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absolutelyfabx3
01-05-2007, 07:10 PM
I've finally decided to post it up here. It's kinda branching off People who use people.
CHAPTER 1:: The big "secret"
Miley walked into school and ran up to Lilly.
"I can't stop thinkin' about him lilly"
Lilly was obviously clueless "who?"
"who do you think, santa claus? Jake!"
"oh right, well maybe it's best you move on...I mean it is 4 months!"
"and move onto who? he's the only guy who actually worked out! I mean Josh thought I was pathetic, and...i've had no one else!"
"well, how about this crazy wacky thought? you and oliver?"
"what?!?! Are you insane? Me and Oliver....uhhh.NO!"
"well, fine."
Miley and Lilly went off to class.

*school ends* Miley walked home thinking about all the things Lilly said. She started talking to herself.
"It is four months, and I mean...he'll probably meet someone new..."
Miley walked into her house and saw her dad.
"hey dad!"
"hey bud, listen i've got somethin' to tell ya."
"yeah dad?"
"well, I met someone, and I kinda like her I guess."
Miley knew where this was heading,
"Dad! Remember! No one can ever replace mom!"
"I never said that she was. I'm just saying we've been dating for quite some time now and we've decided we really like each other, and we're....engaged.."
"WHAT?!!?!?!?! How can you do this without asking me first?" Miley felt tears run down her cheek. She started to run out but her dad stopped her.
"Now bud, i'm not finished...there's another thing."
"what? A new baby arriving soon to?"
"no, but something similar..."

Tell me what you guys think of it. If you like it enough I'll post the second chapter.

~*~_$mIl3z_~*~
01-05-2007, 07:11 PM
i'm liking it so far! nice job

x_iluvcole_x
01-05-2007, 07:14 PM
oooOoo thats awesome!

absolutelyfabx3
01-05-2007, 07:15 PM
thanks! I tried to leave it off at an interesting part...

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-05-2007, 07:20 PM
OOOOO i looooove it. lol. so dramatic. awsome!

absolutelyfabx3
01-05-2007, 07:20 PM
haha rai. thought you might like the concept. I looovvveee dramatic things.

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-05-2007, 07:22 PM
MEeee to. Except for soap operas lol. Do continue dawlink. lol.

absolutelyfabx3
01-05-2007, 07:23 PM
okay, i'll post it up in a few minutes gotta finish processing it through my head...

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-05-2007, 07:28 PM
Lol. Its really good. I like the direction your going. When i right i just keep typing. Then just got through and correct what sounds funny.

absolutelyfabx3
01-05-2007, 07:37 PM
CHAPTER 2:: Family Jealousy
Miley's dad continued talking.
"She has two daughters already. Amanda and Stacie. Amanda is 14 and Stacie is 5."
"dad, I can't believe your doing this!" Miley ran out and over to Lilly's.
After Miley explained everything Lilly and Oliver sat in shock.
Lilly said, "wow, I can't believe this is happening..."
"I know Lilly! I can't believe my dad would do this without asking me!" Miley's cell rang. " have to go, I have to go meet the new family.."
Miley walked out and walked back home. When Miley walked in she saw a tall blonde lady who looked like she had alot of money. "Hi darling, you must be Miley. I'm Maria, your soon to be step-mother!" Maria let out a soft chuckle.
"hi....Maria."
"well, come meet Amanda and Stacie!" Miley followed reluctantly. There she saw a girl who looked about her age with reddish/blondish hair and baby blue eyes. "hey, i'm Amanda. Nice to meet you Miley."
Oliver came running in. "Miley you won't believe what-" Oliver's eyes met Amanda's. "well, hi, i'm Oliver oken.."
"Hi Oliver, i'm Amanda." Amanda showed off a million doller smile.
After a while Amanda and Oliver had talked and learned so much about each other. Miley could see the chemistry between them already. She folded her arms across her chest, and just stared. You've got that right, Miley was jealous.

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-05-2007, 07:52 PM
Perfecto my dear!

absolutelyfabx3
01-05-2007, 07:58 PM
haha thanks...I have an idea of what I wanna do next, but I still have to think it through. next chapter later tonight or tomorrow.

absolutelyfabx3
01-06-2007, 09:20 AM
**bump** I need comments! or I won't post the next chapter.

