My Third HM Fan Fiction! ~Who Likes Who?~

[MileyRox1174]

I decided to start another FanFiction due to getting a great idea (And Allison, I'm not copying you, it goes into my story in the next chapter)...So here it is, and I hope you like it too!


My Third HM Fan Fiction~ Who Likes Who?

Chapter 1: I’m Looking For My Cousin…

Setting: Miley is going to school…but when she gets there….

Miley: I can’t wait to see-What’s the huge crowd for?

Miley tries to get to the front. She gets as far up as she can before she asks Lilly, who is almost in the front.

Miley: What is this crowd for?

Lilly: Grab my hand and come and see!

Lilly pulls Miley up to the front.

Miley: So what’s this all a-*Looks at the reason for the crowd* what?!

Lilly: What’s wrong, Miley?

Miley: It’s just that…I think I know that person…from somewhere…but I can’t remember where!

Amber: (asking the person) so, why are you here?

Ashley: (asking the person) yeah, but it is really cool to have you at our school!

Person: Oh, I’m looking for my cousin.

Amber: Really, who?!

Ashley: Yeah, who?!

Lilly: Oh I wonder who her cousin is!

Miley: I…I remember now! She’s-

Person: Hannah Montana.


Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[Fire-Chicken]

A bit like Allisons Fan Fiction. But I'm interesting whats happening in the next chapter so. Write More! Please.

[laurahe1]

Miley is speechless when she hears that and she faints!!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Lolz...and Rebecka, I even said it was a bit like hers, but it will go into my own in the next chapter, don't worry! More commz please!

[Katybug1994]

It's great! I want to know what happens. More More More!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please. please please please. also I have a new Fanfic. the link is in my siggy

[MileyRox1174]

^Luff your FanFic! A few more commz...

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

yeah, more!!!

[Katybug1994]

Continue soon! Please.. I'm getting anxious!

[whitesoxfan]

did you finish your second

[~Miley~Rox~]

ggggggggoooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddd ddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[MileyRox1174]

did you finish your second

No...I am just doing two at the same time!

Two more commz get the next chappie!

[MileyRox1174]

I just wrote chappies two and three!! Now it's just one more comment! Please oh please comment!

[anessa_246]

ohh more more!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, here is the next chappie!

Chapter 2: I’M HANNAH MONTANA!

Setting: At school. The mystery person is looking for her cousin (Hannah Montana).

Amber and Ashley: HANNAH MONTANA?!

Ashley: *holds up her finger* Ooh!

Amber: Not now!

Lilly: Oh my god Miley! She’s looking for your other half!

Everyone turns around, and stares at Miley and Lilly.

Lilly: Did I say “other half”? I meant…”other idol”! Yeah…

But no one believes her.

Person: Um…so, who wants to…show me to my locker?

Everyone screams: I DO!

They all run in separate directions, leaving the mystery person behind.

Person: So, uh, what was that comment again?

Miley blushes.

Lilly: I swear, I, I, I didn’t mean it!

Person: It’s alright. Just don’t do it again!

She walks away, and Miley whispers to Lilly.

Miley: (Whispering) Lilly! What was that for?!

Lilly: Miley, I was only trying to help!

Miley: Yeah, but now everyone thinks I’M HANNAH MONTANA!

A huge crowd forms and starts running towards Miley.

Miley: That was really loud wasn’t it?!

Lilly: Yeah! C’mon, I know a way out!

Lilly grabs Miley’s arm, and pulls her into a dark room. She opens the window, and jumps out. Miley hears a thump against the ground about 30 seconds later.

Lilly: C’mon Miley! Just jump!

Miley: Oh no. No, no, no, no, NO! I am not going to jump! I could get hurt!

Lilly: I didn’t! Just jump, you’ll be fine! And if you freak out, I’ll even catch you!

Miley: Alright, fine! But you have to keep that deal!

Lilly: I will! Come on!

