My Second HM Fan Fiction!! <3

[MileyRox1174]

Hey people, this is my second Fan Fiction! I decided to write another one because lots of people really liked my first one! Hope ya'll like this one too! (It's another "Summer Break" one...lolz)


Chapter 1: It’ll be the Best…the Best Ever!

It was finally summer break. Miley (as Hannah) had a huge, two month tour. Lola, as always, wanted to go, so she let her.

Miley: Alright, it’s almost time to go!

Lilly: I can’t wait; it’ll be the best….the best ever!

Miley: Well, obviously! You think that because you are going….duh!

Lilly: Well yes, but at least I’ll keep everything….lively!

Miley: *laughs* whatever, let’s go!

They both walk out to the bus, which was there already…they didn’t take long, the bus just came early. Lilly and Miley loaded everything onto the bus, said their good-byes to Oliver, and pretty much everyone else…Then they were off.

Two days later, Miley was just waking up to get ready for rehearsals.

Miley: *yawns and stretches* Well, time to get ready! Lilly, wake up!

Lilly: *yawns* Why now, Miles? I was having the best dream ever…I was-

Miley: I don’t care. Get up and get into your Lola costume so we can go to rehearsals!!

Lilly: Alright, I’m getting out of my bed.

She slowly gets out, and changes into her Lola costume. Miley changes into her Hannah costume, and they go for rehearsals. Miley has to rehearse so she is ready for the concert; her dancing and her voice have to be in tip-top shape.

Hannah: Okay, time to rehearse.

She walks out onto the stage, and starts practicing.

Miley: (Ending)

Watching the sunset
Fade to black
Show the names
Play that happy song…

It seems like in no time, the song ends. But something else happens in no time…



Hope ya'll likee!! Please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Please oh please comment!! I have another chappie that I can post if I get commz!

[Katybug1994]

It's good! Write More!

[hannah_montana.boston]

more i demand of you ...(please!!!!!!!!!!!!)

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks, and did you read my first one (Katybug1994)?? Anyways, more commz please!

[MileyRox1174]

You know what, I will just post the next chappie anyways!! Here ya go:

Chapter 2: “Howard Cassidy”

Setting: Hannah is rehearsing. She notices something…or should I say someone suspicious…

Hannah starts singing the next song.

Hannah:

Who said?
Who said?
I can’t be superman
I say
I say
That I know I can
Who said?
Who said?
I can’t be worldwide
I say
I say
Time is on my side…

The music keeps playing, but Hannah doesn’t keep singing.

She sees someone sneaking around in the stands. She tries not to look…but can’t hold herself back.

Producer: Hannah? What’s wrong? Why aren’t you singing?

Hannah: Oh, um…it’s nothing. Just, uh, spaced for a second.

Producer: Well, we need to keep practicing and you can “space” after! So keep singing!

Hannah: I will.

Hannah finds her place at the end…she sings the ending. Then she sits down. But she also sees the person talking to the producer. He glances at her, and Hannah catches a glimpse of his face. But it was too quick to know about any relations…

Setting: Lilly is sitting in the tour bus, listening to music. She got too bored watching Miley rehearse, so she decided to relax for a while.

Lilly hears a knock on the door.

She pauses her music, and answers it.

Lilly: Hello, may I help you?

Person: Yes. I am looking for a Hannah Montana.

Lilly: Oh sorry, but you’re too late. She’s not here right now. But I can take a message for you if you want.

Person: Oh yes, that would be great. Just tell her that one of her producers, Howard Cassidy, would like to have a word with her. *evil laugh*

Lilly: Sure, whatever. Bye!

Lilly shuts the door, and she goes back to her music. “Howard Cassidy” smiles and walks off.


Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh PLEASE comment!!

[happillybratty]

please write more

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please

[hannah_montana.boston]

i think shell not tel 4 som reason

[MileyRox1174]

I am writing more! More commz anyone??

[MileyRox1174]

But I can't post it tonight...I have to go right now!! Toodles!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

dang.ok

[mileyfanforever101]

I like i am going to read this one too!

[mileyfanforever101]

ok bye!post more!

[anessa_246]

that was great!!! post more!! more!!! i bet this one is going to be good too!!!!!! :D

[Miles Of Smiles Rock]

Write More When You Get The Chance! Please...

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz everyone!! Hold on a sec...I might have it....Yep I do! Here:

Chapter 3: Miss Montana

Setting: Hannah finishes rehearsing, and walks back to her tour bus. Lilly is still listening to her music.

Hannah: Whew! What a long rehearsal! *Rips off wig* Lilly?

Lilly: Huh? Oh, Miley! *Stops music* so, how was rehearsal?

Miley: It was good…except this guy was sneaking around, and I saw him talking to the producer. It was really freaky.

Lilly: Well, if he was talking to the producer, he must not be stalking you or anything.

Miley: That might be true…but I had this weird feeling in my stomach, like I recognized him from somewhere…

Lilly: Well, what did he look like? Was he cute? Because I am looking-

Miley: Lilly! Stay on topic! I’m not sure if he was cute, he was so far away! But it looked like he had blondish hair…

Lilly: Are you thinking what I’m thinking?

Miley: That depends. Are you thinking of-

Miley and Lilly: --------?!

Lilly: Oh, and Miley…I, um, have something I need to tell you.

Miley: Not now Lilly. I don’t have time for it!

Lilly: *Sarcastically* right, because you are texting on your phone! Miley, this is serious!

Miley: Not…right…now!

Lilly: Alright, Miss Montana!



Hope ya'll likee!! (I'll post more after school) Please oh please comment!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[Miles Of Smiles Rock]

Pleezus More.

[Fire-Chicken]

Please More!! It's Great!

[anessa_246]

more!!! i wonder who the guy is!

[MileyRox1174]

*evil laugh* It's really kinda easy to guess...hold on a sec, I might have the next chappie...Yep here it is!!

Chapter 4: Hannah, Did You Dye Your Hair?

Setting: Miley and Lilly are still in the tour bus.

Lilly: Miley, I really need you to know something!

Miley: Lilly, please! I am very busy!

Lilly: Yeah, now what are you doing, taking pictures? Or maybe you are daydreaming about Jake?

Miley: No, and no. I am doing something even more important!

Lilly: What?

Before Miley can speak, the door bursts open.

Miley: Hello? Who’s there?

Voice: I am the producer, remember? I said I would be coming at around this time.

Miley: Oh yeah!

Producer: Wait, Hannah, did you dye your hair or something?

Miley: Uh-um…what are you talking about? This is my blonde hair!

Producer: Yeah. Then explain why you don’t have bangs, and you hair is brown!

Miley: I, um, have to go!

Miley grabs Lilly and runs out of the bus, and they head towards the mall (to shop, duh). The producer just walks away…

Setting: Miley and Lilly are at the mall.

They dash into a store. Miley spots something very cute instantly.

Miley: Ooo, Lilly! I have to have this! *Holds up outfit (that looks like it could be something of Hannah’s)*

Lilly: Yeah but Miley, that looks too much like something that (whispering) Hannah would wear!

Miley: True. But (whispering) Hannah could wear it! I could just get it for a concert or something!

Lilly: Alright, but let me get something too!

Miley: Fine. Ooo, look at that outfit over there! *points to outfit in corner (that Lilly would like)*

Lilly: I call it! *Runs over, and grabs her size*

Miley and Lilly get in line to buy their clothes. Once they get to the beginning, they purchase the outfits. But as they are walking out…

“HC” (Recognize him?): Perfect. I just got her to say it…now for phase two! Operation ----------!



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

hes evil and i like it

[Fire-Chicken]

Great!!

[mileyfanforever101]

Great!!its great i love it!!you need to post more!!:57:

[MileyRox1174]

Thankz everyone! But I need more commz to post it!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more. even as I listen to My Heart Will Go On I need MORE

[Sporty Miley]

Ahhhhhhhh!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Lolz...I am writing more (like past the next chappie), but I don't really want to post it right now...

[Sporty Miley]

OK!! but hurry!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Alright, fine I will post it! Here you go:

Chapter 5: I Would Never Run Away When Life Gets Bad?

Setting: Miley and Lilly were just sitting in the tour bus, thinking. Miley was thinking of who it could have been, and Lilly was basically pondering the universe.

Miley: Blonde hair…dark eyebrows…hmm….

Lilly: Why is the sky blue?

Miley: Huh? Lilly, focus!

Lilly: I am. But there are so many other, more important, unanswered questions to think about!

Miley: But Lilly, I need to know who was sneaking around!

Lilly: We already know, remember?

Miley: And when did we figure it out?

Lilly: Yesterday, before the producer came in…oh yeah, that reminds me. Miley, I have something to tell you.

Miley: Lilly, not now! I am trying to think of who it was!

Lilly: But Miley, this is important-

Miley: This is more important! Lilly, if you’re not going to be helpful, just got back to pondering the universe!

