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best_of_both_worlds16
01-15-2007, 01:01 PM
This is my first fanfic. so sorry if its bad. it wasn't all by me some people gave me an idea!
Miley walked in the livingroom just as the phone started ringing. She went over and picked it up.
Miley: " Hello?"
Person: " Hey Miles. It's Oliver."
Miley: " Whats up, Oliver?"
Oliver: " I was wondering if I could talk to you?"
Miley: " Of course, Oliver! Whats up?"
Oliver: " I wanna talk to you in person."
Miley: " Ok. Come over then!"
Oliver: " Ok, bye!"
Miley: " Bye!"
She hears the ringtone before hanging up thinking, " I wonder whats up with Oliver? He sounded different. Guess I'll found out later." She walks into the kitchen to make a sandwiche. Miley gets out the bread, mayo, ham, cheddar cheese, and the shredder. By the time Olivers get here Miley has put on the mayo, one piece of ham, one layer of shredded cheddar, and another piece of ham when she hears a quick knock and Oliver comes in. Miley looks up and says:
Miley: " Hey Ollie. So whatcha wanna talk about?"
She goes back to her sandwiche putting on another layer of shredded cheese and the last piece of of ham when............

does any like it? any comments, anything you don't like?
I need four good comments to go on unless I don't feel like waiting!

Baby Vanessa
01-15-2007, 01:02 PM
do more plz

best_of_both_worlds16
01-15-2007, 01:04 PM
wow it looked like much more when I was typing it on the thing. now it looks so small. and I will do more when more peoples reply!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-15-2007, 01:10 PM
does anyone like it other then Baby Vanessa?

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 07:15 PM
doesn't anyone like it? I have 16 other chapters of this! please post something.

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-16-2007, 07:17 PM
I LIKE IT!post moreeee!!!!...plz

DuhXitsXAnnieX
01-16-2007, 07:19 PM
LUH-OVE (love) IT! Keep writing!:D

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 07:27 PM
one more comment and I will.

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 07:29 PM
come on peoples I need one more comment!

mileyz fan tennessean gurl!
01-16-2007, 07:30 PM
omg i luv it!!! RITE MORW!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 07:52 PM
ok now I will!

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-16-2007, 07:53 PM
YAY!lol

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 08:35 PM
Chapter Two(I don't have names for them):
Oliver: You only think of as friends, right? Nothing else?
Miley(says slowly): yeah(stops saying slowly).....why Oliver?
Oliver(looking relieved): Cuz I didn't want you to get mad at me at what I'm gonna say later.
Miley goes back to work on her last layer of cheddar cheese. She muttered " Done!" and walks over to the couch gesturing for Oliver to follow. He does and sits after Miley does. She takes a bite of her food staring at Oliver waiting for him to say something. Oliver doesn't, he's staring at his feet. After a few seconds silence Miley swallows.
Miley: Ok Oliver. Whats up?
Oliver(looks at Miley): Oh Miles, my dad died. There was a bomb attack. four people.......no survivers."
Miley had taken a bite of her sandwiche and started choking. She started coughing and finally it came up. She spat it back on her plate.
Miley(knowing about his dad going to Iraq cuz he was in the army when he was eight years old): Oh my gosh, Oliver! I'm so sorry!
Oliver: I found out a few minutes before I called you and ran to the nearest phone booth. I had to talk to you cuz of you mom. and theres something else............

ok I need for more comments to post another chapter! I have 15 chapters(I dunno if I'd get to post them all though)so far!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 08:55 PM
does anyone like it?

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 09:10 PM
so nobody likes it?

best_of_both_worlds16
01-16-2007, 09:22 PM
well ok. but if anyone wants me to post more I need four good comments. gotta go bye!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 02:10 PM
oh come on! please post something. like tell me why you don't like it! or something!

YouKnowYouLoveMe
01-17-2007, 02:12 PM
Great job!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 02:14 PM
thanx. now I need three more comments to post more!

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-17-2007, 02:18 PM
i like it!

Fire-Chicken
01-17-2007, 03:22 PM
I Lite It Too!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 05:49 PM
I'm bored. I don't feel like waiting for the last comment so I'll post the next chapter.

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 06:01 PM
Chapter three:
He trailed off lost in thought. Miley couldn't take it anymore and she thought she had thought that she could take anymore surprises. She was wrong.
Miley: What is it?
Oliver: I think I like Lilly.
Miley gaped at him- she completely forgotten about her sandwiche, which just fell onto the floor.
Miley: W-w-what?
Oliver: You heard me!
Miley(half smiling but still shocked): Wow!
Oliver: By the way, you know when Lilly's coming back?
Lilly had gone to her Aunts house in Arizona for the summer.
Miley(almost completely recovered from the last news): Um, week before school starts.
Oliver: Oh, she'll miss the funeral.
Miley: Aint ya gonna tell her?
Oliver: And ruin her summer? No way! Will you come?
Miley: Of course I will if ya want me to. I'm here for you for now and forever!

ok, does anyone like it? I need four good comments to post the next chapter! or unless I'm bored and feel like posting it before.

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-17-2007, 06:06 PM
more!pweeze!

DuhXitsXAnnieX
01-17-2007, 06:07 PM
lllluuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvv iiiiiiiiiiittttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 06:13 PM
I now need two more comments.

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 06:42 PM
ok I don't feel like waiting and I'm gonna have to leave soon so I'm gonna post the next chapter!

MileyRox1174
01-17-2007, 06:49 PM
please post it!!! I love it!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 06:58 PM
Chapter four:
Miley and Oliver talked a little longer carefully avoiding the subject of Lilly and Olivers dad.
Oliver: I should be going. It's almost dark. Wow, we've been talking all afternoon. but before I leave I wanna ask you something......
He trails off looking embaressed.
Miley: Ok, what?
Oliver: How do I ask out Lilly when she gets back?
Miley(smiles): Er, well don't do what me and Jake did, ok? Just ask her, I have the feeling she feels the same way about you.
Oliver asked how but all Miley would do is smile and shake her head. Then Olivers face dropped saying he just remembered his dad and said he had to go.
Later that day she went in her room to find Lillys Aunts number so she could call. After thinking a bit she decided not to tell her about Olivers dad, Oliver did say not to but she still felt guilty. She finds the phone and starts dialing.
Voice: Hello, Truscott residents, Rose speaking.
Miley: Hello, Mrs. Truscott. This is Miley Stewart. Can I speak to Lilly please?
Mrs. Truscott: Sure, Miley. Lilly told me you might call.
Miley: Thank you!
Lilly(yelling): MILEY YOU CALLED!
Miley(yelling, too): YES I DID! (stops yelling) Whats up? Whats it like in Arizona?
Lilly: Hot. I saw the Grand Canyon today.
Miley: Sweet!
Lilly: Miles, guess what?
Miley: What?
Lilly: I have a.........