HM ROCKS
01-06-2007, 11:31 AM
you gave me an idea for a new story thanks!!

--Kaitlyn☺

mileyz fan tennessean gurl!
01-06-2007, 12:01 PM
man! i cant wait 4 the next chapter!!! SUSPENSEFUL!:D

Baby Vanessa
01-06-2007, 12:13 PM
write more plz

~Miley~Rox~
01-06-2007, 12:51 PM
It is soooooooo good!

V.A.H Next SuperStar
01-06-2007, 01:27 PM
it was good!

mileyz fan tennessean gurl!
01-06-2007, 03:10 PM
ya! i wanna more!! :)

absolutelyfabx3
01-06-2007, 06:34 PM
CHAPTER 3: What did she see?
Miley walked into the living room. She ploped down on the couch and sat on something squishy. Miley pulled a wet piece of bread out out from under her. "Jackson!!" Jackson came running down.
"yeah Miles?"
"What was this doing under my butt?" Miley held up the piece of bread.
"haha, I needed something to ice my butt, I fell on it playing basketball."
"well why didn't you get an ice pack then?"
"cause bread is squishier."
"you are so gross!"
Miley continued frowning.
"what's wrong miles?"
Miley looked out on the patio where she saw Oliver and Amanda talking and snuggling close.
"that's whats wrong."
"what? Amanda and Oliver? I thought you were with Jake? why do you care about Oliver."
"Because- I...I....I don't really know actually."

Miley looked at Jackson.
"you don't think miles.."
"no of course not! I don't have feelings for Oliver, I mean come on look at him!"
Miley looked out on the patio. But she couldn't believe her eyes.

Leave comments guys! It's gettin' juicy!!!

~*~_$mIl3z_~*~
01-06-2007, 07:15 PM
oooh gettin' very juicy lolz! awesome work absolutelyfabx3!

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-06-2007, 07:18 PM
LOOoooooove it!

absolutelyfabx3
01-06-2007, 11:04 PM
Chapter 5: Now what did she see and what did they hear?
Miley sat there in shock. Was she seeing the right way? She didn't mean to interupt, but I mean come on! Miley couldn't speak, move or do anything physical movement. What did she see? Why there was Amanda sitting in a lip lock with Oliver. Miley started shaking. "no! this can't be happening!"
"like I said miles, the looovvve feelings." Jackson said.
"shut up Jackson!" Miley shouted out to AManda and Oliver.
"how could you do this to me?" Miley stormed off in the other direction.
"wait, Miley.." Oliver tried to get Miley to come back.
"well, I guess that means, you two must be together? gosh, I can't believe I was kissing a cheater!"
"no, Amanda, me and Miley aren't together."
"well it sure looked like it. I mean why would Miley but so mad at me kissing you if she wasn't jealous."
"jealous? Miley doesn't like me. She's with that Jake guy."
"Jake guy? I'm her sister and....I don't even know about this."
"you just got here! your not even like her sister. You know Miley didn't want this? She liked being in the family they were."
"So you mean, she didn't want a step-mom? Or step-siblings?"
"not exactly. Now I have to go help my friend. Because unfortunatly she saw me kissing you. WHich is like unbearble. I don't even know what I saw in you!"
"Oliver-"
"don't even talk to me." Oliver walked off in the direction of Miley. Once he caught up with Miley he sat down with her.
"Listen, Miley, I didn't exactly plan for you to see that."
"oh yeah? and what difference would it make? it's not like I care. I mean I don't like you."
"exactly, so why did you get mad?"
"i don't know! I guess it just makes me a little jealous because you liked me first, but we never got together."
"why does it make you jealous?"
"i don't know! Just stop asking me questions."

Meanwhile, Jake was getting off of his private plane at the Malibu Airport. He couldn't wait to tell Miley he wasn't going to Romania. Once he got off the jet, he broke into a sprint and headed to Miley's house. ONce he got there, Jackson told him, Miley was at the beach. When Jake arrived on the beach, he ran into, Amanda.
"oh, sorry."
"hey, your Jake Ryan! why are you here, on our beach?"
"um..actually I'm looking for my girlfriend."
"girlfriend? well who's the lucky girl? I might happen to know her."
"well, her names Miley. Miley Stewart."
"what? you've got to be kidding me. I'm her new step-sister. You mean, Miley is YOUR, Jake Ryans, Girlfriend?"
"um...yeah?"
Amanda burst out laughing.
"You *laugh* will find *laugh* her on the beach *laugh* with *laugh* Oliver *laugh*"
"uh...thanks."
Jake ran down with Amanda following close behind. But what they saw, wasn't exactly pleasent.

