My First HM Fan Fiction!! Please read!!

[MileyRox1174]

This is my first Fan Fiction, so don't be too harsh if it's really bad. I hope that you like it though.

Chapter 1: Summer Break!

Setting: Miley, Lilly, Oliver, and Jake are at school, in their last class, waiting for the bell to ring.

Miley: Oh my gosh I can’t wait for break!

Lilly: Yeah, and to think, we’ll be high schoolers soon!

Oliver: Just more time for the ladies to check me out.

Jake: Okay Oken, whatever you say...(laughs)

Rrrrrring! The bell rings, and they are all free spirits now!

Oliver: Hey Lilly can you-

Miley: Lilly come on! Let’s go to my house to celebrate!

*Miley and Lilly leave*

Jake: Well, sorry Oliver, but I gotta go.

Oliver: Sigh… It seems everybody has something great and exciting to do except for me.

Mystery Voice: I beg to differ. (evil laugh)

Setting: Miley’s House

Miley: Lilly I can’t believe 8th grade is finally over! And I am doing a huge “Hannah” tour for about three weeks!

Lilly: Cool….listen, do you know what Oliver was trying to say to me?

Miley: No....why don’t you go over to his house and ask him? It’s fine by me.

Lilly: Okay, thanks, bye Miley!

Setting: Oliver’s house

It was about a 10 minute ride (skateboard) for Lilly, before she got to Oliver’s house.

Lilly: Oliver! Oliver? OLIVER?! Where are you? Hmm....I should ask his mom.

Mrs.Oken: No, Lilly, I'm sorry but I haven't seen him since he left for school.

Lilly: Okay, thanks anyways.

*Lilly skates back to Miley's house*

Lilly: Miley Miley Miley! Oliver's not anywhere!

Miley: Lilly, I know that his mind wanders, but this is ridiculous.

Lilly: No I mean really! He just disappeared!

Miley: Oh my god I think I know what happened! Let's go!

Lilly: Go where?

Miley:---------------!

Want to know what Miley says? Then comment please!

I hope ya'll liked it...please comment/criticize! I need at least 5 to post the next chapter! Again, this is my first Fan Fiction so don't be too harsh if it's that bad. I also have no title at the moment.

[cutie_girl]

i really like it! its better than my first fan ficion called fan fiction by cutie_girl. seriously! u left us hooked!

[absolutelyfabx3]

holy cow! post more now! I command you to!

[MileyRox1174]

Thank you so much!! I am still working on the second chapter, and besides I need five comments *evil grin*........lol

[if you have any ideas for the next chapter, PM me!]

[cutie_girl]

i'll just post more here so we coud read next chapter.

[cutie_girl]

1 more after this comment!!! people post comments

[MileyRox1174]

lol hey I am still working on it geez!! I probably will be finished sometime tonight....i dunno yet....lol

[MileyRox1174]

i'm writing it right now!!

[savvinaynay]

Really good! Tomorrow, if I post more of mine you have to post more of yours. ;)

[MileyRox1174]

Okay since I have it, I will just post it right now!!

Here it is!!

Chapter 2: Umm….Help You?!

Miley: We need to go to my old locker at school!

Lilly: Why, exactly?

Miley: Because, I think I know what has just happened. We just need a ride.

Jackson, as he’s running down the stairs, screams: NO NO NO NOOOOO!!

Miley: I wasn’t going to ask you!

Jackson: Hey, you can never be too sure!

Miley: Daddy can you?

Robby Ray: Sure, let’s go.

*They drive to the school*

Setting: Some place by a beach....I’m not telling.

Oliver: LET ME GO!!

Voice: Why should I? You never helped me!

Oliver: Well then who did?!

Voice: Hmmm………..how about your little friend Miley Stewart?

Oliver: Why would she help YOU?!

Voice: Is that disrespect? Next time you do that, well, you don’t exactly want to know.

Oliver: (thinking) Oh great, I’m in the middle of no where and Miley, Lilly, and Jake have no clue where I am! Could this day get any worse?!

Voice: And in case you are wondering, I have something in store for your friends…all of them! And if you don’t do something for me, then I will do this to them! -----------

Oliver: You’re gonna do WHAT?!

Setting: School, at Miley’s old locker.

Miley: Perfect. I knew that there would be something here.

Lilly: What is it?

Miley: Just a short riddle….it says:
“Thunder strikes
Late at night
Who is it?
That’s right it’s---------“

Miley and Lilly: OH NO!!!!!!


What happens next? You just need to wait for the next chapter! 5 comments and I will post it (I might post it tomorrow, I don’t know)!

[MileyRox1174]

There, savvinaynay, I posted more! I might even post the third chapter tonight!!

[absolutelyfabx3]

more! I need to find out who it is!

[MileyRox1174]

yeah umm it is kinda obvious but I have a little bit of a twist to it!! Lol I am writing as we speak!!

[absolutelyfabx3]

obvious, obvious, obvious..*thinking hard* Is it maybe jake? tony the janitor? i seriously don't know! But then again, when something is obvious, it's blind to me..lol

[MileyRox1174]

who's tony the janitor??? lol haven't heard that name

[cutie_girl]

haha lol! post more

[MileyRox1174]

okay, this is another chapter (you know I haven't exactly kept my word about 5 comments=next chapter, so it's pretty easy to get a chapter out of me....well, sometimes!!)

Chapter 3: A Damsel In Distress??

Miley:
“Thunder strikes
Late at night
Who is it?
That’s right it’s Luanne, your greatest fright!”

Lilly: Luanne can write?

Miley: No…..(pauses)….so I don’t think it’s her……Okay Lilly what was the last thing you heard before we left school?

Lilly: Jake said “Sorry Oliver, but I, I have to go do something….”

Miley: Oh no! No no no no no!! It can’t be him!

Lilly: Maybe it isn’t.

Miley: Your right….let’s go home!

*Miley’s dad drives them home*

Setting: Oliver’s location……truly a damsel in distress in his mood!

Oliver: Okay, so lemme get this straight, you want me, to help YOU??

Voice: Yes. What’s so hard about that?

Oliver: First, I don’t even know who you are! Second, how can I help you if I’m tied up?

Voice: Because first, if I untie you, then you will run away (duh!) and second, you don’t know who I am because, well let’s just say we haven’t seen each other in a while! *evil laugh*

Oliver: Don’t tell me……ummm…..Larry, no. Mike, no. Is it really obvious??

Voice: Let’s just say I just saw you today at school, after the bell rang, and you were at your locker….

Oliver: Hmmmm………---------?!

Setting: Miley’s house

Miley: Who could it be??

Lilly: Well, who writes really good? Someone we know…..

Miley: Do you think it could be Luanne, I mean she could have hired somebody to write that.

Lilly: True, but who isn’t very obvious to us right now, but is the first person who would do something like this besides Luanne?

Lilly: (thinking) I bet it was Jake!! He will do anything to get Miley to pay attention to him! But he wouldn’t do something this cruel…..or would he?.....
Miley: Lilly, you okay? You have that look on your face again. Do you have a good idea, or do you really gotta go??

Lilly: I know how this might sound to you, but I think it’s Jake.

Miley: WHAT?! Lilly how could you think that? We’re best friends, and you think it’s my….wait a minute….he isn’t my boyfriend, and he was acting all weird today around me. Lilly, that is genius!

Lilly: I know!

Miley: But if he was doing this to get attention from me, who else could be in on it?


Again, hope ya’ll likee!! This is another cliffhanger!! My next chapter will probably be posted tomorrow, but I'm on a roll tonight, so I will start writing again after I post this!! Lol!!

[MileyRox1174]

there you go, and I'm gonna start writing chapter 4 right now!!

[savvinaynay]

Love it!

[cutie_girl]

luv it too!

[absolutelyfabx3]

AHH! POST MORE NOW!! tony the janitor, in New Kid in school. takes Miley's locker... maybe it is Jake! not luanne! wait, did Jake know about luanne?

[MileyRox1174]

Here is chapter 4, because I feel like posting it!


Chapter 4: I’m WHAT?!

Miley and Lilly: LUANNE TRICKED JAKE!!

Miley: I knew it! That devil just won’t give up now, will she?

Lilly: I bet she said that she would get you to go out with him if he helped her….

Miley: Yep, and she is gonna pay BIG TIME!

Lilly: I thought you liked Jake?

Miley: Well, yeah, but-

Lilly cut her off: Miley don’t lie to me. I know you like him, but she will pay for doing this.

Miley: Yeah, okay. So let’s just think of where they could be now, okay?

Setting: Wherever Oliver is…I’m not telling where until the next chapter!!

Oliver: But Jake, how could you?

Jake (yep it’s him): I’m trying to get her to go out with me…..

Oliver: So you think capturing me is gonna make her very happy about it??

Jake: No but Luanne, her cousin, said-

Oliver: Don’t listen to her Jake! Luanne is evil!

Just then Luanne walks up to Oliver.

Luanne: I’M WHAT?!

Oliver: You’re evil! And I’m proud to say it!

Luanne: Boy, you shouldn’t have said that more than once!! Now you’ll get it! *evil laugh*

Suddenly, Oliver screams.



Did ya’ll like it?? Hope soo!!! Lol………well comment please!!

[MileyRox1174]

^^ohh that's right!!! lol thanks so much...I didn't think this would be very good....or that anyone would like it!!

[MileyRox1174]

sorry it was kinda short...I needed to leave it off at real cliffhanger!! lol the next chapter might be longer, i dunno yet

[cutie_girl]

luv it

[MileyRox1174]

thanks...lol everybody was right, writing Fan Fics is soooo much fun!! The next chapter will be up tomorrow!! (or if i get it done fast, tonight!)

[MileyRox1174]

omg i cannot think right now!! lol it has to come to me!!

[stassiew]

i luv it

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o Great Job!!! I am totally hooked now!!

This is a fantastic fanfic!! The one i have on here is my first one also, so dont think that it isnt good cuz its your first one! Did I mention that i HATE Luann?

[MileyRox1174]

okay that's it! last post of the night! next chapter will be posted tomorrow!!


Chapter 5: Devil’s Little Helper

Oliver: Why did you just do that to me?!

Luanne: Nobody calls me evil unless they are complimenting me!!

Oliver: But you didn’t need to like beat me up!!

Jake: Dude, toughen up.

Oliver: Stay out of this Devil’s Little Helper!!

Jake: Whoa harsh….if I wasn’t doing this to get Miley, I would beat you up too!

Oliver: Whatever…but why are we on South Beach?

Luanne: Because, FYI, it is the most deserted part of the beach this time of year…so if we want to hide you then we will do it here.

Oliver starts looking around.

Oliver: (thinking) Oh my gosh I think I see Miley and Lilly coming this way. Better give them the don’t-come-any-closer-or-else look.
Setting: Miley and Lilly are now on South Beach, but they stop in their tracks once Oliver gives them a look.

Miley: (whispers) What are we gonna do? He just gave us a look to stay away.

Lilly: (whispers) We should just go, I mean, what’s the worst that could happen?

Miley: (still whispering) What do you think? She would probably throw us down a well!

Lilly: (still whispering) Well, we should take that chance anyways…Look, I think I see Jake!

Miley: (yep, still whispering) Fine, let’s go.

Miley and Lilly both run up to Jake, Luanne, and Oliver.

Luanne: Well well well. Little miss Miley and her friend Lulu.

Lilly: (sounding angry) It’s Lilly. (back to being half-cheery again) Sup Jake, sup?

Jake: Oh sup Lilly……Hey Miley.

Miley: Hey Jake…where’s…Oliver!

Lilly and Miley both run up to Oliver.

Lilly: Geez what happened to you.

Oliver: Luanne….well, it’s a long story….long story short, Jake say it.

Jake: Not right now, this isn’t the right time.

Oliver: Jake say it now or forever hold your peace!

Jake: Geez Oken alright. (turns to face Miley) Miley, umm, well, I don’t know how to say this but, will you……go out with me?

Miley: See Jake, I would, but not after I learned the fact that you are helping Luanne with her evil plotting!

Jake: But Miley….

Miley: Jake I just can’t, knowing that you would risk my friends to just go out with me. I’m sorry but my friends always come first.


Jake: But Miley-

Miley: No buts with me Jake. (she turns to Luanne) Let Oliver go, Luanne.

Luanne: Oh I have other plans for him…and you and your little friend….*evil laugh*


Okay! That took me a little while to write, considering it was pretty late when I wrote it…….well hope ya’ll like it!!

[MileyRox1174]

thanks guys! well I have to go!! Bye for now!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Toodles :P

Cant wait for more

[Sporty Miley]

Bye!! thanks 4 the fan fiction!!! it was awesome!!!!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

can't wait 4 chapter 6!!!!!!!!!!

[absolutelyfabx3]

ahh! I need more! This is my addiction!

[MileyRox1174]

Okay okay! I am writing it right now!

^^Cool, I addicted someone!!

[MileyRox1174]

Here ya'll go!


Chapter 6: Umm…Confusing Much?

Setting: Still on South Beach…Miley and Lilly are now tied up, too, but much farther away from Oliver, but facing him.