I want four good comments for me to post more. I gotta go eat then I gotta go to youth. dunno if I'll be back tonight!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 07:08 PM
does anyone like it(btw I'm back)?

MileyRox1174
01-17-2007, 07:19 PM
LOVE IT!!!!!! I think I know what she is gonna say!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 07:22 PM
LOVE IT!!!!!! I think I know what she is gonna say!!!
what do you think she gonna say? and I need atleast two more comments.

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 07:27 PM
I only have a few minutes before I have to go to youth. so somebody say something and I might be able to post another chapter.

DuhXitsXAnnieX
01-17-2007, 07:27 PM
I LOVE IT! If I comment 2 times will it count?

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 07:31 PM
I LOVE IT! If I comment 2 times will it count?
right now it will but it won't most of the time. I have to go in like 4 min. I'll post the next chapter.

DuhXitsXAnnieX
01-17-2007, 07:35 PM
okay...post#2 Post More!!!!!! :p

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 07:51 PM
Chapter five:
Lilly: Boyfriend!
Miley: What! Oh no!
Lilly: Yeah is- wait! Oh no! What does that mean?
Miley: Oh nothing. So whats he like?
Lilly(in a dreamy voice): He's great! He's moving home two days before I leave!
Miley(not sounding that happy): What about Oliver?
Lilly(sounding annoyed): What about him? He's made it clear he doesn't like me.
Miley thinking " Oh but you are wrong! Oh no!"
Lilly: BTW how is Oliver?
Miley(who paused thinking for a moment): Ok I guess.
Lilly: Oh. ok. Gotta go! Bye, Miles!
Miley(feeling horrible): Bye, Lil!
Miley goes back down stairs back down stairs and is about to go out in patio with her guitar when she remembered about her sandwiche and (when Oliver and her were talking she picked it up and put it on the table) turns around to see Jackson go ever and stuff it in his mouth and then spit back out in the plate.
Jackson: Yuck, mayo! On a sandwiche! Gross!
Miley: Jackson you are sick!
Jackson(jumps): Oh Miles, I didn't know you were there!
Miley: Jackson, Olivers dad died. Four people.....car bombed...(Mileys eyes fill with tears as she remembers her mom, who died in a car crash)She trails off but Jackson gets the picture and goes up to her and puts his arm around her sholder.
Jackson: Miles, are you ok?
Miley: Just thinkin' 'bout mom......
Jackson: Me, too. but things move on even after there gone!
Miley: Yeah....Hey, you got that from a song!
Jackson smiles and leaves the room leaving Miley alone. She goes out to the patio and then all of a sudden Jake pops in her mind and she sits down and sings If We Were A Movie.

I want four good comments to go to the next chapter. I gotta go to youth now. it's gonna start in 10 min! bye!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 09:34 PM
anyone like it?

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 10:00 PM
I want four comments to post the next chapter so someone post something.

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 10:16 PM
I'm gonna leave soon someone post something!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-17-2007, 10:24 PM
gotta go guys. won't post anything more till tomorrow. night!

Miley Smiley Cyrus
01-17-2007, 10:47 PM
like it

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-18-2007, 03:49 PM
More Plzzzzz

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 03:54 PM
ok. I'll post more when I get home. I'm at the library and I left my journal in the car.

Fire-Chicken
01-18-2007, 04:46 PM
More!!
btw what is youth?

hannah_montana.boston
01-18-2007, 05:12 PM
on2nd page but good

Lanae_M
01-18-2007, 05:32 PM
More

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 07:01 PM
ok I'll post more now.(youth means youth group at my church. I have it every wed.).

Baby Vanessa
01-18-2007, 07:03 PM
more plz

MileyRox1174
01-18-2007, 07:10 PM
I knew she was going to say "Boyfriend"!!!! I was sooooooo right!!! BTW, great chapter! PLZ post more!!!!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 07:15 PM
Chapter six:
Later that say Oliver called and said that the funeral was this Wedsneday
(two days from now). Miley sits down on the couch. Robbie comes home and sees Miley.
Robbie: Whats up?
Miley: Olivers dad died in Iraq. Funeral Wedsneday. Wants us to come.
Robbie: Oh wow, that must be tough on him. Did ya tell him we'd go?
Miley: Yeah, and of course I told him we'd go!
Robbie: So what?! Oliver's my friend! I'd rather be be his friend then Hannah Montana any day!
Robbie: That's my girl! Just like your mom!
Miley: Really?
Robbie: Really. Oh and you have someone here to see you!
When Miley asked who it was all he did was wink. So she went outside and saw none other then.........

Ok, I know this is short but I had to cut it off somewhere good. I want four comments to post the next chapter!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 07:22 PM
does anyone like it?

Lanae_M
01-18-2007, 07:28 PM
Love it!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 07:50 PM
ok I now want three more comments.

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-18-2007, 08:18 PM
more pweeeeeeeeeeze

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 08:30 PM
I'll post more later. don't have time. in a RPG.

MileyRox1174
01-18-2007, 08:39 PM
more please!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 09:13 PM
ok I'll post the next chapter now.

Miley Cryus fan1
01-18-2007, 09:24 PM
awsome post more PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZzz

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 09:25 PM
Chapter seven:
....Jake Ryan! Miley screamed and hugged him.
Jake: Sup?
Miley(half screaming): Jake want are you doing here?!
Jake:I wanted my date. and I'm finished with the film.
Miley: Aw!
Jake kissed her saying he has to go and he'll go Miley and left leaving Miley glued to the mat on the front door. Miley stands there and by the time Jake arrived it was getting dark. Robbie came out with the trash and put it in the bin.
Miley snapped out of her trance.
Miley: Oh Dad, it's you!
Robbie: Whats that suppose to mean?
Miley: Meaning your daughter just got kissed!
Robbie: WHAT?
Miley left and went to her room. It was now 8:00 pm even though she wasn't tired she got into her pjs and got into bed. Hours later she fell asleep. When she woke up from her dream she though "Whoa, that was a weird dream. Oh how am I gonna tell Oliver!" She had a dream that Lilly and Oliver were together and happy but then Lillys new boyfriend showed up and ruined everything. "What am I gonna do now?" thought Miley. She, Jackson, and Robbie have to go shopping for there clothes.

