song writing contest!

[xx_mileyrocks_xx]

hey everyone! lets get ur true feelings into a song.. online! write about wutever u'd like! romance, friends, love, hannah montana or miley!u can do anything!


rules:
absolutely NO profanity or explicit content
this song has to be original- no copyrighting!
the song has to rhyme, just like any other song, mix it up!
have fun!

- shelby

[~*~mileycyrus~*~]

that sounds awesome!

[SmileyMiley11]

Do we win a prize if we win?!

[LoveToMiley]

Cooley sounds really fun!

[*~Miley~*]

i got my song writen already

[o.O_Miley_O.o]

I have one written already btu its out in my car, lol!

[ilovelucy]

Here's my entry.

“Tonight”

Waiting for you in my room,
Wanting you to pull me from this gloom.
Singing an old melody,
Waiting for a moment, just you and me.

Bridge 1

And I’ll hold tight,
I could, wait for you all night.
And I’ll feel all right,
When I see you tonight.

Chorus

Tonight, I am going to fly,
Tonight, I want to cry.
Cause I’m so happy that you’re here,
I’m so glad that you are near.
Tonight I’m going to feel,
Feel something real.
And it will last forever,
The moments we’re together.
Oh, tonight.

Touching your gorgeous face,
I’m holding on to this warm embrace.
Feeling happiness inside,
Letting lose emotions I have always tried to hide.

Repeat Bridge 1 and Chorus

Bridge 2

And tonight,
Everything I promise will be all right.
And you,
You should know I love you so much it’s true.

Repeat Chorus Twice

[kayla_baseball]

yeah I have my song too.

[Princess J.]

OK you may not understand this 'cause this is in the Filipino language so I hope you like it.The song title is "Magmahal Muli" it is a fillipino song I hope you like it!Sorry that I can't translate it!:)Please do not copy it:)

''Magmahal Muli'' By Princess J:

Umaasang magmamahal muli
Ang buong akala ko’y siya na
Kabiguan ang napala
Paghilom ng puso’y hindi madali
Ang malamang mahal mo’y
Walang pag ibig sayo

Ang umasang magmahal muli
Siyang magagawa
Huwag hanapin ang pag-ibig
Ito’y darating
Ito’y darating
Ito’y darating sayo

Hanggang sa tayo’y matuto
Sa kabiguan natamo
Kaya ako ay maghihintay
Sa tunay kong mahal
Isipin ang bukas at kalimutan ang nakalipas

Ang umasang magmahal muli
Siyang magagawa
Huwag hanapin ang pag-ibig
Ito’y darating sayo
Aking naranasan
Ohhhhhhh
Ang pagluha ng tulad sa ulan

Ang umasang magmamahal muli
Siyang magagawa
Huwag hanapin ang pag ibig
Ito’y darating
Ang umasang magmamahal muli
Siyang magagawa
Huwag hanapin ang pag ibig
Ito’y darating
Ito’y darating
Ito’y darating sayo

Ohhhhhhh…..ito’y darating sayo

[chelsea]

can u translate it plz!!!

[aznangel]

mine is
BOYZ
hey yall you got out to me and i will be my lonley night so long i was lost but now am found you were there for me oh yeah boyz are so typiicole they gone for all that has gone living in your dreams lonley down kissing round missing you boyz they got me in loop for all that you been gone on the wind has gone a way blowing you today BOYZ ARE COOL THEY DROOL BUT STILL THEY RULE BULE

[Princess J.]

umm....I actually don't know how to translate it that much since I am not really not sure how to translate things to much!But,I can tell you what it means:)! It is for people who want to try to love again!That is what Magmahal Muli means it means to love again.It is also about people who thought they found the right one for them but,that person was not really the right one. So,the person is trying to find the perfect someone for them!But,the person is afraid to get hurt again but,she/he is trying to love again. I wrote that song for people who want to love again.But, I am young so it does not really fit in my life yet but,I did have a Boyfriend now I just have crushes.But,I love that song well I did right that ong so,I have to love that song!LOL!Sorry that I can't translate it But,I told you what it means!

