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Shenae Grimes Fan
02-04-2007, 07:18 PM
Okk heres my new fanfic, i tried my best and i SWEAR this is my last one :P

ENJOYYY!!


Chapter 1:
Family Reunion?

Miley literally jumping when she heard the news! her cousin Becca was coming to live with them from Tenesse!
Miley: "daddy, when is she coming, i need to know! please tell me!" she had a puppydog face
Robbie: "fine bud, ill tell you, shes coming tomorrow, and umm you dont wanna know the other news."
Miley: miley looked confused, "What other news? is something really cool gonna happen to Hannah Montana?" she said with a smile on her face

**SILENCE**

Robbie: "no darling, someones coming with Becca........"
Miley: "Her manager Gwen?"
Robbie: "Noo... someone that looks alot like you"
Miley: her eyes got wide, she knew who her dad was talking about, she screamed, "Not Luann!"
Robbie: "im really sorry, everytihngs gonna be alright bud!"
Miley: she makes a little mad voice and rolls her eyes, "everythings gonna be alright bud!" she hits the counter and walks upstairs.

Jackson: walks down stairs on the phone, "Thats right babe, i know Becca Montana! im gonna get you tickets to her next concert" he hangs up and runs to his dad
"please tell me Beccas coming tomorrow!"
Robbie: "yea, she comin' and so is Luann! its almost like a family reunion!" he laughs
Jackson: does a gily scream, "Luann!? my weekend is gonna be really confusing" he walks up to his room
Robbie: "whats with this sreaming?" he looks around and screams, "wow that feels good! like letting everything out"


**Alittle Later**

Miley: calls Lilly
Lilly: answers the phone and says, "he.."
Miley: miley screams before Lily could finish
Lilly: "Miley! ill be there in a sec! your wasting me minutes screaming like a maniac!" she runs to mileys house, knocks on the door
Miley: answers door, "Lilly! i need to tell u something" she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath, opens her eyes, "my cousin Becca is coming"
Lilly: "Becca Montana!? i love her! i cant believe this! im meeting my...... 2 favorite singer" she said smiling at miley
Miley: "Lilly, you dont understand! Luann is coming with her!"
Lily: screams like a maniac
Robbie: "guys, can u please stop screaming, or my hearing aid is on you"
Lilly & Miley: "Sorry!" they go to the phone to call oliver
Oliver: oliver answers, "he.."
Lilly & Miley: they scream like maniacs
Oliver: "ill be there in a flash!" he runs to mileys house and knocks on the door
Miley: answers door, "oliver my cousin Beccas coming!"
Oliver: "Becca Montana?! i love her!"
Miley: "here we goo again, you dont undderstand, Luanns coming too!"
Oliver: screams like a girl, "waittt, she likes me, why should i be worried?"
Lilly: "be worried or no Becca for you!"
Oliver: "umm.. im really worried!" Oliver nodds his head
Miley: "dang right u are! now we have to do something, but what?"

miley, oliver, and lilly think for about 30 seconds

All Three: "i got nothin'!"

**At the beach**

miley and lilly are talking about luann and becca while oliver is getting something at ricos

Miley:".....yeah i know but..."
[[they keep talking]]
Oliver: comes back with ice cream all over his face holding an ice cream cone, "i dont understand why you guys worry so much! you needa chill!"
Lilly: "and i dont understand why you eat with your face" she said handing oliver a napkin
Oliver: " im a guy, its ice cream, do the math!"
Miley: "guys it getting late, i better go, bye!"
Lilly: "im going to, bye!"
oliver: "Bye!"

they all run to there houses

[[to be continued]]

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-04-2007, 07:23 PM
any one likey? :(
b u m p

*~MileyCyrus#1Fan~*
02-04-2007, 08:01 PM
awesome! keep writing!

RoXtar
02-04-2007, 08:01 PM
cool 8-) I could totally see that happening in an episode ;)

LukkiStar
02-04-2007, 08:01 PM
Sounds good.
Everything happened kinda fast, though.