Miley: Lilly, I told you that she has little tiny horns on her head! But no, you didn’t believe me!

Lilly: Okay okay! I’m sorry. Gosh is that good for you?

Miley: Fine, but now we just need to figure a way out of this!

Luanne: Oh ya’ll won’t be goin’ nowhere for a very long while!

Jake: Wait but that means that they will be going somewhere for a long time….I’m confused.

Luanne: None of ya’ll are going anywhere! Is that a little less confusing?

Jake: Yes, thank you, carry on.

Oliver: What an idiot.

Miley and Lilly: Yep, so true.

Luanne: Well, anyways, I will be showing you what I am doing to Oliver first! And you two have front row seats!!

Miley: Wait, so what are you gonna do to him anyways?

Luanne: Well, let’s just say, if ya’ll ever want to see him again, well you have to reveal your secret.

Jake: What secret Miley?

Miley: Uhhh…..nothing yet Jake.

Luanne: (turns to Oliver) So, how about we take a little trip to your worst nightmare? Eh?

Oliver: Yeah right, you don’t even know what my worst nightmare was.

Luanne: Oh trust me, I do! *evil laugh*

Miley and Lilly: NO! Jake stop her!

Jake: Sorry Miley, but no. I can’t do that.

Miley: Why not? I thought you were nicer than that!

Jake: Huh? Wait, so first you said that I was evil, and now you say that I am nice?

Miley: Yeah…oh it’s no use! (whispers) Lilly, can you reach my phone?

Lilly: (whispers) Yeah……………..here you go! But why do you need it anyways?

Miley: I’m gonna call one of my good friends ;)

Lilly: Who?.......Oh no, not---------!!



Want to know what happens next? well just comment, and I’ll try to get the next chapter up ASAP!

[MileyRox1174]

there, now comment please!!

^Hello??!! Where is everyone???? PLZ Read and comment! I'm begging you!! (<--lol ok maybe not, but oh well)

^^If no one comments, I'm not posting another chapter or two!!

^^^Oh and another thing! This will only go on for a few more chapters! But then I will write another Fac Fic, don't worry!

[MileyRox1174]

ugh!! fine I will just post chapter seven already!! but this time you have to comment on it!! PLZ!!

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 7: Long Time No See!

Setting: Yep, same place, but Oliver is going to venture to his worst, umm……nightmare, I guess. I don’t know what you would call it. ;)

Miley: Wait, what is your worst nightmare anyways?

Oliver: Well, you’ll see once we get there!

Lilly: (whispers) Miley did you call?

Miley: (whispers) Yep, and they’re coming over right now!

Lilly: (whispers) Tell me again who you called?

Miley: (whispers) I called-

Luanne (cuts her off): Miley, Miley, Miley. Talking behind my back are we? Well, I can’t have that, and whoever you just called, shouldn’t be coming!

Miley: Why not?!

Luanne: I thought you’d learn now cuz…Because they have no powers against me!

Miley: Actually, you’d be surprised, I didn’t call who you think I called.

Luanne: You didn’t call Aunt Dolly?!

Miley and Lilly: No! We called someone who we know has the power against you!

Luanne: Not my parents!

Miley: Oh not them…someone even worse.

Just then, someone walked up behind Luanne and Jake. The face was familiar, and yet, still someone that Luanne hasn’t seen for a very long time!

Voice: Long time no see Luanne!

Luanne: ----------!!


Comment to know what happens after this! Sorry it was so short, and that I didn’t reveal who it was….just needed to add more suspense! Well, I’ll try to get the next chapter up ASAP, but comment first!

[absolutelyfabx3]

Ahh! Post More Now! Ia Mbegging You! Commanding You! I Need To See Who It Was!!! Ahhh!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

OMG who was it!!

I am soo hooked!

[absolutelyfabx3]

I know Allison!!! AHH! I want to find out who it is so badly!

[best_of_both_worlds16]

please post more!

[hannah_montana.boston]

i <3<3<3<3<3<3<3E><3E><3E><3E> it more more more more more

[MileyRox1174]

alright here is the eighth chapter!!


Chapter 7: Puma Power!

Luanne: NOT ROXY!!

Miley: Oh yes, Roxy, your worst nightmare!

Roxy: Get ready to feel the wrath of the PUMA!

Luanne: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Roxy basically like beats her up, and somehow gets her to go home, without any arguments. Then, Roxy starts approaching Jake.

Roxy: We can do this the easy way, or the hard way!

Jake: I choose the easy way!

Roxy: Okay, this is it! Get! Go away! Bye bye!

Jake runs away, back to his house. And Roxy unties Miley, Lilly, and Oliver.

Miley: Thanks Roxy!

Lilly: Yeah! Hey can you teach me some of those cool Puma moves?!

Roxy: Lilly, you aren’t ready yet. I can teach you them once you are ready.

Oliver: Ow, my wrists hurt. Because some people were a little late on the saving part! (Oliver looks at Miley and Lilly, talking sarcastically)

Miley: We’re sorry! Gosh is that good enough?

Oliver: There is one thing that I need you to do to make it up to me.

Miley and Lilly: What?

Oliver:----------!


Sorry that was short, but I needed a cliffhanger! Only one or two more chapters in this Fan Fic, but I will write another one after this!! Hope ya’ll likee! Please comment!

[violared21]

This story is getting better and better with every chapter, good job

[MileyRox1174]

thanks....although it will not be going on for much longer...unless people have ideas for more stuff after this!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o ROXY!

I cant wait for more!

*psssssssssst i updated my fan fiction with another chapter*

[MileyRox1174]

yeah I read it!!!! it was really good....but now I'm a little stuck on mine. I don't know what the next chapter should be...I mean, I know what Oliver says, but nothing else yet!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

same here...same here

[MileyRox1174]

oopsies....the chapter should say Chapter 8: Puma Power!!

[Miley_Montana_Gal]

Yeah it's pretty good :)

[absolutelyfabx3]

More More More More More!

[sar522]

ok yall hurry up and post cuz i really like this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

thanks!! Yeah I am trying to think of ways to continue it..........and oh my god I just thought of a really good one! I'm gonna write more now!!

[absolutelyfabx3]

yayyyy! can't wait!

[MileyRox1174]

I hope none of ya'll are Jiley fans!! ;)

[absolutelyfabx3]

I like both, Miliver and Jiley, which ever way it goes, i'm happy for miley!

[MileyRox1174]

Well, here you go...Chapter 9!!


Chapter 9: Jealous much?

Suddenly, Oliver kisses Miley.

Lilly: (thinking) Miley always gets the guys….It’s not fair!! Oh well at least we, or she, made it up to him.

Oliver: There…now you’ve made it up to me. ;)

Miley: Well, let’s just go home, before any more trouble arises. (Roxy is already gone)

Setting: Miley’s house (everyone is there)

Miley: Daddy!!

Robby Ray: Miles! Lilly! Oliver! Your home!!

Miley: And I never thought I’d say this, but……………..Jackson I missed you!!!!
Jackson: Weird. She has never said that before…and I hope she never does again!

Lilly: Miley, same here, but I didn’t really miss Jackson that much!

Oliver: Well, I’m just glad that the ground is underneath my feet, and can walk without my feet tied together!

Lilly: (kicks him in the shin) There! Now you can’t walk!

Miley: (to Lilly) Jealous much?

Lilly: I am not jealous!

Lilly: (thinking) Okay, I am, but who wants to know? I mean she’s the one who always gets the guys!

Miley: You okay, Lilly? You look upset. What’s wrong?

Lilly: (pulls Miley away from every one else, and starts talking to her) You shouldn’t even have to ask that, Little Miss Perfect! You always get the guys, and I’m always left out! You know, sometimes, I wish I could be just like you. But other times, I just want to hit you! You are so selfish and I don’t know how I ever thought you could be my friend! Good-bye!

Miley: (as Lilly is making her way to the door) But….Lilly-

The door slams in Miley’s face.

Oliver: Miley what happened to Lilly?

Miley: Don’t even talk to me!

Miley runs into her room, lays on her bed, and starts crying into her pillow.

Hope ya'll liked it!! This is one of the ways I am gonna continue my story!! Please comment! I've decided I need 8 comments to post the next chapter (p.s. they can be about other chapters too)

[absolutelyfabx3]

ahh! love it!

[MileyRox1174]

But the eight comments have to be from 8 different users!!! hahahaha I got that idea from JewelRock123!!

[MileyRox1174]

thanks! only seven more (remember, different users)!! *evil laugh*

[Miley_Montana_Gal]

I like it :) more puhleez

[Fire-Chicken]

I Love It!!! Need to know how it ends :)

[Fire-Chicken]

I Love It!! I Need To Know How It Ends! :)

// Rebecka From Sweden

[MileyRox1174]

only four more comments, from different people....to go!!

(rebecka from sweden, i'm not counting the second comment because I said 8 coments from 8 different people, but thanks!!) *evil laugh*

[MileyRox1174]

I'm doing this so that I don't post too many chapters at once, because the story will end quickly if I do!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

More more more!

[Fire-Chicken]

only four more comments, from different people....to go!!

(rebecka from sweden, i'm not counting the second comment because I said 8 coments from 8 different people, but thanks!!) *evil laugh*


Sry, it was lagging :(

[MileyRox1174]

it's ok!

[Sporty Miley]

MORE!!! i NEED MORE!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

three more comments! (again, rebecka not counting this one, sorry just telling you! lol )

[Lanae_M]

More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

two more!!

[Fire-Chicken]

lol, Do u counting this one?
MORE!!!! :P

[MileyRox1174]

okay now it's one more and then you get the next chapter!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Ahh More!!

[MileyRox1174]

fine I will count that one and now I will post the next chapter!!

Chapter 10: Drama Queen

Setting: Morning, around about 10 A.M. at the Stewarts’ house.

Robby Ray: (opens door and walks in) Hey Bud, wake up.

Miley: mmhmmm……*…what?! Oh morning dad.

Robby Ray: Come have breakfast Miles, its 10 o’clock.

Miley: WHAT?!

Robby Ray: Oliver told me everything. He also said that you ran up here crying. Is that true Mile?

Miley: Daddy, please, don’t make it any worse. It’s true, but now Lilly hates me, and I didn’t even do anything!

Robby Ray: Well, Bud, this is something you just need to fix. But now let’s have some chocolate chip flapjacks!

Miley gets dressed, and walks downstairs, with Lilly sitting at the bar. Lilly looks up, finishes her pancake, thanks Mr. Stewart, and starts heading out the door.

Miley: Lilly! Wait! Lil-

Once again, Lilly slams the door in Miley’s face.

Miley: Daddy, why was she here?

Robby Ray: She smelled the pancakes and besides, it’s a free breakfast, who wouldn’t want it?

Jackson: I know right? I did the same thing!

Setting: Lilly’s house.

Lilly: What nerve! Miley just strolls down the stairs like she has no other cares in the world! How rude of her to do even more damage to my heart!

Lilly’s mom: Lilly, I know that you are jealous, but-

Lilly: I’M NOT JEALOUS! IT’S JUST THAT SHE IS LIKE SOME REALLY LIKE FAMOUS SUPERMODEL OR SOMETHING AND I’M LILLY THE LOSER!

Lilly’s mom: Oh Lilly, don’t say that, I-

Lilly runs upstairs without letting her mom finish. Lilly jumps onto her bed and starts screaming her troubles into her pillow.

Setting: Miley’s house, after Miley’s done eating.

Miley: I think I’m going to call Lilly, to see what’s wrong with her.

Lilly: (the phone rings, but she doesn’t look at the Caller I.D.) *sniff* Hello?

Miley: Lilly, I-

Lilly: Don’t even talk to me! Good day!

Miley: Lilly, wait I-

Lilly hangs up before she can finish.

Miley: Geez she is a major drama queen.

Miley: (thinking) maybe I could get her to stop acting this way if I just figure out who she really likes, besides Jake. But how??

[Sporty Miley]

can someone who hasn't written a comment PLEASE write 1!!!!!!! i'm dying 2 find out what happens!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

Yes!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

hope ya'll like it!! please comment!! it's the same concept for comments as before!!

[Sporty Miley]

PLEASE keep going!!!! i want 2 find out what happens in chapter 11!!!!! this story is really addictive!!!

[Lanae_M]

More ! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so much better than mine!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

so did anybody else like the new chapter?

[MileyRox1174]

lol thanks but yours is still good..........remember, now I need 6 comments from 6 different people to post the next one!! *evil laugh*

[MileyRox1174]

i finished writing it, but i still need more comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

more more more!

[MileyRox1174]

5 more comments!! Hahahaha!! *evil grin and laugh*

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

noooo!

i updated my fan fiction...dont know if you have read the last chapter or not...

[MileyRox1174]

I'm starting to write another chapter now!!!! So if you really want to read either of them, please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

YouKnowYouLoveMe, I read that chapter, and it was awesome!!

[MileyRox1174]

people do you want the chapter or not?! At this point, I'll take one more comment, from anybody!! The chapter after is good!!

