View Full Version : New Fanfic, "Miley's Hannah Montana?"
volleyballprincess33
01-11-2007, 06:16 PM
Here it is!!!!!
Part one
Miley walked in to school that day in a pink tank top with pink flip flops Lilly followed behind her in a blue tank top with a blue denim skirt with leggings underneath it and blue flip flops, Miley and Lilly met Oliver in the lunchroom after 3rd period and Miley finally said, "I am so tired! I had a (whispers) Hannah thing (voice rises again) last night and didn't make it home until 2 am and Jackson kept me up until 4 am because he needed me to clean his room because of his stupid bet! He bet me to a pie eating contest, I only ate 13 and he ate 19." Oliver looked at her and said, "You had a pie eating contest and didn't tell me about it! I would've beaten Jackson no matter what ow!" Lilly and Miley whacked him on the head. "Miley, you can sleep now, we only have 2 hours until Math starts." Lilly explained to Miley. Miley lay her head down onto the lunchtable and slept. Amber and Ashley walked by 30 minutes later and looked at Miley sleeping and looked sinisterly at each other then Amber said, "Miley's sleeping, let's embarras her!" they did their OOH TSST thing. Lilly looked furiously at Amber and Ashley. "Hey Amber, Ashley, Miley is not really sleeping, you know, she's faking it." Lilly said as if she were talking like Amber and Ashley. The bell rang at 1:00 pm and Miley got up feeling refreshed and Lilly got up and wiped the sandwich crumbs off of her skirt while Oliver was picking leftover steak out of his teeth with his finger. Suddenly Miley bumped into someone familiar.
FIND OUT ON THE NEXT PART ON MY FANFIC!
Sporty Miley
01-11-2007, 06:33 PM
What happens next!!!!!!!! plz tell!!!!!!!!!
Sporty Miley
01-11-2007, 06:35 PM
by the way i luv your user name!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-11-2007, 06:41 PM
thanks, i'm going to post more to the story soon! it's so exciting to type this!
Miley_Montana_Gal
01-11-2007, 06:41 PM
Yes please I wanna know what happens :)
Miley_Montana_Gal
01-11-2007, 06:42 PM
okay lemme bookmark it i will check back later
♥SiiNGiiNG_STaRR♥
01-11-2007, 06:48 PM
i like it
and volleyball♥
volleyballprincess33
01-11-2007, 07:10 PM
Part two
Miley looked up at the guy she bumped into, it was Jake Ryan! He was back from filming a movie. "Hi Miley." Jake said shyly. "Hi Jake, what are you doing here. Aren't you supposed to be filming a movie right now?" Miley asked Jake in a suprised voice. Lilly and Oliver looked at Jake and Oliver looked at Miley and asked, "Is this really Jake or a mirage like they have in a desert?" Jake laughed at what Oliver had just said. "No Oliver i'm not a mirage, it's me Jake. I just got done filming a movie and I came back to go to school." Jake said as he slapped Oliver a side-five. Lilly looked at Jake and said, "Jake what a coinky-dink! Miley was just told me you were here!" Lilly smiled while she talk to Jake. Suddenly the whole cafeteria was filled with students gasping at the sound of Jake Ryan's name. Amber and Ashley screamed, "Ahhhhhh! He's back! Omygosh it's really him, he's so cute!!!" The whole school seemed to chase after Jake leaving Miley, Oliver, and Lilly laying facedown on the ground. Miley got up and she helped Lilly and Oliver get up so they could go find Jake so Miley could ask him out. "When are you going to tell Jake your Hannah Montana?" Lilly asked Miley. "Soon, on the deserted part of the beach. It's the most vacant place on the west side of the beach, now only if I wear a disguise no one will ever notice me as Hannah only if I stay undercover!" Soon at 4 pm, Miley left the bathroom in her disguise with her Hannah wig underneath her pink hoodie. Miley got to the west side of the beach and took off her hood and suddenly she heard several gasps and one "It's Hannah Montana!" then several screaming Hannah Montana fan's started chasing Miley, then Miley stumbled and her wig fell off and she got back up again thinking her wig was still on. Miley heard several gasps including Amber and Ashley saying, "Miley is Hannah Montana?"
