xoxohuggablemiley
02-16-2007, 04:53 PM
Ok, this is my first FanFic, and my other one got lost, so, enjoy, please post your comments and critism. The chapters are pretty long sometimes, and sometimes not.
Chapter 1
Oh no you didn't!
*One Morning*
Miley: Dad, have you seen my backpack?
Robby: No, bud.
Miley: Jackson, have you seen my backpack?
Jackson: It's in the fridge.
Miley: Why the heck would it be there?
Jackson: My lollipop didn't fit in mine.
Miley: But, my homework was in it!
Jackson:I thought it was chocalate.
*Jackson points to the half eaten 'chocoalte'*
Miley: DAD!
Robby: Yea, bud?
Miley:Jackson ate my homework! Wow, that sounded oddly wierd.
Robby: That is the lamest exuse i've ever heard!
Miley:But, it's true!
Robby: Now, go to school, Miles!
Miley: But, Jacks-
Robby: NOW!
Miley: Ughh, fine!
*Miley heads for school, and on her way, she spots Oliver*
Miley: Hey, Oliver!
Oliver: Hey, where's your backpack and homework?
Miley: Jackson put the backpack in the fridge and ate me homework.
Oliver: Come again? Yea, right Miley.
Miley: It's TRUE!
Oliver: Ughh, let's just get to school.
*They go to school, and spot Lilly*
Miley: Hey Lilly!
Lilly: Hey, Miley, are we still up for the MTV Awards?
*Kids look at Miley and Lilly like crazy*
Miley: SHUSH! I'm not..
Lilly: Why? Why not?
Miley: Because HANNAH MONTANA is..
Lilly: OH! Yea, sorry, forgot.
Oliver: But aren't you Ha-
*The other kids almost gasp when Oliver realize what they are waiting for*
Oliver: I mean, aren't you Having to go to class?
Miley: (Whispers):Nice save, doughnut.
*They head to class and spot Jake, and begin to talk*
Jake: Hey Miley, I hope you enjoy watching me-on T.V, with Hannah Montana tonight.
Miley: Let's just say, i'll be watching at my OWN point of view..
Miley:Or Hannahs, to be exact...
Jake: What?
Miley: Oh nothing!
*They all head to class*
Mr.Pirksenburg: Ok, so the evolution of the raccoon is seen right here, where-
Lilly:(whispers): Hey, Jake, do you know why Miley dosen't have her backpack with her?
Jake: No, I don-
Mr. Pirksenburg: Is there something you want to share with the class, Ms. Truscott?
Lilly: I'd rather not.
Mr. Pirksenburg: No, no, do share, or solitary for a week.
Lilly: huh?
Mr. Pirksenburg: Say EXACTLY what you said to Jake, but don't worry Jake, you're not in trouble.
Lilly: Umm, Jake, why isin't Miley with her homework?
*Lilly immediatly sits down*
Mr. Piksenburg: Yes Miley, why?
Miley: My brother ate it.
*The whole class starts laughing*
Mr. Piksenburg: Enough, detention, 2 days.
Miley: Ughh...
*After school*
Hannah: OKAY! I'm ready for the Awards!
Jake: Good, Hannah! It's great to see you again!
*They do a friendly hug*
Hannah: You, too!
*Jake goes to get ready*
Lola: OMG! He's looking SO cute!
Hannah: Remember, he kissed me, I mean, Miley.
Lola: Ughh...who's Miley?
Hannah: It's ok, don't have to cover up too much, see ya!
*Jake and Hannah go on stage*
Hannah: Hello everybody! Me and Jake Ryan, here, are going to tell you the nominees for.....Best On-Screen Romance! OK, there are.....Frankie Muniz and his pillow,
Jake: There is also: Amanda Bynes and Chad Michael Murray,
Hannah: And......Vanessa Hudgens and Zac Efron!
Jake: And the winner is......
Both: Vanessa Hudgens and Zac Efron!
Hannah:Congratulations, but unfortunatly, Zac is shooting Hairspray and Vanessa is touring.
Jake: So, on to the next category, Best Off-Screen Couples!
Hannah: So, the nominees are.....Michael and Macy
Jake: There's also, Asty and Aaron
Hannah: Britney and Kevin
Jake: And..Me and Jennifer Jones!
Hannah(thinking): OH NO HE DIDN'T! It's supposed to be Jake and Miley! NO! He is So dead!
*Jake pushes Hannah*
Hannah: Oh, sorry.
Hannah:And the winner is...
Jake: Me and Jennifer!
*Jennifer comes up and they kiss*
*They continue this all night, so the next day at school*
Miley: Jake Ryan! What was that on the MTV Awards last night!?!?!?
Jake: Well, umm, there's an explanation.
Miley: No! There's no explanation! Only a break up!
Jake: Huh?
