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LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 03:36 PM
Okay i'm writting a story about celebirty's like jojo and miley at high school and stuff i will write more as i get comments!!

(sitting at a lunch table with friends)

Miley: omg, Vanessa guess what!

Vanessa: What?

Miley: when i was in spanish class i heard Corbin talking about you!

Vanessa: good stuff or bad??

Miley: he said he wishes you and Zac weren't dating because he thinks you're cute and funny.

Vanessa: Really?

Miley: Yeah he was telling cody! (plays jake) and since me and cody are going out i was standing right tnext to him when corbin said all this.

Vanessa: make sure Zac doesn't find out corbin said that or else it will wreck their friendship.

Miley: don't worry.

(English class, Vanessa and zac walk in holding hands)

Brenda: hey Emily did you hear what Miley told vanessa at lunch?

Emily: Yeah about corbin?

Brenda: yeah!

(other side of classroom)

Zac: Vanessa wanna go get a smoothie after school?

Vanessa: umm......i guess

Zac: okay good.

(every one takes their seats, Vanessa passes note to miley

Vanessa says in the note: Miley i don't know what to do. I can't get my mind of corbin! should i break up with zac or what?

Miley says in the note: you just started dating him, if you break up now i'm sure he will find out why. Maybe you should just talk to zac and inch your way into that subject.

Vanessa says in the note: Okay thanks i'll try

(bell rings)

Vanessa: Miley come to planet smoothie after school with jake and you can help me about what to say to zac.

Miley: okay

(vanessa heads to drama class)

Emily: hey miley what was that all about?

(miley tells emily about corbin)

Miley: don't tell okay?

Emily: okay

(miley walks to her locker)

Jake: hey miley, wanna go to the movies after school?

Miley: actually i wanna go for smoothies is that okay?

Jake: sure

(they both head to science)

Raven: Hey corbin! (curls her hair with her finger)

Corbin: Hi raven, hey can you do me a favor?

Raven: sure anything for you

Corbin: you sit behind vanessa in Drama right?

Raven: yeah

Corbin: could you give her my number (gives a piece of paper with his # on it to raven)

Raven: sure (in a gloomy voice then walks to her locker)

Orlando: hey Ray, whats wrong?

Raven: well i was hoping corbin would ask me out but he just wants me to give his number to vanessa

Orlando: bummer...anyway i asked anneliese if we were still on for bowling tonight, she said yeah but i wanted make sure you are still going.

Raven: you guys go ahead i have to find the perfect outfit for tomorrow to show of in front of corbin. he is so fine!

Orlando: okay.....maybe friday

(raven walks of to drama class as the bell rings)

Raven whispers: psst....vanessa?

(vanessa turns around and raven gives her the slip of paper)

Raven: corbin wanted me to give it to you, but first let me get his number.

(raven copies the number in her spiral)

Vanessa says to herself: oh great

(bell rings)

(Vanessa meets up with zac and head to planet smoothie and 10 minutes later jake and miley meet up and go to planet smoothie)

Vanessa: lets sit here.

zac: okay

(they sit a booth, Jake and miley walk in)

Miley: zac, vanessa what in the world are you guys doing here?

Zac: getting smoothies

Jake: us too

(jake and miley sit a tabe)

Miley says loud so vanessa can hear: jake i'm gonna go use the restroom, i'll have an banana bananza.

Jake: okay

(miley heads to the bathroom)

Vanessa: Zac i'm gonna go to the restroom real quick, i'll have a strawberry mix.

zac: okay

(vanessa and miley meet in the bathroom)

Vanessa: help, corbin gave me his cell number!!

miley: okay talk to zac and get into relationship talking and see what he says than we will meet at the counter and you can tell me.

Vanessa: okay

(they head back to their table as vanessa sits down the paper with corbins number falls out of her purse and onto the floor, zac looks to the floor)

zac: whats that?


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How do you guys like it so far???? if i get comments i will write more!!!

i*luv*miley*cyrus*
12-30-2006, 03:41 PM
then vanessa should pick it up and zac takes it out of her hands and they break up and she feels really bad because she was trying to tell him that corbin gave it to her............

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 03:46 PM
thanks for the idea i might use it but i have some other ideas but for me to keep writing i need more comments!!!

