cutie_girl
01-08-2007, 03:51 PM
here's my first fan fiction! Tell me what i do wrong or what you like! This is delicated to cutie137 for her b-day! Happy B-day Cass! Thx for comments!
Chapter 1: A Little Dream
Setting: School
Miley: "Hey I heard that Jake Ryan is coming to our school!"
Lilly: "Yeah! I heard that he's a celebrity!"
Oliver: "Hey remember I am still a guy here!"
Lilly: "Shut up Oliver!"
Oliver: "No you shut up!"
Miley: "He's here~"
Lilly: "OMG! He's so cute!"
Jake: "Hi guys! I am Jake Ryan!"
Oliver: "Jake Ryan is SO joking."
Miley: "No he's not! He's my dream boyfriend! *daydreams*"
Girl #1: "So... do you have a girlfriend?"
Jake: "No I have a crush that is in this school. She's all smart, and funny... she's so down to earth!" *daydreams about his pen pal*
Girl #2: "Who is it?"
Jake: "She is my pen pal, Miley Stewart."
Chapter 2: Pen Pal Miley
Setting: School
Miley freaks out: "What? the pen pal i had for years is... JAKE?"
Lilly: "Oh that's new."
Oliver: "Oh yeah. who knew that Jake likes Miley or even knows her?"
Jake: "Miley, I really liked you since we started writing to each other. <3"
Miley: "I dreamed bout this. Never knew that it would come true, or knew that Jake is my pen pal! Jake, why did you lie to me?"
Jake: "I know! My signature's always Ryan. It was because I didn't want you to write to me like I am Jake Ryan the celebrity. I wanted you to write to me like I am Jake Ryan the person."
Miley: "Well you still lied! *slaps him and stomps away*"
Oliver: "Whoa that was fast!"
Lilly: "Oh yeah. FAST!"
Jake: "No Miley wait up!"
Miley walks into the washroom and cries: "Who knew that my trusted pen pal could lie to me?"
Then Miley heard mean footsteps from outside to the washroom. They were footsteps of Amber and Ashley.
Chapter 3: When They Attack
Setting: School
Miley: "Amber? Ashley?"
Amber: "I heard that Jake Ryan likes you!"
Ashley: "Yeah! Like, we're into Jake Ryan so we..."
Miley: "I noe wat u guys mean. Wanna beat me up eh?"
Amber: "No! We just wanna keep you from Jake."
Miley goes outta the washroom: "Well, c u guys later!"
Ashley: "Smile for the camara!" *takes picture of Miley scared*
Miley: "Oliver, Lilly, you totally dunno wat just happened."
Lilly: "You got beat up by Amber and Ashley?"
Oliver: "If she did, she wouldn't be alive right now."
Lilly laughs: "Yeah rite."
Oliver: "Actually, I am kinda jealous of Jake Ryan."
Miley: "Yeah?"
Lilly: "Seems like it!"
Oliver: "The bell's ringing. Let's go to class!"
Then Miley felt a tap on her shoulder. It was Jake... again.
Chapter 4: Letters, Letters, Letters
Setting: Miley's House
Miley opens her boxes of letters from Jake Ryan. She started reading some of them.
Dear Miley,
Hello! I am Ryan. It was nice to know that there's a girl out there that likes Zombie High. I like that a lot too~
In your letter, you said that you like the popstar Hannah Montana. Same with me. She really is hot and everything, but I bet that you are hotter <3
I like to watch TV and play on the computer. I was ALWAYS bugged by my friends because they always flip through the letter you sent to me last month. I hope you have a good New Year!
Your pen pal,
Ryan
Dear Miley,
Wow! I never knew that you loved to dance! Hannah Montana dances soooo well that I couldn't keep up with the dance moves. Could you?
Sleeping is one of my hobbies. I know that you enjoy sleeping too! Do you? Tell me in your next letter. And I hope that we'll be able to share deep secrets soon!
Your pen pal,
Ryan
Dear Miley,
I have a big confession to make. Even though we haven't met face to face, or talked face to face, I have a strange feeling about you. When I told my friends this feeling, they say that I must love you. Do I?
Let's jump to another topic. Well last night, my older brother fell right off his bunk! It was hilarious when he started laughing later with a bruised neck!
Your pen pal,
Ryan
Lilly: "Aw... that last letter was so sweet! You're so lucky that Jake's into you!"
Miley: "You know what? I am gonna throw those out! Jake is a LIAR!" *throws out every single letter in every box*
Lilly: "Ouch! You know that Jake must really like you!"
Miley: "Well you think so? How about you go and date Jake!"
Lilly: "I would wanna, but I know you really like Jake inside! Aw..."
Miley: "Whatever you say!"
Lilly: "Then how about you go talk to him?"
Miley: "No way! I am NOT going to talk to that big liar!"
