Life After Danna (Sequel to Hannah's "Twin")

[niiro_tatsu]

Ok this is the sequel to Hannah's "Twin". So if you want to read this fan fiction, you sould probably read Hannah's "Twin" first, it is here (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=30402).

*** Miley: Woah woah. Where are you going?
Jake: Ummm
Lynn: Me and Jake have a date...
Michael: Could we make it a double date? *looking at Miley*
Jake: Yeah sure, just find a girl. *well knowing he would take Miley*
Michael: Miley? Would you like to be my date?
Miley: Sure!!***

Chapter 1

Lynn: Great!
Jake: Ok so how 'bout we eat dinner then go see a movie?
Micheal: Sounds good.
Miley: Perfect!
Lynn: Well we are gonna go get ready *grabs Miley's hand and starts to head off*
Jake: Alright, well meet us back here at......*Looks at watch* 6:30!
Miley: Perfect!

Miley and Lynn go to Miley's house to get ready. Lynn stops at her house to get some stuff.

Miley: I can't believe this!
Lynn: Miley and Micheal sitting in the theater K-I-S-S-I-N-G.
Miley: Oh stop it!
Lynn: Well you wish it.
Miley: ....So
Lynn and Miley bust out laughing!
Lynn: Ok, I brought like my whole closet over. What should I wear?
Miley: Let's see what you got!
Lynn pulls out a lot of very cute clothes.
Miley: Ohhh this is ceeee-yute!
Lynn: Great, I'll go put it on.
Lynn goes into the bathroom, changes clothes, and comes back into the room.
Lynn: Ok what about you?
Miley: I was thinking this *pickes up an outfit*
Lynn: Love it!
Miley changes her clothes and come into the room.
Miley: Whaddaya think?
Lynn: It looks great! Micheal will love it!!!
Miley: I hope so...
Lynn: Time for hair and makeup.
Miley: Alright, I think you should wear your hair down.
Lynn takes down her hair.
Miley: And curly it a bit
Miley gets out a curling iron and starts curling Lynn's hair.
Lynn: You should keep yours down and I'll straighten it.
Miley: I like the idea.
They do each other's hair and start heading down to the beach.
Lynn: This is gonna be soooooooo fun!
Miley: I know!
They see Jake and Micheal and go over to them.
Jake: Hey Lynn. You look great! *they kiss each other real quickly*
Lynn: Thanks.
Miley: Hey Micheal!
Micheal: Miley, you look great too.
Miley: Thanks.
Jake: Soooooo let's go eat!
Lynn: Alright.
Jake and Lynn grabs hand and start to walk. Miley and Micheal just walk side by side.
They walk up to the restaurent Olive Garden. (Couludn't think of anything else, lol)
Jake: Umm a party of 4.
Waitress: Ok, follow me.
They all follow the waitress and get to their booth table.
The girls sit on one side and the guys sit on the other.
So what would you like to drink.
Miley and Micheal: Sprite
Jake: Woah
Lynn: You can say that again.
Jake: Wo-
Lynn: I didn't mean that.
Jake: Oh...
Waitress: And you too?
Jake and Lynn: Root beer.
Micheal: Woah...
Waitress: Anyways...... I bring back the drink and get your order.
Miley: Ok!
They all look at their menu.
Lynn: I'll get..... PIZZA!!!
Miley: Oh me too!
Micheal: I want a plate of spaghetti!
Jake: And I want some lasagna.

[hannah_montana.boston]

omg how aswom is this-wait dont anwsar cause its beyond aswome!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

lol thanks

[HannahMontanaX3]

this is so good so far. please read my fan fic. I read your first one. it is ahsome

[niiro_tatsu]

I'll read it. post a link please

[HannahMontanaX3]

niiro_tatsu, I love you Jake Ryan sig. Its so funny

[HannahMontanaX3]

okay. it isnt that good but here it is:
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=32203

[HannahMontanaX3]

Ahh were all gonna die! I AM ADDICTED TO Dani California! AHHHHHHHHH! I need to listen to it.

[niiro_tatsu]

niiro_tatsu, I love you Jake Ryan sig. Its so funnyThanks.

okay. it isnt that good but here it is:
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=32203
Ok I'll read it!

[niiro_tatsu]

*** Lynn: I'll get..... PIZZA!!!
Miley: Oh me too!
Micheal: I want a plate of spaghetti!
Jake: And I want some lasagna.***

Part 2

The waitress comes back with their drinks and takes their order. So the four of them talk for the next 20 minutes, waiting for their food. Their food finally comes and they all dig in.

Jake with a mouth full of lasagna: This *chews* is soooo *Chews* good!
Lynn: Ewww Jake! Eat, swallow, then talk!
Jake swallows: Sorry.
Miley: Ha!
Lynn: What?
Miley: Look at Micheal.
Lynn looks at him and sees that he has a big blot of sauce on your nose.
Lynn: Haha! Hey umm Micheal?
Micheal: Yeah..
Miley: You have something on your nose.
Micheal: How embarrassing!!! *wipes it off*
Lynn: Not as embarrassing as that. *points to Jake who have sauce all over his mouth*
Micheal: Yeah your right.
They all laugh except for Jake.
Jake: HEY!
Hey wipes it off. They all continue their meal and head off to the movies.
Micheal: So what movie?
Miley: Ummmmmm
Lynn: How about...
Paparazzi comes up.
Reporter: Jake Ryan! Are you on a date?
Jake: Matter of fact I am!
Jake starts to lead Lynn away and Micheal and Miley follow.
Reporter taking pictures: Why aren't you at the party.
Miley: Party? What party?
Reporter: Yeah the one for Hannah Montana, for the single One in a Million.
Miley and Lynn look at each other completely forgetting about the party they were supposed to attend.
Jake: Well uhh, I didn't know about it.*looks at Miley nervously*
Miley: Sweet niblets!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

That one was kinda short. But once I get 3 comments on 3 different people, I'll post more

[~Zanessa Forever~]

nice,more please!

[vanessa*anne]

its really good!

[~Miley~Rox~]

Really good like your last one

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley and Lynn look at each other completely forgetting about the party they were supposed to attend.
Jake: Well uhh, I didn't know about it.*looks at Miley nervously*
Miley: Sweet niblets!!!

Part 3

Micheal: What, what's wrong?
Lynn: This isn't good. Jake we gotta go.
Jake: Alright...
Micheal: What? Where? *very confused*
Jake: I'll call a limo and we'll leave. C'mon.
Miley: I'll tell you in the car.

They get in the limo.

Micheal: Ok, what's going on?
Lynn: Miley?
Miley: Micheal, can I trust you?
Micheal: Of course. What's wrong.
Miley: Well I am Hannah Montana.
Micheal: What? And I am Micheal Jackson!
Lynn: Ewwwwww.... CHILD MOLESTER!!!!
Jake: Hahahaha!
Miley: I am serious!
Lynn: Yeah and I am Danna. Her "twin"
Micheal: Prove it.
Jake: Dude! They are telling the truth!

They arrive at Miley's house.

