if your good at english come here i need help!!

[thinklikepink]

plz i need help i've gotten realy good grades in english this year and its the only thing im good at in the world and now in the thransactionl/essay writting part in my exam i failed it

but the teacher said i have 2 do anothe essay on 'Physiacl Education should be compolsary' and if i do realy good there is a high chance she will pass me

so plz if anyone has ideas on what i can right or have some advice about what to do or basicly anything plz help this is so serious its not funny

[niiro_tatsu]

What is compolsary

[smiley2772]

get some information so u know wut your writing about

[thinklikepink]

What is compolsary

phsical Education aka gym i dunno what you call it in america

[niiro_tatsu]

wait so basically you write why you think P.E./gym class/phys ed should be mandatory?

[HPMontana]

I wrote a paper on Phys Ed before, what kind of stuff do you need to write about? First just gather up some information, and once you get it just let the words flow :D.

[OliviaCartwright]

i have ideas. well you need a good topic sentence. then research on google. try using a big vocabulary and also use similes and comparisons. also check for punctuation and spelling. and capitalization.

[thinklikepink]

well one of the paragrahs the first sentance is Physiacl education improves self estem and i cant find any ways to explain this (i think its bcoz im under stress lol my mind is a total blank)

[LukkiStar]

Hmmm....

Just talk about the benefits that it has on children, and describe what life would be like without it. Be sure to give specific examples.

[thinklikepink]

well i finally managed to finish it lol thanks for all your help it really did help ill post it here for you if you want to read it lol (i would't though its so boring lol)