Ok, I want four good comments!

Miley Cryus fan1
01-18-2007, 09:28 PM
Love It Post More Pronto Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 09:33 PM
is it that good? my mom only called it cute. but I want three more people to post comments. or I'll take two more. I have twenty- two chapters of these. I'm thinking about writing another one soon.

Miley Cryus fan1
01-18-2007, 09:52 PM
yes its really good you should go pro

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 09:59 PM
I wish people would post! I have to go soon!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-18-2007, 10:04 PM
gotta go now! be back on tomorrow! bye ya'll! post some more and when I get on tomorrow I'll post more!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-19-2007, 06:28 PM
nobody wants the next chapter?

best_of_both_worlds16
01-19-2007, 06:47 PM
ok can you guys tell me why you don't like it(I'm trying to bump it)?

MileyRox1174
01-19-2007, 06:55 PM
please oh please post the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-19-2007, 07:38 PM
ok I'll post more later.

MileyRox1174
01-19-2007, 08:40 PM
yaaay!! lol

MileyRox1174
01-20-2007, 09:30 PM
can you post it please?? I'm gonna scream if you don't!!

MileyRox1174
01-22-2007, 09:42 PM
*scream at the top of my lungs* (well okay, maybe in my mind, but oh well...) please oh please post more more more!!!! I need more!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-23-2007, 08:19 PM
oh I'm sorry I haven't posted more! I'll go get my journal and post more!

MileyRox1174
01-23-2007, 08:36 PM
you don't just type it on the computer?? lol not saying that's bad or anything!! That's what I do! To make it easier! Lol anyways! Post more!!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-23-2007, 08:37 PM
Chapter eight:
They went shopping which took the rest of the day considering Milet slept till noon. They also ate and got an outfit for Hannah to wear. It was now 6 pm and Miley had nothing to do so she decided to ask more about Lillys boyfriend. She dialed the number. It ringed four times.
Voice: Hello, Truscott residents, Rose speaking
Miley: Hello, Mrs Truscott. It's Miley Stewart. Can I speak to Lilly?
Mrs Truscott: Sure Miley.
Miley: Thank you!
Lilly(yelling): MILEY!
Miley(yelling, too): LILLY!
Lilly(stopped yelling): Miley, whats up?
Miley(also stopped yelling): Oh, I was wondering how old is your boyfriend and his name?
Lilly(dreamy voice): Oh, his name is Elijah Musso and he's 14 at the moment.
Miley: Oh. You ever Oliver?
Lilly: I wouldn't be dating would I?
Miley(knowing Lilly didn't give the answer to her question dropped it): I suppose..... Guess what?
Lilly: What?
Miley: Jakes back!
Lilly: Oh my gosh! Really?
Miley: Really. Well, he's done with filming and he said he wanted his date!
Lilly: Oh thats sweet!
Miley: Hey Lilly? I gotta go. I wanna go Jake.
Lilly: Ok Miles! Bye!
Miley: Bye!
She put down the phone then picked it up again and dialed Jakes number. It rings two times then......

ok I want 3-4 good comments! sorry I haven't posted anything in a while. but gotta go now. bye!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-23-2007, 08:38 PM
I do it that way cuz I have ideas and I couldn't get to the computer at the moment and I didn't want to forget them.

MileyRox1174
01-24-2007, 05:18 PM
oh!! that's good! Great chapter!! please oh please post the next chapter!! Lol that was funny! you used "Musso"!! That's him though...oh well not in Hannah Montana!! lol so please write more!!

Fire-Chicken
01-25-2007, 02:14 PM
Please Write More!! It's really Good!!

perfect10n
01-25-2007, 03:24 PM
ok I'll post more now.(youth means youth group at my church. I have it every wed.).

me too.

perfect10n
01-25-2007, 03:29 PM
OMG this is a WAAAAY goot fan fic post more! Hurry!

mileyobsessed13
01-25-2007, 05:32 PM
post more please im having more fun reading this than my hw so please post more!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-25-2007, 06:43 PM
sorry I can''t I will tomorrow! I'm staying at my friends house tonight. gotta go now anyway! bye!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-26-2007, 07:46 PM
ok I'll post the next chapter now!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-26-2007, 07:49 PM
oh!! that's good! Great chapter!! please oh please post the next chapter!! Lol that was funny! you used "Musso"!! That's him though...oh well not in Hannah Montana!! lol so please write more!!
I uses 'Musso' cuz I couldn't think at the moment. we were getting mcflurrys from mickey ds(mcdonalds)and the last name popped in my mind so I used it :P

best_of_both_worlds16
01-26-2007, 08:07 PM
Chapter nine:
Voice: Hello? Jakes speaking.
Miley: Hey Jake. It's Miley
Jake: Hey Miley! Sup?
Miley: Um, I was wondering, um, when we could go out?
Jake: We can go out anytime. When do ya wanna?
Miley: Um, dunno. Aint you suppose to make those plans?
Jake: Oh right. Um, how about this friday at 7 pm? I could can pick you up and take you somewhere?
Miley: Sounds great!
They talked for an hour then Jake had to go. Miley sat and thought for 30 minutes then decided to go to bed. So she went and changed in her pjs and got into the bed. 30 minutes later she was sleeping. She had set her alarm clock before she went to bed. At 8:00 am the alarm went off waking Miley with a start. "Ugg. Todays the day!" Miley thought. She got up and went downstairs. Robbie was making breakfast when she arrived.
Robbie: Good mornin'!
Miley: Whats so good about this morning?
Just then Jackson walked in. He went to the kitchen and got 3 pieces of bacon and a piece of toast and went off again. Miley nibbled a piece of bacon but she wasn't really hungry. She was nervous.
Robbie: should leave at 9:30.
Miley: Ok. I'm gonna go take a shower.She left the room and went to the bathroom and took a shower and then got dressed. She had gotten a black sleeve-less dress for the funeral. Miley went back down and saw nobody there so she sat on the couch, waiting. 10 minutes later Jackson and robbie came in wearing matching black tuxes. 30 minutes later they arrived.

I want four good comments to post the next chapter!

flower1
01-26-2007, 08:38 PM
more more more more.is that 4 comments? :)

best_of_both_worlds16
01-26-2007, 08:40 PM
more more more more.is that 4 comments? :)
hehe sorry they have to be by different people!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-27-2007, 02:57 PM
does anyone want the next chapter? I'm bored!

