Love Confusion Fanfiction By Jessicastar...

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People Bios:
Katie:
smart, Lizzie's friend, blond short hair, 7th grader likes Mark.
Mark: Hank's friend, plays football, smart,7th grader black hair, brown eyes.
Nina: Hates Lizzie,evil has blond long hair 7th grader
Barbra (lizzies mom)
Main characters:
Hank: likes Lizzie, has short brown hair 7th grader, football character.
Bert:Hates Hank, seeks revenge on him, uses , 9th grader.
Lizzie:smart, pretty,tough,7th grader likes Hank later in the story brown long hair, lightbrown eyes
There may be some characters that are left out of the bio list, but they're not that important.

Setting: In The Hallway
Lizzie: *drinking water*
?: *walks up to Lizzie* "Lizzie, I hate to brake up your little brake, but uh..." *grabs Lizzie and goes with her into the janiters closet* "I know you had your little break up with Neil, so I'll make you a deal."
Lizzie:"Uh, what?"
?:"Well, if you help me with one little thing, I will find someone for you..."
Lizzie: "Yes? What is the favor? *mumbles* It better not be stupid..."
?:"What?" *said with anger*
Lizzie:"Nothing..now what is that favor?"
?:"Help me destroy HANK!"

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Sorry if it's too short.

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Can someone guess who the ? person is? Please?

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hi Jessicastar! i got your PM. Cool! i think the ? person is....Bert.

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hi Jessicastar! i got your PM. Cool! i think the ? person is....Bert.

Yeah, I know, sooooo obvious!:D

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Setting: In the closet still
Lizzie:"WHAT? Noway! No deal!"
Bert:"Fine. Then you'll bathe in pudding at lunch next period!"
Lizzie:"Ok, fine, I will do it! Sheesh, you nineth graders can be pretty fisty sometimes! (and evil)!"
Bert:"Thanks. Now, here's what I want you to do: I want you to ask him out, and if he says yes, that's when the plan starts. You take the date thing slowly, then I'll tell you the new plans! Haha! (evil laugh)!"
Lizzie:"Oh my gosh! Now way, no no no way!"
Bert:"Would you rather be the laughing stock of the whole school at lunch?"
Lizzie: "No ser! I will get on the double of that ser!"
Bert:"Ok, good, now on the double ya lil maget!"
Lizzie: "Ok, ok! Sheesh!"

Setting:Next Period at Lunch
Hank: *sitting at a lunch table*
Lizzie: *walks to Hanks table and sits next to him*
Hank: "Lizzie?"
Lizzie:"Oh, Hank, I had no complete idea you were sitting here! I am soooo sorry, want me to move?"
Hank:"Um...no..no...not at all, it's fine if you sit next to me."
Lizzie:"So....uh..what are you doing next Saterday?"
Hank:"Uh...nothing..you?"
Lizzie: "Let me check my calender" *looks away* *looks back at Hank* "No, I'm free!"
Hank:"So...is that a date?"
Lizzie: "Yes, meet me at six flags, not far from where you live, right?"
Hank:"No.."
Mark: *wispers* "You totally scored a date with Liz!"
Hank:*wispers back* "I know..."

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MORE!!! i wanna noe what happens! srry, but i have to get off line. My stomach is growling! see you tonight

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MORE!!! i wanna noe what happens! srry, but i have to get off line. My stomach is growling! see you tonight