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 03:57 PM
come on guys do you like it i need to know!!!!!

x_iluvcole_x
12-30-2006, 04:08 PM
that was awesome! good job!
please write more!

SmileyMiley11
12-30-2006, 04:11 PM
omg keep going its the greatest thing I've read!

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 04:12 PM
okay thanks i'll start writing more right now

x_iluvcole_x
12-30-2006, 04:14 PM
yay! hurry! i want to see what happens to vanessa!

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 05:12 PM
Vanessa: Nothing

Zac: no, what is it!

Vanessa: nothing

Zac: tell me!

Vanessa: none of your business!

(zac rips it out of her hand)

Vanessa: ow that hurt!

Zac: why do you have corbins number?

Vanessa: because...

Zac: don't even try to explain, thats it we're over!

Vanessa: zac no!!!!

(zac leaves)

Miley: cody i'm gonna stay and talk to vanessa, so i will call you when i get home okay?

Cody: okay

(MIley walks over to vanessa)

Miley: wuts wrong i thought this is wut you wanted?

Vanessa: i know but now i don't what us to break up, but i'm too late, he probably hates me

Miley: you don't know that

Vanessa: i'm so stupid

Miley: don't say that, i got u in to this mess i'm gonna get u out!

vanessa: thanks miley

Miley: thats what friends are for

(they bithe leave)

Miley calls cody: hi cody

Cody: hi miley

MIley: sorry about what happened today i just wanted to make sure vanessa wa ok

Cody: it's okay, thats wut i love about you, you are so caring

(miley smiles)

Cody: wel i better finish my math homework

Miley: okay Love ya

Cody: love you, bye

Miley: bye!

(next day)

Orlando: wow ray nice outfit

Raven: thanks do you think corbin will notice me?

Orlando: who couldn't those blue sequins are.... really bright!

Raven: thanks

(corbin walks right past her)

RAven: hey corbin!!!

Corbin: hey raven (then walks to homeroom)

Raven: darn, he didn't even notice me!!

Orlando: well we better get to class

Miley: vanessa i now how to get you and zac back together!

Vanessa: thanks so much miley!!!!

(bell rings, they head to homeroom)

(Cody and zac walk in)

Cody: hey miles

Miley: hi cody!

Cody: i'm going to denver this weekend so i can't go to the movies sorry

miley: it's okay

(zac and vanessa stare at eachother for a half a second then vanessa tuens away)

Vanessa: miley when are u gonna talk to zac?

MIley: right after homeroom

Vanessa: okay good

(bell rings, miley goes to her locker)

Miley: zac!!

Zac: yeah?

Miley:i want to talk to you about-

Zac:there's vanessa, that little cheater, i have to get her back

(vanessa was watching as miley talked to zac, irght before miley could talk, zac leaned closer to miley and KISSED HER ON THE LIPS!!!!)

Vanessa: miley!!!!!

(cody walks right past miley as she is kissing zac, miley pushes zac away)

Cody: miley!!!!! thats it it's over we're done!!!!!!!!!

MIley: no cody!!!!!!!!!!

(cody walks off to history class, vanessa comes running to miley)

Vanessa: miley how could you!!! i thought you were my friend!!!

( vanessa runs off crying)

Miley: no vanessa i didn't kiss him he kissed me!!!

Emily: hi miley, i saw the kiss. (emily smiles)

miley: ugh!!!!

emily: what i say??

Miley: i didn't kiss him he kissed me!!! and cody broke up with me and vanessa hates me!!!

emily: it's okay

(mitchel walks up tp them)

mitchel: hi miley, i saw the kiss (he smiles)

Miley: ugh!!! (miley starts to cry and runs down the hall)

Mitchel: what i say!

(emily hits him on the back)

mitchel: ow

Miley: zac how could you do that vanessa hates me and cody broke up with me because of you!!!

zac: to bad for you, i had to get back at vanessa

Miley: by kissing me!!!!!!!!!!

zac: yeah

(miley sees cody and runs after him)

Miley: cody

(cody turns around to miley)

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how do u guys like it sooooooo far????? i'll right more when i get comments!!

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 05:20 PM
anyone!!!?????

x_iluvcole_x
12-30-2006, 05:21 PM
omg that was funny and sad and i want to read more!!

I LOL'D!!!!!!

