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Lanae_M
01-15-2007, 02:50 PM
Chapter 1: Ethan and Katie
Miley was so fusterated as she walked into school. She had a Hannah thing the night before and had forgotten to do her homework for Mrs. Lawson. Then Miley saw Lily racing tward her saying " Oh my gosh Miley, two new students moved in this morning!" "Really, who are they?" Miley asked. "Their names are Ethan and Katie and they are in our first hour!"lily replied. Then the bell rang.The girls hurried to Mrs. Lawson's class. As they entered her room Miley a very cute new boy in class and guessed it was Ethan. He had dirty blond hair and blue eyes. "Allright students, settle down," said Mrs. Lawson."I have two new students to introduce to you today, this is Ethan and Katie. They have moved here from london!" as everyone was gapeing at Ethan and Katie, Oliver tumbled into the classroom. "Your late Oliver!" Mrs Lawson exclaimed,"Give me your note and please sit down." Oliver quickly did as he was told."Alright everyone, please get out your homework,"said Mrs. Lawson.As she came around to collect the papers she got to Miley and said, "You really should do your homework Miley, then you could get a good grade in my class. I mean its not like your a celebrity and not have any time." As class ended Miley got up and accidently bumped into Ethan. "I am so sorry!" Miley exclaimed. "It's fine,"Ethan said in his cute accent. "I'm Ethan." " Miley," Miley replied. "Well Miley, I was wondering if maybe you could show me and my sister around the school?"Ethan asked. "Okay," Miley answered.
So what do you think? I need comments or critisisum.
miley smiley
01-15-2007, 02:53 PM
awesome really good
*off topic* ur called emmy too?
Lanae_M
01-15-2007, 02:56 PM
Yea and Thanks!
Lanae_M
01-15-2007, 03:36 PM
Anyone else?
Fire-Chicken
01-16-2007, 08:05 AM
I think it's Great!
Lanae_M
01-16-2007, 11:33 AM
Thanks!
Sporty Miley
01-16-2007, 02:17 PM
i thinks it's really good!
Mileyroxs97
01-16-2007, 02:21 PM
i love it
Lanae_M
01-16-2007, 03:24 PM
Thanks! I will write more tonight!
Mileycyrusfanx33
01-16-2007, 03:28 PM
luv it!
Lanae_M
01-16-2007, 03:29 PM
Thanks sooo much!!!!!!
hannah_montana.boston
01-16-2007, 04:53 PM
mor
go pats
Lanae_M
01-18-2007, 03:21 PM
Chapter 2 Asking is all you had to do
After showing Ethan and Katie around, Miley Lily and Oliver met up with them for lunch. When they were showing them around they learned that Ethan and Katie are twins, Ethen loves to play basketbal, and Katie is a black belt in karate."So, how do you like school so far?" miley asked ethan. "It's great,everyone is so nice here." Ethan replied. After school that day the gang dicided to go over to Ethan and Katie's house. Oliver began playing basketball with Ethan so the girls ran upstairs to Katie's room. By the time Miley's dad came to pick them up they were really good friends with Ethan and Katie. So they hung out with them for the next couple of weeks. Then Ethan pulled miley aside and asked,"Miley, I was wondering if you would like to go out with me some time?". Miley atimatically said "Yes, I would love to go out with you Ethan!"
Meanwhile:
Katie and Oliver were talking and Oliver said " I am going to sound really stupid but I was wondering if you could teach me Karate?" "Why?" Katie asked. "Well, not exatcly karate but to be tough cause I'm a wimp and I want to impress this girl." "Lily?" Katie asked assuringly. " Is it that obvious?" Oliver asked embarrased.Katie agreed to help him so that next saturday Katie taught him some moves and got him to work out alittle. "Alright were done for now and I will see you next week." Katie said reminding Oliver. "Thanks Katie!" Oliver said. "Your welcome," she replied. On that same day Ethan took Miley out for pizza and a movie. Ethan walked her home and as they got to the house he leaned in to kiss Miley when Miley then saw .............
To be continued-
What do you think?
Fire-Chicken
01-18-2007, 03:34 PM
More!!
Mileycyrusfanx33
01-18-2007, 03:35 PM
Omg More!
Lanae_M
01-18-2007, 03:36 PM
Thanks! I will try to update tommorrow! Thanks again! I thought no one liked it!
Sporty Miley
01-19-2007, 04:09 PM
please post more i'm begging u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sporty Miley
02-18-2007, 04:37 PM
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ post more!!!!!!! you haven't in like 4ever!!!!!!!!!!!
sar522
02-18-2007, 09:26 PM
great
Sporty Miley
02-20-2007, 10:02 AM
Plz post more!!!!!!!!
Lanae_M
02-23-2007, 07:44 AM
I will later I promise! I have had so much homework and I had to do some stuff for my mom that I couldn't get on here! Sorry!!!!!!!!!
Lanae_M
02-23-2007, 06:56 PM
Chapter 3 Jake?