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-04-2007, 08:05 PM
Thanksss Guyss =]

Fire-Chicken
02-05-2007, 02:19 PM
Great!!

~Miley~Rox~
02-05-2007, 06:00 PM
super

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-05-2007, 07:38 PM
thanksss!

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-10-2007, 07:10 PM
Chapter 2:
Are you cereal? cause im milk!

Miley heard a knock on her door

Miley: Groans, " dad just 5 more min..." snore
Becca: "It's not your dad, its Becca open up" she knocks again
Miley: Jumps,"Becca!?" she runs and opens the door
Miley & Becca hug
Becca: "Miles! look at you, your growing up so fast!"
Miley: smiles, "Wheres Luann?" she said with a worried face
Becca: "shes outside with Chrissy, Gwen, Lindsey, Melissa, Ashley, Lillian...." Becca keeps counting and saying the names
Miley: "you guys all came!?" Miley jumps in joy, " this is so totally awesome! except that Luanns here"


Luann: "Howdy uncle Robbie Ray! how ya'll doin!?"
Miley: "Oh-NO! this is horrible, shes in the actual house!"
Becca: laughs, "dont worry dude, everythigns fine, come on"

Becca & Miley walk down stairs
Everyones walking in

Miley: "Are you Cereal?! all these ppl are gonna stay here!?"
Becca: "Yes im Cereal, and let me guess, your milk?" she giggles
Miley: Laughs, "speaking of Cereal and Milk, how bout we eat some?"
Becca: "Nah, you can, im full....we stopped at ihop."
Miley: "okay then.."

Ashley (oldest cousin): "Oh my goodness! Miley, look at you! you are growing up sooo fast! come give me a hug!"
Miley: "Ashley!!!" she ran to hug her
Chrissy (youngest cousin): "Miwey!" she sticks her arms out
Miley crouches down to hug her

Luann: Evil eyes, "wait till tomorrow" she does a evil laugh,"heh heh heh heh"
Miley: "im standing right here"
Luann: "right....how are you miley!? wheres purplehead?"
Miley: closes eyes annoyed, "her name is Lilly!"
Luann: "rightt......"

*door bell rings*

Becca: answers it,"hey! you must be lilly and oliver!"
Oliver: "you are heere, and, uhhhh...." faints
Lilly: "excuse him"
Becca: nodss, "okk"
Miley: "becca, meet my bestfriends, Lilly and Oliver"
Lilly: 'i cant believe im meeting you! i love your music"
Becca: "thanks!" turns to Miley, "ill meet Oliver later"

all three laugh
Lilly: she points in fear, "its Lu..Lua....Luann!!" hides behind Miley
Miley: "yes its horrible but you need to get used to it"
Lilly: "i think i can handle it"
Becca: "well we better get ready for school" she starts walking up stairs
Miley & Lily: "WE?! are u cereal" they look at eachother
Becca: "yeah, and your milk. im a ninth grader, and your a 8th grader, where gonna go to the same school"
Miley: "Omg! this is soo sudden! and everyones gonna be all over u there. and Jake might start to like you!"
Becca: "im sorry Miley, but this is how its gonna be" she walks upstairs and changes
Miley: "come one Lilly, lets go to the hannah closet"

They walk upstairs

Miley: "this is crazy" miley says walking into the hannah closet
Lilly: "just hurry and get dressed"
Becca: walks into the hannah closet all ready and looking really pretty, "hurry Miles!"
Miley: "okk" she gets some clothes and changes

They walk to school, Miley nervous, and Lilly thinking they forgot something
Lilly: "miley, we forgot something"
Miley: "what?" she stops, "omg!"
all three: "Oliver!"
They run to Mileys house

[[ to be continued ]]

Fire-Chicken
02-10-2007, 09:00 PM
Lol funny. wrte more

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-10-2007, 09:02 PM
i will when i get more comments

~Miley~Rox~
02-11-2007, 02:24 PM
i like it!

