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Miley Cryus fan1
01-24-2007, 08:45 PM
Jake cheated on miley with holly and they broke up and miley starts to realize that she has feeling for Oliver
Oliver I love you-chapter 1
~At School~
(at lily's locker)
Miley: Hey Lily
Lily: Hey Miley
Miley: Lily can I tell you something
Lily: Sure. Whats up?
Miley: promise you wont laugh?
Lily: yes I promise!! Now spill!! What going on?
Miley: I think I like...(Oliver interupts)
Oliver: Hey Miley! Hey Lily!
Lily: Hey Oliver
Miley: (in a dreamy excited voice) Hey Oliver!!
Oliver: Whats going on?
Lily: Miliey was just about to tell me something (to Miley)What were you going to tell me?
Miley: Nevermind its not important I'll tell you later.
Hope you like it. It's my first FanFic!! If you have any ideas on the next chaper let me know
hmfhannahmontanafan
01-24-2007, 09:00 PM
GREAT! write more!
Miley Cryus fan1
01-24-2007, 09:13 PM
i want at least 4 good comment before i post the next chapter
Katybug1994
01-24-2007, 09:14 PM
More Please!!!
hmshorty
01-24-2007, 09:21 PM
please write more i wanna see how everything goes and who reacts to what
Miley Cryus fan1
01-24-2007, 09:35 PM
Okey im felling nice so here it is
Olive I love you-chapter 2
*bell rings*
(Miley and Lily walk into Social Studies and sit down next to each other.)
Lily: Oh Miley you never told me what you were going to say before Oliver came.
Miley Oh!! I was saying that I think I ike...(Mr. Daniels interrupts)
Mr. Daniels: Morning class
class: Morning Mr. Daniels.
(Lily passes Miley a note)
Lily: So now what is it?
(She throwes it to Miley but she throws it too far and misses. It land on the floor)
Mr Daniels: Now look what we have here!! Lily Trescott!!
Lily: sorry!!
(bell rings)
~Mileys House~
Lily: No More interruption!! Spill!!
Miley: Okay, Okay I think I like...(hesitates)...Oliver!
Lily: (Gasp) Oliver!!!!!
SmileyMiley11
01-24-2007, 09:36 PM
awesome
Miley Cryus fan1
01-24-2007, 10:02 PM
i'll probally post more tommorrow
SmileyMiley11
01-24-2007, 10:23 PM
great Its really good
Fire-Chicken
01-25-2007, 01:32 PM
Great! Write More!
flower1
01-25-2007, 01:36 PM
MMMOOORREEE! please! dont make me bust down your door!!
Miley Cryus fan1
01-26-2007, 04:51 PM
Oliver I love you-Chapter 3
Lily: (gasp) Oliver
Miley: Yes! Oliver!
Lily: ewww! Why?!?!?!?!?
Miley: I guess it's because (she sits on the couch) he's always been there for me and he's just....perfect!
Lily: OOHHHH! but still ewwww
(hannah phone rings)
Miley: Hold on (to Lily) Hello. Oh hey Tracy(to phone)
Tracy: Hey! Hannah! Were having a bash for Zac on Saturday! Your coming right!
Miley: sure! me and Lola will be there! See ya Trace!
Tracy: See ya! cheaoooo!
(Miley hangs up)
Miley: Im taking you to a party for Zac on Saturday!
Lily: Efron!!
Miley: Duh!!
Lily: I'm so there!
Miley great!
Lily: Sooo.. How and when are going to tell Oliver how you feell?
Miley: Well I was thinking-----------------------------
So what did you think! I already have chapters 4 and 5 written!! so i want at least 3 comments before i post the next chapter
mileyobsessed13
01-26-2007, 05:36 PM
post more!!!
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
01-30-2007, 07:01 PM
more!! More!!! please!!! I love it!
hmfhannahmontanafan
01-30-2007, 08:00 PM
yeah, post it. it's good!
Miley Cryus fan1
01-30-2007, 08:33 PM
[SIZE=5]well im REALLY bored so here it is:
Oliver I love you~Chapter 4~
Miley: Well I was thinking his birthday party is next week right. Well i was thinking I'll tell him then. But i'm not sure how YET.
Lily: Good plan. I'm sure you'll think of somthing to say.
~Zac's Party~
(music booming)
Hannah: Happy Birthday Zac!
Zac: Thanks Hannah!
Hannah: This is my best friend Lola.
Zac: Hi! Lola
Lola: Hey! Happy birthday!