Kay kay. lol!:lol: :D :D :) :D

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Setting:At Six Flags
Lizzie: *waiting for Hank*
Hank:*sees Lizzie*
Lizzie:"Oh, hey Hank. One of my friends payed for everything...soo...uh...want to go on the heart ride?"
Hank:"Uh...um..sure?"
Lizzie: *grabs Hank* "Ok, let's go!" *Hank and Lizzie get on a heart seat*
Hank:"Woa...."
Lizzie:"Wow...it's pretty mushey in here...I'm not one of those mushey-gushey girls..."
Hank:"Well, you did put us on this ride..."
Lizzie:"Oh...right...so Hank..tell me what you like to do...like hobbies or something?"
Hank:"I draw when I'm not playing in the football team...I deal with my big brother because he trains me like crazy...I babysit..don't tell anyone...I do some balleyball, also don't tell anyone, and I like to help out around the school..."
Lizzie:"Woa...that's..that's..a lot."
Hank:"Yeah, I know, so...what do you like to do?"
Lizzie:"I cook, swim, sing, play basket ball, dance, and also play a little football now and then while no one's looking..don't tell anyone that, kay?"
Hank:"Uh...Kay!"
Lizzie:"It's getting less mushier in here..."
Hank:"Yeah...."
*the ride gets super fast and they go down a water fall*
Hank and Lizzie: "Woa! That was fun!" *both blush*
Lizzie:"That was...totally...uh...unexpected..."
Hank:"Yeah..."
When their ride is done, they go to the rollercoasters where ___and her friend____were standing.

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People, read, comment, or I'll never write more! (don't say it stinks though, b/c I know it doesn't!)

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im back! write more! ITS AWESOME!

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Setting:At the Rollercoaster
When their ride was done, they went to the rollercoasters where Nina and her friend Kat were standing.
Kat:"Is it just me, or is that Lizzie dating Hank?"
Nina:"WHAT? Oh, she is soooo going to get it when she gets to school!"
Kat and Nina both walk away.
Hank: "I don't want to get on the rollercoasters...do you?"
Lizzie:"Uhh...no..."
Hank:"Uh, I'm going to go win you a prize, I'll be right back." *walks to the prize stand*
Bert: *walks up behind Lizzie and grabs her*
Lizzie:"Knock it off Bert! Why couldn't you just wisper or something?"
Bert:"I want you two to hurry it up! I want to carry on with my plans! So, go and do your magic!" *pushes her towards the prize stand*
Lizzie:"Hank, is that for me?
Hank:"Yeah..."
Lizzie:"Oh, thankyou!" *hugs Hank*
Hank:"Oh, it was nothing!" *hugs her back*
Lizzie:"So..so...uh..Hank..wanna do this again sometime?"
Hank:"Sure..." *Hank and her go to an Italian resterant and eat*

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Yeah. Ok, does anyone want me 2 write more?

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i do! COME OM ppl!

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Setting: First Period At School On Monday (BTW Their school is called Scholar High/Middle School, and They Live in Sacromento CA)
Kat:"Oh, hey, there's Lizzie now!"
Nina:"Oh, I see her!"
Lizzie walks bye her.
Then, Nina trips her.
Lizzie:"Nina!!!Urrrrr! You just made a big mistake!"
Nina:"Whatever." *walks off*
Lizzie:*gets herself up* "Oh, I am soooo gonna get-"
Bert:"We have other things to worry about, let's go!" *takes her into the Janiters closet*
Lizzie:"Oh, what now! Can't we do this at free period, which is, like, in the second period!"
Bert:"Fine."
Lizzie:"Ok, yeah, whatever." Lizzie pushes her way out of the closet and gets to class.
At free period, Lizzie gets out of class, and goes into the janiters closet.
Bert:"Now, here's my plans." Bert unrolls a paper that almost looks like a map. But it had a picture of a bowl with footballs hooked to a wall, and a them falling on Hank in gym class.
Bert:"My plan is perfect! Perfect, perfect, perfect!"
Lizzie:"Ugh!" Lizzie slaps herself on the head.
Bert:"You are a good little actress! I will find someone that's your type! But for now, you are still my servant! You work for me now!"
Lizzie:"WHAT!"
Bert:"That's right. You always work for me."

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Bert that jerk! nice story!

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Bert that jerk! nice story!
I know! I don't like the look of this!

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me either!

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me either!
So...who wants me to write more!:D :) :D

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Lizzie: "Ok, I don't know who you think you you are, but, you do not tell Lizzie NickerBonsnicker Micksoner Natalie Carson what to do!"
Bert:"Hmmm..maybe I can..."
Lizzie:"Ok, like, what do you mean?"
Bert: Bert pulls down some pictures of her playing football.
Lizzie:"Oh, you wouldn't!!!"
Bert:"Oh, I would!"
Lizzie:"Ho-How did you get those?"
Bert:"Saw ya doin it after school, so I thought I'd take 'em."
Lizzie:"Ok, fine! Whatever-just...just...can I get to class now? You get soooo annoying!"
Bert:"Ok, ba-bye! Go away tuits!"
Lizzie:"Ok, fine, what-ever!" Lizzie walks to class resentfully.
Katie:"So, Lizzie, how did your date go?"
Lizzie:Lizzie gazes off into deep space thinking about Hank.
Katie: Katie snaps her fingers in Lizzie's face.
Lizzie:"Oh....my date..yeah, it was wonderful....only one problem!"
Katie:"Ok....what is the-"
The teacher Mr. Balts: "If you girls don't wanna fail this class, I suggest you end ya little chit-chat!"
Katie and Lizzie:"Ok!"
Katie:*wispers*"Tell me after school, okay, at your house?"
Lizzie:*wispers* "Okay."

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Bert! that....that.....monster! And Lizzie's full name is hilarious!

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Bert! that....that.....monster! And Lizzie's full name is hilarious!
Yeah. She's a pretty tough girl.

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Lolz^^

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Setting: At Lizzie's House
Katie:"So, what is that problem?"
Lizzie:"I uh..am working for Bert....."
Katie:"WHAT! That's like...uh...not good! He's the most meanest guy in school, and he hates Hank!"
Lizzie:"I know, and at first, I only did it to get another guy because of..you know...but now I can't stop thinking about Hank...I used to not be so...you know...liking him?"
Katie:"Wow..."
Lizzie:"Yeah, and he said I work for him, or else..."
Katie:"Or what?"
Lizzie:"Or else he'll show the whole school pictures of my playing football!"
Katie:"Woa, you...Hahahahahhaha! You play football?"
Lizzie:"Yeah..."
Katie:"Oh my gosh! This is soooooo not good!"
Lizzie:"Ya think?"

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Setting: At School.
Lizzie:"Ok, so Katie, what am I going to do? This is sooooo bad!"
Katie:"Not now, I'm taking a nap." Katie starts to snore.
Lizzie:"Katie, Kaaaaaatie? Hello? You don't usually fall asleep in art class....hello? Can YOU HEAR ME?"
Lizzie:"Oh..no...everyone must of..but Bert didn't...how'd he? Oh my gosh!" Lizzie runs out of the class to go find Hank. When she walks into the gym, she sees Hank jumping rope. Then she sees the bowl of very heavy large footballs hanging. Then, as it begins to fall............
Lizzie:"NO!" She pushes Hank and the balls fall onto her.
Hank:"Lizzie?" Hank disappears.
Lizzie opens her eyes, and sees two people dressed in black, but couldn't tell who they were. The other minute, she closed her eyes and faints.
?????????????

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Lizzie wakes up and finds herself in a net bag hanging fortey-feet in a basement that looked like a villians layer.
Bert:"So, ya thought you could break our little deal and rescue your boyfriend? Well you thought wrong!"
Lizzie:"Well, I don't...don't care what you say...I still think this is...I got nothin!"
Bert:"Well, that's good, because your part of my plan!"
Hank: He pushes Bert aside. "Lizzie? Bert, you get her down here...or I'll...I'll..."
Bert:"Or you'll what? Throw footballs at me?"
Hank:"I might..."
Bert:"There is one thing you can do..."
Hank:"What?"
Bert:"Go off of that little football team and do chess."
Hank:"No, I love football!"
Bert:"Then the girl goes."
Hank:"Wait, I'll give up football....."
Bert:"Ok..."
Hank:"So...you won't do anything to her...?"
Bert:"WRONG! I will! Anything to make you unhappy! Hahahaha!" Bert pulls a switch, and Lizzie falls.
Lizzie:"AhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhAhhhhhhh!"

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Lizzie:"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Lizzie sees a ladder up next to her while she was falling, so she stopped screaming, and swinged over the the ladder. She ripped the net bag, and started climbing up the ladder.
Hank:"BERT! YOU Jerk!" Hank pushes Bert, forgetting Bert was a super strong nineth grader.
Bert:"You shouldn't have just done that...." Bert pushes Hank, and then Hank starts running downstairs to see if Lizzie was ok. Bert chased after him.
When Hank finally reached downstairs, Lizzie saw him.
Lizzie:"Hank, over here! Hurry!"
Hank quickly runs over to her, and starts for the ladder.
Bert:"Get back here you little seventh grader magets!"
Lizzie:"Up here!" She grabs his his hand.
Hank:"Thanks."
Lizzie:"Your welcome."
Lizzie and Hank got out of the basement and walked back to school.

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Lizzie:"Wow, everyone's still asleep from that food Bert toxinated with that stuff that makes people sleepy...benidril..whatever that thing's called."
Hank:"Yeah..."
Katie wakes up, and so does everyone else.
Katie:"Lizzie, Hank what happened?"
Hank & Lizzie: "Nothing!"
Katie:"If you say so."
____:"Lizzie, where do you think you are? Hmm?"
Lizzie:"Ok, who's-"
_____grabs Lizzie.
Katie:"Lizzie? Ok, this is freaky!"
Hank:"Extremly! I need to find them!" Hank looks in the gym, then he looks in social studies. The last place he looked, was the janiter closet, but it was locked.
____:"Don't bother!"
Hank:"What? Who's that? Why are you dressed in black? And why do you have someone with you?"
____:"I'm the one who's going to be asking the questions! Now, either you get rid of football, or your girlfriend will be doomed!"
Lizzie:"Don't do it! Hank, don't! No, you can't!"
____:"Don't try to sweetin him up Lizzie!"
Someone goes into the closet with Lizzie, and tell her not to say anything, or she'll show the school the football pictures.
Hank:"Ok, I'll give football up. "
____:"You made another big mistake!" *walks off*

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wow!I love it!more!

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(on the word lost, I ment 2 say locked)

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wow!I love it!more!
Ok.

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Lizzie:"Now he'll become school president! Hank!"
Hank:"How'd you know that?"
Bert which was _____walked back over to Hank.
Bert:"She was bein a pretty good lil actress."
Lizzie walked out of the closet.
Hank:"What do you mean?..."
Bert:"Well, Lil Lizzie here-" Bert points to Lizzie. "works for me."
Hank:"What, but, thats why, and thats how...huh?"
Bert:"Yup!" Bert walks to the principals office, so he could autimaticly make hiself class president, because that's how they did things there.
Hank:"I can't believe you'd do this to me."
Lizzie:"I'm sorry, he made me do it. But now I like you...I'm sorry.."
Hank:"Well, you can't change the fact I made Bert school president!"
Lizzie rubs her hands together.
Lizzie:"Maybe I can...."

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Hank:"How the heck can you do that?"
Lizzie:"We're going to need to get the other students opinion of this so called "president"."
Hank:"What do you mean?"
Lizzie:"Well, Bert is the most meanest guy in school, right?"
Hank:"Yeah......"
Lizzie:"Well, I have a plan, you'll see what it is."
Lizzie and Hank walk into the teachers lounge, which the teachers gave to Lizzie as her own office, because she was the most trusted student in Scholar High/Middle school.
Lizzie:"Ok, what we are going to do is, we will gather all of the seventh and eighth graders together, and we'll be stronger that way. You get the seventh, I'll do the eighth."
Hank:"Why are you doing the eigth? Girls don't usually shoot for the tough stuff."
Lizzie:"I'm a tough girl. That's what tough girls do. So are you in it? We'll need Katie to help us, and you can get Mark. Oh, and how about we do the eighth, and Mark and Katie do the seventh?"
Hank:"That sounds like a good game plan! Lets do it!"
Lizzie:"Alright, lets do this!"
Lizzie and Hank walk into the art class, and look for Mark and Katie. They didn't see them. Lizzie checked Social Studies, but still, no Mark, no Katie. In fact, everyone else in the school were totally out of site, exept for the teachers, they were on their lunch breaks.
Lizzie:"Maybe they're all in the cafereia."
Lizzie and Hank ran as fast as they could the cafeteria. They saw Katie sitting at a table with Mark.
Lizzie:"Oh, what a relief!!"
Katie:"Like, what?" (I forgot to add that she's like a total addicted skate border)
Mark:"What's up with that?"
Lizzie:"Look, no time to explain, come with us!" Lizzie and Hank grab Mark and Katie and bring them into her office.
Katie:"Wow, I knew you had an office, but this is like tremendous! I love it!"
Lizzie:"Yeah, I know, but, *sighs* Bert is now school president, and it's partly my fualt!"
Hank:"Yeah, I'm not the quarter back anymore...."
Mark:"WHAT!?!"
Katie:"Oh my gosh....you did it......!"
Lizzie:"I know, and it's all my fualt..."
Hank:"Don't say that.."
Mark:"Yeah, you're just a helpless little seventh grader like the rest of us, bumbared by a nineth grader."
Lizzie:"Who you callin a helpless senenth grada boy?" Lizzie grabs Mark by the collar on his shirt.
Mark:"Ok, ok, you're not a helpless seventh grader! Gosh!"
Hank:"But, ya see, we have a plan. Lizzie and I gather up all the eigth graders, while you an Katie ralley up the seventh."
Mark and Katie:"Hows that going to help?!?"
Lizzie:"Bert is the most hated guy in school, right?"
Katie:"Yeah...so?"
Lizzie:"Well, we can all take him down if we all work together!"
Katie:"Ok, good plan."
Lizzie and Hank all walk out of the office, and into the eighth grade hall.

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wow!I like the long chapters!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


YES!!!!LIKE I SAID MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK,now I am obsessed,again!!!!!!!!!WILL THIS NEVER END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[Jessicastar]

wow!I like the long chapters!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanx! I will!;) :03: :D

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When Hank and Lizzie walk in the eighth grade hallway, an nineth grader disguised as an eigth grader walks up to Hank.
Disguised Eighth Grader:"Would you like this energy bar? It'll keep ya goin durin the day!"
Hank:"Ok, uh...thank you." Hank takes a bite, and a few minutes later, Hank falls asleep.
Lizzie:"Hank, Hank, wake up! Hank! Oh my gosh!"
Lizzie tries to pick Hank up, but he wouldn't budge.
Lizzie:"Hank..Hank, wake up, please? Oh come on! This just can't get any wor-" Lizzie felt someone put their hand on her mouth.
______:"Now Lizzie, do you think I should have really let you wander free? Don't you know that I hate betrayers? Hmm..?" _____takes his hand off of her mouth so he could let her talk.
Lizzie:"Let go of me you pinstriped gerk!"
______:"A few minutes in the torture bubble should do you good, or how about an airless treasure chest? Hmmmm?"
Lizzie:"Like you have those kind of gadgets! Ha!"
_____:"Oh, but I do! Hahahaha!" ____ takes her into his basement, which looked worse than before.
Lizzie:"You are such a big.....drama queen!"
_____:"Oh, look what I got here! A braclet for the pwetty wittle Wizzie!" _____holds up chains.
Lizzie:"Please, don't...I'll do anything! Please, don't...please...uh...I'll pay you my allowance for the rest of the school year!"
_____:"Sorry, but as much as I would like to take that offer, I can't." _____raps chains around Lizzie.
Lizzie:"Look, I'm not a Christmas tree, alright!"
_____:"Too bad, now get in there ya maget!" _____pushes Lizzie into the chest, and locks it. He throws the key key to the counter.
_____who is it?

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Moooore!!! It's Awesome!! :D

Thankz!