Lilly: Alright, whatever…

Miley: Oh yeah! Now I remember! It was…uh…JAKE!

Lilly: Exactly, now can I tell you?

Miley: Tell me what?

Lilly: The thing that you keep telling me I can’t tell you because every time I try to tell you, you just tell me “No, I’m busy!” So I have to tell you right now, or else I’ll lose my temper next time you tell me that!

Miley: ….Okay. Shoot.

Lilly: Yesterday, before you came back into the bus, some guy named-

Miley looks out the window and whispers: It’s JAKE! He’s coming! Quick, give me my wig!

Lilly tosses Miley’s wig to her, and Lilly puts on her Lola wig. Miley is still fiddling around with hers when Jake walks in.

Jake: Hey Hannah! Long time no see!

Hannah (still messing with her wig): Jake? Why aren’t you in Romania? I mean, I thought you were filming a movie?

Jake: Well, they canceled it, due to the other actors’ behavior on the set. Why, aren’t you happy to see me? And why are you messing your hair up like that?

Hannah: I, uh…um… (Her wig finally stays in place perfectly) I was just fixing my hair. It was really static-y… (Thinking) Miley, you idiot! Static-y?! Ugh, let’s just hope he doesn’t care…

Jake: Okayy…So, how are you?

Hannah: I’m, uh, fine. How about you?

Jake: I’m okay. *smiles*

Hannah: Why are you looking at me like that?

Jake: *stops smiling* Oh, I, umm…No reason.

Hannah: Alright, well if that’s all you have to say to me, I’m just going to-

Jake suddenly kisses her.

Hannah: -what was that?

Jake: Uh…um…I, uh….

Hannah: Are you hitting on me?

Jake: *laughs* what does it matter? Nobody will know…

Jake starts walking more towards Hannah, but she pulls away. She grabs Lola and runs out again. Jake is just left standing there, thinking.

Setting: Hannah and Lola are running. They stop once they are behind the building in which the concert is taking place.

Hannah: Okay, Lola. We’re safe here.

Lola: Why did we have to run away again?

Hannah: Because. We just had to.

Lola: Yes, but in your song, “I Got Nerve”, you say:

“I know where I stand
I know who I am
I would never run away
When life gets bad
It’s everything I see
Every part of me
Gonna get what I deserve
I got nerve!”

Hannah: Yeah, but that doesn’t prove anything!

Lola: But it does! Either you are lying in that song, or you just don’t know what to do when things like this happen!

Hannah: But…I…I don’t...It’s just…

Lola: I know. You are probably confused right now, and that’s okay. But you don’t have to run away from all your problems!

Hannah: Alright, you caught me! But it’s not that I am lying in the song. It’s just…I have no idea where my life is going right now! Everything is mixed up-

Lola: -because Jake kissed Hannah, not Miley?

Hannah: Yeah…wait, how did you know that?

Lola: I was standing right there with you! Duh!

Hannah: Oh right…But, I just can’t figure out my life right now!

Lola: Well, running away won’t make it any worse!

“HC”: Oh yes it will. Or so you thought!



Whew that was long!! Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

REALLY GOOD!(like the first!) Is this fanfiction the continuacy of the your first or is it just a new one?

[MileyCyrus/HannahMontanaRocks]

wow u r a really good writer i really liked ur first 1 i bet i am going 2 like this one to p.s.pm me whenever u want:))

[MileyRox1174]

Thankz! And Diana (right?), it's just a new one! If it was continued, it would be like...way different! Lolz

[~Miley~Rox~]

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttt

[MileyRox1174]

^Lol, thankz! More commz please!!

(P.S. I have like two or three more chappies...so yeah, if you want more, than comment!)

EDIT: Oh yeah, and (just like in my other one) it gets much juicier in chapters that are later and later!! Trust me! (Especially in Chapter 7!!)

[HannahMontanaX3]

more. here are five commies:
1. great
2. ahsome
3. more
4. terrefic
5. coolishy

[anessa_246]

omgosh!!! jake likes hannah!! that is so weird i wonder what will happen to miley and jake!!;)

[MileyRox1174]

^Lolz!! Alright, hold on...Here ya go:


Chapter 6: “Operation Little Demon”

Setting: Hannah, Lola, and “HC” are standing behind the building.

The first thing that Hannah thought of was:
RUN!
But she knew that running away wouldn’t make anything better. So she improvised.

Hannah: Well, where can I run? I mean seriously, dude, think things over before just blurting them out!

Lola: Hannah, you probably should’ve kept your big mouth shut! He’s holding something…

Hannah: What? *Looks at what’s in his hand* Oh my god…A knife!

Lola: (Whispering) Quick, I see an escape!

Hannah: (Whispering) Where? I don’t see anything!

(“HC” was about 100 feet away from them, so he couldn’t exactly grab them without them getting a head start…Just thought you’d want to know…)

Lola: (Whispering) Look! A ladder…to your left! Grab it, and let’s climb to the top!

Hannah: (Whispering) Alright, fine! But I call going first!

Hannah runs over and grabs the ladder. She perches it against the side of the building, and starts climbing. Lola is left, helpless, standing on the ground until Hannah gets to the top. As she is climbing, though…

Lola: Hannah, I think we have a situation.

Hannah: You think? I already knew that!

Lola: No, I mean-

Hannah: I don’t have time! I have to climb to the top!

Lola: But you have to listen! It’s really important at a time like this-

Hannah: (Can barely speak) Lola…its fine…I’m alright…

As Hannah climbs higher and higher, she cannot believe her eyes.

Setting: Lola is on the ground, defending herself and the ladder with her life (literally).

“HC”: Come on, little girl. Let the big man go up the ladder!

Lola: What did you just call me?!

“HC”: Little girl! Little girl!

Lola: Oh no you didn’t! First of all, I am not “little”. Second, I know self defense! And if you come any closer, I’ll be forced to release my wrath upon you!

“HC”: Yes, and what self defense is that? Stepping on my toes, or maybe screaming until my eardrums pop?

Lola: The second one would be a good idea, but frankly, no. Those moves are too babyish. I have much more dangerous ones! You wanna see?

“HC”: Okay. Show me what you got, girl. And if you lose, well, we all know that answer…

Lola: I am not going to lose! Trust me, and you’ll just run home crying to your mommy, like you probably always do!

“HC”: Oh no you didn’t!

Lola: Oh yes I did, and I will be doing much more! So brace yourself…and I will not lose!

“HC”: I call this bring-on, “Operation Little Demon”!

Lola: And why do you call it that?

“HC”: You’ll find out soon enough…



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[anessa_246]

oh yeah!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!! ITS AWSOME!!!:D :D :D :D :D

opps i wasnt supposed to post that!!^^ lol

but post more more post more post more!!!!!!! man i still dont know who "HC" is!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!

so ur other one was ur first one???? wow u must be really good at writing stories!!!!!!! and i remember someone said that u should work for disney u should!! lol :D

ohhhh!! lol

[MileyRox1174]

^Oh, it's alright! I just don't like when people post like a million of the same comment, all underneath each other!! But that comment was alright!

And thanks, I wish I could work for Disney! But some things in this would be a little bit too, um, how do I say it? Violent. Lolz so yeah. But thanks!

And "HC" is "Howard Cassidy". I just wanted to abreviate it to make it shorter!

More commz for the next chappie!

[hannah_montana.boston]

moremoremore moremoremoreee

[MileyRox1174]

Hmm...I need more commz please!!

[Miley_Montana_Gal]

It's good! Finally, another good story (that I've seen)! Cuz on the Idol Side of Lily, well, frankly, it's getting kinda...uh...crazy! now it's dying down, thanks to awesome stories like these!

[mileyfanforever101]

omg!i love this!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

can't wait to read the next chapter!! more!

[flower1]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[happillybratty]

more pleaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[flower1]

morreee!!!! I Command Of U! Mmmmmmmmmmmmmoooorrrreeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!n ow!

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, okay!! But there is a bit of violence, so if you do not like that, this chapter and the next one won't appeal to you....Here:

Chapter 7: Oh Shoot.

Setting: Hannah is climbing, but she can hardly breathe.

As Hannah gets to the top, she notices something.

Hannah: *cough* what’s…that?

She looks over in the other direction, and then up. But what does she see?

Hannah: *cough* why do I see…*cough*…smoke above…me?

Hannah tried to look farther into the distance, but she couldn’t see through the thick “smoke” (There’s a reason…). She suddenly felt uncomfortably dizzy…

Setting: Lola is still defending herself in HC’s “Operation Little Demon”.

Lola: Bring it on, grandpa!

HC: Oh you did not just say that! You did not just call me “grandpa”!

Lola: Maybe I did, maybe I didn’t…hmm…let me refer back in my mind. Yes, actually I did call you grandpa! And I’m darn proud of it!

HC: You shouldn’t be…

Lola: Oh? And why is that? Are you going to pinch me to death, or maybe call my mom to make her take me away?

