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~Miley~Rox~
03-06-2007, 05:04 PM
Chapter 1 Move Star To Be

Setting Miley’s house

Miley and Lilly are checking the Hannah E-mail.

Dear Hannah,
I love your songs so so so so so so much!
Your absolute #1 Fan
Jess in Frankfort, Kentucky


Dear Hannah,
You rock my world! I wish I could meet you!
Your Total Fan
Ashlee in Little Rock, Arkansas


Dear Hannah,
After you were in Zombie High we decided that you should be in Zombie High the Movie. If you do this we will need you to be in Romania in two days.
Zombie High Producer


As soon as Miley and Lilly Heard the they started screaming.:P


Robbie Ray: Sweet nibblets! What are you two screaming about?

Miley: Guess who was just asked to be on Zombie High the Movie?

Robbie Ray: (sarcastically) Kelly Clarkson.

Lilly: I wish.

Miley: Not helping.

Robbie Ray: Lilly I was joking I know Hannah go the part.

Lilly: Oh

Miley: So Daddy can I do it? Please, please, please!

Robbie Ray: Well…

Miley gives him the “sad puppy dog” look.

Robbie Ray: Ok but what about school?

Miley: Thank you so much daddy. Just leave the school thing to me. Well I’m going to start packing. Oh and daddy we have to leave in two days.

Lilly: (pretending to sound sad) Ok I’ll just stay here in America all by myself with no one to talk to for four whole months. I’ll just leave you two to packing. Good-bye.

Miley: Don’t worry Lilly I’ll be in school tomorrow and I am really sorry you can’t go…

Lilly: Aw man.

Miley: But Lola can go.

Lilly: Yes! I’m gonna go start packing! Buh-bye.

Lilly runs home.

Robbie Ray: Now Miles what about school?

Miley: Oh yeah just call my school and tell them I’m going back to Tennessee for the next four months.

Robbie Ray: Ok

The next day at school…

Jake: Hey Miley. I’m going to Romania tonight.:07:

Miley: (sad and quiet) Yeah, I know.:'(

Jake: I wanted you to know even though I am gonna be kissing Hannah Montana I’ll be wishing it was you and not Hannah.

Miley: Aww.

Jake kisses Miley and walks away.

Lilly: ohhhhh. What was that about?

Miley: Just nothing I’ll tell you on the way to Romania tomorrow.


I you want me to continue give me compiments or suggestions if you want me to stop just tell me and i will

~Miley~Rox~
03-06-2007, 06:28 PM
someone plz post somthing!!!!!!! guess ill just have to stop the fan fiction if no one posts any thing so plz post

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
03-06-2007, 08:44 PM
totaly awsome

~Miley~Rox~
03-07-2007, 04:29 PM
oh thank you so much should i really right more?

~Miley~Rox~
03-07-2007, 06:20 PM
well even if only one preson commented this ill write the next chapter soon

niiro_tatsu
03-07-2007, 06:58 PM
i like it. continue!

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
03-07-2007, 09:10 PM
oh thank you so much should i really right more?

yes I do=D

~Miley~Rox~
03-08-2007, 05:29 PM
ill post more by sunday i am really busy right now

hmfhannahmontanafan
03-10-2007, 07:16 AM
more! it's awesome!!

laurahe1
03-10-2007, 09:04 AM
more!

Purple_Panda
03-10-2007, 09:56 AM
more please

hannahmontanarulz55
03-10-2007, 12:12 PM
More Plz!

~Miley~Rox~
03-12-2007, 04:44 PM
sorry i couldnt post on sunday because my internet wouldnt let me go on miley-cyrus.com but any way here is the next chapter (i dont think it is as good as the last one but u might)

Chapter 2: The Trip To Movie-Stardom

Setting: the Hannah jet Miley and Lilly have been

Miley: Oh I can’t wait to get my script.

Lilly: You mean you didn’t even get your script yet?

Miley: Nope. But guess what is going to happen in the movie.

Lilly: That you’re going to die in it?

Miley: No! At least I hope not. Hannah is going to kiss Jake this time.

Lilly: Really?

Miley: I hope so.

Lilly: But wait how do you know if you didn’t get the script yet?