Lilly: "Whatever you wanna do, Miley."
Robby Ray: "You girls are gonna sleepover?"
Miley: "Are you staying?"
Setting: School Next Day
Jake: "Miley, you know that I really like you."
Miley: "Well, Jake, you're a LIAR!"
The bell is ringing and they all go to class. Jake is following Miley.
Chapter 5: Broken Dreams
Setting: School
Miley turns around: "What?"
Jake: "I just wanna know where room 137 is."
Miley *mad*: "End of the hallway. BYE!"
Jake thinks: "Whoa! Geez Miley! I know that it's my fault, but you don't have to be that mad! I guess liking Miley isn't such a good idea... but I do still like the old her. The Pen Pal her."
Miley meets up with Lilly: "I really can't wait 'til the weekend! It's in 45 minutes!!!"
Lilly: "Oh yeah!"
Oliver: "At least we could get away from Mr. Celebrity!"
Miley smiles: "You guys ROCK!"
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley walks into her home: "Daddy? Jackson?"
No one answered.
Miley is scared: "Hello?"
No one answered.
Miley walks into her room and sees a dark shadow in the corner.
Miley screams: "Who, who, who are you?"
Chapter 6: Keely and Zoey Brooks
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Keely, Zoey and Robbie Ray yell: "Surprise!"
Miley: "OMG! My fave cousins are here! Daddy, I thought that you were kidnapped or something! Wait... Dadnapped!"
They all laugh.
Miley: "So Keely, Zoey, when did you guys get here?"
Zoey: "Today!"
Keely: "Yup! Today! It was painful flying from Toronto to here!"
Robby Ray: "Well glad that you're here girls! I was shocked when I saw them at the door."
They all laugh again.
Miley: "Yay! Group hug!"
All three girls hug.
Miley: "How's PCA?"
Zoey: "VERY good. Remember that Chase I told you about?"
Miley: "Ya, that guy that has a crush on you?"
Keely: "Ooo Zoey!"
Zoey: "Stop daydreaming. There was this time when Logan, that jerk was insulting me right? Then Chase suddenly came into the classroom we were in and spilled, 'Don't TOUCH my girlfriend!' That was hilarious!
All three girls laugh.
Robby Ray: "I'll prepare room for Zoey and Ashley to stay in. You girls keep talking."
Miley: "Wow! So that's how you know that he has a crush on you... aw!"
Keely and Miley say at the same time: "So sweet!"
They all laugh.
Miley: "You know my pen pal Ryan? He totally lied to me! He said that he was Ryan in the letters, but he is actually JAKE Ryan. See the big difference?"
Zoey: "Wow... Jake Ryan has a crush on Miley Stewart."
Keely: "Cut it out Zoey! Miley hates Jake now, right?"
Miley nods and hears a knock on the door coming from downstairs.
Chapter 7: You're Bugging Me!
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley: "Daddy, who is it?"
Robby Ray: "It's um..."
Jake: "I am Jake. Jake Ryan."
Zoey and Keely rush down the stairs.
Zoey: "OMG! This is Jake Ryan the celebrity! Could I have an autograph?"
Jake: "Um... actually I am here to see Miley."
Keely: "Ooo..."
Miley came down the stairs. She didn't want to see Jake AGAIN but other people were there.
Miley: "Jake? Ok. Zoey, Keely, Daddy could I talk to him alone? Let's go outside Jake."
Jake: "Ok... Look. I am really sorry for being a liar in the letters I sent you. Will you forgive me, Miley?"
Miley: "No way. I don't forgive people like this. Ever. NEVER EVER."
Jake: "Please Miley? Give me a second chance?"
Miley: "You're bugging me Jake! Go! Go home to your LIAR place! Don't ever come back!"
Jake leaves with a sad face. He really liked Miley.
Setting: School
Jake: "Miley, I really wanted to tell you that I am leaving to Romania for 4 months. I will really miss you!"
Miley: "Well I won't Jake! I don't care! I should even talk to you!"
Miley leaves madly. She REALLY isn't happy about being lied to for the last 7 years.
Lilly: "Miley, are you ok? What happened?"
Miley: "It's a long story. I'll tell you later."
Chapter 8: I Don't Know!
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley: "You know Lilly, Jake is leaving."
Oliver: "Then you should be happy!"
Lilly: "Yeah. Mr. Celebrity is gone."
Miley: "I know, but I just don't feel right. You know that feeling?"
Oliver: "Nope."
Lilly: "Yeah. I get it. So you like him?"
Miley: "I don't know. Like, I am always mad at him and everything, but I really don't know."
Oliver: "Well where is he going???"
Miley: "Romania. He has to shoot this movie there for 4 months.
Lilly: "Well you'd better find out if you really like him! Remember last time? I missed out on this really cute guy just because of one little lie!!!