TO BE CONTINUED LOOK FOR PART THREE COMING SOON!
Sporty Miley
01-11-2007, 08:54 PM
i can't take it how many parts will there be!!! ahhhh!!! when will part 3 b out????
HM ROCKS
01-11-2007, 09:55 PM
more!!!!!!!!
flower1
01-11-2007, 10:05 PM
AAAHHH!!I'll DIE if I don't hear more! I love it! It's the best story I've ever read! I like Jake, and him in the story is a big YES!:D 8-)
volleyballprincess33
01-13-2007, 12:10 AM
Guys there will be a part 3 soon!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-13-2007, 03:03 PM
Part three
Amber and Ashley couldn't believe their eyes at what they just saw, a dork like Miley could be famous and not tell them. "Miley let me help you up." Jake said softly. "Thanks Jake. I was gonna tell you I was Hannah when no one was on the beach but now it turns out the whole school knows i'm Hannah Montana. So people aren't going to treat me like i'm a normal kid, their gonna treat me like i'm famous but I don't want to be treated like that! I want to be treated like Miley and not like Hannah Montana, but Amber and Ashley you guys can stop calling me and Lilly names!" Flash! Paparatzi lights flashing on Jake and Miley. Wanna know what's happening next Find out on part four!
HM ROCKS
01-13-2007, 03:33 PM
more!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-13-2007, 03:48 PM
ok
Sporty Miley
01-13-2007, 10:04 PM
MORE!!!!!!! Pleeeeze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm begging!!! this story is like addictive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 10:09 AM
wow thanks, I will post more soon
Baby Vanessa
01-14-2007, 10:11 AM
More plz and i luv your siggy
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 10:18 AM
thanks!!!! i luv yours too. and part four will be longer and better!
Baby Vanessa
01-14-2007, 10:23 AM
O.k and thanks I can't wait for more
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 10:58 AM
i can't wait until it comes to me
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 11:12 AM
OMG I love it!! More, more, more please!! It's so addicting!
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 11:40 AM
Part Four
Jake and Miley were listening to the reporters, they were saying "Kiss her you hog Kiss her!" Jake said to the reporters, "Buzz off! She may be Hannah Montana, but still she doesn't like you guys around her, including you hobo guy! So leave us alone! The chatter of the reporters faded slowly but Miley was a very happy camper. "Thanks Jake I'd thought they'd never leave. I'm happy your back, I think Lilly just met a guy." And Miley was totally right Lilly was flirting with someone familiar. His poufy hair was too familiar. Miley knew exactly who it was. TO BE CONTINUED FIND OUT IN PART FIVE WHO LILLY'S MYSTERY HOTTIE IS!!
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 11:43 AM
Keep going!! I love it!! I also think I know who it is....heeheehee...
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 11:53 AM
Part Five
It's was Johnny Collins. "Oh yeah, she's fine she just revealed her biggest secret ever! Should I tell him Miley?" Lilly asked Miley curiously. "Sure you can tell him." Miley said reasonably. "Okay her biggest secret is she's Hannah Montana!" Lilly said exitedly. "Really, wow no wonder i've been crushing on Miley all these years. Did I just say that out loud." Johnny said to Lilly. "Yeah you did, Johnny you should've told me that before I started going out with Jake Ryan." Miley said very furiously. "Your going out with Jake Ryan." Johnny Said in a sarcastic happy voice but Miley could tell he was Mad inside. SEE IN PART SIX WHO GETS MILEY!
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 11:53 AM
I also suggest maybe longer chapters...no offense, they're really good, but they are just really short.....[just a thought]
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 11:54 AM
I know
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 11:55 AM
that's good! more more more!!! plz?!