Miley was walking next to Oliver. They stopped right in front of a little shack. What they didn't know was Jake and Amanda were peering out from behind the bushes.
"you know Miley, i'm really actually sor-"
Before he could finish his sentance Miley pulled him over and kissed him.
Oliver fell backwards "whoa! that came outta nowhere!" Miley ran off AGAIN. But she couldn't make it very far before Jake and Amanda popped up in front of them.
"What did you just do?" Jake Demanded.
"yeah? why were YOU kissing MY boyfriend?" Amanda screamed.
"He's not YOUR boyfriend! He's not anybodys property!!" Miley screamed in both of their faces. "I'm sorry! It's just a little overwhelming right now."
"right, why?" Jake demanded. "Not as over whealming as being a celeb."
"That's how much you know! It's a little hard keeping the whole secret about Hannah Montan-"
"secret about what?!?!" Jake practiacally screamed.
"nothing!" Before anyone could stop her Miley ran off. She knew her secret was blown...or was it?

absolutelyfabx3
01-07-2007, 01:50 PM
*bumppppp* comment people! or i;m not putting up another chapter!

Mileysabsolutnumber1fan
01-07-2007, 02:08 PM
omg!!! post more!!! NOW!!! lol

Fire-Chicken
01-07-2007, 02:54 PM
More, More, More, MORE!!!!!
It's awesome!!

// Rebecka From Sweden

whosthedoughnutnow
01-07-2007, 03:35 PM
its really good!!! it would make a good movie cuz an eisode would end to early. everyone would want more.

absolutelyfabx3
01-07-2007, 06:43 PM
Chapter 6: How can she cover this one?
Miley continued running to her house. She burst open the doors and screamed at her father. "Jake knows!! about Hannah Montana!! What am I gonna do?"
"bud, you got yourself into this one. Maybe it's just time you tell him."
Miley walked away. She called up Lilly.

Meanwhile Jake and Amanda were making up a plan of their own.
"Forget about Hannah Montana already Amanda!"
"sorry, but-"
"listen we're gonna get them back by pretending to be going out with each other got it?"
"sure! so when do I get to kiss you?"
"that is not a question to be disscussed right now."
A few hours later Miley saw Amanda and Jake walking on the beach holding hands. Miley turned to Lilly.
"I can't believe he's moved on that fast Lilly!"
"sorry, Miley, I knew it would happen..."
"right..." Miley ran down to Jake.
"listen Jake...I have something to tell you...."

absolutelyfabx3
01-08-2007, 06:02 PM
I'm not posting anymore chapters until I get comments.....

Fire-Chicken
01-09-2007, 10:16 AM
More, More, MORE!! U can't just stop now :)

// Rebecka From Sweden

absolutelyfabx3
01-10-2007, 06:01 PM
okayy, a FEW more comments and chapter 7 is coming your way!

~*~_$mIl3z_~*~
01-10-2007, 06:04 PM
oooh great great great job! can't wait for the next chapter!

absolutelyfabx3
01-12-2007, 03:21 PM
PEOPLE!! COMMENT!!! I wanna post the next chapter!!

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-12-2007, 03:22 PM
so excited. o want to read more lol

cyrusfan55
01-12-2007, 03:30 PM
its an amazing story. please post more soon =]

absolutelyfabx3
01-12-2007, 03:35 PM
okayy, I suppose I can post more!!

Chapter 7 "Will she tell him?"
Miley looked up at Jake. "I.....I...."
"I don't wanna stand here all day Miley..."
"okay, I...you have pudding on your shirt!"
Jake looked down and looked at Miley "umm...no I don't"
"your right...you don't!"
Jake began to walk away.
"wait, Jake...i'll tell you...i'm...i'm Hannah Montana."
Jake started laughing "yeah, okay!"
"no really, you have to see this. come to my house in fifteen minutes..i'll prove it."
Miley rushed home. She put her wig on, got her outfit and ran downstairs. Jake was already sitting there.
Miley walked up and started singing.
"If we were a movie, you'd be the right guy and i'd be the best friend, that you'd fall in love with.."
Jake stared in awe. Then he did something that "Hannah" couldn't believe

okay guys, it's short but I tried to leave it off at a suspensful part! comment more!!

