My Fan Fic! By.mackenzie!

[mhc13]

im working on my fan fic now i will have it well i dont know when!

hope you like it!!

it really dosnt have a name!

[mhc13]

please comment!!!!!!

[Katybug1994]

That's good! I can't wait for the real thing!!

[mhc13]

thanks! im writing it right this very minute!

[mhc13]

never mind im not doing that fan fic sorry!

[mhc13]

setting:Miley's house
lilly walks in.

miley:Hey Lilly, what are you doing here?
lilly:um...i kinda have some bad news!
miley:um,ok?what?
lilly:well... i dont know how to tell you this but...
miley:but what?
lilly:someone on the beach kinda told you who you "really" our!
miley: (gasps)WHAT!!!!!!!


ok i know its really short and bad but its my first one!

[Katybug1994]

No..it's good! Keep going!

[mhc13]

thanks but everyone knows its bad! but ok ill keep going! after 3 more commants from 3 different people!

[Cntrygurl]

Cool

[mhc13]

no its not!

[Katybug1994]

Don't be so down on yourself! It's fine! I mean.. it's your frist one..

[mhc13]

ok ill keep going:

setting:same place

miley:I cant believe someone told that im hannah montana!
miley:i wonder who would do that?
lilly:i know! well i fill sorry for you!
lilly:got to go!
miley: ok! bye! next time you see me ill be getting chased!
lilly:see you tommorrow!
lilly leaves
miley:i wonder who could of done this?
voice:i know....

i know its really short but i cant think of anything ill add on when i think of something!

[mhc13]

your right but you have to agree with me it stinks!

[mhc13]

please comment! and please come!

[mhc13]

please comment!

[mhc13]

ok ill keep going

setting:somewhere
miley and voice

miley:what are you doing!
voice:im kiddnaping you!
miley:who are you?
voice:someone you you know! and saw today!
miley:but..what are you going to do to me!
voice:oh lets just say the whole worlds going to hate hannah montana after this!
miley:what?
voice:oh shut up!we all know i want to be just like you!
voice:so i stole your wig!lets go!
miley:no........(screams)

i know its really short and bad!

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

I like it it has a good base to it

[mhc13]

no it dosnt!

[mhc13]

setting:school

oliver:hey lilly i havent seen miley all day!
lilly:um....me neither?
oliver:yea i wonder who told everyone that shes hannah montana!
lilly:i got to go!

setting:somewhere (still)
miley had passed out!
miley:where am i?
voice:your locked up in a cage!
miley:noooo i thought it was a dream!
voice:you stay here while i go ruin your life muhahahahaha!
somebody leaves!
miley:i wonder how i can get out!
--------:hello? anybody here?miley?
miley:yeah!------- come help me get out of this cage!
-------:ok miley im coming!
miley:thanks ------- what are you doing back in the usa....

find out on the next chapter who saves miley!

[mhc13]

i hope you like it because i sure dont!

[mhc13]

setting:somewhere:

jake:hello anybody here miley?
miley:yeah!jake help me get out of this cage!
jake: ok miley im coming!
miley:thanks jake what are you doing back in the usa?

i dont have time to write anymore ill add on later!

[Miley98]

I knew it was Jake! I will give u some tips later!

[Fire-Chicken]

It's not bad. It's a great start :D I just write my Fan Fiction for fun and it's not many who have posted something at myn but I don't care so much cos I do it for fun :D So write it cos u like it and u think it's fun. If u don't think it's fun I never should write something. but that's just my opinion.
Write More It's Good!!

[mhc13]

i dont feel like it right now!

[mhc13]

I knew it was Jake! I will give u some tips later!

thanks! i need them!

[mhc13]

please commant!

[Fire-Chicken]

Write More!! It's Great!!

[sar522]

ok its kinda good

[RunnerCutie13]

that is soo good good job

[gilmore1]

more?

[Gabriella Read]

more more.....