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 11:55 AM
{p.s. I love volleyball, too!!}
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 12:10 PM
Part Six
Jake was eating a sub sandwich minding his own buisness as Johnny's brain hatched a brilliant idea "Maybe I can trick Miley into thinking Jake is a fake so she can be mine, yeah good idea." Johnny thought then he let out a maniaical laugh he knew Miley could hear him so he didn't laugh out loud. "Excuse me?" Miley said I guess she heard Johnny laugh. "Nothing beautiful." Johnny said dreamily. Miley knew something Jake didn't know. Johnny Collins had a crush on her. "PSSSSST! LILLY!" Miley whispered loudly. "WHAT!" Lilly whispered loudly back at Miley. "COME OVER TO MY HOUSE IN 30 SECONDS. I NEED TO TALK TO YOU." Miley whispered loudly back at Lilly. "OK." Lilly whispered softly. Thirty seconds Later. "Lilly i'm stuck between a Cute guy and a Zombie Slayer who should I choose it's hard to choose just one!" Miley said. "Well, maybe you should choose one that knows you the best that's what I did with my date to the summer bash dance last year." Lilly said. "You chose Oliver." Miley said. "Well he knew me better than his older brother did." Lilly said. Ring ring, ring ring. Miley's cell phone rang. It was a text message from Oliver. It said, "I LUV U MILEY." Oliver was out side her door knocking. "Miley it's me Oliver let me in." Oliver said. Lilly opened the door for him. "Oliver did you write this?" Miley said. Oliver closed the refridgerator door and said.... FIGURE OUT WHAT HE SAYS IN PART SEVEN!!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 12:11 PM
cool
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 12:12 PM
can you please post it already?!?!?! The suspense is killing me!! lol
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 12:15 PM
Wow I love my story
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 12:16 PM
Wow I love my story
Tell me about it! So do I!!
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 12:34 PM
wow i thoght my story would be dull
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 01:50 PM
^ Why did you think that?
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 04:30 PM
I have no clue
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 04:35 PM
lol I guess a lot of writers do...I think that about writing assignments for school...lol
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 04:41 PM
Part Seven
"Write what?" Oliver said. "This text message." Miley said. *Show's Oliver the text message* "Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, you promise you won't get mad at me." Oliver said. "Yes I'm sure. Just tell me." Miley said. "Ok I'll tell you. I did. Ok I love you Miley." Oliver said. *Oliver grabs Miley pushes Lilly out of the way and Kisses Miley* :* "Wow. Didn't see that comin'. My two friends makin out in my friends Living room. Weird connection." Lilly said confused. *Lilly shrugs her shoulders as Oliver and Miley still kiss then Lilly hears a knock on the door Lilly opens door.* "Hi Johnny." Lilly said. "Who is Miley Kissing?" Johnny said. "Oliver. I think they're in love!" Lilly said Happily. "Oh well. Hey Lilly wanna be my girlfriend?" Johnny said. "Sure. I don't see why not." Lilly said. *Johnny and Lilly start Kissing* *Oliver stops Kissing Miley* "That's how I feel about you Miley, do you want to be my girlfriend?" SEE WHAT MILEY SAYS IN PART EIGHT!!!!!!!
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 05:38 PM
Awww!! How cute....but wait.....Jake, and Oliver [I guess not Johnny]like/love her.....omg this is like so like mixed up....oh well, love it anyways, and please post another chapter!!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 05:57 PM
people please join my rpg
Baby Vanessa
01-14-2007, 05:58 PM
yes join it and keep it up i liv the story
volleyballprincess33
01-14-2007, 05:59 PM
thanks
Baby Vanessa
01-14-2007, 06:00 PM
n prob
kayla_baseball
01-14-2007, 06:14 PM
what happens next???????
please [ost the next chap!!!!!!!