Miley:Jake Ryan, WE ARE OVER!
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That's all for now, I need at least 3-5 comments to continue.
Chapter 1
Oh no you didn't!
*One Morning*
Miley: Dad, have you seen my backpack?
Robby: No, bud.
Miley: Jackson, have you seen my backpack?
Jackson: It's in the fridge.
Miley: Why the heck would it be there?
Jackson: My lollipop didn't fit in mine.
Miley: But, my homework was in it!
Jackson:I thought it was chocalate.
*Jackson points to the half eaten 'chocoalte'*
Miley: DAD!
Robby: Yea, bud?
Miley:Jackson ate my homework! Wow, that sounded oddly wierd.
Robby: That is the lamest exuse i've ever heard!
Miley:But, it's true!
Robby: Now, go to school, Miles!
Miley: But, Jacks-
Robby: NOW!
Miley: Ughh, fine!
*Miley heads for school, and on her way, she spots Oliver*
Miley: Hey, Oliver!
Oliver: Hey, where's your backpack and homework?
Miley: Jackson put the backpack in the fridge and ate me homework.
Oliver: Come again? Yea, right Miley.
Miley: It's TRUE!
Oliver: Ughh, let's just get to school.
*They go to school, and spot Lilly*
Miley: Hey Lilly!
Lilly: Hey, Miley, are we still up for the MTV Awards?
*Kids look at Miley and Lilly like crazy*
Miley: SHUSH! I'm not..
Lilly: Why? Why not?
Miley: Because HANNAH MONTANA is..
Lilly: OH! Yea, sorry, forgot.
Oliver: But aren't you Ha-
*The other kids almost gasp when Oliver realize what they are waiting for*
Oliver: I mean, aren't you Having to go to class?
Miley: (Whispers):Nice save, doughnut.
*They head to class and spot Jake, and begin to talk*
Jake: Hey Miley, I hope you enjoy watching me-on T.V, with Hannah Montana tonight.
Miley: Let's just say, i'll be watching at my OWN point of view..
Miley:Or Hannahs, to be exact...
Jake: What?
Miley: Oh nothing!
*They all head to class*
Mr.Pirksenburg: Ok, so the evolution of the raccoon is seen right here, where-
Lilly:(whispers): Hey, Jake, do you know why Miley dosen't have her backpack with her?
Jake: No, I don-
Mr. Pirksenburg: Is there something you want to share with the class, Ms. Truscott?
Lilly: I'd rather not.
Mr. Pirksenburg: No, no, do share, or solitary for a week.
Lilly: huh?
Mr. Pirksenburg: Say EXACTLY what you said to Jake, but don't worry Jake, you're not in trouble.
Lilly: Umm, Jake, why isin't Miley with her homework?
*Lilly immediatly sits down*
Mr. Piksenburg: Yes Miley, why?
Miley: My brother ate it.
*The whole class starts laughing*
Mr. Piksenburg: Enough, detention, 2 days.
Miley: Ughh...
*After school*
Hannah: OKAY! I'm ready for the Awards!
Jake: Good, Hannah! It's great to see you again!
*They do a friendly hug*
Hannah: You, too!
*Jake goes to get ready*
Lola: OMG! He's looking SO cute!
Hannah: Remember, he kissed me, I mean, Miley.
Lola: Ughh...who's Miley?
Hannah: It's ok, don't have to cover up too much, see ya!
*Jake and Hannah go on stage*
Hannah: Hello everybody! Me and Jake Ryan, here, are going to tell you the nominees for.....Best On-Screen Romance! OK, there are.....Frankie Muniz and his pillow,
Jake: There is also: Amanda Bynes and Chad Michael Murray,
Hannah: And......Vanessa Hudgens and Zac Efron!
Jake: And the winner is......
Both: Vanessa Hudgens and Zac Efron!
Hannah:Congratulations, but unfortunatly, Zac is shooting Hairspray and Vanessa is touring.
Jake: So, on to the next category, Best Off-Screen Couples!
Hannah: So, the nominees are.....Michael and Macy
Jake: There's also, Asty and Aaron
Hannah: Britney and Kevin
Jake: And..Me and Jennifer Jones!
Hannah(thinking): OH NO HE DIDN'T! It's supposed to be Jake and Miley! NO! He is So dead!
*Jake pushes Hannah*
Hannah: Oh, sorry.
Hannah:And the winner is...
Jake: Me and Jennifer!
*Jennifer comes up and they kiss*
*They continue this all night, so the next day at school*
Miley: Jake Ryan! What was that on the MTV Awards last night!?!?!?
Jake: Well, umm, there's an explanation.
Miley: No! There's no explanation! Only a break up!
Jake: Huh?
Miley:Jake Ryan, WE ARE OVER!
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That's all for now, I need at least 3-5 comments to continue.