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Lizzie:"Ugh! Let me out fool!"
_____:"Why should I? You almost ruined my plans!"
Lizzie:"Well, those plans stunk on ice!"
_____:"Stop this inselance!"
Lizzie:"Let me out!"
_____walks away as if he didn't hear Lizzie.
Lizzie:"Oh no...I need some major drastic measures here! Dang, I got nothin, again!"

Meanwhile.......
As Hank woke up, he noticed Lizzie was gone!
Hank:"Lizzie! Lizzie? Lizzzzzzzzzzie!!!!!!!"
Hank suspects the only place she could be is at _____'s basment. Hank takes his motor cycle and speeds over to his house. Then he makes his way to the basment, and fortanetly no one saw him...yet!

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Lizzie:"Oh my gosh! I so wish Hank was here! Someone get me out of hhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere! This is really getting stupid!!!"
Hank:"Lizzie?"
Lizzie:"Hank?"
Hank:"Where are you?"
Lizzie:"In the chest!"
Hank:"Ok, hold on! I'm gonna get you out of here!" Hank looks for the key, and then he tries to unlock Lizzie, then someone wacks him on the head with a football.
Lizzie:"Hank? Ha-"
______:"You didn't think you could get away did you? Hmm? Do you think you can just call your little boyfriend over here to save you?"
Lizzie:"But...but....I never....I never called him over here!"
______:"Well good, because my plan is unraveling! You can't stop me now! Soon, I will rule all the schools in California! Hahahahaha!"
Lizzie:"But...but..I-"
Nina:"You know what, I don't like Hank any more. I really like ____!"
Lizzie:"Nina?"
_____:"Nina darling, could you break out the chair please?"
Nina:"With pleasure!"
Lizzie:"What the heck are you talking about?!"
Nina:"Here it is! The ultimate early aniversery present!"
_____:"Thankyou, you're a big help! Now, hmmm.....Who should I test this on first? Maybe Hank....or Lizzie....hmmm."
Nina:"Ooooh! Try it on Lizzie first! Just to see if it works!"
_____:"Nonsense! Hank should go first!"
Hank wakes up, and sees _____.
Hank:"What...what am I doing here? Lizzie! What are you doing? I have to get you out!"
_____:"That won't be possible. Now, come take a ride on the football express, shall ya?" ______pushes Hank onto the chair.
Hank:"Get me off of this thing you doof!"
_____:"That's out of the question!"
Lizzie:"Oh come on! Please don't do this! Please....please.."
_____:"Say goodbye to your boyfriend forever! hahahahahhahaa!"

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_____:"Hahahahahahhahahhhaaa!"
Lizzie:"No....Hank? "
Hank:"Bye Liz. I'm sorry."
Lizzie:"Please...no...._____, I am soooo coming out of here!"
_____:"Uh...news flash! You're in chains!"
Lizzie:"Just watch me!" Lizzie flips herself off of the chest, and gets up.
Hank:"Lizzie, it's too late! Good bye!" Then a light flashes and Hank disapears!
Lizzie:"Hank...."
_____:"Hahahhaha! Now that your boyfriend is demolished, it's time to get on with my dictating plans! Oh, and Nina, put her in the torture bubble!"
Nina:"Ok."Nina grabs Lizzie, and shoves her into a blue circle that somewhat looked like a hamster ball.
Lizzie cries, and just lays there, sobbing her eyes out.

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awesome

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Katie:"Lizzie, he-"
Mark:"Bert, you jerk!"
Bert:"Oh, now you just gave the mystery away! "
Katie:"Oh, they obviously knew it was you!"
Bert:"True. But I have no use for you, but them in the terminal detention!" Nina grabs Katie and Mark by there shirts, and through them in a small room with four desks.
Mark:"What are we going to do? This is soooo not good! What are we going to do? What are gonna-"
Katie:"Mark, would you just like, chill already?! Be optimistic here...were locked in detention...theremust be some sort of way out!"
Mark:"Yeah, there must be some wa-" A light flashes, and the lights go out. Mark is gone, along with Hank!

