My First Fanfic : Keep Holding On

[HannahMandMileyCFan32406]

Ok tis my first fanfic on here. so hope you enjoy and please no flames.


Chapter 1:

Miley walked downstairs just as the phone rang her father, Robbieray answered it.

Robbie Ray : Hello
Lily (onthe other line) : lily alert in 10 seconds
robbie hung up
Robbie Ray : lily alert in 5
Miley; 3,2,1 ( opens the door)
Lily : Miley I got the best new ver!
Miley: what you and oliver finally get toghther
Lily : Eww me and doughnot boy..no Jake Ryan is coming to our school!
Miley becomes froze(like she did when she find out luannes coming)
Lily: Miley..earth to miley..waving her hand in Miley's Face.
Miley - No this can't be (snapping iout of her trance
Lily: Whats wrong with Jake Ryan
Miley wel you see the thing is............

Ok sorry first chapter was left with a cliffy i'll try to update on like 5 reviews if this happens probably by tomrrow then yah. if you want to be in this pm me.
toodels.:57: :07: :21: :lol: 8-) :P :) :D :59:

[HannahMandMileyCFan32406]

please comment srry if it sucks suggestions r open

[vanessa*anne]

It is really good but a bit longer would be good. I really like it, I just want to be able to read more without waiting.

And the title reminds me of that song by avril.

[HannahMandMileyCFan32406]

I will and it is and it is

[~Miley~Rox~]

really good write more

[Katybug1994]

More! More!

[HannahMandMileyCFan32406]

ok I will soon

[laurahe1]

more!

[comebacktomev]

more!!!!!!!!!!!

[flower1]

moree

[elle]

ooh this is really good!!! MMMMOOORREEE

[secretive_angel]

mooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee