Fan Fiction by Allison♥

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Here is a story line I am working on! Feel free to post comments/suggestions or critisim!

Chapter 1: A Family Affair

Setting: Lilly, Oliver and Miley walk to class.

Lilly: “So Miley have you heard from Jake?”

Miley: “No and its been like 3 weeks. Hannah hasn’t even heard from him.”

Oliver: “Maybe he doesn’t have time to call people. What makes you think he is going to call?

Miley and Lilly look at each other and then hit Oliver on the back.

Miley: “Not helping!”

Inside their next class, people start shouting.

Random classmate: “OMG! I can’t believe you are here!”

Amber and Ashley: “Move aside. Pretty people coming through.”

Amber and Ashley turn towards each other. “Ooooo. Tisss”

Oliver: “What’s going on in there?” Oliver runs inside to see what is happening.

Lilly: “Miley What if its Jake.”

Miley’s eyes widen and she runs inside the room followed by Lilly.

Miley and Lilly run into Oliver.

Lilly: “Looks like you got pretty far. Know who it is?”

Oliver: “I tried. But we rank low on the pretty scale.”

Danny: “I have been trying for ten minutes. I’ve gotten no where.” Danny shakes his head and a bunch of dandruff falls on Miley and Lilly.

Miley and Lilly: “Ewww!”

Person who is catching all of the attention: “Guys I’m trying to find my cousin.”

Lilly: “Well it’s a girl. Definitely not Jake. Sorry Miley.”

Miley: “Wait I know that voice.”

Amber: “Well who is your cousin?”

Ashley: “Yes. Please tell us Melissa.”

Oliver: “Melissa as in Melissa the Supermodel.” Oliver tries to get closer to Melissa.

Melissa: “Miley Stewart.”

[Jasmine]

good great perfect i love it!!! but um..... i don't get the ending where melissa says Miley stewart and then it says melissa as in the supermodel i just dont get some parts

[Jasmine]

like here okay:
Miley: “Wait I know that voice.”

Amber: “Well who is your cousin?”

Ashley: “Yes. Please tell us Melissa........ dont get that”

Oliver: “Melissa as in Melissa the Supermodel.” Oliver tries to get closer to Melissa.......... dont get that

Melissa: “Miley Stewart.”dont get that

[Jasmine]

sorry if i am coming off sorta mean i am just suggesting i am sorry but it is really good

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

lol its ok!

Ok Amber and Ashley are trying to find out who Melissa's cousin is.

Melissa is a famous supermodel so thats why Oliver goes. "Melissa as in Melissa the supermodel?" and Thats why he goes to get a closer look.

And then Melissa answers saying that her cousin is miley stewart.

confused anywhere else?

[Lanae_M]

Write more I love it!!!!!!!

[flower1]

Youknowyouloveme, we can add more to the story!!:D

[Miley Smiley Cyrus]

um add more i realy dont get thouse parts eather

[cutie_girl]

i like it! add more to it plz

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok i'll work on more today!
And i will try to clear up some things♥

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter Two: You can’t pick family

Amber and Ashley: “WHAT!”

Ashley: “Oooo”

Amber puts up her hand: “Not now Ashley!”

Oliver turns to Miley: “Wait so your cousin is Melissa.”

Miley smiles at Melissa. “Yes Oliver she is my cousin.”

Oliver: “Melissa the famous supermodel that is filthy rich is your cousin.”

Melissa: “I wouldn’t say filthy rich but yes I am Miley’s cousin.” Melissa walks over to Miley and gives her a hug.

Miley: “What are you doing here Melissa? I thought you were in Paris still?”

Melissa: “I’ll tell you about that on the way to your house. Grab your things you are excused from the rest of the day.”

Miley: “I’ll talk to you guys later.” She says facing Oliver and Lilly.

Oliver and Lilly: “Bye”

Melissa and Miley head towards Miley’s house.

Setting: Miley’s house

Jackson sits on the couch with his bellybutton “friend”.

Melissa and Miley walk in.

Melissa: “Wow Jackson, you haven’t changed one bit.”

Jackson: “Why thanks Melissa”

Miley: “I don’t think that was a compliment.” She laughs.

Robby Ray walks down the stairs.

Robby Ray: “Ok Melissa all your stuff is in the guest bedroom.”

Miley turns towards Melissa. “You’re staying!”

Melissa: “Yup.”

Miley: “For how long?”

Before Melissa can answer, Lilly and Oliver walk through the door and run towards her.

Lilly: “Hi. I’m Lilly, Miley’s best friend.”

Oliver pushes Lilly out of the way. “I’m Oliver, Miley’s good looking best friend.”

Oliver kisses Melissa on the hand.

Melissa: “Nice to meet both of ya’ll.”

Oliver: “Miley you are soo lucky. You have the coolest family in the world.”

Miley: “You sure about that?” Miley indicates towards Jackson.

Jackson continues to play with his “friend”.

Robby Ray: “You can’t pick family.”

Jackson: “But you can pick their noses.”

Miley, Oliver, Melissa, Lilly and Robby Ray stare at Jackson.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

any comments, suggestions, or critism?

[xoxsmileymileyxox]

Omg...that's reallllly good!!! I cant wait to read more!I like the concept to so far.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Aww thanks!

Lemme work on the next chapter!

Oh guys plese pm me suggestions that you would want to see happen!

-Allison♥

[numba1puppyluva]

AWESOME!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!! WRITE MORE! I just love script stories! :bigwave: ---Yes, a totally random smiley.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

lol nice smiley :roflmao:
writing more as we speak!

[numba1puppyluva]

lol nice smiley :roflmao:
writing more as we speak!

YAY!!!! My life is now complete! lol.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 3: One-eyed Billy goats don’t live in Manhattan

Melissa looks at Robby Ray.

Robby Ray: “Jackson, Miles, Melissa is going to be living with us because your aunt Clara and Uncle Bob passed away in a car accident.”

Melissa nods and tries to hold back tears.

Miley goes over and gives Melissa a hug. “I’m sorry!”

Miley walks over to her dad. “Are we still doing the thing tonight?”

Lilly: “You mean the Hannah Montana concert?”

Miley gives Lilly a look.

Melissa: “Ya’ll got tickets to the concert! Hannah is an amazing singer.”

Miley: “Yah. And you get to come!” Miley walks over to Lilly.

Lilly: “She doesn’t know!” She says in a whisper

Miley: “I’m telling her after ya’ll leave.”

Oliver stands next to Melissa. “Wow you and I have soo much in common. You like Hannah, I like Hannah.”

Melissa: “Yah…”

Lilly grabs Oliver. “Let’s go Lover boy. Bye Melissa!”

Jackson: “I’ve got to go to work.”

Melissa: “Don’t forget to put up your ‘friend’.”

Everyone leaves except Miley and Melissa.

Miley: “Melissa, there’s something you need to know.”

Melissa: “What’s up Miles?”

Miley: “I’m Hannah Montana”

Melissa laughs. “Are you ok?”

Miley: “Ha ha very funny. It’s true.”

Melissa goes over to Miley and starts to feel her head.

Miley: “What are you doing?”

Melissa: “Miley you are delirious. I am checking to see if you have a fever.

Miley sighs and takes Melissa into her closet.

Melissa: “Wow a closet…you need new clothes.”

Miley pushes back her clothes to reveal Hannah Montana’s closet and she takes Melissa inside.

Melissa: “Oh my gawd! This is weirder than finding a one eyed Billy goat in a truck in the middle of Manhattan.”

Miley stares at Melissa strangely. “How is this weird, and I though only my dad said things like that.

Melissa: “Goes through Hannah’s closet and picks out some outfits.”

Miley: “What are you doing?”

Melissa turns around. “You can’t perform like that.”

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

There ya'll go!

Post your comment, suggestions, and critism!

[numba1puppyluva]

WOO HOO!!! My life is starting to get more and more complete every chapter!!!!!! lol!!!! YES!!! THIS IS SOOO COOL!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

aww lol thanks!

I gotta go eat! I'll post more tomorrow!!

Keep reading and replying guys!

[Lanae_M]

I love the story!

[cyrusfan55]

great story. =]

[mileymontanafan]

i love it !! its awsome !!

[Mileyrocksforever101]

Great! I Love it!!! Continue!!!

My friend told me about the Hannah Montana new episode, "Jackson's my boyfriend"
She did the part when Ha nnah was dumping Jackson and then he said

"*Singing* I'd be the right guy, and you'd be the best friend, that you fall in love with in the end-"

I was laughing so hard, I fell of the playground platform I was on!!! :09: I'm ok though, so don't worry. It was really funny!!!



COOL!!! It's a Hannah Montana posed smily::27:

Continue!!!
Flower Face: :colorsmilies: :handsup: :grouphug: :thumbsup:
SMILIES!!! :lol:

[V.A.H Next SuperStar]

this story is nice, Allison!!!

[HM ROCKS]

ya allison its soooo good!!! I want to read more!!! :bigwave: lol

and ya mileyrocksforever101 love the hannah smiley: :27:

:bigwave:

---Kaitlyn☺

[mileycyrusfan1]

Oh I love it! Continue! It's so great! I read all of it! It' sgetting really interesting!

[sophiecool]

when you say melissa do you mean my character from malibu tipton?

[sophiecool]

Great story by the way!

[cutie_girl]

gr8 chapters! i wish i have the imagination like urs! lol

[*futurepopstar*]

I really like it! What does Melissa look like? I'm loving the idea, just suggesting a little more description. Good job!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok more description i can do that♥

Ok guys im working on the next chapter! Keep yours eyes peeled should be posted within thirty minutes!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 4: Love and Drunken Cows do not Mix.

Setting: Backstage before the HM Concert

Hannah and Melissa walk inside the backstage area.

Lola: “Hey Hannah! You look fabulous!”

Melissa: “All thanks to me! And who are you?”

Lola: “Lola Lufnaggle.”

Lola walks up to Melissa and whispers.

Lola: “Lilly in disguise.

Melissa: “Niice.”

Tracy walks backstage.

Tracy: “Hannah darling!”

Hannah and Tracy blow air kisses.

Tracy faces Melissa.

Tracy: “Oh My Gawd!”

Melissa pushes back some of her long blond hair.

Melissa: “Nice to meet you!”

Tracy: “Hello, Melissa. I’m Tracy.”

Melissa and Tracy air kiss.

Jackson walks up as Hannah goes into her dressing room.

Melissa: “Did you send your ‘friend’ home?”

Tracy: “Ooh. Hello Jackson.”

Tracy bats her eyelashes.

Jackson: “Hey. I think there is something in your eye.”

Jackson walks off.

Tracy: “Ooh. He is soo dreamy! Ciaoooo”

Tracy walks away.

Melissa: “Is talking about Jackson?”

Lola: “Sad ain’t it?”

Hannah walks back towards them before she steps on stage.

Melissa: “You know what they say.”

Lola: “Umm not that I know of.”

Hannah and Melissa laugh.

Melissa: “Love is blinder than a drunken cow in the middle of the freeway in January."

Lola: “I thought only your dad talked like that.”

Hannah does her pre-show warm up.

Lola: “Wait…how did the cow get drunk, and how did it get in the middle of the freeway?”

Hannah laughs and walks onstage.

Melissa: “That’s for the cow to know and you to find out.”

Hannah performs I’ve Got Nerve.

[absolutelyfabx3]

oohh!! Allison! I love it!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Aww thanks!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

any more comments. suggestions, or critism?

[cutie_girl]

this rocks girl! Rock on!

[Lanae_M]

:cheers: :bigwave: :colorsmilies: :tongue1: :cheers: Love it!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:D More awesome smileys!

Thanks guys! I'll try to post another chapter today!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

u rock!!! 4 realz!! i luvluvluv the story!!!!!!! Plz post more!! (srry sound 2 eager??? LOL)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

lol i like eager!

Thanks! Working on the next part

[Jessicastar]

any more comments. suggestions, or critism?

It's stellar galaxy wave! (It's fantastic!)

[mileymontanafan]

i still love it !! and it keeps getting better and better !!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

lol!

Thanks guys! I'll write one more chapter then I have to get off!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

thanks so much!! :) ur REALLY GOOD!!!

[Baby Vanessa]

it is so goood

[zacs_baby321]

MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE, MORE,MORE!!!! I LUV IT ALLISON!!!!!yupp

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 5: Surprises hit you like a door.

The next day, the phone rings.

Melissa walks by and answers it.

Melissa: “Stewart house of awesomeness.”

Lilly: “Lilly Landing in 10.”

Line goes dead.

Melissa: “oook.”

Jackson: “Who was that?”

Melissa: “Lilly. I think.”

Jackson: “What did she say?”

There is a huge crash.

Melissa and Jackson run to the door.

Jackson laughs and opens the door.

Lilly: “You are supposed to OPEN the door.”

Melissa: “OHHH! That’s what it means!”

Miley walks downstairs.

Miley: “What crashed?”

Jackson: “Lilly. Into a DOOR!”

Lilly: “You know WHAT!”

Jackson: “Gotta go!”

Jackson leaves.

Lilly: “Miley, guess who is back.”

Miley: “Who?”

Lilly: “JAKE!”

Miley: “Are you serious!! OMG!”

Melissa: “Jake who?”

The door rings and Melissa goes to answer it.

Lilly and Miley take a seat on the couch to talk about Jake.

Melissa opens the door.

Jake: “Hi. Is this Miley’s house?”

Melissa: “Yah it is! Come in.”

Melissa lets Jake in.

Miley and Lilly look up from the couch.

Jake: “Hey Miley. Sup Lilly?”

Lilly: “Sup Jake? Sup?”

Miley glares at Lilly to leave.

Melissa: “Hey Lilly, wanna come help me unpack?”

Lilly laughs. “No.”

Melissa: “Ha ha you are as funny as Jackson.”

Lilly: “Jackson isn’t funny.”

Melissa smiles at Miley and Jake.

Melissa: “Lilly, I need you to take some model clothes off my hands.”

Lilly jumps up.

Lilly: “I can help with that!”

Jake: “Soo Miley…I have wanted to talk to you about something.”

Miley: “About what Jake?”

Jake: “About….”

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

post ya'lls comments, suggestions, and critism!

Gotta go guys!

[Lanae_M]

How can there be any critisium? Its great!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo suspenseful!! dun dun dun.... DUNNNNNN!!!!! srry, needed 2 get that outta my system ! ill b back 2morrow!!!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

yah 4 reall!! Lanae M is rite!! ITS AWESUM!!!!!!!!!

[mileymontanafan]

ahhhhh !! no don't stop i can't go away without knowing what jake whats to say !! and its still getting greater and greater !! its awesome !!

[zacs_baby321]

again i say MORE!!!!!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

yah i know!!! :) LOL

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:D Thanks for ya'llz comments!

I'll have another chapter up ASAP!

[zacs_baby321]

thankies...THE STROY RULES!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

lol Thanks!!

[zacs_baby321]

np

[cutie_girl]

it rocks girl! is the next sentence i luv u??? lol

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 6: All’s NOT Fair in Love and Revenge?


Jake: “Wait…was that Melissa the Supermodel?”

Miley: “Yes, she is my cousin.”

Jake smiled. “Ok well I wanted to talk about where we left off and such.”

Miley: “What about that?”

Jake: “I really want to continue but I have realized my feelings for someone
else.”

Melissa and Lilly lean on the floor upstairs above Miley and Jake.

Miley: “Oh…for whom?” She asks sounding slightly depressed.

Jake: “Hannah Montana.”

Lilly and Melissa gasp and Jake and Miley look up.

Miley: “Soo you came here to dump me, as soon as you got here for some
other famous person!”

Jake: “No Miley it’s not like that.”

Miley: “You know what Jake! Just go off with more famous people and forget
about me.”

Jake: “Miley…”

Miley: “GO!”

Jake leaves the house and Lilly and Melissa come running down.

Miley: “AHHH! To think that he likes me more than some famous person!”

Lilly: “Uhhh Miley?”

Miley: “The nerve of him! What is soo special about Hannah Montana? I mean she’s…”

Melissa: “Miley stop being a drunken cow!”

Miley and Lilly: “What?”

Lilly: “Are you referring to that saying? Because Miley isn’t in the middle of a freeway in January.”

Melissa: “But she is in love.”

Miley: “OMG! Jake dumped me for me!”

Lilly: “Ding! Ding! Ding! We have a winner!”

Melissa: “You know what we have to do now.”

Lilly: “No what?”

Miley and Melissa: “Revenge.”

Miley: “You know, Hannah has a concert tonight. I bet he will show up.”

Melissa: “Then we need to get to work now.”

[zacs_baby321]

IT ROCK ALISSON!!!yup

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Thanks!!

Any more comments, suggestions, or critism?

-Allison♥

[~ExCuSe*MuI~]

omg, that is sooo good, i luv it (and it makes perfect sense to me)!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Yay!!!

Thanks for reading♥

[Mileysabsolutnumber1fan]

OMG!!!! Post more!!! That is soooo good!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Ok i'll start the next chapter :D

[zacs_baby321]

PLZ AND THANK-U!!!!!:)yay

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:D I've addicted people!!

[zacs_baby321]

Yes U HAv!!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 7: Sweet, Sweet Revenge.


Setting: Backstage of the HM Concert.

Hannah walks around getting ready for the concert.

Jake: “Hannah, may I come in?”

Hannah talks into her headphone: “Showtime.”

Hannah: “Come in Jake.”

Jake walks in.

Jake: “Hannah! How are you?”

Hannah: “Fantastic!”

All of a sudden, Lilly rushes in.

Hannah: “Umm who are you?”

Lilly turns to Jake and hits him!

Lilly: “YOU ARE SUCH A JERK!”

Lilly turns to face Hannah.

Lilly: “Hannah first of all I LOVE YOU! And second Jake is a jerk! Don’t believe
him!!”

Security comes and takes away Lilly.

Hannah turns to Jake.

Jake: “Who was that?”

Hannah: “I don’t know Jake, who was that?”

Jake laughs and hits his head.

Jake: “Oh that’s Lilly, she is just mad because I dumped Miley.”

Hannah: “OMG You dumped her! I just met her at my last concert! She was
such a sweetheart.”

Melissa walks in and glares at Jake.

Melissa: “Hannah! How are you?”

Melissa and Hannah give air kisses.

Melissa: “Just came to say good luck before your show! We must Model again
sometime!”

Jake: “Hey Melissa.”

Hannah: “Sounds great!”

Melissa: “Jake don’t even talk to me.”

Melissa storms out.

Hannah: “What did you do?”

Jake: “Well I dumped Miley as soon as I got to the states.”

Hannah: “What!! That is so rude!”

Jake: “I dumped her for you.”

Hannah: “Too bad. I’m not interested.”

Jake: “What?”

Hannah: “Jake you should leave.”

Jake leaves and Hannah performs.

[zacs_baby321]

Encore, Encore!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Just wait for the next chapter *evil grin*

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

Allison!!! GURL U CAN WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT!!!:)

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

.... cant wait!1 im gettin 2 hyper......

[cutie_girl]

WOW!!! this rocks!!! go on! and if u join my site Starz Stuff, it welcomes those fan fictions!!!

[Lanae_M]

Oh my gosh!!!!! I am totally adicted to your story! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

eeeeeeeeeeee!! i am 2!!! goshgosh gosh!!:D

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 8: Heartbreak Hotel


Setting: The next day at school.

The whole school was talking about Jake Ryan’s return and him dumping Miley
for Hannah and then Hannah dumping him.

Miley: “I wonder how the press found out about this.”

Lilly laughed: “I know. I told them!”

Miley and Lilly laugh and Oliver walks up.

Oliver: “You guys are cruel!”

Miley and Lilly: “We know!” They face each other. “Ooo. Tiss” They say
mocking Amber and Ashley.

Jake walks in and heads towards Miley.

Jake: “Miley?”

Miley: “Not talking to you. Go talk to your new girlfriend Hannah.”

Jake: “Miley I made a mistake, Hannah hates me.”

Miley: “Ooh, too bad for you.”

Miley walks off.

Lilly: “You have a way with the ladies don’t ya?”

Jake follows them.

Jake: “Miley I am really sorry!”

Miley: “Talk to someone that cares.”

A group of girls swarm Jake.

Girl: “I care! Talk to me.”

AFTER SCHOOL

Jake walks around with a bunch of girls like usual.

Miley: “That boy is as shallow as Uncle Earl is smart.”

Lilly laughs. “Wait....is Uncle Earl smart?”

Oliver: “Duh.”

Miley hits him. “No.”

Oliver: “OWW!”

Setting: Miley's house.

Phone rings.

Melissa: “Hello, Heartbreak Hotel.”

Jake: “Melissa?”

Melissa: “Yes, heart breaker?”

Jake: “Look I made a huge mistake with Hannah…I want to fix it?”

Melissa: “You don’t even care about Miley?”

Jake: “I do, but I need to fix things up with Hannah so I can ask for her advice about Miley.”

Melissa: “You could just ask me…”

Jake: “No, trust me.”

Melissa: “Hannah is joining me for dinner at The Cheesecake factory at seven. We will be in a back room.”

Jake: “Thanks.”

Jake hangs up and Miley walks in.

Melissa: “How was your day?”

Miley: “Terrible, I still like Jake!”

Melissa: “Well Hannah has a dinner date with me at 7 at the Cheesecake
factory. Maybe that will make your mind clearer.”

Miley: “Ok.”

[absolutelyfabx3]

I love it Allison!! I wish i could write like you! *sniffle* i'm trying to write a fan fiction but it's just not workin out...

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Aww thanks!


Just think about what you want to happen and write! Let me know if you post yours on here!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

awsum!! cant wait 4 the next 1!! eeeeeeeeeeeee

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:D Thanks!!

[absolutelyfabx3]

thanks, i've actually got an idea now...your such an inspiration! lolz!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

ur soooooooo totally welcum! ur awesum!!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o I inspire people!

Thanks!!!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

u really r!! absolutelyfabx3 is rite!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Aww thanks!!

I gotta go watch a bball game! I'll post another chapter either tonite or tomorrow morning!

Auf Wiedershen♥

[absolutelyfabx3]

I posted my fan fiction.
here's the link if anybody wants it
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=539917#post539917

[numba1puppyluva]

Come on!@!!!! More!!!!! It's the greatest EVER!!!!!! And I( mean EVER!!!!!!!!

[whosthedoughnutnow]

I've read many stories and episode plot on all subjects from all kinds of people and i think yours is the best thing i've ever read! When you sell that plot to Disney I'm so recording it! and I know u can do it!

[Fire-Chicken]

Can u write more? pls.. I think I get it :) But I want to know the end. :)

//Rebecka from Sweden

[Fire-Chicken]

Whats the name of ur "Episode"? :)
I think it's really great.

//Rebecka From Sweden

[HM ROCKS]

more more more!!!!! Plz it rocks!!!

---Kaitlyn☺

[numba1puppyluva]

Hiw come you still didn't write more?? :cries: WAH!! WAH!!! *puppydogpout*

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o i can sell it to Disney!!

Thanks for all ya'llz imput!!!! I'm glad ya'll enjoy it soo much!

[whosthedoughnutnow]

COME ON ALLISON MORE!! im addicted now. i need to know what happens next!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

lol ok!

I'll start the next chapter!

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

hehehehe i cant wait!!!
and Allison, it would be so COOL ifDisney took it and put it on the show!! wed all b like we saw it 1st!!!! :D LOL

[mileyz fan tennessean gurl!]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeee i cant wait!

[whosthedoughnutnow]

i love ur siggy mileyz fan tennesean girl!!! its awesome! and yeah we "read" it 1rst! lol

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 9: A Devil of a Surprise.


Setting the Cheesecake factory, Lola, Hannah, and Melissa are sitting down
waiting for their food.

Lola: “How are you holding up?”

Hannah shrugs: “Ok. I guess.”

Melissa: “This is your night, do whatever you want.”

Hannah smiled: “Whatever I want?”

Melissa: “Unless it involves pushing someone down a well.”

Hannah: “Darn!”

Lola: “Ohh yah! Your devil of a cousin.”

Melissa: “At least you weren’t forced to take her to Paris…AND share a room.”

Hannah: “Ooh, how bad was it?”

Melissa: “Remember when Uncle Earl ate that bowl of beans?’

Hannah: “Yah, it took him like 2 minutes to finish it all.”

Hannah shivered.

Hannah: “He had gas for a month.”

Lola: “Once again, I never want to meet Uncle Earl.”

Melissa laughs: “Luann was in Paris for a minute and then I sent her home.”

Hannah: “That bad?”

Melissa: “She jumped up onto the runway, shoved people off, and tried to
model.”

Lola laughs hysterically.

Melissa and Hannah look at each other.

Lola: “That must have been some show!”

Melissa: “It was more painful to watch than it is to hear her sing.”

Hannah: “Ooh that has to be bad!”

Melissa: “Trust me; she also tried to sing Best of Both Worlds.”

A server comes in and gives them their food.

Server: “Someone is asking to come in. May I let him?”

Melissa: “Sure.”

Jake walks in.

Hannah sighs. “May I help you?”

Jake: “Hannah I am really sorry I hurt you, but”

Hannah: “But what?”

Jake: “I need your advice on how to win Miley back. I really miss her, she was amazing.”

Melissa beamed proudly, Lola had her mouth open wide with salad still inside.

Melissa: “Lola chew.”

Hannah: “How badly do you want her back?”

Jake: “I would do anything to get her back, I think I love her.”

Hannah’s eyes opened wide and turned to Melissa.

Melissa gave an approving nod and so did Lola.

Hannah: “Well in that case, I have something to tell you.”

Jake: “What?”

Hannah looks at the doors to make sure no one is coming and then takes of her wig.

Miley: “I’m Hannah Montana, me Miley.

[best_of_both_worlds16]

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Chapter 10: Turkey Jerky and Buffalos

Jake glares at Melissa and Miley.

Jake: “I can’t believe you would pretend to be Hannah just to get me back
and humiliate me!”

Miley and Lola: “WHAT!”

Miley: “Slow down ego boy. I am Hannah.”

Jake: “Sure Miley sure.”

Melissa: “Jake she is telling the truth.”

Jake: “Miley I can’t believe I was trying to get back with you.”

Jake walks out.

Melissa: “Ok, he is soo stupid!”

Miley puts her wig back on.

Hannah: “He doesn’t have half the brain the good lord gave a piece of Turkey
Jerky.”

Lola: “That and his ego is bigger than the world.”

Hannah: “I don’t feel like eating.”

Setting: Miley’s House.

Jackson sits on the couch a buffalo suit.

Miley and Melissa walk in.

Melissa: “Uhh Jackson?”

Jackson: “What?”

Melissa: “Buffalos belong on the range.”

Robby Ray: “Jackson…”

Jackson: “Don’t say a word Dad!”

Robby Ray: “For once I don’t even have a song.”

Jackson: “Rico decided that he wanted Buffalo wings.”

Melissa: “You need a new job.”

Miley goes and sits down on the couch and sighs.

Robby Ray: “What’s the matter bud?”

Melissa: “Besides the fact that she told Jake she was Hannah Montana and
he accuse of her faking just to get back with him, nothing too special.”

Melissa and Jackson head off to Ricos.

Robby Ray: “Bud, if he didn’t believe you he isn’t worth your time.”

Miley: “I know but I really like him.”

Melissa and Jackson end up at Ricos.

Melissa: “So this is where you work.”

Jackson: “In all its glory. Oh no…Rico.”

Rico walks up. “Hello Jackson.”

Melissa turns to see Rico.

Melissa: “Hi, I’m Melissa.”

Rico: “Why, hello. What can I do for you?”

Melissa: “Get my cousin out of his buffalo costume.”

Rico: “He is your cousin, Jackson.”

Jackson: “Yup.”

Melissa: “Now be a good boy and let him wear normal clothes.”

Rico: “Fine, Jackson go change. But you haven’t heard the last from me!”

Melissa leaves.

Setting: The next day at school.

Jake walks by Miley and glares at her.

Miley nods to Lilly and Oliver.

Lilly: “Hey Jake can I talk to you?”

Jake: “Sure!”

Lilly pushes Jake in the closet.

Lilly: “Look here, Mr. Ego.”

Jake: “Why am I in a closet?”

Oliver: “Miley is telling the truth.”

Jake: “She has ya’ll sucked into this thing to?”

Lilly and Oliver: “WHAT!”

Lilly hits Jake over the back.

Oliver: “Believe us or not you CANNOT tell anyone about Miley and Hannah.”

Jake: “I don’t see why not but I won’t tell.”

Lilly: “You will see why.”

Lilly and Oliver leave.

Jake: “I’ll prove them that Miley is lying…just wait.”

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Chapter 11: The Truth Stuns?


Setting: Miley’s House.

Hannah walks downstairs.

Hannah: “Dad! Come on we are going to be late for the CD signing.”

Robby Ray: “Sorry bud, I have a meeting to go to. See if Jackson can take
you.”

Jackson runs downstairs yelling: “No! No! No! NO!”

Hannah: “Come on Jackson!”

Jackson: “No, you complained last time I drove you.”

Hannah: “True, I don’t want a fly in my teeth again.”

Lola walks in.

Lola: “Let’s go Hannah!”

Hannah: “We need a ride.”

Melissa walks downstairs humming Irreplaceable.

Hannah, Lola, Jackson, and Robby Ray look at her.

Melissa: “Why are ya‘ll staring at me?”

Hannah: “Me and Lola need a ride to the CD signing.”

Melissa: “Fine, let me get my keys. We’re taking the cooper.”

Hannah: “Thank you Melissa!”

Lola: “What’s a Cooper?”

Melissa stops dead in her tracks. “I’ll pretend you didn’t say that.”

Hannah: “It’s this totally cute car!”

Melissa grabs her keys. “Ok, I’ll take you but Lola has to watch the Italian job when we get back.”

Lola: “Why?”

Melissa: “Because you didn’t know what a cooper was.”

Lola: “ok...”

Hannah: “Don’t worry! It’s an awesome movie!”

Melissa: “Lets rock-n-roll.”

Setting: CD signing.

Lola: “Melissa your car is ahdorable!”

Melissa: “Why thank you! Ok while ya’ll do the CD signing, I’m going to
browse for CDS.”

Melissa opens the door to screaming fans.

Hannah: “Ok.”

Hannah walks in, smiles, and waves to all the fans. She sits at the table and
signs CDS.

Jake steps up to the Table.

Hannah: “May I help you?”

Jake: “Hannah, darling. I have to ask you a private question.”

Hannah: “Jake I really don’t feel like dealing with you or your ego right now.”

Jake: “What did I ever do to you?”

Hannah: “Besides not believe me at the Cheesecake factory?”

Hannah turns to the fans.

Hannah: “Sorry, I’ve got to go!”

Hannah stares at Jake and then walks out with Lola and Melissa.

Jake stares after Hannah stunned.

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MORE!!! START WRIGHTING MORE RIGHT NOW!!! lol

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So did ya'll enjoy this chapter?

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More more more!!!!!!!!
I'm usually a fan of Jiley and the good side of Jake, but I guess he can dissapoint people...
IT'S FLIPPIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

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c'mon!! i gotta know what happens next!

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I hope u write something today so I can see it tomorrow :) Cos I'm from Sweden and now the clock is 22:04 ( = 10:04 PM I think :) ) and I need to turn off the computer cos the school starts tomorrow :( And I just need to know whats happends next :)

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it was awesome!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

OMG you stopped breathing!! Just dont die on me!

I'm glad ya'll enjoyed my plot twist and I am working on the next part as we speak!

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Chapter 12: Smiley Miley no more?

Setting: The next day.

Miley was downstairs eating breakfast when Melissa strolled down.

Melissa: “Morning, have you decided what you are going to say to Jake?”

Miley: “Nope, I think I will ignore him some more, its kind of fun.”

Melissa: “Just don’t take it too far and ruin your chances with him.”

Miley: “What makes you think I even want him?”

Melissa: “Mile, I’m not dumb. I can tell you are in love with him.”

Miley: “I am not!”

Melissa: “Oh dear that drunken cow is back.”

Miley: “Ha, ha. I am not a drunken cow!”

Melissa: “Whatever you say, cow.”

Miley: “Can you give me a ride to school?”

Jackson runs down the stairs screaming “NO! NO! NO!”

Miley: “I wasn’t asking you.”

Jackson: “I can never be too sure.”

Melissa: “I’ll give you a ride. Let me put on some flip flops.”

Jackson puts some chocolate powder in his mouth and then drinks out of the
milk bottle. He jumps up and down. Miley stares at Jackson.

Miley: “Good thing I poured my milk, BEFORE you contaminated it.”

Robby Ray: “Jackson, I make pancakes with that milk!”

Jackson: “Maybe you should buy two bottles of milk, one for me and one for
ya’ll.”

Miley: “Or you could just use a glass like the rest of the world.”

Melissa comes back with her car keys in hand.

Melissa: “Jackson will use a glass when Uncle Earl goes on a diet.”

Robby Ray: “Great…so know I have to get Uncle Earl on a diet before Jackson
starts to use a glass...what fun.”

Melissa: “Lets Rock-n-Roll Mile.”

Setting: school

Miley: “Thanks for the ride Melissa.”

Melissa: “Good luck today.”

Melissa drives off.

Miley: “Boy am I going to need it.”

Miley walks to her locker to see Jake leaning up against it.

Miley: “Umm move.”

Jake: “Look Miley I am really sorry I didn’t believe you.”

Miley: “Jake it’s not that easy to forgive. You didn’t trust me and then
blamed me for pretending to be who I really am to get back at you.”

Jake: “Miley how was I suppose to know that you are Ha-“

Miley: “Don’t say it! It’s a secret remember?”

Jake: “Sorry, how can I make it up to you?”

Amber and Ashley walk over to Jake: “Hey Jake.”

They look at each other.

Amber and Ashley: “Oo, tiss”

Jake: “Sup ladies?”

Amber and Ashley smile and then walk off.

Miley smiles: “You can ignore Amber and Ashley from now on.”

Jake: “Miley I can’t ignore my fans.”

Miley: “Then no more Smiley Miley.”

Miley walks off.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

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:D Yay!

[whosthedoughnutnow]

I LOVE IT, but did I miss the part when Jake finds out Lilly IS really Lola? MORE PLEASE!!

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I havent revealed that part yet

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o wow! i luv it! i wish my fan fiction was as good~

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YAY!! more!

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:D i cant post more now cuz im not at my computer..i will try to update tonite

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Yay! I started reading and couldn't stop! Greatness! Keep going! Puh-leesies?

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:D Yay! I've addicted another person!

I'll let you know when..if i plan on stopping

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Chapter 13: A three legged cat and a reality check.


Jake leans his head on his locker when Oliver comes up.

Oliver: “What’s wrong Jake?”

Jake: “Miley will only forgive me if I ignore Amber and Ashley.”

Oliver: “So…do it.”

Jake: “But they are my fans! I can’t do it!”

Oliver: “Well then tell them you will only hang around them IF they are nice
to me, Miley and Lilly all the time. Miley wouldn’t get mad at you for doing
that.”

Jake: “That’s a good idea Oliver! But if she gets mad at me it’s on your head.”

Oliver: “My gorgeous head.”

Jake laughed. “Sure Oliver. Whatever you say.”

Amber and Ashley walk up to Jake and Oliver.

Amber turns to Oliver. “Hey dork move out of our way, Jake doesn’t talk to losers.”

Jake: “Amber back off, Oliver’s cool.”

Ashley: “No he’s not! He hangs out with Miley and Lilly.”

Amber and Ashley: “Total losers. Ooo tiss.”

Jake: “Look you can either be nice to them or not hang around me.”

Amber: “Jake are you seriously choosing the dorks over us!”

Jake: “Yes I am. Let’s go Oliver.”

Oliver: “See ya ladies.”

Oliver and Jake walk to lunch.

Oliver: “That was amazing Jake You completely told 'em off.”

Jake: “Let's just hope Miley sees it that way.”

Setting: The Stewart House.

Melissa: “Uncle Robby, can you help me?”

Robby Ray walks into Melissa’s room.

Robby Ray: “Whatcha need?”

Melissa: “I cannot decide which outfits to make for Hannah.”

Robby Ray: “And you are asking me? Wait you sketch? And why are you sketching for Hannah.”

Melissa: “A, you are Hannah’s manager and her dad so you have to approve.
B, I’ve always sketched, and C, I am Hannah’s self appointed style manager!”

Robby Ray: “Well at least you aren’t her assistacant.”

Melissa: “Uncle Robby, assistacant ain’t a word.”

Robby Ray: “I know, tell that to Jackson.”

Melissa holds up her hand. “I don’t even want to know.”

Robby Ray looks through the outfits. “I actually like them all.”

Melissa: “Great! I’ll get started on them!”

Robby Ray: “Wait you are going to make them?”

Melissa: “Yes! I can sew also! I wanted to go on Project Runway but my
career got in the way.”

Robby Ray: “This is stranger than a three legged cat barking up a tree.”

Melissa: “Ok, I haven’t heard that one before.”

Melissa grabs her keys and heads off to buy supplies.

Setting: Cafeteria.

Jake and Oliver walk up to Lilly and Miley’s table.

Miley: “hey Oliver.”

Jake: “Miley, I have something to tell you.”

Miley: “Yes…”

Jake: “I did want you asked me to do, well kind of.”

Miley: “What do you mean kind of?”

Jake: “Well…”

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

I'm glad its not that way :P

Chapter is long to make up for not posting in awhile!

Now i gotta go cuz im getting yelled out!

Please comment!

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[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 14: Girly Guys

Jake: “I told them that I couldn’t hang around them unless they were nice to
you, Lilly and Oliver.”

Miley: “They will probably just be nice when you’re around.”

Jake sits down. “Then tell me if they do that. Miley, I trust you, Lilly, and

Oliver way more than I trust Amber and Ashley. If they are mean or rude to
you when I’m not there just tell me.”

Miley smiled. “Thanks Jake! You are off the hook.”

Jake smiled at Miley and mouthed thank you to Oliver.

Bell rings and they went off to their next class.

Setting: Stewart House.

Melissa was working away in her room when Jackson comes in.

Jackson: “Hey Mel…. What are you doing?”

Melissa: “Making Hannah’s outfits.”

Jackson laughs. “You sew?”

Melissa glares at him. “Do you want to get paid?”

Jackson: “Paid for what?”

Melissa: “I need to try this out on a person…which is you.”
Jackson: “How much we talking about?”

Melissa: “Name your price.”

Jackson: “Thirty dollars.”

Melissa: “Done.”

Melissa gives Jackson the outfits.