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 05:24 PM
i'll right more later cuz my hand hurts

lol

x_iluvcole_x
12-30-2006, 05:28 PM
lol kk!!

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 05:55 PM
Miley: look i didn't kiss him he kissed me!!! he was trying to get back at vanessa!

Cody: really?

Miley: yeah, do u believe me?

cody: ummm let me think....no!

Miley: cody i'm telling the truth!!!

cody: sorry miley i do not believe you and i'm not getting back together with you! (cody walked off down the hall)

(miley leaned against the wall and slid down)

Miley says to herself: i'm so stupid!

Corbin: Miley? you okay?

(miley looks up)

Miley: no, this is all your fault!

Corbin: wut did i do?

Miley: because you like vanessa you made zac and vanessa break up

corbin: i did? yes!!!

Miley: yea well you made vanessa hate me and u mad cody break up with me!

Corbin: i'm sorry, want me to talk to them?

Miley: no corbin you've caused enough trouble, so do me a favor and stay away from vanessa, she doesn't like you get over it!

corbin: i'm so retarded! she probably hates me anyway!

miley: corbin, u have to talk to zac and i will talk to vanessa

corbin: okay i will talk to him at basketball practice

miley: okay

(bell rings everyone heads to class)

Brenda: Miley, you okay

(miley sat at her desk in math class)

Miley: yeah i'm fine

Brenda: well i'm having some friends over on tomorrow night, Jojo, emily, Aly, ashley, and vanessa are coming, so do you want to come?

Miley: sure

Brenda: okay good

Ashley: so miley your coming to brenda's get together

Miley: yup

Ashley: cool me too

Miley: hey ashley?

Ashley: yeah?

miley: you've been friends with vanessa longer than i have, so maybe when we are at brendas party can you talk to her for me?

Ashley: sure what do u want me to say?

Miley: could you tell her i was trying to get zac and her back together but, he wanted to get her back and thats why he kissed me, i didn't kiss him.

ashley: sure

Miley: thanks

(lunch time)

(miley is sitting with ashley, jojo, emily and aly, mileys best friends)

Jojo: miley have you tried talking to cody?

Miley: yeah but he won't listen

Aly: maybe he will listen to us

Miley: thanks but it's okay i have to try this by myself

(next day, day of brenda's get together)

Miley:hi jojo

jojo: hey miley

Miley: can you do me a favor?

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i will right more later but do you like it so far?????

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 07:26 PM
Anyone???????

LoveToMiley
12-30-2006, 07:58 PM
come on people???!!!!!!!!!

*mileycyrusrox*
12-30-2006, 09:28 PM
keep on going i luv it!

x_iluvcole_x
12-30-2006, 09:48 PM
again with the awesomeness!
srry i was gone so long,
i was playing secret agent barbie lolz!

Baby Vanessa
12-30-2006, 11:26 PM
go on it is really good

x_iluvcole_x
01-01-2007, 07:20 PM
when are you writing more?

LoveToMiley
01-01-2007, 07:21 PM
right now

x_iluvcole_x
01-01-2007, 07:28 PM
yeah! thanks :03:

LoveToMiley
01-01-2007, 07:46 PM
Jojo: sure miley

Miley: can u please talk to cody for me???

Jojo: i thought u said u wanted to try

Miley:well now i'm to scared and he doesn't believe me wen i tell the truth

Jojo: well u are my best friend so i wil

miley: thank u thank u thank u!!!!

(basketball practic after school)

Corbin: zac?

Zac: wut do u want trader?

Corbin: look it wasn't vanessa's fault, it was mine, i knew vanesss didn't like me but i made raven give her that slip of paper eith my number on it

Zac: should i believe u?

Corbin: zac, i wouldn't lie, u are best friend

Zac: i can't believe i kissed miley!!!!! do u think vanessa will take me back???

Corbin: dude, that one u will have to find out on ur own

Zac: thx for telling me the truth corbin

corbin: yeah yeah (still kinda mad cuz corbin still like vanessa)

(at brendas party)

Brenda: wuts wrong miley?

Miley: sorry brenda i guess i'm just not in the party mood

Brenda: Cody?

Miley: yeah i can't stop thinking about him

Brenda: well everyone is in the kitchen making milkshakes so do u wanna join?