Miley saw Jake. She quickly pulled away from Ethan and said, "Hi Jake, I thought you were in romania till this summer!" " Well I was but we finished early" Jake replied, "Who's your friend?" "Oh Jake this is Ethan, He just moved here." Miley said. "Well its nice seeing you and I guess I will see you around." Jake said. Ethan quickly said bye to Miley and left. The next day Miley called Lily. " Lily, Jakes back!" Miley said. "Really? Well thats good so now you can finally date him!" Lily said happily. "But now I'm confused because I think I like Ethan but I like Jake too!" Miley replied.
Meanwhile Katie was talking to Oliver on the phone and was giving him tips on how to ask Lily out. Oliver was really worried about asking her but Katie said " She will say yes Oliver! and the perfect time to do it is to ask her at the dance next friday!"
Sporty Miley
02-26-2007, 03:44 PM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sporty Miley
02-26-2007, 03:45 PM
oh and thanks 4 updating (your fan fiction)!!!!!
Lanae_M
02-27-2007, 05:43 PM
Your welcome and will update soon! Promise!
Sporty Miley
02-27-2007, 07:11 PM
Ok!!!
Lanae_M
03-08-2007, 06:35 PM
Chapter 4 What!!!
The next day Miley,Lily and Kate go to Mileys house to talk about Mileys delima. In the end all they know is that Miley has to figure it out on her own.
On Monday morning, Miley avoides Jake and Ethan in hopes that they wont notice her. She ends up getting away with it but not for long.Jake and Ethan talk and then go up to Miley. Then Jake says," Miley, we need you to chose between us. Tell us which one you like better and the other one will be okay with it." Miley looks so confused but says" give me some time" and run off.
Meanwhile Lily is talking to Kate and asks" are you going out with Oliver cause you sure do talk to him alot." "No! I am not, I am his friend and nothing more I promise!" Lily looks relieved and they go off to class.
Sporty Miley
03-09-2007, 03:47 PM
More!!!!!!!!!
Lanae_M
03-09-2007, 05:19 PM
Will after I get some more comments I promise!
Sporty Miley
03-09-2007, 08:42 PM
ok!
Lanae_M
05-01-2007, 07:47 PM
Chapter 5 Confused
Miley didnt know what to do. Ethan is nice and funny and so is Jake. She's liked Jake for a long time but she did go out with Ethan. She has no idea who to chose.
Meanwhile Kate is helping Oliver to pluck up the courage and ask Lily to the dance."Maybe she doesnt like me and she'll say no" Oliver said to himself over and over again" Kate reasured him saying "She will say yes Oliver" for the thousandth time.
Meanwhile Lilly is in her room writing in her journal. She cant believe that she was actully falling for Oliver. I mean Oliver! what was she thinking she kept telling herself. Even though she has known for a very long time that she liked him. "Maybe he'll ask me to the dance" she said to herself.
luv2act
05-01-2007, 10:22 PM
ohh, awesome! morezz!
flower1
05-01-2007, 10:33 PM
forget the bumpped thread!! more1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Lanae_M
05-02-2007, 07:23 AM
Thanks! Will soon!!!!!!
Lanae_M
05-02-2007, 07:42 PM
Chapter 6 Will You ...............
*Oliver was trying to calm himself down as he got ready for school. He had to ask Lily to the dance today because it's tommorrow night. He got to school and Kate pushed him towards Lily.*
Oliver- Hey Lilly, whats up?
Lilly- not much just getting ready for first hour. is their anything on your mind?
Oliver- Yeah but I'll tell you later
*Oliver quickly ran off and Lilly looked confused*
*Meanwhile Kate got to school and ran into Ryan. Ryan is a really cute guy in her French class*
Ryan- Hey Kate whats up
Kate- nothing much
Ryan- Hey I was wondering if you wanted to maybe shoot some hoops with me later.
Kate- Sure I would love to kick your but at basketball
Ryan- Great see you at 3:00
*Ryan ran off and Kate was jumping for Joy!*
*Miley still cant decide who she wants to date but then she sees ----- talking to -----! She couldent belive what she was hearing!
thobi123
05-04-2007, 03:09 PM
more girl
Lanae_M
05-06-2007, 05:25 PM
Thanks! any other comments?
mileysbestpal164
05-07-2007, 05:10 PM
yeah i have the comment who the heckie is ------- and ---------
write more girl!
Lanae_M
05-07-2007, 06:52 PM
Will soon!
Lanae_M
05-12-2007, 06:01 PM
Anyother comments?
m&jrule
05-24-2007, 02:46 PM
please more please!
Lanae_M
05-28-2007, 08:57 PM
I promise I will do it on Tuesday
awhitty
05-29-2007, 04:59 PM
i can's wait til you updated , i'm loveing this story .. can't wait for more.
Lanae_M
05-30-2007, 10:42 AM
Chapter 7 OMG!!!
Miley heard Ethan talking to Becca about going out on a date with him tonight! She could not believe him!. She ran over to Jake and said
*Jake I'm -- -----! and I am -- ---- ---- you!*
Meanwhile Lily was in her room pacing. She was wondering what Oliver wanted. Then the phone rang.
