PDA

View Full Version : This is my song

Blazegirl54901
06-30-2006, 11:25 PM
Chours:If you have a dream you need to follow it
If you want to be a super star be one

I once had a dream
I wanted to be a superstar
Then one day I was lucky
And I became a superstar

Chours:If you have a dream you need to follow it
If you want to be a super star be one

I had friends tha believed in me
And I just followed my heart
But there where many bumps in the road
to fame

Chours: So if you have a dream you need to follow it
If you want to be a superstar be one




I hope you liked it
MileysRealFriend
06-30-2006, 11:31 PM
Loved it ;)
Blazegirl54901
06-30-2006, 11:31 PM
and you can post here to if you want
m&jrule
06-30-2006, 11:42 PM
awesome
Blazegirl54901
07-01-2006, 07:09 PM
Guys,i made a nother song here it is

Chours:I only have to sides of me
One wants to rock and the other wants to be a home town queen

But what you see in me is only one side
Sometimes I wish I could go back and be a home town queen


Chours:I only have to sides of me
One wants to rock and the other wants to be a home town queen

But when I get to go to backstage partysit is great
But I do miss my home town peeps


Chours:I only have to sides of me
One wants to rock and the other wants to be a home town queen
miley_luver_foreva_90
07-01-2006, 08:51 PM
they're ok work on em but its okay be glad u make OK songs I make sucky songs! OOPS sorry for my lang.
hannah
07-01-2006, 09:13 PM
hey im soooooooooo freaked out!!!
Blazegirl54901
07-04-2006, 11:25 PM
why are they bad
Josh Z
07-04-2006, 11:56 PM
I cant really imagine how it would sound. I need to hear the tune and music that ur plannin to use
jusT jaKe
07-05-2006, 12:02 AM
Nice, good job. :) Yea, I would have to hear as well..
wz1z22
07-05-2006, 10:18 AM
I thought it was a neat idea but it doesn't rhyme or flow like a song should. Sorry but I am sure if you keep working on it you can get it really good.
Have fun!!

~wz1z22~
HannahMontana***
07-06-2006, 05:23 PM
Here's Mine

In my diary I will always write
Sometimes school really bites!

Get ur books out the teacher always yells
But all I wanna do is check my e-mails

In my diary I will always write
that being hassled really bites.

Sometimes all I wanna do is eat some smores
But then my parents come and say do ur chores

In my diary I will always write
that being grounded really bites.

Sometimes I just get my parents over the top
Then they won't let me listen to Kidz Bop.

In my diary, In my diary, In my diary. yeahhhh.
SmileyMiley11
07-08-2006, 04:29 PM
It sounds kindda like your trying to copy miley
HannahMontana***
07-08-2006, 05:09 PM
How?
Blazegirl54901
07-08-2006, 05:57 PM
That is mean
LaynieGurlie
07-09-2006, 12:04 AM
sorry I don't like them that much but I think they're really cute and work on them, and try to send them to the show!
gangstajx2
07-13-2006, 08:45 PM
I think the song behind it is great but u need to you know jive it up a bit, songs should rhyme i write them too and i make sure they all rhyme because to me if u can get out feeling and make it rhyme your something special and thats a talent no one can take away from you, but none the less keeep wrting you got something there