[MileyRox1174]

okay, since i love the chapter after this one, I will post chapter 11 now anyways. It's pretty short, but oh well....


Chapter 11: Surprise!


Miley: (thinking) Hmm…….now who does she really like…….I remember that one time about a month ago, we were joking around, I asked who she liked and she said………

Miley: (screams) OLIVER!!!!!!!!!!

Robby Ray: What Bud?

Miley: Daddy, can you help me find a way to get Lilly out of her house, so I can plant a little surprise for her there?

Robby Ray: Now Miles don’t go looking for revenge, because remember, “An eye for and eye makes the whole world blind.”

Miley: It’s not that……I am gonna ask Oliver if he can do something for me, and put him there, and as soon as she walks in, my plan will start!

Robby Ray: Okay Miley, but only this time…….for now.

Robby calls Lilly’s house, and gives a great distraction, and Lilly is lured out of her house, behind Miley’s, to the beach.

Setting: Miley is calling Oliver, while she is walking to Lilly’s house. Oliver and Miley get there around the same time.

Miley: Okay, Oliver, do you remember the plan? When she walks in to her room, you-

Oliver: I do the surprise and then whatever else I can, right?

Miley: Yep. Now let’s position you, she should be home any time now.

Oliver: Okay, ready.

Miley: Good luck, Oliver. And if she hates you too after this, blame me.

Miley leaves, and slips back to her house, leaving Oliver sitting in Lilly’s room. Lilly starts skating home, and before she knows it, is walking up her staircase to her room.

Lilly: That was pretty cool. But I wonder why Mr. Stewart didn’t have Miley join the fun. Oh well, more for me.

Lilly opens the door and ------------!

[MileyRox1174]

hope ya'll likee!! now I am only gonna do 5 comments from different people!! But hurry if you want the next chapter by tomorrow (it's pretty good!!!) please comment!

[Baby Vanessa]

More pzl it's so good

[MileyRox1174]

thank you!! now only 4 more comments, from different people (I know I am horrible!!) *evil grin* lol

[Khockeygrl4]

more plzzzz, i luv it

[MileyRox1174]

thanks! I need 3 more comments, from three different people!!!! Hahahaha

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okay people, do you think that I should start with Oliver, Jake, or Lilly for the second part of the next chapter?? I am fine with any of them!!! (p.s. these comments count, and after I finish writing, then I would be able to post it!)

[stassiew]

more pleez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

do you have any input on the second part of the next chapter? should I start with Lilly, Oliver, or Jake?? (I already did the first part)

[MileyRox1174]

you know what nvm I have an idea!!

[MileyRox1174]

people.....comment or no chapter....i have already written two more!!!

[MileyRox1174]

ugh what the heck I will post it anyway!

Chapter 12: No more Jolly Jake or Smiley Miley!


Lilly opens the door and Oliver jumps up, runs up to her, and kisses her.

Lilly: Oliver, what are you doing? I thought you liked Miley?!

Oliver: Lilly, I realized that kiss was a huge mistake. I also realized that you are the one that I like.

Lilly: Miley told you to say that didn’t she?

Oliver: No she didn’t, it is how I truly feel!

Lilly: Okay, whatever.

Oliver: Will you go out with me?

Lilly: Well……….okay!

Oliver kisses Lilly again.

Oliver: But before it’s completely official, you have to forgive Miley for….whatever she did.

Lilly: Never! I will never forgive that perfect-skinned, Tennessean, back-stabber!

Oliver: Stop calling her names!

Lilly: Well sorry but she is someone who I just can’t forgive!

Oliver: Fine, then I don’t even know why I wasted my kisses on you!

Lilly: Fine!

Oliver: Fine!

Oliver leaves, leaving Lilly with a hollow feeling in her stomach.

Lilly: (thinking) What have I done? I lost my two best friends, and now I don’t even think they’ll ever talk to me again! Lilly you idiot!

Setting: The beach, Miley is sitting at a table, eating her ice cream.

Miley (thinking) Maybe I should just tell Jake that I’m sorry, I mean, I bet he will be okay with it by now.

Jake walks up to the bar at Rico’s, and gets a soda. He spots Miley sitting at a table, alone, sadly eating her ice cream.

Jake: (thinking) Great, now she’s making me feel bad! First she doesn’t go out with me, and now she wants me to think that she’s lonely without me?! Ha she wishes I would give into that!

Jake: Hello there, Miley.

Miley: (in a bored-sad kind of voice [use your imagination]) Hey Jake.

Jake: Where’s your possey?

Miley: What do you care?

Jake: Oh, I’m just asking. Is that so mean?

Miley: Jake I’m not in the mood!

Jake: (mocking Miley) and I thought you were nicer than that! I guess not!

Miley: What have you turned into?

Jake: Oh I’m still the same around everyone else, but around you, well I can be different…

Miley: That’s something I was looking forward to! (Rolls her eyes)

Jake: I know how much you like me Miley, just admit it.

Miley: Jake, I’m still not over that incident.

Jake: Well than it will be a long time before you see me smile around you!

Miley: Fine, if there’s gonna be no more Jolly Jake, than no more Smiley Miley!

Miley tosses whatever is left of her ice cream into the trash, walks away, and starts strolling down the beach, leaving Jake with the same hollow feeling in his stomach.

Hope ya'll likee!! Please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

whew....that one was really long! so is the next one!! comment to get it!!

[MileyRox1174]

that's the last post of the night! More tomorrow afternoon!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o

jolly Jake...nice :P

[qtneci]

cool! more plz!

[MileyRox1174]

thankies!! i am gonna just post the next chapter now, just because I want to!

Chapter 13: Anything?!

Setting: Miley is strolling down the beach, as the tide is slowly rolling in.

Miley: (thinking) Why are people being so mean to me now? I mean, except for Oliver, oh man I hope he is happy.

Suddenly, Miley’s phone rings.

Miley: *sigh* Hello?

Oliver: MILEY THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! LILLY HATES ME! SO NOW I HATE YOU TOO! I DON’T KNOW WHY I WASTED MY TIME LISTENING TO YOU!!

Oliver hung up before Miley could say anything.

Miley: Great, now everybody hates me.

Miley: (thinking) Why do I always have to open my big mouth so fast? I think I should just keep it shut from now on!

Miley soon gets to her house.

Robby Ray: Hey Bud. You okay?

Miley: EVERYONE HATES ME!

Robby Ray: Oh c’mon Miley, you don’t know that.

Miley: OH YEAH?! WELL LILLY HATES ME FOR SOME ODD REASON, JAKE IS BEING SOOOOO OBNOXIOUS, AND OLIVER HATES ME BECAUSE LILLY HATES HIM!!!!!!!!! I THINK I KNOW THAT EVERYONE HATES ME!!!!!!!

Robby Ray: Miles-

Miley doesn’t let him finish. She runs upstairs and onto her bed, screaming things like “I HATE MY LIFE!!” and “I WISH I WAS NEVER BORN!!”

Setting: Oliver is walking down to the beach, as he passes Miley’s house, and sees her through the window crying.

Oliver: (thinking) Maybe I should go up and apologize….well it was her idea, and she said I could blame her if Lilly got mad, but I still will try at least.

Oliver walks in, and walks up the staircase. Soon he is at Miley’s door. Miley hears him but doesn’t say anything.

Oliver: Hi Miley…are you okay? I mean I am really sorry but you said-

Miley: I appreciate it but everyone else hates me so………….GO AWAY!!

Oliver: Alright! Well now you know that I am still mad!!

Miley: Well then okay!

Miley: (thinking) Man! I did it again!

Miley: OLIVER WAIT!

Oliver: What now?

Miley: I’m sorry! It’s just that I’ve been through so much today….Lilly hates me, Jake is being very obnoxious, and well when you called me, I just couldn’t take it anymore. Please forgive me!

Oliver: Alright, but just this once…….I’m just kidding! Okay!

Miley: Thank you! Now can you help me get Jake to be nice to me?

Oliver: What do you mean?

Miley: Well, Jake said “Oh I’m still the same around everyone else, but around you, well I can be different…” and it scared me a little. Can you help me?

Oliver: No.

Miley: Because we’re friends.

Oliver: Ooh……no.

Miley: Because it might be the only way to get Lilly back.

Oliver: Maybe.

Miley: Please Oliver!! I’ll do anything!

Oliver: Anything?!

Miley: Okay, I guess anything…….

Oliver: Than do this for me……--------!

Miley: Ooh no; there is no way I’m-

Oliver: You said anything…….

Miley: Fine!


Hope you all like it!! I'll post more tonight (because I am doing something after school)! Comments please!!

[Fire-Chicken]

Write More!!!

[Sporty Miley]

More Please!!!

[Sporty Miley]

if your on can u pleeeez post the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lanae_M]

Post more when can!

[stassiew]

more

[Mileycyrusfanx33]

I want more!!!!!!!!more more more or I'm hunting you down!MORE!!!!!lol

[MileyRox1174]

okay! okay! I'm on now! I will post the next chapter!! (I had a friend over, then had tennis, so I was kinda busy)

Chapter 14: I Love You?

Miley: So you want me to walk up to Jake, and tell him that I love him?!

Oliver: Well it is true…it’s either that or the chicken suit again!

Miley: Can’t you say it to him; I mean he could think I was in denial or something.

Oliver: Fine, but next time, you have to do it!

Setting: Oliver walks down to the beach, and spots Jake sitting at the same table Miley was, in deep thought.

Oliver: (thinking) Okay, Miley said to just get in, then get out. Okay let’s go. I can do this…..well of course I can, I’m Smoken Oken!

Oliver: Hey Jake. Miley loves you. Bye!

Jake: (grabs him by the collar) Whoa there boy. Okay first, Miley doesn’t love me , and second why are you leaving so quickly??

Oliver: Uhh…ubbmm…well I think-

Jake: Wait a minute, she told you to say that didn’t she! So she really does like me! Ha I knew it…..wait she really likes me!!

Oliver: Umm….okay, dude, what’s wrong with you??

Jake: Uhh…..nothing Oken, just uhhh…..tell her that I can’t talk to her anytime soon…

Oliver: Why-

Jake: Just do it!

Oliver: Alright! Alright!

Oliver walks back to Miley’s house, while Jake stays sitting there.

Oliver: Miley I talked to him and he said that well he can’t talk to you anytime soon…

Miley: Why not?

Oliver: I have no idea; he cut me off before I could say anything else.

Suddenly the phone rings, and Miley answers it without looking at the Caller I.D.

Miley: Hello?

Zombie High Producer: Yes hello, is this Hannah Montana?

Miley: Why yes it is!

Producer: Well, I was just calling to confirm the taping in two days.

Miley: Oh that! Yes I will be there! Thank you. Good-bye!

She hangs up.

Oliver: Who was that?

Miley: The Zombie High Producer. Guess what; I was just reminded that Hannah has to do another episode!

Oliver: Well that’s perfect.

Miley: Why? (She looked at the twisted smile on Oliver’s face) Oliver, why are you staring at me like that? It’s scaring me.

Oliver: I know. But anyways, you can be Hannah and ask him about “That girl Miley that he was talking about before” and he will spill everything to you, not knowing it’s you!

Miley: Oliver that’s…………genius!

Oliver: I thought you’d say that!

Miley: Well, we better get started on our plan. C’mon!

Setting: Lilly’s house. Lilly is in deep thought too, thinking about what she has done, and most importantly, how to get Oliver to talk to her again.

Lilly: (thinking) I bet Oliver is at Miley’s house right now! He is probably lying about how he feels about me! The nerve of him….grr…..

Lilly: (talking to herself) Well, I did make him mad, for calling Miley names. But she deserves it! But Oliver got really mad at me for it….maybe I should just call Miley’s house, just to make sure he isn’t there……

Lilly calls, and Miley answers (again with looking at the Caller I.D.)

Miley: Hello?

Lilly: Hi, is Oliver there?

Miley: (lying) umm….No, why?

Lilly: Just wondering, thanks anyways! (She hangs up) NOT!! She is sooo lying! I’m gonna get to the bottom of this! But how? Ooh, I think I know!! ---------!


Hope ya'll likee!! Please comment!! I haven't written the next chapter yet, and it might be up later, if I get lots of comments, but maybe tomorrow if I don't!! Lol just comment please!! (or criticize, tell me what I could do better, w/e)

[Sporty Miley]

More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Fire-Chicken]

More!!

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More!!!!!!!!!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o More!!

[MileyRox1174]

did like some of you people not have school today or something? Because all of these comments are at like noon....if so, LUCKY!! I haven't been on though cause of school, and homework, so I will start writing right now!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

I had skol but kept cheaking up on ur fanfic in class

[MileyRox1174]

lol!! Thanks!!

[MileyRox1174]

I'm finishing the next chapter right now!!

[MileyRox1174]

Here you go!!

Chapter 15: I’m Hannah Montana!

Setting: Miley’s house, at about 5ish, and she is getting ready for a “Hannah” concert.

Miley: Daddy, have you seen my bubble gum-pink lip gloss?