Miley: Look follow us.
They go upstairs. Miley shows him the Hannah closet.
Micheal: woah.
Lynn: We told you!
Micheal: Sorry, its kinda hard to believe something like that.
Miley: Yeah, and we gotta go to that party.
Lynn: Sorry to cut the date short.
Miley: Yeah sorry Micheal. Maybe we can finish this date another time. But we really have to go.
Micheal: No, I understand. How about tomorrow?
Miley: Perfect.
Micheal: Alright bye, see ya then.
Micheal leaves the house and Lynn and Miley get ready. Jake is still there.
Jake: Do you guys need a ride there?
Lynn: That'd be great!
Jake: Ok.... How much longer.
Miley: Just wait Jake!
Jake: geeze...
About 10 minutes later they all go back out to the limo.
Danna: Member Jake me and you are not together, you and Lynn are.
Jake: Right.
Hannah: I can't believe I forgot about this!
Danna: Me too!
They keep talking till they finally get there.
Reporters: Oh look another limo. Let's see what celeb is inside.
Jake pop out. Then Hannah then Danna.
Reporter: Woah we have Jake Ryan and the Montana twins!
They all smile and take some pictures. The "twin" each on one side of Jake.
Reporter: So Jake are you dating both the twins?
Jake: Ugh! We've been over this. We are all just really good friends. I am dating a girl from my school.
Reporter: Oh right Lynn.... Lynn Lee! So you two are still going at it.
Jake: Sure why not.
Hannah: Let's go into the party.
Danna: YAY!!!
There are so many different celebs there. Hannah calls Lilly to see if she wants to come, but she is on a date with Oliver. They all sit, eat, chat with others and stuff. The party finally ends late at night. They go back to the limo.
Jake: Woah, that was fun.
Danna: You can say that again!
Jake: Woah, th--
Danna: Member what I said back at the restaurent?
Jake: Oh yeah...
Hannah: He is such a dork!
Jake: I heard that.
Danna: But he is my dork!
Hannah: Awww
Jake: C'mon give your dork a kiss! *Jake puckers up and closes his eyes, he is very dramatic with this*
Danna holds up her purse and he kisses it.
Danna: Kiss that.
Jake: ugh!
Hannah and Danna laugh.
They finally get to Miley's house and they all go inside.
They take off their wigs.
Miley: Thanks for the ride.
Jake: No Problem! Bye
Lynn: Bye.
Lynn gives her dork a kiss before he leaves.
Miley: Hey do you wanna sleep over?
Lynn: Sure! Can we call Lilly?
Miley: Of course!

[HannahMontanaX3]

continue please

[hannah_montana.boston]

like it? no love it!

ur siggy is funny i laugh when i see it !:roflmao:

[niiro_tatsu]

Teehee. Yeah i was photoshoping then that episode was on. i was like awww he looks sooo cute. so i made the sig

[niiro_tatsu]

Tell me when you want the next part

[HannahMontanaX3]

next part

[JC4everGirl]

wow this is really good!!!! more please
:)

[niiro_tatsu]

I have to go. so when i get back i'll do more

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley: Hey do you wanna sleep over?
Lynn: Sure! Can we call Lilly?
Miley: Of course!

Part 4

Lynn takes out her cell and clicks number 5 for Lilly.

Rings Rings Rings *Lynn puts it on speaker*

Lilly: Hello?
Lynn: Hey!
Lilly: Hey Lynn. What's up?
Lynn: We, being me and Miley, were wondering if you wanted to spend the night.
Miley: At my house.
Lilly: Yeah sure! I'll be over in a few!
Lynn: Great!!!
Miley and Lynn go back downstairs to get some snacks. Then Miley's phone rings.
Miley: Hello?
Lilly: Lilly landing in 10!!!
Miley hangs up.
Miley: Lilly landing in 9!
Lynn: 8 *runs to the door and opens it*
Miley gets some cookiee dough and starts putting in on a plate!
Lilly comes in and does a 360 on her skate board.
Lilly: AND SHE STICKS THE LANDING!!!
Lynn: WOO
Lilly: So what are we gonna do?
Miley: The usual, stuff our faces with cookie dough, talk about boys, do--
Lilly: Speaking of boys, how was the date?
Lynn: We had to cancel,... the party.
Lilly: Oh yeah! Awww poor Micheal-Wicheal didn't get to be with his Miley-Wiley.
Miley: Oh shut up!
Lynn and Lilly: Hahaha!
Lynn: But he does like you!
Miley: Oh yeah right!
Lynn: Watch! *takes out her phone and dials a number*
Micheal: Hello?
Lynn: Hey Micheal!
Miley: Give me that!!!
Micheal: Lynn?
Lynn: Yup!
Micheal: What's up?
Lynn: Oh I just wanted to talk to you about the date tomorrow.
Micheal: What about it.
Lynn: Oh well me and Jake had plans, so we can't make the double date.
Micheal: Really?!? That's sucks.
Lynn: Yeah just you and Miley... alone.... together. Really stinks huh?
Lilly snickering in the background
Micheal: You promise to keep a secret?
Lynn: Of course!
Micheal: Well I uhh I uhh like Miley.
Lynn: Really? You like Miley? I wouldv'e never guessed!

Miley: LYNN!

Micheal: Who was that, it sounded like Miley!
Lynn: No one, who's Miley? GOTTA GO!

Lynn hangs up. And they all bust out laughing.

[hannah_montana.boston]

hahahaha that is just like me!

[niiro_tatsu]

yeah i realized i kinda formed myself into lynn

[hannah_montana.boston]

hahaha many great writers do that!

[niiro_tatsu]

yeah i really didn't mean too though. ok i am gonna write the next part
=

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley: LYNN!

Micheal: Who was that, it sounded like Miley!
Lynn: No one, who's Miley? GOTTA GO!

Lynn hangs up. And they all bust out laughing.

Part 5

Miley hits Lynn on the arm

Miley: Why'd you do that?
Lynn: What?
Miley: you know!
Lynn: Nuh uh!
Miley gives her the look.
Lynn: Sorry, I thought'd it be funny!
Lilly: And it was!
Lilly's cell rings
Lilly: Hello?
Oliver: Hey hun!
Lilly: Oliver *sounded all excited*
Lilly talks to Oliver for a while.
Miley: They are in LOVE *makes a heart with her fingers*
Lynn: I know right!
Miley: But not as in love as you and Jake!
Lynn: Oh yeah right!
Miley: C'mon you guys go out like everyday
Lynn: Soooo... Lilly and Oliver talk for hours!
Miley: But she doesn't have her cell phone background of you and Jake hugging now does she? *Shows Lynn her cell*
Lynn: ....no, But that doesn't mean anything!
Miely: Face it! You guys are meant to be together... FOREVER!
Lynn: Not forever, maybe just for a while though!
Miley: Lynn is in LOVE!!
Lynn: Nuh uh!
Miley: Why deny it?
Lilly comes back.
Lilly: What cha talking about?
Miley: Lynn in love
Lilly: Ohh Jakey!
Lynn: Stop it guys!
Lilly: Do you? You know... love him?
Lynn: I dunno. I feel like I do, but I really don't know.
Miley: Just follow your heart!
Lynn: You sound like a corny dog!
Lilly: Corny dog? What the heck?
Lynn: Cause that was so corny, and corn dogs?
Miley: DUH!!
Lilly: Oh my bad.

The night continues with them talking and stuff, and the next morning.

*AT THE BEACH*
*Rico's*
Lynn: Hey Jackson, give me a water.
Jackson: Here ya go! That'd be 200 dollars.
Lynn: Whatever. *lynn walks away*
Jackson: You do have to pay for that!
Lynn: I said... WHATEVER!!
Jakcson: Sheesh, now I have to get a 1 dollar outta my pay check!

Miley: Oh hey Lynn!
Lynn: Hey Miley! What's up?
Miley: Thinking about you know who. You?
Lynn: Thinking about telling Jake I love him.
Miley: Oh really? You should. He totally loves you back.
Lynn: I dunno... Maybe later.

It is later on in the day and Miley, Lynn, and Lilly are shopping for some new clothes for an award ceremony they have to attend.