*Lily, It's Oliver, I need to talk to you so please meet me at the beach?*
*Okay* Lily said confused still.
She went down to the beach and saw Oliver looking nervous. She ran to him and said
*What do you want to tell me? And why are you so nervous?*
*Lily will you go to the dance with me on friday* He said in a hurry.
*I would love to go with you!* She replied. Then her phone rang and She said
*I will be right there!* and said bye an left.
Kate quickly got dressed and ran over to the courts to play basketball with Ryan. She saw him and they played. She won three games and then she had to go home for dinner when Ryan said
*Will you go to the dance with me Kate?*
Kate said sure and ran home to call Miley and Lilly!
jbluver
05-30-2007, 01:41 PM
Please post more! OR ELSE!
Lanae_M
05-31-2007, 03:33 PM
Chapter 8 Friday
*Jake I'm sorry and I am in Love with you!* Miley said and she ran and called Lily and told her what she just did. Then she asked Lily if she would help her get back at Ethan.
Oliver went to hang out at the beach when he saw Jake. He than asked
*Jake your back?*
*Yea, I am and do you know were Miley is? She ran off.* Jake said
*No I dont but I bet I can find out!* Oliver said as he ran off to find her.
Kate was at the mall picking out a dress for the dance when Miley and Lilly pulled her away. They told her the plan to get back at her brother and she said
*Your going to do What!*
Sorry its so short!
hannah_montana.boston
05-31-2007, 03:40 PM
omg more they shoulda had kate 1st investagate
Lanae_M
05-31-2007, 09:56 PM
after 1 more comment!
hannah_montana.boston
06-01-2007, 07:03 PM
1 more comment eh............................
welll............................................. ........
more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Lanae_M
06-04-2007, 07:01 PM
I will tomorrow if I can!
hannah_montana.boston
06-05-2007, 03:48 PM
its yerstday's tommrow now
Lanae_M
06-06-2007, 05:58 PM
WIll later I have to go help my mom
hannah_montana.boston
06-08-2007, 03:26 PM
ok moreeeeeeeeeeeee
Lanae_M
06-14-2007, 08:24 PM
Chapter 9 Before the Dance
Miley, Lily and Kate were at Mileys house thinking up all the things they needed to pull their little suprise on Ethan. At the Dance Miley was going to dance with him and say lets go outside. Ethan would follow her thinking they were going to kiss and then boy would he be suprised. Lilly and kate will be waiting for him so they can yell and scream at him for random things. He'll then be confused and then Miley will Pour the punch on his head and give him a piece of her mind. Then she would go get Becca and tell her what happened so Ethan will be humiliated at the Dance.
Meanwhile Oliver went to Mileys house and they told him the plan. He ran off to fill in Jake on what was happening.
Oliver told Jake what was going on and Jake quickly agreed to help.
Back to the girls, they got so caught up in the plan they forgot that they still had to get ready for the dance!
More soon I promise!
Lanae_M
06-18-2007, 02:10 PM
Chapter 9 The Dance
The girls got together an hour later at Mileys house so her dad could take them to the dance. They were so excited. They got to the dance and THey all got asked to dance by Oliver, Ryan and Jake of course. Then Ethan came into the gym. Miley quickly stoped dancing and went over to him.
*Do you wana dance?* Miley asked flirtatisly.
*Sure* He aswered
They danced and they had an awesome time. He leaned in to kiss her an she quickly grabbed his hand and led him outside. He was so suprised when he saw Lily and Kate out and they had Becca with them. Miley went over to Becca and they picked up the punch bowl and poured it over his head. He ran out crying like a little baby.
(Please comment but I cant update again till Friday or Saturday.)
hannah_montana.boston
06-19-2007, 04:31 PM
wow moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Lanae_M
06-23-2007, 03:34 PM
1 more comment please
more that's really good! I've never seen this fan fiction.. more!
Lanae_M
06-26-2007, 12:20 PM
Chapter 10 Yay Us!!!!
Everyone laughed there heads off as Ethan ran out. Becca thanked Miley and went off to hang out with her other friends. The girls danced with there men the rest of the dance.
Ryan and Kate had a great time and he asked her out again.
Oliver and Lily also had a great time. He even walked her home and kissed her!
Jake took Miley by the hand after the dance and took a walk around the Park by Mileys house. They talked and she apologized and they had a great time talking to each other. Jake told her about his movie and how much fun he had. Miley decided that if they were going to date their had to be no secrets. So she told him she was Hannah Montana. He didnt believe her till she put on the wig. Then she told him to never tell any one and he agreed amedietly. He thought it was awesome. He then kissed her and Miley new she made the right choice.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!
wow.. do i hear a sequel??
hannah_montana.boston
06-27-2007, 12:28 PM
wat the end there MUST be more
Lanae_M
06-27-2007, 09:33 PM
not right now but I might make a sequel!
hannah_montana.boston
06-28-2007, 12:59 PM
yay a seequel
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