[chelsea]

ok Thats Hot!!!

[zace_lover94]

:) :57: [/COLOR][/COLOR]Hi! I love the idea!! Anyway, i am a songwriter, and i use my mom's computer to make the music for my songs. And my dream is to be able to let everyone here my songs on the radio and on their favorite cds!!!! Okay, the song that i am goin' to share with you is called "Change". And i think it's a song that most of the people at my age who are going through changes can realte to it too!
"Change"
Verse One- The seasons change/my heart beat change/ then you changed/and then i went and changed/ why does everyhting have to
Chours- Change/ change is a thing we fear/change/is a thing some need/change/oh change/why does this have to go/why did it have to come/Change
Verse Two-sometimes/we all change/but most of the time/we never want to change/ i don't want you to change
CHOURS
Verse Three- and when i change/ sometimes you can like it/ but when you change/ i have to adjust/ change oh why?
CHOURS 2x's
Verse 4- Oh Change!! Why does everything have to CHANGE??
CHOURS

[mileycyrus##1fan]

umm... okay make up a song? oookkkk

[Jillian#1fananmileylover]

:) :57: [/COLOR][/COLOR]Hi! I love the idea!! Anyway, i am a songwriter, and i use my mom's computer to make the music for my songs. And my dream is to be able to let everyone here my songs on the radio and on their favorite cds!!!! Okay, the song that i am goin' to share with you is called "Change". And i think it's a song that most of the people at my age who are going through changes can realte to it too!
"Change"
Verse One- The seasons change/my heart beat change/ then you changed/and then i went and changed/ why does everyhting have to
Chours- Change/ change is a thing we fear/change/is a thing some need/change/oh change/why does this have to go/why did it have to come/Change
Verse Two-sometimes/we all change/but most of the time/we never want to change/ i don't want you to change
CHOURS
Verse Three- and when i change/ sometimes you can like it/ but when you change/ i have to adjust/ change oh why?
CHOURS 2x's
Verse 4- Oh Change!! Why does everything have to CHANGE??
CHOURSI love your song! You should win! Unless i enter!

[ilovelucy]

Everyone's doing so awesome!

[Jillian#1fananmileylover]

the song i am going to share with you guys is called "My life as a star"

If i could switch lifes for a day
i would hear what everyone says about me
What do you think they’d say
What whould it be
I wish i was a star
i could go far...

(Chorus)
The champaine
And the glory
To learn about me
Watch my hollywood story
What would it be like
In my life as a star

If I could be livin it right
Chillin out and takin it smooth for the day
Performing late at night
It would be cool
I wish i was a star
I could go far…

(Chorus)
The champaine
And the glory
To learn about me
Watch my hollywood story
What would it be like
In my life as a star

My life will always be this way
I just wish you could stay!!!

I wish I was a star
I could go far... Woo!

The champaine
And the glory
To learn about me
Watch my hollywood story
What would it be like
In my life as a
The champaine
And the glory
I wish it could be
The girl I wish was me
What would it be like
In my life as a star

[OhMyGawdItsAJ]

Here's mine.
My best friend and I wrote it.
It doesnt have a name... but.. here:


Verse 1:
Have you ever wondered what you want to be?
Have you ever thought of what you see?
Have you ever dreamt of what you hope?
Well I have, and now I know..

Chorus:
That I can be an angel
And I can be a star
And I can be a rocker
With my band and my guitar.
I won't let nobody tell me
Just what I wanna be
Cause I have the power
To be free.

Verse 2:

Sometimes I wonder if I could live my dream.
Sometimes I think of the journey ahead of me.
Sometimes I dream of all the things I know
And I sit here, Knowin'...

Chorus:
That I can be and angel,
And I can be a star.
And I can be a rocker
Wth my band and my guitar.
I won't let nobody tell me
Just what I wanna be
Cause I have the power
To be free.
_______________________

Hook:
Now I know what I wanna be.
I wanna be a rocker
I wanna be a star
I wanna be on that TV screen
Doin' what I love to do.
I know that in my heart now,
That dreams do come true.
Just look deep down
And you will find
That one day you will shine.