*By the food court*

Lilly: Hey isn't that Jake?
Lynn: Oh yeah, it is!
Miley: Who is he with?

They all stare at a mysterious girl Jake is with. They see that they are holding hands, smiling, and.... flirting.

Lynn: What does that boy think he is doing?!?!
Miley: Go talk to him!
Lilly: SLAP HIM!
Lynn: I think I will.

Lynn storms up to Jake.

Lynn: Hey Jake! No wonder you couldn't come with me to the mall, cause you were going with someone else!
Jake: LYNN!!. What are you doing here!
Lynn: Dumping my boyfriend!

[hannah_montana.boston]

oooohhhh hahahahaha i love the end!

[niiro_tatsu]

this one isn't really popular so i'll stop

[Fire-Chicken]

NOOOOOO!!! Don't Stop. Please, Please!! :D

[~Miley~Rox~]

no i LOVE it toooooooooo much for you to stop

its might not be popular because not enough people know about it yet!

so DONT stop!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

dont stop u never know if people w/out accounts look on and love it every day but hey dont we the people who do love it count for something?

[niiro_tatsu]

Lynn: Hey Jake! No wonder you couldn't come with me to the mall, cause you were going with someone else!
Jake: LYNN!!. What are you doing here!
Lynn: Dumping my boyfriend!

Part 6

Jake: Woah... woah.. woah... WOAH! Wait.
Lynn: Too late!
Lynn starts to walk away.
Jake: Lynn!
Jake goes after her.
Jake: Lynn, wait up!
Lynn: What!?!?
Jake: It's not what it looks like!
Lynn: I saw you with another girl! You blew me off to be with her!
Jake: That's just Gina, she worked with me in Zombie High.
Lynn: So you get with all your co-stars?
Lynn walks off again.
Jake: No! We were just good friends, like you and Oliver.
Lynn: But I don't flirt with Oliver!
Jake: I didn't flirt with her.
Lynn: Oh please! Like you don't even know what it is! *sarcastic*
Jake: No *trying to save himself*
Lynn: I'll show you.
Lynn goes up to a guy that's about a year older than her and sits at his table.
Lynn: Hey!
Guy: Uhhh hi? Do I know you?
Lynn: No, I'm Lynn.
Guy: I'm Cody. (Couldn't think of anything else)
Lynn: That's a nice name.
Cody: Thanks. So, what's up?
Lynn: Oh nothing much, just shopping.
Cody: Well it is a mall!
Lynn: Yup.
Cody: Hey, wanna a drink?
Lynn: Sure!

Jake starts to get jealous.

Cody starts to walk Lynn to the drink place.
Jake goes up to him.
Jake: Hey!
Cody: what?
Jake: That's my girlfriend.
Lynn: Your EX-girlfriend.
Cody: So you guys broke up?
Jake: Doesn't matter. Leave her alone!
Cody: I didn't do anything to her!
Lynn: JAKE!
Jake: What?!
Lynn: Stop it! I broke up with you, member?!? It's OVER!!!

Jake just stops and looks real sad, and walks away

[hannah_montana.boston]

i like it

[Fire-Chicken]

I Really Like It!! Write more

[~Miley~Rox~]

great keep going!!!!!!!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

Lynn: JAKE!
Jake: What?!
Lynn: Stop it! I broke up with you, member?!? It's OVER!!!

Jake just stops and looks real sad, and walks away

Part 7

Lynn ends up getting a drink with Cody, but still loves Jake. She is just really angry at him.

*Next day at school*

Miley: Hey Lynn. How are you?
Lynn: Ummm yes.
Lilly: What?
Lynn: No.
Miley: Girl what's wrong with you?
Lynn: Ugh everything! I still love Jake!
Miley: Well go tell him!
Lynn: But he cheated on me!
Lilly: you don't know that!
Lynn: I saw it! Him, with her! What's not to see!?!
Miley: Look there he is.

Miley points to Jake who is walking over to them.

Jake: Hey guys!
Miley and Lilly: Hey Jake!
Lynn sighs and walks away.
Jake: Still mad at me I see...
Miley: Did you really cheat on her?
Jake: NO!
Lilly: Then what were you doing with ummmm uhhhh
Jake: Gina?
Lilly: Yeah!
Jake: She is just a friend!
Miley: But why were you with her, not Lynn?
Jake: Ok, promise to keep a secret?
Lilly: Yup!
Jake looks at Miley
Miley: Duh!
Jake: Ok look. *Pulls out a diamond necklace* Gina aws helping me shop for it.
Miley: Woah!
Lilly: IT's beautiful!
Jake: It's for Lynn.
Miley: She'll love it!
Jake: She hates me! *putting the necklace back in his pocket*
Lilly: Wait, are you gonna ask her to marry you!?!?!?
Jake: NO!! I was gonna take her out somewhere special and tell her something very important.
Miley: Oh what?
Jake: That I love her.
Miley and Lilly are shocked.
Lilly: Well tell her!
Jake: She won't listen to me!
Miley: Just try, after school.
Jake: Alright.

School goes on, Lynn still ignoring Jake. School is finally over and it is after school.

Lynn is walking home with Miley and Lynn.
Miley: *whispers to Lilly* Where's Jake.
Lilly: *whispers back* I dunno.
Lynn: what areyou talking about?
Miley and lilly: NOTHING!
Lynn looks at the suspicious.
Lynn: Whatever. Hey let's go to the beach!
Miley: Ok!

They get to the beach and they are getting drinks at Rico's.

Jackson: What do you want Lynn?
Lynn: Nah, I am good. I am gonna take a walk on the beach.
Lilly: Want company?
Lynn: Nah, I just wanna think.
Miley: OK, we'll be right here.

Lynn walks for about 10 minutes. Thinking about Jake. She really does love him. Still does, even if he was two timing her. He is just so cute, and nice, and sweet, and RIGHT THERE!

Jake: Lynn. Can we talk.
Lynn: About what? Gina?
Jake: Well yeah, I need to clear things up. C'mon sit down.
They sit down on the sand.
Lynn: So, what's with that Gina girl?
Jake: She was helping me.
Lynn: With what.
Jake: Shopping..
Lynn: I always help you shop! *getting jealous*
Jaek: but it was for you.
Lynn: Wha-really?
Jake: See *gets out the necklace*
Lynn: It's beautiful! But i can't accept it.
Jake: What, why?
Lynn: It looks expensive.
Jake: It was worth it.
Lynn: Aww.
Jake: Lynn I... I umm uhh
Lynn: What?
Jake: *really fast* iloveyou
Lynn is shocked.
Lynn: Jake, I... love you too.
Jake: Really?
Lynn: Yeah
Jake: So now what.
Lynn: I think now would be time for a kiss.
Jake: Good Idea!
Jake and Lynn kiss, Miley and Lilly see this.
Miley: Awwww
Lilly: Looks like they are back together!
Jake: But their is just one problem.
Lynn: ...what?
Jake: Their is this movie.
Lynn: Oh when!
Jake: No, not a date. I have to play in the movie.
Lynn: Ok... I don't get it.
Jake: In Romania. I leave tomorrow.
Lynn: What? But you, I, we
Jake: I know. I am sorry.
Lynn: So for how long.
Jake: 4 months.
Lynn: 4 MONTHS!?!?
Jake: Yeah I am sorry.
Lynn: it's ok, it's your job.

Lynn gets up and starts to leave.

Jake: Lynn, I am really sorry.
Lynn turns around.
Lynn: I understand. It's ok. I'll be fine. Just don't fall in love with anyother girls ok?
Jake: I can't promise that *jokingly*
Lynn: Jake! *she hits them*
Jake: You know i am kidding.
Lynn: I know.