Miley stands on the edge of the windowsill, and closes her eyes. She jumps. It feels like the fall is never-ending…

But finally, she reaches the ground, with a huge thump.

Miley: Ow-Wait, that didn’t even hurt!

Lilly: See? I told you!

Miley: I guess you did!

Lilly: Well, school is out now! Let’s go to your house!

Miley: But what about our stuff?

Lilly: Miley, we don’t have homework, and it’s a Friday. We don’t have to take anything home!

Miley: Alright fine. Let’s go.

They walk to Miley’s house, and are welcomed by an unexpected visitor…



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!

[HannahMontanaX3]

ah more please.

[xox DisneyChannel xox]

more!!!

[mileyfanforever101]

gosh i need more!!!!

[Fire-Chicken]

^Samee!

^Lolz...and Rebecka, I even said it was a bit like hers, but it will go into my own in the next chapter, don't worry! More commz please!

Yeah I know. I thought to write something else but I didn't know how to say it in English. And then I wrote like that and it been like.. Weird.

[anessa_246]

more more more more more!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
more more more more more more more

[MileyRox1174]

^Alright, alright! Here:

Chapter 3: “We’ll Fix this…I Promise!”

Setting: Miley and Lilly are welcomed at Miley’s house by an unexpected visitor…

Miley: JAKE?! But, I thought you were filming-

Jake: I know, I know. But they stopped because it wasn’t going well. So, what’s up? You don’t seem too excited to see me!

Miley: Oh, I am! But, it’s just that, everyone knows that I am Hannah Montana now!

Jake: You’re Hannah Montana?! Yeah right!

Miley: Oopsie…Well, I gotta go! *pushes Jake out of the house* Bye!

Jake just walks away, and Miley has another unexpected visitor…

Miley: Where’s my cousin?

Person: Right here!

Miley: Well Monica, it’s great to see you…But one thing-

Monica: Yeah, yeah, I know. I am hogging the attention.

Miley: No, it’s not bad that you are an actress, it’s just that-

Lilly: You’re an actress?! I love your work!

Miley: Lilly, have you ever seen her before?

Lilly: Yeah…no.

Miley: Thought so. Anyways, it’s just that I didn’t want you to say that you were looking for “Hannah Montana”.

Monica: Yeah, but technically, I am related to Hannah more!

Miley: But, she is my other half…and well, I just revealed my biggest secret!

Monica: Yes, I know. But we’ll fix this, I promise!

Miley: There she goes again. The old “We’ll fix this, I promise” phrase! Yeah, I get it! But how, exactly?

Lilly: Oh I know!

Miley: How?

Lilly: --------------!



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!

[anessa_246]

thats GREAT as usual!! is monica bad or good?

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz, and Monica...well I can't tell you yet! Lolz...More commz please!

[whitesoxfan]

Pleaz Post More Lor I'll Get Into The Habbit Of Posting Alot Of The Same Thing

[MileyRox1174]

Well, if you get into that habit again, I will stop this FanFiction. So it's either you wait for more comments, or I stop the FanFiction.

More commz please!

[mileyfanforever101]

more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!please??:D

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz, but I need more commz!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

More.PLLLEEEAASSEEE? *puppy dog face*

[MileyRox1174]

^Aww...how about one more comment (from any user...)??

[Khockeygrl4]

more, i luv it!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Alright fine...I just need to finish it!

[MileyRox1174]

Here you go:

Chapter 4: Just Like in That Song…

Setting: Miley’s house.

Lilly: We’ll just have to…

Miley: Yes?

Lilly: Oh I know! We have to just have Jake become jealous!

Miley: And how will that work?

Lilly: I don’t know…but it will. I am positive.

Miley: Monica? What do you think?

Monica: That will ruin it-I mean sure! Go for it! *mumbling to herself* Shoot!

Miley: Okayy…I guess I’ll do it! When do we start?

Lilly: Right now! Come on!