Miley: no it's okay u all go ahead

Brenda: okay... we'll save some for u

(in the kitchen)

Ashley: vanessa

Vanessa: yeah?

Ashley: look miley was telling the truth she didn't kiss zac...zac kissed her because he was mad at u and trying to get u back

Vanessa: i know u are trying to help miley, but i know zac would never do anything like that

Ashley: u sure about that? (walks away)

(Vanessa walks into brenda's room, where miley is)

Vanessa: miley?

Miley: wow u r actually talking to me

Vanessa: miley i'm really sorry i didn't believe u

Miley: are u saying u believe me now???

Vanessa: yeah

(give eachother a hug)

Miley: friends again?

Vanessa: yup!

(outside of school)

Zac: cody wait!

cody: wut?

Zac: look, miley didn't kiss me i kissed her i just wanted to get vanessa back

cody: really?

zac: yeah

cody: (hitting himself) thats wut miley said and i didn't believe her!!! now she will never get back together with me

zac: call her

cody: good idea

zac: i'm gonna call vanessa too

(at brenda's party, miley's and vanessa's cell phone ring at the same time, everyone stares at them)

Miley: it's cody!

vanessa: it's zac!

miley: hello?

Vanessa: hello?

Cody: miley we need to talk

Miley: why should we u don't believe anything i say

cody: miley look, i'm really sorry, zac told me wut happened

miley: really?

cody: yeah, so if u don't hate me i would really love to get back together with u

Miley: i don't hate u

cody: so will u be my girlfriend again?

miley: yes i will!

(mean while)

Zac: vanessa can u talk for a minute>

vanessa: a minute.

Zac: well corbin told me wut happened

vanessa: he did

zac: yeah

Vanessa:well i'm still mad, i mean u kissed miley

zac: i only kissed her cuz i wanted to get u back

vanessa: ooo (pretending she didn't already know that)

zac: i'm soooooooo sorry, will u please be my girlfriend again??

vanessa: sorry zac, i think i'm gonna take a break

zac: what?

vanessa: u heard me

zac: but-

vanessa: goodbye zac

(miley and vanessa hang up the phone)

Miley: me and cody are back together!!!!

vanessa: i turned zac down

emily: why???

vanessa: i just need a break from him

(raven and annaliese are at the mall, raven's phone rings)

raven: raven here

corbin: hey raven can i ask u something?

raven: hey corbin, yeah what? ( in a flirty voice)

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i'll write more in a little bit but do u like it or no??????

Miley1114
01-01-2007, 07:47 PM
WOW!!! thats really good i want to hear more :)

v.a.h.fan
01-01-2007, 07:47 PM
Omg Thats Thats Amazing!!!right More Plz!

LoveToMiley
01-01-2007, 07:51 PM
my hand hurts....but i will write more

LoveToMiley
01-01-2007, 07:52 PM
(off topic, but miley1114 i luv ur avvie!)

mileymontanafan
01-01-2007, 08:21 PM
i love it !!! keep writing more its amazing !!!

secretive_angel
01-01-2007, 08:35 PM
Keep going it is GREAT best thing i ever read

LoveToMiley
01-01-2007, 08:36 PM
Corbin: do u want to go out to dinner tonight??

Raven: yes yes yes!!!!!!!!!......i mean yeah sure, sounds good

corbin: okay i'll pick u up at seven

raven: great!

(corbin and raven go to seasons 52 for dinner)

(both now standing on ravens front porch)

Raven: i had a great night corbin

corbin: me too

(the both lean in to kiss then....bonk!!! they bang noses!!)

raven and corbin: ouch!

raven: sorry

corbin: no that was my fault

Raven: good night corbin

Corbin: night ray

(corbin give her a kiss on the cheek)

(at brendas party they are all doing facials adn painting nails)

Miley: omg vanessa i luv it!

Vanessa: thx i'm always painting my moms nails for her

Miley: want me to do u?

vanessa: sure!

(then they here a loud boom)

Aly: brenda wut was that?

brenda: probably just the garage

Aly: u sure cuz that wuz pretty loud

( ashley gets up and walks over to brenda's window)

ahsley: come here guys i will never believe this!

(they all rush to the window and see zac lying on the ground)

Vanessa: zac!