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
01-12-2007, 03:40 PM
oOoOoOoOo whats jake gonna do?!?!?

absolutelyfabx3
01-12-2007, 04:36 PM
you'll find out when I get 3-4 more comments!!

Fire-Chicken
01-13-2007, 05:58 AM
More!!!!!!!!

mileyjake_10
01-13-2007, 07:31 AM
wow! you left me hanging there! haha! more please!! soo good!!

absolutelyfabx3
01-13-2007, 03:04 PM
okay
Chapter 8: "How can you NOT tell?"
Miley was looking at Jake when suddenly, he kissed Hannah!
"Hannah, I like you always have, we don't have to hide it anymore."
"Hide it? What are you talking about? I'm Miley!"
"Hannah, it's okay, I understand. MIley told you to come here."
"No! Look!"
Miley tried to pull her wig off. Then she suddenly remembered how she tore Jacksons seat covers...
"Jackson! You superglued my wig?" Hannah looked at Jake "Excuse me for a moment."
Miley ran off and tried tearing off her wig. It wouldn't budge.
"ugh, now I have to go to school like this!"
Miley stomped up to her room and trieed to pry the wig off somemore. Still not budging.
Miley went to sleep and woke up the next morning. She got dresssed and headed on to school. When she got to school everyone was asking for her autograph. Miley started to walk away- when her wig fell off! How did her wig fall off just like that? and more importantly who pulled it off? Miley turned around and couldn't believe who she saw behind her.

Fire-Chicken
01-13-2007, 04:45 PM
More, More, MORE!!

niiro_tatsu
01-13-2007, 06:12 PM
More!!!!

absolutelyfabx3
01-14-2007, 09:54 AM
one more comment and the next chapter will be posted....

MileyRox1174
01-14-2007, 11:41 AM
OMG this is soooooooo good!! PLEASE post the next chapter!! I am addicted to this story!

absolutelyfabx3
01-14-2007, 06:14 PM
yay! next chapter!!

Chapter 9:: How could you betray me like this?
Your still probably wondering who was standing behind Miley. Why, it was....LILLY!
"Lilly?!?! How could you do this?"
"yeah yeah, I was trying to help you Miley.."
"Help me? How? by telling the world my secret?"
"Well, why would you come to school as Hannah Montana? More attention!"
"No Lilly! It was superglued to my head!"
"Then how come I could pull it off so easy?"
"I don't know! Wait, why do you tihnk I want attention? Let alone MORE?"
"Because Miley, your going out with Jake, your kinda sorta becoming popular, and you've got good grades, great friends, and cool clothes. You have the attention you've always wanted Miley, and your totally leaving me out."
"So you decided to tell my best-kept secret? How could you Lilly?"
Miley ran off but suddenl;y Jake popped up behind her.
"Miley? Why did you dress up as Hannah Montana?"
"Jake! For the love of Pete, I AM HANNAH MONTANA!! Get it through your head, I didn't invite her to my house yesterday...I was her yesterday!"
"yeah, whatever Miley.." Jake started to walk away.
"no, wait, if we were a movie, you'd be the right guy.."
" wow, how could you keep a secret like this? and why?"
"because Jake, have you ever noticed how people treat you?"
"yeah, like royalty.."
"But you know, how many autographs you have to sign, people following you around everywhere, having to sit and practice your lines for hours, if you were a rockstar, signing CD's for hours..that's the bad side to it Jake. If I had let people know my secret, they'd be following me around, asking me for autographs. People would scream whenever Miley walked out of her house!"
"well, then why did you wear the wig to school? and let Lilly pull it off?"
"I wore it to school because it was superglued, and thats why I couldn't pull it off yesterday. I didn't "let" Lilly pull it off. She just did. now my secret is out...and I don't know what to do."
Miley ran off. As soon as she walked outside photographers mobbed her.
They were all screaming like maniacs, as all the kids were rushing out of the school to get Miley's autograph. Meanwhile in the bushes, Amber and Ashley sat, not too happy.
"ugh, she's becoming more popular Ashley.."
"whatever, it's gotta all be a prank."