Melissa: “Come downstairs once you have an outfit on… all my measuring
stuff is downstairs.”

Jackson: “Got it.”

Melissa goes downstairs as Miley, Lilly, Jake and Oliver walk in.

Melissa hands Miley a camera.

Melissa: “Take Jackson’s picture when he comes down.”

Miley: “Why?”

Melissa silences her as Jackson walks downstairs.

A camera flashes.

Miley, Oliver, Jake, and Lilly laugh.

Miley: “Now I have some blackmail!”

Jake: “Dude, stick with guys’ clothes.”

Jackson: “Ha, ha but Melissa is paying me 30 bucks and you weren’t here.”

Miley looks at the outfit and turns to Melissa.

Miley: “What is it? It’s really cute.”

Melissa: “It’s one of the new Hannah outfits I am making.”

Lilly: “I think Lola needs some new outfits!”

Melissa: “Ok, Lola will get some.”

Jake: “Who is Lola?”

Lilly: “Oh yah, you don’t know! I’m Lola, Hannah’s best friend.”

Jake: “And I thought that I knew someone who was home schooled, in
Canada, where the moose are.”

Jake makes the antlers.

Lilly: “Ha, ha, I panicked!”

Miley is looking at Jackson’s outfit.

Miley: “Seriously, these are amazing!”

Melissa: “Want to see the others ones I have made?”

Miley and Lilly: “YES!”

Melissa laughs and leads them upstairs.

Oliver looks at Jackson: “Blue is a pretty color on you.”

Jackson: “Why thank you. AHH WHAT AM I SAYING?”

Jake and Oliver laugh.

Miley: “Omigosh I have a great idea!”

Lilly: “What is it?”

Miley: “Hannah should have….”

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Conit6ne i luv it

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:D glad ya'll like it

[Baby Vanessa]

It's the best I can't stop reading it

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More !
I am addicted!!!!
MORE!!!!
Oh dangit now I can't wipe my stupid grin off my face.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:D lol!!

So what do ya'll think Miley will say?

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Hannah should have a.... FASHION SHOW!!!!

its awesome by the way

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thank ya... i know what miley is going to say next but i want to hear what you guys think....

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Chapter 15: Worn Clothing


Miley: “Hannah should have her own store!”

Melissa: “Omigod that is genius! You know how much money Hannah would make!

Lilly: “I would shop there!”

Melissa: “Seriously think about it. We could have clothes designed for
Hannah, clothes worn by Hannah, and clothes about Hannah!”

Lilly: “Why would someone want to wear worn clothes?”

Miley and Melissa look at her.

Miley: “She means an outfit that is identical to the one I have worn!”

Lilly: “Ooh! We would also need a Lola section.”

Melissa: “This would make sooo much money!”

Robby Ray walks into the house.

Miley, Melissa, and Lilly run downstairs!

Robby Ray: “Whoa! What is going on? The monster truck rally is next week!”

Miley: “Ha, ha very funny dad.”

Melissa: “Uncle Robby, we have a very promising business proposition for
you.”

Robby Ray: “Now we are NOT opening a store that sells used Hannah items!”

Miley: “Dad, that’s Jackson’s future store. Ours is better!”

Melissa: “Uncle Robby, how much do you think people would pay to wear
clothes worn by Hannah, designed by Hannah, designed for Hannah or about
Hannah?”

Robby Ray: “Why would you want worn clothes?”

Lilly: “Exactly!”

Melissa: “Seriously Uncle Robby think of all the money that could be raised!
And how much popularity it could bring Hannah.”

Jackson: “I want in on the money.”

Robby Ray: “ok you have a point, but who would make the clothes and run
the store.”

Melissa: “I’ll make the clothes! I made the outfit Jackson is wearing.”

Robby Ray looks at Jackson. “Why did I move the family to Hollywood?”

Miley: “Me and Lilly could work there!”

Jackson: “I’ll work there! Then I wouldn’t get bothered by Rico!”

Jake: “I could help advertise it.”

Oliver: “I’ll take Jackson’s job at Ricos.”

Everyone turns to look at Oliver.

Oliver: “What? I like that job, plus Jackson has no presentation or flare.”

Jackson: “You can have it!”

Miley: “What do you say Dad.”

Everyone turns to Robby Ray and waits for his decision.

Robby Ray: “I don’t know….”

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:o Longer! That is like 2 pages on word...


Glad ya'll like it..im thinking about the next chapter and the update SHOULD be up later today

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great i can't wait!

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Ok guys ihave gotten an idea and im writing it now!

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Chapter 16: Simply Hannah


Robby Ray: “Ok, BUT ya’ll need to find a place. Melissa you are the co-owner of the store with Hannah. Miley when you work there you are only an
employee not anything else.”

Melissa: “YES! Ok people lets go find a place! Into my cooper!”

Lilly: “Will we all fit?”

Melissa: “Be creative.”

Melissa, Miley and Lilly sit up front while Oliver, Jake, and Jackson cram into the back.

Melissa: “Comfy?”

Jake, Jackson, and Oliver: “No!”

Melissa: “Good, lets rock-n-roll.”

Melissa drives down a busy street to see a store for sale.

Melissa parks the car and everyone gets out.

Oliver: “I CAN WALK! OH I LOVE YOU GROUND!”

Lilly kicks him. “Now you cant walk.”

Oliver: “Ow, sharp shooting pain.”

Jake: “Toughen up, man.”

Melissa, Miley and Lilly are already inside.

Miley and Melissa: “Its perfect!”

Description of store: There is a circular counter in the middle of the store where the cash registers are located. There are multiple dressing rooms in
the back and wide open spaces for clothes.

Melissa goes in the back to talk to the realtor.

Lilly: “This would be an awesome store.”

Jackson: “I would totally work here! Hot babes checking me out…”

Oliver: “Correction, checking ME out.”

Jake: “Guys, guys, we all know that will be looking at me. I mean I’m Jake
Ryan.”

Lilly: “Duh,”

Melissa: “WE GOT IT!”

Miley does the finger test. “No dust…. WAIT WE GOT IT!”

Melissa: “Yep!”

Melissa opens up the utility closet and sets out brooms, mops, rags and other
cleaning supplies.

Melissa: “Lets get to work.”

Jackson: “Gotta go.”

Melissa: “WAIT! If you don’t help clean, no job.”

Everyone grabs something and begins to clean.


SIX MONTHS LATER


Reporters line up outside of the store, Simply Hannah.

Reporter: “Today is the day millions of people have been waiting for, the
opening on Simply Hannah in which Hannah herself and Supermodel Melissa
will be inside the store and helping out.”

Melissa walks up to the door and switches the sign from Closed, to Open.

