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Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-08-2007, 10:48 PM
ok guys this is my first fan fic and ive allready written story 1-7 ok im sorry that they r a bit short its just that i dont have a very creative mind even though this first one is boring please keep reading i gets betta!i promise.
chapter 1
scene=miley's "hannah" wardrobe

miley-lilly can we go shopping now?
lilly-no miles we have to sort out ur hannah clothes!
miley-awwwww! *fake crys*
lilly- miley these are soooo cute! *holds up a pair of black boots*
miley-aw those old things? you can have them they dont fit anymore!
*robbie walks in*
robbie-hey girlies watcha doing?
lilly-sorting out miley's hannah clothes!
robbie-oh *runs out*
miley- well lilly lets get started
lilly-ok miley,do u want this?*holds up pink dress*
*miley sneaks out without lilly seeing her*
lilly-miley? miley?

wat do u think for a first try?

Destiny Hope 101
03-08-2007, 11:03 PM
That's good and kinda funny at the end.More!

Destiny Hope 101
03-09-2007, 12:08 AM
I'm begging you more.

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 12:13 AM
scene-miley's school

chapter 2


lilly-miley y did u sneak off yesterday?
miley-cuz.......
*lilly interupts with a hey jake*
miley-casually* sup jake?
jake-miley i cant help noticeing how much u look like hannah montana!
miley-really?*suprised*
jake-yeah
-----------:thats because she is hannah montana!
miley-what?
lilly-who?
jake-really?

who is --------? wen u get it ill do more

Destiny Hope 101
03-09-2007, 12:17 AM
More please!

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 12:47 AM
last scene-
oliver-thats because she is hannah!
,ileywhat?
lilly-who?
jake-really?
--------------------------------------------------------------------------

chapter 3

oliver-*angry* MILEY/HANNAH Y DIDNT U TELL ME?
miley-i....i.....i dont know!
lilly-dont be silly your not hannah!
miley-its true....im hannah montana!
jake-yeah miley ur hannah montana just like i kissed hillary duff yesterday!
lilly-awww u kissed hills?
miley-no dufusbrain its a saying!

Destiny Hope 101
03-09-2007, 12:50 AM
That was funny. More

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 12:51 AM
ok

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 12:55 AM
chapter 4

next day
scene-miley and oliver at the beach

oliver-miley, u know ur secret?
miley-yeah?
oliver-i have a secret too
miley-what is it?
*anber and ashley come up*
amber-wow only 2 loosers?
ashley-wheres truscott?
miley-go away amber!
oliver-go away ashley!
amber and ashley-make us ooooo tssss!
*amber and ashley walk away laughing*
miley-so oliver what were u saying?
oliver-miley........i have a crush on---------!
*miley's jaw drops*

if you can guess who ------- is ill write more

Destiny Hope 101
03-09-2007, 01:03 AM
Miley?

MileyHannahFan
03-09-2007, 01:06 AM
This is good.

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 01:08 AM
Miley?yes

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 01:09 AM
This is good.
thank you

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-09-2007, 01:47 AM
chapter 5

miley-WHAT?!
oliver-sorry miley ive liked you most of my life!
miley-*silent*
oliver-miley?!
miley-what?
oliver-miley do u like me back?
miley-yes! no? yes! no? ohh i dont know....
oliver-miley i need an answer.......
miley-ok i admit it i do like u back
*lilly jogs over*
lilly hey guys wat u talking about?
*miley and oliver tell lilly every detail starting from kindy*
lilly-wow........... miley dont u have a hannah thing tonight?
miley-oh yeah *gives oliver a black wig*
miley-here u go robert rickson!
*oliver puts on the wig*

Destiny Hope 101
03-09-2007, 01:18 PM
That really really good.More.

HannahMontanaX3
03-09-2007, 02:34 PM
more please

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-13-2007, 03:29 AM
i need more comments to post more

laurahe1
03-13-2007, 05:52 PM
more!

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-19-2007, 04:45 AM
sorry i havnt posted in a while ive been busy ill post more soon

miji.hannahmontana
03-19-2007, 05:49 PM
Very Very good! keep writing girl!