Lilly grabs Miley and they run out of the house, to start their plan…

Setting: Miley and Lilly are at the beach, and Jake is there too… (Hmm…)

Lilly: Alright, he is coming over right now! Ready? I know that he feels that way about you, trust me!

Miley: Alright, but if it goes wrong and I embarrass myself, you’re dead.

Lilly: Right…Well, he’s here! Go girl!

Miley walks over to the person (not Jake…).

Miley: Um…hey.

Person: Hey, Miley!

Miley: So, uh, I don’t really know how to say this, but…

Person: Will you go out with me?

Miley: Yes!

Person: Great! So, how about this Saturday, at 7?

Miley: Sure! Where?

Person: Right here, on the beach, so we can watch the sunset together…just like in that song…

Miley: Yeah. Okay, so it’s a date! Bye!

Person: Bye!

The person walks away, and Miley walks back to Lilly. Miley gives Lilly the thumbs-up sign.

Miley: You know, I think I might like him…in that way…

Lilly: See? I told you it would work, and Jake will be jealous for sure!

Miley: Yeah…Well, let’s go relax.


Hope ya'll likee! Please oh please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Trust me, it gets better later on! Please comment!

[vivi loca]

Um I dont know how to say this but it's wicked AWESOME write more please

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks! (Check out my second one! In my sig, it's the one with the pink backround!) More commz get the next chappie!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please

[MileyRox1174]

I need more commz!

[Fire-Chicken]

Awesome!! More!

[MileyRox1174]

Two more comments!

[MileyRox1174]

Argh, now I have writer's block! It isn't helping in any way, with this FanFiction, or my other one! If you have any ideas, please feel free to PM me.

[MileyRox1174]

Well, I got another chappie done (like, finally!), but not for my other one...so comment!

[MileyRox1174]

PLEASE comment!

[~Miley~Rox~]

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Wow.

I need one more comment...and ideas. Please oh please PM me if you have any, and I mean any ideas.

[happillybratty]

more................................

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, let me just get the right spot...

[MileyRox1174]

Here ya go:

Chapter 5: It Seems More Like We Are Brother and Sister…

Setting: It is now Saturday, and Miley is getting ready for her date.

Miley: Oh Lilly, do you really think this will work? What if I end up liking him more than Jake?

Lilly: Well, it doesn’t matter if you like him more! Just act like it and it’ll go perfectly! He’s like your brother-

Miley: Not like Jackson. But it seems like we are brother and sister, not best friends…it might be kind of akward…

Lilly: Come on, it’s time to go!

They walk to the beach, and Lilly hides. As soon as Miley’s date gets there, Lilly gets up and leaves.

Miley: So, um, Oliver…

Oliver: I know, this might be a little akward…but it is for me too, believe me.

Miley: Uh, there’s a good spot.

They walk over to a spot on the beach and sit down. The sun is already halfway done setting, so a lot of people are just arriving.

Oliver starts humming “If We Were a Movie”. Miley starts singing it softly, then she sings it louder, and louder, until everyone on the beach can hear her.

Random Person: You sound just like…

Hannah Fan: HANNAH MONTANA!!

Miley: What? No! I’m not Hannah Montana! I don’t even sound like her!

Oliver: Nice job.

Miley: Well, there’s only one thing to do now.

Oliver: What?

Miley: RUN!

Miley grabs Oliver’s hand, and they run to Miley’s house, locking the door. Lilly is standing in her house, with a surprised look on her face.

Lilly: Home so soon, Miley? What happened?

Miley: Can’t talk…Need to…HIDE!

Lilly: Go in your Hannah closet! I’ll hold them, whoever they are, off!

Oliver: Good luck!

Miley: Come on Oliver! Let’s go!

They run up into her closet, and sit down.

Miley: So, how am I supposed to get myself out of this one?

Oliver: I don’t know that…but I know one thing…

Miley: What?

Oliver kisses Miley.

Oliver: That I really like you.