Robby Ray: No honey, but you should just get moving anyways. The concerts in two hours, and it takes us 45 minutes to get there! Plus, you have so many other colors of lip glosses! Just pick one and hurry up!

Miley: Fine! (grabs a different lip gloss, and runs downstairs) Ready to go!

The limo is sitting in the driveway, and Hannah and Robby get in…Later, they arrive at the stadium for the concert (it was outdoor). And Hannah runs into her dressing room, to relax a bit, and then do her makeup touch-ups.

Robby Ray: Hey Miles, Jake is walking over. Do you want me to let him in?

Hannah: What is he doing here? But fine, I guess you can let him in, considering he doesn’t know who I am…yet.

Robby Ray: You sure this is the right time?

Hannah: I’m not saying that, but just saying in case he really does still like me….Well, you get the picture…

Robby Ray lets Jake go backstage to see Hannah.

Jake: Hey Hannah! Long time no see!

Hannah: (whispering to herself) Oh, you’d be surprised.

Jake: Did you say something?

Hannah: No! Nothing!

Jake: Well, you are probably wondering why I am here. I am because I need some advice.

Hannah: Okay, about what?

Jake: Well, you know that girl Miley I told you about? Well, I don’t know how to get her to like me again.

Hannah: What do you mean, what happened with this “Miley” girl that you speak of?? (She was very curious to see if he still liked her other identity.)

Jake: Well, I kinda did something that made her really mad. Then, when we were on the beach, we were talking, and she just walked off, because I, well, kinda, umm…….I kinda was insulting her, and being very mean……(he said, in an ashamed voice)

Hannah: So, let me get this straight. You got her mad, then insulted her and got her even more mad….Do you think that’s the way to get the girl of your dreams?!

Jake: Well, no, but she-

Hannah: I don’t want you to blame her anymore. You should be blaming yourself for doing things like that!

Jake: But I-

Hannah: No buts with me Jake.

Jake: Hey, you sound just like-

Hannah: Who? I don’t sound like anyone you know….not Miley! Nope not her! Nobody you’re familiar with! (she was stuttering)

Jake: You sound just like Miley!

Hannah: Now why would you say that??

Jake: She said the exact same thing to me, in the exact same way, earlier today.

Hannah: Well, I certainly can’t be Miley! I mean, I have blond hair!!

Jake: That’s true, but-

Robby Ray: Hannah, bad news. The concert has been cancelled due to the freak rainstorm that is going on right now.

Hannah: Oh no! That’s horrible!

Jake: Yeah. So anyways…..

Hannah: Alright Jake, you want to know the truth?

Jake: What do you mean “the truth”??

Hannah pulls him into a corner, where no one can see them but each other.

Hannah: I have a little secret that I haven’t told you yet, and I think now would be a good time to do it………(as she pulls off her wig) I’m Hannah Montana. Me, Miley.

Jake: Yeah right. Miley, I can’t believe you would lie to me. I bet you knew the concert was going to be cancelled, and came over here to just tell me some idiotic lie, trying to make me go out with you! I thought you were better than that! I guess not!

Miley: But Jake-

Jake: Don’t lie to me anymore, Miley. It won’t make anything better.

Jake walks off, back to his limo, leaving Miley/Hannah standing there alone. (Well okay, maybe not….*evil laugh*)

Setting: Jake is on his way home, and now getting out of his car when………

Someone steals his limo!! Lol no…something else happens.

You know that girl, Rachel, from Spanish class? Well she finds Jake, alone, and runs up to him and hugs him! (Yeah I know that’s even better!!)

Rachel: Jakey! I haven’t seen you in sooo long!

Jake: Oh, yeah…Hi Rachel…

Rachel: What’s the matter Jake?? You seem upset! Maybe a little kiss will make you feel better….

Jake: (as Rachel is leaning in for a kiss, he pushes her out of his way) Rachel, we broke up a long time ago! I don’t like you that way anymore!

Rachel: Why not? We can just pick up where we left off, and start over!

Jake: No! I don’t even like you! You are so mean to… Miley and the rest of her friends!

Rachel: Well! I thought you were nice!

Jake: I’m in a really bad mood now…(as Rachel opens her mouth) And no, I’m not going to change my feelings for you when I’m in a better mood! So don’t even ask!

Rachel walks away, unsatisfied, and Jake enters his house, in deep thought.

Jake: (thinking) Wow, I stood up for Miley?? I must…………really like her……..Oh man! I totally messed up! I’ve gotta get her to like me again! But how??

Hope you all like it!! Please comment!! That one was really long, so it's to pay off for not posting in a while!!

[best_of_both_worlds16]

wow thats great!

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks!! Did you read the whole thing or just this chapter?? I am gonna start writing another one in like 5 minutes....sooo I might post it if more people comment!

[MileyRox1174]

okay since I am bored and will be leaving to go somewhere soon, I will just post the last chapter for the night! (it has a lot of cliffhangers in it, so the next chapter will most likely be very long)

Chapter 16: Your friend (I hope), Miley xoxo


Setting: Now we’re at Lilly’s house…yep, haven’t been there in a while!

Lilly: (thinking) I see Miley’s stupid limo going into her stupid driveway! It’s so annoying, that she didn’t even invite me to the stupid concert! (looks over at her bed and sees a little note from Miley)

“Dear Lilly,
I am sorry about whatever I did to make you mad. I just hope that we could be friends again. And tonight, I have a “Hannah” concert, and was wondering if you (or Lola) wanted to come with me. Please call me; I really miss talking to you! Hope you feel the way I do.

Your friend (I hope),

Miley xoxo

P.S. Don’t be mad at Oliver. He really does feel that way about you, and yes, I did tell him to say a couple of things, but that doesn’t matter. Please just don’t be mad at him at least.”

Lilly: Aww man! I screwed up again! I just wish that I could’ve remembered the letter, and called her! She really does care about my opinions!! Oh my god! (while hitting her self in the head repeatedly) Lilly when you ever gonna learn?!

So she decides to call Miley, apologizing and thanking her for the nice note.

Lilly: Miley, I’m still sorry about that!

Miley: It’s alright…and besides, I need to talk to you about something, but it would be better if it wasn’t on the phone.

Lilly: Okay, I’ll be over in 10!

Miley:…..3…2…1! (she opens the door for Lilly, and she skates in)

Lilly: So, what was it that you wanted to talk about?

Miley: ------!

Setting: Now Oliver’s house….haven’t been there in a while either!

Oliver: (thinking) I hope Lilly forgives me…I really do feel that way…I guess she just doesn’t think I do because I kissed Miley before her…I should think of a way to make it up to her…I could plan a little party for all my friends…And ---------!

Setting: Jake’s house (yeah I know Oliver only said one thing, but oh well; I didn’t want to reveal too much!)

Jake: (thinking) Should I go over to her house? No. That would be too forward. Should I call her? No. That would be stupid to do it over the phone. I am not going to e-mail her either…Oh what the heck! I will just go over to her house and do it! I really need to!

But as he is walking out, he gets, well, let’s just say sidetracked, by someone else.

Hope you all like it!! Last post of the night!! Please comment, and the next chapter will be up tomorrow!!

[best_of_both_worlds16]

wow its still great! can you please go to mine? HERE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=30006) it is. I just added a new chapter. mine of course isn't as good as yours, though.

[MileyRox1174]

i read it! it is soooooooo good!! and I think it's better than mine!! but that's how all writers are!! lol well i have to go bye bye!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Oh Great last 2 chapters!!

YAh i didnt have school because there was a lot of ice everywhere

[hannah_montana.boston]

its now a habbit 2 ckeak ur writing during skol.wat can i say i <3 it snd schooli dont <3 it

[MileyRox1174]

thanks!! I will post another chapter right now!!

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 16: Your friend (I hope), Miley xoxo


Setting: Now we’re at Lilly’s house…yep, haven’t been there in a while!

Lilly: (thinking) I see Miley’s stupid limo going into her stupid driveway! It’s so annoying, that she didn’t even invite me to the stupid concert! (looks over at her bed and sees a little note from Miley)

“Dear Lilly,
I am sorry about whatever I did to make you mad. I just hope that we could be friends again. And tonight, I have a “Hannah” concert, and was wondering if you (or Lola) wanted to come with me. Please call me; I really miss talking to you! Hope you feel the way I do.

Your friend (I hope),

Miley xoxo

P.S. Don’t be mad at Oliver. He really does feel that way about you, and yes, I did tell him to say a couple of things, but that doesn’t matter. Please just don’t be mad at him at least.”

Lilly: Aww man! I screwed up again! I just wish that I could’ve remembered the letter, and called her! She really does care about my opinions!! Oh my god! (while hitting her self in the head repeatedly) Lilly when you ever gonna learn?!

So she decides to call Miley, apologizing and thanking her for the nice note.

Lilly: Miley, I’m still sorry about that!

Miley: It’s alright…and besides, I need to talk to you about something, but it would be better if it wasn’t on the phone.

Lilly: Okay, I’ll be over in 10!

Miley:…..3…2…1! (she opens the door for Lilly, and she skates in)

Lilly: So, what was it that you wanted to talk about?

Miley: ------!

Setting: Now Oliver’s house….haven’t been there in a while either!

Oliver: (thinking) I hope Lilly forgives me…I really do feel that way…I guess she just doesn’t think I do because I kissed Miley before her…I should think of a way to make it up to her…I could plan a little party for all my friends…And ---------!

Setting: Jake’s house (yeah I know Oliver only said one thing, but oh well; I didn’t want to reveal too much!)

Jake: (thinking) Should I go over to her house? No. That would be too forward. Should I call her? No. That would be stupid to do it over the phone. I am not going to e-mail her either…Oh what the heck! I will just go over to her house and do it! I really need to!

But as he is walking out, he gets, well, let’s just say sidetracked, by someone else.

Sorry it's kinda short, but oh well, there you go!! Hope you all likee!! Please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

YouKnowYouLoveMe: LUCKY is the only thing I can say!! We had soooooo much ice like yesterday, and the day before, and yet, still school! And it was 6 degrees F yesterday!! It's not fair!!

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, now don't talk about stuff like that...hehe I just had to reply!! Okay, well anyways, please comment!!

["Ifwewereamovie"]

That was really good more!!!! MORE!!!!! MOORREE!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

I'll start writing more, but I need more comments to post it!!

I'm trying to think of who to start with!! Hmm.........

[hannah_montana.boston]

you know that comershul(sp) where the kid is like "please sir may i have more " ant the gut is like "morrrrrreeeee" in a really high pitch vioce?
thats how i feel

[MileyRox1174]

ookay...i guess.....thanks?.......lol

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 17: Run! Just Run!

Setting: Miley’s house!! (Heeheehee……….)

Miley: JAKE!

Lilly: About Jake??

Miley: Yeah, I mean, he’s been soo mean to me lately….but that look in his eyes is telling me that he is thinking something else…

Lilly: Well, if he is being mean, just ignore him for a while…maybe he will cave and finally ask you!

Miley: Yeah, but I have been ignoring him as best as I can, and it doesn’t seem to work!! Maybe I should just give up…

Lilly: No! You can’t just give up now! I will help you ignore him, but I will still like act the same around him, pretending I don’t know why you are acting like that!

Miley: Okay Lilly, I’ll do it…

Little did she know, a certain someone was trying to get Jake to hate Miley, in every way possible.

Setting: Oliver’s house…

Oliver: And kiss her, in front of everybody! (And he was also thinking of other things, but I can’t reveal too much!!)

Oliver started planning the party, with Lilly, literally, written all over it.

Setting: Jake’s location…(*evil laugh* Well, not really, but oh well…)

Jake: (struggling) Let me go!

Voice: Why should I? That little Miley girl has melted your brain! You aren’t thinking right! Well, I’ll just fix that…

Jake: Don’t you dare hurt her!

Voice: Oh you can be sure that I won’t hurt her…But then again, I’m not exactly sure who will!

Jake: Oh no, I hope you’re not thinking of what I think you’re thinking!...

Voice: Oh yes, I am, and that’s something you can be sure of!

Setting: The beach, with Miley, Lilly, and Jackson (working at Rico’s obviously).

Miley: Where’s Jake? He’s usually around here at least once a day!

Lilly: Just wait, I’m sure he’ll turn up somewhere!

Jackson: Miles, what’s the point of waiting for him, if you are just going to ignore him? Now that’s something I want to see, even though it’s so stupid!

Miley: Yeah, well you won’t be seeing anything if you say another word about it!

Jackson: Whatever sis.

Miley’s phone starts ringing…She answers it after three rings.

Miley: Hello?

Jake: MILEY RUN!!

Miley: But why-

Jake: Just run! Go somewhere! But go now! Somewhere far away from the beach!

Miley: Jake-

Jake: Quickly! They’re coming! GO!!

She hangs up, grabs Lilly, and starts running (where she’ll stop, only I know!!).

Lilly: What’s wrong Miley?!

Miley: Jake just called, said to run, somewhere, anywhere…away from the beach.

Lilly: But why?

Miley: I don’t know! But c’mon, we have to keep going!

They keep running, but they don’t know that them running away from the beach was the certain someone’s plan (Jake didn’t know).

