View Full Version : The other side of me fanfic
HannahMontanaX3
02-02-2007, 07:13 PM
hey so I am writing my first fan fic. it is starting during idol side of me. Amber is refusing to sing and Hannah says she will go through the green arch so amber looks better that her.
Amber: how would you know I will look better?
Hannah: Lucky guess?!? *starts sweating*
Amber: why are you sweating? and It cant be possible that its a guess.
Hannah: okay but you cant tell ANYONE! we will enter the red arch together. but the thing is *makes sure no one sees* (but she doesnt know asley is spying)
Amber: I promise! *shows she is not crossing anything*
Hannah: *pulls off wig* I am Hannah Montana.
Amber: NO WAY!
Hannah: *puts wig back on* *wispers* we enter red arch together,because the other is a trap,cause I was mad I was at the bottem of the cool list.
Amber: okay.
the sing the song and are now friends.
WHAT WILL ASHLEY DO WITH THE NEW INFORMATION?!?! WILL MILEYS NEW FRIENDSHIP EFFECT HER AND LILY?
find out next. I need positive feed back before I continue. sorry it is a little short
xo_hannah_fan1_xo
02-02-2007, 10:24 PM
Sounds interesting! Please post more! I love reading these types of things!
mhc13
02-02-2007, 10:36 PM
yea me too! i have my own its called my fa fic by mackenzie its really really bad!
Katybug1994
02-02-2007, 10:42 PM
It's not bad! Anyways.. your is good! Please Continue!!
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 09:11 AM
Okay.as you should rember the last segment featured Amber finding out Mileys secret. But they did not know Ashley foung out too. they(Amber and Miley) entered together and became friends
Chapter two
Amber: Oh my Freakin God,that was so ahsome.
Hannah: I know,right?
Amber: So wanna grab a smoothie or summin
Hannah: right affter I change. my wig today is driving me crazy. *pulls off wig then changes into a pair of Aeropostale jeans, an Aero knit shirt,and aero zipper hoodie*
Miley: lets go.
Amber: okay
~~~~~~~~~~
menwhile in Jacksons life:
Jackson:Hey cooper
Cooper: hey dude lets play ping pong
Jackson: you know youll get smoked
Cooper: think again little man.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lilly: so wait Amber knows?!?!
Miley: Settle down.
Lilly: how can I settle down when my BFF is friends with our worst enime?!?
Miley: what is so wrong? she promised not to tell!
Lilly: I just dont think our will work!
Miley: *storms off* Aggg
Amber: what was that about?
Miley: she doesnt wanna be friends with me.
Amber: thats too bad. I am sure she will come back soon.
Ashley: *is telling everyone that Miley is Hannah Montana and showing the pics she took of miley with the Hannah wig and of her in hannah clothing*
*she sends pics to mags like teen people,seventeen,teen vouge and many more.*
Random crowd of students: *all yell* ITS HANNAH MONTANA!!!!!!!! *start running towrds miley*
Miley: *yelling* YOU TOLD DIDNT YOU!!
Amber: I SWEAR I DIDNT
Miley: YEAH RIGHT! *storms off to the limo that pulled up*
Miley: *on the phone with lilly* Everyone at school knows my secret now. I am NOT friends with amber anymore.
Lilly: I AM SORRY! I am still your friend. and not just at school *sends miley magazine covers with ashleys pics* The whole WORLD
WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO MILEY? WHERE WILL SHE GO? WILL SHE FOREVER ON HATE AMBER? WILL ASHLEY BE FOUND OUT? WILL COOPER BEAT JACKSON? ALL THIS IN THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS!
come on people! reply now.
niiro_tatsu
02-03-2007, 10:45 AM
It's well written. I just didn't like tha fact that she told Amber. She would never do that. But it a fan fic so anything can happen.
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 10:57 AM
well I had it planned out so I could make it intresing.
Miley98
02-03-2007, 12:19 PM
but wats the green arch and wats the red arch?
mhc13
02-03-2007, 01:10 PM
keep going!
vanessa*anne
02-03-2007, 03:01 PM
its good keep going
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 04:15 PM
but wats the green arch and wats the red arch?
the entrances for singing with the stars in the eppi "The Idol Side of Me"
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 04:26 PM
NOTE: I just made up the IM screen names.
Chapter 3
Amber__: *IMs Miley* I didnt tell I swear!
SmileyMiley: who else could have gotten pics and known who I was.
Amber__:...
Miley: I thought so! I am gonna log off
Amber gets this message in before she leaves
Amber__:ASHLEY! she mustve been spying!
SmileyMiley: HOW DO I KNOW IT WASNT YOU!?!
Amber__: I promised I wouldnt tell
SmileyMiley: well I may give you a 2nd chance as long as you help me.
Amber__: okay *logs off*
At School
Miley(wearing disguse as a new blonde transfer student): Allo! I am Alice.
Lilly: Hi Alice. Are you knew?