Jake and Lynn hug.

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[HannahMontanaX3]

oops late post

[HannahMontanaX3]

okay now more

[niiro_tatsu]

I just wrote some!lol

[Shenae Grimes Fan]

Awesome!

[~Miley~Rox~]

please post mor ibeg of you

[Fire-Chicken]

Awesome!

[hannah_montana.boston]

I just wrote some!lol

we kno but still......u kno want more

[~Miley~Rox~]

pppppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee

[niiro_tatsu]

Jake: Lynn, I am really sorry.
Lynn turns around.
Lynn: I understand. It's ok. I'll be fine. Just don't fall in love with anyother girls ok?
Jake: I can't promise that *jokingly*
Lynn: Jake! *she hits them*
Jake: You know i am kidding.
Lynn: I know.

Jake and Lynn hug.

Part 8

Lilly: do you think they broke up?
Miley: Nah, just... I dunno. But they would never break up. They are meant for each other!
Lilly: let's hope so...

Lynn goes back home and just sits in her room for the rest of the day, thinking about what it'll be like without Jake. Lilly and Miley call and call and call. But Lynn won't pick up. Lynn's computer beeps. She goes to check it out. It's an email.

From: Agent (don't remember his name lol)
To: Hannah and Danna Montana.

Body: Hey Danna and Hannah, there is going to be a movie shot with Jake Ryan, and they need some singer for the movie in some scenes. The company was wondering if you two could fly out for maybe a week or two to shoot these scenes. They will pay for everything. Well let me know ASAP

Your Agent!

Lynn gets a HUGE smile on her face.

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Ok I know it's super shot, but it is almost 1 AM here, and i am soooo tired. So I will maybe right more tomorrow

[~Miley~Rox~]

super super super (even though it was really short oh-well) write mmmmoooorrrreeee

[sophiecool]

YAY!!!!!! YOU WROTE A SEQUEL!!!! HOORAY!!!!!!!!!

*jumps all around room*

[sophiecool]

I subsribed to this! LOLZ! but now I have to go watch "13 Going On 30" with my big sis. (ugh I HATE that movie but I promised her I'd watch it so bye guys!)

[niiro_tatsu]

Lynn gets a HUGE smile on her face.

Part 9

Lynn picks up her phone and calls Miley.

Ring, Ring

Miley: Hello?
Lynn: Hey!
Miley; Hey Lynn, how are you doing?
Lynn: Well great now! Check your e-mail!
Miley: ... Ok, hold on.
Miley logs on and read the e-mail.
Miley: Oh my gosh! This is sooo cool! We will be on a movie!
Lynn rolls her eyes.
Lynn: Ummmm Miley, I was talking about the whole Jake Ryan thing.
Miley: OH! Yeah that's cool too! So you will get to see him!
Lynn: Do you think he knows?
Miley: Maybe...

They keep talking and the weekend ends and it is time for school.

Amber: Hey dork *looking at Lynn* dorkier *Lilly* dorkiest *Miley*
Miley: What do you want Amber.
Ashley: We just wanted to rub in Lynn's face that Jake will be gone for 4 months. 4 WHOLE MONTHS!
Lynn: Yeah but I am gonna see him when I go.... I mean, we will talk and e-mail everyday!
Amber: Right.....
Ashley: And the Montana Twins are gonna be on there!
Amber: aren't you worried he will cheat on you with one of them.
Ashley: I think he will cheat on her with Danna. She the prettier of the two.
Miley has a surprised look:o
Lynn: Wha... what, Hannah and Danna are twins. We-They look almost alike!
Amber: Yeah but they aren't identical, and Jake did like Danna
Amber and Ashley: MEMBER!?! Ooooo tsss.
Lilly: Whatever, but we gotta go to lunch now.

They go to lunch.

Miley: I can't believe she would say that!
Lynn: Don't take it personally, they were just trying to get me jealous.. of me.
Lilly: Huh?
Lynn: Nevermind!
Miley: But they pretty much said that you were prettier than me right in my face!
Lilly: Uh oh.
Lynn: So you are saying that people can't say I am prettier than you! Sure it was an insult to you, but a compliment to me! Someone-- that being Amber and Ashley-- said that I was prettier than the pop princess, Hannah Montana!
Miley: I didn't mean it like that!
Lynn: Sure!

Lynn storms out and decides not to eat, she isn't hungry anymore.

[~Miley~Rox~]

its soooooooooooooo goooooooooooooood write mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!111

[Fire-Chicken]

^Yeah, It's So Good!

[AllisonTame]

Kewl!!!!!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

whan r u gonna write more

[hannah_montana.boston]

oooh i like

[~Miley~Rox~]

please write more asap

[hannah_montana.boston]

more

[miji.hannahmontana]

more, pleasee

[~Miley~Rox~]

plz write more dont quit now

[mileycyrusisluv]

yea this is good

[hannah_montana.boston]

dont quit

[niiro_tatsu]

alright i haven't written in a while. i will try to make this chapter long.

Miley: I can't believe she would say that!
Lynn: Don't take it personally, they were just trying to get me jealous.. of me.
Lilly: Huh?
Lynn: Nevermind!
Miley: But they pretty much said that you were prettier than me right in my face!
Lilly: Uh oh.
Lynn: So you are saying that people can't say I am prettier than you! Sure it was an insult to you, but a compliment to me! Someone-- that being Amber and Ashley-- said that I was prettier than the pop princess, Hannah Montana!
Miley: I didn't mean it like that!
Lynn: Sure!

Lynn storms out and decides not to eat, she isn't hungry anymore.

Chapter 10

Lynn (mumbling to herself): Ugh, I can't believe Miley would say that! Miley, well Hannah is sooo pretty! Ughh! I am so MAD!!!

Lynn's phone rings

Lynn: Hello?
Jake: Hey!
Lynn: Jake!
Jake: How are ya?
Lynn: Pretty good. You?
Jake: Lonley...
Lynn: Awwww, well Hannah and Danna are gonna be in the movie!
Jake: Yeah, I just found out. That's why I am calling.
Lynn: So when are we coming?
Jake: Don't get mad...
Lynn: Ok...
Jake: 3 months...
Lynn: WHAT!?!?!
Jake: I said Don't get mad!
Lynn: Oh right sorry. Man, I am gonna miss you sooooo much though!
Jake: I miss you too

Bell rings.

Lynn: Oh Jake, gotta go the bell rang.
Jake: Alright bye. I love you.
Lynn smiles: I love you too.
Miley comes up to Lynn
Miley: Lynn?
Lynn: ....
Miley: I am really sorry, I didn't mean to insult you, or make you mad.
Lynn: I know. I was just caught up in the moment.
Miley: Oh, but I am really sorry. I want you to know that.
Lynn: Yeah I know. Oh I was just talking to Jake and he said we go in 3 months!
Miley: woah... that's a while. We'll be starting highschool then!
Lynn: I know...

They keep talking and school goes on. Just one more week till summer




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Last day of school

Oliver: I can't believe! Junior high is OVER!
Lilly: Let's just hope you don't have to go to summer school!
Miley: Haha! Yeah!
Lynn: Just think. NExt year, we'll be in highschool!
All: WOAH!

School goes on and its the end of the day.

Lilly: School's out for summer!
Lynn: School's out for ever!
Oliver: Hey isn't that a song?
Miley: DUH! It's called schools out stupid!
Oliver: Oh...
Lynn: 3 whole sun filled months of going to the beach! WHOO!
Lilly: Get a nice tan....
Miley: Flirt with Micheal....
Oliver: Meet hot babes!
Lilly: HEY!!!!
Oliver: Oh sorry...
They all laugh. They all change into their swim suits and head to the beach where they will be for the nesxt 3 months.