(vanessa runs down the stairs and outside, everyone follows)

Vanessa: zac? zac? zac? zac? zac!!!!

Jojo: is he alive??

Miley: yes he's alive, he just unconscious

Jojo: o

Vanessa: zac? it's me...please wake up

Zac: va va vaness vanessa?

vanessa: yeah?

(zac lifts up his hand and gives vanessa flowers)

Zac: i really do luv you please, please give me another chance....do u have to take a break??

vanessa: u climbed up the side of brenda's house just to give me flowers?

zac: ya

vanessa: that is so sweet

zac: will you please take me back

Vanessa: ummm....yes i will

(zac sits up and give vanessa a kiss, on the lips)

miley, jojo, brenda, aly, emily, and ashley: awwww!!!

(vanessa blushes)

vanessa: zac u didn't have to do this

zac: i know but if this was the only way for me to get u back than i had to

vanessa: i love you zac

zac: i love you too vanessa

(everyone goes back inside including zac)

brenda: okay lets get back to facials and nail painting!!

zac: uhh i'm gonna go, call u tomorrow vanessa!

vanessa: okay bye!!!!

zac: bye!!!

(right before zac walks out the door, they all run after him saying good bye, but all of a sudden.....

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do u guys like it??? if u do i will keep going!!!

secretive_angel
01-01-2007, 09:05 PM
WOW this is great pleaz keep going or i will go insane lol

Baby Vanessa
01-01-2007, 09:24 PM
kep on going it 's getting so gogod

LoveToMiley
01-01-2007, 09:28 PM
thx....okay i'll keep going....man my hand it gonna fall off but i will write more 4 u guys!

Baby Vanessa
01-01-2007, 09:29 PM
yay more

mileyroxmysox94
01-01-2007, 10:39 PM
i read all the parts of it. it rocks!keep going...

mileyrocks19
01-02-2007, 01:28 PM
I like it. :D

Miley1114
01-02-2007, 01:51 PM
its soo good :D

mileymontanafan
01-02-2007, 03:20 PM
its great keep wrting please !!

LoveToMiley
01-02-2007, 03:24 PM
i'm sooooo sorry guys the rest of it would have already been posted but i before i posted it my computer shut down, but don't worry cuz i gonna write it right now

cookie monster
01-02-2007, 03:50 PM
hurry!! omg..the ending was ssoo suprising! im putting this on my favorites

LoveToMiley
01-02-2007, 04:47 PM
....Vanessa stops him)

Vanessa: hey brenda?

Brenda: yeah?

Vanessa: do u mind if i go with zac?

Brenda: no go ahead

Zac: lets go

(vanessa and zac get into zac's car a drive off)

Miley: come on guys lets go party!

(meanwhile, in zacs car)

Zac: i love you vanessa

vanessa: i love you too zac

zac: want some gum?

vanessa: sure

(zac bends down, reaching for the pack of gum....driving through a red light, but he didin't know)

Vanessa: Zac!!!!! (vanessa screams as a big suv crashes right into the side of the car!!!!!!)

(at the hospital, vanessa is laying in a bed)

Vanessa: (slowly opening her eyes) where am i?

(vanessa's mom holding her hand crying)

vanessa's mom: ur at the hospital, u got into a car accident

(the docter walks in)

vanessa's mom: is she okay???!!!

docter: shes fine, she some scratches and bruises and she broke her left arm

vanessa: thats why my arm is hurting

docter: yes, we need to put a cast on it soon, so wut color would you like?

vanessa: pink

(docter leaves)

Vanessa: mom, is zac okay?

her mom: yes zac is perfectly fine, just some bruises

vanessa: okay good

her mom: how could you be so stupid!?

vanessa: mom

her mom: no vanessa, i forbid you to see this boy ever again, look wut he did to you!

vanessa: mom it wasn't his fault!

her mom: her ran through a red light!

vanessa: mom!

her mom: he should have been watching the road! how could u even think of getting into a car with a boy teen!? you bailed on all your friends at brenda's party, so u could break your arm!

vanessa: I'M SORRY OKAY! it was stupid of me i kno! (starting to cry)

(2 hours later, vanessa just got her cast but on and know is on her way home with her mom)

(moday at school)

Miley: vanessa wut happened?!

vanessa: i got into a car crash

miley: with zac?