~Flashback~
Lilly: "Cody! I don't like you, ok? You have been lying to me for the past 6 months, CHEATING!"
Cody: "I know. I am sorry Lilly, ok? I am so NOT into Ashley! She is just this girl that really understands my feeling inside!"
Lilly: "Well go to missy Ashley Leggat! And STOP bugging me! I am not the kind of girl that would like liars."
Cody: "Well bye-bye Lilly! I have to leave and go back to Canada anyway."
Lilly turns sad right away.
~Flashback Over~
Oliver: "Oh yeah. I remember seeing that sad conversation."
Miley: "Well I really don't know what I should do!"
Lilly: "Tell Jake."
Miley: "No way!"
Oliver: "Well then what are you gonna do?"
Miley: "I don't know..."
Chapter 9: Surprises
Setting: School
Miley cries: "You know what? I really feel weird without Jake, or as we call "Ryan"."
Lilly: "Eek! I never knew that Missy I Hate Jake would actually like him!"
Oliver: "Well yeah. Who ever knew?"
Lilly: "1 minute before school ends!"
Oliver: "Feel happy. Only one minute left." *smiles*
Miley: "Wanna come over after school?"
Lilly: "Sure. We'll be there!"
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Zoey: "Don't you think that no school is fun?"
Keely: "Well yeah. Did you ever like Jake Ryan?"
Zoey: "Oh yeah. But Miley likes her!"
Keely: "Yeah. Don't you feel bad for Miley though?"
Zoey: "Well yeah! Who would wanna be lied to for the last 7 years?"
Miley, Lilly and Oliver finally get to Miley's house. Zoey and Keely hear the key turning.
Zoey: "Hide."
Keely: "Yeah."
Miley comes in the house.
Miley: "Anyone here?"
Zoey and Keely: "Surprise!"
Miley: "Not again!"
Zoey and Keely: "Yeah hey Miley! Hi..." *looks at Lilly and Oliver*
Miley: "Oh yeah. I forgot to introduce! This is Lilly and this is Oliver."
Oliver and Lilly: "Miley, and who are they?"
Zoey: "I am Zoey Brooks. Miley's cousin."
Keely: "I am Keely Brooks. Miley's other cousin."
Zoey and Keely: "And we're TWINS!"
Miley: "They are weird sometimes. If you don't mind, Lilly, Oliver."
Zoey: "What did you just say?"
Keely: "Oh yeah Miley, we have another surprise for you."
Miley: "Really? Could they listen?"
Zoey: "Yeah sure! Ok... here it is! Drum roll..."
Chapter 10: BFFs
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Zoey: "We're moving in! Yay us!"
Miley: "But why guys?"
Keely starts to cry.
Keely: "You know how daddy died 5 years ago, right? Now mommy did too..."
Keely and Zoey cry even harder.
Zoey: "Uncle Robby decided to help us so he called us to come and live here instead."
Lilly: "Wow... then I guess that you should know something... Miley is Ha..."
Miley shuts Lilly's mouth up.
Miley: "Lilly was just trying to say that I am happy that you're here, but I didn't like why."
Oliver: "Yeah. Yeah."
Robby Ray: "Miley, I need you up here for some planning."
Miley rushes upstairs, leaving everyone downstairs.
Miley: "What's up? Daddy?"
Robby Ray: "Do you think that you should tell them the secret?"
Miley: "Yes... but I am really afraid that they would let EVERYONE know... including Amber and Ashley."
Robby Ray: "But you should really trust them."
Miley: "Remember what happened when Lilly knew?"
~Flashback~
Setting: Hannah Montana's Closet
Lilly: "Why don't you tell Amber and Ashley?"
Miley: "Remember what I said?"
Lilly: "Yeah... but you can't be that selfish! I am gonna tell..."
Miley: "No you won't."
~Flashback Over~
Miley: "You understand?"
Robby: "Your choice..."
Miley comes downstairs and found out something...
Chapter 11: What?
Setting: School
Miley: "I can't believe you told that secret to them before I gave you permission."
Lilly: "It was a total mistake! I am sorry Miley!"
Miley: "Sorry for what?"
Lilly: "No! Let me explain!"
Miley: "Explain what?"
Miley stomps away.
Lilly: "Miley! It's not what you think it is!"
Oliver: "Whoa. What happened?"
Amber: "Ooo... I see friendship troubles!"
Ashley: "I can see that the losers are losing again."
Amber and Ashley laugh.
Amber and Ashley: "Ooo... tiss..."
Amber and Ashley laugh once more and walk away.
Keely and Zoey walk up to Lilly and Oliver.
Zoey: "Whoa. What just happened?"
Keely: "And where is Miley?"
Lilly: "Long story. Miley is mad at me for telling her secret, and Amber and Ashley, the 2 school bullies are mean to us."