Alice/Miley: *wispers* Ding-dong its me,Miley. I cnt be in school with out being mobed.
Lilly: AH. I get it.
Amber: Hi Alice *wink wink*
Will Mileys diguse work? Will she come up with a plan? What about cooper and Jacksons game? Find out soon!
You guys I need 5 posts of positive feed back
HM ROCKS
02-03-2007, 04:29 PM
more more more!!!! Its AWSOME!!!
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 04:38 PM
Ashley: So Alice,where are you from?
Alice/Miley: Paris.
Ashley:If your here then where the frick is Miley?
Alice: Whos Miley?
Ash: oh nothing! *walks off with her new friend Mariah* *runs up and pull of Alices wig*
Ash and Mariah: Oooohhh-tsssss
Hannah Fans: Its Hannah Montana! GET HER!
Miley: Ahhhh *runs and grabs ash nd Amber on the way* why did you tell Ash?!?!
Ashley: to ruin your life mostly.
Miley: Oh great!
Ashley: HEY EVERYONE SHES IN HERE!
sorry its short
MileyRox1174
02-03-2007, 07:27 PM
Your FanFic is really good! Please post more!!
MileyRox1174
02-03-2007, 07:27 PM
And like I said (on mine) "I'm a sucker for FanFics!"
^Lolz, it's true!!
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 07:34 PM
ok. thanks.
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 07:35 PM
I didnt think anyone would like it
hannah_montana.boston
02-03-2007, 07:47 PM
hmmmmmmmm idk wat 2 think
HannahMontanaX3
02-03-2007, 10:02 PM
I am playing DRD gonna continue 2marow
hannah_montana.boston
02-03-2007, 10:22 PM
isnt it called ddr? my bff does it 24/7
HannahMontanaX3
02-04-2007, 08:28 AM
oops typo
HM ROCKS
02-04-2007, 08:42 AM
more more more more more its awsome!! Have you cheaked out my fanfic?? It in my siggy its the button that says Zombieslayer Stepbrother!! Go read it!!
mileysbestpal164
02-04-2007, 11:07 AM
Looooooooooooove it i want more!!!
MileyRox1174
02-04-2007, 12:08 PM
More!! Please!!
HannahMontanaX3
02-04-2007, 12:34 PM
okay. so we need to learn about cooper and jackson. I am gonna do this narrator style.
Chappie 4: Ping Pong ON
Jackson: whad you call me?
Cooper: Nothin' lets get going.
Narrator: And Cooper has scored 4 points. making the score cooper 4 and jackson 0. Jackson ties it up with his...unique....movments. Oh we a have a visitor.
Rico: Jackson why arent you at work?!? I want buffalow wings.
Jackson: fine
Cooper: *bragging* You forfit,I won,mmmhmhmhmhm
Jackson: this is NOT over!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*miley gets mobber*
Fans: Oh Hannah I love you! Can I Have Your Autograph!?!
Ashley: Hey I told you her secret.
Fans: THANKYOU ASHLEY!
Ashley: *flips back her hair* I know,Im perfect.
Miley: *having a hard time speaking* No....You......Arent!
Ashley: This torture on Miley is great!
Setting: Mileys House
*Miley comes in with her hair all messed up and stuff.*
Robby Ray: what happened bud?
Miley: Hannah Montana! *turns on tv for American Idol only to find it isnt playing and instead a news report.*
Reporter: Hi I am Suke Samules. 14 year old pop-princess,is indeed regular,everyday Miley Stewart. As shown in these pictures. They were taken by none other than Ashley,back stage at singing with the stars. We have reporters at the 14 yearolds home.More tomarow,on 5 oclock news.
Paparazzis: Hannah,what do you have to say? *snaps pics*
*robby and miley shut the windows and pull down the blinds.*
Lilly: *on phone.Miley this is crazy!
Miley:I know
Voice: If you search peace and tranquility,come to ---- at 8:00 tomarow.
HannahMontanaX3
02-04-2007, 03:40 PM
anyone?
HM ROCKS
02-04-2007, 04:06 PM
more!!! did you read my story??
HannahMontanaX3
02-04-2007, 05:01 PM
sorry. I need atleast 7 more coments from 7 differant people
vivi loca
02-04-2007, 06:05 PM
more please its real good and a favor will you read mine its called Hannah's concert at the tipton and tell me what do you think of it
MileyRox1174
02-04-2007, 07:11 PM
MORE!! Please!
hannah_montana.boston
02-04-2007, 07:12 PM
uh i want more now now now now now now and 7 people? hehehe i am 7 people
1-aswom
2-coool
3-more
4-superfantabulas
5-supercalafragalysticxpaladociuos(sp)
6-like it? no love it!
7- more or ill die when the super bowel is over!
seee i am 7 people!
vivi loca
02-04-2007, 07:14 PM
more please
hannah_montana.boston
02-04-2007, 07:24 PM
more
hmfhannahmontanafan
02-04-2007, 08:21 PM
yeah, it's good! more!