Fire-Chicken
01-27-2007, 03:13 PM
I WANT!! Lol, It's Really Good!! Write More!

SmileyMiley11
01-27-2007, 03:14 PM
its cool

best_of_both_worlds16
01-27-2007, 03:20 PM
ok I want one more comment then I'll post the next chapter.

MileyRox1174
01-27-2007, 04:22 PM
I really really love it!!

MileyRox1174
01-27-2007, 04:22 PM
There! that's the last comment. Post it now!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-27-2007, 04:57 PM
ok I will!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-27-2007, 05:08 PM
Chapter Ten:
They saw Oliver and his mom talking. When they walked up they stopped.
Mrs Oken: Hi Miley, Robbie, and Jackson.
Miley: Hi Mrs Oken
Robbie: We are sorry of what happened, Kim.
Mrs Oken: Thank you.
Miley: We came early to help. Anything you want us to do?
Mrs Oken gave them stuff to do and then the funeral started. Oliver and Miley met Jake there.
Miley: Jake, what are you doing here?
Jake: Oliver invited me
Oliver nodded.
Miley: Oh, ok.
Then it was over and they said good bye to everybody and left. About ten minutes into getting in the car.
Miley: That wasn't as bad as I thought it would be.
Miley didn't really remember her moms. she was only seven.
Jackson: Yeah.
Robbie: Yeah.
When they got home Mileywent upstairs to her room and changed into a black tank top and black jean shorts. She decied to go to the beach. When she got there she saw.......

Ok I want 3-4 good comments.

best_of_both_worlds16
01-28-2007, 08:47 PM
does anyone like it?

MileyRox1174
01-29-2007, 07:56 PM
I Love It!! More More More!!

best_of_both_worlds16
01-29-2007, 09:13 PM
I'll post more when other people post comments.

qtneci
01-29-2007, 10:43 PM
ooh! it's getting good! more plz!

MileyRox1174
02-01-2007, 05:55 PM
MORE!! NOW!! PLEEEZ!! Pleez?? For me?

flower1
02-02-2007, 12:44 AM
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vanessa*anne
02-02-2007, 05:37 AM
its good. please more!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-02-2007, 05:09 PM
ok I'll post more let me get my journal!

MileyRox1174
02-02-2007, 05:29 PM
NOW!! MORE!! PLEASE!! Pleez??!!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-02-2007, 05:35 PM
Chapter eleven:
Oliver sitting on the beach. She came up and sat next to him.
Miley: Hey Smokin' Oken!
Oliver: Hey Miles.
Miley: Whats up?
Oliver: Oh you know..
Miley: Yeah.
Oliver(looks at Miley): Did this bring up memories of your mom?
Miley nodded.
Oliver: Sorry.
Miley: Its not your fault and it was seven years ago.
Oliver: Yeah, I remember.
Miley(couldn't think of anything else): I talked to Lilly the other day?
Oliver: Really? Did you tell her anything about it?
Miley: No and felt horrible about it!
Oliver laughed.
Miley: She also told me something.
Oliver: What?
Miley: She said she met somebody.
Considering by the silence Oliver felt bad.
Miley: Um, well she said she wanted to move on from you cuz she couldn't wait forever.
Knowing Lilly didn't say that but was thinking that.
Oliver: Guess I waited so long, huh?
Miley: You still have a chance!
Oliver: Whats his name?
Miley: Elijah Musso.
Oliver: Oh, I don't like him already!
Miley laughed then got serious.
Miley: What about when she finds out?
Oliver: Don't wanna think about it!
Miley: Ok.
It was now 2 pm and they decided to get something to eat. They met Jake at the food place and ate with him and went to the movies.

Ok I want 3-4 good comments!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-02-2007, 05:55 PM
anyone like it?

MileyRox1174
02-03-2007, 09:37 AM
YES!! That was good! More please!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-04-2007, 05:49 PM
I'll type more later. gotta go to youth choir now! bye!

MileyRox1174
02-05-2007, 08:36 PM
More!! Please?!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-06-2007, 05:45 PM
I'll post more when two more people reply!

qtneci
02-08-2007, 07:29 PM
more plz!

MileyRox1174
02-08-2007, 07:45 PM
Quick...one more person reply (besides me)!! I NEED the next chapter!! PLEASE!!

roxy_xoxomileyfan
02-08-2007, 09:26 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-09-2007, 02:09 PM
I'll post more later. I'll have to go soon anyway. glad yall like it!

Fire-Chicken
02-09-2007, 03:17 PM
Mooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!

MileyRox1174
02-11-2007, 09:34 PM
^Yeah, I would say the same thing!!

MUST!!!
POST!!!
MORE!!!
NOW!!!
(PLEASE?!)

best_of_both_worlds16
02-12-2007, 02:19 PM
ok ok! I'll post more now. unless I have to go unexpectly(warning ya).

best_of_both_worlds16
02-12-2007, 02:53 PM
Chapter twelve
Its been 3 weeks later and Miley and Jake are getting close. They had a great first date, too. Oliver and Miley are best friends than ever. The three of them were at the mall when they saw a girl that looked there age.
Miley: Hi. whats your name? I'm Miley-
Girl: Oh my gosh! you are Jake Ryan!
Jake: Yes and this is my girlfriend Miley Stewart as she was trying to say and this is Oliver.
Girl: Sorry. ok sweet. I'm Sam.
Oliver: How old are you?
Sam: 14. you guys?
Miley: 14, too.
Jake: Ditto.
Oliver: Same here.
Sam: Sweet!
Miley: Are you going to the middle school here?
Sam: Yeah, I'm gonna. We had to move here cuz of my dads work.
Oliver: So..do you have a boyfriend?
Miley elbowed him.
Oliver: Ow! What was that for?
Sam laughed.
Sam: Do you do that often?
Miley: Sadly, yes.
Oliver: Hey!
They all laughed.
Sam: But no I don't have one. Why?
But by the way she was smiling she knew why.
Oliver(starting to turn red): Oh,um,er what about going out with me sometime?
Sam(smiling): like as boyfriend and girlfriend?
Oliver(red now): Yeah.
Sam: Sure!

Ok I want 3-4 good comments!

Fire-Chicken
02-12-2007, 03:08 PM
Great and Funny!!
Moooore!!