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Katie:"This is just perfect! There must some way out..." Katie starts pushing on walls, yelling, kicking, until finally the door opened.
Katie:"Finally!" Katie starts for the torture bubble, and then starts pulling on the entrance. Then finally the door unlocked. Lizzie was uncontious.
Katie:"Oh, come on! Wake up, ya wimp!" She said knowing that Lizzie would wake up.
Lizzie:"If I wasn't in these chains right now, you'd be dead to me!"
Katie:"Come on, we have to get you out!" Katie sees a silver small key on the ground.
Then, Katie unlocks Lizzie out of the chains.
Lizzie:"Thanks Katie! We have to find Hank!"
Katie:"And Mark!"
Lizzie:"He's gone too? And I don't know if Hank is gone...you know...really gone...?"
Katie:"I know, but we have to find Mark!"
Lizzie:"I know, he might be with Hank!"
Lizze was getting frustrated, and this time, she'd really bounce back at Bert.

[Fire-Chicken]

Write More!!

[Jessicastar]

Write More!!
I would, but I have to go! I'll write more maybe later today....:D

[Miley_Montana_Gal]

Nice ;)

[Jessicastar]

Nice ;)

Thanx!

[Jessicastar]

Bert:"Oh, you escaped, did you?"
Lizzie:"Back off, Bert! I have very strong hands, and I'm not afraid to use them!"
Katie:"Neither am I! It'll be two against one!"
Bert:"Though I'm even stronger than you two, I have people you dispise very much here with me, they'll take care of you!" *walks off*
Nina and her friend were with her (her friends name escapes me)
Nina:"You two are in for it now!" Nina pushes Lizzie.
Lizzie:"Back off, miss priss!" Lizzie pushes her back.
Nina's friend:"We have no use for Katie, so...." *the lights go off, and Katie disapeared* *lights go back on*
Lizzie gasped:"Katie? What did you two do with her? Oh....I bet she's with Mark and Hank!"
Nina:"It doesn't take a scientist to figure that out!" *pushes Lizzie again, then steps on her foot*
Lizzie:"Oooouch!"
Nina's friend:"Oh, what's the matta? The wittle football girl is too wimpy to fight back?"
Lizzie:"You know about that? You better not tell anyone!"
Nina:"Um..ok...we won't. I'm sorry about being so mean to you. Truce?" *reaches hand out*
Lizzie:"Ok...truce." *reaches out to shake Nina's hand*
Nina:* takes Lizzie's hand and shoves her to the ground* "You are soo gullable! Oh, and there's not a chance that I won't tell the whole school what you do!"
Lizzie:"Ok. Well, you're luckey you two aren't falling into that dumpster that you put behind me."
Both Nina and Her friend:"Uh...ok?"
Lizzie pushes them into the dumpster.
Both Nina and her friend:"Ewwwww!"
Lizzie:"Hehe!" Lizzie starts wandering deeper and deeper into the evil layer.

[Jessicastar]

Can someone request for more? Pleaseeeeee!

[SmileyMiley11]

awesome

[Jessicastar]

awesome
Thankyou. So, who wants more?

[HM ROCKS]

cool

[Jessicastar]

cool
So do you want to read more?:D

[Jessicastar]

Hello?:33:

[Sporty Miley]

AHHHHHHH!!! you've addicted me!! plzz rite more!!!! oh and thanks 4 the pm or else i wouldn't have found out about this!!!!

[Jessicastar]

AHHHHHHH!!! you've addicted me!! plzz rite more!!!! oh and thanks 4 the pm or else i wouldn't have found out about this!!!!