Hope ya'll likee! Please oh please comment!

[MileyRox1174]

And if you're wondering where Monica is, she'll be back in the next few chappies....prob for the rest of the story, wherever she fits in.

PLEASE comment!

[Fire-Chicken]

Great!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz! More commz please!

[happillybratty]

more, so awsome

[sar522]

that was so cool

[whitesoxfan]

monica is as evil as luanne its obvious if you looked closely into chapter 5

[anessa_246]

more more!!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

mmmmmmmmmmmooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeee eeeeeeeee please!

[MileyRox1174]

monica is as evil as luanne its obvious if you looked closely into cahpter 5


Now, that's a good thought...but Monica isn't what she seems to be, or what I am implying (sp?)....

One more comment for the next chappie!!
But if I get one more, and I am not here, I am at the movies....so yeah!

[happillybratty]

more!!!!!!!!!!

[happillybratty]

how about you make it so that monica also likes jake

[MileyRox1174]

how about you make it so that monica also likes jake


That's a good idea....but I have something else in store for Monica and Miley...

Alright, hold on...lemme see if I have the chappie....

[MileyRox1174]

I have it, here it is:

Chapter 6: All She Can Do is…Think.

Setting: In the Hannah closet with Oliver and Miley.

Miley: I…uh…do too?

Oliver: Was that supposed to be a question?

Miley: Uh…no.

Oliver: Good. Because if it was, I’d be pretty mad.

Miley: *nervous laugh* Yeah, uh, me too.

Oliver: Are you okay? You seem really nervous.

Miley: Well, it’s just that…this was a really…um, akward moment…

Oliver: Yeah, so um, how are we going to get out of this?

Miley: I, uh…don’t know.

Oliver: Well, I’ll just go now. Bye Miley, see you tomorrow! *kisses Miley’s cheek*

He walks out of the room, leaving Miley alone in it.

Miley: Yeah…see you tomorrow…

Miley sits in her chair, and starts crying. She was so confused. Both boys really liked her, but she had no idea what to do.

The phone rings. Miley picks it up after two rings.

Miley: *sniff*…Hello?

Jake: Hey Miley! You okay?

Miley: Oh, um…yeah.

Jake: Well then, I just have to ask you something…

Miley: Sure.

Jake: Do you want to go out tomorrow? Around noon?

Miley: (Nervously) Oh, uh, sure. See you then.

Jake: Bye!

He hangs up.

Miley: Bye…

She puts the phone down, and cries again. Now she was really confused. How was she supposed to juggle between two dates tomorrow (Oliver asked her too)?

Miley just closes her eyes. All she can do now is…think.



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!

[anessa_246]

wow poor miley!!
lol
post more more more!!
post more!

[MileyRox1174]

^Lol, yeah! Thanks, more commz please!

[~Miley~Rox~]

1 ? dose miley like oliver or was she just pretending? but it was still really really great

[happillybratty]

my gosh, your fanfics are so addicting

[MileyRox1174]

1 ? dose miley like oliver or was she just pretending? but it was still really really great

Well, she is trying to pretend. But she is confused about her real feelings for both...so yeah.

my gosh, your fanfics are so addicting


Thankz so much! Here, how about one more comment?

[MileyRox1174]

Well, I gotta go! Toodles!

[Fire-Chicken]

Great!!

[MileyRox1174]

Alright, here is the next chappie:

Chapter 7: Double-Date Day

Setting: The next day, at Miley’s house. It is pretty early, and Miley is just waking up.

Miley: *yawn* Oh no…The double-date day. But thankfully, I know how to do it. Now I just need to have breakfast…

She walks downstairs, has breakfast, showers, and dresses. She then calls Lilly.

Lilly: Hello?

Miley: Lilly, come over here, ASAP!

Lilly: Alright. Be over in 10!

She hangs up, and Miley does too.

Miley: 3…2…1!

She opens the door for Lilly.