Oliver: "That's actually a short story."
Lilly: "Whatever."
Keely: "Oh... okay..."
Zoey: "Yeah."
Miley screams and then she starts coughing nonstop because of that.
Chapter 12: Concert Alone
Setting: Hannah Montana Concert
Miley dresses up as Hannah and goes on stage.
Hannah: "I am very sorry tonight. Lola and Smokin' Oken couldn't make it here. Sorry! But I'll sing a few more songs."
The crowd cheers.
Hannah: "Let's start with... The Other Side of Me!"
The crowd cheers louder.
Hannah performs The Other Side of Me really well and the crowd cheers again.
One person from the crowd: "Lola! Smoken' Oken! Lola! Smoken' Oken!"
Hannah: "Sorry again. They're not here."
Suddenly, Lilly and Oliver, dressed as Lola and Smoken' Oken came out from the back stage.
Lola: "Now who said I'm not here?"
Smoken' Oken: "Who said?"
Hannah sang Who Said with Lola and Smoken' Oken. They had a really good time.
Setting: Backstage
Lilly: "I have to go now. Here... I am half way there... 3/4 way there..."
Miley and Lilly: "Hugs?"
Miley and Lilly hug.
Miley: "I am so sorry for treating you like that for the past few days."
Lilly: "It's okay. I totally get it."
Miley and Lilly hug once more.
Chapter 13: Advice
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley: "Daddy, I need help."
Robby Ray: "What's up, bud?"
Miley: "Jake Ryan is coming back in a month. I really don't know what I should do!"
Robby Ray: "But don't you like him?"
Miley: "Yes but..."
Robby Ray: "Yeah I get how it feels. You like him, but you don't know how to say it."
Miley: "Yeah."
Miley starts to sob.
Robby Ray: "Everything is gonna be all right, bud."
Miley: "You think so?"
Robby Ray: "Yes I think so."
Miley: "But what do I do when he comes back?"
Robby Ray: "Live, laugh, love."
Miley: "Huh?"
Robby Ray: "Do what you can. Tell him when the time is right."
Miley: "Thanks dad."
Robby Ray: "I am always here for you, bud."
Miley and Robby Ray hug.
Miley sobs once more.
Chapter 14: The Phone Call
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley is still sobbing. She is totally hurt. She doesn't know what to do!
Miley hears the phone ring. She tries to stop sobbing.
Miley: "Hello?"
Jake: "Hi Miley. I'll be back soon. I really miss you."
Miley: "For what? Let's review. Shall we? You lied to me..."
Jake cut her off.
Jake: "I know. I am really sorry."
Miley: "You don't deserve forgiveness!"
Jake: "Look. I am really sorry. And I barely say that to people."
Miley: "Yeah yeah. You have said this at least a hundred times. See? You lied."
Jake: "I am really sorry Miley. I didn't mean to lie to you."
Miley: "You totally meant it!"
Jake: "I am really sorry."
Jake cried for his first time.
Miley: "You don't deserve my forgiveness!"
Miley hung up on Jake. She was really sad.
The phone rang again, but Miley didn't pick it up. It's Jake... again.
Miley sat on the floor. She started crying again.
Chapter 15: The Truth Be Gold
Setting: Hannah Montana Concert
Hannah: "Hey guys! How's everyone?"
The crowd cheers.
Hannah: "Well that's a good, right?"
The crowd cheers louder.
Hannah: "Are you excited?"
The crowd screams.
Hannah: "I'm gonna start with my favourite, Best of Both Worlds!"
The crowd screams with a few guys shouting, "Hannah we love you!".
Hannah Montana sings.
Hannah: "How was it?"
The crowd shouts, "Good!".
Hannah: "Well now I am going to sing my other favourite, If We Were A Movie!"
The crowd cheers really loud.
Hannah Montana sings.
Hannah: "Should I play the guitar for you?"
The crowd screams.
Hannah plays the guitar accompanied slow version of If We Were A Movie.
The crowd cheers again.
Hannah: "Actually, I think that you all are dying to know who I really is."
The crowd shouts, "Yes!!!".
Hannah: "Good bye to my secret identity. I am Miley Stewart."
Hannah takes off her wig to show that she is really Miley.
The crowd gasps.
Jake shouts: "Miley Stewart! I am back! I love you!"
The crowd: "Oh my gosh! Jake Ryan likes Miley Stewart!"
Jake Ryan comes up to the stage, and he gets a microphone.
Jake: "Miley, I am really sorry. I came back. Please forgive me!"
Jake kneels down to plead for forgiveness.
Miley: "Jake Ryan, I am through with pretending that I don't like you and the truth is... I am totally in love with you."
Jake and Miley finally french kiss.