Setting: Well, wherever Jake is (no details for another chapter or two).

Jake: Oh man I hope she gets away in time…

Voice: (back from running to the beach) Oh trust me, she’ll get somewhere…but not very far! *evil laugh*

Jake: Was this your plan all along?!

Voice: Now you’re catching on! Of course it was ego boy! You’re so in love with her, that you’ll do anything to keep her safe, but actually, she’s not where she’s going….*evil laugh*

Jake: I said DON’T HURT HER!!

Voice: And like I said, I’m not, but everything else, well, you’ll find out yourself later!

Setting: Miley’s location (wherever she ran, and Lilly and her are completely out of breath…).

Miley: (talking in really out-of-breath voice) Need *breath* to go *breath* farther….

Lilly: (in same voice) Can’t *breath* go any farther *breath*…

Miley: But we have to *breath*…Jake said *breath*…

Lilly: I don’t care *breath* what Jake said! *breath* Let’s go *breath* home!

Other voice: You’re not going there, but you will be going somewhere else! (Grabs Miley and Lilly, and walks off with them.)

I was so bored that I just had to post that......yeah now my story has three different cliffhangers, so most likely the chapters will get a little longer than usual!! Anyways, please comment, or else no chapter!! Chapter=4 good comments!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

good story=good comments/good review whitch(sp) you got from me

[MileyRox1174]

lol three more comments!!!!!!!!

I already wrote the next chapter, so I can post it if I get three more good comments before nine!

[Miley_Montana_Gal]

OMG yes lol :) I'd luv to hear more!

[hannah_montana.boston]

:-x 2 comments down 2 comments to go

[MileyRox1174]

Well including your second comment, it's only one to go but I can't post this morning because I still have to get ready for school!!

[Fire-Chicken]

Write More When You Are At Home!!

[Sporty Miley]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

that's 3!!!!!!!!!

[Sporty Miley]

i mean that's 4!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!! my bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

hehehe now i can 4 fill my addiction

[MileyRox1174]

okay okay! I will post it! Sorry, had volleyball after school, and couldn't post it!

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 18: I Can’t…

Setting: Jake’s location (near Miley’s but he doesn’t know where she is, much less where he is)

Jake: What have you done to her?!

Voice: Okay, here’s the deal. I’m not doing anything to her, I’m telling my assistant to! Got it??

Jake: Whatever, but she better not get hurt!!

Voice: Well……….

Setting: Miley and Lilly’s location (not telling, well okay I will……they are in a small building, in a locked closet. It’s soundproof to everyone in the building or within 1 mile of it, but I didn’t say other people couldn’t hear it…)

Lilly is standing up, thinking about what will happen to her, while Miley finally opens her eyes.

Lilly: Well, look who woke up! Rise and shine little miss Miley!

Miley: Ow…..What, what happened?

Lilly: Well, we were so tired, that some guy took us here, and put us in here!

Miley: What happened to me?

Lilly: Oh, umm about that……I was kinda screaming, and he decided to make me stop, he would…umm…………

Miley: What?? Tell me!!

Lilly: Umm……..well knock you out, then keep like punching you, and hurting you…..but he left me alone for some reason…….

Miley: (tries to get up…and can’t) OW!! I can see why he did it! To make me not be able to get up either….grr……

Lilly: Now Miley, don’t get all mad again….you know what happened before!!

Miley: Fine, but how are we supposed to get out of here?!

Lilly: I……….have no idea………we may never get out…

Setting: Oliver’s house (little does he know what’s happening to Miley and Lilly, and Jake).

Oliver: Perfect! That’s the perfect plan! (suddenly hears screaming) Who’s that?! It sounds like….Miley and Lilly! What happened to them? I haven’t seen them all day!! I’ll follow the screams!

Setting: Jake’s location is…………a small building also, but his closet is soundproof to everyone….

Jake: Now how do I get out?!

He soon spots an opening in the clothes hanging, and he separates it, only to reveal-----!

Setting: Miley and Lilly’s closet.

Lilly is looking around, touching the walls, looking for some way of escape. Suddenly, she trips on something.

Lilly: Ow! Hey! A box! Maybe something we need is in here….(but the only thing she found was a note…..which she handed to Miley, who could finally be useful in some way or another)

Miley: It says,

“Hello girls, how are you?
He’s wondering “Where are you?”
Yes, you know who
Well here’s the deal
You need to see
It’s not who you think it is
It’s thee!”

Lilly: What the heck does that mean?

Miley: I think it means------!

Here you all go! Hope you like it!! Please comment!! I'll try to post another ASAP, but if I don't tonight, expect another one by either early tomorrow morning, or at about 1 or so (I have Volleyball practice tomorrow morning). Again, comment please!! Chapter=4 good comments!!

[MileyRox1174]

does anybody like it????

[MileyRox1174]

anybody??? Please comment!! (sorry for the multiple posts, but hey, I started this thread!!)

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

OMG!!!!!!!!! i love this fan fic!!!!!!! this is one of the best ones i've ever read!!!! been readin it everyday since u started it!!!!!!!! you better hurry up n put the next one up or im gonna scream until i lose my voice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz!!!!!!! i don't get addicted to many fan fics. as i'm sur u can c u've got me hooked ta urs!!!!! so plzzzzzzzzzzzzz put the next chapter up!!!!!!~Cassidy~

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

did i mention.... I LOVE YOUR FAN FIC!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!? !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?lol. ~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

thank you, thank you very much!! lol!! Okay, fine I will post the next chapter now!! (I just finished it)

Chapter 19: Against Each Other


Miley: Well,

“He’s wondering ‘Where are you?’
Yes, you know who”- I think that means that Jake is wondering where we are…

And “It’s not who you think it is, it’s thee!” I don’t get one bit!! We just need to think outside of the box!

Lilly: Umm, Miley…..there’s something that I think I should tell you…

Miley: Yes Lilly?

Lilly: I, umm, knew that we would get in this situation……

Miley: WHAT?! BUT HOW?!

Lilly: Well, the umm person told me, and made me swear not to tell, but I just couldn’t…..I’m really sorry Miley!!

Miley: I can’t believe you betrayed me Lilly! After all that we’ve been through!

Lilly: Well, actually, most of the time, it’s after all you’ve been through! I’m always second best to you!

Miley: But Lilly! This, this is just totally not what we should be doing with each other! And anyways, did you know about the letter too? Huh? Huh?

Lilly: Actually, to be honest, no.

Miley: Really? I mean, but you said-

Lilly: I know I said that I knew we would end up here, but I couldn’t stop you from running, or else we would be in an even worse situation! I’m really, sincerely sorry Miley!

Miley: Well, okay…

Lilly: Thank you!

Lilly then starts looking around for another thing to read or escape through…while Miley sits on the ground. But it just so turns out that Miley can be more useful on the ground than standing up…

Setting: Oliver, running, remembering where the screams came from. (He is running towards Miley and Lilly’s building, FYI.)

Oliver: I think the screams came from that direction! (sees the small building) Yes! They must be in there!

Oliver runs inside, but doesn’t get very far…

Setting: Jake’s little building, in his little closet, just as he pushed the clothes aside.

Jake reveals none other than (yes another…) NOTE!!

Jake: What’s this?? (he reads it aloud to himself)

“How are you, ego boy?
She is wondering
‘Oh, where is my boy?’
Oh yes, that’s true
Anyways, here’s what
You have to do
Only one thing, and it’s to say
-------------!
To a special someone,
Who really does not care
About you for who you are!”

Jake: What is this?? Why do I have to say that?! Ugh!! This is sooo not cool! I don’t even know what half of this means!!

All together, but unaware of it, they (Miley, Lilly, Oliver, Jake) sigh…With each other on their minds. But also unaware of it, they are actually saying that, by reading the notes that they are all against each other, in some way or another.


Hope you all likee!! Please oh please comment this time!! lol I know one person who did!!Vanessa&Zaclovr#1!!Like a lot!! Thanks!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

nic lauren <3 in it.how many prittys do i gotta put b4 u post more prity prity prity prity prity prity pleaz lauren pleaz

[Fire-Chicken]

U NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!! NOW!!!! lol

[MileyRox1174]

I still need two more comments!! lol!! hannah montana.boston, even if you put that many pretty's, I'm not posting before I get two more comments!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need more!!!! like i said, u got me hooked!!! lol. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol. i think u get my point!:lol: :D

Cassidy

[MileyRox1174]

one more comment!! hurry!! I already wrote the next chapter after too!!

^Oh and Cassidy, thanks for the nice comment posted during the Fan Fiction "Hannah's Twin"!! It really made my day!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

thankies!!! happy ta make some1 else happy!!!! n i meant every word of wut i said!!!!!! i read a lot of fan fics!!! n like i said, u got me hooked! lol. hey, u wanna b friends?

*Cassidy*

[MileyRox1174]

sure!! And since you commented again, I will post the next chapter!! (Hey, I never said you couldn't post twice, as long as I liked the comment!!)

Chapter 20: Hello, stranger.

Setting: Miley and Lilly’s closet.

Miley and Lilly were quite frustrated. They couldn’t find a way out. Miley was singing her songs quietly to herself, to keep calm.

Miley: “Everybody has those days. Everybody makes mistakes.”

She kept singing her songs, until they reminded her of Jake.

Miley: “We all want to believe in Love. We all want to believe in something bigger than ourselves.”

“While the chances of meeting somebody like you are a million to one, I can’t help believin', whoa oh; you're one in a million.”

Lilly noticed Miley leaning against the wall, singing her songs. She felt bad, for not letting her really do anything.

Lilly: Miley, those are beautiful songs. Are you okay?

Miley: Yep, I’m fine…

Suddenly, Miley disappears (somehow). Lilly is standing in the closet, freaked out, trying to find out where she went. Suddenly the door opens. Lilly looks at the door, and only smiles.

Voice: Hello, stranger.

Setting: Jake’s closet.

Jake: *sigh* I’ll never see them again, much less get out of here. *an idea pops into his head* Oh my god! I think I know what this note means!!

“She is wondering
‘Oh, where is my boy?’
Oh yes, that’s true”- Means that Miley is thinking of me!

“You have to do
Only one thing, and it’s to say
I HATE YOU!
To a special someone”- Means that I have to say that to Miley…

“a special someone,
Who really does not care
About you for who you are!”- Means that Miley doesn’t care for me like I thought…(or does she??)

Jake: Now that I’ve decoded the letter, how do I get out of here?!?!

But what he doesn’t realize is he’s actually on his way out soon…

Hope you all likee!! Sorry it's so short! Just needed suspense!! Please comment!! And remember, 4 comments=next chapter!!

[MileyRox1174]

^^Cassidy, I added you to my buddy list!

P.S. Comment everyone!!

[Sporty Miley]

i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

hehe...thankies! i'm just about ta ad u! but 1st i havta read the next chapter! lol.

Cassidy

[MileyRox1174]

well, I still need two more comments!! and before like 5, because I'm going out to dinner!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

oh no!!! wut's gonna happen now??? lol. i just added u! i havta go help my dad get some fire wood. so ill bbl.

*Cassidy*

[Fire-Chicken]

I Love It!! It's Soo Good!!!
Hope u write more today, so I can read it tomorrow.. ( On my Birthday )
If u do.. U've given me a Birthdaypresent :D

[Miley Cryus fan1]

post more plzzzzzzzzz

[MileyRox1174]

okay okay!! I will post more!!

Chapter 21: I Trusted You!

Setting: Now it’s just Lilly and the mystery person’s closet.

Lilly: (smiling) OLIVER!!

Oliver: That’s right, it’s me!! *laughs, and gets pushed into the closet* so, umm, I thought Miley was in here too??

Lilly: Well, she was…

Oliver: What do you mean?!

Lilly: She just, umm, disappeared into thin air. Or so I saw. If something else happened to her, I need to get a new prescription for my contact lenses!

Oliver: *laughs, but quickly stops, and notices the note* what’s this?

Lilly: That’s a note we found when we first got in here, and Miley woke up.

Oliver: Okay now what do you mean?

Lilly: She was knocked out, and punched like a million times…hehe…

Oliver: You let that happen to her?!

Lilly: I wasn’t trying to! I mean, I-

Oliver: I can’t believe you did that!

Lilly: I said I was sor-

Oliver: I don’t care what you said! You just let them hurt her!

Lilly and Oliver stopped talking, and Lilly sort of wished Miley was in the closet with her, and not Oliver.

Setting: Miley’s new location (and yes, if you’re thinking what I’m thinking, you’re probably right! Although you might find out in this section!!)

Miley: *wakes up, again, with her hands tied behind her back* Ugh, OW! That hurt even more! Where…where am I?!

Voice: Well hello there Miley! Nice day, ain’t it?

Miley: Who…said…that?!

Voice: Oh yes, it’s me!

Miley: But…but….I trusted you!

Voice: Yeah, but I lied!! I never even liked that truce we made!!

Miley: Grr… (Thinking) Wait Miley, stop! Don’t get that mad again! Oh who am I kidding? I don’t care! I trusted them!