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-11-2007, 02:55 PM
thanks

HM ROCKS
02-11-2007, 04:15 PM
love it!!!

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-11-2007, 04:16 PM
thank you!

HM ROCKS
02-11-2007, 04:19 PM
write more!!! plz!!

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-11-2007, 06:28 PM
Chapter 3:
You and i were ment to be

The three girls arive at mileys house, get Oliver and run back to school
Miley: stops," we are here, ok, leave Oliver alone, lets just go in"
All three girls go in and Becca spots someone really cute.......JAKE RYAN
Becca: "umm guys, im gonna go find my locker, bye" she runs off
Miley & Lily: "bye................."
Lucky for Becca her locker was next to Jake's
Jake: comes walking over, spys Becca and falls in love, he walks over to his locker, "he..he..heyy..im Ja..Ja..Ja...Ja" askes a kid," whats my name?"
The Kid: "Jake Ryan!"
Jake: walks to Becca, "im Jake...and you are?"
Becca: "im Becca Montana, and im new"
Jake: "your Becca Montana!? ive heard of u but never seen you."
Becca: Laughs, "rightt....well im Miley's cousin, and yeah"
Jake: "Miley Stewart?! oh-no! she has a HUGE crush on me, if she saw us together she would freak!"
Becca: " well were not actually dating...."
Jake: ".....true."
Becca: "yeah"

Miley: walks over to Jake and Becca, "ohh i see u guys have met" she frowns
Becca: "is the that a bad thing?"
Miley: "course not!"
Jake: "good, well talk to you guys later! bye" he walks away

Miley: "Becca! you better stay away from him!"
Becca: "im in love, you cant blame me" she gets 3 books from her locker and walk away
Miley: yells, "whos blaming ya?!"

Lilly: walks over, "hey, whats wrong?"
Miley: "Becca and Jake like each other!"
Lilly: "really?! well i have something to tell you"
Miley: "what?"
Lilly: "me and Oliver decided to start dating!"
Miley: "really?! am i the only one with out a bf?"
Lilly: "im sooo sorry Miles!"
Miley: "uhh, its okk, just...nevermind, bye"
Lilly: "Bye" spots Oliver and walks to him, "Hey Oliver"

Oliver: "Hey Lilly, how did Miley take the news?"
Lilly: "she felt left out cause she doesnt have a bf"
Oliver: "what about Jake?"
Lilly: "Becca took him"
Oliver: "oh darn her!"
Lilly: "yeah, but thats how love at first site works"
Oliver: "True, true, well gtg, see ya at lunch, bye"
Lilly: "byee"

*** Bell rings *** [[ time for lunch! ]]

Oliver, Lilly, and Miley sit together. Becca and Jake sit together

Miley: "any guys looking for a gf?"
Lilly: "sorry, i dont think so"
Oliver: "how bout Dylan?"
Miley: "EWWWWWWWWW! no way!"

[[ they keep talking ]]

Becca: "so are u in 8th or 9th?"
Jake: "9th"
Becca: "me too! awesomenesss!"
Jake: "cool, so what now?"
Becca: "umm, we should go out, on a date..."
Jake: "cant say anything bad about that"
Becca: "umm how bout tomorrow at 6? you come pick me up?"
Jake: "alrighty then, its a date"
Becca: "well im gonna go sit with Miley, bye"
Jake: "bye"

Becca goes to the other table, "heyyy......."
Miley: "heyy celeb stealer"
Becca: "why are you being like this?!"
Miley: "Because!"

[[to be continued]]

sophiecool
02-11-2007, 08:44 PM
Great job Alvana!

Katybug1994
02-11-2007, 09:39 PM
It's great more!!

Shenae Grimes Fan
02-12-2007, 02:08 AM
thanks =]
i will later

Destiny9910
05-05-2008, 04:22 PM
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