Miley suddenly stops Jake and taps her microphone.
Miley: "Wait a minute... is this thing on?"
THE END
Chapter 1: A Little Dream
Setting: School
Miley: "Hey I heard that Jake Ryan is coming to our school!"
Lilly: "Yeah! I heard that he's a celebrity!"
Oliver: "Hey remember I am still a guy here!"
Lilly: "Shut up Oliver!"
Oliver: "No you shut up!"
Miley: "He's here~"
Lilly: "OMG! He's so cute!"
Jake: "Hi guys! I am Jake Ryan!"
Oliver: "Jake Ryan is SO joking."
Miley: "No he's not! He's my dream boyfriend! *daydreams*"
Girl #1: "So... do you have a girlfriend?"
Jake: "No I have a crush that is in this school. She's all smart, and funny... she's so down to earth!" *daydreams about his pen pal*
Girl #2: "Who is it?"
Jake: "She is my pen pal, Miley Stewart."
Chapter 2: Pen Pal Miley
Setting: School
Miley freaks out: "What? the pen pal i had for years is... JAKE?"
Lilly: "Oh that's new."
Oliver: "Oh yeah. who knew that Jake likes Miley or even knows her?"
Jake: "Miley, I really liked you since we started writing to each other. <3"
Miley: "I dreamed bout this. Never knew that it would come true, or knew that Jake is my pen pal! Jake, why did you lie to me?"
Jake: "I know! My signature's always Ryan. It was because I didn't want you to write to me like I am Jake Ryan the celebrity. I wanted you to write to me like I am Jake Ryan the person."
Miley: "Well you still lied! *slaps him and stomps away*"
Oliver: "Whoa that was fast!"
Lilly: "Oh yeah. FAST!"
Jake: "No Miley wait up!"
Miley walks into the washroom and cries: "Who knew that my trusted pen pal could lie to me?"
Then Miley heard mean footsteps from outside to the washroom. They were footsteps of Amber and Ashley.
Chapter 3: When They Attack
Setting: School
Miley: "Amber? Ashley?"
Amber: "I heard that Jake Ryan likes you!"
Ashley: "Yeah! Like, we're into Jake Ryan so we..."
Miley: "I noe wat u guys mean. Wanna beat me up eh?"
Amber: "No! We just wanna keep you from Jake."
Miley goes outta the washroom: "Well, c u guys later!"
Ashley: "Smile for the camara!" *takes picture of Miley scared*
Miley: "Oliver, Lilly, you totally dunno wat just happened."
Lilly: "You got beat up by Amber and Ashley?"
Oliver: "If she did, she wouldn't be alive right now."
Lilly laughs: "Yeah rite."
Oliver: "Actually, I am kinda jealous of Jake Ryan."
Miley: "Yeah?"
Lilly: "Seems like it!"
Oliver: "The bell's ringing. Let's go to class!"
Then Miley felt a tap on her shoulder. It was Jake... again.
Chapter 4: Letters, Letters, Letters
Setting: Miley's House
Miley opens her boxes of letters from Jake Ryan. She started reading some of them.
Dear Miley,
Hello! I am Ryan. It was nice to know that there's a girl out there that likes Zombie High. I like that a lot too~
In your letter, you said that you like the popstar Hannah Montana. Same with me. She really is hot and everything, but I bet that you are hotter <3
I like to watch TV and play on the computer. I was ALWAYS bugged by my friends because they always flip through the letter you sent to me last month. I hope you have a good New Year!
Your pen pal,
Ryan
Dear Miley,
Wow! I never knew that you loved to dance! Hannah Montana dances soooo well that I couldn't keep up with the dance moves. Could you?
Sleeping is one of my hobbies. I know that you enjoy sleeping too! Do you? Tell me in your next letter. And I hope that we'll be able to share deep secrets soon!
Your pen pal,
Ryan
Dear Miley,
I have a big confession to make. Even though we haven't met face to face, or talked face to face, I have a strange feeling about you. When I told my friends this feeling, they say that I must love you. Do I?
Let's jump to another topic. Well last night, my older brother fell right off his bunk! It was hilarious when he started laughing later with a bruised neck!
Your pen pal,
Ryan
Lilly: "Aw... that last letter was so sweet! You're so lucky that Jake's into you!"
Miley: "You know what? I am gonna throw those out! Jake is a LIAR!" *throws out every single letter in every box*
Lilly: "Ouch! You know that Jake must really like you!"
Miley: "Well you think so? How about you go and date Jake!"
Lilly: "I would wanna, but I know you really like Jake inside! Aw..."
Miley: "Whatever you say!"
Lilly: "Then how about you go talk to him?"
Miley: "No way! I am NOT going to talk to that big liar!"
Lilly: "Whatever you wanna do, Miley."
Robby Ray: "You girls are gonna sleepover?"