Melissa: “SHOWTIME!”

Jake walks up and opens the door.

Melissa walks outside with him.

Melissa: “Ladies, Gentlemen, and kids of all ages. Hannah and I are proud to open our store. Please do not come up for autographs, as everyone will be too busy working. I hope you enjoy it!”

Melissa steps aside as fans and reporters rush in.

Melissa smiles at Hannah as everyone pulls together and starts to work..

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

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[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

bump?

[cutie_girl]

this rocks!!! continue

[numba1puppyluva]

What r u waiting 4? U can't keep us waiting for a totally and incredibly awesome story like this! Kepp WRITING!!!!

[disney1rocks]

it rocks!!

[alyson83]

I love it PLZ keep writing. I'm hooked.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o I'm glad you liked it! I'll try to post the next chapter tonite

[cutie_girl]

kk thx allison i luv ur story! me and my friend r hooked

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o Yay! Thanks!

I'm hooked on yours!

[cutie_girl]

*big laugh* well thx! i luv writing stories. and its my first fan fiction so i hope people will like it. i just now needa connect the beginning to the ending. i already thought of the ending but i wont tell u rite now lol

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Chapter 17: A Familiar Place

That day after store closed. Miley, Melissa, Lilly, Jackson, Jake, and Oliver sit
in the staff room.

Melissa: “Ok I have gotten a call from a Mr. Tipton who was invited us to come and have a Simply Hannah convention at the Tipton in Boston.”

Miley: “YES! We are so going!”

Lilly: “What’s in Boston?”

Jake: “Who is in Boston?”

Everyone turns to look at Miley.

Melissa: “Oh I know who you are talking about, and yes we are going!”

Miley: “Yes! When Hannah went to the Tipton to meet up with London I met
some cool people, well Zack and Cody don’t count…it was mostly Maddie.”

Lilly: “You mean that girl who recognized your dad?”

Miley: “Yah, she is really cool, but she only knows me as Hannah.”

Melissa: “Well you will be speaking as Hannah.”

Oliver: “Who is all going?”

Melissa: “Everyone!”

Jake: “I’ll have to check with my manager.”

Jackson looks at Jake: “Dude, just say yes.”

Jackson's phone rings.

Jackson: “Hello? Oh, hello Rico. No, I am not coming in to work. I QUIT! Good day Rico. I SAID GOOD DAY!”

Jackson hangs up.

Melissa: “Okayy…lets go pack the plane leaves in 2 hours. Oh and Miley you will have to be Hannah.”

Miley: “Ok.”


AFTER THE PLANE RIDE, THEY WALK INTO THE TIPTON.

Melissa: “Where’s the check in desk Hannah.”

Hannah: “Over there. Follow me.”

Hannah and everyone walk up to the counter.

Hannah: “Umm excuse me.”

Mr. Moseby: “Just one minute young lady.”

Melissa: “Umm we kinda are in a hurry we have to set up for a conference that is in 3 hours.”

Mr. Moseby looks up and pushes his keyboard aside. “Hannah, Melissa, and
other people. Welcome to the Tipton.”

Zack and Cody enter the lobby.

Zack: “Hey sweet thang. What’s up with the crowd of people?”

Maddie looks up from a magazine at the candy counter. “I don’t know some
conference is being held at the Tipton.”

Cody: “Ooh I hope it’s the Merit Scholars again!”

Zack: “You just want to be with your own kind.”

Arwin walks into the lobby.

Arwin: “Mr. Moseby, I have this new… AH! AH! YOU’RE HANNAH MONTANA!”

Arwin almost faints. “Whew that was close.”

Arwin looks at Melissa. “You’re Melissa and your Jake Ryan!”

Arwin faints.

Lilly: “Is he ok?”

Jake: “Well this has never happened to me before.”

Jackson and Oliver: “Me neither.”

Everyone stares at Oliver and Jackson.

Hannah: “Don’t worry, he always does that.”

Zack and Cody perk up. “Hannah’s back!”

They run over to Hannah and everyone.

Zack: “Hey Hannah! Remember us?”

Hannah: “Oh yah! The kid with the cake!”

Melissa: “He gave you a cake?”

Hannah: “No, he was wearing one.”

Melissa looks at the Twins. “I don’t want to know.”

Zack: “Stupid sweater vests.”

Oliver: “More like dorky sweater vests.”

Cody: “HEY!”

Jackson: “AHH! I thought I left all the short people in Malibu!”

Zack and Cody: “Hey!”

London walks towards the candy counter. “Hey who is here?”

Maddie: “Hannah Montana, Jake Ryan, and Melissa, and other people.”

London: “Jake Ryan!”

Jake: “Yeah?”

London pushes through everyone to get to Jake. “London Tipton. Close and
personal friend of Hannah Montana.”

Melissa: “And I thought I knew all of your friends.”

Melissa walks to the candy counter. “Hi, do you have a Reese’s?”

Maddie: “Yah.”

Melissa looks at her nametag. “Omigod! You’re Maddie!”

Maddie: ‘That’s me, Maddie Fitzpatrick. Why?”

Melissa: “Well…”

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o Whew, that was long :P

[cutie_girl]

yeah. REALLY but it was very good! wat will happen?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:P Comments people?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o What will happen next!

I need mroe comments before i post the next section :P

:o its late! I'll post more manana!

[disney1rocks]

great story, can't wait to find out what happens next! just asking is it your b'dae today?

pleaseplease visit my fanfic!! in my sig

[mileycyrusfan1]

Cool! You have enough chapters to write a book or audio book Allison! Don't you just love my set! I wonder who made it?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

I wonder!

My birthday is in September! I could write a book, im actually printing everything i have written so far off cuz my sister wants to read it!

[cutie_girl]

haha rite...

[disney1rocks]

cool if its really pppublished i'd buy it

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

its 18 pages on word if anyone is wondering! this will be hard to staple!


Continue to post comments guys! I'll write more tomorrow

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[mileyjake_10]

more! i'm addicted!

haha.. :D

[JewelRock123]

addiction alert! I can't stop reading! I can't start breathing! (uh that last 1 was a figure of speech... i think?)
5 star A W E S O M E!!!!

[best_of_both_worlds16]

these ia getting good! its really sweet! I like spent half my time on the computer catching up on the chapters I missed!

[niiro_tatsu]

OMG SOOOO GOOD! ok you could u find a picture that resembles Mellisa kinda, so I can have an idea of what she looks like. OH and what is the name of this story?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

uhh name of the story? IDK

i'll look for a picture

[niiro_tatsu]

ok cool! you need to think of a name!!! YUP YUP :D