I wanna be a rocker
I wanna be a star
I wanna be on that TV screen
Doin' what I love to do.
I know that in my heart now,
That dreams do come true.
Just look deep down
And you will find
That one day you will shine.
_____________________________

End. Hope yall liked it! Hope I win!


-PEACE-
aj

[Princess J.]

did the thread starter come back to see the songs yet?

[popstar]

Here's mine.
My best friend and I wrote it.
It doesnt have a name... but.. here:


Verse 1:
Have you ever wondered what you want to be?
Have you ever thought of what you see?
Have you ever dreamt of what you hope?
Well I have, and now I know..

Chorus:
That I can be an angel
And I can be a star
And I can be a rocker
With my band and my guitar.
I won't let nobody tell me
Just what I wanna be
Cause I have the power
To be free.

Verse 2:

Sometimes I wonder if I could live my dream.
Sometimes I think of the journey ahead of me.
Sometimes I dream of all the things I know
And I sit here, Knowin'...

Chorus:
That I can be and angel,
And I can be a star.
And I can be a rocker
Wth my band and my guitar.
I won't let nobody tell me
Just what I wanna be
Cause I have the power
To be free.
_______________________

Hook:
Now I know what I wanna be.
I wanna be a rocker
I wanna be a star
I wanna be on that TV screen
Doin' what I love to do.
I know that in my heart now,
That dreams do come true.
Just look deep down
And you will find
That one day you will shine.

I wanna be a rocker
I wanna be a star
I wanna be on that TV screen
Doin' what I love to do.
I know that in my heart now,
That dreams do come true.
Just look deep down
And you will find
That one day you will shine.
_____________________________

End. Hope yall liked it! Hope I win!


-PEACE-
aj

!!i luved yours!!!

[popstar]

i have unfaithful stuck in my head

[mileycyrus#1]

heres mine
"we shine we live"

theres bear on the side of the

[Princess J.]

who likes my song even though you can't understand it?

[Rocker1227]

#1: You shouldn't put songs you make up on the internet because people might steal them.
#2: If you are gonna put your song on then right it in a language people understand, otherwise it's pointless.

[Princess J.]

Origanally posted by Rocker1227
#1: You shouldn't put songs you make up on the internet because people might steal them.
#2: If you are gonna put your song on then right it in a language people understand, otherwise it's pointless.


You know what Rocker1227 #2 is kind of mean:23:

[llama2adrianne]

not all songs rhyme.

the ones that I write don't.

do you mean poems?

[OhMyGawdItsAJ]

!!i luved yours!!!
Thanks!

[OhMyGawdItsAJ]

When are we finding out who won?

[chelsea]

A Good Week

I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheeks
I think about better days
and and i think about better weeks
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
like you really do understand
with those eyes I know so well
you wont let me feel bad like 4real
always serious, so deep and insightful
even though you're always in control
but it feels so right though
But not today
and not now
you give me a bad look like how
and i was like wow
Now you look so bugged out
and now it looks like you dont understand nothin no more about
how i feel and now it dosent feel real
it feels like i my heart was stabbed and down for the kill
like for once you don't have the answer to my questions
until today u had gave me alot of good impressions
now wat i see is nothin but a blank mind
and its like you look from my direction and look behind
I gaze at you again
looking deep into your eyes
Hoping to understand
like whats the next suprise
and why you've said those things you did
why you told me wat u said
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if Ill wake in the early in the bright morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a big confusion I have never seem to seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek
and i know that this is goin to be a good day
and its goin to be a good week!!!

[gurlzrock101]

Cooley sounds really fun!


what happens if we win? and is anybody on line? it's 11:15

[zacsgirrl12]

How long does the contest last?? What do you get if you win??

[chelsea]

I think its probably like 4 fun i think!!!!