vanessa: yeah

miley: how could he do that to you?!

vanessa: i don't want to talk about it

miley: o sorry

(vanessa goes to her locker)

zac: vanessa?

vanessa: o it's u

zac: yeah i got u these (hands her chocolates)

(vanessa pushes them away)

vanessa: we can't go out anymore

zac: but i love u

vanessa: after wut happened on friday, my mom said i can't date u anymore

(vanessa runs off crying)

(meanwhile, corbin and raven walk in hodling hands)

Miley: so u guys goin out now?

corbin: yeah

miley: cool, hey have either of u seen cody?

raven: yeah he is at his locker

miley: okay thanks

cody: o hey miley

miley: hi cody (she kisses him)

cody: can i talk to u for a sec?

miley: sure

cody: look miley, ur tons of fun and u make me laugh, but i don't think ur the one.

miley:wut?

cody: i think i'm inlove with someone else

miley: o, then i guess that means it's oer between u and me (tears starting to drip down her face)

(cody walks away)

(miley meets up with vanessa)

miley: boys stink

vanessa: tell me about it

miley: u broke up with zac?

vanessa: my mom made me, but now i'm glad cuz i don't want a guy that will kill me. wut happened between u and cody?

miley: he broke up with me cuz he likes someone else

vanessa: who?

miley: idk

vanessa: uhh.....(she points to a tree, standing under the tree is cody making out with aj

miley: aj! he dumped me for aly's lil sis! ugh!

vanessa: is corbin going out with raven?

miley: yeah

vanessa: darn, i guess i'm too late

miley: i have a feeling they won't be together that long

(miley and vanessa watch corbin and raven walking through the hall)

raven: corbin how could you.......

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do u guys like it?????? i'll write more if u do!!!!!!!

25love25
01-02-2007, 04:54 PM
its grat and it needs more

numba1puppyluva
01-02-2007, 07:18 PM
MORE!!!! Plz more!!!!! It's totally and incredibly awesome! I NEED TO SEE MORE!!!! I was never so attracted to reading in my life! lol

YouKnowYouLoveMe
01-02-2007, 08:07 PM
Great job♥

Im hooked now!

v.a.h.fan
01-03-2007, 07:39 PM
More More More!!!!

YouKnowYouLoveMe
01-03-2007, 07:41 PM
I cant wait for more! You have to read mine! I need your opinion on it so far! Click the link Called Fan Fiction!

cookie monster
01-03-2007, 07:44 PM
More More More!!!!!that Was So Sad!

Baby Vanessa
01-03-2007, 07:45 PM
right more plz

numba1puppyluva
01-03-2007, 08:01 PM
Come on more!!! PLZ!!! I am now addicted to it!!!!

LoveToMiley
01-03-2007, 09:25 PM
sorry i guys i haven't been on 4 like 2 days but don't worry i will write more

Baby Vanessa
01-03-2007, 09:29 PM
yay plz write

LoveToMiley
01-03-2007, 10:02 PM
.....totally forget about our date tonight!!! aren't i more imortant than ur basketball game!!!!!

corbin: i'm not letting down my team mates!!!

raven: o so ur gonna let me down? i don't see why i ever liked u

corbin: fine don't like me see if i care

raven:ugh....fine!!!!! u won't be seeing me much anymore!!!!!!!!!

Miley: was i right?

vanessa: ii wonder if corbin will go out with me?

miley: give it a shot

vanesssa:thx

miley: before u go let me sign ur cast

(later at lunch)

Aly: so, miley wut happened between u and jake?

miley: he dumped me for someone else

aly:who?

miley: i'll five u a hint, she related to u

aly: aj?!

miley: yup

aly: wut?! want me to tell her to lay off??

miley: no it's okay

Jojo: hey guys have u checked out the new kid? he's pretty hot

vanessa: that wut the clump of people are surrounding over there

Jojo: yeah all the girls are falling all over him

miley: who is it?

Jojo: some new kid, i think his name is tommy

miley: tommy who?

Jojo: Tommy...ummm wut was it??? o yeah tommy bronks

Miley: Tommy Bronks!!!!!!!

Jojo: who is tommy bronks????

miley: okay he is my dad's best friends son.

Jojo: so he knows u?

Miley: big time, when i lived in tennesee i used to see him everyday, he liked me and i liked him, we were like best friends

vanessa: then wut happend?

miley: i got the role as hannah montana, and we moved here, california and we haven't spoken since

Jojo: go say hi

miley: are u nuts!? no way!

Vanessa: come wit me miley

(they walk over to the clump of people)

vanessa: Tommy?

Tommy: please no more questions

Vanessa: no, look at the girl next to me

Tommy: miley?!

miley: yeah it's me

(tommy runs up tp her and gives her a hug, miley looked at cody sitting at the table acouple feet away, he looked pretty jelous)

Miley: hi tommy

tommy: wow i haven't seen u in for ever

miley: i kno it's been a long time

tommy: we should catch up sometime

miley: yeah...

tommy: well gotta go to math class, see u round

miley: yeah, c u round

(miley adn vanessa walk back to Jojo and aly)

Jojo: wut did he say?

miley: he wants to "catch up"

Aly: oooh oooh!

miley: shush, we are just friends

Jojo: uh huh

Miley: shush

(they all laugh)

(after school miley and vanessa walk home together)

Tommy: hey miley?

miley: yeah?

tommy: well do you......

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i would write more but i got to go if u like it i will write more wen i can!!!!!

Miley1114
01-03-2007, 10:23 PM
:D OMG itss soo good write more

flower1
01-03-2007, 11:53 PM
Hello! In real life, miley is crushing on Corbin! Why would she help vanessa get with him????!!!!

v.a.h.fan
01-04-2007, 02:27 PM
right more please :D :D :D :D :D

best_of_both_worlds16
01-04-2007, 05:28 PM
oh I love it! its really interesting!

YouKnowYouLoveMe
01-04-2007, 07:49 PM
:o Its great!!

I cant wait to read more!

numba1puppyluva
01-04-2007, 08:20 PM
Oooooohh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THINGS are startin 2 get good uP iN HeREz

Baby Vanessa
01-04-2007, 09:09 PM
omg this is getting so good

secretive_angel
01-04-2007, 11:31 PM
Write More Pleaz
Pleaz Pleaz Pleaz
Pleeeeeaaaaaazzz

x_iluvcole_x
01-05-2007, 04:28 AM
OMG write more!!!!!!!!!!

v.a.h.fan
01-05-2007, 11:06 AM
right more

numba1puppyluva
01-05-2007, 08:28 PM
COME ON!! We're all hooked!!!!! It's really gettin good!!!!

LoveToMiley
01-05-2007, 08:31 PM
omg guys i'm so sorry i've had a lot of hw this week and haven't been able to write more, but don't worry i will start now!!!!

x_iluvcole_x
01-05-2007, 08:56 PM
Write more!!!!!!!!! lol im hooked!

cute_princess1114
01-05-2007, 09:08 PM
this is good

*Miley_Rox*
01-05-2007, 09:08 PM
That was great write more PLEASE!!!

LoveToMiley
01-05-2007, 09:38 PM
....wanna go out with me?

miley:ummm...thats spmething i need to think about (then miley saw cody walking by holdong hands with aj) umm.. i'm done thinking, the answer is yes!

tommy: great!

(miley holds his hands adn walks right past jake, tommy walks miley home)

Miley calls vanessa

vanessa: hey miley wuts up, how was ur talk with tommy?

miley: he asked me if i wanted to go out with him

vanessa: wut did ya say?

miley: i said yes, only cuz...well i saw cody holding hands with aj and....

vanessa: miley, u can't just use him to make cody jelous, wut if tommy really likes you???

miley: i know but wut other way will i get cody back?

vanessa: okay, just remember that if anything gets messed up, i warned u

miley: tommy's callin me on the other line so c ya at school tomorrow

vanessa: bye!

miley: bye!

miley: hello?

tommy: hey miley

miley: hi tommy

tommy: i was wonderin gif u wanna go out for pizza tomorrow night

miley: uh, sure

tommy: okay c ya tomorrow bye!

miley: bye

(next day at school)

miley: ugh!

vanessa: wut?

miley: ugh! ugh?

vanessa: wut?!

miley: ugh! ugh! ugh!

vanessa: wut wut????!!!!

miley: ugh! ugh! ugh! ugh!

vanessa: for petes sake just tell me already!

miley: do u think this will get cody back with me????

vanessa: i guess you'll have to find out

miley: gee, thx for the help

vanessa: sorry but i aint gettin involved

(miley goes to homeroom)

tommy: hey miley, can't wait till tonght

miley: yeah me either

(in the hall)

vanessa: hey corbin,ummm do u want to go out sometime?

corbin:.......ummm....