[sophiecool]

YAY!!!! FINALLY! You wrote more! Lolz! I've been waiting!!

[just_like_you_92]

good job!
♥

[niiro_tatsu]

yes i did, and i love your potter puppet pals sig! lol BOTHER

[mileycyrusisluv]

great, i hope they mousturize thier skins, they don't ned to be leather ladies!

[~Miley~Rox~]

really good

[niiro_tatsu]

They all laugh. They all change into their swim suits and head to the beach where they will be for the nesxt 3 months.

Part 11

2 months go by and they all have major tans. Miley and Micheal get really close in those 2 months, and Lilly and Oliver break up. They realized it wasn't working and it was just too wierd to be dating each other. They are still the best of friends, better than ever actually. Lynn is still missing Jake, but not depressed or anything.

Jake got 2 week break and he decided to go back home and surprise Lynn. He figured she'd be at the beach so he goes down there, but stops at Rico's first. He gets too vanilla shakes, one for him and the other for Lynn.

Just then and there some girl pops up and takes Lynn's drink.

Morgan(the girl): Hey there.
Jake: Umm hey... that was my girlfri--
Morgan: Girlfriend? Not anymore!
Jake: What?
Morgan: I am your new girlfriend!
Jake: Umm actually.
Morgan: Shhh (puts her finger to his lips)
They start flirting back and forth. Mainly Morgan though.

Miley: Awww man tanning is so dehydrating!
Lilly: You know it!
Lynn: Oh fine! It's mine turn to get the drinks.
Miley and Lilly: Thank you!

Lynn goes to Rico's and sees the back of someone head that looks familiar.
Lynn: Is that Jake? It looks a lot like him! What's he doing here? Maybe he was gonna surprise me. Awww--- Wait, who is he with! Oh no, not again!

Lynn walks up to Jake.
Lynn: What do you think you are doing?!?!
Jake: I was getting drinks.
Lynn: Yeah and start flirting with some random girl! Your new girlfriend huh?
Jake: No Lynn! It's not what it looks like!
Lynn: Whatever!----- Jackson 3 waters and one most disgusting drink you can make
Jackson: Uhhh ok!
Jackson hands her the 3 bottles of water and the one gross drink filled with everysingle drink possible they have.
Jackson: What are you gonna do with the gross one?
Lynn: This!
Lynn pours the drink that smells and looks disgusting on Jake's head.
Jake: :o
Lynn: We are DONE!
Lynn walks off.

Lynn: Here are your drinks. *she hands the bottles to Miley and Lilly* I am going home!
Lilly: what why! They cuties just got here!
Lynn: One word: Jake!
Miley stands up
Miley: Oh no, what'd he do, did he break up with you?
Lynn: No, I broke up with him!
Lilly: Why!
Lynn: He was totally flirting with some girl.
Lynn glares over at Jake and Jake is trying to clean himself off with out puking. Morgan just sits there drinking Lynn's shake.

[~Miley~Rox~]

yay you finally wrote more plz write more soon!

[niiro_tatsu]

Lynn glares over at Jake and Jake is trying to clean himself off with out puking. Morgan just sits there drinking Lynn's shake.

Part 12

Miley: Ok then, bye Lynn.
Lilly: Bye!
Lynn: Bye guys!
Miley: Oh! Will you still come to the barbeque?
Lynn: Oh yeah, I forgot. Are we still going to your house to get ready?
Lilly: OH YEAH!
Miley: You know what? LET'S GET READY NOW!
Lilly: SWEET!
Lynn: Cool!
Miley: I uhhh ummm have to go to the bathroom, be right back.
Lynn and Lilly: Ok

Miley goes up to Jake.

Miley: What do you think you were doing?
Jake: What!?!
Miley: Flirting with that girl!
Jake: I wasn't! She just came up and--
Miley: Whatever, I actually believe you, but Lynn doesn't. My dad is having a barbeque party at my house.
Jake: And....
Miley: Come you dork! Lynn will be there.
Jake: Ohhh, what time?
Miley: We eat at 6.
Jake: Ok, see ya then.

Miley goes backto Lilly and Lynn.

Miley: Ahhh refreshing...
Lynn and Lilly get Miley weird looks.
Miley: WHAT!?! Can't a girl enjoy peeing??!?! *really loud*
Everyone on the beach looks at her.
Miley: I mean, ummm seeing.
*sings* I can see clearly now the rain is gone!!!!
Lynn: You are soooo wierd sometimes.

They go to Miley's house. They all had gone shopping a week before to get their matching outfits for this special occasion.

Outfits:
Miley:
top in coral (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=tops&product%5Fid=2036047770&showBACK=OK#)
shorts (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=Shorts&product%5Fid=2035470366&Page=1)
swim suit top in white (http://store.delias.com/item.do?categoryID=1496&itemID=46768&sizeFilter=&colorFilter=&brandFilter=)
swim suit bottoms in white (http://store.delias.com/item.do?categoryID=1496&itemID=46765&sizeFilter=&colorFilter=&brandFilter=)

Lilly:
top in aqua (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=tops&product%5Fid=2036047770&showBACK=OK#)
shorts (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=Shorts&product%5Fid=2036232369&Page=1)
swim suit top in blue (http://store.delias.com/item.do?categoryID=1496&itemID=46768&sizeFilter=&colorFilter=&brandFilter=)
swim suit bottoms in blue (http://store.delias.com/item.do?categoryID=1496&itemID=46765&sizeFilter=&colorFilter=&brandFilter=)

Lynn:
top in red (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=tops&product%5Fid=2036047770&showBACK=OK#)
shorts (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=Shorts&product%5Fid=2035708371&Page=1#)
swim suit top in green (http://store.delias.com/item.do?categoryID=1496&itemID=46768&sizeFilter=&colorFilter=&brandFilter=)
swim suit bottoms in green (http://store.delias.com/item.do?categoryID=1496&itemID=46765&sizeFilter=&colorFilter=&brandFilter=)

They get dressed and put the waterproof make up on and the doorbell rings.

They go to get the door.

Miley opens the door
Oliver: HEY!
ALL: OLIVER!!!
Oliver: Smokin' Oaken is here!
The girls roll their eyes.
Oliver: Woah, matching outfits!
Lynn: Yup!
Lilly: Like 'em?
Oliver: Well I am a guy, so i can't say "Ohmahgawd I love them!" But they are nice.
Miley: Thank you!

[SmileyMiley11]

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

yeah the party is going to be very interesting!

[~Miley~Rox~]

how interesting i want to know plz post more

[sar522]

that is great!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley opens the door
Oliver: HEY!
ALL: OLIVER!!!
Oliver: Smokin' Oaken is here!
The girls roll their eyes.
Oliver: Woah, matching outfits!
Lynn: Yup!
Lilly: Like 'em?
Oliver: Well I am a guy, so i can't say "Ohmahgawd I love them!" But they are nice.
Miley: Thank you!

Part 13

The four of them go in the backyard to help set up for the party. They get all the chair and tables together.

Oliver: Mmmm. It smells good!
Oliver walks over the the grill and starts to grab a rib.
Robby Ray (RR) whacks his hand with the spatula
RR: Hey! They aren't done yet!
Oliver: Not even one!
RR: NO!
Oliver: Sheesh, sorry Mr. Stewart.

The doorbell rings.

Miley: Hey Lynn, can you get that?
Lynn: Yeah sure.