[lemesis]

I think its probably like 4 fun i think!!!!

You think.

[lemesis]

A Good Week

I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheeks
I think about better days
and and i think about better weeks
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
like you really do understand
with those eyes I know so well
you wont let me feel bad like 4real
always serious, so deep and insightful
even though you're always in control
but it feels so right though
But not today
and not now
you give me a bad look like how
and i was like wow
Now you look so bugged out
and now it looks like you dont understand nothin no more about
how i feel and now it dosent feel real
it feels like i my heart was stabbed and down for the kill
like for once you don't have the answer to my questions
until today u had gave me alot of good impressions
now wat i see is nothin but a blank mind
and its like you look from my direction and look behind
I gaze at you again
looking deep into your eyes
Hoping to understand
like whats the next suprise
and why you've said those things you did
why you told me wat u said
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if Ill wake in the early in the bright morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a big confusion I have never seem to seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek
and i know that this is goin to be a good day
and its goin to be a good week!!!

Horrible

[sophiecool]

Ya it is. It's depressing too! Lol!!!

[chelsea]

thx 4 ur like opinion!!!i guess!!!*rolles eyes*

[HannahMontanaFan101]

My Song
So you think life is over
So you think life is over but it's really not. So you've tried and failed and retried, but still it didn't work out, Lookin' through the mirror you can't pretind that life isn't over ohhhh
So you think life is over when really it's just an illusion a really big confusion life isn't over, life isn't over, life isn't over.
You gotta' get up and look around see the green grass and the blue sky cause you just gotta' get up and stand up for yourself all I gotta' say life isn't over, life isn't over, life isn't.

[robdon]

here's mine i wrote it and i was thinking it was a hannah montana style song!

''Reveal Yourself''
1st verse

Oh no
When people see you walking down the street they might think you're a freak
loser loser ooh sssssss hey hey hey

yet when you're on stage, they're calling you're name hey hey hey

Chorus

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY, come out, come on reveal yourself, YEAH, hey hey hey REVEAL YOURSELF TO THE WORLLLLLLD!!!! come on come on shout it out, you know you wanna!

2nd verse

if people say you're a freak you'll go oh no! cuz i'm more than just your average girl! if you just, reveal, yourself, it'll make every thing better, you won't have to wear a wig! or hide a huge secret from your friends! cuz all you'll have to do is.....

chorus x2

yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaah!!!

[Joni24]

i wrote 4 songs in 3days they r really good but i dont want to give them out bc someone might get creidt for my work well here t the sond titles
you might think
baby gurl
im so mad
its a gurls world
thats all

[AndyK]

I'll be the drummer or guitarist for any of these songs.

[mileyrox]

ohhhhhhhhhhh
i thought u were my friend
i thought the fun times would never end
we made up songs
and funny little rhymes THEN

You turned your back!
made it all bad
now i sit here sad
when did it all go away?


i made up that a long time ago, theres more to it thats just the 1st verse

[Joni24]

thats good!

[cathy]

You breaking my heart again

You broke my heart i'm sick of it just leave me alone or i'll throw u in a pit

[miley smiley]

Reveal Yourself By Emma Donald
___________________________
oh no
when people see you walkin' down the street
they might think you're a freak
loser loser ooh tssss
but when you're on stage
they're calling your naaaaaaame
heeeeeey hey hey reveal yourself
hey hey hey shout it out
hey hey hey u no u want to
oooooh noooooo

[science_465]

ur sittin in the house tryin to be cool well how ur gonna do that when ur followin dumb rules from a stupid fool time to get out time to bend the rules not gonna do that today i'm gonna bend the rules gonna write ur own story gonna tell it to ur not gonna let someone else write it 4 u ur gonna run ur life on ur own ................they're listening so be quiet don't say a word or ur gonna regret it cause mamas not here to protect u gotta face ur battles gotta do it right but its not just gonna happen overnight gotta change ur life tonighttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ooooohooooooooooo aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[cheer_girl]

I haven't finished the song but here is the chorus and verse 3:

"When it's rainin', I can't take it, cause' you are the one that makes me see, yeah, you are the one that makes me-breath.

oh yeah, I can't take it. Can I make it, can I take you with me? I need you with me, oh ooh."