Sporty Miley
01-14-2007, 07:13 PM
wow i haven't been keeping up!! i just read like 4 parts!! but i want more!!!!!
Sporty Miley
01-14-2007, 07:22 PM
4 new parts i mean!!
Sporty Miley
01-14-2007, 07:23 PM
when will part 8 b out?????
MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 09:43 PM
hey people! please read my Fan Fic!! It's in my siggy!!
Sporty Miley
01-14-2007, 10:05 PM
sure i'll read yours!!!
MileyRox1174
01-15-2007, 10:02 AM
thanks!!
hannah_montana.boston
01-15-2007, 11:39 AM
<3 it
MileyRox1174
01-15-2007, 12:58 PM
thankies!!!
Sporty Miley
01-16-2007, 02:57 PM
when are u going 2 write the next chapter??!!!!!
Lanae_M
01-16-2007, 03:41 PM
More please!
volleyballprincess33
01-17-2007, 11:46 AM
Part Eight
Before Miley could say anything a girl with brown hair and glasses appeared and said, "Not so fast, Don't do this Miley you'll ruin another superstar's life." It's was Miley's friend Meghan Carlton. (Who had a really big secret crush on Oliver.) "Meghan! What are you doing here I thought you left for Texas to be with your family." Miley said sounding ultra-suprised. "My plane got delayed so I decided to stay here in Malibu. *shy voice* Hi Oliver. *coughs I love him*" Oliver's face developed a suprised look and said to Meghan. "What did you say." "Um nothing, nothing at all." Meghan said trying to not feel embarassed. "Oh okay, *grabs Miley* whispers, I need to talk to you about Meghan." Oliver said. "Ok is it a nice thing about her?" Miley asked Oliver. "Yes but it's a secret." Oliver said. "I love her, ok Miley. She likes me I can tell." Oliver said sounding relieved he did. "Ask her to be your girlfriend. If she likes you she'll definetly say yes." Miley said. "Ok, thanks. *voice comes back up again* Hey Meghan I have something to ask you." Oliver said. Meghan looking suprised said "Ok. Spit it out." Meghan said looking hopeful. "Will you be my girlfriend?" Oliver said. "Sure." Meghan said. *Johnny and Lilly stop kissing* "Lilly!!!! Long time no see!!!!" Meghan said happily. "Meghan!!!!! I know!!!!" Lilly said happily. But little did Meghan, Lilly, Miley, Oliver, Johnny, and Jake know that 2 people were planning to ruin Miley, Meghan and Lilly's life.
Find out who those two people are. (They have 3 other people with them and they're all girls!!!!) in Part Nine.
Fire-Chicken
01-17-2007, 12:20 PM
Sry, but I don't understand all of it. *blush*
But I babysit my little brother now so.. :)
btw I really like it!! (The parts I understnad ;) )
Fire-Chicken
01-17-2007, 12:21 PM
And he can really be a PIA sometimes :)
volleyballprincess33
01-17-2007, 12:25 PM
i have 3 neicses i know how you feel
Lanae_M
01-17-2007, 12:47 PM
More when can please!
volleyballprincess33
01-17-2007, 12:52 PM
wow i am so glad you guys love my fanfic!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-17-2007, 12:52 PM
that meghan character is based on me!
Fire-Chicken
01-17-2007, 12:58 PM
i have 3 neicses i know how you feel
Neicses?
volleyballprincess33
01-17-2007, 01:51 PM
nieces
MileyRox1174
01-17-2007, 04:39 PM
more more more please!!!!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
01-17-2007, 04:50 PM
Part Nine
*Mini-Camera flashes back and forth from Miley to Lilly from Lilly to Meghan from Meghan to Miley* "Hey Amber ya think this footage is good enough for your folks to put together?" You'd believe me on this one it was Luann and Amber! 2 of the suspects trying to ruin the girls lives. "Ashley get up here! Ever since Miley revealed her secret we haven't gotten the attention in school, but now it's our chance to get our attention back." Amber said. "Ok Amber, we aren't a movie summary!" Ashley said making a good point. Then the two unexpeted people appeared. Traci and Evan were also trying to ruin the girls lives as well! "*Traci's usual nassally voice.* Hannah or should I say Miley had Problemsssss." Traci said. "You got that right nasal girl." Evan said enjoying every minute of the blackmail footage. Miley walked out side and looked up on the roof. "She saw Traci and Evan with Luann, Amber, and Ashley!