HannahMontanaX3
02-05-2007, 07:44 AM
I will when I get home from school.
whitesoxfan
02-05-2007, 08:01 AM
you Spelled Mobbed Wrong U Spelled It Mobber
hannah_montana.boston
02-05-2007, 03:53 PM
o worries u were rushin
MileyRox1174
02-05-2007, 07:45 PM
More Please!
hannah_montana.boston
02-05-2007, 08:27 PM
arnt u homeyet?
MileyRox1174
02-08-2007, 07:01 PM
I know seriously!! Please post it!
HannahMontanaX3
02-08-2007, 07:44 PM
sorry for the wait. its just,we started cooking class so woo. I am a little distracted
hannah_montana.boston
02-08-2007, 07:56 PM
welll.....
HannahMontanaX3
02-08-2007, 08:05 PM
okay. just a sec.
hannah_montana.boston
02-08-2007, 08:08 PM
kk
yay
and i updated my fanfic 2
HannahMontanaX3
02-08-2007, 08:10 PM
Miley: wha??
Voice: *a little angry* come to Ricos for peace and tranquility at 8:00 tonight.
Miley: Bah?
Voice: Just come.
Miley: okay.
Setting:Ricos a 8pm
Miley: okay,I am here.
Papparazzis: Hey Hannah! *taking picks and flooding miley with questions*
Miley: WHO SET THIS UP?!?!
Luanne: Howdy cous!
Miley: Louanne!!!!!!!!
Luanne: well look at this,little miley fell for it!
MORE later. sorry its short. I am just tired right now.
hannah_montana.boston
02-08-2007, 08:16 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
omg
idk
ugly bettyz on
:57:
MileyRox1174
02-10-2007, 02:21 PM
More!! Please!!
MileyRox1174
02-11-2007, 08:27 PM
MORE!! I need more!
HannahMontanaX3
02-11-2007, 08:32 PM
okay. Just to let you know Ashley tricked Amber into helping her
Miley(sleeping):this can not be happening this can not be happening! *wakes up* Oh it was just a dream.
Amber: hey Miley
Ashley: Hey Miley.
Miley: why are you guys here?
Amber:well ever since you became popular cause everyone knows your secret,we havent gotten any attention. so were here to fix that!
*Amber and Ashley ducktape miley to her bed,tie ropes around her,put ducktape over her mouth and lock her door*
Amber and Ashley: Bye Miley! Ohhh tssss
sorry its short.I needed to add suspense
hannah_montana.boston
02-11-2007, 08:48 PM
well u could write more but still have suspence
HannahMontanaX3
02-12-2007, 07:57 AM
Robby Ray: MILEY! TIME FOR SCHOOL
Miley: *muffled screams* Mmmmmmmmm MMMMMMmmmm
Robby: Miley?
Miley: mmmm mmmmmm
*robby goes to her room*
Robby: who did this *undoes everything*
Miley: Amber and Ashley.
sorry its short gotta go to school
hannah_montana.boston
02-12-2007, 03:29 PM
hahaha.hey did she fall asleep?ur goin 2 skol she gotta go 2 skol hahahahaha
MileyRox1174
02-12-2007, 06:52 PM
MORE!!
You positively, really really, have to post MORE!! (Please?!)
hannah_montana.boston
02-12-2007, 07:35 PM
hahaha i agreeee
Miley_Montana_Gal
02-12-2007, 08:26 PM
Edit:
Wrong Story!
hannah_montana.boston
02-13-2007, 05:54 PM
Edit:
Wrong Story!
???
MileyRox1174
02-13-2007, 07:50 PM
Edit:
Wrong Story!
What do you mean?? What are you talking about??
Anyways, please post more!!
hannah_montana.boston
02-15-2007, 03:19 PM
m
mor
moree
moreeee
HannahMontanaX3
03-03-2007, 09:13 AM
PS all those little posts were part of chappie 4. Guys to let you know I am tired of writing this story. I now have two other fanfics. the links are in my siggy. I am finishing this up in a long chapter.
Chapter 5: "In the end,it doesnt even matter"
Setting: School
Miley(as hannah): Everyone *sings In the End(her version)* I dont care if I may have been some dork to you or your best friend. In the end It shouldent matter. In the end it doesn't matter. I could be anyone to you, Hannah,Miley,Dorkbrain etc. I dont care, but just like you I am normal. I dont care. Everyone knows my secret but now just for old times sake, *pulls off wig* I am MILEY not Hannah. No more mobs. I will still be 14 year old pop princess hannah montana but to you I should still be who I was at first.
Crowd: YAHHH! Miley we still love you. your not hannah to us. You are who you were.
Narrator: Miley Told this to a repporter and it went over the whole world. everyone only knew her as hannah or miley. exept Lilly,Oliver, Family, And now Amber. She had gained a friend and Ashley was on her own. Everything was great. her life was back, even though her secret was known.
kk so it wasnt THAT long,but still tell me what you thought.
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