Ok.:D

[Jessicastar]

Lizzie:"This keeps getting creepier and creepier!"
Bert:"If you think that's creepy, then you'll definatly get a kick out of this!" *kicks her down to the gound*
Lizzie:"Ugh...my aky braky leg! Ouch!!!! What was that for? Whoever did that is a big doof! Because I'll punch you so hard your whole mouth will be numb!"
Bert:"And how is that possible? You can't even move!"
Lizzie:"You think one little kick would knock me out? Well you are completely wrong!" *stands up and runs*
Bert:"Go ahead, keep on going that way, because that's never going to get you to your "boyfriend", Lizzie!"
Lizzie: *starts running the other way past Bert* *out of breath*
Hank: *wispers* "Lizzie! Over here!"
Lizzie:"Hank?"
Hank:"Sshhhhhh! Over here!"
Lizzie walks over to where Hank was, and all her other friends.
Hank:"Lizzie, you have to get us out!"
Lizzie: "Ok." *carefully unties them all without making noise*
Lizzie, Hank, Mark, and Katie finally get out. The stayed together, there was way too many abductions.
They all go into the lunch room.
Lizzie:"Bert, has takin over the school! If we work together, we can all stop him!Are you with us?" The cafeteria just looks away.
Hank &and Mark: "She said, are you with us!"
The whole cafeteria: "YEA!"
They all walk towards the seventh grade hall. Will they incourage all the seventh grade and eighth graders together in time to stop Bert? Request to find more!

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!

[Jessicastar]

More!!!!!!!!!

Ok. Hold on!

[Jessicastar]

They walked into all the classes of the seventh grade hall, encouraging them one by one. They were almost done rallying up all of the eighth and seventh graders. They only had two more of those students left. Nina, and her friend Kat. But they couldn't do that, they were owrking with Bert. So they all went into the gym to plan.
Lizzie:"Ok, before we get on with our plans, I need to tell you all something...it's my fualt he's president...."
One kid said: "You STINK!"
Another one from the crowd said: "Let's get heeeeerrrrrrr!"
The whole student body ran towards Lizzie and knocked her over. Bert came out of that crowd, and grabbed Lizzie, and ran off with her.
Lizzie:"You guys, help!"
Hank:"Come on, let's help her!"
One kid said:"Why should we? She's the whole reason we're in this mess!"
another kid:"Yea, let him do what ever he wants to her!"
Hank looked at everyone: "She never intended to do it though!"
A few kids went to where Hank was standing. Then, a lot more, except for a couple left over.
Hank:"Are you ready, to save the student body?"
No one answered.
Mark:"Uh, he said, are you ready fo dis!?!"
The whole crowd: "YEA!"
Will they save Lizzie, or will Bert be an evil dictater after all? Request for more to find out......

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jessicastar]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, hold on.:D

[Sporty Miley]

thanks!!!!!!

[Jessicastar]

Lizzie:"You are such a Wart Headed-chicken legged- drama queen doof!"
Bert:"Hmmm, well, I ho-" *Hank and the whole crowd run over him*
Hank:"Lizzie, are you ok?"
Lizzie:"Yeah, I guess. Well, it looks like our plan worked. Let's go to the principal to tell him about this stupid president!" The whole student body walks to the principal's office.
Principal:"Why are all you kids in my office?"
the whole crowd:"We hate bert!"
Principal: "Ok, so you want him out, and you want it done the regular way?"
whole crowd:"YES!"
Principal:"Ok, it's done. We'll have an election instead."
Push just comes to show, if you work hard, and overcome your obstacles, you will end up getting what you want. That's the end of the first fan fiction. I will post another one in a few days.







the end

[Sporty Miley]

i'm sooooooo sad it's the end but it was REALLY good!!!!!!!!!

[Jessicastar]

i'm sooooooo sad it's the end but it was REALLY good!!!!!!!!!

Thanks.:D

[flower1]

nice! and cool avvie! i like Rose. I have a fan fic! its called, Oliver+ Miley=leads to BIG trouble! could you read it?

[Jessicastar]

nice! and cool avvie! i like Rose. I have a fan fic! its called, Oliver+ Miley=leads to BIG trouble! could you read it?

I read it, it's great, post mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooorrrrrrreeeee!:D

[flower1]

thank you!

[flower1]

sorry, you have to post on my thread, no here, to get me to write more. ok, im being evil now! >;)

[DuhXitsXAnnieX]

it ended...i think i am going to cry...:'( :'( :'( :'(

[flower1]

im pretty sad too. im recovering from the shock.

[gilmore1]

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