HC: Nope, and nope.

Lola: True, my mom would cheer me on. She’s pretty cool when it comes to self defense situations…

HC: Well, we’ll just see how well you do in them!

Lola: But I do have to warn you again, I took a self defense class!

HC: And I did too! Let’s get it on then! Whoever wins, well, can do whatever. And whoever loses, well….

Lola: Whatever, old man! Let’s go!

Lola dashes up to him, and kicks him in the shin. He kicks her back. She kicks him in the side of his knee, hoping to break it. But he just collapses for a few seconds, getting right back up. She figures that she only has two more things to try at this point…

Setting: Hannah is figuring out what the “smoke” is doing above her head.

Hannah: Oh no…*cough*…what’s that? On the other side….of this building…

She finally reaches the top, collapsing, out of breath. Now she can’t breathe even more. But she goes to the other side of the building, looking as far as she can see. But Miley (as Hannah) sees what she didn’t want to see…

Hannah: Oh no! *coughs a million times* Do I see…yes, I do! I see… *coughs another million times* …FIRE! But…if there was a fire on that side…*coughs three times*…then that must mean…

She looks even further into the distance…

Hannah: Oh shoot.

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Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[Fire-Chicken]

I love reading stuff like this. (Not that I like violence in real, but in books or stories it's OK) I just like the tension.
Mooooooore!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

wat wat?

[MileyRox1174]

More commz!!

[anessa_246]

more more!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz peoples! But I need more commz to post more!!

P.S. NO SCHOOL!! Yaay!! Sorry bout being off topic..keep commenting!

[Miley98]

That was grrrrreeaaaat!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks! Anymore commz?

EDIT: Lolz, and my fave part was the ending, where Hannah says...

Hannah: Oh shoot.

It really leaves people hanging!

[happillybratty]

more pleaz................... it does leave people hanging

[mileysbestpal164]

omg this is like so awsome

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz! Here is the next chappie:

WARNING: IF YOU DO NOT LIKE VIOLENCE, DO NOT READ THIS CHAPTER!

Chapter 8: She Can’t Help Wondering What’s Happening With Her Life…

Setting: Lola is still defending herself…with only two more self defense moves left….

Lola: Uh…um…Hey, look at me!! I’m making a funny face!!

HC just stares at her, with his eyes wide. She quickly uses both thumbs to poke his eyes as hard as she can. He screams.

Lola: (Thinking) alright. Only one more thing to do…give him the final blow! Or should I say push!!

Lola puts her thumb into a thumbs-up position. She looks for the soft spot in his neck, and pushes her thumb up into his neck as hard as she can. (Like between the underneath part of your chin, and the big lump in your throat.) He can’t scream, as he cannot speak. HC just grabs his throat, gasping for air, because that push collapsed something. He can’t breathe, but Lola could care less. She was just defending herself, and she has the right to do that.

Lola: There! You got what you deserved! I told you that you couldn’t possibly win! Have fun... (High-pitched voice) Toodles!

Lola notices that the ladder is open for climbing, and she starts climbing. She looks down, at Howard Cassidy. He is still gasping for air, but he is almost done. Lola just keeps on climbing.

Lola: Whoa! This ladder sure is slippery!

She starts coughing, but she doesn’t know why. Hannah does…

Setting: At the top, Hannah is still lying on the roof, coughing uncontrollably.

Hannah: Oh shoot.

She looked farther into the distance and only saw what she didn’t want. Her tour bus…was up in flames!

Hannah: God! I just got to the first part of my tour, and my bus catches on fire? How much worse could it get?

When she tries to breathe again, she smells (or should I say tastes) something different in the air surrounding her.

Hannah: Why does it taste like sulfur? And oil? Blech! *She spits*

She just tries to think of positive things. But as she tastes the sulfur and oil in the atmosphere, she can’t help thinking that something isn’t right. Hannah tries to figure out what is happening, but it just gives her a headache. So she decides to just lie down, and breathe. But as she tries that, she can’t help wondering what is happening to the life she once had…



Hope ya'll likee!! Sorry it was so short! Please oh please comment!!

[Fire-Chicken]

Awesome!! Write more

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz! But I need more commz to post more!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

(as usual) awesome!

[MileyRox1174]

Thankz! More commz for the next chappie!

[MileyRox1174]

(Off topic: Diana, did you not have school today, or do you just get out earlier?? I didn't have school! Except, soon I have to go outside again, and shovel the snow...oh well.)

Anways: Please oh please comment more!

[Fire-Chicken]

Sorry off topic: You Are Soo Lucky!! You don't have school because of snow? We need to go to school even if we so have ½ m snow. I got to go and take the TV before someone else takes it. (And that is Really hard, because Everyone wants to watch different programs)
Hope you write more soon.

[MileyRox1174]

Off topic: Well, yeah. Except the roads aren't plowed, and it just keeps snowing and snowing and snowing, so it's very dangerous. (And the snow hurts when it hits your skin, so yeah) [I just hope we don't have school TOMORROW too! That would be awesome!!]

Anyways...Please oh PLEASE comment!

EDIT: {Well, I gotta go now. Toodles!}

[MileyRox1174]

Okayy, I am back!! Comment please!!

[anessa_246]

wow that was great!! violent, but great!! oh yeah who is howard cassidy again??

[MileyRox1174]

Howard Cassidy was the person who came to the bus when Lilly was listening to music...he said he wanted to have a word with Hannah and he laughed, evily...

So yeah. Please oh please comment more!

[happillybratty]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[happillybratty]

i just notice theres a type-o on my siggy, it says jut instead of just

[MileyRox1174]

^lolz...fine here is the next chappie...hold on a sec.

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 9: “Hannah Stuck Up On a Roof With Friend”!


Setting: Lola was still climbing, and with every step she took, her breath was shortened more and more.

Lola: Okay…I can do this…I have to…

She climbs higher up, and finally gets to the top. She collapses before she can look at anything.

Lola finally picks her head up, and looks around.

Lola: Hannah? Miley? Are you up here?

Hannah: Lola? Is that you?

Lola: Yeah, it’s me! Where are you?

Hannah: I’m right by the…the farthest edge!

Lola: And which edge?

Hannah: Just…go…all the way forward!

Lola: Alright…

She crawls until she touches Hannah’s foot. She pulls herself farther so that she can see Hannah’s face.

Lola: Miley? Are you alright? You look a little pale…

Hannah: Oh Lilly. It’s terrible. Look!

She points to the fire, and then to her tour bus.

Lola: Oh shoot.

Hannah: I know that’s what I said too!

Lola: So, how are we getting out of this one?

Hannah: I…don’t…know…

Lola: Oh great. I can see the headlines now: “Hannah Stuck Up On a Roof With Friend”!

Hannah: That’s not as bad as “Hannah Dates Monkey Boy”! And I could care less about headlines right now, I am concerned more about my life and…OH MY GOD!

Lola: What? What?!

Hannah: ----------!



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[Fire-Chicken]

Great, Great and Great!!
Mooooore!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

amazing(of course!) so post the nxt chapter!!!!! off topic: hehe, i don't have school again 2day! the only day i had school this wk was Monday! lol. but it kinda stinks cuz there's all this ice, not snow, piling everywhere. cuz we got sleet not annoying snow but dumb sleet. it sucks, i can't go anywhere!!!!!!!!!! it's driving me insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Cassidy~

[hannah_montana.boston]

moremoremore
ot:but im so maddd u didnt have skol but i did?ugh bps system is sooooo messed up

but hey gave u time 2 write

[MileyRox1174]

amazing(of course!) so post the nxt chapter!!!!! off topic: hehe, i don't have school again 2day! the only day i had school this wk was Monday! lol. but it kinda stinks cuz there's all this ice, not snow, piling everywhere. cuz we got sleet not annoying snow but dumb sleet. it sucks, i can't go anywhere!!!!!!!!!! it's driving me insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Cassidy~



Lucky duck! I had school today, and it wasn't fair...but I got some presentations over with, so it was good. Anyways, I am not going to post more until I get more commz please!


moremoremore
ot:but im so maddd u didnt have skol but i did?ugh bps system is sooooo messed up

but hey gave u time 2 write


^Yep! Lolz, more commz please!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

(Off topic: Diana, did you not have school today, or do you just get out earlier?? I didn't have school! Except, soon I have to go outside again, and shovel the snow...oh well.)

Anways: Please oh please comment more!

Off topic: if you're talking about wednesday feb. 14, i did, but i didn't go, cause the buses were canceled cause there was too much snow but most ppl didn't go anyway so it was like there was no school.(I live in toronto though) So you didn't have school either, cause there was too much snow too?

back on topic: More! as always, it's great!

[MileyRox1174]

Off topic: if you're talking about wednesday feb. 14, i did, but i didn't go, cause the buses were canceled cause there was too much snow but most ppl didn't go anyway so it was like there was no school.(I live in toronto though) So you didn't have school either, cause there was too much snow too?

back on topic: More! as always, it's great!