Then the chorus repets. Do you like it?

[aznangel]

Verse 1:
Used to think that we would last
But time has gone by so fast
You try to run your game on me
Deny all that’s plain to see

Pretend I ain’t even there
Leave me, like you just don’t care
But I won’t let it get to me
Just wait I’ll be okay you see

Pre-chorus:
You go out you have your fun
Then you realize your time is done
Now you wanna come back to me
But I ain’t, gonna let it be

Chorus:
So now you want me
But it’s way to late
You can’t have me
Cuz I’m moving on
I don’t need your love or your affection
I don’t want no part of you
You think you know me
But you gotta see
That I’m not the one
You wanna mess with
So go on play you games
On someone else
Cuz I don’t want no part of you

Rap:
I don’t really want a part of you
Louis Vuiton handbags with the matching shoes
With your slim figure
Trying to cop my figures
Your time is up like a parking meter

I’m tired of games
Rekindle the flames
Feeling turbulence
Like we flying on planes

Would you love me if you have no fame
No iced out chains
Some things remain the same
But too much drama from your momma

Relationships got me stronger
I could’ve been with you a little longer.
Now my flows got harder
We could of had a son or daughter

Verse 2:
I see you come crawling back
Thinking you could change the past
Too bad you just lost your chance
To have me in all your plans

So sad you just have yourself
To blame, you and no one else
I’m gone living up my life
I know things will turn out right

Pre-chorus

Chorus


i put rap hip hop some talk

[jakesmyname]

i want to enter all 7 of mine there at http://www.freewebs.com/mileycyrusismylove

[Rebeccal997]

trapped
I feel like I've been trapped
In my own heart
the pasts memories
are haunting me
but now I can see

Chorus
I feel like I'm trapped
in the middle of everything
I feel like I'm traped_
in every word ya say
I know I can't rely on my heart anymore
but now I can see your feelin's and I feel it in me______
oh oh oh__


When I'm trapped inside my heart I saw us together
happy, and sad times
noow I can feel___... How you feel

Repete Chorus

Whe I'm trappedin side the middle...
the middle of everything
I feel that I acn feel you__________

Repete Chorus
But now I can__ feel____ how you feel_________

[Rebeccal997]

my song is love song than pop then love if ya know what i mean!

[ALstar]

i think
i think about it
and i know
i know its crazy
this life we are livin
the love we are givin
its time
time to let it out

[chorus]
let this love be heard!
yell it to the world
we cant keep this secret longer
cause of this, i know
i know we will be stronger

these days
these long, long days
keepin it inside of me
protecting
protecting from reality
these lies we are hidin
the force is so bindin
i feel
i feel it comin through

[CHORUS]

[bridge]
out
i've let it out
it's time, to face this REALITYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

oh, boy
i know that its OUT
our love has been heard.


PM ME AND TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT!!

[xx_mileyrocks_xx]

Here's my entry.

“Tonight”

Waiting for you in my room,
Wanting you to pull me from this gloom.
Singing an old melody,
Waiting for a moment, just you and me.

Bridge 1

And I’ll hold tight,
I could, wait for you all night.
And I’ll feel all right,
When I see you tonight.

Chorus

Tonight, I am going to fly,
Tonight, I want to cry.
Cause I’m so happy that you’re here,
I’m so glad that you are near.
Tonight I’m going to feel,
Feel something real.
And it will last forever,
The moments we’re together.
Oh, tonight.

Touching your gorgeous face,
I’m holding on to this warm embrace.
Feeling happiness inside,
Letting lose emotions I have always tried to hide.

Repeat Bridge 1 and Chorus

Bridge 2

And tonight,
Everything I promise will be all right.
And you,
You should know I love you so much it’s true.

Repeat Chorus Twice


WOW!!