Lilly: So, what’s up?

Miley: Lilly, I’m nervous. What if one of them finds out?

Lilly: It’ll be alright, Miley! Just think positive!

Miley: Thinking positive…thinking positive…can’t think positive anymore! Lilly, help me, this is serious!

Lilly: Just make sure they are far apart, and they never go anywhere with you…if you are going to see the other date…

Miley: Okayy…well, time to go!

Lilly: Good luck!

Miley walks out.

Miley: Boy, am I going to need it.

Miley walks to the beach, and meets Oliver (it is about 11:30).

Oliver: Hey Miley! *kisses her left cheek*

Miley: Hey Oliver.

Oliver: So, where do you want to go?

Miley: Uh…How about…right there! As far away as possible from here!

Oliver: Okayy…well, let’s go!

They walk over to the farthest possible place on the beach. After Oliver sits down, Miley says…

Miley: Uh…I…have to….go to the bathroom! Be right back!

Oliver: Okay.

Miley runs back to the main beach (where Rico’s is). She sits down at one of the tables, and Jake arrives, right on cue.

Jake: Hey Miley! *kisses her right cheek*

Miley: Oh, hey Jake.

Jake: Where are we going to watch the waves?

Miley: Over there! *points in the complete opposite direction from where Oliver is*

Jake: Alright, let’s go!

They walk to that part of the beach, and sit down.

Miley: I, uh…I have to…I forgot my…my, my…I forgot my bracelet back up by Rico’s! I’ll be right back!

Jake: Alright.

Miley runs back to Rico’s. And then she runs over to Oliver (making sure Jake doesn’t see).

Miley: So…what’s up with you these days? (thinking) Miley you idiot! “What’s up with you these days?” What a stupid thing to say! You know what’s up with him!

Oliver: Oh, um, not much. Just relaxing.

Miley: Yeah…me too…I guess…

Oliver: Are you okay? You seem a little down in the dumps.

Miley: Yeah…I’m fine! I…just…forgot my purse by the bathroom! I have to go back and get it!

Oliver: You didn’t bring a purse.

Miley: I mean…I left my…my…I need to ask…my brother a…question! Be right back!

Oliver: Okay…

Miley runs to Rico’s. She then runs to Jake again (making sure Oliver doesn’t see).

Jake: Where’s your bracelet?

Miley: *looks at her wrist* I…I, um…

Jake: Is something wrong? You are taking awfully long when you go back and forth.

Miley: Well, it’s just that…

Jake: Well, where is your bracelet?

Miley: I decided to leave it…with Jackson…yeah.

Jake: Jackson isn’t working today.

Miley: I mean, I gave it to…a little girl. She really wanted it.

Jake: Aw, you’re so giving! *leans in to kiss her*

Miley: I…have to…go…get a quick soda!

Jake: Okay, but come back.

Miley: I will…

She runs to Rico’s. She orders a small soda, and runs over to Oliver.

Oliver: Why do you have a soda?

Miley: I…got thirsty.

Oliver: So, did your brother answer the question?

Miley: Uh…

Oliver: Wait, he’s not working today! So really, why did you go?

Miley: I got thirsty.

Oliver: You can just tell me that, you know.

Miley: Yeah, I do. Well, I’m done with it, so I’m going to go throw it out!

Oliver: Okay…

Miley runs back to Rico’s. She throws the half-full soda out, and she sits down to rest for a few seconds. But those seconds turn into minutes…



Whew that was long...Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[happillybratty]

wow, that was confusing, well not to the reader, like miley running back and forth being all like UH...UH...I... jake and oliver must be really confused, awsome job by the way

[Fire-Chicken]

Asbra! Som vanligt.

[MileyRox1174]

Asbra! Som vanligt.



Uh...I'm guessing that means like "Great! Post more." or something...sorry, I don't know Swedish...


More commz please!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

AWESOME! I have a question thuogh(MileyRox1174) what are your fave couples?