Well, I didn't have school for a few reasons. First, because there were so many crashes and breakdowns. Second, because we got a lot of snow. And third, because the roads were VERY dangerous, because they didn't plow (why not? I mean seriously!). So yeah, it was a good day off!

Back on topic: Alright alright, in a sec...

[MileyRox1174]

Here it is:

Chapter 10: Only Me, Howard Cassidy!

Setting: Hannah and Lola are still on top of the building.

Hannah: You know what I just realized?! I LEFT JAKE IN MY TOUR BUS!

Lola: So you mean…?

Hannah: *starts crying* Yeah! And it’s my entire fault!

Lola: Oh don’t say that! It’s not all your fault! I mean, it could be worse-

Hannah: What could be worse?!

Lola: Oh, I didn’t mean it that way-

Hannah stops talking to her, and she quietly sobs. Lola just stares into the bus, like she is looking for Jake…But other things are also on her mind…

Setting: Inside the building…

Producer: FIRE! Everybody out! Now! MOVE, MOVE, MOVE!

Everyone inside runs out, except the producer stays back for some reason. He sees something in the distance…

Producer: Who’s out there?

Someone was climbing over the seats.

Voice: Oh, only me, Howard Cassidy. *evil laugh*

Setting: On top of the building with Hannah and Lola.

Lola: Wait. Miley! But what if Jake got out! He probably knew the bus was on fire, so he probably got out in time!

Hannah: Yeah right Lilly. Just stop. It’s not making me feel any better!

Lola: But think about it this way, he knew it was on fire, and ran out! He could be looking for you right now!

Hannah: Lilly, that’s just-genius!

Lola: I know! Oh no, oh shoot…

Hannah: Don’t tell me it’s about Jake…

Lola: No. It’s not. Because he wouldn’t be the one standing right behind us now, would he?

Hannah turns around.

Hannah: *gasp* ---------!



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[Khockeygrl4]

more!!!! i luv it soooooo much!!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!! i luv it soooooo much!!!

me too!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz! More commz please!

[anessa_246]

more more!!! its GREAT!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more pppppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssssss ssssseeeeeeeeeeee

[MileyRox1174]

Two more commz get the next chappie!!

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

i LOVE it
the

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

just what did miley say in the last chapter?

[MileyRox1174]

Hold on a sec...uh you'll find out in the next chappie! One more comment (from a different person) will get the next chappie!

[happillybratty]

more pleaz................

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, here you go:

Chapter 11: That Wasn’t Very Smart, Pop Princess!

Setting: On top of the building with Lola, Hannah, and the mystery person…

Hannah: *gasp* Cassidy?! HOWARD CASSIDY?! But I thought Lola-

HC: Oh yes, that little girl over there? Oh she, well, thought she got rid of me, but no one can get rid of Howard Cassidy!

Lola: Oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, OH NO!

HC: That’s right. Say “Oh no” all you want, but you are not going anywhere but-

Hannah: HERE! *Hannah dashes underneath his legs, and stops at the other side of the building*

HC: That wasn’t very smart, pop princess.

Hannah: Oh yeah, and why not?

HC: Because, someone else is still helpless!

Hannah looks over at Lola and her eyes are wide with terror. Hannah thinks of a plan…

Setting: Jake (yes he is alive) is behind the burning bus…

Jake: Boy am I glad I got out in time! That was freaky…like someone planned that, because it all happened at about the same time…

He tries to look around the bus. Jake just decides to walk around to the other side, to find Miley (Hannah) and Lilly (Lola). He looks far into the distance, and sees three blurry figures on top of the roof.

Jake: Who’s that? Wait…that’s MILEY! Oh no, I better go help her!

He starts running…and when he gets behind the building, he sees ashes. But what he doesn’t know is that used to be the ladder…

Jake: Oh shoot. How am I ever going to get to the top in time?

On the side of the building, there were ridges. They were just big enough for Jake to put his foot on them, and for his hands to grab them (to climb up). So he decides…

Jake: Well, I have no other choice…but how will I ever get down?

He quickly pushes that thought aside as he grabbed one of the ridges. He started climbing…



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[MileyRox1174]

Well, I gotta go! Toodles!

[happillybratty]

luv it, more pleaz

[anessa_246]

that was AWSOME!! morre morre!!

[happillybratty]

omg, please click on my link button

[Fire-Chicken]

Awesome!

[whitesoxfan]

GREAT

[hannah_montana.boston]

*gasp**laugh**wants more*

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz everyone! More later...I need about two or three comments to post more!

[Khockeygrl4]

omg!!! wats gonna happen?!?! im on the edge of my seat *literally* lol. more!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks! Alright I will post it!

[whitesoxfan]

good job

[whitesoxfan]

are you posting it

[MileyRox1174]

Here you go:

Chapter 12: We Just Wait For the Time to Come…

Setting: Jake is climbing…but he has no idea what he is in for…

Jake: *grabs another ridge* okay. I am almost there. *looks up to the roof* it’s only about a hundred feet or so away…I can do this.

He grabs another ridge. He starts coughing, and his foot slips.

Jake: Whoa! *puts his foot back on* this is very slippery!

(Maybe because of some oil that spilled onto it…)

As he nears the top, he smells smoke, and starts coughing. Once he gets to the top, he slowly puts his foot onto the roof.

Hannah: (whispering) Jake?! What are you doing here?

Jake: (whispering) I’m here…to save you.

Hannah: (whispering) you could have gotten here a bit quicker! And what happened to the bus? Weren’t you inside?

Jake: (whispering) yes, I was. But as soon as the bus went up (in flames), I jumped out. I was hiding behind the bus, on the other side.

Hannah: Oh it’s so great to see you! *HC looks her way* Oops…

HC: Ah! I see you brought you’re little friend up to join the fun! Well, let’s not keep him waiting. How about I just-

Jake: *gets up and walks in the opposite direction* No you don’t! I am not, I repeat NOT, going to do…Whatever you are going to do to me!

HC: Oh don’t worry, it’s very simple. All you do is, *grabs Jake’s arm* let me grab you. I will then pick you up, and throw you over the edge! *starts to lift him into the air*

Hannah: JAKE!

Hannah runs over to the mystery person, and pushes him. But Jake is on top, so…

Jake starts falling, but he grabs onto the slippery ledge.

Hannah: Oh no, Jake!

She grabs his hand, and as he puts his foot up onto the roof, she starts getting pulled down. He finally gets up, but it’s too late. Miley is falling through time…

Lola: MILEY! Jake, how could you?!

Jake: Lilly, I-

Lola: Don’t you “Lilly” me! She is falling to her death, and you started it! No wonder she never liked you!

Jake: WHAT?! She never liked me?!

Lola: Exactly. She was just pretending- and oh my god I just made a HUGE mistake! Jake, I didn’t mean it!

Jake: Prove it.

Lola: She helped you back up here…

Jake: Mmhmmm…Anything else?

Lola: Uh…I, uh, don’t know…But what I do know is that I am such a big mouth, and she really does like you! Trust me, please! Or else she’ll hate me forever!

Jake: That seems like a fitting revenge plan!

Lola: Jake, you don’t understand! Look at her! She is falling to her demise, and you…you…you don’t even care about her! I should’ve known you weren’t a good person!

Jake: Excuse me?!

Lola: You told Miley that you weren’t a bad guy…hmm; I guess that was a big fat LIE! You are such a terrible person, now that you made Miley, and Hannah, fall off a roof! I knew that you wouldn’t-

Jake: Lilly, I do care about her! But you are making me have second thoughts now!

Lola: (thinking) Oh shoot…Lilly, what is wrong with you? You open your big mouth and get Jake to have second thoughts about Miley…You are so stupid, Lilly!!

Jake: Well, now that I got that over with... What do you we do now?

Lola: I guess we just wait for the time to come…


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P.S. From now on, I will be saying Miley and Lilly, instead of Hannah and Lola (because their wigs aren't on anymore, and it's much easier).

[mileyfanforever101]

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg!!!!hannah/miley can't die!!!!
off topic:guess what people???i get to see bridge to terabithia!!!!lol sorry
on topic:ok i am back and i want you to........POST MORE!!!!!!

[mileyfanforever101]

are you posting itare you?are you????

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more

[xoxohuggablemiley]

OKAY! I'll post!

[MileyRox1174]

^Uh, don't you mean comment? Anyways, I need more commz to post it!!

[whitesoxfan]

that was funny polly this isn't your fan fic

[xoxohuggablemiley]

cool.

[xoxohuggablemiley]

huh? What about it isint my fanfic? I think I no that.

[MileyRox1174]

^Okay, we just didn't understand the comment. More commz get the next chapter!

[MileyRox1174]

One more comment gets the next chappie...so please oh please comment!

[Khockeygrl4]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv it sooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, here is the next chappie!! Hold on a sec...