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-24-2007, 04:46 AM
chapter 6

scene-hannah montana concert
*just finishing concert*
miley-watching the sunset fade to black show the names play the happy song!
crowd-we love you hannah!
miley/hannah-thankyou for coming! the cd signing is at 10:00
*goes backstage*
oliver/riobert-hannah you were great!
lilly/lola-yeah m....(about to say miley) mega cool!
miley(now as miley in the limo)-lilly?
lilly-yeah?
miley-oliver?
oliver-yeah?
miley-you guys are the best!
oliver and lilly-we know!
*all laugh*

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-26-2007, 02:44 AM
sorry that that one was so short

BB-Luver4
03-26-2007, 03:01 PM
I love it,and my guess is Lily?....or Miley?

Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-27-2007, 04:34 AM
sorry if i sound rude but why did u guess and what did u guess?

Destiny_Hope_NZ
04-09-2007, 07:19 PM
please comment people

Destiny_Hope_NZ
04-14-2007, 05:57 AM
any one?

Destiny_Hope_NZ
04-15-2007, 07:25 PM
awww i guess id better stop thinking of ideas.......

Destiny_Hope_NZ
05-20-2007, 02:30 AM
i wish some one commented cuz if u r getting bored i can make them longer

luv2act
05-20-2007, 11:13 AM
more!

miley_cyrus_lvr
05-20-2007, 07:25 PM
more please this is getting good

Destiny_Hope_NZ
05-22-2007, 03:08 AM
chapter 7

scene-miley's house
*phone rings*
jackson answers it-hello?
lilly landing in 10, 9...
miley-8, 7, 6...
robbie-ray-5, 4, 3, 2,
lilly-1, 0! miley lets go to the mall they have aHUGE sale on!
miley-no lilly im meeting oliver at the beach. sorry....
lilly- sad-oh ok *suddenly happy again* can i come?
miley-no its kinda personal....
jackson- oooooh miley and oliver up the tree......
mileyp oh be quiet!
lilly- well k ill buy you shoes
miley- ok thanks lilly

chapter 8

scene beach
miley- oliver?
oliver-yeah?
miley- why arent you talking?
oliver- im trying to think
miley- what about
oliver- this....*kisses miley*
miley-what was that for?
oliver- i love you reamember?
miley- oh yeah
oliver-well will you go out with me then?
miley- OF COURSE I THOUGHT YOUD NEVER ASK!
*amber comes up*
amber- hey loosers!!
miley- go away were busy
amber- no!
oliver- wheres ashley?
miley- oliver! dont ask, shes not here thats good!
amber- shes sick...
oliver- what? sick of you more like it!
miley- ha ha thats a good one...
*amber walks away*
long enuf?

flower1
05-22-2007, 05:44 PM
moooooooooooooore!!!! (oh, and u neeed to get to ur RPG girls night out, i signed up)

luv2act
05-22-2007, 05:56 PM
more! i love it!

miley_cyrus_lvr
05-22-2007, 08:18 PM
more this is good

ilovedestinyhopecyrus123456789
05-22-2007, 08:38 PM
more i love it!!!

miley_cyrus_lvr
05-23-2007, 09:37 PM
please more!!!!!!!

Destiny_Hope_NZ
07-14-2007, 07:10 AM
chapter 9
scene- hannah wardrobe

miley-oliver, how did you find out i was hannah any way?
oliver-ummmmmmmmm.... i um.. kinda... sorta......
miley- SPILL!
oliver- ireadyourdiary (said really fast hoping miley wouldnt notice what he said
miley-*ggrowls*
lilly- boy your in trouble
oliver- sorry.... *does pouty, puppy face*
miley- awww how can you stay angry at that?!
lilly- i dont know. but i know how i could be sick!
oliver- well im off
lilly- me too
oliver-bye miles..........lilly...uh bye
lilly- *mimmics(sp?) oliver* bye miles.... bla bla bla...........move it!
miley- bye olly

chapter 10

scene-school
miley-hey yall!
oliver- hey miley do you know where lilly is?
lilly- hey im right here! what am i a squished tomato?
oliver- yeah whatever
jake-hey miley.......hi oliver sup tilly
lilly- its lilly!!!!
jake- what ever miley can i talk to you?
miley-sure
*miley and jake go off*
oliver- i wonder what they are talking about?
lilly- yeah
*back to jake and miley*
miley-yes jake?
jake- miley, im sorry i still want to be with you
.................................................. .............
will miley say yes?

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 08:52 AM
that's really good, i was wondering about jake..

secretive_angel
07-14-2007, 04:29 PM
more

HannahMontanaX3
07-14-2007, 04:56 PM
more. no miley. Say NO!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-15-2007, 03:33 PM
more

atisdale01
08-22-2007, 05:37 AM
more