[Fire-Chicken]

Uh...I'm guessing that means like "Great! Post more." or something...sorry, I don't know Swedish...


More commz please!

Oops.. I'm so sorry.. I working on my Swedish homework. I was writing Swedish and looked at your FanFic at the same time. So I wrote in Swedish, Sorry.
Good guess. But I wrote "Great! Like usual" Almost right.

[MileyRox1174]

Yay! I was almost right!

[MileyRox1174]

AWESOME! I have a question thuogh(MileyRox1174) what are your fave couples?

Oh, I don't know...It just depends...(good question)...

[~Miley~Rox~]

i really want to know what happens so u should really post more

[MileyRox1174]

Let me see if I have the chappie...No, so I will write it, but I want a few more commz!

EDIT: I am writing as we speak, so that might not apply after I am done.

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more

[whitesoxfan]

now in russian paghausta otdie pachitat

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more again

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more

[MileyRox1174]

Okay here it is:

Chapter 8: You Lied!

Setting: Miley is sitting in the chair at Rico’s and her dates are wondering where she is…

Oliver: Man, Miley hasn’t come back for really long. I thought she was just throwing her soda out…Well I should just go find her.

Jake: Wow, Miley’s been a long time. How long does it take to get a soda? I’ll just go check on her…

As both boys walk up onto the main beach (where Rico’s is), they see each other.

Jake: Oh, hey there, Oken!

Oliver: Hey Jake, what brings you here? Couldn’t get enough attention?

Jake: Unfortunately for you, no. I am here with-

Oliver: Oh so you’re here with someone! I’m here with Miley.

Jake: WHAT?! So am I!

Oliver: NO! You can’t be! She said yes to me!

Jake: She said yes to you?! She said yes to me!

They continue bickering for a little while longer, until they noticed Miley. She was sleeping in one of the chairs.

Jake: Well, well, well. That’s why Miley hasn’t gotten back to her “dates”.

Oliver: She’s asleep. Must’ve gotten too tiring running back and forth so much!

Jake and Oliver walked over in front of Miley. Jake pokes her a few times, and she wake up. But only to her disliking…

Jake and Oliver were staring her in the eyes, as soon as she opened them.

Miley: Oh…Uh…hey guys…

Oliver: So, that little double-date deal didn’t work out as you had liked, did it?

Miley: (Nervous and lying) what are you talking about? I…I…I didn’t have double-dates! What are you talking about?

Jake: Oh, you know quite well what we are talking about.

Miley: No…I don’t.

Jake: So I guess that explains why we were on two different parts of the beach and-

Oliver: -and why you had to make up excuses to run back and forth and-

Jake: -and that’s why you ended up here, sleeping like a baby, only to have us find out that-

Oliver and Jake: You said yes to both of us!

Miley: Okay…so are we cool?

Oliver: Cool? Why would we be cool? You ruined our “dates” by lying to us! And you didn’t even tell us!

Miley: Why would I tell you?

Jake: Well you should have! I thought in relationships, you were supposed to be honest! I guess not with you!

Miley: Wha-uh-but-I-

Oliver: Yeah, you lied. That’s it. We’re through.

Jake: We’re through, too.

Oliver and Jake walk off without even saying good-bye.

Miley just puts her head on the table and sobs.



Whew that was long. Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Mileyrox1174 what presadint would you vote for between barrack obama hillary clinton or john edwards


Please don't spam. If you have to ask me a question not referring to my FanFiction, or Hannah Montana (Miley Cyrus and the cast), please PM me.

[~Miley~Rox~]

great write/post more

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz, but I need about 6 more commz!!

[Fire-Chicken]

Great!

[happillybratty]

so awsome...........like always

[anessa_246]

poor miley!! :( ,agian lol, post more it was fantastic!!! but i hope they become all friends agian!

[whitesoxfan]

post more pleaz

[MileyRox1174]

I need two more commz!!