Lynn goes to the door

Jake: Hey.
Lynn: what are you doing here!
Jake: I am here for the party.
Lynn: Who invited you?
Miley walks up
Miley: I did, and Hey Jake. C'mon in!
Jake comes in
Jake: Thanks.
Miley grabs Lynn
Miley: I invited him because I know you still like him.
Lynn: I do, but he was flirting!
Jake: Lynn, can we talk?
Lynn: No..... *Miley gives her the look* ok fine.
Jake: I wasn't flirting with her!
Lynn: I saw you!
Jake: She was just a fan!
Lynn: So I am gonna let you flirt with all your fans!?!
Jake: No! I wasn't flirting, I was just being nice!
Lynn: REAL nice, so you buy all your fans shakes.
Jake: It was for you, I was gonna surpirse you! But then she just came up and-
RR: Hey! Foods ready!
Lynn: Just give us a minute!
RR: Alright!
Lynn: Look Jake. I still love you!
Jake: really?
Lynn: Yeah...
Jake: So Lynn, will you be my girlfriend?
Lynn: No...
Jake: But you said-
Lynn: I know. But I don't want you to think you can go flirt with a girl, we will get in a fight break up, then expect us to get back together.
Jake: Well won't that happen?
Lynn: EXACTLY! You think it will always happen, so you can do whatever and I will still get back with you!
Jake: Oh...
Lynn: So just give me like a day or two.
Jake: But that's sooo long!
Lynn: You have waited 2 months, I think you can wait 2 days.

[MileyHannahFan]

cool!!!!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

Man you read them like the second i post!

[niiro_tatsu]

Just a FYI I might post the next one tomorrow

[hannah_montana.boston]

when 2day imm soo bored and ur ff is the only one still rinnin dat i like*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(* no offence to others but you totally havent posted in like 4eva like me lol i call my self slow)

[niiro_tatsu]

Lynn: So just give me like a day or two.
Jake: But that's sooo long!
Lynn: You have waited 2 months, I think you can wait 2 days.

Part 14

Oliver: HEY! LOVERS! WE ARE HUNGRY!
Lynn: Ok ok, we are coming!

Lynn and Jake go outside and all through the meal Jake was starring at Lynn.

After dinner:

Miley: Let's go swimming now!
Lilly: Yeah!
Lynn: Ok, lets go.

They go to the pool and Miley, Lynn, and Lilly take off their tops and short (they had their swim suits underneath) and Jake and Oliver take off their shirts (wearing swimming trunks as shorts)

Lynn was putting on her sunscreen when Jake picked her up and was trying to throw her in the pool.

Lynn: No! Jake, no!!! Put me down! (in playful way)
Jake: Oh! Ok *starts to throw her in the pool, but Lynn grabs him and even though she goes in, he goes in with her*
Lynn: JAKE!
Jake: Lynn, now I am all wet!
Lynn: Well no duh its a pool

Miley: Man, they still love each other.
Oliver: I know!
Lilly; They should just get back toge-ohh look at that!

*Jake leans in for a kiss from Lynn, but Lynn turns away
and gets out of the pool*

Jake sighs realizing that he will have to wait those couple days Lynn was talking about.

Miley: O c'mon Lynn! Just get back with him!
Lilly: Yeah, you know you want to!
Oliver: Yeah like OMAGAWD he is like sooo hot! And sexy, and look at his abs! (then he walks off to cannon ball into the pool)
Lynn cracks up laughing
Lynn: No, I am gonna make him wait.
Lilly: Uhhh... WHY?!?!
Lynn: To make him realize that I am the girl he really want, and not some stupid fan!
Miley: Ohh, smart one!
Lynn: I know!
Lilly: NOW LETS GO SWIMMING!
Miley: WHOO!

They all swim for about an hour, playing games, and such.

They get out, dry off and the girls sit in the sun for a while.

Jake: Man...
Oliver: What?
Jake: She wouldn't let me kiss her! I haven't kissed those lips in 2 months!
Oliver: I never knew Jake had a mushy side.
Jake: Oh shut up! I just really missed her.
Oliver: Then just go tell her!
Jake: She won't..

Miley: Hey! Wanna play Hide N Go Seek. But whoever is it has to look for the people hiding with their eyes closed.
Jake: Sounds fun, but Oliver is it!
Oliver: WHAT!

They get set up to play the game

RR: Miles, get some clothes on! I don't want the neighbors thinking my daughter runs around in a bikini!
Miley: Ok dad....
Lilly: Guess that means us too?
Lynn: Yeah...

Miley and Lilly put their outfits back on and Lynn goes and steals Jake's shirt.

Jake: Hey, thats mine!
Lynn: Well I am gonna wear it!
Jake: I would prefer you wouldn't
Lynn: Ha! Of course you would!

Lynn puts on his shirt, then her shorts and now they are officially ready to play.

[hannah_montana.boston]

aww a love game of follow lynn how cute-more!!!!!!

[niiro_tatsu]

This fan fic isn't really popular. I fit 13 chapters in 9 pages. I need 4 more comments from 4 different poeple to post the next chapter

[niiro_tatsu]

esh, man no one commented

[hannah_montana.boston]

eh..... i want ,more more moreeeeeeeee if you ever deside to close this send me the end ok? cause i love this fanfic

[niiro_tatsu]

ok, i will write this one just for you. since no one else reads it...

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley and Lilly put their outfits back on and Lynn goes and steals Jake's shirt.

Jake: Hey, thats mine!
Lynn: Well I am gonna wear it!
Jake: I would prefer you wouldn't
Lynn: Ha! Of course you would!

Lynn puts on his shirt, then her shorts and now they are officially ready to play.

Part 15

They play hide and seek for about 30 min and it is finally Lynn's turns to seek.

She spins around and counts to 30 then says Ready Your not, here I come!

She can't find anyone and is walking around trying not to bump into anything.... or fall into the pool. She hears some shuffling, and hears someone coming to her.

Lynn: Who is that?

The person says nothing, and goes up to Lynn. He holds her head gently and gently kisses those soft lips he had missed for what seemed like forever.

Lynn opened her eyes

Lynn: *groans* Jaaaaaa-aaaaaake....
Miley, Lilly, and Oliver all cheer.
Lilly: Finally!
Lynn: You guys are soooo dead!----Jake, we need to talk *grabs his hand and takes him to the table and they sit down*

Lynn: Jake!
Jake: What?
Lynn: Why'd you do that?
Jake: I missed you... I really did!
Lynn: You know I missed you too.
Jake: So please just get back with me!
Lynn: I can't...
Jake: Why not you said-- oh its another guy isn't it.
Jake starts to get up and leave.
Lynn: No, NO! Jake. You are the only guy in my life!
Oliver *in the background*: HEY!
Lynn: Your a friend Oliver, and guys can you leave us alone. I really need to talk to Jake.. in private.
Jake sits back down.
Jake: I am? Really?
Lynn: Yeah, I just want to wait awhile so you know you can't always expect me to get back with me.
Jake: But there is no other girl in my life but you.
Miley and Lilly: HEY!
Jake: You guys are friends!
Lynn: Miley, Lilly!
Miley: Sorry...
Lilly: Yeah
Miley and Lilly leave.
Lynn: But still Jake, just wait. 2 days.
Jake: TWO!!!!
Lynn: Oh come on!
Jake: One?
Lynn: No...
Jake: Please...
Lynn: Ok fine.
They both get up and get each other the "friends who know they like each other, but aren't going to get together till the next day" hug.

Miley: Lynn! Jake! C'mon!
Lynn: We are coming!