Miley tried to push her way out of the crowd, but she wasn't getting any further. Finally she got out, and walked up to Jake.\"I'm sorry for not telling you, but...I was going to.."
But then Jake did the unthinkable.

wanna know what Jake did? Leave at least 3 comments at you'll get the next chapter!

absolutelyfabx3
01-14-2007, 07:47 PM
**bumpppp* comment people! I need to write more!

absolutelyfabx3
01-14-2007, 08:36 PM
COME ON PEOPLE!!! COMMENT!!! the suspense is killing ME and I already know what is gonna happen! But I have to post it!!

Fire-Chicken
01-15-2007, 09:08 AM
More, More, MORE!!!!!
Just post it for Me. :) If nobody else comments :)

// Rebecka From Sweden

absolutelyfabx3
01-15-2007, 11:18 AM
haha, i'm still working on the next chapter so it should be up a little later

Baby Vanessa
01-15-2007, 11:55 AM
more plz i'm hooked

absolutelyfabx3
01-15-2007, 12:16 PM
one more comment guys...I make it up as I go along but I know where I wanna pick off...

~*~_$mIl3z_~*~
01-15-2007, 09:11 PM
post it NOW!! or else8-) ....no lol j/k but i'm luving them so much!!

qtneci
01-16-2007, 12:19 AM
more!

hannah_montana.boston
01-16-2007, 04:48 PM
im a hm addict and your story is part of my hm addiction

absolutelyfabx3
01-16-2007, 04:57 PM
okayy people! I'm glad you are addicts! it's nice to know my writing counts as something :;):

Chapter 9: What will she do?
Jake stood and watched Miley explain and jabber more.
"Miley, stop talking! I want to tell you something!"
Miley stopped. "I'm breaking up with you."
Miley's mouth dropped open.
"yeah, I never liked Hannah, I just sucked up to her, and now that I know your hannah...well I basically hate you.."
"jake! I can't help it!"
"yes you can, you could have told me before.."
"but then you would have broken up with me earler, and you know what, I hate you!"
Miley stomped off and started getting mobbed by more fans. Miley shot Lilly 'the look' and tried to walk off, when she finally got out of the crowd, she ran home. When she walked inside, her father and Jackson just looked at her.
"What happened to you bud?"
"What happened, was Hannah Montana. The kids found out."
"how bud?"
"well, JACKSON," She glared at jackson "put superglue in my wig.."
"JACKSON!" Jackson smiled.
"and then it just suddenly came off so easily when Lilly took it off of me in school! I have no idea how the glue loosened, when I got up, it was still really stuck on there.."
Miley never thought of who ACTUALLY loosened the superglue.
Lilly walked into the house "Miley, can I talk to you?"
They went up to miley's room.
"I didn't mean to pull it off, It was super tight when I first tugged it, and then when I took my hand away, it just fell off.."
Miley thought for a second..then she knew who it was.
"You don't think it could have been ------?"
they both got wide eyed "YES! it was ------!!"
"She/he/it couldn't have!!"

comments!!

hannah_montana.boston
01-16-2007, 05:01 PM
<3m it evan mor

Mileycyrusfanx33
01-16-2007, 05:14 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!plz?lol

qtneci
01-16-2007, 06:56 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

absolutelyfabx3
01-18-2007, 06:26 PM
anyone else like it?

Fire-Chicken
01-19-2007, 11:28 AM
More!!!!!!

hannah_montana.boston
01-20-2007, 10:41 AM
iz there more

absolutelyfabx3
01-24-2007, 04:11 PM
there could be..if people like the last chapter!

hannah_montana.boston
01-24-2007, 05:21 PM
i am people and i like the last chapter

Fire-Chicken
01-25-2007, 12:50 PM
I like it too

absolutelyfabx3
01-26-2007, 03:22 PM
MIley shook her head. "I can't believe it! I mean, I know shes snobby, and all, but how did she know?" Miley shook her head. "How is it possible ASHLEY found out?" Lilly shook her head also. "I don't know.." She bit her bottom lip.
"Lilly?! You told her!"
"I'm sorry Miley..I just wanted to be popular!"
"So you risked our friendship...okay then Lilly. Fine by me if you didn't want to be friends."
"whatever Miley, i'm not even gonna fight with you anymore.."
Lilly walked off leaving Miley shocked.