Miley rips the ropes binding her hands together, and jumps up. She lunges for the mystery person. But as it turns out; she was probably safer with her hands tied up…

Setting: Jake’s closet. (It’s soundproof to people on the outside, but I never said that it he couldn’t hear anything going on outside…)

Jake: *hears a huge crash and screams* what was that?! It sounded like someone I know…hmm….but who? I can’t put my finger on it…..*hears even louder and more piercing screams* someone I know…

Suddenly, the door opens, and a very large, canvas bag is tossed in. But what Jake doesn’t know is that the screams came from what’s inside…

Hope you all likee!! Please comment!! And remember, 4 comments=next chapter!!

[MileyRox1174]

oh and for everyone who has called me by something other than my username (you know what I mean, and know who you are) can you please PM me? I have something urgent to tell you!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

ah! i love it!!!! i need more! ~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

can you edit out my name from all of your most recent posts please?? I don't want anyone calling me my name anymore! Please?! (Vanessa&Zaclovr#1)

[MileyRox1174]

anyways, comment!! I wrote two more chapters!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

ahhh! post the chapters!!!!!!!!! i need more!!! n np. i edited the posts. lol.~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

thank you so much!! now I will take one more comment that I like to post the next chappie (chapter)!!

[MileyRox1174]

or you know what, I will just post it. Because I am having a pretty good day, and I feel like making you guys happy (lol that was so corny/cheesy)

Chapter 21: I Trusted You!

Setting: Now it’s just Lilly and the mystery person’s closet.

Lilly: (smiling) OLIVER!!

Oliver: That’s right, it’s me!! *laughs, and gets pushed into the closet* so, umm, I thought Miley was in here too??

Lilly: Well, she was…

Oliver: What do you mean?!

Lilly: She just, umm, disappeared into thin air. Or so I saw. If something else happened to her, I need to get a new prescription for my contact lenses!

Oliver: *laughs, but quickly stops, and notices the note* what’s this?

Lilly: That’s a note we found when we first got in here, and Miley woke up.

Oliver: Okay now what do you mean?

Lilly: She was knocked out, and punched like a million times…hehe…

Oliver: You let that happen to her?!

Lilly: I wasn’t trying to! I mean, I-

Oliver: I can’t believe you did that!

Lilly: I said I was sor-

Oliver: I don’t care what you said! You just let them hurt her!

Lilly and Oliver stopped talking, and Lilly sort of wished Miley was in the closet with her, and not Oliver.

Setting: Miley’s new location (and yes, if you’re thinking what I’m thinking, you’re probably right! Although you might find out in this section!!)

Miley: *wakes up, again, with her hands tied behind her back* Ugh, OW! That hurt even more! Where…where am I?!

Voice: Well hello there Miley! Nice day, ain’t it?

Miley: Who…said…that?!

Voice: Oh yes, it’s me!

Miley: But…but….I trusted you!

Voice: Yeah, but I lied!! I never even liked that truce we made!!

Miley: Grr… (Thinking) Wait Miley, stop! Don’t get that mad again! Oh who am I kidding? I don’t care! I trusted them!

Miley rips the ropes binding her hands together, and jumps up. She lunges for the mystery person. But as it turns out; she was probably safer with her hands tied up…

Setting: Jake’s closet. (It’s soundproof to people on the outside, but I never said that it he couldn’t hear anything going on outside…)

Jake: *hears a huge crash and screams* what was that?! It sounded like someone I know…hmm….but who? I can’t put my finger on it…..*hears even louder and more piercing screams* someone I know…

Suddenly, the door opens, and a very large, canvas bag is tossed in. But what Jake doesn’t know is that the screams came from what’s inside…

[MileyRox1174]

do you all likee?? Please comment!! And I need 4 comments!! (less if I am really happy/generous!!)

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

o come on!!! you kno ur fan fic is great!!!!! i've told u like a million times! not ta mention like a bunch of other ppl! lol. so plzzzzzzzzz post the next part!!!!! pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! lol. well, ima go watch HSM on disney channel. plus im gettin tired. so ill talk ta ya later.~Cassidy~

[mileyboo897]

OMGosh! those are so good! please go on!

[MileyRox1174]

thank you! Since it is a new day, and I am in a very good mood because of Cassidy's and mileyboo897's comments (and just because I am), I will post the next chapter!!

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 22: I Just Can’t Stay Away From Danger…

Setting: Jake’s closet.

Jake reaches over to the bag, and slowly pulls the bag away. He was completely unprepared for what he saw.

Jake: MILEY?!

Miley, of course, did not hear him. She was too knocked out, and obviously, even more hurt.

Jake: (thinking) what is she doing here? I thought she ran away from here! They must have caught her…

Suddenly, Miley slowly opened her eyes, blinking very slowly (like waking up from a very, very deep sleep).

Jake: Miley! You’re awake!

Miley: (can hardly talk) Jake? Is that you??....

Jake: Yes Miley! Boy am I glad to see you!

Miley: I wish I could say the same thing!

Jake: What do you mean by that?

Miley: (keep in mind she is laying on the ground) Well…Lilly and I were captured after we ran as far and as fast as we could. We were too tired to go on….We ended up in a closet just like this…and I ended up outside of this building somehow….I tried to fight back, Jake, but I couldn’t! They were too tricky! That’s why you heard a crash…they threw me against the ground, and I was screaming because they kept hurting me…I just can’t stay away from danger…

Jake: What do you mean you can’t stay away from danger?

Miley: Well, Lilly was screaming at the guy who captured us to let go of us…So to get her to be quiet, he knocked me out, and kept punching me…So this just adds to the pain…

Jake: Wow, you’ve had a tough day today-

Miley: Yeah, and you made it worse by not believing me at the concert!

Miley finally found the strength to move, and she moved into a corner, not facing Jake. Jake just stood there, shocked.

Setting: Oliver and Lilly’s closet. (Remember, tensions are rising between them. Not the good kind, either.)

Oliver and Lilly were still sitting in the closet, not speaking at all. Then Lilly began singing one of Miley’s songs to herself.

Lilly: “Everybody has those days. Everybody makes mistakes.”

Oliver started thinking he was so stupid, and yet, he was glad he talked to her like that…for some odd reason…

Setting: Miley and Jake’s closet.

Miley was singing the same song, at the same time as Lilly, and somehow, someway, something amazing happened.

Miley: “Everybody has those days. Everybody makes mistakes.”

Suddenly, in both closets, a small vent opened. In both closets, only Miley and Lilly were small enough to crawl through.

Jake: Miley you are small enough, so just go!

Oliver: Lilly you are small enough, so just go!

Miley and Lilly: But what about you? I can’t just leave you here alone!

Jake and Oliver: It’s okay. I’ll get out somehow…

So then Miley and Lilly both started crawling through. Miley was barely strong enough, and didn’t go very far before she had to rest. Lilly was a quarter of the way through when she rested.

But the one thing that all of them didn’t know was that the vents connected at one point, with one exit. So at some point, Miley and Lilly would meet…or should I say, hopefully meet…


Sorry if that is a bit confusing... When I put two people saying something together, that meant that, at the same time, but in a different closet, they were saying about the same thing.......I hope that cleared things up for you...if it didn't, you can ask me any questions!! Anyways, please comment!! Hope ya like it!!

[L.A.]

Really Good!!!

[MileyRox1174]

thanks!! three more comments!!

I'm already writing chapter 24!!

[Khockeygrl4]

omg. i love it!!!! more, more, more pleaz!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

two more comments!!

[Fire-Chicken]

OMG!! This Fan Fic is sooo Good!!!

[MileyRox1174]

I'm already writing chapter 26!! Please comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks!! One more comment!!

[MileyRox1174]

Oh yeah! BTW Happy Birthday Rebecka!!

Since it is your birthday, I will post two more chappies of this Fan Fiction!! Happy Birthday!!

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 23: Broken Hearts

Setting: Jake’s closet. (Remember, Miley just went into the vent.)

Jake: (thinking) but…she can’t be Hannah Montana! She…she…oh who am I kidding? She is! She was telling the truth!!

Jake: I just need to think of a way to make her accept me again! But first, I need to find a way out of here…

Suddenly, the door opens, and another victim is thrown in (yes, in a very large, canvas bag). An idea suddenly pops into his head…

Setting: Lilly’s section of the vent.

Lilly: (thinking) I can’t believe Oliver was so mean to me! He didn’t even care…But I am also really sad that I had to leave one of my best friends in that closet…

Lilly keeps going, until she is halfway through, and sees light coming from the far end of the vent…But she doesn’t go on…

Setting: Miley’s section of the vent.

Miley: (thinking) Oh man I really can’t wait until *Ow* I get out of here…I wonder where Lilly is?? (None of them know that they are both in the vent.)

Miley started whispering her songs to herself (yes, again). All she really needed was the comfort of her melodies to keep her going…And after a while she started crying…But she didn’t know that she wasn’t alone on that note…

Setting: Lilly’s section, again.

Suddenly, Lilly heard the soft singing. It really freaked her out. But then she realized that they were some very familiar songs, and a very familiar voice…

Lilly: MILEY!!

Lilly started venturing to the exit. Miley did so too, once she heard Lilly’s voice scream her name…

Miley was still pretty weak, but could move very swiftly. Lilly was almost to the end. She stopped there, and waited. Miley soon got to the end, too. She fell down just as she was about two feet away from Lilly…Lilly went over to see who it was (no she didn’t know yet).

Lilly: Miley!!

Miley slowly opened her eyes again.

Miley: Lilly?! Is it really you?!

Lilly: Yes, it’s me Miley! Where were you?? Have you been stuck in here??

Miley: No, I ended up in Jake’s closet…well first in a fight with that person, and then in a very large, canvas bag. I was tossed into his closet, and became unconscious. Then, when I woke up, we got into a fight after a while. Then when I sang my song to help myself stay strong, the vent opened. And, well, that’s how I ended up here…

Lilly: Well, anyways, it’s so great to see you again Miley!!

Miley: You too Lilly!!

Miley and Lilly both hugged. Then, Lilly helped Miley out of the vent first (as she was still weak). Lilly then climbed out. But what place the vent ended at, they did not know…

Setting: Jake’s closet, with the large, canvas bag still untouched.

Jake finally decided to pull the bag away. But, again, he was totally unprepared for what he saw.

Jake: OLIVER?!

Oliver woke up.

Oliver: Who…who…who’s that??

Jake: It’s me, Oken. Jake Ryan!!

Oliver: Oh yeah, Mr. Ego. So, where is Miley??

Jake: She went into that vent over there. (He gestures towards the opening.)

Oliver: That’s funny. Lilly went into the same vent, but in the other closet…

Jake: Maybe they met up with each other!!

Oliver: Yeah! So, umm, anyways….how the heck are we getting out of here?!?!

Jake: I think I have an idea…

Jake whispers the idea into Oliver’s ear, and Oliver approves. They get started on it…

What everyone (Miley, Lilly, Jake, and Oliver) don’t know is that even though they each have broken hearts, that doesn’t mean they are still connected in some way…

Chapter 24: Are We Clear On The Plan??

Setting: Outside of the vent… (Where? You ask…well, somewhere maybe too familiar…)

Miley and Lilly both get out of the stuffy vent system. As their eyes dart around, they can’t believe what they are seeing…

Miley: Is this…

Lilly: I think it is…

Miley and Lilly: SCHOOL?!

Lilly: Of all places…it just had to be here?? I thought we got rid of eight grade for good!!

Miley: Well, maybe this is telling us something...That vent was really, really long…So maybe our holding buildings are somewhere around here…

They walk out of the school, their eyes glancing in every direction…And like Miley said, they see the two buildings, about two miles into the distance…

Miley: See! There they are!! (She points to the buildings.)

Lilly: Wow, they’re much closer together than we thought!!

Miley and Lilly start thinking of a plan… (For what??)

Setting: Jake and Oliver’s closet…I know, it’s like getting so mixed up…

Jake: Okay, so are we clear on the plan??

Oliver: Yep, we both get into the bag, and when they come to pick it up, we pretend that you are behind the clothes. The guy takes it and throws it into the trash…and we get out!! And we’re free!!

Jake: Oken, shut up! Don’t yell! Oh wait….this closet is soundproof to people on the outside…sorry…

Oliver: It’s okay, now we just need to get in, since we set up a little “Jake” prop back behind the clothes.

Jake and Oliver get into the bag…

Setting: Miley and Lilly, outside of the school.

Miley: Okay, clear on the plan?

Lilly: Yep, we wait for a little bit, and then if nothing happens, we go back…Do you we really have to go back??

Miley: Yes! If they don’t get out soon, we will have to go back through the vent!!

Lilly: Okay…

They stand there and wait…And after about a half hour, they see figures jump out of a large dumpster, next to the buildings.

Lilly: Who’s that?!

Miley: I don’t know…We should go investigate!

Lilly: Okay, but if anything else bad happens, I’m blaming you!

Miley: Fine…let’s go!!