Miley: "Are you staying?"
Setting: School Next Day
Jake: "Miley, you know that I really like you."
Miley: "Well, Jake, you're a LIAR!"
The bell is ringing and they all go to class. Jake is following Miley.
Chapter 5: Broken Dreams
Setting: School
Miley turns around: "What?"
Jake: "I just wanna know where room 137 is."
Miley *mad*: "End of the hallway. BYE!"
Jake thinks: "Whoa! Geez Miley! I know that it's my fault, but you don't have to be that mad! I guess liking Miley isn't such a good idea... but I do still like the old her. The Pen Pal her."
Miley meets up with Lilly: "I really can't wait 'til the weekend! It's in 45 minutes!!!"
Lilly: "Oh yeah!"
Oliver: "At least we could get away from Mr. Celebrity!"
Miley smiles: "You guys ROCK!"
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley walks into her home: "Daddy? Jackson?"
No one answered.
Miley is scared: "Hello?"
No one answered.
Miley walks into her room and sees a dark shadow in the corner.
Miley screams: "Who, who, who are you?"
Chapter 6: Keely and Zoey Brooks
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Keely, Zoey and Robbie Ray yell: "Surprise!"
Miley: "OMG! My fave cousins are here! Daddy, I thought that you were kidnapped or something! Wait... Dadnapped!"
They all laugh.
Miley: "So Keely, Zoey, when did you guys get here?"
Zoey: "Today!"
Keely: "Yup! Today! It was painful flying from Toronto to here!"
Robby Ray: "Well glad that you're here girls! I was shocked when I saw them at the door."
They all laugh again.
Miley: "Yay! Group hug!"
All three girls hug.
Miley: "How's PCA?"
Zoey: "VERY good. Remember that Chase I told you about?"
Miley: "Ya, that guy that has a crush on you?"
Keely: "Ooo Zoey!"
Zoey: "Stop daydreaming. There was this time when Logan, that jerk was insulting me right? Then Chase suddenly came into the classroom we were in and spilled, 'Don't TOUCH my girlfriend!' That was hilarious!
All three girls laugh.
Robby Ray: "I'll prepare room for Zoey and Ashley to stay in. You girls keep talking."
Miley: "Wow! So that's how you know that he has a crush on you... aw!"
Keely and Miley say at the same time: "So sweet!"
They all laugh.
Miley: "You know my pen pal Ryan? He totally lied to me! He said that he was Ryan in the letters, but he is actually JAKE Ryan. See the big difference?"
Zoey: "Wow... Jake Ryan has a crush on Miley Stewart."
Keely: "Cut it out Zoey! Miley hates Jake now, right?"
Miley nods and hears a knock on the door coming from downstairs.
Chapter 7: You're Bugging Me!
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley: "Daddy, who is it?"
Robby Ray: "It's um..."
Jake: "I am Jake. Jake Ryan."
Zoey and Keely rush down the stairs.
Zoey: "OMG! This is Jake Ryan the celebrity! Could I have an autograph?"
Jake: "Um... actually I am here to see Miley."
Keely: "Ooo..."
Miley came down the stairs. She didn't want to see Jake AGAIN but other people were there.
Miley: "Jake? Ok. Zoey, Keely, Daddy could I talk to him alone? Let's go outside Jake."
Jake: "Ok... Look. I am really sorry for being a liar in the letters I sent you. Will you forgive me, Miley?"
Miley: "No way. I don't forgive people like this. Ever. NEVER EVER."
Jake: "Please Miley? Give me a second chance?"
Miley: "You're bugging me Jake! Go! Go home to your LIAR place! Don't ever come back!"
Jake leaves with a sad face. He really liked Miley.
Setting: School
Jake: "Miley, I really wanted to tell you that I am leaving to Romania for 4 months. I will really miss you!"
Miley: "Well I won't Jake! I don't care! I should even talk to you!"
Miley leaves madly. She REALLY isn't happy about being lied to for the last 7 years.
Lilly: "Miley, are you ok? What happened?"
Miley: "It's a long story. I'll tell you later."
Chapter 8: I Don't Know!
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley: "You know Lilly, Jake is leaving."
Oliver: "Then you should be happy!"
Lilly: "Yeah. Mr. Celebrity is gone."
Miley: "I know, but I just don't feel right. You know that feeling?"
Oliver: "Nope."
Lilly: "Yeah. I get it. So you like him?"
Miley: "I don't know. Like, I am always mad at him and everything, but I really don't know."
Oliver: "Well where is he going???"
Miley: "Romania. He has to shoot this movie there for 4 months.
Lilly: "Well you'd better find out if you really like him! Remember last time? I missed out on this really cute guy just because of one little lie!!!
~Flashback~
Lilly: "Cody! I don't like you, ok? You have been lying to me for the past 6 months, CHEATING!"