(sorry it was short, i'm getting ready for a party/dance right now.)

miji.hannahmontana
01-26-2007, 03:40 PM
wow its really good! more more more more more moreeeeeeeeeee

vanessa*anne
01-26-2007, 04:14 PM
it is really really good more please

mileyrocks101
01-26-2007, 04:30 PM
its SUPER GOOD! MOORREEE! OR ELSE I WILL JK :P lol PLZ MORE

absolutelyfabx3
02-11-2007, 11:10 AM
Can I bump this? *bump* Does anyone like it still? I really wanna continue..

smiley_miley1221
02-11-2007, 12:33 PM
more.. MUST HAVE MORE!! MUAHAHAHA.. i mean.. can u post more?

Fire-Chicken
02-11-2007, 12:55 PM
^Lol, Yeah can u post more?

absolutelyfabx3
02-11-2007, 02:15 PM
sure!!!
What's going on?
Miley paced around her room. She wasdrowning in thoughts
Lilly hates me, what did I do? How could she tell ashley? Amber? whatever..I can't do this! Everybody is turning their backs...how can I cover this up? Will Jake not hate me anymore? ughh this is too much to think about!
Miley picked up her phone and dialed Lilly's number.
"Hello?"
"Lilly...i'm sorry...I just got really upset that you told someone.."
"I can't help it I need to be popular.."
"but you are popular...if enough people like you, you are popular! Lilly I can't do this alone..I need you to help me.."
"Fine Miley..but i'm not gonna do this ever again."
"okay, come back to my house..we have to set up a plan.."
Miley hung up and Lilly hung up. Miley gave a shy smile and was beginning to form a little plan in her head.

(sorry it was short..i'm still thinking of some things.)

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
02-24-2007, 01:05 PM
more now!! I love it!!! it's really good!!

absolutelyfabx3
02-24-2007, 01:27 PM
later.

Sk8er_Chick_Texas
02-24-2007, 02:12 PM
its good. cant wait fer the next chapter!

absolutelyfabx3
02-25-2007, 11:05 AM
Miley what are you doing?!
Miley was still waiting for Lilly an hour later. "Where is she?" Miley said out loud. She stood and watched for a while but still nothing. Finally she pulled out a coat and stuck on some flip-flops. It was pouring rain out side and Miley hated going out but she had to find her friend. She ran over to lilly's. her mom answered.
"Oh, hey Miley. Where's Lilly?"
"SHe's not at my house Ms.Trescott.."
"Well, she left...I don't know where she is hun.."
"thanks.." Miley turned around and felt tears run down her face. She wanted to find her friend. Miley looked in every bush in the neighborhood. No sign of Lilly.
"WHAERE IS SHE?!" Miley yelled. "This is stupid..Lilly come on! I give up. Where are you?" Still no reply. Miley turned around and screamed. Someone was behind her.

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
02-28-2007, 05:21 PM
that was great!!! More!! I love it!! This is the best FF i have ever read!! I NEED MORE!!!!!

absolutelyfabx3
02-28-2007, 07:31 PM
haha. thanks! I will after a few more comments!

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
02-28-2007, 07:41 PM
more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!! Does that count? I need more!

absolutelyfabx3
02-28-2007, 07:45 PM
oh my gosh! I meant by different users though =p lolzz

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
03-06-2007, 05:10 PM
OK, well post more!

miley rocks
03-14-2007, 06:42 PM
please post more i love ur script

mileysfan01
03-14-2007, 07:11 PM
plz post more!!!! i lub ur fanfic! its soooo good!!plz plz plz plz post post post more more more more more more more!!!!!!!

absolutelyfabx3
03-14-2007, 07:21 PM
umm..sure..in a bit after I write it! Also have a new fanfic. Check it out it's called New Kid on the block. =]

mileysfan01
03-14-2007, 07:25 PM
okay! im checkin it out

mileysfan01
03-14-2007, 07:26 PM
can u give me the link to ur new fan fic

absolutelyfabx3
05-19-2007, 05:00 PM
will I get in troulbe for bumping this? cuz I wanna continue now =p

hannah_montana.boston
05-19-2007, 05:15 PM
ecuse-a-moi i want more !wat happend to the step-people? sorry ive not repled ive been busy :-)

absolutelyfabx3
05-19-2007, 05:18 PM
lemme finish writing the next chapter =]
then i'llpost it