[whitesoxfan]

good great theres now pleaaaz post more

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Khockeygrl4]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Alright here it is:

Chapter 9: Never Give Up…

Setting: Miley is sobbing.

Miley picks her head up, and walks home. When she gets in her house…

Miley: Monica, I need help!

Monica: What, what happened?

Miley: They found out, and they hate me now!

Monica: Don’t…don’t worry. We’ll fix this.

Miley: How?! We can’t possibly fix my broken heart!

Lilly walks up to her.

Lilly: Yes, we can! Miley, remember what I always used to say to you?

Miley: When?!

Lilly: When we first started dating people…oh what was it?

Miley: Never give up and always give more than you have. Lilly, that’s over now!

Lilly: What are the first three words?

Miley: Never give up…but Lilly, how can I not give up, when they both hate me?!

Lilly: Don’t worry, it’ll pass soon enough. Right, Monica?

Monica: Oh! Oh-oh yeah! It will! Don’t worry about it they’ll get back to liking you soon!

Miley: How do you know that?

Monica: I just know things…



Sorry it was so short. Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

goody write more

[Sporty Miley]

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ rite MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[happillybratty]

write more, pleaz

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz right more come on pleaz more

[anessa_246]

MORE MORE MORE !!! plezzzz post more!

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks everyone! But I'll post more tomorrow.

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

really great! more!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

moree

[MileyRox1174]

OMG I am SO sorry! I totally forgot about it! Here is the next incredibly short chappie:

Chapter 10: Lilly, I Have Something to Tell You

Setting: Miley’s house.

Miley: Well, if you “know things”, then do you know this? Why was I so stupid?! And when will they ever like me, even as a friend, ever again?!

She runs up to her room.

Lilly: That was a little weird…

Monica: Well, Lilly, I have something to tell you. But you can’t tell Miley!

Lilly: Why not?

Monica: It…it…it would be too hard for her to take.

Lilly: Alright, shoot.

Setting: The beach, where Jake and Oliver are talking about what happened.

Jake: But…why did Miley do it? She can’t possibly like both of us!

Oliver: Well…maybe she does. But, she…she…

Jake: She what, Oken? She lied. She hurt us. She was just using us. What more is there?

Oliver: Oh, there’s a lot more.

Jake: Like what?

Oliver: ----------!



Sorry it was so short. Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

I need 10 comments!! That means, more tomorrow!

[Khockeygrl4]

uh, 10? thats harsh, lol. well heres one, cus i luv it and cant wait 4 more!!!!!!

[anessa_246]

more more more more more!!! post more!!:D :D :D :D

[MileyRox1174]

8 more comments!!

[MileyRox1174]

Oh and I have an announcement:

THIS FANFICTION WILL BE ENDING SOON. PROBABLY IN THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS. IT WILL BE ENDING BECAUSE I AM VERY BUSY, MAKING GRAPHICS, DEALING WITH MY LIFE, AND MANY OTHER THINGS. SO STICK AROUND FOR THE ENDING.

[whitesoxfan]

anyone wanna read my fan fic and its really good post more

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

awesome!!!

[whitesoxfan]

do you wanna read my fan fic

[whitesoxfan]

if you do go to rpgs and look for sports fan fic first time pleaz read

[MileyRox1174]

^Please don't advertise your FanFiction on my thread. Thank you.

Anymore comments?

[cookieforlife]

:oh write some more, and dont end it! :(

[hannah_montana.boston]

yea dont

[MileyRox1174]

I have to! I don't have enough time to keep up with two fanfictions, making graphics, and my life. And here are the last two chappies:

Chapter 11: Why Are You Acting Like Luanne?

Setting: Oliver and Jake are talking about what happened.

Oliver: Oh like maybe she didn’t mean to do that. When you talked to her, did you give her time to respond?

Jake: Uh…no. She tried to say something, but I just hung up.

Oliver: Me too. Except that was in her Hannah closet.