MileyRox1174
02-12-2007, 07:47 PM
^Yeah I know!! POST MORE!!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-13-2007, 05:31 PM
I'll post more when 1-2 more people say something.

best_of_both_worlds16
02-13-2007, 05:47 PM
does anyone like it? if not what don't you like?

MileyRox1174
02-13-2007, 08:32 PM
I LOVE IT!! MORE MORE MORE! (Oh please oh please oh please...!!)

best_of_both_worlds16
02-14-2007, 03:05 PM
fine I'll post more. but after this I'll probably have to go.

best_of_both_worlds16
02-14-2007, 03:21 PM
Chapter 13
So the four of them now went to eat. Then Miley asked Oliver if they could talk alone. Of course he said yes.
Oliver: What?
Miley: Should I tell Jake about my Hannah thing?
Oliver(thinks for a second): I think you should. he seems like a nice guy. I would.
Miley: Ok, thank you. I'll tell him tonight!
Oliver: Why tonight?
Miley: We have a date
Oliver: Oh, lets get back.
Miley: Ok
When they got back Sam and Jake were laughing.
Jake: Yes I have a girlfriend. I already said that didn't I? But Its Miley.
Sam(turning red): Oh yeah. sorry. I have like short term memory sometimes.
Jake: Doesn't everybody?
Sam(laughs): I guess. Oh, hey guys!
Miley and Oliver: Hey!
They all hanged out together and went into different stores till it got to 4 pm.
Sam: Wow, I have to go! Hey Oliver? Can I have your number? and the rest of ya'lls?
They all switched numbers.
Miley: Yeah, I guess time flies by when you are having fun! Gotta go, too. Bye, guys! See ya tonight, Jake!
They all said bye and went there seperate ways. Finally it was 8 pm and Miley had decided to bring her wig if he doesn't believe her. At eight o' clock on the nose there was a knock on the door.
Miley: I'll get it!
But Jackson got there first.
Jackson: Oh, its only you. hi.
Robbie: Bye, Miles!

ok I want 3-4 good comments!
but I gotta go now ya'll! bye!

Fire-Chicken
02-14-2007, 04:12 PM
Great!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-14-2007, 05:41 PM
people post more if ya wanna hear more!

MileyRox1174
02-14-2007, 09:22 PM
Great! Post MORE!

best_of_both_worlds16
02-15-2007, 02:07 PM
when one more person comments I'll post more.

MileyRox1174
02-15-2007, 05:39 PM
Quick, somebody comment!! I really want the next chappie!

HannahMontanaX3
02-15-2007, 06:18 PM
more

MileyRox1174
02-15-2007, 08:01 PM
Ha! That's the last comment! Post it!! POST MORE!!

Fire-Chicken
02-16-2007, 01:08 PM
Yeah, POST MORE!!

angelgurl101
02-25-2007, 12:36 AM
I Luv,Luv,LUV it...a few typeoes but its so great!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
03-19-2007, 09:44 PM
I'm sorry yall I haven't been posting. our computer crashed and I've been grounded. I'll post some more the next time I'm on if I bring my journal.

hmfhannahmontanafan
03-20-2007, 03:43 PM
LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
03-21-2007, 04:08 PM
crap I forgot my journal! I'll just make up what I remember from it. or I'll try.

best_of_both_worlds16
03-21-2007, 04:20 PM
Chapter 15
They got in the limo and started talking a bit then.
Miley: Jake?
Jake: Yeah?
Miley(takes a deep breath): I'm Hannah Montana!
Jake: Yeah, sure. I'm Johnny Depp!
Miley: No! Really! I am! Here's-pulling her wig at of her bag-my wig! I wear it to all of my concerts!
Jake(words full of doubt): You are not Hannah Montana!
Miley(about to start crying): Yes, I am!
Jake(getting mad now): No, you arn't!
By this time they had gotten to the place they were going to eat.
Miley(crying now): Yes, I am! And if you don't believe me..WE ARE OVER!
Miley gets out and starts running home,crying, but decides not to and go to the beach.

I'm sorry this chapter isn't that good and its really short. its like a summery of what happens. when the next time I come to the library I'll type the real chapter again.

_smiley_miley_14
06-02-2007, 07:00 PM
this is awsome post more

please

hannah_montana.boston
06-04-2007, 05:25 PM
more awwww their relationship was going so well she shoulda done like with oliver

best_of_both_worlds16
06-04-2007, 09:39 PM
ok I'll post more. let me get my journal!

best_of_both_worlds16
06-04-2007, 10:22 PM
ok I'll post the real chapter 15 then if I have time I'll do 16.
Chapter 15
Miley and Jake are in the limo.
Miley: Um, Jake?
Jake: Yeah?
Miley(takes a deep breath): I think it's time to tell you something?
Jake: What?
Miley: Well, you asked. I'm Hannah Montana!
Jake was silent for a moment but Miley wasn't going to talk till he did.
Jake: Yeah, right! I'm Johnny Depp!
Miley: I'm serious!
Jake: So your really Hannah Montana? Prove it!
Miley: I thought you'd asked!
She looks though her bag and takes out her wig and puts it on.
Miley: This is my wig. I wear it every concert.
Jake: Anybody can get a wig!
Miley: Jake, why would I lie? I thought you knew that I don't! And by the way you can't tell anybody but Jackson, Dad, Lilly, and Oliver!
Jake: I can't believe it! Just can't! It's impossible!
Miley: Nothings inpossible! What can I do to prove it to you!
Jake: Nothing! 'Cause you are not Hannah Montana!
Miley: Oh I'm not! If you don't believe me IT'S OVER!
They by then had gotten to the place Jake was taking her. Miley got out and ran the other way, crying. she ran down the rode to her house then changed her mind and went to the beach. It was getting dark and Miley was getting her outfit dirty. She heard someone coming and looked behind her. It was the last person she though it would be.
I'll post the other chapter in a minute if I can. Tell me if you like it! And I was comments, too!

best_of_both_worlds16
06-05-2007, 03:28 PM
ok well I'll post some more. I have the whole fanfic already and I've already started on a sequel so and I dunno if I'll be able to finish this one. I have written 60 chapters.
Chapter 16
Sam was walking up toward her. She sat down next to her.
Sam: Whats up?
Miley: Oh! I broke up with Jake tonight.
Sam: If I can ask why?
Miley: Can I tell you something that you can't tell anybody about? Well, you can tell my bro Jackson, my dad, and my best friends Lilly and Oliver. They already know.
Sam: Yeah, sure! I know I just met yall today yall are my first and best friends.
Miley: Really? You gotta believe me, got it?
Sam: Got it!
Miley: I'm Hannah Montana! See here!
She puts on her wig(she took it off when she got out of the limo).
Sam: Oh my gosh! You really look like her!
Miley: You believe me?
Sam(thought for a moment): Yeah!
Miley: Thanks!
Sam: I trust you, Miley Stewart, of course I believe you!
Miley: I trust you, too, Sam....?
Sam: Riley. I guessed that when you told me! But why did you break up with Jake? And what does Hannah have to do with this?
Miley: Um, I told Jake my 'Hannah' secret and he didn't believe me. But I really like him!
Sam: Oh, well if he doesn't trust you trust you to tell the truth then he isn't the guy!
Miley pondered the thought for a moment.
Miley: Yeah, I guess your right.
Sam: Yeah, surprising as it is it happens alot. Well, I gotta go. I saw you running and went to see whats up.
Miley: Thanks! I have to go, too!