Just as both of them are running towards the dumpster, the two figures see them, and run up to them. Then something very unexpected happens…

I hope you all likee!! Just so you know, I posted two in a row because it's Rebecka's bday!! So anyways, please comment!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

Happy Birthday Rebecka and btw im liking it

[MileyRox1174]

thank you!!

[violared21]

Its really good I love it.

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

ah! love it!!!!! as usual!!!! it' great!!!!! plz right more!!!! hey guess wut!! it's snowing so i think ima go outside n mess round with a bunch of my friends 4 a bit! i'll bbl. but plz post the next chapter!!!!!

~Cassidy~

[Fire-Chicken]

Oh yeah! BTW Happy Birthday Rebecka!!

Since it is your birthday, I will post two more chappies of this Fan Fiction!! Happy Birthday!!

Thank You Very Much!! I'm reading it right now :D

[MileyRox1174]

okay I will post the next chappie!! Cassidy, lucky!! I wish it would finally snow for real here! we got like an inch dusting, but it melted!! I want a snow day!! lol

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 25: Fairytales Just Don’t Come True

The two figures (Jake and Oliver) run up to Miley and Lilly and…

Jake kisses Miley!

Oliver kisses Lilly!

Miley: What…what was that?!

Jake: Oh…I guess you really don’t like me...

Jake runs off, leaving Miley with a hollow feeling in her stomach.

Lilly: Wow! Why did you do that?

Oliver: I realized that I really, truly do like you! I’m so sorry!

Lilly: It’s okay!

Oliver: So, umm, do you want to go out with me??

Lilly: Of course!!

Lilly and Oliver hug. Miley is just sitting on the ground, with tears in her eyes. Lilly finally notices her, and walks up to her.

Lilly: Miley, what’s wrong?? Where’s Jake?

Miley: He…he…he kissed me!!

Lilly: So why are you so upset??

Miley: Because! I asked him “What was that?!” and he took it the wrong way!! He ran off!!

Lilly: Oh, Miley-

Miley starts crying.

Lilly: Miley don’t cry-

Miley: Why shouldn’t I cry?! My life is so miserable now!!

Oliver: Oh you don’t know that…I mean it could be worse-

Lilly gives him a look that says stop-talking-or-else. He stops short.

Lilly then gets Miley to stand up, and the three amigos walk home together, into the fading sunset.

Setting: The next day. Miley is still miserable.

Miley walks downstairs, to have breakfast. She sits at the bar.

Robby Ray (knew they were back): Hey Miles, you okay?

Miley: Sure, if you define okay as miserable!

Robby Ray: (sarcastic) I’m glad to see you’re doing better!!

Miley: Daddy, I asked one question! One question! And Jake thought I meant it in a different way! I am so stupid!

Robby Ray: Well, you can just wait and see what happens.

Miley: Alright, I will….

Miley eats her breakfast, and gets dressed. She then calls Lilly, and invites her to go to the beach with her.

Lilly: Sure! I’ll be over in 10!!

Miley: ……………2…..1! (She opens the door for Lilly, as she skates in.)

Miley and Lilly walk to the beach, talking about what happened the night before. Jackson is working at Rico’s. When they get there, Miley and Lilly each order an ice cream cone. They then sit at one of the tables.

Miley: I messed up! It was just one question! I didn’t mean for him to think I meant it that way!

Lilly: I’m sure he’ll be fine with it…

Jake walks up to Rico’s in his hat and sunglasses “disguise”. 8-) He orders ice cream also.

Jake sees Miley and Lilly talking, laughing, all happy. But he just thinks: I can’t believe she would do that to me! Reject me, then be all happy about it!:mad:

But what he doesn’t know is that Miley and Lilly are faking it.

Jake walks up to Miley and Lilly’s table, and sits across from Miley.

Jake: So, why are you so happy??

Miley: Oh, no reason…

Jake: Is it because you humiliated me last night?!

Miley: No! Of course not! I would never do anything like that!

Jake: Oh yeah? Then what was that question you asked me for?? Huh? Huh?

Miley: Jake, it wasn’t meant to be heard that way-

Jake: But it was! And you humiliated me because of it! I guess fairytales just don’t come true!

Miley: But Jake, I-

Jake walks off down the beach before she finishes.

Lilly: What an idiot.

Miley: Well, yeah, but that idiot is the person that I am crushing on! I have to figure out a way to tell him! Because I don’t think my heart can take anymore breaking!

Miley and Lilly walk back to Miley’s house, thinking of plans.

Hope you all likee!! Please comment!! :))

[Fire-Chicken]

It's really really Good!! But I'm tired so I don't get all of it :D
And Thank you All for u congraulate me. ( 2 or 3 people ) lol

[MileyRox1174]

that's okay!! Anymore comments??

[totally off-topic but oh well ---
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I really really really really want a snow day tomorrow, so I am gonna do something that worked last year...but it is extended...if you don't know what I am talking about just ask!!! Lol]

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

haha, ya. 2day was the coldest day!!! i only stayed out 4 about an hr. but i froze my butt off!!! lol. i dont have school 2morrow and Tuesday neway! teacher work days. cuz Wednesday is the 1st day of teh 2nd semester. lol. so they have ta get all their stuff ready n grades put in. n ur story's really good as usual!!!!!!!!!!!


~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

again, LUCKY LUCKY LUCKY LUCKY!! I wish I didn't have school tomorrow or Tuesday!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

THIS STORY IS SOOO ADDICTING! IT"S THE BEST FANFICTION I'VE READ! I'M NOT KIDDING! plz right some more soon!

[hannah_montana.boston]

need more

[L.A.]

More!!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

again, LUCKY LUCKY LUCKY LUCKY!! I wish I didn't have school tomorrow or Tuesday!!

lol. but i can't wait til Wednesday cuz instead of art i'll have drama. n i'll have full band instead of just 7th grd wind instuments. lol. so yeah. but unfortunately i'll have civics instead of science. i don't like civics that much. omg, i had ta disect a frog on friday!! srry 4 bein so off topic. lol. but u do need ta put the next chapter up! im like dying over here(while drinkin my hot coco)!!! lol.~Cassidy~

[Fire-Chicken]

Yeah, U Really Need To Put The Next "Chappie" :P
Lol, I read it again so I understand all of it :D I really was tired yesterday.. But it was the best day yet this year. lol

[hannah_montana.boston]

p-l-ease please please please please type 4 me

yayyyyy


im sooooooo bored

[Sporty Miley]

plezzzzzzzzzz rite more!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need 2 find out what happens!!!!!!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

ahhh! come on, i need more!!! it's too addicting!!!!!!

*Cassidy*

[Sporty Miley]

LOL!! i know isn't it?????

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

LOL!! i know isn't it?????

ya it is!!!~Cassidy~

[Sporty Miley]

tottaly!!!

[MileyRox1174]

thank you, thank you! okay, I will post the next chappie now!! lol, sorry for the wait...I was really busy...

Chapter 26: The Tears Are Never Ending!

Setting: Miley’s house.

Miley: But Lilly…Jake already said no to me!

Lilly: Yeah but not to me! I can tell him everything!!

Miley: Fine! But how about you do it as Lola!

Lilly: Why as Lola?

Miley: Because, he won’t know as well!

Lilly: Fine…But then you have to go as Hannah!

Miley: Fine! Okay, now let’s get ready for dinner! (They call Oliver and tell him to call Jake, telling him that Hannah will be having dinner in the back room at The Cheesecake Factory.)

Hannah, Lola and Robby get picked up in the limo. They soon arrive at The Cheesecake Factory, and get directed to the private back room. (They finish eating before Jake get’s there, he just wants to talk.)

Hannah: Lola, are you sure this will work?

Lola: When have I ever been wrong?

Hannah: A lot. Oh no, it’s not going to work!

Robby Ray: Hannah, just calm down. Everything will be fine!

Hannah: Okay, I guess.

Jake walks into The Cheesecake Factory with his “disguise” on. He then asks for Hannah Montana. He gets directed to the back room.

Jake: Hannah! You would never believe what happened!

Hannah: What?

Jake: That girl Miley I told you about impersonated you! At your own concert!

Hannah: Well, did she look just like me?

Jake: Yes…

Hannah: Did she sound just like me?

Jake: Yes…

Hannah: Hmm…I guess the facts add up! That means that…(she looks around the room to make sure no one comes in, and takes her wig off) I am Hannah Montana!

Jake: What?! Miley?! Why do you keep doing this to me?!

Miley: Because it’s true!

Lola: Yeah it’s true!!

Jake: And who are you??

Lola: I’m Lola, or in other words… (Takes off her wig) Lilly!

Jake: Now she has you sucked in too?!

Robby Ray: Face it, Jake. They’re both telling the truth!

Jake: *sighs* Now who are you?

Robby Ray: (peels fake mustache off) I’m Robby Ray Stewart, Miley’s dad, and Hannah Montana’s agent!

Jake: *deep sigh* Man! You guys think that will get me to believe you?? Uhh, no!

Jake leaves. Miley and Lilly put their wigs back on, Robby puts the mustache back on, and they all leave too, but a different way, so that they don’t run into Jake.

Setting: The next day, after lunch, late afternoon.

Miley: Lilly, I can’t believe he still didn’t believe me!! I mean, I tried everything!

Lilly: Well, I told you he was an idiot!

Miley: Well, we better get ready for Hannah’s CD signing.

They get ready, and later are driven to the signing.

Hannah starts signing, and is almost done (with like 5 more people left) when Jake arrives.

Jake: Hannah?

Hannah: What do you want? (She takes a picture with the last person)

Jake: What did I ever do to you?

Hannah: (signs their CD too, and is done with the signing) besides not believe me at the concert or the Cheesecake Factory?

Hannah: Thank you guys so much! I love you all!! Peace!

Hannah and Lola and Robby start walking away. Lola gives Jake a look. But Hannah doesn’t even look his way.

Setting: Oliver’s house.

Oliver: Wow. What a night (still remembering that night)! I think I’m gonna call Lilly and Miley. I think she’s at Miley’s house.

(Miley and Lilly get home. And the phone starts ringing.)

Miley: *sigh* Hello?

Oliver: Miley? You okay? Is Lilly there?

Miley: Yeah I’m fine. Here’s Lilly.

She hands the phone to Lilly.

Lilly: Hello? OLLY!

Oliver: Yep! So how are you guys doing??

Lilly: Well, I’m doing great. But Miley, well she’s doing pretty bad.

Oliver: What do you mean?

Lilly: Let’s just say her heart is very, very broken. And the tears seem to never end…

Oliver: Ooh. That’s bad. I guess I’ll just talk to you guys later, then! Bye!

Lilly: Bye Oliver!

Lilly hangs up, and walks over to Miley, comforting her.

Miley: Why me?! Why did all of this happen to me?! In the summer that’s supposed to be the best summer of my life!

Lilly: It could turn out to be!

Miley: And that’s when? When Jake reveals my secret? Or when he decides he HATES me, and ignores me and Hannah for the rest of my life??

Lilly: Okay, I get the point! Well, it will probably get better! Now, who wants to go surfing?

Miley: Alright…

They grab their boards and go to the beach, and Jake watches as Lilly is so content catching the waves, and Miley is either just sitting there, or not smiling. He believes that he made a huge mistake…

[MileyRox1174]

oh yeah, lol, Alison gave me the idea for this!! So sorry to her, if she gets mad, I was just having a bit of a brain cramp, but I'm back onto my own story soon!!

[MileyRox1174]

please comment!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

like i keep tellin ya...IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!! and addicting! lol. plz put he next "chappie" up soon! lol. gotta go, my sister has a bunch of her dork friends over n we're gonna watch a movie. lol. ttyl.~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

lol okay! But I still need more comments!! (I'm thinking of a way to make comments shorter.....hmm....oh I know! Commies!! lol maybe......Com'nts!! lol I dunno, tell me your fave, or any ideas you have!!)

[hannah_montana.boston]

lol okay! But I still need more comments!! (I'm thinking of a way to make comments shorter.....hmm....oh I know! Commies!! lol maybe......Com'nts!! lol I dunno, tell me your fave, or any ideas you have!!)

i like the second one but please type more iam dying of hw and suspence:heart::bigwave:

[MileyRox1174]

lol!! I need more com'nts!! or commies!! whichever you peoples like!!

[happillybratty]

omg,i luv it! pleaz write more.

[MileyRox1174]

thanks!! I guess I will post the next chapter....


Chapter 27: Keep Your Secrets Secret

Setting: Beach. Miley and Lilly just finished surfing.

Jake hides behind a bush, just before they get out of the sparkling ocean.

Suddenly, a bystander runs up to Miley and Lilly.

Bystander: Hannah Montana! Smile!!

Miley: What? Me? Hannah Montana? No!

Bystander: I know your little secret! Now tell the world, or I’ll do it for you! *evil laugh* as they walk away.

Lilly: What was that?!

Miley then notices Jake hiding behind a bush.

Miley: JAKE?! Did you tell?!

Jake: No Miley! I swear I didn’t say a word!

Miley: I can’t believe it! I shouldn’t have trusted you! I should’ve just kept my secret a secret!

Jake: But Miley, I swear I didn’t-

Miley: C’mon Lilly, let’s go home.