Jake: What were you doing in there?!

Oliver: Dude, we were hiding from the crazed Hannah fans. Don’t get any ideas.

Jake: Okay. Now what do we do? Miley probably hates us!

Oliver: Yeah, but still…she was really upset….

Jake: I guess so. So what do we do now?

Setting: Miley’s house. Monica is talking to Lilly.

Monica: I made the guys do that! I wanted Miley to be miserable, because she is Hannah and gets all the fame!

Lilly: You did that?! How mean! And you are famous too!

Monica: I know…but since I am related to Hannah, she gets WAY more fame than me! It’s not fair!

Lilly: But why are you acting like Luanne? That’s just stupid! You could just ask her for a little more credit!

Monica: I know! Now I realize how stupid I was! I just hope she forgives me!

Lilly: Well, that might be harder than you think.


Chapter 12: What Do You Have to Say?

Setting: Jake and Oliver are talking.

Oliver: Maybe, we just go apologize. I mean, that’s the easiest thing to do.

Jake: Okay, let’s go.

They walk to Miley’s house. They just walk in the door.

Lilly: What are you two doing here?

Jake: Whoa. Don’t go all sassy on us! The last thing we need is that from you!

Lilly: I’m still mad about what happened.

Oliver: But it happened to Miley, not you.

Lilly: Yeah, so what does that matter? I’m her best friend!

Jake: True. Now can her best friend please let us go up to Miley’s room?

Lilly: Why? What do you care about Miley?

Jake: A lot. Now let us go.

Lilly: One at a time.

Oliver: Lilly, LET US GO UP!

Lilly: Alright fine. Just don’t get her even more upset than she already is!

Jake and Oliver walk up to Miley’s room. They knock on the door.

Jake: Miley? Can we please just come in and apologize?

Oliver: We’re so very sorry. We didn’t mean-

Jake: What Oliver’s trying to say is we’re very, very sorry! Please forgive us.

Miley stops crying, but doesn’t open the door, much less respond.

Oliver: Please? It won’t ever happen again.

Miley still doesn’t respond. She quietly gets up, and walks to the door…But doesn’t open it.

Jake: Miley, we know you are listening. In fact, we know you are at the door. But if you won’t respond, than I will speak for both of us. We are very, truly sorry for what happened. We are such idiots and shouldn’t have blown up at you like that. We hope you’ll forgive us, because we are SO sorry. Well, bye.

They walk down the hall. Miley still stands by her door, and then opens it and runs after them. Jake and Oliver are opening the front door when she screams.

Miley: NO!

She is running down the stairs, when she catches up with them.

Jake: So you won’t forgive us?

Miley: I mean “No” as in don’t leave!

Oliver: Why not? Are you going to blow up at us?

Miley: I would. But I’m much better than that.

Jake: So, what do you have to say?

Miley: Well…


THE END!!

Hope you liked my FanFiction!! Please oh please comment!!

[happillybratty]

why did u have to end it(retorical question)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! does miley choose one of them?

[MileyRox1174]

Just use your imagination!

[Sporty Miley]

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[whitesoxfan]

i have nothing else to do know

[~Miley~Rox~]

what that cant be the end that was just toooooo short you should make a sequal(sp) or somthing or another fan fic if you hane time plz plz plz!

[MileyRox1174]

^If I have time, I will. But for right now, I don't, and just think it would be too much. Thankz though everyone!

[hannah_montana.boston]

ugh my imaganation cant deside y did it hafta b a hanga

[Fire-Chicken]

You're So Evil, When you end it like that. lol, just kidding.
It was Really Good!

[MileyRox1174]

Thankz everyone!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

i could guess the ending of the second fanfiction but this one's too hard!

[MileyRox1174]

^Lolz, sorry! I just wanted to end it like that...evil, I know. More commz?

[whitesoxfan]

i have nothing to do whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[MileyRox1174]

Ookayy...whatever. Thankz people!