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 13: Those Memories Are Lost Now…

Setting: Miley is falling…

She is facing upward, with her eyes closed. Her hands are clasped together, and are resting on her stomach. Miley’s life is flashing before her eyes…

(Her life flashing before her eyes)

First Flashback

Lilly: I thought we told each other everything. But I guess I was wrong, because you kept just about the biggest secret in the world, Miley Stewart/Hannah Montana!

Miley: I wanted to tell you. It’s just that, I was afraid. I thought, maybe once you knew, you wouldn’t want to be my friend anymore. And, you’d like Hannah Montana more than me.

Lilly: That’s what you thought? That could never happen Miley, don’t you know that?

Next Flashback

Miley: I wish. But all I can think about is getting a bad grade, and looking stupid just because I’m stuck with Oliver.

Robby: Miley, Oliver is-

Miley: I know he’s a friend and you don’t bail on friends.

Robby: Yeah, Mile but-

Miley: But nothing. It’s like he’s the Titanic, and I gotta jump ship before I go down with him.

Robby: Mile. Iceberg right behind you.

Miley: *turns around*

Oliver: You said you’d be there for me!

Next part of this flashback

Lilly: Come on Oliver, Miley really needs us there tonight; you can’t just bail on her.

Oliver: Oh you mean like what she did to me?

Lilly: But she knows how you feel now…Hasn’t she suffered enough?

Oliver: Let me think…NO!

Next part of this flashback

Hannah: Nanana Life…nananan tight….dudadadada it’s all I daa…nananananananana you never know where you’ll daa and I’m gonna take my shabbada…I’m still getting it wrong…

Oliver: Hold on tight…and this is the dream, it’s all I need…

Hannah: You never know where you’ll find it…*winks at Oliver* and I’m gonna take my time, yeah, I’m still getting it right…this is the life.

Next Flashback

Miley: Alright Jake, what’s going on? Why haven’t you told anybody about me and “Balloon Boy”?

Jake: Why would I do that? You seemed so miserable last night, and, I didn’t want to make it any worse.

Miley: Really? That’s…kinda nice.

Jake: It’s like I’ve been trying to tell you since the beginning, I’m really not a bad guy.

Miley: Maybe not.

Jake: Plus, I thought it was cool that you went to all that trouble just to make me jealous!

Miley: Whoa. Slow down there “Ego Boy”. Why would I be trying to make you jealous? Besides, you have a girlfriend.

Jake: Holly? She’s not my girlfriend! We have a movie coming out, so we’ve been hanging out. It’s a publicity thing.

Miley: Why didn’t you tell me that before?!

Jake: Uh…well…I, I, I think I-

Miley: Wait a minute! I know why! Because you were trying to make me jealous!

Jake: Was not!

Miley: Was too! Admit it Jake, you like me!

Jake: No, you like me, just say it!

Miley: No you say it!

Jake: No you.

Miley: No you.

*Jake kisses Miley*

End of Flashbacks (for the story)

A tear slides down Miley’s face slowly, as she remembers all the times she had with her friends and family. But those memories are lost now…



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[MileyRox1174]

People PLEASE comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Well, I gotta go! Toodles! (But I will be back on in the morning, so PLEASE oh PLEASE comment!!)

[Khockeygrl4]

Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!! Wats Gonna Happen?!?!?!?! I Need More!!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

*gasp*miley knt die

[MileyRox1174]

More commz get the next chappie!

[happillybratty]

more pleaz..... so awsome

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

it's sooooooo good!!! more than good...it's AWESOME!!!!!!!! gosh...post more!!! i NEED to kno wut happens!! *Cassidy*

[Fire-Chicken]

It's Soooooo Good!!!! WRITE MORE!! I COMMAND YOU!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

it's good! no, no, no. it's AMAZING!

[MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan]

OMG!!! I need more!! This is so amazing!! (and much better than mine!!) I need to know what happens to Miley!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Aww, thankz! But yours is really great!

Alright fine, here is the next chappie:

Chapter 14: I’ll Miss You

Setting: Jake and Lilly have stopped talking, and are still sitting on the roof.

Lilly: So…um, sorry about what I said…

Jake: It’s alright. We are both just mad that well, we are stuck-

Lilly: Yeah, and um, you wanna go see if Miley is alright…*close to tears*

Jake: Sure…*sniff*

They both walk over to the edge of the roof. But what they see is astonishing. Miley is actually not on the ground yet. She was still falling, or so it seemed…

Setting: Miley’s “situation”.

She wasn’t falling anymore, and she knew it. One reason was because of her friendships, and another, well…

She had grabbed onto one of the ridges…And she was hanging on just like she was to her life…

Lilly: Miley?! You…you aren’t on the ground!

Miley: *opens her eyes* Lilly? Is…is that you?

Jake: Yeah, it’s us Miley! How you feeling down there?

Miley: Not…so…good…

Lilly: Well, just hang on, and we’ll try to go back down to get you!

Miley: I don’t think I can hold on much longer…

Jake: Come on Miley! If you don’t-

Lilly: -We’ll just not think about that right now!

Miley: I can’t…I can’t hold on…

Lilly: Yes you can! Just…think of your happy place, and go there!

Miley: It’s…down there…*looks at the ground*

Jake: Well, Miley, just don’t let go!

Miley: I just want you guys to know…

Lilly: What?

Miley: I’ll miss you.

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[Fire-Chicken]

AMAZING!!!! It's Soooo Good!!! MORE!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz! More commz get the next chappie!

[MileyRox1174]

Argh! I wrote all the way up to chapter 18 (well, I'm still on that one), but now I have writer's block!! It is not fun...it really doesn't help for my other FanFiction either...if you have any ideas, please feel free to PM me.

[happillybratty]

omfg, need to know wat happens

[MileyRox1174]

Argh, I just wrote another chappie for my other FanFiction, but not for this one! It's so...annoying (writer's block)!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

alright. that's k. just as long as u post as soon as u have the nxt chappie. lol. i need more soup 4 my throat, i'm sick. so, ya. bbl.*Cassidy*

[~Miley~Rox~]

paleas write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

alright. that's k. just as long as u post as soon as u have the nxt chappie. lol. i need more soup 4 my throat, i'm sick. so, ya. bbl.*Cassidy*



Well, I wrote up to chappie 18, so technically I have more...

And I can relate to you...my throat is really sore...


Here, I will post the next chappie anyways:

Chapter 15: Everything Seemed to Be Moving in Slow Motion…

Setting: Miley is hanging on, and Lola and Jake are trying to help her stay holding on.

Miley: I’ll miss you.

Jake: No Miley, NO! Don’t let go!

Lilly: We need you, and your fans need you! Do not, I repeat DO NOT let go!

Miley: I…can’t…

Lilly: Why not?

Miley: This…was…meant to happen…I can feel it…

Jake: But don’t let go! I’m sure that wasn’t supposed to-

Miley’s hand loses the grip. Jake tries to grab for her hand, but she is too far down.

Miley: I’ll miss you.

Lilly: No, Miley, no! Oh, what do we do? What do we do?!

Jake: I have an idea! I’ll hold onto your foot, and you grab her hand!

Lilly: No...No-

Jake: Do you want to save Miley or not?

Lilly: Alright. Here, grab my foot.

Jake grabs Lilly’s ankle, and she jumps off the roof.

Lilly: If I die, you’re my witness…and my killer!

Jake: Whatever, let’s just worry about Miley right now!

Miley was still falling, and Lilly was being lowered down to her. Everything seemed to be moving in slow motion…




Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!! (And if you have any ideas, please and I mean PLEASE feel free to PM me, because I have stupid writer's block...)

[Sporty Miley]

MORE!!!!! and sry i don't have any ideas!! i'm not good @ that kind of stuff!!!

[MileyRox1174]

^It's alright...Maybe tomorrow it'll all come back...who knows?

More commz please!

[MileyRox1174]

Oh thank god! I finally came up with a good idea! Maybe it pays off to have writer's block, but thankfully, I don't have it anymore! PLEASE comment!

[happillybratty]

on the edge of my chair

[Khockeygrl4]

omgosh!!!!!!! more more more!!!! i cant take it!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Alright fine...let me just find the spot and get the chappie...

[MileyRox1174]

Here you go:

Chapter 16: Like She is Waiting for a Miracle to Happen…

Setting: Lilly is trying to grab Miley’s hand.

Lilly: Miley, lift your hand up! I need to save you, or we’ll both be toast!

Miley: No. It’s my destiny.

Lilly: To get killed?! I don’t think so! It’s your destiny to grab my hand, and let Jake pull us up!

Miley: Jake, let go.

Jake: Why should I?

Miley: Just do it, trust me.

Lilly: Jake, don’t do it! She must be hypnotized or something!

Jake: I don’t know…she seems pretty sure of herself!