Miley: Jake told me oh and did ever tell you what Jake said to m yesterday I the hallway?

Lilly: No what?

Miley: He said even though he will be kissing Hannah he’ll be wish that it was me that he was kissing!

Lilly: Wow! How romantic.

Miley: But that’s not all then he kissed me!

Lilly: You should tell him that you are Hannah Montana.

Miley: I don’t know…Right now I’m almost too tired to think, I’m going to take a nap.

Lilly: Me too.

Miley: Oh and before I forget to tell you we’re going to stop in Paris, France
To refill the gas in jet and of course go SHOPPING!

Lilly: Oh Great now I won’t be able to fall asleep.

Miley: Well you have about 6 hours for you to fall asleep because that is when we will be arriving in Paris.

6 hours later…

Lilly: Miley wake up.

Miley: (in a sleepy voice) 5 more minutes’ daddy.

Lilly: Miles your dad isn’t here it’s me, Lilly, and were in Paris now! Time to shop.

Miley: (suddenly wide awake) Lets go, but we have to put our wigs on.

Lilly: Why we’re not anywhere where someone from school might see us

Miley: So what about the paparazzi that could be outside the plane I mean what if we walk out and they are out there everyone would figure out my secret.

Lilly: Yeah I get what you mean.

Miley and Lilly put their wigs on.

Lola: Ready?

Hannah: Totally.

They walk out of the plane and surprisingly there is no paparazzi.

Hannah: My daddy gave $1,000 each to spend.

Lola: Your dad is so nice

Hannah: I know

They shop for a couple of hours and then head back to the plane.

Hannah: After all that shopping I am tired.

Lola: When are we going to arrive in Romania?

Hannah: In about an hour

The Romanian airport.

Hannah: The limo should be out front.

Lola: Like the song?

Hannah: What are you talking about?

Lola: Your song Best of Both Worlds, (Singing) You get the limo out front, ohhhh hottest sty-

Hannah: Ok Lola I get it, just stop.

They get in the limo and arrive in the hotel.



I need 4 comments to go on to the next chapter the sooner you post the sooner you get the chapter

hannahmontanarulz55
03-12-2007, 05:46 PM
No Write More Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz!

~Miley~Rox~
03-12-2007, 06:01 PM
3 more comments first

Khockeygrl4
03-12-2007, 10:13 PM
its great!!!! more pleaz!!!!

~Miley~Rox~
03-19-2007, 08:31 PM
2 more comments now

HM ROCKS
03-19-2007, 08:37 PM
1.MORE!!
2.MORE!!

K theres 2 comments now post more!!!

HM ROCKS
03-19-2007, 10:59 PM
Plz post more!!!

miji.hannahmontana
03-19-2007, 11:28 PM
please this sounds veery good

HM ROCKS
03-20-2007, 11:20 AM
ya more

Miley98
03-20-2007, 02:00 PM
well... since it is your first fan fiction I would say that it is very good. SUGGESTION:

make sumthing REALLY exciting happen. like they walked out of the plane without their wigs and the paparazzi is there or sumthing!

HM ROCKS
03-21-2007, 05:30 PM
ya but its still good!!!

~Miley~Rox~
03-21-2007, 06:17 PM
well... since it is your first fan fiction I would say that it is very good. SUGGESTION:

make sumthing REALLY exciting happen. like they walked out of the plane without their wigs and the paparazzi is there or sumthing!
ok ill do that in one of my chapters

mileyfan8
04-16-2007, 07:23 PM
I think it is good write more.

Cheerleader111
04-18-2007, 10:37 PM
more more more!!! its really good!

Sporty Miley
04-18-2007, 10:42 PM
more!!!! its WAYYYYYYYYY better than my fan fic!!

luv2act
04-21-2007, 03:42 PM
I demand MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hannah mon mad
05-03-2007, 12:58 PM
write more that was so good as soon as poss if you can

_smiley_miley_14
06-02-2007, 08:44 PM
write more

cute_princess1114
06-19-2007, 06:52 PM
More!!!

elle
06-26-2007, 08:40 AM
write more of this fan fiction!

secretive_angel
06-26-2007, 10:20 AM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Miley~Rox~
06-28-2007, 06:53 PM
sorry i havent written in a long time i just got side tracked



Chapter 4: Room 315 and 314

Lola: Wow! This hotel is Huge!