Lynn and Jake go and Oliver and Jake leave. Lynn and Lilly are going to sleep over. They watch movies, Hannah concerts and some mini Danna concerts.

Miley; Lynn, you were really good!
Lilly: Yeah! You were AWESOME!
Lynn: Oh whatever.
Miley: Let's get out the kareoke machine!
Lilly: OK!
Lynn: Oh! I started thinking of a song during the party., Hannah could use it.
Miley: Cool, lets hear it
Lynn: I hope I can remember it!

((Just pretend Lynn write Nobody's Perfect))

Lynn sings just the first verse and chorus.

Miley: Woah! That was awesome!
Lilly: Yeah, that was sooo good!
Lynn: Thanks, I was kinda thinking of Jake and the situation.
Miley: Well it fits.

Miley's dad comes in
RR: Girls, no staying up to late!
Miley: Ok dad!

He leaves

Lilly: We are still gonna stay up late though
Miley: Of course!
Lynn: Don't we always! Hey Miley, what happend with Micheal?
Miley: Oh, we don't spend any more time together anymore. So I am gonna break up with him, tomorrow actually.
Lilly: are you serious!
Miley; Dead serious!

They hear a hitting noise.

Lynn: What is that?
Miley: I dunno.
Lilly: I am scared.

Lilly grabs her very soft pillow.
Lynn: Oh like that'll stop 'em!
Lilly: Better than what you got!
Lynn: My fists?!?! HA HA!
Miley: Shh, what's is that.

Miley goes to her window.

Miley: Hahaha!
Lilly: What?
Miley: Lynn, your lover's here.
Lynn groans: What is he up to now?

[hannah_montana.boston]

hahahahahahahahahahaha i bet he is spying to see wat she likes and all dat jazzzzzz

[niiro_tatsu]

Ok I am sorry but I dont like how this fan fic isnt very popular.

[hannah_montana.boston]

then at least pm me the end or post the end then close it but .... if ou do end it it better be good!!!!!!!!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo DO NOT STOP! i love this fan fic

[niiro_tatsu]

oh wow, 2 people! if you guys can get people to fill up this page (page 10) with comments, from ALL different people. I will write the next chapter hoping it will be more popular

[~Miley~Rox~]

ok i will

[~Miley~Rox~]

dont stop i ll find a way to let ppl read
this

[Miley Cryus fan1]

i love it dont stop this is my favorite fanfic

[Emma27]

This is the BEST! dont stop! I luv it! lol

[niiro_tatsu]

ok but not to be rude, but if you guys really liked it, why didnt you guys comment? (not to be rude once again)

[~Miley~Rox~]

well maybe they forgot about it and the saw it on the new posts and decided to read it again and why cant u just be happy that people like it?

[niiro_tatsu]

well i like that they like it, but not many people read it. and i write it for what, 2 people....

but i will write maybe tonight

[hannah_montana.boston]

o yay yay yip yip

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley goes to her window.

Miley: Hahaha!
Lilly: What?
Miley: Lynn, your lover's here.
Lynn groans: What is he up to now?

Part 16

Lynn goes to window and opens it up.
Lynn: Jake! What are you doing here!
Jake: Will you be my girlfriend now?
Lynn: No! I said tomorrow!
Jake: But it is! It is *checks his phone clock* 12:03!
Lynn: Jake!
Jake: what! You said!

Miley: C'mon Lynn!

Lynn: Hold on! ---- Jake! I didn't mean at midnight
Jake: But...
Lynn: I know, but like in the afternoon

Lilly: Ly-innnnnn

Lynn: Coming!
Jake: Ok, fine you promise!
Lynn: Yes... just call me
Jake: at what time?

Miley: Hurry up Lynn!

Lynn: I am coming, I'm coming! --- I dunno...
Jake: I'll call you at 9 in the morning, ok?
Lynn: Alright bye.

Miley: Geeze, finally!
Lilly: You guys took forever!
Lynn: Sorry...

So they go back and watch movies and eventually fall asleep.



~I know short chapter but if anyone can tell me where that scene is from (it is very similar if you have ever read the story i am talking about, or seen the movie) So if you guess it, and you have to say what scene, I will write another chapter ASAP

[hannah_montana.boston]

mannnnnnnnn idk anything but that u rock

[niiro_tatsu]

lol. it is totally the same if you have read it or seen it before

[~Miley~Rox~]

well i like that they like it, but not many people read it. and i write it for what, 2 people....

no it will be 4 people! so post more!

[~Miley~Rox~]

so is it from a book? and any way idk what book it would be nobody will so maybe u should just post the next chapter like now

[niiro_tatsu]

lol, i dont wanna give it away, but it can come in book form but its a play

oh and i wont post next chapter till someone guesses it right

[Miley Cryus fan1]

is it Romeo and juliet?

[niiro_tatsu]

is it Romeo and juliet?DING DING DING WE HAVE A WINNER!!!

you see the scene in the balcony scene. romeo and juliet just met at a party and had love at first site. around midnight romeo goes to the capulet mansion (juliet's mansion) and talks to her. they end up "wooing" each other.(which is falling in love even more) the whole time they are talking juliet's nurse is calling from her room for juliet to come in and sleep. romeo asks juliet to marry him, she says yes and she asks when. romeo says he will send her a message at 9 in the morning.

see the similarities?

the party just finished
jake comes at midnight
miley and lilly are calling lynn (like the nurse)
and jake will call at 9

[Miley Cryus fan1]

yay i win!!!! post more soon!!!!!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

yay some one got it right now plz post more

[niiro_tatsu]

hold on, i need some ideas.

should jake and lynn break up?
should lynn start being danna again?

[~Miley~Rox~]

for the first one maybe
for the 2nd yes!

[v.a.h.fan]

More i just red the WHOLE story it rox!

[miley rocks]

i love it i jut read the 1st and 2nd and its awesome
now bout ur ques. i dont think they should break up
and the 2nd i dunno
and u should involve michael and miley i bit more

[niiro_tatsu]

no miley and micheal are gonna break up. i have a plan. ok woah i got a ton comments here. i am writing NOW!

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley: Geeze, finally!
Lilly: You guys took forever!
Lynn: Sorry...

So they go back and watch movies and eventually fall asleep.

Part 17

They are all sleeping and wake up to a phone ringing

*Ring, ring, ring, ring!!!!*

Lilly: 5 more minutes daddy!
Miley: Mmm, ugh. Eww no Rico! STOP!!

Lynn bolts up

Lynn: Wake up!

Miley and Lilly wake up.
Lilly: What... your phone!
Lynn: Oh! *she gets her phone and sees that its Jake, she fixes her hair and clears her throat*

Lynn: Hello, this is Lynn!
Jake: Hey!
Lynn: Oh hey Jake!
Jake: Where you sleeping, sorry if I woke you.
Lynn: Oh no, we were awake!
Jake: Great, look I was wondering if you wanted to go with me to the premier for "Meet the Robinsons"?
Lynn: Oh yeah that'd be--- oh no...
Jake: Well me and Miley were gonna go you know as the Montana twins..

Miley: You can go with him I got Lola!
Lilly: I can come?
Miley: Do you ever not?

Jake: Oh...
Lynn: No wait, I can go. Miley says I can.
Jake: That's great! Sooo umm I will pick you up at around..... noon?
Lynn: Sounds great!
Jake: Ok bye.
Lynn: Bye Jake...