Zac: thanks. Hannah Ivhave to talk to Vanessa. see ya. good luck on your performance.
Hannah: Bye! and thanks!
Lola: Your performing?
Hannah: Yeah I'm singing "If We We're A Movie" Vanessa and Ashley are also performing
Lola: sweet
Hannah: Oh No!!!
Lola: What?
Hannah: Jakes here!
Lola: Oh! Great!
Hannah: And now he's coming over here
Jake: Hey Hannah!! Hey Lola!!
Hannah and Lola: Hey Jake! Sup!
Jake: nothing! Hey Hannah can I talk to you in private.
Hannah: Sure! Lola you can......not chase Gwen into the bathroom..again.
Lola: (embaressed) okay
(Jake and Hannah go into the back room)
Jake: I was wondering----------[SIZE "5"]
[SIZE="3"]ok there it is! What do you think he wants? (its kind obviuos)[/SIZE=5]
flower1
01-30-2007, 10:07 PM
Im Gonna Die If You Dont Write More! >;(
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
01-31-2007, 04:41 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flower1
01-31-2007, 04:44 PM
come on!
mileyrocks101
01-31-2007, 04:45 PM
Moreeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW OR I WILL JK LOL :P !
flower1
01-31-2007, 04:49 PM
Comeon!
Miley Cryus fan1
01-31-2007, 05:40 PM
Ok Ok here it is
Chapter~5~
Jake: I was wondering if you would go out with me?
Hannah: Jake you know last time we tried going out it was a disaster.
Jake: know but I want to try again
Hannah: But you cheated on me!!
(he knows the miley is hannah)
Jake: At least think about it.
Hannah: Fine!! I'll think about it!!
Jake: Thanks! I'll call you!!
(Jake leaves and Lola cames in)
Lola: What was that all about?
Hannah: Jake asked me out!!! (sad and scared)
Lola: OH NO!! What did you say!!??
Hannah: I said I would think about it
~Miley House~
(Miley and Lily changed back into themselves and now are in the Hannah closet and Miley is pacing)
Miley: I shold say no to Jake right? (Lily tries to answer but Miley interupts)But he cheated on me so I should say no.
Lily: (Miley contues to ramble) Miley!!....Miley!!....MILEY!!.....STOP!! If he cheated on you you should say no!! and what about Oliver!!
Miley: I don't know.......
there it is! any idea and the next chapter
flower1
01-31-2007, 05:44 PM
tha next chapter.....hmm......
Miley Cryus fan1
01-31-2007, 06:58 PM
any ideas on the next chapter?
Miley Cryus fan1
02-03-2007, 01:49 PM
anybody like it?!?!?!????
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
02-03-2007, 02:04 PM
yes!! it's great!! more!
cookie monster
02-03-2007, 02:33 PM
more!
smiley_smiley_miley
02-03-2007, 02:34 PM
Yeah it is really good, it is just like a actuall hannah montana episode it is soooooo great
vivi loca
02-03-2007, 02:42 PM
that was soo awesome mor more
vanessa*anne
02-03-2007, 04:05 PM
its great please write more
Miley Cryus fan1
02-03-2007, 11:41 PM
i will as soon as i write the next chapter.. if anyone has any ideas let me no pleaz that would be much appreication cause im haveing a writers block
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
02-04-2007, 02:05 PM
i'll pm u if i have any ideas, but i'm not sure if i have any yet. any way, it's a great fan fic.
flower1
02-04-2007, 02:36 PM
sigh, i have to think? sssssssssiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiggggggggggggg gggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Miley Cryus fan1
02-04-2007, 03:28 PM
thanx much apprietaited
GO BEARSGO!!
mileycyrusisluv
02-04-2007, 04:31 PM
i have an idea for somepoint maybe the end lilly and oliver are acually dating and miley finds out and is crushed. now that'd be cool!
flower1
02-04-2007, 04:38 PM
Go Colts!
Miley Cryus fan1
02-04-2007, 05:11 PM
thats a good idea! any ideas for chapter 6
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
02-06-2007, 06:04 PM
please post more!!
Miley Cryus fan1
02-22-2007, 06:29 PM
ok here it is
~Chapter 6~
~Olivers party~
(Miley walks up to oliver)
Miley: Happy Birthday Oliver!!
Oliver: Thanks!!
Miley: Oliver can i tell you something?
Oliver: sure what is it?
Miley: I....
some girl: Hi Olly! Happy Birthday
Oliver: Miley this is my....girlfriend..