Hannah: I know it’s the biggest hotel I’ve ever stayed in. Hurry lets go check in before anyone notices me.

They walk up to the front desk.

Manager: Hello Hannah Montana! You are in room 315.

People start to look and walk over to them.

Hannah: ok thanks.

Person #1: Its Hannah Montana!

Person #2: can I have an autograph?

Hannah: Lola we have to get to our room now!

Lola: Ok and lets hurry because I don’t want to be trampled.

They get to there room

Lola: Wow this is almost as big as the lobby!

Hannah: the biggest room they have!

Lola: Lola likey

Back in the lobby Jake Ryan is checking in

Manager: You are in room 314

Jake: thanks. Oh yeah could you tell me which room Hannah Montana is in?

Manager: Room 315

Jake: cool

Walks to his room
Back in room 315 Miley and Lilly hear a knock on the door

Miley: Quick Lilly put on your wig!

Lilly: ok

Hannah answers the door

Hannah: Oh hi Jake

Jake: Hi Hannah

Hannah: So did you get your script yet?

Jake: yeah did you?

Hannah: no

Jake: want to go ask the manager if they sent it to the hotel?

Hannah: sure Ill just go tell Lola where I’m going brb

Jake: oh Lolas here where is she?

Hannah: In the Bathroom putting on- I mean fixing her hair

Hannah goes and Tells Lola and comes back. Then Hannah and Jake go to the lobby

Jake: Did Miss. Hannah Montana’s script come in yet?

Manager: Yes I just got it 10 minutes ago.

Hannah: thanks

Manager: no problem

Person: look Hannah Montana and Jake Ryan!

Person 2: wow! Can I have an autograph?

Hannah and Jake: sure

Soon there was a long line of people who wanted there autographs.









5 comments to continue

basket_ball_gal12
06-28-2007, 07:38 PM
more!!!!

elle
06-28-2007, 08:27 PM
ooh more more, it's really good!

secretive_angel
06-29-2007, 01:55 AM
More

hannahmontanarulz55
06-29-2007, 10:04 AM
more plz!!!!

huskerrich
06-29-2007, 01:02 PM
to get the ball rolling, I pleading the fifth, more

~Miley~Rox~
06-29-2007, 02:56 PM
ok this is a little short and not that good but i still hope u like it

Chapter 5
Mickey Minnie miley

About a half hour later Jake and Hannah are in Hannah’s going over lines while Lola is watching them

Zombie Slayer: Oh zuronda r u ok

Zeronda: u saved me again what ever can I do to repay u?

Zombie Slayer: come with me

Zeronda: Oh zombie slayer I wish I could…

Hannah: and then we kiss but I don’t want to right now. Don’t take it personally or anything….

Jake: don’t worry I still like that girl from my school.

Hannah: oh yeah u told me about her what was her name Mickey…Minnie….Oh yeah I remember Miley!

Jake Yeah I found out she really liked me and we kissed

Hannah: so she did like u

Jake: Yeah but then she got mad at me when I told her that I had to go to Romania for for months. But I don’t think she is too mad at me because we were talking in school brfore I left

Hannah: well I’m sure she’s not mad at u any more

Jake: I sure hope your right I really really like her

Hannah: Don’t worry I know I’m right

3 comment to continue

elle
06-29-2007, 07:14 PM
more more and more!! can't wait

hannahmontana_luver0320
06-30-2007, 11:39 AM
I
DEMAND MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please

hannahmontana_luver0320
06-30-2007, 11:39 AM
more more

hannahmontanarulz55
06-30-2007, 06:31 PM
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! plz more!!!

K-star7
06-30-2007, 09:37 PM
Please Write More!!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-01-2007, 12:27 AM
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzz!moreeeeeeeeeeeeee!

secretive_angel
07-01-2007, 02:58 PM
more

danadog75
08-29-2007, 12:30 AM
this is really good!!!!!!!! please add more!!!!!!!!

Secretpopstar1
09-02-2007, 02:55 PM
more!!