Miley grabs Lilly and runs off (home).

Miley bursts into the house and screams: Daddy! Someone knows my secret!!

Robby Ray: Who?!

Miley: --------!

Setting: Oliver’s house.

Oliver: I wonder why Miley was screaming while she was running home…

Suddenly, he sees on TV (on the News channel) something completely unexpected.

“Now for the quick 6 o’clock News, I’m Arthur Anymore Donuts. This just in, local girl Miley Stewart has a very deep secret. A bystander claims ‘I saw her, in Hannah Montana clothes, take off a blonde wig of some sort. But I am not completely sure if it was real.’ Well, there you go. That’s the quick 6 o’clock News at 7, and I’m Arthur Anymore Donuts.”

Oliver flips off the TV. He dashes over to Miley’s house.

Setting: Miley’s house.

There is a quick knock at the door.

Miley: Who is it??

Oliver: It’s me, Oliver! Let me in!

Miley runs over and opens the door for Oliver. He runs inside, breathing heavily.

Oliver: I just saw on the News-

Lilly: We know. We saw it too.

Oliver: So do you know who did it?

Miley: --------!

Oliver: WHAT?!


Haha...I got the Arthur Anymore Donuts from Who's Line Is It Anyway? (like, the best show ever, besides HM!!). Colin Mockery did that during a game called NewsFlash or something like that!! It was so funny!! Lol anyways, please comment!!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

Write More! Write More! Write More! Write More! Write More!!!!!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

omg,i luv it! pleaz write more.

haha, told ya it was great n hooking maury!!!!!!!! srry, i told my friend she should read ur fan fic. cuz it was so good. guess she liked it!!! lol. plzzzz o plzzzz write(type) more!!!! i need more. but ima go watch some tv n let my brain rot from it. so ill ttyl. plz do post more. n i like the 1st one "commies" altho u could type it as comies just ta make it even shorter. cuz that's a lot easier ta do quickly. lol. neway, ttyl.~Cassidy~

[MileyRox1174]

lol okay here's the next chapter!!

Chapter 28: Miss Adhesive

Miley: The bystander was…

Oliver: Who, who, who?

Miley: TRACY!!

Oliver: You mean, Tracy Van whatever?? The one with the stupid voice?!

Miley: Yes!! I can’t believe it! She probably knew it all along!!

Lilly: Well, she’s someone else you can’t trust!

Miley: What do you mean someone else I can’t trust??

Lilly: Well, I might as well tell you…

Miley: Who?!

Lilly:----------!

Setting: Jake’s house.

Jake: I can’t believe she thought it was me! Well, I guess she was suspicious because I didn’t believe her…ugh! Man! I did it AGAIN!! Gosh! I mess up so much!! But how do I prove I’m not in on it too??

Setting: Miley’s house, but they are just getting ready to go to the beach, with a few tricks up their sleeves.

Miley: Okay, are you guys ready??

Lilly: Yep! We’ve got our boards, towels, and everything else! *wink*

Miley (or should I say, impersonator of Hannah): Okay then! Let’s go! Time to show them who’s really Hannah Montana!

They walk to the beach, Lola, Oliver (in a hat and sunglasses), and the Hannah impersonator.

Hannah is just walking along the beach, and suddenly, a swarm of fans run up to her.

Fan 1: Hannah, I love you! *faints*

Fan 2: Hannah, you’re my idol! *faints*

Fan 3: Hannah, will you go to prom with me?? *faints*

Hannah: Okay people, can you please stop fainting on me! It’s kinda scaring me!

Suddenly, the press comes up to Hannah.

Press: Well, ‘Hannah’, do you have anything to say to the press?

Hannah: Why yes, I do! What you saw on TV last night, that was my cousin, Miley! She was just saying that, because she was always jealous of me. So she decided to say that she was me! Isn’t that the weirdest thang you’ve ever heard??

Press: But, she looked exactly like you! She even took off that wig!

Hannah: What? These beautiful, golden locks? No! Of course they are my real hair, don’t you see? *tugs on her wig* See?? I told you!

Press: But-

Hannah: But nothing! This is my real hair, for real…………………………….And that’s the truth!!

But what the press didn’t know was that Hannah (who was dressed like her normal self, sorry if you got confused earlier) actually used adhesive to hold the wig on like normal hair!

Press: Okay, well I guess we were wrong! Sorry Hannah!

Hannah: Oh, it’s perfectly alright with me! I just need to find Miley, and talk to her! Now, I’ll just be going to her house now, to give her a little talk!

All the fans left, and the press left too. But what Hannah didn’t know was that Jake was in the distance, watching Miley/Hannah, with a smile on his face.

Jake: (thinking) Good job! At least I know that they won’t be suspecting her anymore! (He wasn’t in on it, I swear!)

Setting: Miley’s house.

Miley takes off all of her stuff in her Hannah closet, and changes back to regular clothes.

Miley: Whew! I’m glad that’s over!

Lilly: Yeah! And to think, you pulled it off just with some adhesive! I gotta try that once!

Miley: Why? Nobody suspects you, do they?

Lilly: Nah! But just in case I’m on a roller coaster or something, and I have my wig on!

Miley: *laughs* Yeah, and when will that be?

Lilly: I dunno, I was thinking maybe like this weekend, at the fair being held at the beach?? *she was sort of begging*

Miley: Alright, Miss Adhesive! We can go!

It soon became very late…like around 9 o’clock or so (they stayed for dinner, too). Even though it was pretty early for the summer, Lilly and Oliver went home, and Miley got dressed for bed. She wasn’t tired, but in a way, she was. So she fell asleep soon after.

Please com'nt!! I need lots of commies to post the next chappie!! lol No more until tonight, like around 6-7:30 or sooo, i dunno!!

[Sporty Miley]

MORE!!!!!!!!! plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!

[Fire-Chicken]

More!!!!

[Khockeygrl4]

more!!!!!!!!!!pleaz!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

more

[MileyRox1174]

yeah yeah!! Thanks, I'm still working on it! I had a very busy schedule today (like most other days...) So you can expect it sometime tonight!!

[MileyRox1174]

Chapter 29: We All Have Problems! But Yours Are Worse!!

Setting: The next day, at Miley’s house. (Tracy has her stupid voice too!)

Miley slowly awakens after a long night.

Miley: *yawn* Wow, what a night!

She then walks downstairs for breakfast, but the phone rings right as she gets down. She answers it after 2 rings.

Miley: *yawn* Hello?

Lilly: Hey Miley! It’s Lilly! Be over in 15!!

Miley: 10….9…8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1!!

She opens the door, and Lilly runs in, not on her board.

Miley: What are you so excited about?

Lilly: Tracy…at beach….talking to press….Hannah Montana…..let’s go!

Miley: Oh no! We better hurry!!

They run down to the beach, and Tracy notices them.

Tracy: See! There she is!!

Press: What? You mean Hannah Montana’s cousin?

Tracy: She’s not her cousin! That’s Hannah!!

Miley: Me?! No! Hannah is my cousin!! I just did that because I wanted fame too! She always got all of it!! Never even let me have a chance!!

Tracy: I don’t believe you! No one does!

Lilly coughs (as in saying that she does), and the press look at Tracy like she’s an idiot.

Tracy: You are all such idiots!!

Everyone gasps and looks at Tracy (especially the press, who’s camera is still rolling…hehe…)

Tracy: Oopsie…Did I say that? No! I didn’t say that!! Nobody heard me say that!

Miley and Lilly cough (saying they did hear her), and the press gives her that look again.

Tracy: Ugh! Why won’t you believe me?!

Miley: Because, now that you called all of us idiots, while the camera was rolling, you just earned yourself a place in the ‘Most Obnoxious Celebrities’ list!! Ain’t that just dandy?

Tracy: What…no…but I-

Lilly: Oh yes you did!

Tracy: But….you must not have understood me because of my nasal problems!!

Miley: Well we all have (imitating her voice) problems! But yours are worse! And you can’t just blame everything on them!

Tracy: What do you mean?!

Miley: Well, my cousin Hannah said that you told her that her friend was a loser! And you know what; you should have just said that you were! *Everyone gasps, but in a good way* Because Hannah didn’t bail on Lola! And you weren’t happy about it! So why don’t you take your nasal (imitating her voice) problems, and your (imitating her again) stupid little voice somewhere else!! *everyone applauds, except of course, Tracy*

Tracy: Ugh! Well then, good riddance!

Tracy walks away feeling defeated. Miley and Lilly just stand there, smiling. The press asks them some more questions, and they leave.

Lilly: Wow! That was amazing Miley! Nice speech!

Miley: Thank you! Thank you! You know, it’s not that hard when Hannah tells us everything! (They knew that Tracy was listening…)

Lilly: I know! Hannah is the coolest cousin you have! I mean, way better than the other one!

Miley: I know! Well, let’s get inside for breakfast!

They walk into the comfort of Miley’s home, and have chocolate chip pancakes. Then they decide to just chill for a while.

Miley: So, umm, what do you wanna do?

Lilly: I dunno what do you wanna do?

Miley: Who knows??

Voice: I do!!

Miley and Lilly: Who…who’s there?!

Voice: Someone a little too familiar!! *evil laugh*

Sorry it was only Miley, Lilly, and Tracy!! I couldn't think of anything for Oliver or Jake!! So yeah, there you go!! Please oh please comment!! :57:

[hannah_montana.boston]

<3 it want more of it

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more more! More! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!! Your fanfiction is AMAZING!! I mean it!

[Sporty Miley]

More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

amazing as usual!!!! i need more!!!~Cassidy~

[hannah_montana.boston]

i agre

[Khockeygrl4]

this is sooooo gooooood!!!! i luv it!!!!!! more pleaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

thanks!! no more 'till tonight!!

[Fire-Chicken]

More!! It's Amazing!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

more

[MileyRox1174]

Thank you! Now, I am going to get started on writing it!!

[MileyRox1174]

I finished writing it!! So here you go!!

Chapter 30: Me, Myself and…………HANNAH?!

Miley: Who….who?!

Voice: Let’s just say I have a secret identity too!

Miley: Lilly?! Lilly!! Where are you?!?!?!

Voice: She left. She was too chicken. (Does clucking noises)

Miley: Well, at-at least show yourself!

The mystery person walks out from the shadows. Miley gasps.

Miley: You’re…….you’re……..you’re ME?!

Voice: But not the “Miley” you. The “Hannah” you!! And I will reveal your secret to the world!!

Miley screams.

Robby Ray: Miley! Miles! Wake up!

Miley: Huh...uh…wha?!

Robby Ray: That was just a dream! (FYI, it started just after Miley fell asleep the night before.)

Lilly: Boy, I never knew you talked in your sleep that much!

Miley: I-I-I don’t…

Lilly: Well, let’s just go downstairs and have some pancakes!! I’m starved!!

Robby and Lilly walk downstairs, and Miley slowly follows them. But while she does, she keeps wondering if there is a reason she keeps having that recurring dream every night…

Setting: Oliver’s house.

Oliver: *yawn* Well, only one more day until my little “Mid-Summer Night’s Dream” (nothing to do with Shakespeare, FYI) party!! I just hope Lilly likes it!!

Oliver walks downstairs, with French toast awaiting him at the table.

Oliver: Yum! My favorite!

He finishes eating, and gets dressed to go to the beach.

Setting: Jake’s house.

Jake: *sigh* When will Miley ever stop ignoring me? I really want to ask her! But she doesn’t even like looking at me! Just because I didn’t believe what she told me!!

Voice: What did she tell you??

Jake: Oh nothing just….Hey, who-who’s there?!

Voice: Just your worst nightmare…*weird laugh*

Setting: The beach. Oliver is there, surfing. Lilly soon walks up to him. (Oh yeah and FYI, Jackson is on vacation, so there is a sub…well, you could say he’s a familiar worker…)

Lilly: Hey Olly! *they give each other a kiss on the cheek*

Oliver: What’s crack-a-lackin’ Lillay? (Yes, he’s the sub!)

Lilly: What are you doing back there?

Oliver: Well, Jackson is on vacay, so I decided to sub! But face it Lilly, I found my new thang!

Lilly: Whatever!

Lilly tries to get out of the crowd around Rico’s.

Lilly: Excuse me! Let me through! Knew him when he was a dork!

She finally gets away, but Miley is nowhere in sight…

Setting: Jake’s house.

Jake: Who is it?!

The mystery person suddenly jumps out, but is hidden by a black cloak (for some odd reason…I can’t tell you why yet though). But then they run off, leaving Jake very confused. But as they ran off, he saw pink cloth peek out from underneath, and wondered who it could have been…someone who likes and wears pink…

[MileyRox1174]

Please comment!! I need about 4 or 5 good com'nts before I can post the next chapter!! So post any commies or criticism you have please!!

[Khockeygrl4]

wow, i luv it, more!!!!

[hannah_montana.boston]

hmm who likes pink?

[Vanessa&Zaclovr#1]

^^haha, i can't figure it out either. lol.


awesome!!!! i need more!!! i gotta go, dishes. ugh! bbl.

*Cassidy*