I'm gonna do the next chapter, too.

Chapter 17
They walked to the end of the beach then parted. Miley went home and plopped on the couch.
Robbie: Whats up, bud?
Miley(closed her eyes): Uhh! Me and Jake broke up cuz I told him I was Hannah and he didn't believe me!
Robbie: Oh. Well, if he doesn't trust you enough to not lie then he isn't right for you.
Miley: That's what Sam said!
Robbie: Who's Sam?
Miley: Samantha Riley. I met her at the mall today. She knows about me being Hannah.
Robbie: But you said you only met her today! How do you know she's ok?! What if she tells?
Miley: Well, theres something about her. I trust her. Oliver likes her, too. After about two minutes meeting her asked her out and she surprising said yes!
Robbie: Oh, well, ok! I guess if you think she's ok. You have a 'Hannah' thing tomorrow!
Miley: Ok!
After that she went up to her room and called Lilly. Told her about meeting Sam and breaking up with Jake but Lilly couldn't talk long so after about 15 minutes she had to go. Miley in the morning called Oliver and asked whether he and Sam wanted to go to a Hannah Montana concert. He said yes. Miley called Sam and she also said yes.

hannah_montana.boston
06-05-2007, 04:25 PM
ooooh moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

best_of_both_worlds16
06-05-2007, 07:41 PM
I'll post more later and I want some more comments.

hannah_montana.boston
06-06-2007, 04:21 PM
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comebacktomev
06-22-2007, 06:28 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz!!!!! I Need More!!!!!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
06-22-2007, 08:26 PM
More!

comebacktomev
06-23-2007, 12:35 AM
more plz!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
06-23-2007, 04:40 PM
ok i'll post more. sorry i haven't posted we went on vacation to florida the week before last.

best_of_both_worlds16
06-23-2007, 05:00 PM
Chapter eighteen
It's 5:00 pm and Oliver and Sam arrived at the house. They had gotten wigs. Olivers' was blonde and sorta long and Sams' was blonde with blue streaks and short. About chin length.
Miley: Names?
Oliver: Brendan.
Sam: Jess.
Miley: Ok, then.
They hung around and talked for about 10 minutes waiting for Robbie to come down stairs. He finally came.
Miley: Dad, this is Sam. Sam, this is my dad.
Sam put her hand out. Robbie took it.
Sam: Nice to meet you, Mr. Stewart.
Robbie nodded. They went outside and got in to the limo that was waiting for them. Their driver, Scott, was holding open the door. Robbie was first in the limo and Miley was last.
Miley: Thanks, Scott!
Scott: Welcome.
She slid in and started talking like nothing was wrong but she felt terrible. When they got there it was already filling up. Everybody starting screaming when they realized it was Hannahs' limo. They and arrived and got in and went backstage. While Hannah Montana was doing warmups, Sam and Oliver were talking in the corner. About 20 minutes later Hannh went on stage.
Hannah: Hey y'all!
Crowd screams.
Hannah: Ok, y'all sound ready. I'm gonna start us off with Pumpin' Up The Party!
She started singing. The crowd joined in, too. The concert ended in what not felt that long. Scott dropped off Oliver and Sam at their house and them dropped Robbie and Miley off at there house.

best_of_both_worlds16
06-23-2007, 05:02 PM
i'll post more in a minute if i can. i'm thirsty.

best_of_both_worlds16
06-30-2007, 03:54 PM
does anyone like it? please comment.

K-star7
06-30-2007, 04:17 PM
Please write more!!

elle
06-30-2007, 04:34 PM
ooh this is really good! I feel bad for miley... more!

miley-hannah
06-30-2007, 05:33 PM
write more!! GREAT JOB!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 01:38 PM
sorry guys i haven't posted in a while. i'll post some more now!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 02:03 PM
Chapter nineteen
It's been a week since Miley and Jake broke up and it was driving her crazy. Two days later Miley was walking and ran in to Jake. He wouldn't let Miley get by him.
Miley: Excuse me!
Jake: Miley, can I talk to you?
Miley: Leave me alone, Jake!
Jake: Miles, I believe you! I've always believed you but I was mad about all the stuff I told Hannah about you.
Miley sighed.
Miley: Ok, what now?
Jake: Wanna go out again?
Miley(hoping not to sound to eager): Yes!
Jake(smiled): I'm sorry.
Miley: It's ok.
They started walking together and catching up. After about 20 minutes of walking they were near Mileys' house.
Miley: Jake, I gotta go home, now. I'll call you later!
Jake: Ok, Miles. See ya!
Miley: Yup! Bye!
When Miley entered the house, about 10 minutes later, Robbie was talking on the phone but as soon as he saw Miley he said he had to go, having a guilty look on his face.
Miley: Dad, who was that?
Robbie: It.. was.. nobody.
Miley: Nobody, daddy? I'm gonna call Lilly.
Robbie: Ok.
So Miley went up to her room and into her Hannah closet. Then called Lilly.
Voice: Truscott residents, Rose speaking.
Miley: Mrs. Truscott, it's Miley. Can I speak to Lilly, please?
Mrs. Truscott: Of course!
Miley: Thank you!
Miley and Lilly gave their greeting(yelling their names).
Miley: Guess what?
Lilly: What?
Miley: Me and Jake are back together!
Lilly: Congrats!
Miley: So what's up with you and Elijah?
Lilly: Well, we had our first date a couple of weeks ago. Sorry I didn't tell you.
Miley: That's ok.
They talked for 45 minutes but then Miley had to go.