Find out what happens in Part Ten!
MileyRox1174
01-17-2007, 06:16 PM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!! Oh and in a couple minutes I'll be gone for a while so I won't get to read it if you post it soon :15: :'(
Lanae_M
01-18-2007, 12:22 PM
More!
hannah_montana.boston
01-18-2007, 04:41 PM
why in storys r traci *i dont evan like typin her name* evil but she is a snob
Sporty Miley
01-19-2007, 04:04 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miley_Montana_Gal
01-20-2007, 09:38 AM
nice
Fire-Chicken
01-25-2007, 01:36 PM
More!!
hannah_montana.boston
01-25-2007, 04:26 PM
mor
MileyRox1174
01-27-2007, 03:19 PM
more!!
SmileyMiley11
01-27-2007, 03:36 PM
cool
Sporty Miley
01-29-2007, 07:01 PM
more!!! i'm begging you!!!!!
MileyRox1174
02-02-2007, 04:28 PM
^^Same here!!
MileyRox1174
02-08-2007, 06:42 PM
OMG it has been like...*counts days*....6 days!! Since my last post!! And...*counts days again*...22 days!! Since YOU posted last!!
So, listen to us and PLEASE POST MORE!!
MileyRox1174
02-10-2007, 02:13 PM
Come on people, don't you agree with me??
Fire-Chicken
02-10-2007, 04:21 PM
^I do
HannahMontanaX3
02-10-2007, 09:33 PM
more
MileyRox1174
02-10-2007, 09:53 PM
More!
MileyRox1174
02-11-2007, 08:35 PM
MORE!! It's been soooooooooooo ooooooooooo long!!
Sporty Miley
02-12-2007, 06:09 PM
^^ i know it's been like 4ever!!! and i need more!!!!
MileyRox1174
02-12-2007, 06:45 PM
^Yeah. And I think I speak for everyone when I say:
POST MORE!! YOU HAVE TO!! IT'S BEEN SOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOO LONG, LIKE FOREVER, AND WE NEED MORE! PLEASE OH PLEASE LISTEN TO US, AND POST/WRITE MORE!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOORE!! NOW!! (PLEASE?!)
Sporty Miley
02-13-2007, 11:45 AM
^exactly!!!!
MileyRox1174
02-15-2007, 07:00 PM
Where oh WHERE could you possibly be at a time like this?! POST MORE!! CAN'T YOU SEE WE ARE ALL BEGGING!! IT HAS BEEN SO LONG, LIKE FOREVER SINCE YOU POSTED LAST! PLEASE POST MORE!
^'Nuf said!
Sporty Miley
02-18-2007, 04:31 PM
^ yeah PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
02-21-2007, 07:46 PM
i haven't been on!!! Srry!!!!