Lilly: Yeah, and I am pretty sure that she has gone crazy! Just don’t let go of me and-

Suddenly, Lilly slips out of Jake’s grip.

Lilly: AHH!

She starts falling, and finally catches up with Miley. She grabs her hand.

Lilly: Miley, I just want to say…

Miley: *opens her eyes* Yes?

Lilly: I’m…sorry, for everything. And I just want to say that you are the best friend I could ever have!

Miley: Yes.

Lilly: What?

Miley: Yes! *points somewhere*

Lilly: Why are you pointing at that?

Miley doesn’t say anything. She just closes her eyes, like she is waiting for a miracle to happen…


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[Fire-Chicken]

Great! I can't figure out something better to say. I am speechless.

[MileyRox1174]

^Thanks! More commz please!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!! gosh, i really need to kno wut happens next!!! like happillybratty... i'm on the edge of my chair. lol...post more!*Cassidy*

[anessa_246]

more more!!!!!! wait did jake knew before the story that miley was hannah?

[happillybratty]

I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!! gosh, i really need to kno wut happens next!!! like happillybratty... i'm on the edge of my chair. lol...post more!*Cassidy*haha, like totally, were like twins, still on the edge of the chair
oh and cassidy, ill find you a premade hannah layout for neo

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

haha, like totally, were like twins, still on the edge of the chair
oh and cassidy, ill find you a premade hannah layout for neo

haha...of course we're twins!! both of us already knew that! lol. thankies so much! lol, i seriously want ta kno wat happens tho!! ya, like happillybratty(srry, idk if it was k ta use ur real name), i'm still on the edge of my chair!!! post more!!!~Cassidy~

[Khockeygrl4]

wats gonna happen?!?!?! more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[happillybratty]

haha...of course we're twins!! both of us already knew that! lol. thankies so much! lol, i seriously want ta kno wat happens tho!! ya, like happillybratty(srry, idk if it was k ta use ur real name), i'm still on the edge of my chair!!! post more!!!~Cassidy~
ya u can, I'm Maureen or Maury for short to every one else

[sar522]

now that was good!!!!!!!!!!

[whitesoxfan]

this is great

[MileyRox1174]

more more!!!!!! wait did jake knew before the story that miley was hannah?


Thankz everyone! And no, Jake didn't know, that's why when he came into her bus at the beginning, she was fussing with her wig. But then he found out (not in the story) when she was up on the roof. Alright, here is more:

Chapter 17: I’ll Definitely Miss You…

Setting: Miley and Lilly are falling. Lilly is freaking out, while Miley is relaxed. Just like she is waiting for a miracle to happen…

Lilly: Miley?! How can you just sit there like that, even if you know that we are falling to our deaths?!

Miley still doesn’t say anything. So Lilly tries to find the place that she pointed to.

Lilly: Hmm…Where did you point again? Show me.

Miley points at the same place, and Lilly follows her finger.

Lilly: Right….there! Wait, why did you-Oh my god! You’re right! But, how-

Miley: Just wait.

Lilly: Um, okay. But if it doesn’t work, I hate you forever.

Miley: It will work. Close your eyes.

Lilly closes her eyes, along with Miley. They wait…

Setting: Jake is on the roof.

Jake: What have I done?! I am going to make Miley and Lilly get killed! Maybe Lilly was right…Well, I’ll just go see where they are right now.

He walks over to the edge of the roof.

Jake: Why are they just laying there, with their eyes closed? That’s so-

He stops abruptly. He does because he sees what they both saw….And it was coming towards them…

Setting: Miley and Lilly are still falling and they both opened their eyes…

Lilly: Alright, here it comes.

Miley: The time has come…to let go of everything…

Lilly: WHAT?!

Miley: You must let go of any relationships…to be saved…

Lilly: But…that means I…have to let go of our friendship…

Miley: If you do not want to be saved, you may keep it. But if you do keep it…

Lilly: What?

Miley: I’ll definitely miss you…



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[happillybratty]

omg, let go of their friendship, thants so crazy, wats gonna happen

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

^^k maury:P lol, i ddn't kno if it was ok. but now i kno. so ima use ur name from now on:lol: lol.

back on topic: let go of their friendship?!?!?!? that's crazy!!! and what r they pointing at??? i need ta kno!!! post more!

off topic again: i'm sick, so i ddn't go ta school today. i had ta go to charlottesville(in VA) ta see my sister. but now i'm bored again! lol. and i can't read more cuz ur in school! i hate missing school cuz i'm sick! byebyes



*Cassidy*

[Jessicastar]

I'm clenching my teeth to know whaaaaaaaaaaaat haaaaaaaaaaapeeeeeeeeeeens neeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxtttt!

[~Miley~Rox~]

ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! i need to know what happens and what they are pointing at

[MileyRox1174]

^^k maury:P lol, i ddn't kno if it was ok. but now i kno. so ima use ur name from now on:lol: lol.

back on topic: let go of their friendship?!?!?!? that's crazy!!! and what r they pointing at??? i need ta kno!!! post more!

off topic again: i'm sick, so i ddn't go ta school today. i had ta go to charlottesville(in VA) ta see my sister. but now i'm bored again! lol. and i can't read more cuz ur in school! i hate missing school cuz i'm sick! byebyes



*Cassidy*


Cassidy, I'm not in school. I have the week off (it's our vacation for Feb.)! And I just went to the movies (to see Bridge to Terabithia...it was good).


How about two more comments?? Then you get the chappie!

[anessa_246]

that was great!!!! i am getting so confused with all of ur fictions!! :P lol

post more more!!

[MileyRox1174]

that was great!!!! i am getting so confused with all of ur fictions!! :P lol

post more more!!


Do you mean that you are getting them mixed up, or they confuse you?

One more comment!

[Jessicastar]

mmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooore!

[anessa_246]

Do you mean that you are getting them mixed up, or they confuse you?

One more comment!idk!! i guess mixed up!!:P
oh AND they confuse me but sometimes!

[happillybratty]

more....................
and i saw bridge to tarabithia yesterday, luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

idk!! i guess mixed up!!:P
oh AND they confuse me but sometimes!



Alright, and if they confuse you, feel free to ask about it! I would be happy to help!

Here, let me just get the next chappie...

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 18: Just Hope…

Setting: Miley and Lilly are falling, and Lilly is deciding…

Lilly: But, can we still be friends after we’re saved?

Miley: Our paths will cross again sometime…

Lilly: Miley, I don’t want to stop being friends! Can’t something else be let go?

Miley: Yes.

Lilly: What then?

Miley: Yourself.

Lilly: What do you mean?

Miley: Yourself.

Lilly: Miley, that’s not helping.

Miley: Be someone else for these few seconds of life or death…

Lilly: But can I become myself again after we’re saved?

Miley: Destiny. That’s all that I will say.

Lilly: But, Miley-

Miley: Destiny. Or death. You choose.

Lilly: Uh….I choose destiny. But if we aren’t friends afterwards, I want you to know…

Miley: I know. You’ll miss me…

Lilly: Yeah, that and…You’re the best friend someone could ever have!

Miley: I say the same thing about you…But we can only hope our paths will cross again, or this will work…

Lilly hugs Miley (yes, in midair). She starts crying, and as they approach it, she decides…

Lilly: You know what? I would rather die instead of lose your friendship!

Miley just didn’t say anything. Now, Lilly was waiting for the time…

Setting: Jake is on the roof.

Jake: But, how will that save them? It’s only-Oh my god, it’s something different now! It’s…it’s…

Oliver and Jackson. They were running towards where Miley and Lilly were falling.

Setting: Miley and Lilly were nearing the ground (yes, this fall is very, very slow…).

Lilly: Miley, I…I just want to say-

Miley: Look.

Lilly: No, I want to say-

Miley: Look!

Lilly stops talking and looks where Miley says to. She sees something unbelievable.

Oliver and Jackson were standing right underneath where they were falling, with their arms open. Oliver was underneath Miley, and Jackson was underneath Lilly (no, it has nothing to do with love).

Lilly: Oliver?! Jackson?! They’re here?!

Miley: Yes. Now close your eyes, and hope…

Lilly: Alright, fine.

She closes her eyes, and she and Miley both hope. Hope for a miracle. Hope they live. Hope that nothing goes wrong. Hope that their destinies will stay together…



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[Jessicastar]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeee!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz, but I need more commz!

[Jessicastar]

Ok, I loooooooooooooooove iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttt!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

Cassidy, I'm not in school. I have the week off (it's our vacation for Feb.)! And I just went to the movies (to see Bridge to Terabithia...it was good).


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ooo...ya last week, we only had school on monday cuz of snow. YOU SUCK!!! you got ta see terabithia!!! i want to see that soooo bad!!! you suck too maury, but you already kno that. jk. well, i better go to bed if i want ta b able ta play my clarinet durin school tomorrow. byebyes. oh and...POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

Lolz, thanks?

Anyways, I need one or two more comments to post!