Miley: Sooooo
Lynn: I am going out with Jake tonight WHOO!
Lilly: Cool! I am so glad you too are staying together!
Miley: Yeah, I was hoping though you would go as Danna.
Lynn: why?
Miley: I know you miss being famous and you know photoshoots, concerts, and free stuff!
Lynn: No I don't *lying*
Miley: Oh c'mon i can tell!
Lynn: Ok, I kinda do.... But I didn't really care since most of the summer I was grieving over Jake.
Lilly: But not anymore, he is back!
Lynn: Until he leaves again....
Miley: But he is still your boyfriend-- Oh that reminds me, I gotta break up with Micheal.
Lilly: Why?
Miley: We never spend any time together.
Lynn: Once you do, I got the perfect guy to hook you up with.

[miley rocks]

omg i think that guy is oliver
by the way its still great

[niiro_tatsu]

nope its not oliver. guess. no one is never gonna get it!

[miley rocks]

i guess so {lol}

[v.a.h.fan]

More!!!!

[~Miley~Rox~]

great more more more

[mileycyrusfan618]

omg. i just read the whole thing and i loved it!
write more pleaseee.

[hannah_montana.boston]

ooo romeo and julet hahahahahahhaha i didnt read that and im kinda slow sooooooooo but more that was really good

[Miley98]

Puleez write more? I read the 1st chapter but I had to go, I 4got bout it so I came again!

[miley rocks]

right
now

[niiro_tatsu]

Miley: But he is still your boyfriend-- Oh that reminds me, I gotta break up with Micheal.
Lilly: Why?
Miley: We never spend any time together.
Lynn: Once you do, I got the perfect guy to hook you up with.

Part 18

*Ding dong*
Miley: I'LL GET IT!!!
Jake: Hey is Lynn still here, or did she go home?
Lynn: Right here!
Jake: Woah, you look nice.
Lynn: Thanks you look nice yourself.
Jake: ready to go?
Lynn: You bet *grabs a big bag*
Jake: What's that for?
Lynn: Oh well the Montana Twin's agent assigned an interview with Danna and some lady.
Jake: ok..
Lynn: So I am still going with you, but once I walk the carpet with you, I walk with Hannah? Get it?
Jake: Oh ok!
Lynn: Is that ok?
Jake: yeah it's fine.

So they get to the Meet the Robinsons premier and Jake and Lynn walked the carpet, Lynn hurries to a bathroom and changes into Danna. She goes outside and meets Hannah there.

Hannah: Danna!
Danna: Ok I am here

Hannah and Danna do the short interview and continue the carpet

Hannah: I broke up with Micheal, and so who is the guy you want to hook me up with.
Danna: Well he is right..... there.
Hannah: Who?
Danna: You know the Jonas Brothers right?
Hannah: Oh yeah i have heard of them, but never met them.
Danna: Well I have, and I think you and Nick should hook up.
Hannah: What? I dont even know him!
Danna: I'll introduce you.

Danna leads Hannah to where the JB are

Nick: Hey Danna!
Danna: Hey Nick, Joe, Kevin!
Joe: How are you?
Danna: Great, you guys?
All: AWESOME!
Danna: You know Hannah Montana right?
Nick: Of course!
Danna: Well this is her. JB, Hannah. Hannah, JB
Hannah: Nice to meet you guys.
Nick: Soo Hannah, got a boyfriend?
Everyone: Hahahaha!
Hannah: Actually no.
Nick: cool.

Nick and Hannah walk off talking and Danna is still talking to Joe and Kevin. They were all hugging because they are all great friends, joking around and stuff. Lynn starting to realize that she liked someone too, and it wasn't Jake...

[niiro_tatsu]

the next chapter will end this sequel, but i will make another sequel titled "Danna Returns" which is just like the title, Lynn becomes Danna again.

[v.a.h.fan]

Cool^

[~Miley~Rox~]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee eeee
mmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee eeeeee
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeee ee

[Miley98]

thats awesome, Jenny!

[miley rocks]

great cant wait

[niiro_tatsu]

Nick and Hannah walk off talking and Danna is still talking to Joe and Kevin. They were all hugging because they are all great friends, joking around and stuff. Lynn starting to realize that she liked someone too, and it wasn't Jake...

Part 19

*Next day at the beach*

Miley: Oh my god! Lynn!
Lynn: What, what, Miley, WHAT?
LIlly: TELL ME WHAT IS GOING ON!
Miley: God Lilly, calm down. But Lynn thanks so much, Nick is such a cutie and ....
Lynn: What?
Lilly: And what what :what?
Miley: I am going out with him Friday night!
Lynn: But as Hannah?
Miley: Oh sweet niblits.
LIlily: You didn't think of that did you?
Miley: No, but I am gonna have to, but if we get really close. I'll tell him.

Amber: Look Ashley *shows a magazine*
Ashley: Ohmahgawd, Hannah is with Joe Jonas?
Amber: He is sooo hawt!

Miley: You're with Joe?
Lynn: What, no!
Lilly: Joe is so hot!
Lynn: HEY!
Miley: So you like him?
Lynn: I dunno...

Jake: Lynn?
Lynn: Hey Jake!
Jake: Can we talk?
Lynn: Sure...
(Lynn well knows Jake found out about Joe)
Jake: What is this with you and Joe?
Lynn: What, nothing!
Jake: Oh c'mon! Do you like him?
Lynn: No! Well...
Jake: Well what?
Lynn: *gets angry* Well Jake, you have been gone the whole summer. THE WHOLE SUMMER! And I stayed here, and stayed faithful, and didn't have a boyfriend.
Jake: But I--
Lynn: I know its your job, but you just left me here. You didn't call that often!
Jake: I am sorry Lynn. BUt you know I love you.
Lynn: I know!
Jake: So who are you gonna choose? Me or Joe?



THE END!

I will make a seqeul but only if I get TONS of comments on this last part. The next sequel with be called "Danna returns" I know this one was after Danna, but some people wanted her back, and so did I! lol Sooo COMMENT!

EDIT: Post who you want Lynn to be with

[mileycyrusfan618]

this is so awesome jenny!
i loved the whole thing!
i hope you make a sequel!

[niiro_tatsu]

Also post who you want Lynn to be with!

[miley rocks]

that was great cant wait 4 the sequel
and i want lynn n jake back 2gether

[niiro_tatsu]

ok we got Jake - 1; Joe - 0

[miley rocks]

^lol

[hannah_montana.boston]

joe 2 get jake jelous(sp)

[mileycyrusfan618]

i want lynn to be with um....jake

[smileyface93]

i want lynn to be with jake.

[niiro_tatsu]

Joe 2; Jake 3 (I personally want Joe, lol)

[~Miley~Rox~]

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[~Miley~Rox~]

joe .................................................. .....and lilly should be with kevin

[niiro_tatsu]

lol i will make the ages different then. cause like Oliver, Miley, Lilly, Lynn are all like what 15. So Nick is 15, Joe is 16, Kevin can be 17

[niiro_tatsu]

OK I just made the sequel
When Danna Returns (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=869789#post869789)

[HannahMontanaX3]

wait in one chapter miley was in her sleep saying: Mmm, ugh. Eww no Rico! STOP!!

All I have to say is WHAT THE CRAP?!? WTF?!? HOLY CURD MUFFINS?!? What was her dream anyway?

[niiro_tatsu]

wait in one chapter miley was in her sleep saying: Mmm, ugh. Eww no Rico! STOP!!

All I have to say is WHAT THE CRAP?!? WTF?!? HOLY CURD MUFFINS?!? What was her dream anyway?i dont know exactly lol but she is dreaming a good dream i guess, so she is saying "mmm" then rico comes in so she goes "Ugh" then i guess rico maybe is trying ot kiss her or something lol so she says "eww no rico stop!"