30-2007, 01:11 PM
aw, thank you so much, guys! I'll post the first chapter of the sequel today! New thread, it's gonna be called "Everyone's a Star". Anyway, last part of this fanfiction....
Chapter 60: Going Backstage
*Jake gets to New York and wgile Hannah's performing, Jake tries to go backstage*
Roxy: What are you doing here?
Jake: I've gotta tell Miley how I feel!
Roxy: Awww, how sweet! Although that doesn't mean I don't have my eyes on you!
Jake: ....Right. Can I wait for her in her dressing room, until the concert's over?
Roxy: .....If I didn't believe you, you'd be on your way back to Malibu by now.
Jake: Believe me about what?
Roxy: About you liking Miley.
Jake: Right.
Roxy: But if you break her heart after this, I'll break you!
Jake: ....Fair enough.
*Jake goes inside Hannah's dressing room*
*Concert's over and Hannah starts to go backstage*
*Hannah see's Roxy smiling*
Hannah: Hey, Roxy. Why are you smiling?
Roxy: Go inside and see.
Hannah: ...ok. *goes inside her dressing room*
*Hannah see's Jake*
Hannah: Jake! What -
*Jake kisses Miley(I wrote Miley cause he's meaning to kiss Miley, not Hannah)*
Chapter 61: Last chapter(lol, wierd name)
Jake: I'm sorry about everything and I love you and I really want to get back together with you.
Hannah: Wow! You flew all the way across the country for me! But, I'm glad you did cause I love you too.
Jake: So we're back together?
Hannah: Hold on. Let's do this right. *takes off wig*
Miley: Good, now I'm Miley.
Jake: Miley?
Miley: Yes?
Jake: Do you want to get back together?
Miley: Yes!!
*Jake and Miley kiss*
THE END!
Wow, that last chapter was short! Anyway plz post ur last comments about this fanfic and here's the link to the sequel!
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=37862
hannahmontanarulz55
03-30-2007, 03:41 PM
oh thanx soooo much.....great fan fic...im going to read the sequal now!
hannah_montana.boston
03-30-2007, 04:17 PM
oooooh a sequel im likin
miley rocks
03-30-2007, 10:18 PM
it was so awesome im defitnetly reading the sequel
hmfhannahmontanafan
03-31-2007, 04:35 AM
thanks guys!!!
Omg, i loved it! Great job! (tears tears) lol
miley-hannah
06-18-2007, 01:25 PM
Oh my gosh i love this
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