Cody: "I know. I am sorry Lilly, ok? I am so NOT into Ashley! She is just this girl that really understands my feeling inside!"
Lilly: "Well go to missy Ashley Leggat! And STOP bugging me! I am not the kind of girl that would like liars."
Cody: "Well bye-bye Lilly! I have to leave and go back to Canada anyway."
Lilly turns sad right away.
~Flashback Over~
Oliver: "Oh yeah. I remember seeing that sad conversation."
Miley: "Well I really don't know what I should do!"
Lilly: "Tell Jake."
Miley: "No way!"
Oliver: "Well then what are you gonna do?"
Miley: "I don't know..."
Chapter 9: Surprises
Setting: School
Miley cries: "You know what? I really feel weird without Jake, or as we call "Ryan"."
Lilly: "Eek! I never knew that Missy I Hate Jake would actually like him!"
Oliver: "Well yeah. Who ever knew?"
Lilly: "1 minute before school ends!"
Oliver: "Feel happy. Only one minute left." *smiles*
Miley: "Wanna come over after school?"
Lilly: "Sure. We'll be there!"
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Zoey: "Don't you think that no school is fun?"
Keely: "Well yeah. Did you ever like Jake Ryan?"
Zoey: "Oh yeah. But Miley likes her!"
Keely: "Yeah. Don't you feel bad for Miley though?"
Zoey: "Well yeah! Who would wanna be lied to for the last 7 years?"
Miley, Lilly and Oliver finally get to Miley's house. Zoey and Keely hear the key turning.
Zoey: "Hide."
Keely: "Yeah."
Miley comes in the house.
Miley: "Anyone here?"
Zoey and Keely: "Surprise!"
Miley: "Not again!"
Zoey and Keely: "Yeah hey Miley! Hi..." *looks at Lilly and Oliver*
Miley: "Oh yeah. I forgot to introduce! This is Lilly and this is Oliver."
Oliver and Lilly: "Miley, and who are they?"
Zoey: "I am Zoey Brooks. Miley's cousin."
Keely: "I am Keely Brooks. Miley's other cousin."
Zoey and Keely: "And we're TWINS!"
Miley: "They are weird sometimes. If you don't mind, Lilly, Oliver."
Zoey: "What did you just say?"
Keely: "Oh yeah Miley, we have another surprise for you."
Miley: "Really? Could they listen?"
Zoey: "Yeah sure! Ok... here it is! Drum roll..."
Chapter 10: BFFs
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Zoey: "We're moving in! Yay us!"
Miley: "But why guys?"
Keely starts to cry.
Keely: "You know how daddy died 5 years ago, right? Now mommy did too..."
Keely and Zoey cry even harder.
Zoey: "Uncle Robby decided to help us so he called us to come and live here instead."
Lilly: "Wow... then I guess that you should know something... Miley is Ha..."
Miley shuts Lilly's mouth up.
Miley: "Lilly was just trying to say that I am happy that you're here, but I didn't like why."
Oliver: "Yeah. Yeah."
Robby Ray: "Miley, I need you up here for some planning."
Miley rushes upstairs, leaving everyone downstairs.
Miley: "What's up? Daddy?"
Robby Ray: "Do you think that you should tell them the secret?"
Miley: "Yes... but I am really afraid that they would let EVERYONE know... including Amber and Ashley."
Robby Ray: "But you should really trust them."
Miley: "Remember what happened when Lilly knew?"
~Flashback~
Setting: Hannah Montana's Closet
Lilly: "Why don't you tell Amber and Ashley?"
Miley: "Remember what I said?"
Lilly: "Yeah... but you can't be that selfish! I am gonna tell..."
Miley: "No you won't."
~Flashback Over~
Miley: "You understand?"
Robby: "Your choice..."
Miley comes downstairs and found out something...
Chapter 11: What?
Setting: School
Miley: "I can't believe you told that secret to them before I gave you permission."
Lilly: "It was a total mistake! I am sorry Miley!"
Miley: "Sorry for what?"
Lilly: "No! Let me explain!"
Miley: "Explain what?"
Miley stomps away.
Lilly: "Miley! It's not what you think it is!"
Oliver: "Whoa. What happened?"
Amber: "Ooo... I see friendship troubles!"
Ashley: "I can see that the losers are losing again."
Amber and Ashley laugh.
Amber and Ashley: "Ooo... tiss..."
Amber and Ashley laugh once more and walk away.
Keely and Zoey walk up to Lilly and Oliver.
Zoey: "Whoa. What just happened?"
Keely: "And where is Miley?"
Lilly: "Long story. Miley is mad at me for telling her secret, and Amber and Ashley, the 2 school bullies are mean to us."
Oliver: "That's actually a short story."
Lilly: "Whatever."