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-07-2007, 02:13 PM
write more!!!!!!!!!!plz!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 02:29 PM
Chapter Twenty
Miley called Oliver to ask where Sam lived. Once she had written the address down she decided to walk to her house since it wasn't that for. When Miley got there and knocked a bot around sixteen answered.
Boy: Who are you?
Miley: Miley Stewart. You?
Boy: Josh.
Miley: Is Sam here?
Josh(smiled): Yes, she is.
Miley: Ok.
Miley paused for a minute.
Miley(smiled): Oh, can you get her for me?
Josh: Ok, sorry. I try to stay away from her room.
Miley: Why?
Josh: She doesn't like me near her room and I don't like going near it.
Miley: Oh, can you tell me where her room is, then?
Josh: That I can do.
Once he had shown Miley where Sams' room is miley knocked on her door, softly. She heard a guitar playing and someone singing a song she didn't know. Miley knocked again, harder.
Sam: Who is it?
Miley: Miley.
Sam opened the door.
Sam: Oh, hey, Miles.
Miley: Hey, Sam. Who was singing?
Sam: Oh, um, I was, um, singing.
Miley: Oh my gosh! Seriously? You were awsome!
Sam(looked embarassed): Seriously? Didn't think I was that good.
Miley: Well, you are. How about singing with Hannah sometime?

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-07-2007, 02:44 PM
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 02:55 PM
I'll post one more chapter for now.
Chapter Twenty- One
Sam(looked shocked): But I'm not good enough to sing with you!
Miley: Well, I think you are better. You don't have to sing with me all the time.
Sam: Um, well, ok.
Miley(looked pleased): Awsome! Whats your name?
Sam: Uh, Jessica 'Jess' Richards.
Miley: Ok! Well, I've decided to take a break for the summer. I'll start back up the last Saturday of the summer.
Sam: Ok.
Miley: So, you'll see with me?
Sam: Sure.
Miley: Awsome. Me and Jake are back together!
Sam: Oh, that's great!
Miley: You have a brother?
Sam(smiled): Yeah.
Miley: He's sorta... He wouldn't go near your room.
Sam: Yeah. He used to have the room next to me but we fought to much so him and my dad switched rooms.
Miley: Da- uh, oh.
Sam: My mom and dad divorced when I was younger.
Miley: Oh. My mom died when I was younger, too.
Sam: Really?
Miley: Yeah. I have a brother, too. His name is Jackson. How old is Josh?
Sam: 17.
Miley: My bro's 17, too.
Sam: Cool.
Miley: I gotta go now, Sam.
Sam: Ok, bye!
Miley: Bye!
Miley passed Josh on the way out. Miley said bye(he asid bye, too). 'Now to Jakes house', thought Miley. As she was walking she thought about Josh. She finally found Jakes' house. She went up and knocked on the door.

LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 03:29 PM
ooh write more!!

miley-hannah
07-07-2007, 03:33 PM
write more!!!
How many commments till you write more?!

smileymiley92
07-07-2007, 03:34 PM
please write more!!!
That's pretty good!!

Beverly22
07-07-2007, 03:36 PM
more more!!
Write more!!

elle
07-07-2007, 03:44 PM
oh no, you signed off...

MORE!!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 03:49 PM
i'll post more now.

elle
07-07-2007, 03:50 PM
yeah, okay i'll wait..

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-07-2007, 04:03 PM
yay!more!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 04:29 PM
Chapter Twenty-Two
A girl who looked around eight years old answered the door.
Girl: Who are you? Are you Miley?
Miley: Yes, I am Miley. You are you?
Girl: I'm Sierra. Jakes' sister.
Miley: Hi Sierra. How old are you?
Sierra: I'm seven. What about you?
Miley: I'm fourteen.
Sierra: Oh, Jakes' 15. Did-
Miley: Jake's 15 already?
Sierra: Yeah. He just 15 turned beginning of summer.
Miley: Oh. What were you gonna say before I cut you off?
Sierra: Oh, Did ya know that Jake talks about you all the time?
Miley: Seriously?
Sierra: Yup. And he likes Hannah Montana.
Miley: What makes you say that?
Sierra: My best friend Alex said she thought Hannah Montana was horrible and we were to old to like her. But Jake said we weren't and she said we were. Do ya like her?
Miley: Yeah! Hannah Montana rocks!
Sierra: Oh, really? Wow, I-
Jake walked out.
Jake: Who- Oh, Miley! Whatcha doing here? I thought you were gonna call!
Miley: I was in the neighborhood. Sam lives near here.
Jake: Oh, I'm babysitting Sierra. What has Sierra told you?
Miley(smiled): Oh, just you talk about me all the time and you like Hannah Montana!
Sierra: Hey! You are not suppose to say what I told you!
Miley: Oh, I'm sorry, Sierra!
Jake: Sierra, go away!
Sierra: No!
Miley: Sierra, sweetie, how about you let me and Jake talk for a little bit and after we all go for ice cream? Well, of course if it's ok with Jake?
Miley and Sierra looked at Jake. Sierra puppy dog pouted.
Sierra: Pwease, Jake?
Jake: Ok! Ok! Why do you have to do that?
Sierra: Thank you!
Sierra went back inside and shut the door. Jake kisses Miley.
Jake: Hey Miles. Sup?
Miley: Oh, nothing really.Just wanted to see you. Bored, y'know.
Jake(raised his eyebrow): That's it?
Miley: Ugg! Lillys' gonna feel outta the loop when she gets back already and now with not knowing about Olivers' dad she's gonna fell bad!
Jake: She doesn't know?
Miley: No! Oliver didn't want me to tell.
Jake: Why?
Miley: 'Cause he doesn't want to ruin her summer. I think I'm just gonna tell him to call her and tell.
Jake: Yeah, that'd be good.
Miley: We should probably leave now.
Jake: I'll get Sierra.
Jake opened the door and Sierra fell down. She was listening the whole time.
Jake: Sierra!
Sierra: I'm sorry... we should go now!

all i need is atleast one comment. i've finished this fanfiction already and started on the next.

LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 04:59 PM
okay 1 comment.. that was good!! He likes hannah montana.. haha more!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 05:04 PM
ok i'll post more!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 05:25 PM
Chapter Twenty-Three
So Miley, Sierra, and Jake went and got ice cream. They went to the beach to eat talked for a bit. After a while they left. They dropped Sierra off and Jack got his limo there somehow. Miley and Jake went on a date.
Miley: That was fun!
Jake: Yeah, it was!
Miley: Sierra's nice.
Jake: Around you maybe but any other time she's evil!
Miley laughed.
Miley: I'm glad we are together again.
Jake: So, in the beginning about what you said changed quickly.
Miley: Yeah. At first I was jealous then I sorta starting liking you. I did crazy things to make sure you didn't find out.
Jake: Really? What?
Miley laughed, again.
Miley: Remember when Oliver was making a good bye video for school?
Jake: Yeah?
Miley: Well, Dolly Parten(sp?)was in town and she has the same camcorder Oliver had and she taped me saying how much I liked you and then Oliver took the wrong camcorder when he had to go and-
Jake: Wow, that's alot of ands!
Miley: Do you wanna hear the story or not?
Jake: Yes! Sorry! Gosh! I was joking!
Miley: Sorry. I get into the story and I get mad when someone takes me out.
Jake: I understand. Go on.
Miley: Me, Lilly, and Dolly tried to get it back. It was fun. We got to wear leather stuff but back to the point. We came and you were still at school and we had to go undercover. Lilly stood guard and we went in. Ya remember the janitor that came in? That was Dolly and I was in the trash can and your food got all over me but I ended up getting the tape!
Jake starting to laugh.
Jake: Seriously? That's funny! You did all of that for me not to know and I felt the same way about you! So, I was the other Jake?
Miley: Yup.
Jake: Funny.
Miley started laughing.
Jake(still laughing): Can't...Believe...It!
Miley: What are we gonna do now?

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-07-2007, 05:28 PM
moreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 05:29 PM
more please!!
It's pretty good

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 05:34 PM
thanks i'll post more.

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 05:49 PM
Chapter Twenty- Four
Jake: I have an idea
Miley: Where are we going?
Jake: You'll see!
Jakes' limo hasn't gone anywhere.
Jake: You know where, Dave.
Dave(smiled): Yup, I do.
Dave closed the glass thing.
Miley: So, where are we going?
Jake: You'll see!
Miley: Fine! Don't tell me! I can't believe it's been seven weeks already. Summer's almost over. Lilly and Elijah will we be here soon.
Jake: Elijah?
Miley: Lillys' boyfriend!
Jake: I thought she liked Oliver.
Miley: She did and I think she still does.
Jake: Oh, doesn't Oliver like Lilly, though?
Miley: What makes you say that?
Jake: It's obvious!
Miley: It is?
Jake: So, that's a yes?
Miley(smiled): Maybe.
Jake: Ok..maybe! So, who is this Elijah?
Miley: Elijah Musso. 14 years old. Lives on Arizona but is gonna move here two days before Lilly comes back. Same grade. Gonna be at the same school as us and that's all I know.
Jake: Wow.
They pulled on to a really fancy restaurant(sp?).

LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 05:53 PM
no it's spelled right.. more!!

best_of_both_worlds16
07-07-2007, 06:23 PM
i'll post one more chapter for now. maybe later today i'll post more or i'll post more tomorrow.
Chapter Twenty-Five
Miley: What are we doing here?
Jake: Eating. What else?
Miley: Oh my gosh! Really??
Jake: Yes, really?
Miley: Really?! I've always wanted to come here!
Jake: Gosh, Miley, really!
Miley: Sorry.
Jake(smiled): Don't be.
Miley: These looks like a place you have to call before you in... and alot of money.
Jake: It is.
Miley: Then how can we go in?
Jake: I called already.
Miley: Oh. When? and how are you paying?
Jake: When you weren't looking and with money.
Miley: Oh and if this place-
Jake: Are you forgetting I'm a famous actor?
Miley(smiled): Oh, yeah, sorry.
Jake(smiled, too): I love it when you smile-
Miley blushed.
Jake:- Lets go in.
They got out and went in.
Person(who works there): Jake Ryan! Back again? With a pretty young lady, too?
Jake: Yup, John. This is Miley Stewart. My girlfriend.
John: Weird name. But follow me.
Miley: Hey!
John: Did I say weird? I meant unique.
Miley: Sure! I-
Jake: Just show us our seats, please!
John: Sure.
They followed him to a table with two seats.
John: Here you are, Jake and Mary-
Miley: Miley.
John: Oh, sorry, Millie.
Miley: Miley!
John(smiled): I know, Miley. I was kidding.
Miley: Oh..sorry.
Jake and Miley sat and John gave them menus.
Miley: I've always wanted to go here.
Jake: Yeah, it is.
Miley: It seems like it.
They ordered. They both got the same thing. When they got their food they ate and talked for about 30 minutes then they ordered dessert. They ate and left.

LotsaBigHearts
07-07-2007, 06:25 PM
okay, well that's good.. more!
Millie Mary. mary miley mary miley.. nothings the same jk more!

smileymiley92
07-07-2007, 06:27 PM
more please!! That's good!

hannahmontana_luver0320
07-07-2007, 07:20 PM
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best_of_both_worlds16
08-10-2007, 10:32 AM
sorry i haven't posted anything a while. i suppose i'll post a chapter now. just let me get my journal!

best_of_both_worlds16
08-10-2007, 10:58 AM
Chapter Twenty- Six
[they were in the Limo]
Miley: Thank you, Jake! This night was great!
Jake: No problem.
Miley [looking at her watch]: I should be getting home soon. Can you believe school starts in a week and a half?!
Jake: Yeah! I can't wait till it does.
Miley: Lilly comes home in a few days. Elijah tomorrow.
Jake: She still doesn't know?
Miley: Yup. And another reason I have to go.
Jake: Ok. Does your dad know where you were today?
Miley: Oh, no! I forgot to call him! I need to call!
Jake: Call him, then!
Miley got her phone out and dialed the number.
Person: Hello?
Miley: Jackson! What's dad doin'?
Jackson: He's mad. Where are you?
Miley: Well, me, Jake, and Sierra went out today and then me and Jake went out.
Jackson: Sierra?
Miley: Sierra's Jake little sister.
Jackson: Oh. You should come home now.
Miley: No, I'm gonna stay out all night! Of course, Jackson! Tell dad we are almost home.
Jackson: Fine.
They hung up.
Jake: Do you think you will be in trouble?
Miley: I dunno. I've never done this before.
Miley: Sorry but here we are. Bye, Jake!
Jake: Bye! See ya!
Miley: Hopefully!
She got out of the car and went to the door.

sourcandyrules
08-27-2007, 10:30 PM
is that the end???

danadog75
08-28-2007, 09:48 PM
omg............write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!