[xx_mileyrocks_xx]

i think
i think about it
and i know
i know its crazy
this life we are livin
the love we are givin
its time
time to let it out

[chorus]
let this love be heard!
yell it to the world
we cant keep this secret longer
cause of this, i know
i know we will be stronger

these days
these long, long days
keepin it inside of me
protecting
protecting from reality
these lies we are hidin
the force is so bindin
i feel
i feel it comin through

[CHORUS]

[bridge]
out
i've let it out
it's time, to face this REALITYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

oh, boy
i know that its OUT
our love has been heard.


PM ME AND TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT!!

love the somg ;)

[freelelandchapman]

"Stuck"

Lookin out the window
its a beautiful day
why am i not out there
stuck in math class
drawing bar graphs
but i'm all done now

(Chorus)
Stuck inside on a beautiful day
I cant deal with this anymore
what do i do now
where do i go
Im Stuck oh I'm Stuck

Mmmmmmm, Mmmmmmmmm, Ooooohh Yeeeahhhhhh

(2nd Verse)
Now in english,
just cant take this
They put me right by the window again
its calling out to me sayin
Come Out
Ooooooooo

(Chorus)
Stuck inside on a beautiful day
I cant deal with this anymore
what do i do now
where do i go
I'm stuck
Oh I'm stuck

Bridge

Why wont they let me go
why wont they let me see
how it is outsiddde

Stuck...oh im stuck inside
Stuck...OH IM STUCK INSIIIIIDE

(Chorus x2)
Stuck inside on a beautiful day
I cant deal with this anymore
what do i do now
where do i go
Im stuck oooooooooooooooooo

Stuck inside on a beautiful day
and i cant deal with this anymore.
What do i do now
where do i go
Im stuck
Oh Im stuck
Oh Im Stuck
Oh Im stuck!

[freelelandchapman]

whens this contest gonna get judged?

[i<3mitchellmusso]

Not all songs rhyme

[Adele]

heres mine

'the party'

i quickly get my make up on
as the party has just begun
chillin' out with all my friends
its so much fun i hope it never ends
ohhhhhhhh livin' the dream
its just how i wanted it to be........

Jump, Jump hit the floor,
that's a great dance now do some more
here's my number.. call me any time
Its so special to have life like mine......

'Coz the partys gettin' loud
and i'll soon sing to the whole crowd
my guitar comes out
everyone gives a shout
so i rock on for the party...


Jump, Jump hit the floor,
that's a great dance now do some more
heres my number call me any time
it so special to have a life like mine.

[v.a.h.fan]

true souls
--------------------

we r livin
we r diein
we r lovin
we r cryin
we r trying to live as hard as we can give
books are not real becouze were the real deal
the world is diein but we keep on tryin

chrous:
ohhhhhh
we need a person to be brave
and strong
we need a person ohhhhhhhh oh ohhh
_______________________________

i dont know u
u dont no me
but faith brought
us together
dont you see!
_________________________________
chrous

_________________________________
i need u
u need me
its really perfact harmony
dont u see
__________________________________
chrous x2

[Absolute_Lovex3]

I think this should be in the Quizzes and Games section..Hmm I'm pretty sure. Well, i'll move it for now. Sorry.

[miley smiley]

I'll enter Shelbs:D
''Smilin'''
[verse 1]
can u see us
so close
together
yeah forever
we look alike
but don't get me wrong
We have different personalitys
Got nothing to tease...
about
[chorus]
And then we start to laugh
flash a smile
in their eyes
the just can't resist Smilin' back
Smilin'
[verse 2]
Competetive
We don't do
but our enemies
boy they set us off
if you break
break us up
boy, we'll break your arm off
it'll hurt for sure
cuz it doesn't matter what you say
best friends forever are Smilin'
[chorus x3]
[verse 3 slowley]
if i see you walk away
toooooddaaaaaaaa-hey
my smile will wipe away
[speeds up]
then you come back
hey hey hey
don't seal my lips
we're Smilin'


YEAH!!

By Emma D :D