Miley: Ohh...nice to meet you
Oliver: so what is it you wanted to tell me?
Miley: nevermind. It's not important "anymore"
(miley walks over to Lily)
Lily: So how did it go?!?!?
Miley: He has a girlfriend!!
Lily: awww man!! that sucks!! Do we know her!!
Miley: I'm not sure but she looks oddly familer......You don't think it could be....
both:---------!!!!!!!
sorry its short but ive had writers block for ever and i just thought of this tell me what you think! Who do you think it is?
volleyballprincess33
02-22-2007, 08:30 PM
More!!!!!!!!! I Think Might Know Who It Is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
02-22-2007, 08:31 PM
I Love It!!
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 06:14 PM
more!
vanessa*anne
02-23-2007, 06:27 PM
more!
Miley Cryus fan1
02-28-2007, 05:22 PM
ok i will as soon as i write it
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
03-06-2007, 06:16 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
qtneci
03-07-2007, 12:56 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!
laurahe1
03-07-2007, 11:19 AM
more!
SmileyMiley11
03-07-2007, 11:43 AM
write more!!!!!!!
Miley Cryus fan1
03-07-2007, 06:18 PM
ok i have it writtten and i will post it as soon as i can prolly some time tonight
Gabriella Read
03-07-2007, 09:35 PM
Go girl this story is superbly nice. Haha....I love it...so write more.
natwolfflove1
03-07-2007, 09:44 PM
omg more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more more more more more! its so good
qtneci
03-07-2007, 11:23 PM
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Destiny_Hope_NZ
03-08-2007, 02:22 AM
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MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
03-09-2007, 01:02 PM
more!!!
Miley Cryus fan1
03-12-2007, 05:29 PM
i will later tonight because i have cheer tryouts
hannahmontanarulz55
03-12-2007, 06:01 PM
Omg! This Is My New Fave Fan Fic! Write More Plz!
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
03-13-2007, 08:25 PM
More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!! More!!! More!!!!More!!! More!!!!
Miley Cryus fan1
03-20-2007, 06:41 PM
ok here it is
~Chapter 7~
Both: BECCA!!!
Person: Thats right!! Ever since oliver broke up with me last summer. I've been the ULTIMATE revenge!! You see I made myself look differant by wearing a wig and a fake nose.
Miley Why would you go through all of that trouble when you could have just....(Lily elbows Miley in the side)OW!!
Becca: No! Don't stop!!! Keeping going. I could have just what!!
Miley: (Thinks quickly) You...could...have...just...(she thinks) not used all of the stuff to make you look differant. Oliver woulsd have taken you back. He said that after after he broke up with you that it was the biggest mistake of his life. Then finally, after 2 months, stopped obsessing over it.
Lily: Yeah!! What she said
Becca: Really!!
Miley/Lily: yeah. Sure!!
Becca: (squeals) Yeah!..... but theres only one problem.
Lily: We already told you to tell him its been him the entire time.
Becca: No!..it's.not..that..
Miley: Then what is it?
Becca:------------!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
03-20-2007, 07:03 PM
more plz
Miley Cryus fan1
04-07-2007, 02:44 PM
i want at least 5 comments before i post the next chapter cause this isnt very popular
m&jrule
04-07-2007, 06:37 PM
more!
SmileyMiley11
04-07-2007, 06:39 PM
Yeah more its awesome
hannahmontanarulz55
04-07-2007, 08:35 PM
more plz
Miley Cryus fan1
04-07-2007, 08:40 PM
2 more then ill post it
miley rocks
04-07-2007, 08:45 PM
its awesome right moooooooooooore
secretive_angel
04-07-2007, 08:52 PM
more pleaz more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
Miley Cryus fan1
04-08-2007, 08:54 PM
ok here it is
~chapter 8~
Becca: It' just that we made an honesty pack, and if i tell him I'be been lying the entire time he might not trust me ever again.
Lily:(whispers to Miley) that’s what we want right?
Miley: (whispers back) yeah.... I guess so
(she’s having second thoughts)
Lily: (to becca) Well Oliver is very understanding. You never know until you try.
Becca: I guess your right. Thanks you guys.
(She puts all of her disguise back on and walks over to Oliver)
Oliver: Hey Claire!!
Becca: Hi Oliver.
Oliver: What’s wrong?
Becca I've been keeping something from you.
Oliver: what is it?
Becca: I’m not who you think I am. My name isn’t Claire. (She takes of her disguise) It’s Becca.