[MileyRox1174]

Well, I gotta go! Toodles!

[happillybratty]

ooo...ya last week, we only had school on monday cuz of snow. YOU SUCK!!! you got ta see terabithia!!! i want to see that soooo bad!!! you suck too maury, but you already kno that. jk. well, i better go to bed if i want ta b able ta play my clarinet durin school tomorrow. byebyes. oh and...POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~Cassidy~
:09: u suck 2, and write more pleaz

[Fire-Chicken]

Awesome!!!

I have vacation this week too. I love my vacation and your FanFics!

[whitesoxfan]

come on post more

[MileyRox1174]

One more comment...

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

^^ that's 1 more!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Alright, alright! Here...


Chapter 19: Nice Knowing You, ex-Zombie Slayer

Setting: Miley and Lilly are still falling, with Oliver and Jackson on the ground waiting. Miley and Lilly are about 100 feet away from the ground…

Oliver: Okay, Jackson, just remember. Catch them, so they don’t die!

Jackson: I know, I know. That’s why you’re catching Miley!

Oliver: Yeah, I didn’t want you to kill her. Just don’t kill Lilly either.

Jackson: I won’t. Okay, here they come!

Miley falls down into Oliver’s arms, and Lilly into Jackson’s. They both open their eyes.

Lilly: Huh-uh-wha? I’m alive?! I’m alive!

Miley: *snaps out of her mood (when they were falling)*Yeah, we are. But…what about Jake?! We can’t just leave him up there!

Jackson: Don’t worry, sis. He’ll get down…sometime.

Miley: No! I want him down, now!

Oliver: Alright, alright!

Oliver: Jake! Come on, dude, and jump off! We’ll catch you!

Jake had been watching Miley and Lilly fall, and saw how they caught them. He made his decision.

Jake: No, man! I am not, repeat NOT, jumping!

Jackson: Come on, I thought you fought zombies! You are supposed to be brave!

Jake: Hey! Don’t you make fun of me! I am brave it’s just that-

Oliver: -That what? You’re afraid we won’t catch you? Jake, we’re you’re friends. We are not going to let you get hurt! Now jump!

Jake: I don’t know-

Miley: Come on Jake! We turned out okay!

Jake: Yeah, Miley but-

Lilly: No buts, Jake. You have to jump! Or you’ll be stuck up there forever! And you won’t be near Miley! And she’ll probably get a new boyfriend…

Jake: No. Miley, I’m sorry, but no. I just…can’t.

Miley: Please Jake?!

Jake: No. I can’t…

Miley: Alright, your choice. Nice knowing you, ex-Zombie Slayer.



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[Fire-Chicken]

Awesome!

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thanks, but I need more commz to post the next chappie!! So PLEASE comment!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

It's so good!!!!!! post next chapter!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz, but I need three more comments!!

[MileyRox1174]

PLEASE comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Anbody like it?! PLEASE I need three commz if you want the next chappie!

[Sporty Miley]

^^ your so evil!! lolz!!! jk!!!!!!!

[Khockeygrl4]

more, i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more

[~Miley~Rox~]

gggggrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttt wwwwwwwwwwwwwwrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttteeeee eeeee mmmmmmooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee
aaaaaaaasssssssssssaaaaaaaaaaapppppppppp

[MileyRox1174]

Alright, here is more:

Chapter 20: I Love You

Setting: Miley is walking away with Jake still on the roof…

Lilly: Jake, come on! You’ll…you’ll die up there!

Jake: I can just call a helicopter.

Lilly: *picks up his phone crushed on the ground* (Sarcastically) and where is your phone?

Jake: Oh no. But…but…I can’t.

Lilly: And why not?

Jake: I…just…it’s just that…

Lilly: I thought so. Now jump.

Jake: No…I-

Lilly: JUMP!

Jake: Miley, I just want you to know…

Miley stops and turns around.

Miley: What?

Jake: I love you.

He jumps. His fall is much shorter, and Miley just knows it. She watches as he is falling, and thinks about what he said (right before he jumped).

Miley: (Thinking) is that why he didn’t jump before? But he would if he really loved me…oh this is so confusing! What am I supposed to say to him now? I…don’t really know if I feel that way…

Jake was about ten feet away from the ground when he fell into Jackson’s arms (because he is stronger…I guess).

Jake: Whoa man, that was awesome!

Jackson: Wimp.

Jake: Hey, don’t you say that about Jake Ryan!

Jackson: But it’s true! Wimpy, wimpity, wimp!

Jake: Whatever…*notices Miley is very far away, and is walking farther away* Miley, where you going?

Lilly: You really have to ask that?

Jake: Well, yeah. Do you know where she is going?

Lilly: Well, no, but-

Jake: See? Now, Miley, where are you going?

Miley just kept walking, without even turning around.

Jake: Miley! Miley! Listen to me, will ya?

Lilly: Oh Jake. Don’t you know the secret of love?

Jake: Um…no, why?

Lilly: Oh my god, have you been stupid, or what?

Jake: Excuse me?

Lilly: Jake, you need to know what girls like. Just like-

Jake: Pink, little puppy dogs, and squirrels?

Lilly: You’ve been spending waayy too much time with Mr. Stewart! And no, they like other things…

Jake: Oh well, I don’t care! Miley! MILEY! *starts running towards her, but can’t catch up with her because she is so far away*

Miley just keeps walking, like she never heard anything…


Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh PLEASE comment!!

*evil laugh* I need 7 comments!!

[Fire-Chicken]

^You're EVIL!! jk
Write More

[Jessicastar]

I like it, I love it, I want some more of it! It's tight, not bad, just right! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!

[happillybratty]

arggg............ wrie more..............pleaz............youre evil............so many comments for one chapter

[Khockeygrl4]

more, more, and more, its sooooooooooooo goooooooooood i caaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnt sttttttttttttttaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnd it!!!

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

that's 5 two more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Khockeygrl4]

can i post twice? caus i luv it soooooooooo much i cant wait 4 more, lol.

[Sporty Miley]

^ lol, i know!!!!!!!!!

[anessa_246]

more more! that was a very long fall for miley and lily! post more MORE MORE MORE MORE!

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more

[happillybratty]

is miley mad at jake cuz he said she loves her and he kissed hannah

[MileyRox1174]

^Eh...she sort of forgot, but she is still kinda mad, but getting over it. Alright, here is more:

Chapter 21: No Stopping It

Setting: Jake is trying to catch up with Miley, who won’t stop walking…

Jake: Lilly, can you please try to get her attention?!

Lilly: I’m sorry, Jake. But I can’t.

Jake: Why not?!

Lilly: You’ll find out soon enough…

Lilly starts running. She catches up with Miley, and falls into step with her. Now all the guys were confused.

Setting: Lilly and Miley are walking away…

Lilly: So, Miley, when are we going to tell them?

Miley: When the time is right…

Lilly: Yes, but we can’t have them wondering for too long…

Miley: We will have them wondering as long as we need…

Lilly: But it could lead to disaster…They might-

Miley: -What? They can’t do anything to us now…*evil laugh that the guys hear*

Setting: The guys…

Jake: Did you hear that? Miley and Lilly just laughed…evilly!

Oliver: Yeah, I don’t get it-

Jackson: Oken, you don’t get anything! And I have an idea of why they are acting like that….But it’s kinda out-there…

Jake: Shoot.

Jackson: Okay, so it could be because-

Jake: Shoot.

Jackson: Because-

Jake: No, I mean shoot! As in, darn!

Oliver: Why man, nothing’s-Oh my god.

Jackson: What? What?!

Oliver: Turn right.

Jackson: We aren’t driving, Oken.

Oliver: Turn to your right, stupid!

Jackson: Oh! *Turns to his right* what’s wrong? I don’t see-

Jake: Oh yes you do.

Oliver: We all do.

Jackson: But, it can’t be…

Jake: It is…

Oliver: And there’s no stopping it now…

Jackson, Jake and Oliver: ------------!



Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

And now, I need 8 comments!! *evil laugh* It helps build suspense!

[Sporty Miley]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[whitesoxfan]

more plleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaz

[Khockeygrl4]

omg, wat is it?!?!?!?! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[whitesoxfan]

good great auspicious super never bad good as always

[whitesoxfan]

now can you post more

[whitesoxfan]

there was 5 more

[MileyRox1174]

^Thanks, but no. I need five comments from different users.

[~Miley~Rox~]

ggggrrrrreeeeeaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttt ggggggggggggggggrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaatttt ttttt gggggggggrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeaaattttttttttttttt wwwwwwwwwrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttteeeee eeeemmmmmmoooooooooorrrrre

[Sporty Miley]

Your going 2 make me cry!!!!!! LOL!!! JK!!