Keely: "Oh... okay..."
Zoey: "Yeah."
Miley screams and then she starts coughing nonstop because of that.
Chapter 12: Concert Alone
Setting: Hannah Montana Concert
Miley dresses up as Hannah and goes on stage.
Hannah: "I am very sorry tonight. Lola and Smokin' Oken couldn't make it here. Sorry! But I'll sing a few more songs."
The crowd cheers.
Hannah: "Let's start with... The Other Side of Me!"
The crowd cheers louder.
Hannah performs The Other Side of Me really well and the crowd cheers again.
One person from the crowd: "Lola! Smoken' Oken! Lola! Smoken' Oken!"
Hannah: "Sorry again. They're not here."
Suddenly, Lilly and Oliver, dressed as Lola and Smoken' Oken came out from the back stage.
Lola: "Now who said I'm not here?"
Smoken' Oken: "Who said?"
Hannah sang Who Said with Lola and Smoken' Oken. They had a really good time.
Setting: Backstage
Lilly: "I have to go now. Here... I am half way there... 3/4 way there..."
Miley and Lilly: "Hugs?"
Miley and Lilly hug.
Miley: "I am so sorry for treating you like that for the past few days."
Lilly: "It's okay. I totally get it."
Miley and Lilly hug once more.
Chapter 13: Advice
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley: "Daddy, I need help."
Robby Ray: "What's up, bud?"
Miley: "Jake Ryan is coming back in a month. I really don't know what I should do!"
Robby Ray: "But don't you like him?"
Miley: "Yes but..."
Robby Ray: "Yeah I get how it feels. You like him, but you don't know how to say it."
Miley: "Yeah."
Miley starts to sob.
Robby Ray: "Everything is gonna be all right, bud."
Miley: "You think so?"
Robby Ray: "Yes I think so."
Miley: "But what do I do when he comes back?"
Robby Ray: "Live, laugh, love."
Miley: "Huh?"
Robby Ray: "Do what you can. Tell him when the time is right."
Miley: "Thanks dad."
Robby Ray: "I am always here for you, bud."
Miley and Robby Ray hug.
Miley sobs once more.
Chapter 14: The Phone Call
Setting: The Stewarts' House
Miley is still sobbing. She is totally hurt. She doesn't know what to do!
Miley hears the phone ring. She tries to stop sobbing.
Miley: "Hello?"
Jake: "Hi Miley. I'll be back soon. I really miss you."
Miley: "For what? Let's review. Shall we? You lied to me..."
Jake cut her off.
Jake: "I know. I am really sorry."
Miley: "You don't deserve forgiveness!"
Jake: "Look. I am really sorry. And I barely say that to people."
Miley: "Yeah yeah. You have said this at least a hundred times. See? You lied."
Jake: "I am really sorry Miley. I didn't mean to lie to you."
Miley: "You totally meant it!"
Jake: "I am really sorry."
Jake cried for his first time.
Miley: "You don't deserve my forgiveness!"
Miley hung up on Jake. She was really sad.
The phone rang again, but Miley didn't pick it up. It's Jake... again.
Miley sat on the floor. She started crying again.
Chapter 15: The Truth Be Gold
Setting: Hannah Montana Concert
Hannah: "Hey guys! How's everyone?"
The crowd cheers.
Hannah: "Well that's a good, right?"
The crowd cheers louder.
Hannah: "Are you excited?"
The crowd screams.
Hannah: "I'm gonna start with my favourite, Best of Both Worlds!"
The crowd screams with a few guys shouting, "Hannah we love you!".
Hannah Montana sings.
Hannah: "How was it?"
The crowd shouts, "Good!".
Hannah: "Well now I am going to sing my other favourite, If We Were A Movie!"
The crowd cheers really loud.
Hannah Montana sings.
Hannah: "Should I play the guitar for you?"
The crowd screams.
Hannah plays the guitar accompanied slow version of If We Were A Movie.
The crowd cheers again.
Hannah: "Actually, I think that you all are dying to know who I really is."
The crowd shouts, "Yes!!!".
Hannah: "Good bye to my secret identity. I am Miley Stewart."
Hannah takes off her wig to show that she is really Miley.
The crowd gasps.
Jake shouts: "Miley Stewart! I am back! I love you!"
The crowd: "Oh my gosh! Jake Ryan likes Miley Stewart!"
Jake Ryan comes up to the stage, and he gets a microphone.
Jake: "Miley, I am really sorry. I came back. Please forgive me!"
Jake kneels down to plead for forgiveness.
Miley: "Jake Ryan, I am through with pretending that I don't like you and the truth is... I am totally in love with you."
Jake and Miley finally french kiss.
Miley suddenly stops Jake and taps her microphone.
Miley: "Wait a minute... is this thing on?"
THE END