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if u guys like it i will add more!

Baby Vanessa
01-05-2007, 10:58 PM
I'm hokked write more plz

mileymontanafan
01-05-2007, 11:15 PM
im sooo hooked !! its awsome !!!! =-) :59: :35: :bigwave: :thumbsup: :handsup:

v.a.h.fan
01-06-2007, 09:42 AM
right more
*gives puppydog eyes*

numba1puppyluva
01-06-2007, 09:58 AM
More oh plz oh plz!!! *gives puppy dog pout* It's AH-MAY-ZING

LoveToMiley
01-06-2007, 11:33 AM
i will write more if u guys help me on my "i need mager help!!!! please!!!" thread

hannah_montana.boston
01-06-2007, 12:25 PM
i am soooo totaly hooked i just sit here reading like it was a real book and it is way better than when people try to use the characters and not the people who play the characters

joshcb
01-06-2007, 05:19 PM
that is soooooooo cool8-) :D :)) more more!!http://mud.mm-a4.yimg.com/image/3084412893

secretive_angel
01-06-2007, 08:26 PM
Pleaz Write More

*mileycyrusrox*
01-06-2007, 08:47 PM
more, i want more!

secretive_angel
01-07-2007, 12:04 AM
more i tell u more

numba1puppyluva
01-07-2007, 12:33 PM
Ive neva been so addicted to reading in my life!!!! PLZ MORE!!!! I'm hooked klike a fisherman catching a trout on a stream! lol

mileyrocks101
01-07-2007, 03:32 PM
Write MORE!!!! I LUV IT! IM HOOKED

alyson83
01-07-2007, 05:21 PM
I've been reading I love it! PLZ WRITE MORE!

xox DisneyChannel xox
01-07-2007, 05:42 PM
rite more plz!!!!!

mileyobsessed13
01-10-2007, 09:01 PM
write MORE this is amazing u should be famous for this i think this could actually happen

good job!!!!!!!!!!!!

blue_sky
01-13-2007, 08:21 PM
OMG!!! I`m totally hooked!!! This is the best thing I`ve ever read!!! You are sooooo good at this!!!! PLZ, PLZ, PLZ!!!! WRITE MORE!!!http://www.mymostwanted.com/gallery/showphoto.php/photo/108870/cat/1703

*mileycyrusrox*
01-14-2007, 11:50 PM
please write more:15::17:

RoXtar
01-15-2007, 12:37 AM
I just started reading this today. I've gotten hooked on it already. I can't wait for more ;)

Sporty Miley
01-15-2007, 05:54 PM
love it!!!

mileycyrus_truestar
01-15-2007, 06:03 PM
that is good so far!

secretive_angel
01-15-2007, 06:42 PM
pleaz pleaz pleaz WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sporty Miley
01-16-2007, 03:54 PM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeez write more!!!

LoveToMiley
01-16-2007, 04:44 PM
Attention Everyone, I'm Not Going To Be Writing On This Anymore, But If U Want To Write Something Like This Then Go To Games And Quizes And To My Thread " Just Add On!!"

Miley1114
01-16-2007, 06:13 PM
okk

Sporty Miley
01-16-2007, 10:03 PM
you're not writing anymore????????!!!!!!!!!!

Sporty Miley
01-16-2007, 10:06 PM
what does corbin say???????? yes or no?????

*Miley_Rox*
05-20-2007, 01:15 AM
Not writing anymore???!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

flower1
05-20-2007, 01:20 AM
u bumped the thread!

DestinyMileyFanatic
05-20-2007, 04:51 PM
yes this was bumped and it is in the wrong section! It should be in the RPG section for fanfics or in your blog!

^miley^
05-21-2007, 10:38 AM
Attention Everyone, I'm Not Going To Be Writing On This Anymore, But If U Want To Write Something Like This Then Go To Games And Quizes And To My Thread " Just Add On!!"
whhhhhy ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????
plz plz write more