[Fire-Chicken]

Umm... I can't figure out something that the others don't already have said.. I was going to write the same things. But I could write like 5 pages why you should write more. But I need to go now. I can write it later if you want? But in Swedish. Because I'm not so good at English so I can write 5 pages. But of course, I can write in Swedish if you want? lol

[MileyRox1174]

Umm... I can't figure out something that the others don't already have said.. I was going to write the same things. But I could write like 5 pages why you should write more. But I need to go now. I can write it later if you want? But in Swedish. Because I'm not so good at English so I can write 5 pages. But of course, I can write in Swedish if you want? lol


Lolz, okay...Three more comments!

[Khockeygrl4]

more, i cant wait any longer!!!!!!!!! lol

[happillybratty]

wat did they see??? The suspence is killing me...........

[whitesoxfan]

more come on now ,more

[anessa_246]

POST MORE!!! why do u have to be so evil!!! lol!!

[whitesoxfan]

pleaz post more the suspece is killing me

[MileyRox1174]

^Because, I just am...lolz....Hold on, I need to get it....It's incredibly short, but here it is:

Chapter 22: Embarrassing Banner!

Setting: Miley and Lilly were still walking…

Lilly: Now can we tell them?

Miley: *turns around* they already found out…*evil laugh*

Lilly: Excellent. This was the perfect plan.

Miley: Yes, I know. Now, it’s time for the twists.

Lilly: Which first?

Miley: This one. *she runs up to an airplane, with one of those banners hanging off of it* come on, get in.

Lilly: *runs onto the airplane* where to?

Miley: Oh, you’ll see….*evil laugh*

Lilly: *evil laugh*

Setting: Jake, Oliver, and Jackson are talking about the airplane…

Jake: Oh man. But, they can’t fly that, especially with that-

Oliver: -that huge, embarrassing banner hanging off!

Jackson: But, how will we stop them? I mean, they’ve already completed a phase or two of their plan…whatever it is.

Jake: Yeah, but they haven’t taken off yet. I mean, they’re only about… *looks into the distance*…oh I’d say about ¾ mile. That’s not too far…

Oliver: So, what are we waiting for? Come on!

Jackson: Let’s bring down the house!


Hope ya'll likee!! Please oh please comment!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

so good!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

more more

[~Miley~Rox~]

i really want to know what they are doing!!!!!!!

[happillybratty]

evil plan..............has miley gone evil?

[MileyRox1174]

^Oh, you'll see...*evil laugh*


*snaps out of that mood* More commz please!

[MileyRox1174]

Oh and I have an announcement:

THIS FANFICTION WILL BE ENDING SOON. PROBABLY IN THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS. IT WILL BE ENDING BECAUSE I AM VERY BUSY, MAKING GRAPHICS, DEALING WITH MY LIFE, AND MANY OTHER THINGS. SO STICK AROUND FOR THE ENDING.

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

Oh and I have an announcement:

THIS FANFICTION WILL BE ENDING SOON. PROBABLY IN THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS. IT WILL BE ENDING BECAUSE I AM VERY BUSY, MAKING GRAPHICS, DEALING WITH MY LIFE, AND MANY OTHER THINGS. SO STICK AROUND FOR THE ENDING.

oh no! is your third fanfiction ending too?

[MileyRox1174]

Yeah, if you look, it is. It's the same announcement, but yeah.

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, when I am done with the last two chapters, I will post them together.

But after this, I probably will not be making another FanFiction, because I am so very busy, pretty much all the time.

[hannah_montana.boston]

nooooooo

[MileyRox1174]

Here are the last two chappies:

Chapter 23: They’re Not Our Girlfriends!

Setting: Jackson, Jake and Oliver are running.

Jake: *Stops running* wait, why are we running? Miley and Lilly are the ones that are running!

Jackson: *Stops running* from whom?

Oliver: *Stops running* us, smart one!

Jackson: Oh! Well, how do we get them to come back? I mean, they’re in the plane right now!

Jake: That may be so, but have you ever thought in between the lines?

Oliver: And what exactly is in between the lines?

Jake: Well, if you think about it, Miley and Lilly were talking normally to each other, but then not to us. So why do you think they are doing that?

Jackson: I don’t know. They’re your girlfriends!

Jake and Oliver: They’re not our girlfriends!!

Jackson: Alright whatever, chill.

Jake: Oh no. I think I know why they have that banner hanging off.

Oliver: Why?

Jake: --------!

Setting: Miley and Lilly inside the plane.

Miley: So, when do we tell them? *giggles*

Lilly: *giggles* I don’t know! It’s so funny!!

The both burst out laughing, but then stop after a few seconds. They know that the guys can hear them, and they don’t want them to suspect anything. But they can’t help it. They burst out laughing again, this time even louder. Miley looks at Lilly, and Lilly looks at Miley. They both look outside the opening of the doorway.

They laugh even harder.


Chapter 24: This Ride is Rigged…

Setting: Miley and Lilly are laughing very hard.

Miley: *laughs* Lilly, we have to *laugh* stop!

Lilly: *laughs* Yeah, but *laugh* it’s too funny!

The laugh for a little longer, and then they look outside the doorway, again.

They try not to laugh.

Miley: Look at them! They’re so stupid!

Lilly: I know! But we were acting very well, like we were actually hypnotized.

They look at each other, and just giggle.

Miley: Yeah, so when do we tell them?

Lilly: When they stop wondering about it like mindless idiots, and walk over.

Setting: Jake, Oliver and Jackson are still wondering.

Jake: They hung it because it’s just a trick!

Oliver: What are you talking about man?

Jake: Think about it. They don’t know how to fly a plane, they don’t have somebody to fly it, and didn’t we just hear them laughing?

Jackson: Yeah, and it wasn’t evilly. Either something’s up, or this ride is rigged.

Oliver: This isn’t a ride.

Jackson: Dude, it’s an expression! It means that they are pretending! Duh!

Jake: You know, I think that’s the smartest thing I’ve heard come out of your mouth today.

Jackson: Thanks-HEY!

Oliver: Calm down, he says that to me all the time. Now how are we supposed to get them to come clean?

Jackson: Miley doesn’t come clean unless she is found out, so we just need to pretend like we don’t know anything.

Jake: Yeah, so let’s go!

They run over to the plane, and walk on.

Jake: *Whispers* Remember the plan?

Oliver: *Whispers* Yeah. Let’s go.

Jackson: *Whispers* Come on.

They walk on, and make their plan become a reality.

Jake: Whoa. This place is huge!

Oliver: I know. Where would someone hide in here? There’s no space! (Sarcastic)

Jackson: Yeah. I can’t believe this is here though! I’ve never seen this small of a jet before!

Jake jabs him in the ribs with his elbow.

Jake: *Whispers* this is the biggest jet out there, stupid!

Jackson: This is small for me!

Oliver: *Points over to near where Miley and Lilly are* look! That’s so cool!

He runs over, with Jake and Jackson following him. Miley and Lilly are trying to hide, and they are trying not to breathe as loud. It’s very hard, and they don’t succeed…

Jackson: Hey, why do I feel breath on my leg?

Jake: Look! Miley, Lilly, what are you doing here? (Sarcastic)

Miley: Uh...um…we…uh…

Lilly: We like…we like to…we like to relax here…it’s quite soothing…

Oliver: Yeah…and why aren’t you “hypnotized”?

Miley: *Tries to be in the “hypnotized” mood again* we are. We just like to act normal sometimes.

Jake, Jackson, and Oliver give them a look that says “We found you out, now come clean.”

Lilly: Miley, they got us. Just stop.

Miley: Alright. You got us. It was just-

Jake: We know quite well what it was.

Oliver: Mmhmmm. Now spill.

Lilly: Alright, we…we were just-

Miley: -we were just trying to get you two jealous! Jake and Oliver, that is.

Lilly: Yeah. The truth is…

Miley: I really like…

Lilly: I really like…

Miley: JAKE!

Lilly: OLIVER!

Jake and Oliver’s eyes go wide.

Jake: Really?! Me too!

Oliver: Oh my god, me too!

Jake and Oliver: Do you want to go out with me?

Miley and Lilly: Well…


THE END!!

Hope you liked my FanFiction! Please oh please comment!

[crazy_in_a_good_way]

cool

[happillybratty]

omg... the ending is so funny

[MileyRox1174]

^Thankz! Just use your imagination!

[Sporty Miley]

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

noooooooooooooooo tooooooooooooooooo sad for you to end this

[MileyRox1174]

Thankz. Sorry, I just am very busy! More comments?

[whitesoxfan]

but you end the story on a cliff hanger

[hannah_montana.boston]

i kno i like it but its still a hangea

[MileyRox1174]

Yes, it's supposed to be! You just need to use your imagination to figure out the ending!

[hannah_montana.boston]

my emag. wont unless u tell it the end

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

yeah, the ending is so funny!

[MileyRox1174]

Thankz!

[hannah_montana.boston]

:-(

[MileyRox1174]

Please don't bump this, I'm not continuing it. Thanks.

[LotsaBigHearts]

that was so good!!
like the best fan fiction ever!!