Oliver: Becca!! (He’s shocked but not surprised)
Becca: Yeah it’s me.
Oliver: Why all the secrets?
Becca:Well I didn't know if you would take me back.
Oliver Why Wouldn't I?
Becca: I don't know.
Oliver: You should have known better. Good-bye Becca!!
(Oliver leaves and joines Lily)
Miley and Lily had been eavsdropping. Miley left to go to the bathroom.
Lily: A little harsh don't ya think!!
Oliver: Ya I know but I don't like Becca anymore. I'm ready to move on.
Lily: I know someone you can move on to.
Oliver: Who?
Lily: Mile.......(Ironicly Miley interuppts)
Miley: Hey ya'll
Oliver: Lily did you just say who I think you just said?
Lily: yep. (she glances over at Miley)
Oliver: Hey Miley did you bring your (whispers)"Hannah" stuff?
Miley: Yep! All right here. (she lift a duffle bag)
Oliver: Well why don't you go get changed.
Miley: Ok (she leaves)
(Oliver goes to the stage)
Oliver: hey everyone in a few minutes a close personal friend wil be performing.
Lily: She's ready!
Oliver: Ladies and Gents! HANNAH MONTANA!!
(everyone screams)
Hannah: hey Ya'll!! Hows everyone tonight?
(Everyone screams)
(she sings Happy Birthday, Nobody's Perfect,and I Got Nerve)
Oliver: Give it up for Hannah Montana!!
Hannah: I just want to say Happy Birthday to my friend Oliver. I also need Lily to comes on stage to give me directions to her house because I'm spending the night!
Lily: Here you go Hannah.
(everyone startes talking about plans to "drop" by)
Lily: (whispers)Miley you might want to bring your Hannah stuff
Hannah: Planning on it!!
tell me what you think. i want at least 7 comments before i post the next chapter
hannahmontanarulz55
04-08-2007, 08:57 PM
omg more!!!!!!
miley rocks
04-09-2007, 06:58 PM
more pleasezzzzzzzzzzzz
hannahmontanarulz55
04-09-2007, 08:11 PM
more plz!
secretive_angel
04-09-2007, 09:23 PM
More Pleaz
Cheerleader111
04-12-2007, 12:40 PM
More!!!
Miley Cryus fan1
04-15-2007, 10:56 PM
i want atleast 2 more comments plz
hannahmontanarulz55
04-16-2007, 03:53 PM
more plz
thobi123
04-16-2007, 05:16 PM
more plz
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
04-21-2007, 12:42 PM
more more!!
Miley Cryus fan1
05-13-2007, 02:20 PM
sorry i havent posted in a while but ill probally post tommorrow
hannahmontanarulz55
05-13-2007, 09:20 PM
ok
luv2act
05-13-2007, 09:57 PM
please more! i LUVE IT!
hmshorty
05-13-2007, 10:40 PM
more more more more more!!!!!
Ashley Marie 1992
05-16-2007, 10:26 PM
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! It'z Getting Good!!
m&jrule
05-16-2007, 10:38 PM
great job!
more!
Miley Cryus fan1
05-19-2007, 03:40 PM
i will when im done with my chores
hannahmontanarulz55
05-19-2007, 04:01 PM
WRITE MORE!!! plz
MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
05-20-2007, 01:02 PM
more more!!!
luv2act
05-20-2007, 01:26 PM
more!
miley_cyrus_lvr
05-20-2007, 07:15 PM
more its getting sooooo good. more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!
miley_cyrus_lvr
05-29-2007, 12:04 AM
more please its good
miley_cyrus_lvr
05-29-2007, 08:10 PM
please moree!1
hannahmontanarulz55
05-29-2007, 09:31 PM
More!!!!
Lanae_M
05-30-2007, 11:49 AM
More! Its awesome! I just read it!!!!!!!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
05-30-2007, 07:22 PM
write MORE! plz
Miley Cryus fan1
05-31-2007, 08:14 PM
i will after school tommorrow. i promise. ive just been really busy
smilez
05-31-2007, 10:36 PM
please write more! its sooooo awesome! i just read the whole thing! more more more!!!
hannahmontanarulz55
05-31-2007, 10:59 PM
Write More...like Now!!!
Miley Cryus fan1
06-04-2007, 12:15 PM
ok here it is
~Chapter 9~
At lily's house
Miley: I better keep the Hannah wig handy. I'll go put it in the bathroom.