absolutelyfabx3
05-19-2007, 05:30 PM
Why is this happening to me?
Miley jumped at the sound of a voice behind her. She turned around. There was her step-mom.
"Maria?!"
"yes Miley? oh right, I have your friend. I alos know about your being Hannah Montana."
"re-really?"
""yes really you dingbat."
Miley looked at the ground.
"now, you can either have your friend back, and have your secret kept, or you can have your secret told and your best friend back. Whats it going to be?"
miley thought hurridly. "um...keep Lilly!"
"are you sure? tomorrow there will be no Lilly if you let me keep her.."
"yeah! keep her! my secrets more important." Miley turned away and ran home as fast as she could. As soon as she got in she flung her shoes and picked up the phone. She dialed Oliver.
"Oliver, we have a problem!"
"what? i was in the middle of eating my SANDWICH!"
"Oliver! Lilly's about to die! get over here. now!!!"
"okay!"
When Oliver arrived his sandwich was shoved in his mouth.
"OLIVER! get over here!"
"okay..okay!"
"I have a plan....but I need your help."

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
05-19-2007, 07:10 PM
awesome!!! PLEASE POST MORE!!!!!!!!! I REALLY LOVE IT!

absolutelyfabx3
05-20-2007, 10:37 AM
anymore comments?

luv2act
05-20-2007, 10:54 AM
oh, awsome! I just read the whole thing, and I need more!

absolutelyfabx3
05-20-2007, 10:56 AM
okay, just one more comment to ocntinue =]

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
05-20-2007, 02:12 PM
more more more!!!!

hannah_montana.boston
05-20-2007, 08:32 PM
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absolutelyfabx3
05-26-2007, 09:35 AM
okay =]
sorry i was so late =]]
um....its not working...
Miley whispered the plan to olivers ear.
"got it!"
Miley creeped into Maria's old house and saw Lilly there looking terrified.
Miley crawled over 'secret agent' style.
"Lilly! its okay! me and Oliver have a plan!" Lilly nodded
"just stay there lilly!"
Miley crawled over behind Maria's chair. She was still trying to figure out what to do to Lilly.
Miley quickly stood up and grabbed Marias hands and shoved her in the back.
Oliver quickly tied rope around her hands. They pushed her outside where the cops were.
"This was a most wanted fellon! good job you two!" Maria was lead off by the cops.
Miley looked at Oliver and smiled. She got that thingly feeling you got when you liked someone.
"Oliver...never mind"
Lilly walked out. "thanks you guys! this is great!"
Oliver took Mileys hand and pulled her aside. "what were you gonna tell me?"
"oh..I just..." Mileys head dropped. "i'll tell you later."

THE END. Sequel, coming in a week =]

MileyCyrus/HannahMontana'sFan
06-09-2007, 09:06 PM
i luv it!

hannah_montana.boston
06-09-2007, 09:44 PM
well done

ilovedestinyhopecyrus123456789
06-09-2007, 10:30 PM
Why is this happening to me?
Miley jumped at the sound of a voice behind her. She turned around. There was her step-mom.
"Maria?!"
"yes Miley? oh right, I have your friend. I alos know about your being Hannah Montana."
"re-really?"
""yes really you dingbat."
Miley looked at the ground.
"now, you can either have your friend back, and have your secret kept, or you can have your secret told and your best friend back. Whats it going to be?"
miley thought hurridly. "um...keep Lilly!"
"are you sure? tomorrow there will be no Lilly if you let me keep her.."
"yeah! keep her! my secrets more important." Miley turned away and ran home as fast as she could. As soon as she got in she flung her shoes and picked up the phone. She dialed Oliver.
"Oliver, we have a problem!"
"what? i was in the middle of eating my SANDWICH!"
"Oliver! Lilly's about to die! get over here. now!!!"
"okay!"
When Oliver arrived his sandwich was shoved in his mouth.
"OLIVER! get over here!"
"okay..okay!"
"I have a plan....but I need your help."


i cracked up when the sandwich part came up and then when the sandwich was shoved up in his mouth.
GREAT FANFIC!!!!!!

K-star7
06-09-2007, 11:17 PM
can't wait till the next part!

absolutelyfabx3
06-17-2007, 10:03 AM
haha thanks :] i'm trying to think of how i'm gonna start it :]