volleyballprincess33
02-21-2007, 08:01 PM
Part Ten
"I thought they were my friends." Miley said sadly. "Miley don't feel bad, Luann, Amber, and Ashley never liked you any way." Said Lilly trying her best to cheer Miley up. "You aren't helping Lilly!" Said Miley with her teeth clenched together. "Well it's a shock to see Traci and Evan trying to get blackmail on you. Or maybe it isn't even Traci and Evan. Hmmmmmmmm. I got it I know excatly who it is!" Said Meghan with her clever smile. "Who is it?" Asked Lilly and Miley at the same time. "YO, EMILY!" Meghan Shouted up into the distance. Traci looked down. "Oh crap! I'm caught!" Said the Traci Impostor. "YO, HALEIGH!" Meghan Shouted again. The Evan Impostor looked down. "Man I'm ratted out too!" said the Evan impostor. The two girls ripped off their costumes. "Girls I'd like you to meet my little sisters Haleigh and Emily Carlton." Said Meghan with her clever smile. Miley was shocked that 2 10 year old girls were trying to blackmail her. "What happened you two little brats!" Said Miley. "Nothing." Said Emily and Haleigh. "Tell me now." Said Miley.
READ PART ELEVEN FOR MORE TO THE STORY!!!
volleyballprincess33
02-22-2007, 10:48 AM
please read this
Sporty Miley
02-22-2007, 04:39 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sporty Miley
02-22-2007, 04:40 PM
thanks 4 updating your fan fic!!!!
volleyballprincess33
02-22-2007, 05:55 PM
no prob
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 03:01 PM
Part Eleven
"Well we were paid to blackmail you. We were all paid." Said Haleigh. "Whaddya mean you were all paid? Luann,Amber, and Ashley would do it for anything!" Said Miley. "You see there's the problem, that's not really them." Said Meghan because she had a pretty good feeling who the impostors were Meghan had clever idea to tell who the impostors really are. "Allison Keller, Michelle Anderson, and Casey Ryan." Said Meghan. Allison, Michelle, and Casey were sisters to 3 guys that Miley, Lilly, and Meghan knew,Miley's Boyfriend Jake Ryan and his friends, Ellis Anderson, and Josh Keller. "Well it wasn't really blackmailing. We were making a tv show called celebrity real life. Where we unmask, or should I dare say un-wig, superstars." Said Michelle. "Ok but, why did you have to choose me?" Said Miley. "Well because---------------------------------"
FIND OUT WHAT MICHELLE SAYS IN PART TWELVE!!!!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 05:07 PM
plz read
vanessa*anne
02-23-2007, 05:22 PM
it is so good. more plz. one of the best on here!
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 05:28 PM
Thanks! My story is gonna be like long. so enjoy it.
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 06:23 PM
plz read
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 06:56 PM
plz read
mileysbestpal164
02-23-2007, 07:20 PM
Omg This Is The Most Awsome Fanfictin I Have Ever Read
volleyballprincess33
02-23-2007, 07:57 PM
wow thanks!!!!!!!!!
MileyRox1174
02-24-2007, 07:33 PM
Post more! And thanks for updating, it's been so long!
Sporty Miley
02-26-2007, 03:43 PM
MORE im begging u!!!!!!!!!!
volleyballprincess33
03-18-2007, 04:23 PM
Part eleven
"Well because................. your a superstar and we knew we could unwig you." Said Michelle fearing miley. " Oh that makes perfect sense." Said miley sarcastically. "Well now we know why thoes pip-squeaks have been hoarding you." Said Meghan with her new bf austin at hand. "Hey meghan! we aren't pip-squeaks. we're just little 8 year olds." Said Haleigh ignoring the fact meghan already knew that. "Yeah and I'm the 11 year old older sister who gets to attack you." Said meghan sarcastically. "What's going on?" Said robby ray. "Mr. Stewart, these Pipsqueaks over here have been stalking miley the past few days!" Said meghan. "Really, Pipsqueaks quit bothering my daughter." Said Mr. Stewart. "We did" Said all the pipsqueaks.
And from now on they left miley alone. Miley hasn't quit be hm but still. she gets a lot of attention at school.
END OF STORY!
Sporty Miley
03-27-2007, 01:57 PM
End Of Story????
Baby_Vanessa_Hudgens
03-27-2007, 06:21 PM
she started a new fanfic
Aimeedapinkpanther
08-05-2007, 08:10 PM
really good!!!
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