Lily: Good idea. (Doorbell rings) Or on your head!
(quickly Miley puts the wig on as Lily answers the door.)
Lily: It's okay. It's just Oliver.
Miley: ok thanks! (she takes off the wig) Hey Oliver!
Oliver: Hey! Miley can I talk to you? Alone.
Miley: Sure. We can go outside.
(they walk outside.)
Miley: So. Whats up?
(Oliver suddenly kisses her. It lasts for at least two minutes. But to Miley it seemed like it was over to fast.)
Oliver: Thats Whats up! Lily told me you like me.. and im gald she did.
Miley: Me too! But I don't like you...(Oliver lookes confused)Oliver I love you!!
Oliver: I love you too!!
(they kiss)
(they go back inside holding hands and they sit on the couch)
Lily: So i see you two got happy!
Miley/Oliver: yepp!!
Lily: Oliver have you kissed her yet!?
Oliver: yes. Twice!!
Lily: I want to see.
(they kiss)
Lily: Awwwwwwww How cute. I always knew this would happen.
(dorbell rings.)
(Lily those Miley the wig and Oliver helpes her put it on. Lily answers the door. Amber and Ashley walk in and see Hannah and Oliver holding hands)
Amber: Are you two together?
Hannah: Yepp! and happier then ever!
Ashley: I would never have thought that the geek would get the celeribity!
Lily: Well you thought wrong.
Oliver: I guess I'm cooler then you thought!
Amber: Wait! this is just a plot to make yourself look cooler.
Oliver/Hannah: No! It's not.
Ashley: Alright. then lets see you kiss.
Oliver/Hannah: ok
(they kiss)
Hannah: Do you belive us now?
Amber/Ashley: yes I guess
Ashley: Ooh Ooh..
Amber: not now
Ashley: Sorry.
Hannah: So Amber have you been nicer to everyone.
Amber: yes.
Hannah: EVERYONE?
Amber: well no..It's hard to be nice to those geeks.
Hannah: I want you to be nise ti my Olikins and his friends.and if you don;t Olio will tell me.. Won't you Oli?
Oliver: YOu bet Hani.
so wat did you think. leave comments
miley rocks
06-04-2007, 01:02 PM
aah that was the cutest thing ever
more plz
hannahmontanarulz55
06-04-2007, 03:48 PM
MORE!!!!! like now!
Lanae_M
06-04-2007, 09:01 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheerleader111
06-07-2007, 04:02 AM
more more more!!!
Please. :)
hannahmontanarulz55
06-07-2007, 03:45 PM
come on!!!!! more!!!!
gemmaward
06-07-2007, 04:48 PM
YA.. I WAN't MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! [Sorry.. I just luuuuuuuuv it! It's SO good!]
Lanae_M
06-07-2007, 10:19 PM
Moremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miley Cryus fan1
06-13-2007, 12:39 PM
ok i havent written it yet. i havent had time but ill write it and post it
hannahmontanarulz55
06-13-2007, 03:48 PM
more...plz!
Miley Cryus fan1
06-13-2007, 09:29 PM
could y'all maybe put this link in your siggies. i could use the publicity
hannahmontana_luver0320
07-07-2007, 07:37 PM
i love this it is like one of the best deff in my top 5
secretive_angel
07-07-2007, 07:56 PM
more
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-07-2007, 09:45 PM
Awesome fan fic ! I just read all of it!
Plaes post more :D
LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 10:06 PM
more please, that was super good!
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-08-2007, 01:58 PM
More plzzz!! It's getin good :D
hannahmontana_luver0320
07-09-2007, 11:16 PM
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wishtokissmiley12
07-09-2007, 11:22 PM
That was great, very unexpected.
Miley Cryus fan1
07-10-2007, 03:47 PM
~Chapter 10~
at Lily's house.
Amber: Whatever. I'll try.
(they leave)
Miley: I hate wearing this thing. (she takes it off)
Lily: hopefully no one else comes.
Oliver: Miley. How is this going to work?
Miley: What do you mean?
Oliver: Amber and Ashley know that im dating you. and when i say you i mean Hannah.
Miley: Ritght. I don't know. Maybe we just won't be couply around them.
Oilver: Thats going to be hard for me.
Miley: It's going to be hard for me too. But we'll just have too at least try.
(the hannh phone rings)
(Miley looks at it)
Miley: OHH NOO! it's Jake.
(she answers)Hello.
Jake: Hey!!! Miley! I was wondering if you've decided yet?
Miley: yes i have.
Jake: Sooo.
Miley: my answer is no.
Jake: WHY?
Miley: i have someone else. (she looks at Oliver) Sorry Jake.
Jake: it's okay. Good-bye Miles.
Miley: toodles. (she hangs up.) thank god. he's so annoying
Lily: yeah! he's so full of himself.
Miley: yeah. I got a WAY better guy.
Oliver: who?(he laughs)
Miley: i love you Oliver (she hugs him)
Oliver: i love you too Miles. (He kisses her)
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-10-2007, 05:54 PM
moreeeee!!!!!!!!
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-11-2007, 10:50 PM
Moreeeeeeee
K-star7
07-11-2007, 11:19 PM
awww! thats so cute!! please write more!!
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-12-2007, 10:15 PM
Anymore?
m&jrule
07-12-2007, 11:26 PM
aww thats so cute! more
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-13-2007, 12:21 AM
r u gonna write or not?
Lanae_M
07-13-2007, 12:34 AM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-13-2007, 10:35 PM
More? plz?
LotsaBigHearts
07-13-2007, 11:02 PM
yes please write more!!
the.unperfect.one
07-14-2007, 02:40 AM
More please!!!Love this story!!!
K-star7
07-14-2007, 02:41 AM
Please write more!!
Miley Cryus fan1
07-15-2007, 06:19 PM
i will write more later
buttah just to let ya'll know my name is Melissa
cutie_pie
07-16-2007, 10:50 PM
nice i didnt that to come up i cant wait till the next chapter..... comment people
smiley_smiley_miley
07-17-2007, 12:00 AM
More!!!!
the.unperfect.one
07-17-2007, 05:58 AM
go!!!plese write more
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-21-2007, 10:05 PM
More plz!!
secretive_angel
07-21-2007, 10:31 PM
more
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-22-2007, 07:06 PM
More?
Miley Cryus fan1
07-24-2007, 12:09 AM
im going to post more as soon as i can. i have cheer camp for the next two days.
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-24-2007, 08:49 PM
Ok.
Miley Cryus fan1
08-03-2007, 08:59 PM
i have a grafic contest.
the best one will be put on teh first page.
i will credit that person
Lanae_M
08-03-2007, 09:31 PM
MORE please when can!
I_<3_Him_1020
08-06-2007, 11:40 PM
MORE!!!! love this one! ;)
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
08-10-2007, 09:36 PM
More!! It's been SOO LONG!!
Miley Cryus fan1
08-12-2007, 12:27 AM
i feel so badd that i havent written in a while.
buttah ill do it tommorrow when my parents are at work
cuz im grounded form the internet
buttah i cant help but get on.
i promise i will tommorrow.
and does anyone want to do the Blend contest?
Lanae_M
08-12-2007, 12:58 AM
I cant sorry but write when you can and a word of advice - Dont get caught!
Miley Cryus fan1
08-12-2007, 01:09 AM
i'll do it now
they are asleep
~chapter 11~
at school.
Oliver: Hey Miles!
Miley: Hey Oli!
(they look around the halls fo Amber and Ashley)
Oliver coast clear
(they hug and kiss)
Lily: This is crazy. You guys have to hide your relationship.
Miley: only from two people!
Oliver: Yeah and I would do anythingto be with Miley. Even if it means keeping it a secret from a couple of people.
Lily: yeah i guess your right. Buttah we better get to Social studies.
We wouldn't want to get on Mr. Daniels bad side.
Miley: Uhh.. Lily you kinda already are.
Lily: Huh?
Miley: the note passing
Lily: Ohh..right.
sorry its so short buttah the next two chapters are going to be amazing
i guarrentee(sp?)
Miley Cryus fan1
08-15-2007, 10:55 PM
nobody likes it.
its been 4 days with no comments.
i guess no one likes it
the.unperfect.one
08-16-2007, 12:05 AM
ohh sorry I didn't comment on the past few days but I LOVE it!!
huskerrich
08-16-2007, 12:58 PM
more please, but it can wait for duration of the punishment
gilmore1
08-17-2007, 12:17 PM
i love it! good job
Miley Or Hannah
08-17-2007, 12:43 PM
It's awesome, please post more !!
the.unperfect.one
08-28-2007, 09:14 AM
Please write more pretty please:)
Miley Cryus fan1
08-29-2007, 09:16 PM
sorry
i got ungrounded on monday
and we havent had a computer.
buttah we got it back yesterday.
so ill write as soon as i can
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